2023~2024学年八下英语期末书面表达训练（牛津译林版）（含解析）
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八下期末书面表达训练
书面表达之环境保护、文明礼仪
（一）
为共创文明城市，我校将举行以 Civilized City 为主题的演讲比赛。请结合以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容必须包括以下要点∶
个人修养 1. 对人友善，礼貌待人； 2. ……
公共礼仪 1. 保持干净整洁，不乱扔垃圾； 2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗，在图书馆、阅览室保持安静； 3. ……
绿色生活 1. 节能减排，垃圾分类； 2. ……
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 内容要点齐全，可以适当发挥；
3. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4. 词数80左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Civilized City
Dear classmates,
Our city is now making its effort to be a civilized city. I think we can do something for it.
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Let’s start from ourselves. Try our best to make our hometown more beautiful and civilized. Thank you!
【答案】
Civilized City
Dear classmates,
Our city is now making its effort to be a civilized city. I think we can do something for it.
As a student, we should be kind to others and often help people. For example, we can give our seats to people in need on the bus and be polite to others. We should care about our classmates and offer help if necessary.
In public, we shouldn’t litter everywhere and should keep it clean. It is not polite to speak loudly in public places, and we should keep quiet in libraries, reading rooms and other places like that. Moreover, we should obey the traffic rules ad always queue for our turn.
To make our city more beautiful, we should have a green life. It is important to save energy and reduce waste. We should also separate the waste and try our best to recycle them.
Let’s start from ourselves. Try our best to make our hometown more beautiful and civilized. Thank you!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Civilized City”为题，根据题干中所给的要点进行写作，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：阐述做法应用一般现在时，多以第一人称为主，注意连词的使用，使文章过渡自然。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰，逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（二）
“践行文明礼仪，保护自然环境”是学校志愿者活动的主要目的。学校英语杂志社以“我是一名志愿者”为题开展征文活动。假如你是Li Hua，请根据下面的信息用英语写一篇短文投稿，要点如下：
1. 文明礼仪方面：在图书馆……；在公交车上……
2. 环保意识方面：过绿色生活……
3. 学习生活方面：多阅读……；参加慈善活动……
注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
I am a volunteer
Hi, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I am a volunteer of our school.
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In short, let’s make good use of volunteer work.
【答案】
I am a volunteer
Hi, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I am a volunteer of our school. Let me tell you something about your volunteer work. The main purpose of our work is to help students learn more about manners and protect the environment.
Since it’s never too late to do something meaningful, we take part in a lot of volunteering activities. For example, we give talks on what we should and shouldn’t do in the library. We should offer our seats on the bus. We also encourage students to plant more trees and reduce pollution for the environment. We should read more to broaden our horizons. We will also participate in charity activities.
Through our hard work, most of the students have got good manners and our school has become a green one. In short, let’s make good use of volunteer work.
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料围绕“我是一名志愿者”写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的信息以及志愿工作的目的。
第二步，分别从文明礼仪，环保意识以及学习生活方面进行介绍。
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② in short 总之
③ make good use of 充分利用
[高分句型]
① The main purpose of our work is to help students learn more about manners and protect the environment（动词不定式作表语）
② Since it’s never too late to do something meaningful, we take part in a lot of volunteering activities（since引导原因状语从句）
（三）
“宿迁是我家，文明靠大家”，作为中学生，应积极参与文明建设（civilized city ）的建设。请根据以下提示，写一篇90词左右的短文。
1. 尊敬老师，对人礼貌 2. 乐于助人， 友善待人
3. 阅读经典， 提升自我 4. 遵守交通规则，不闯红灯
5. 保护环境， 垃圾分类，植树种花 6.……（自拟一点）
参考词汇：classics经典作品
How to make Suqian a civilized city
Suqian is now trying to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Suqian is now trying to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those in trouble and be friendly to the people around us. We should read more books, especially classics and help improve ourselves. Besides, we must obey traffic rules. We mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s more, we should protect our environment. For example, we should separate waste into different groups. And we should plant more trees and flowers. Don’t walk on the grass.
