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单元主题写作
人教陕西八年级下
Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet
一、话题分析
本单元以”文学和音乐(Literature and music)”为话题, 要求我们会写关于一本书、一个作家、一名歌手、一个乐队、一段音乐的英语短文。通过谈论读过的文学作品和听过的音乐, 唤起人们对美好生活的追求。
二、写作方法
用“A—W—H”法写“谈论文学或音乐作品类” 作文
第一步: 写A(即 author)。介绍作者相关信息;
第二步: 写W(即 what)。对作品的内容进行概括叙述;
第三步: 写 H(即 how), 读后感。对作品进行评价, 表达出自己的观点。
介绍文学作品和音乐一般使用一般现在时。
三、素材积累
(一) 写“谈论文学或音乐作品类”作文常用词汇
treasure // page // record // introduce // mark // fiction // technology // pop // forever // modern // success // full of // science fiction // country music
(二) 写“谈论文学或音乐作品类”作文常用句型
开头句
1. I have read Tom Sawyer recently.
2. The book was written by the famous writer Mark Twain.
中间句
1. It is about a brave boy who likes adventures.
2. There are four characters in the book.
结尾句
1. The song/book tells us some interesting stories.
2. He is so brave and he can keep calm in the face of difficulties. I’ll learn from him.
四、写作任务
(一) 根据图画和提示词创写语法正确、符合语境的完整句子(提示词以外的词语不超过三个)。
温馨提示: 要用到so...that。
1. the book, exciting, the boy, can’t, put down, it
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The book is so exciting that the boy can’t put it down
2. the music, beautiful, the girl, stop, listen to, it, can’t
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The music is so beautiful that the girl can’t stop listening to it
(二) 最近你们班要举办一次英语读书报告会的分享活动。请你根据以下提示, 用英语写一篇短文为此做准备。
提示:
1. What book have you read recently
2. What’s it about
3. What do you think of it
要求: 90 词左右, 可适当发挥。
【写作模板】
介绍书名和 作者(A) I’ve read... recently.
It was written by... /
The author of this book is...
书的内容(W) It’s about... / There are... in the book.
读后感(H) The book tells us...
We must...
【习作演练】
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I’ve read Who Moved My Cheese recently. It was written by Spencer Johnson. It’s so educational that I’ve read it twice. There are four characters in the book. One day, they find lots of cheese and then they live a happy life. Unluckily, some days later, they can’t find any cheese there.
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Then some of them try to find cheese in other places. But the others just feel upset and don’t take any action. The book tells us there are changes in our life. We must change ourselves to face the changing environment, or we won’t succeed.
一、话题分析
本单元以 “文学与音乐(Literature and music)” 为核心话题, 通过谈论读过的文学作品及听过的音乐, 唤起人们对美好生活的追求。
二、写作方法
“A—W—H”三步法谈文学作品
第一步:写 A(author)。介绍作者。
第二步:写 W(what)。概述作品的内容。
第三步:写 H(how) 。评价作品, 表达自己的观点。
三、素材积累
(一)“文学作品类”作文常用词汇:
fiction∥story∥classic∥writer∥author∥reader∥success∥modern∥ancient∥popular∥meaningful∥describe∥tell∥introduce
(二)“文学作品类”作文常用句型:
开头句
1.Do you know why I like this book so much?
2.Have you read the book about the new countryside?
中间句
1.When you are listening to the music, you can’t help feeling sad.
2.The story is both interesting and educational.
结尾句
1.I am sure light music can make you feel relaxed.
2.Read the book, and you’ll fall in love with it.
句子升格(复合句)
It is about a warm-hearted boy. He lives alone.
→It is about a warm-hearted boy who lives alone.
四、写作任务
假如你们班要办一期英语角, 主题是“我最喜欢的文学作品”。请你根据以下表格所提供的信息, 介绍一下马克·吐温(Mark Twain)的《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》(The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn)。(80词左右)
内容简介 少年哈克贝利·费恩独自一人生活,但他心地善良、乐于助人,他偶遇了一个逃亡奴隶(a runaway slave) Jim并帮助其寻找自由(freedom),一路上遭遇了许多艰难险阻,但最终取得了胜利。
评价 1~2句话
【写作模板】
【高分作文】
The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain is a fantastic story. It is about a helpful and warm-hearted boy called Huckleberry who lives alone. Once he met a runaway slave named Jim. Soon they were on their journey to looking for freedom. Of course, they met adventures, danger and more. But they succeeded at last.
The story is about two boys growing up. It is really good, so I can’t put it down. I especially like the brave and smart boy Huckleberry Finn in the book.
The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain is a fantastic story. It is about a helpful and warm-hearted boy called Huckleberry who lives alone. Once he met a runaway slave named Jim. Soon they were on their journey to looking for freedom. Of course, they met adventures, danger and more. But they succeeded at last.
The story is about two boys growing up. It is really good, so I can’t put it down. I especially like the brave and smart boy Huckleberry Finn in the book.
名师点评:本文运用了“A—W—H”三步法的写作技巧。第一步介绍了书名、作者(第一段第1句) ;第二步讲述内容(第一段第2-6句) ;第三步对作品进行评价(第二段)。
添彩点:1.能够运用本单元所学的词汇对文学作品进行描述;2.作者能准确运用时态以及复合句式,体现了作者较高的英语写作功底。