Unit 7 The unknown world 单元话题满分范文必背（牛津深圳版）（含解析）2023-2024学年牛津版八年级英语下册

Unit 7 The unknown world
单元话题满分范文必背
1．假如你是李华，你校英文报The Unknown World栏目向全校学生征稿，请你根据下面的提示，以“My Favourite Space Hero”为题，写一篇介绍航天员刘洋的稿件。
要点：
个人信息 1. 刘洋1978年10月出生于河南，1997年8月入伍；
经历与贡献 2. 2012年6月15日，刘洋作为中国首名女航天员，与景海鹏、刘旺乘坐神舟九号飞船进入太空，在太空停留了13天； 3. 2022年6月5日，刘洋与陈冬、蔡旭哲乘坐神舟十四号飞船进入太空，将在太空停留 180天；
你的感受 ……
要求：
1. 须包含所有提示信息，语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实；
2. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：
join the army 入伍，female astronaut女航天员，Shenzhou 9 spacecraft 神舟九号飞船
My Favourite Space Hero
Chinese astronauts have made great contributions to our country’s space industry. They are our heroes. Now I’d like to introduce my favourite space hero Liu Yang.
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【答案】例文：
My Favourite Space Hero
Chinese astronauts have made great contributions to our country’s space industry. They are our heroes. Now I’d like to introduce my favourite space hero Liu Yang.
Liu Yang was born in Henan province in October 1978 and joined the army in August 1997. On June 15th, 2012, Liu Yang, as China’s first female astronaut, went into space with Jing Haipeng and Liu Wang aboard the Shenzhou 9 spacecraft. They stayed in space for 13 days. On June 5th, 2022, Liu Yang, Chen Dong and Cai Xuzhe went into space aboard the Shenzhou 14 spacecraft and will stay in space for 180 days. I must also study hard and contribute my share to the construction of the country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍航天员刘洋。
第二步，介绍刘洋的经历与贡献。
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①join the army参军
②go into space进入太空
③stay in space在太空停留
[高分句型]
I must also study hard and contribute my share to the construction of the country. (and连接并列成分)
2．假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话……总之，你们玩得很愉快。
请根据上述材料，以An Exciting Trip为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅。要求表达准确，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥，词数在80左右。
An Exciting Trip
【答案】例文：
An Exciting Trip
Today is the year of 2050. Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago.
We went to the Mars by spaceship. On Mars we visited everywhere. We found a lot of things different from our earth, such as big stones which can speak. It’s amazing.
After that, we had a party. Many aliens took an active part in the party. Their songs were very nice.
Finally, we made phone calls with aliens. We all have a good time on Mars.
The trip was very interesting and I will never forget the trip. I hope to travel to the Mars again soon.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。要求以“An Exciting Trip”为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅；内容包括在火星上举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话，以及你的所见所闻等；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
3．根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在指定位置上。
中国梦牵引航天梦，航天梦助推中国梦。为了更好地追求航天梦，我国专门将每年的4月24日定为中国航天日（Space Day of China），就是为了纪念中国航天事业的卓越成就，不断发扬中国航天精神。假如你也有一个航天梦，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你的梦想。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Do you have a space dream I have one. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I am sure that I can make my dream come true!
【答案】例文
Do you have a space dream I have one. My dream is to be an astronaut.
I’m very interested in everything in space. When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it. The space is full of things unknown to us and I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future.
Space travel can’t be easy so I must work hard and get well prepared to make my dream come true. To begin with, I will do sports as often as I can because a strong and healthy body is a must for a good astronaut. What’s more, I will read more books about space. In this way, I can learn more about it and work well in it in the future.
I am sure that I can make my dream come true!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的航天梦，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己想成为一名宇航员；
第二步，介绍为什么会有这个梦想；
第三步，介绍将如何为梦想努力。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be full of充满
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②To begin with, I will do sports as often as I can because a strong and healthy body is a must for a good astronaut.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③I am sure that I can make my dream come true!（that引导的宾语从句）
4．随着天宫空间站的建设，在学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站的旅行，你班将举办一次主题为“My Journey to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。
注意：1、短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2、不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
3、词数80～100。
My Journey to Tiangong Space Station
I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true.
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【答案】例文
My Journey to Tiangong Space Station
I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true.
Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life. It will take about 6 hours by rocket. It will be fast and exciting. After I get onto the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first. Then I’m going to have dinner with the astronauts and try space food. It must be delicious. After that, I’m going to visit the space station and take videos of the astronauts’ life on the space station.
All in all, I believe it will be a wonderful trip. I can’t wait to start my trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容并发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己的太空站之旅；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①come true实现
②all in all总的来说
③can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
①Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②After I get onto the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first. (after引导的时间状语从句)
5．太空是浩瀚的、神秘的。人类对宇宙一直不断地探索，请根据你所学的太空知识，描述一下你心目中的宇宙。再结合你自己的感想，向同学们说说你未来的打算。可适当发挥。内容包括：
(1) universe, galaxy, solar system, earth, moon;
(2) scientists, do research about, Chinese space station;
(3) astronaut, in the future.
作文要求：
(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about the space.
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【答案】例文：
Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about the space. As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, the galaxy has billions of stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.
So far, scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our Chinese astronauts have been to the space many times. We have built a great space station. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of our country. So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you
Thanks.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③ 提示：文章的要点是通过关键词的形式给出，因此考生应注意围绕中心和关键词来对要点进行拓展，并符合逻辑结构，重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，可用“轮到我来给你讲一下太空”来引出主题，即关于宇宙的介绍；
第二步，围绕关键词串联起科学家所做的事情，注意此处文章时态可以“现在完成时”为主；
第三步，结尾总结，表明自己想成为宇航员的意原，去探索宇宙。
[亮点词汇]
① billions of上十亿的
② one of其中之一
③ so far到目前为止
④ be proud of为……自豪
[高分句型]
① It’s my turn to tell you something about the space.（it’s ones turn to do sth表示轮到某人做某事）
② The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.（并列连词and连接的两个并列句子）
6．最近你们班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：是否应该太空探险？请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
一些同学赞同 一些同学反对 你自己的观点
获得新的知识 耗资巨大 ……
从太空取得新资源 宇航员的安全问题
扩大人类的生存空间 ……
Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO
We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO
We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.
Some of us thought it was important to research the outer space because, first of all, people could get a better
understanding of the outer space. Second, we could find new resources for humans to use. Third, these explorations could possibly enlarge new living space for human beings.
However, others thought very differently. They said this kind of exploration cost too much money. Besides, it was very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.
In my opinion, people should research the outer space and such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“是否应该太空探险”为主题，根据表格提示，介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点，必要时可进行适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般过去时为主来叙述，写作时承接开头，要写出同学们赞同或反对的理由，清楚地表明自己的看法，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
7．2022年4月16日，神舟十三号载人飞船安全降落在地球上引起了全世界的关注。请根据下面的要求，以“我想成为一名宇航员”为题，写一篇小短文。
短文必须阐明下面的问题：
1.你为什么想要成为宇航员？
2.为了成为宇航员，你将会作出哪些努力？
I want to be an astronaut
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【答案】例文
I want to be an astronaut
On 16 April, 2022, Shenzhou-13 manned spacecraft landed on Earth safely. It got much attention. Like many other students, I am really interested in it and admire those astronauts. I also want to be an astronaut.
When I was a kid, my mother used to tell me stories about the Moon. Even today, every time I watch the sky at night, I would imagine what is happening among the shining stars. I hope to be an astronaut in the future so that
I can walk in space and learn about everything there.
I know it’s not easy to be a good astronaut. So I will study hard and try to learn more about space.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明你为什么想要成为宇航员；
第二步，介绍为了成为宇航员，你将会作出哪些努力。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
② used to do过去常常做
③hope to do希望做
[高分句型]
①When I was a kid, my mother used to tell me stories about the Moon.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I would imagine what is happening among the shining stars.（what引导的宾语从句）
8．2023年9月21日下午，“天宫课堂”第四课开讲，神舟十六号宇航员们生动介绍了空间站梦天实验舱（Mengtian Lab Module）工作生活场景，并进行了太空科普授课。假如你是李华，你校英文报社开展了主题为“A Letter to Astronauts”的征文活动，请你根据下面图示信息，结合你对太空探索的看法，向校报投稿。
写作要求：
1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80-100（开头已给出，不计入总次数）。
Dear astronauts,
How is everything going in space
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear astronauts,
How is everything going in space I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from Tongling.