Suqian is our hometown. Let’s try our best to make it a civilized city.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文倡议书的写作。写作时承接题干所给开头引出倡议目的；接着要按照题干要求列举倡议内容；最后结尾发出呼吁。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主来行文；倡议书书写主要内容为提建议，因此可用表建议的句型，例如We should…，It is suggested that…，it would be better if…等。另外倡议的内容通常不止一个，因此可用in addition， besides，what’s more等词来列举内容，可以使文章逻辑清晰，层层递进。
（四）
社会不断在发展进步，成绩好已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校英文校刊正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生”的大讨论，请写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？提示如下：
平时 学会照顾自己, 学习努力，善良，乐于分享； 有好的阅读习惯，阅读为我们打开全新世界； 环保绿色生活......(自由发挥1-2句)； 懂餐桌礼仪，举止文明......(自由发挥1-2句)。
空余时间 关注残疾人，给他们向公众展示能力的机会； 欣赏大自然的美，理解保护大自然人人有责。
总结 ……(1-2句)
要求：1. 注意人称和时态。
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
3. 不要逐字翻译，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a
qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
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【答案】
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, we usually learn to look after ourselves. We should work hard and we are generous and easy to share things with others. Second, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. It also open up a new world to us. Third, we live a green life. We must not drop litter carelessly. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Fourth, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before you leave the table. We should queue, we must not push in before others.
Moreover, in our spare time, we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their abilities to the public. Also, we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature. It’s our duty to protect nature.
In a word, if we follow the advice, we will make a big difference to ourselves.\The more we act, the better we will improve.
（五）
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇100字左右的短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括：
1.环境污染越来越严重，比如水污染和空气污染，我们能看到森林被砍伐，垃圾随地乱扔等。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的？
如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
【答案】
My low-carbon life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，描述自己的“低碳生活”。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The environmental pollution is……，I try to……，It can……，I wish……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了环境污染越来越严重，接下来介绍我从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”，最后号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。此处cut down, try to do sth, turn off, make full use of, make sth+adj.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
书面表达之谚语
（一）
《21世纪英文报》以"A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step"（千里之行始于足下）为题向中学生征集优秀作品，请你用英文完成一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你对谚语的理解；
（2）你生活中的一个事例（如：运动，乐器，家务，学习等）；
（3）你的感悟。
注意：
（1）词数 100左右，开头已给出，不计入总数；
（2）内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step
Have you heard of the saying "a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step"？It means that
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【答案】
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step
Have you heard of the saying "a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step"？It means that starting a good life is the result of the beginning. （对谚语的理解）
Last summer holiday，I wanted to learn how to swim. I asked my father to teach me. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first，I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But my father always encouraged me. He said he would protect me.【高分句型一】Then I began to swim，but I couldn't swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then my father told me how to move，how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly I could move a little. It took me about four hours to learn to swim. I felt quite happy.（经历是什么）
From this experience，I have learned a lot. The first step is always the hardest. But if you do it in a proper way and never give up，you will make it.【高分句型二】（学到了什么）
书面表达之志愿者和慈善活动
（一）
2022年8月江苏省运动会将在泰州举行，不少同学想加入到省运会志愿者的队伍中来。假如你是学生会主席王涛，请以“What makes a good volunteer”为题，从必备品格、关键能力和相关知识等方面写一篇演讲稿，阐述成为优秀志愿者的条件。
注意： 1. 词数100词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所要求的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
What makes a good volunteer
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Tao. Jiangsu Provincial Games are coming. Many students want to be volunteers. What makes a good volunteer I think we should have necessary qualities, key abilities and some related (相关的) knowledge.
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In a word, any help would mean a lot. Being a good volunteer not only gets to help others but also improves ourselves.
Thank you for listening!
【答案】
What makes a good volunteer
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Tao. Jiangsu Provincial Games are coming. Many students want to be volunteers. What makes a good volunteer I think we should have necessary qualities, key abilities and some related (相关的) knowledge.
Above all, we should have some necessary qualities. First, it’s important for volunteers to be kind and friendly. Second, we need to be patient enough to do our work one-to-one. Third, we should always be ready to help others at any time. Fourth, as a volunteer, we can’t be too careful to avoid making mistakes.
Also, we need to be good at some key abilities, such as team-work, communication and organizing abilities. As volunteers, we should learn how to work with team members. We’d better know how to communicate with different people. And we should be well organized and solve problems wisely because we may face some difficult situation.
