2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题 (新疆专用)（含解析）

2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题 (新疆专用)
1．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·一模）三年的初中生活即将结束，学校英文报“毕业季”专栏正在以“My ________ Memory”为题面向全体初三毕业生开展征文活动。请你先用beautiful，unforgettable，sad… 将题目补全，再结合以下思维导图，用英语写一篇短文投稿，记录你初中生活中的精彩瞬间。
要求：1. 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 词数80～120。
My ________ Memory
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【答案】例文
My Unforgettable Memory
How time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head.
Last summer holiday, I learned to swim. It was very unforgettable and interesting. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I felt uncomfortable in the water. But my father told me not to be afraid of it and taught me how to move, how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly, I could move a little. I learned it for almost half a month. I was excited when father told me I made it.
From that, I’ve learned that nothing is impossible if you put your heart in it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据思维导图提示，介绍自己的一次经历。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，将题目补充完整，介绍某一次经历，比如：我难忘的记忆；
第二步，具体介绍自己难忘经历的经过；
第三步，表达这次经历自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①uncomfortable不舒服的
②be afraid of害怕……
③stretch out伸展
[高分句型]
①I was excited when father told me I made it. (时间状语从句)
②I’ve learned that nothing is impossible if you put your heart in it. (宾语从句；条件状语从句)
2．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·一模）学校英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要求：
1.文章包括以下内容，可适当拓展信息，使文章意思连贯，语句通顺；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
3.词数80-120之间，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
2.你对这些问题的看法：
3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
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【答案】例文
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me. I think all these rules are too strict.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍与父母之间存在的问题；
第二步，表达自己对这些问题的看法；
第三步，提出解决问题及与父母保持良好关系的办法。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
②try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
①I think my parents don’t quite understand me.（宾语从句）
②Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is
because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.（让步状语从句）
3．（2024·新疆和田·一模）历史长河中，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物，例如：圆梦航天，胜利返航的宇航员；开场失利；永不言弃； 最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足。正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。某英文网站正在开展以“On the Way to My Dream”为主题的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容提示：1.你的梦想是什么；
2.你在逐梦道路上的经历；
3.你的收获。
注意： 1.根据要点提示，条理清晰，语句通顺；
2.词数: 80-100词;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校及地点。
On the Way to My Dream
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【答案】例文：
On the Way to My Dream
Everyone has a dream and so do I. My dream is to be a teacher.
When I was a primary student, I was not good at English. Reading and writing were very difficult for me. Luckily, my English teacher encouraged me to be confident and helped me a lot. I practiced reading and writing during the whole year. Finally, with his help, I did better in English and achieved success.
From then on, I made up my mind to be a teacher like him. I hope to influence students in their life, too. Now I will keep going and try my best to realize my dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重
点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单表达每个人都有梦想；
第二步，具体阐述作者的经历；
第三步，将如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①encouraged me to be confident鼓励我自信
②during the whole year一整年
③made up my mind下定决心
[高分句型]
①Everyone has a dream and so do I. (倒装句)
②When I was a primary student, I was not good at English. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4．（2024·新疆伊犁·一模）三年忙碌而精彩的初中生活即将过去，回顾这三年的初中生活，你有哪些改变？你最想感谢哪些帮助你的人？毕业前的这段时间你有什么打算或计划？
要求：1．必须包括以上所有内容，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2．不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
3．80-120词之间；（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How time flies! My busy and wonderful junior high school days will be over.
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【答案】例文：
How time flies! My busy and wonderful junior high school days will be over.
In the past three years, I have changed a lot. I used to be quite heavy and weak, but now I am much healthier. I used to be afraid of English tests, but now I can get good grades.
I want to say thank you to my teacher Miss Chen. She is patient with me and she usually helps with my English. I also want to thank my mother. She is busy and tired every day. But she always encourages me and shares my happiness and worries. Every day, she cooks me delicious food to make me healthier.
