Unit 10 I've had this bike for three years.单元主题写作课件(共21张PPT)-2023-2024学年人教版英语八年级下册

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单元主题写作
人教陕西八年级下
Unit 10 I’ve had this bike
for three years.
一、话题分析
本单元以“居住环境(Living environment)” 为话题, 运用所学时态和短语描写物品承载的记忆、讲述周围事物的变化以及对将来的展望。
二、写作方法
“三步三段式”描写喜欢的物品或事物
步骤一: 引出物品或事物;
步骤二: 详细描写物品或事物;
步骤三: 写自己的感受。
文章中经常使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时; 人称通常使用第一人称。
三、素材积累
(一) 描写“物品或事物类”作文常用词汇
favorite thing // sweet // memory // toy // own //as for // to be honest // while // truthful // shame // especially // childhood // hold
(二) 描写“物品或事物类”作文常用句型
开头句
My favorite thing from childhood is a teddy bear.
中间句
1. I have had it for ten years since I was three years old.
2. My aunt gave it to me on my third birthday.
结尾句
1. I like it because it has many sweet memories about my childhood.
2. The toy has left me so many memories. Even now, I don’t want to give it up, though I’m getting older.
四、写作任务
(一) 根据图画和提示词创写语法正确、符合语境的完整句子(提示词以外的词语不超过三个)
1. I, have, toy bear, for, three, years
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I have had the toy bear for three years
2. he, own, gold medal, since, his, fourth, birthday
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He has owned the gold medal since his fourth birthday
(二) 每个人在自己的内心深处都有对童年时期一些事情的美好的回忆, 特别是那些伴你度过童年时间的玩具, 至今你可能仍不舍得将它抛弃。它可能是一辆玩具汽车、一个布娃娃、一辆自行车等。请你以“My Favorite Thing from Childhood”为题, 写一篇80词左右的短文, 和大家分享一下你的小秘密吧。
【写作模板】
引出 My favorite thing from childhood is...
I’ve had it since...
回忆 I like... because...
It’s special because...
I remember...
感受 Now I have... but I keep...
【习作演练】
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My Favorite Thing from Childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I’ve had it since I was a child. My grandma gave it to me on my fifth birthday. It’s special to me because my grandma made it for me herself.
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The teddy bear has given me a lot of good memories. I remember when I was young, I was scared at night because I didn’t like the dark. I held my teddy bear to feel safe. So I slept with my teddy bear every night.
Now I have grown up, but I keep my teddy bear all the time.
一、话题分析
本单元以“最喜欢的物品（Favorite things）”为话题， 运用所学时态和短语描写物品承载的记忆， 讲述周围事物的变化以及对将来的展望。
二、写作方法
“三步三段式”描写最喜欢的物品或事物
步骤一：引出物品或事物；
步骤二：详细描写物品或事物；
步骤三：写自己的感受。
三、素材积累
（一）“描写物品或事物类”作文的常用词汇：
favorite∥give∥birthday∥like∥sweet memories ∥raise∥as for∥in one’s heart ∥go back∥my childhood∥have a big fight
（二）“描写物品或事物类”作文的常用句型：
开头句
1.The thing I like best is a doll. I have had it for 5 years.
2.My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
中间句
1.In my memory， there was only one small park in the city.
2.Now I can find big and beautiful parks in different areas of the city.
结尾句
1.I hope that your program will be more and more popular.
2.I think such developments are good， and I hope the future of my hometown will be better and better.
句子升格（动词不定式）
I’ll keep it forever. It can remind me of my grandma.
→ I’ll keep it forever to remind me of my grandma.
四、写作任务
你小时候最喜欢的东西是什么？它有什么特别的地方？它给你带来了怎样的回忆？请写一篇关于它的英语短文。不少于80词。
要求：语言通顺、意思连贯、书写规范。
【写作模板】
【高分作文】
　　My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years.　
　　My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. It’s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends. I remember when I was six years old， I would never go to bed without it. I like it very much because it is so cute.　
　　The toy bear has left me so many sweet memories. Even now， I don’t want to give it up， though I’m getting older！　
　　My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years.　
　　My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. It’s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends. I remember when I was six years old， I would never go to bed without it. I like it very much because it is so cute.　
　　The toy bear has left me so many sweet memories. Even now， I don’t want to give it up， though I’m getting older！　
名师点评：本文运用了“三步三段式”的写作方法。首先引入自己最喜欢的物品（第1段）；然后详细描写物品（第2段）；最后写自己的感受（第3段）。
添彩点：1.本文能够运用本单元所学的现在完成时态对物品进行描述，如“I have had it for ten years.”。2.作者能够正确运用used to，without，give up，even now 等词和短语，能准确运用because引导的原因状语从句以及until引导的时间状语从句，体现了作者较高的英语写作水平。