As one of your biggest fans, I’m writing to thank you for your wonderful class inside the Mengtian Lab Module on September 21, 2023. I’ve been interested in space since I was a little child. Thanks to the class, I’ve not only learned a lot about the Mengtian Lab Module, but also got some scientific information. I am so proud of our country’s achievements in space exploration that I decide to be an astronaut like you. I know it is difficult and will make lots of efforts, but I will try my best to make my dream come true. I believe one day I can also do something for our country like you!
Wish you a successful mission and a comfortable journey!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，跟对方问候，介绍自己并指明写信的目的；
第二步，介绍自己在这次太空授课中的收获；
第三步，最后介绍自己的梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②Thanks to多亏
③not only…but also不仅……而且
④be proud of为……感到骄傲
⑤try my best to do sth.尽我最大的努力
⑥come true实现
[高分句型]
①I’ve been interested in space since I was a little child.（since引导的时间状语从句）
②I am so proud of our country’s achievements in space exploration that I decide to be an astronaut like you.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）
③I believe one day I can also do something for our country like you!（省略that的宾语从句）
9．同学们对航天员（astronaut）这一神圣的职业十分崇拜和向往，请你根据下列表格内容为大家介绍一下在太空上“直播课”的航天员王亚平。
Name Wang Yaping
Age 43
Birthplace (出生地) Yantai, Shandong
Favorites Sport: basketball
Subjects: science, P. E.
Food apples, eggs, chicken, milk
Evaluation (评价) the second woman astronaut in China, China’s first teacher in
space
要求：
1.短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.注意书写，字迹工整，无勾抹。
3.词数不少于60词。
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【答案】范文：
Wang Yaping is from Yantai, Shandong. She is 43 years old. She likes playing basketball best because it is interesting. Science and P. E. are her favorite subjects. She thinks they are useful. She has apples, eggs, chicken and milk every day. So she is very healthy. She is the second woman astronaut in China. And she is China’s first teacher in space. I like her and her classes very much.
This is my heroine. Do you like her
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意主要用第三人称she书写文章，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从“年龄、出生地、最喜欢的运动、最喜欢的学科”等方面介绍王亚平；
第二步，阐述对王亚平的评价；
第三步，书写结语，询问其他人是否喜欢王亚平。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②interesting有趣的
③useful有用的
④healthy健康的
[高分句型]
①She likes playing basketball best because it is interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②She thinks they are useful.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．假定你是李华，你将在最新的一期学校英语报“Role Models”栏目上介绍我国首位戴眼镜执行飞行任务的航天员桂海潮。
简介 1986年11月出生于云南，毕业于北京航空航天大学；
主要经历 1. 2003年观看杨利伟进入太空，梦想将来可以进入太空； 2. 2005年进入北京航空航天大学学习； 3. 2018年参加航天员选拔，并于2023年7月进入太空。
感悟 ……（请补充至少2点）
注意：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词：北京航空航天大学Beihang University；选拔test。
Have you heard about Gui Haichao Below is some detailed information about him.
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Let’s learn from Gui.
【答案】例文：
Have you heard about Gui Haichao Below is some detailed information about him.
Gui Haichao is the first astronaut with glasses to enter space. He was born in Yunnan in November 1986. In 2003, while he was watching Yang Liwei, the first person in China, fly into space, he had a dream. He wanted to travel into space in the future. He then began to study hard. In 2005, he went to study in Beihang University. In 2018, he took part in the test of becoming an astronaut. After years of hard work, his dream finally came true in July 2023.
From my perspective, “No pain, no gain”, as the saying goes. Only with hard work can we succeed. In addition, nothing is impossible if one has a dream and fights hard for it.
Let’s learn from Gui.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格所给提示，介绍有关桂海潮的人生经历和你的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步：作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文；
第二步：介绍桂海潮的人生经历（受到杨利伟的鼓舞，刻苦学习，努力实现航天梦），注意增加细节，使行文连贯；
第三步：说说你的感悟是什么，并号召大家向桂海潮学习。
[亮点词汇]
①enter space进入太空
②took part in参加
③came true实现
④no pain, no gain一分耕耘，一分收获
[高分句型]
①In 2003, while he was watching Yang Liwei, the first person in China, fly into space, he had a dream. (while引导的时间状语从句）
②In addition, nothing is impossible if one has a dream and fights hard for it. (if引导条件状语从句)