Before I leave my school, I plan to study harder so that I can go to a better senior high school. And I’ll stick to exercising to keep healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据题干提示，回顾过去三年以来自己的改变、想感谢的人以及谈谈未来的计划与打算；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述忙碌而精彩的初中生活即将过去；
第二步，谈谈过去三年以来自己的改变；
第三步，谈谈自己想感谢的人以及原因；
第四步，介绍未来的计划与打算。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②be afraid of 害怕
③be patient with 对……有耐心
④encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
① She is patient with me and she usually helps with my English.（and连接的并列句）
②Before I leave my school, I plan to study harder so that I can go to a better senior high school. （so that引导的目的状语从句）
5．（2024·新疆伊犁·一模）2024年，我们迎来了龙年 。新年伊始，万象更新，是我们制定目标，下定决心的好时机。 每个人都怀揣着憧憬与梦想，期待自己能龙腾虎跃，龙马精神 。请你以“My New Year’s Resolutions”为题，写一篇短文，分享你的新年愿景 。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. 请至少介绍两个新年决心；
2. 说明你打算实现这些决心的方式；
3. 当遇到困难或挑战时，你打算如何应对。
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 词数在 80~100 之间；
3. 条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。
My New Year’s Resolutions
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【答案】例文
My New Year’s Resolutions
Resolutions are promises to ourselves. They may help to make us be a better person and to make our life easier. For the coming year, I’m going to make two resolutions.
The first resolution is about my self-improvement. Next year, I’m going to get a better grade in my study. I’m going to take notes in class and do my homework every day. On the weekend, I am going to go over the lessons. And I am going to collect the mistakes I made. At last, I am going to ask the teacher to help me to correct the mistakes.
The second resolution has to do with improving the relationships with my parents. I will spend more time with them. And I will share my feelings and ideas with them. In this way, we can know each other better.
Sometimes I give up my resolutions because they are hard to keep. For these resolutions, I am going to keep them. If I meet some challenges, I will ask my parents or friends for help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意至少介绍两个新年决心并结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己有两个新年决心；
第二步，具体介绍自己的两个新年决心以及你打算实现这些决心的方式；
第三步，阐述当遇到困难或挑战时，你打算如何应对。
[亮点词汇]
①self-improvement自我完善
②go over仔细检查，用心思考
③have to do with与……有关
[高分句型]
①And I am going to collect the mistakes I made.（定语从句）
②Sometimes I give up my resolutions because they are hard to keep.（原因状语从句）
③If I meet some challenges, I will ask my parents or friends for help.（条件状语从句）
6．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·一模）
时光在不经意中流逝，翻开旧日的笔记，字里行间充满着情深意切的交错。刹那间，仿佛回到了那曾经经历过的风风雨雨，坎坎坷坷中去，旧时的回忆依旧，只是少了几分忧郁，多了几分沧桑，多了几分思考。 初三生活忙碌而充实，有哭，有笑，有酸，有辣，有汲取知识的欢乐……
请以“Thank you, ______”为题，写一篇短文。
要点：
(1)你最想感谢谁？
(2)写出感谢他/她的原因，并举例说明。
注意：
(1)词数120左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Thank you, _____
My middle school life is coming to an end. Looking back on the past three years, the person I want to thank most is
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【答案】例文
Thank you, my English teacher
My middle school life is coming to an end. Looking back on the past three years, the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. She’s very outgoing. And she is kind and helpful. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became increasingly interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.
She has a great influence on me and her help is very useful for my future development.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍最想感谢的对象；
第二步，细节介绍原因，举例子说明。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with在……帮助某人
②encourage sb. to do鼓励某人去做
③cheer sb. up使某人振作起来
[高分句型]
①When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.（时间状语从句）
②I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.（定语从句）
7．（23-24九年级上·新疆伊犁·期末）你已进入初中学习两年多了，你有哪些方面的变化呢？请以“How I have changed”为题，从外貌、性格、学习、爱好等方面，写一篇短文描述你这两年的改变。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
2. 词数不少于80词，必须包含要点提示，可适当发挥。
3. 条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整。
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【答案】例文
How I have changed
How time flies! I have changed a lot in the past few years! I was short when I was younger, but now I am tall. I didn’t use to wear glasses, but now I have to wear a pair of glasses. I used to be shy, but now I’m outgoing. I used to like watching TV, but I am interested in sports now. I was tired of learning anything in the past and used to spend a lot of time playing games with my friends. But I am different now. I have a passion for learning, and I am happy to learn now. The reason why I changed is that I don’t want to let my parents and teachers down. The biggest change in my life is my hobby. I used to play computer games all the time, but now I realize it is a waste of time. I fall in love with books. Books are my friends. They give me knowledge and strength.
