Unit 7 What's the highest mountain in the world?单元主题写作 课件(共23张PPT)2023-2024学年人教版八年级英语下册

(共23张PPT)
Unit 7 What’s the highest
mountain in the world
单元主题写作
人教陕西八年级下
一、话题分析
本单元以“地理和自然”为话题, 向我们介绍了一些世界地理特点和两种珍稀动物。写作时, 要求我们正确使用基数词、形容词比较级和最高级, 用所学知识介绍自然地理特点和野生动物的相关情况。
二、写作方法
用”W — Q — H” 法写“介绍地理自然类”作文
先介绍说明对象及其特征, 再介绍其目前的处境, 最后提出希望和号召。即what— question—how 三步法。
三、素材积累
(一) 写“介绍地理自然类”作文常用词汇
square // meter // deep // desert // population // tour // tourist // wall // ancient // amazing // wild // southwestern // ocean // wide // research // protection // huge // nature // in total // up to // be covered with // be known for // in recent years // feel free // as far as I know
(二) 写“介绍地理自然类”作文常用句型
开头句
1. Pandas are black and white.
2. They feed on bamboo and mainly live in the forests.
中间句
1. The number of them is getting smaller and smaller.
2. They are endangered.
3. People have also killed them for their meat.
结尾句
1. We should try our best to protect them.
2. I hope there will be more pandas in the future.
四、写作任务
(一) 根据图画和提示词创写语法正确、符合语境的完整句子(提示词以外的词语不超过三个)
温馨提示: 要用到more than。
1. panda, weigh, 100 kilos
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The panda weighs more than 100 kilos
2. panda, eat, 10 kilos, bamboo, a day, the
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The panda eats more than 10 kilos of bamboo a day
(二) 本周末有一批外国游客要来动物园参观大熊猫。假如你是导游, 请你根据下面的提示信息写一篇发言稿, 向这些游客简要地介绍一下大熊猫。词数要求80 左右。
提示:
1. What are pandas like
2. Where do pandas live
3. Are pandas endangered or not
4. What does the Chinese government do to protect pandas
【写作模板】
介绍熊猫的特点(W) black and white, cute, friendly, bamboo, live in
目前的处境(Q) fewer and fewer
the government..., some education programs...
号召与希望(H) try our best to protect more pandas
【习作演练】
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Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to China! Let me tell you something about pandas. Pandas are black and white. They are very cute and friendly. They feed on bamboo and mainly live in Sichuan Province and Gansu Province.
Now pandas are becoming fewer and fewer in number.
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So the Chinese government is thinking about ways to protect them. Some education programs send people to schools to tell children about the importance of saving pandas. The government is also planting more bamboo trees, so there will be more forests for pandas to live in.
We are trying our best to save them. I hope there will be more pandas in the future.
一、话题分析
本单元以“世界事实（Facts about the world）”为核心话题，谈论保护大自然及野生动物。
二、写作方法
“Discussion & Solutions”两步法谈论保护自然和动物
Discussion：介绍自然、地理或珍稀动物的特点及现状，分析问题产生的原因。
Solutions：提出解决问题的方法；表明自己的观点和态度。
三、素材积累
（一）“保护自然和动物类”作文常用词汇：
mountain∥river∥ocean∥forest∥desert∥ endangered∥wild∥population∥research∥in the face of∥protect∥save∥risk
（二）“保护自然和动物类”作文常用句型：
开头句
1.Now people are facing a new problem—pollution.
2.Why is the number of whales getting smaller and smaller？
中间句
1.There used to be many elephants here， but now people can hardly see them.
2.They cannot have enough to eat， so they have fewer babies.
结尾句
1.As long as we protect wild animals， we can enjoy a wonderful world.
2.Wild animals are humans’ friends， so let’s do what we can to protect them.
句子升格（动词不定式作目的状语）
We must keep plants from being destroyed， and we must stop animals from being killed.
→We must take action to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed.
四、写作任务
你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以 “Protect Wild Animals”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明保护野生动物的重要性。词数： 80词左右。
【写作模板】
【高分作文】
Protect Wild Animals
　　There are many endangered animals in the world， such as tigers and pandas. When people cut down trees， wild animals can no longer hide and hunt. Humans kill them for money 　.　
　　There are many endangered animals in the world， such as tigers and pandas. When people cut down trees， wild animals can no longer hide and hunt. Humans kill them for money.　
　　We are not alone in the world. We cannot live without plants and animals around us　.　
　　So protecting wild animals is very important. We must take action to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. We all hope that there will be a lot more forests and wild animals in the future.　
　　We are not alone in the world. We cannot live without plants and animals around us.　
　　So protecting wild animals is very important. We must take action to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. We all hope that there will be a lot more forests and wild animals in the future.　
名师点评：本文运用了“Discussion & Solutions”两步法谈论了保护野生动物的重要性。首先指出了世界上有很多濒危的动物，然后分析了造成这种现状的原因是人类对生存环境的破坏以及对动物的杀戮，最后提出建议。
添彩点：such as， no longer， cannot live without等短语的巧妙运用，使得语言流畅，表达准确；文章最后提出希望，点明主题。