What’s more, it’s necessary for volunteers to learn some related knowledge, like good manners,
communication skills, first aid knowledge and knowledge of saving energy and protecting the environment.
In a word, any help would mean a lot. Being a good volunteer not only gets to help others but also improves ourselves.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
1.题干解读：题目要求以“What makes a good volunteer”为题写一篇演讲稿，并从必备品格、关键能力和相关知识等方面阐述成为优秀志愿者的条件。写作时，要包括所列列举的要点，适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：写作主要以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。在写作时，要适当增加内容，阐述成为优秀志愿者的必备品格、关键能力和相关知识。句子符合英文表达习惯，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句和复合句，同时注意上下文意的衔接，是文意连贯，表达流畅。
（二）
你是阳光中学八年级学生。上周六，你们班在校园里组织了一次爱心义卖活动，并将钱款捐给了 “希望工程”（Project Hope）。请你根据下表信息给学校英文报写一篇报道，简要介绍本次活动，并谈谈你的体会。
What you did What you’ve learned
●hand out leaflets ●sell things like… ●… ● donate the money ●communicate with others ●…
注意：
1. 词数80左右。报道已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。
2. 报道需包括上表所有信息，可适当发挥。
3. 报道中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】
Last Saturday, our class had a charity sale in our school for Project Hope. Before the sale, we handed out leaflets to make people know our sale. Then we began to sell different things like food and toys. Some were taken from our home, others were hand-made. It was so much fun! Our monitor even sang a song to attract more people to buy them. We were very happy to see that all the things were sold out in a short time! Then, we gave away the money to help children in poor areas.
I think it was a meaningful experience. Making things helps develop our life skills. Meanwhile, we can learn how to communicate with others well. Last but not least, helping people makes us happy.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍学校的爱心义卖活动的情况，同时谈一下自己的体会。具体的内容要包含所给的提示，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段介绍学校的爱心义卖活动的情况；第二段谈一下自己的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
（三）
学校英文网站将开展题为“Volunteers around us”的征文活动，请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：
1. What have the volunteers done
2. What do you think of them
注意事项：
（1）词数：90词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Volunteers around us
There are a lot of volunteers around us.
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【答案】
Volunteers around us
There are a lot of volunteers around us. They do a lot of meaningful things for us and ask for nothing in return.
For example, some high school and college students spend their free time as volunteers in hospital, orphanage or homes for the aged. They read books to the people in these places, or they just visit them and listen to their problems to cheer them up.
Being a volunteer not only helps others, but also enriches our life experiences. I think the person who is willing to be a volunteer must be a kind person, because they are ready to help others and don’t expect any rewards.
【解析】
1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，要求我们以“Volunteers around us”为题写一篇英语短文。写作内容包括：我们身边志愿者通常都做了什么事情，以及是怎样看待他们的。写作前可以提前列举可能会用到的单词、短语或句子；写作时要符合英语的表达方式；写作后注意检查。
2.写作指导：作文时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第三人称，注意谓语动词的三单形式。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段点明写作的对象；第二段详细地介绍志愿者通常会做什么；第三段写对身边志愿者的看法。
（四）
假如你是学校的小记者，日前对学校“最美志愿者”Amy进行了采访。请根据以下采访记录，用英语写一篇稿件，向读者介绍她的情况。
兴趣爱好 1.读书。每天约花一小时阅读。 2.旅游。去过中国西部地区。
感人事迹 1.贫困学生患重病，为其集资做手术。 2.发现女童辍学，联系政府帮助其复学。
未来计划 1.今年暑假:宣传环境保护，因为……(原因自拟)。 2.以后有机会时:……(内容自拟)
注意:
1.词数90词左右。短文开头已写好，不计入总词数。
2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school.She likes reading. She spends about one hour reading every day. And she likes travelling. Too. She has visited many places in the west of our country.
When a boy from a poor family got a serious disease. Amy organized several activities to raise money for him. With her support, the boy was cured after the operation. Last year, she found a girl had to leave
school, she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to school.
This summer, she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse. If possible, she may take part in some charities to work for more people. She thinks it will be meaningful.