What never changes is the change itself. I am glad that I have changed to be a better person.
【总体分析】① 题材：本文为一篇话题作文；
② 时态：描述变化之前的情况为“一般过去时”，描述现在的情况为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：从外貌、性格、学习、爱好等方面出发，不能遗漏要点，且行文要注意条理性。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，说明自己这两年改变很多；
第二步，从外貌、性格、学习、爱好等方面出发，将过去与现在进行对比；
第三步，说明改变的原因；
第四步，结尾，表明自己对于这些改变的看法。
【亮点词汇】① used to do过去常常做某事
② a pair of一副
③ outgoing外向的
④ be interested in对……感兴趣
⑤ realize意识到
【高分句型】① I used to like watching TV, but I am interested in sports now. (used to do sth过去常常做某事)
② The reason why I changed is that I don't want to let my parents and teachers down. (why引导定语从句；that引导表语从句)
8．（2024·新疆和田·一模）紧张而忙碌的初中生活即将过去，回顾一下，你在课业学习、体育运动等方面做得如何？对照下表，做一下自我评价吧！
evaluation (评价)aspects (方面)
schoolwork
sports
…
要求：1.文章必须包含表格中所给的信息提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息。
3.词数：80-100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My middle school life is meaningful and valuable.
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【答案】例文：
My middle school life is meaningful and valuable.
I think I’m very good at my schoolwork and sports. I did well in all the subjects and I got good grades in every exam. As for sports, I joined the basketball and football club in our school. In addition, I also won the first place in running at the school sports meeting. However, I’m not very good at doing chores at home. My mother told me doing chores could help to develop independence and responsibility. So I’m going to help my mother do more chores, such as washing the clothes and cooking.
I believe I can get over my weakness and be a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在运动和课业方面做得如何；
第二步，拓展介绍自己做得不好的一方面；
第三步，表明自己的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①do well in 在……做得好
②in addition 此外
[高分句型]
My mother told me doing chores could help to develop independence and responsibility.（宾语从句）
9．（2024·新疆喀什·二模）生活中总有一些我们敬佩的人，在我们迷茫的时候，照亮我们前方的路，指引我们前行。他/她可能是伟人，科学家，父母，老师，挚友，兄弟姐妹甚至是素不相识的人。某英文杂志向你所在的中学征稿，征文题目为Someone I Admire，请按要求投稿。
内容提示：1.你钦佩的人是谁；2.你钦佩他/她的理由；3.说明他/她的事迹是如何激励你的。
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；2.文中不要出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 词数 80~110。
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【答案】例文：
Someone I Admire
Everyone has someone he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer musician or a movie super star. But as for me, the most admirable person is my dearest mother. My mother is an ordinary woman. She is not very beautiful but very kind and enthusiastic. Although she doesn’t have high education, she is very capable and excellent in social contact and bargaining. She loves me and my brother, trying to give us the comfortable surroundings to study and live in. I learn to be an optimistic person with strong mind from my mother. She also teaches me that no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, can your dream come true. These lessons have a great influence on my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的三点内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题——我最敬佩的人。
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“她是谁、钦佩她的理由和她的事迹是如何激励你的” 三方面入手，重点介绍我敬佩她的原因；
③第三步，书写结语。自己从她那里学到了什么道理。
[亮点词汇]
①as for 至于
②no pains, no gains. 不劳无获。
③come true 实现
④have a great influence on sb. 对某人有深刻的影响
[高分句型]
Although she doesn’t have high education, she is very capable and excellent in social contact and bargaining.（although引导让步状语从句）
10．（2024·新疆·二模）中华文化源远流长，我们的文化瑰宝也愈加令世界瞩目，如京剧、古诗词、宏伟长城、中国功夫、剪纸等民间艺术、传统美食等。这些文化瑰宝是中华民族的财富，我们为之而自豪，更应该义不容辞地为传承和弘扬优秀传统文化做出自己的努力。请你以“The Treasure of Chinese Culture”为
题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文向外国友人介绍一种或两种中华文化瑰宝，包括但不限于以下要点：
1.简单介绍文化瑰宝的特点；
2.说明其重要意义；
3.你的看法。
The Treasure of Chinese Culture
China is a country with a long history of 5,000 years which is full of cultural treasures, such as tea, paper cutting, Chinese Kung Fu and so on.