【解析】
本篇书面表达以介绍“最美志愿者”为主题，结合所给的写作材料，阐述“最美志愿者”Amy的兴趣爱好、感人事迹和未来计划。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态、一般过去时态和一般将来时态等，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中了spend…doing…，the west of our country, With her support，help...do..., decide to do, take part in 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、原因状语从句、条件状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。
书面表达之自我变化和成长的介绍
（一）
社会不断在发展进步，成绩好已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生”的大讨论，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？提示如下：
平时 1.学会照顾自己, 高标准工作，谦虚，易于合作； 2.有好的阅读习惯，提高自己； 3.注意保护环境，不乱丢垃圾，步行或骑自行车上学； 4.懂餐桌礼仪，举止文明......(自由发挥1-2句)
空余时间 1.关注残疾人，给他们向公众展示技能的机会； 2.欣赏大自然的美，理解保护大自然的重要性。
总结 (1-2句)
要求：1.注意人称和时态。
2.要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
3.不要逐字翻译，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
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【答案】
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, we usually learn to look after ourselves. We should work to high standards and we are modest and easy to work with. Second, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. Third,we should pay attention to protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Fourth, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before you leave the table. We should queue, we must not push in before others.
Moreover,in our spare time,we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their skills to the public.Also,we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature in order to understand the importance of protecting nature.
In a word, if we follow the advice,we will make a big difference to ourselves.\The more we act,the better we will improve.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈我觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……，First, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
（二）
在八年级即将结束之际，八（1）班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Simon准备一份100字左右的演讲稿，具体内容如下：
过去 现在
业余生活 大部分业余时间听音乐，看电视，上网玩游戏 在老师的帮助下，意识到……， 阅读，锻炼
礼仪 举止不文明，乱扔垃圾，在公共场所大声喧哗 举止文明，力行环保，受到表扬（praise）
爱心 不关心他人，零用钱用来…… 了解到贫困地区的孩子上不起学，把零用钱捐给希望工程
展望未来 自我发挥（至少两点）
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress(进步) in some ways.
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress(进步) in some ways.
First, I spent most of my free time listening to music, watching TV and playing computer games.
Luckily, with my teacher’s help, I have realized that it’s meaningless to do so. And now I try to spend my free time reading and doing exercise.
Second, I was an impolite boy before. I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in the public place. Now, I can behave politely. I always try to go green and I am praised by my teacher and parents.
Third, I cared little about others in the past. I always spent my pocket money on things like snacks, CDs and so on. But now I donate my pocket money to Project Hope because I have learnt that children in poor areas can’t afford to go to school. I want to give them a helping hand.
I’m sure I can be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【解析】
作文要求写成一篇演讲稿的形式，因此要注意演讲稿的书写格式，语言要简练，有条理性，有说服力。动笔前要先认真阅读表格中的要点提示，然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所列举的内容，可知本文人称为第一人称，由于现在与过去从三个大的方面去比较，因此要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态进行叙述。注意多种句式的交替使用，运用表示顺序的副词First，Second，Third等能使叙事更加清晰、条理。
书面表达之环境保护、文明礼仪
（一）
为共创文明城市，我校将举行以 Civilized City 为主题的演讲比赛。请结合以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容必须包括以下要点∶
个人修养 1. 对人友善，礼貌待人； 2. ……
公共礼仪 1. 保持干净整洁，不乱扔垃圾； 2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗，在图书馆、阅览室保持安静； 3. ……
绿色生活 1. 节能减排，垃圾分类； 2. ……
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 内容要点齐全，可以适当发挥；
3. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4. 词数80左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Civilized City
Dear classmates,
Our city is now making its effort to be a civilized city. I think we can do something for it.
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Let’s start from ourselves. Try our best to make our hometown more beautiful and civilized. Thank you!
【答案】
Civilized City
Dear classmates,
Our city is now making its effort to be a civilized city. I think we can do something for it.
As a student, we should be kind to others and often help people. For example, we can give our seats to people in need on the bus and be polite to others. We should care about our classmates and offer help if necessary.
In public, we shouldn’t litter everywhere and should keep it clean. It is not polite to speak loudly in public places, and we should keep quiet in libraries, reading rooms and other places like that. Moreover, we should obey the traffic rules ad always queue for our turn.
To make our city more beautiful, we should have a green life. It is important to save energy and reduce waste. We should also separate the waste and try our best to recycle them.