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【答案】例文
The Treasure of Chinese Culture
China is a country with a long history of 5,000 years which is full of cultural treasures, such as tea, paper cutting, Chinese Kung Fu and so on.
Tea has a long history in China. It plays an important role in Chinese society, not only as a drink, but also as a symbol of Chinese culture. Tea was discovered and used by the Chinese as early as 5,000 years ago by Shennong accidentally. Since then, tea has gradually become an important part of Chinese life. Chinese people think tea not only tastes good but is also good for our health.
Paper cutting is a beautiful art form. Only simple tools like a piece of paper and a pair of scissors are required. People believe that good luck can be brought by the vivid paper cutting works. I hope that one day I can learn to make it.
All these treasures are important in Chinese culture. We are now working together to protect and develop them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示要点介绍一种或两种中华文化瑰宝，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，介绍一两种文化瑰宝的特点及意义；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in在……中起重要作用
②a symbol of一种……的象征
③accidentally偶然地
[高分句型]
①Chinese people think tea not only tastes good but is also good for our health. (宾语从句)
②People believe that good luck can be brought by the vivid paper cutting works. (含有情态动词的被动语态)
11．（23-24九年级上·新疆克孜勒苏·期末）初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈，总有一些经历是令你难以忘怀的。学校英语报English Learning正在以“My Unforgettable Experience”为主题向应届毕业生征文。请写一篇100词左右的英语短文，叙述你的一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你在其中的感悟和收获。 (文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)
My Unforgettable Experience
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【答案】例文
My Unforgettable Experience
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget the day I went hiking with my classmates.
One Sunday last spring, our class went hiking in the mountains. At first, my classmates and I walked fast with excitement. But later I gradually felt tired and started to breathe heavily. And I was so hot that I wanted to stop climbing. All I’d like to do was to go home and enjoy a shower. Soon I fell behind others. Just then, Tom came up to me and asked me how I felt and let me have a rest for a while. Besides, he told me not to give up and encouraged me to go on climbing. In the end, I reached the top happily together with my classmates. I felt grateful not only for his encouragement, but also for the lesson he taught me.
This experience taught me I can get what I want if I hold on. From then on, it always encouraged me to face the difficulties I met in my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：考生应围绕主题“一次难忘的经历”，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务，写作过程中注意补充细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图，介绍一次难忘的经历；
第二步，详细介绍这次经历的过程；
第三步，书写结语，描写感悟和获得的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①go hiking去远足
②tell sb. not to do sth.告诉某人不做某事
③give up放弃
④encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
⑤From then on从那时起
[高分句型]
①I will never forget the day I went hiking with my classmates. (定语从句)
②And I was so hot that I wanted to stop climbing. (so…that…句型)
③I felt grateful not only for his encouragement, but also for the lesson he taught me. (not only…but also…句型)
④From then on, it always encouraged me to face the difficulties I met in my life. (定语从句)
12．（23-24九年级上·新疆和田·期中）三年将尽，未来已来，我们如何成为更好的自己？某英文网站以“How to Be a Better Person”为话题开展征文活动，请从中学生的角度写一篇短文谈谈你的做法。
要点提示：
1.健康生活 (食物、运动、睡眠……)；
2.不怕挑战 (尽力解决学习、生活中的问题……)；
3. 对人友善 (乐于助人、与人和睦相处……)。
注意：
1.文章内容包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思连贯，语句通顺；
2.词数 80-100 词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、学校及地点。
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【答案】One possible version:
How to Be a Better Person
To be a better person, I think I should do the following things. First of all, it’s important to live healthily. I will eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep to stay energetic. What’s more, I’ll not be afraid to face challenges any more and try my best to solve problems in life and study. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Helping others can make people closer. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. When I have the ability to give back to the society, I’ll do what I can to help the weak.
I think the most important thing is to be a useful person. If I start to develop these good habits, I will become better and make a difference to the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出如何成为更好的人；
第二步，从健康生活、不怕挑战以及对人友善这三个方面详细阐述怎么做；
第三步，总结全文，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more而且
②be afraid to害怕做某事
③take care of照顾
④give back to归还，回报
[高分句型]
①If I start to develop these good habits, I will become better and make a difference to the world.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②When I have the ability to give back to the society, I’ll do what I can to help the weak.（when引导时间状语从句）