Let’s start from ourselves. Try our best to make our hometown more beautiful and civilized. Thank you!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Civilized City”为题，根据题干中所给的要点进行写作，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：阐述做法应用一般现在时，多以第一人称为主，注意连词的使用，使文章过渡自然。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰，逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（二）
“践行文明礼仪，保护自然环境”是学校志愿者活动的主要目的。学校英语杂志社以“我是一名志愿者”为题开展征文活动。假如你是Li Hua，请根据下面的信息用英语写一篇短文投稿，要点如下：
1. 文明礼仪方面：在图书馆……；在公交车上……
2. 环保意识方面：过绿色生活……
3. 学习生活方面：多阅读……；参加慈善活动……
注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
I am a volunteer
Hi, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I am a volunteer of our school.
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In short, let’s make good use of volunteer work.
【答案】
I am a volunteer
Hi, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I am a volunteer of our school. Let me tell you something about your volunteer work. The main purpose of our work is to help students learn more about manners and protect the environment.
Since it’s never too late to do something meaningful, we take part in a lot of volunteering activities. For example, we give talks on what we should and shouldn’t do in the library. We should offer our seats on the bus. We also encourage students to plant more trees and reduce pollution for the environment. We should read more to broaden our horizons. We will also participate in charity activities.
Through our hard work, most of the students have got good manners and our school has become a green one. In short, let’s make good use of volunteer work.
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料围绕“我是一名志愿者”写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的信息以及志愿工作的目的。
第二步，分别从文明礼仪，环保意识以及学习生活方面进行介绍。
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② in short 总之
③ make good use of 充分利用
[高分句型]
① The main purpose of our work is to help students learn more about manners and protect the environment（动词不定式作表语）
② Since it’s never too late to do something meaningful, we take part in a lot of volunteering activities（since引导原因状语从句）
（三）
“宿迁是我家，文明靠大家”，作为中学生，应积极参与文明建设（civilized city ）的建设。请根据以下提示，写一篇90词左右的短文。
1. 尊敬老师，对人礼貌 2. 乐于助人， 友善待人
3. 阅读经典， 提升自我 4. 遵守交通规则，不闯红灯
5. 保护环境， 垃圾分类，植树种花 6.……（自拟一点）
参考词汇：classics经典作品
How to make Suqian a civilized city
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【答案】
Suqian is now trying to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those in trouble and be friendly to the people around us. We should read more books, especially classics and help improve ourselves. Besides, we must obey traffic rules. We mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s more, we should protect our environment. For example, we should separate waste into different groups. And we should plant more trees and flowers. Don’t walk on the grass.
Suqian is our hometown. Let’s try our best to make it a civilized city.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文倡议书的写作。写作时承接题干所给开头引出倡议目的；接着要按照题干要求列举倡议内容；最后结尾发出呼吁。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主来行文；倡议书书写主要内容为提建议，因此可用表建议的句型，例如We should…，It is suggested that…，it would be better if…等。另外倡议的内容通常不止一个，因此可用in addition， besides，what’s more等词来列举内容，可以使文章逻辑清晰，层层递进。
（四）
社会不断在发展进步，成绩好已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校英文校刊正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生”的大讨论，请写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？提示如下：
平时 学会照顾自己, 学习努力，善良，乐于分享； 有好的阅读习惯，阅读为我们打开全新世界； 环保绿色生活......(自由发挥1-2句)； 懂餐桌礼仪，举止文明......(自由发挥1-2句)。
空余时间 关注残疾人，给他们向公众展示能力的机会； 欣赏大自然的美，理解保护大自然人人有责。
总结 ……(1-2句)
要求：1. 注意人称和时态。
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
3. 不要逐字翻译，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a
qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
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【答案】
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, we usually learn to look after ourselves. We should work hard and we are generous and easy to share things with others. Second, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. It also open up a new world to us. Third, we live a green life. We must not drop litter carelessly. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Fourth, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before you leave the table. We should queue, we must not push in before others.
Moreover, in our spare time, we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their abilities to the public. Also, we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature. It’s our duty to protect nature.
In a word, if we follow the advice, we will make a big difference to ourselves.\The more we act, the better we will improve.
（五）
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇100字左右的短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括：
1.环境污染越来越严重，比如水污染和空气污染，我们能看到森林被砍伐，垃圾随地乱扔等。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的？
如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
【答案】
My low-carbon life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，描述自己的“低碳生活”。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The environmental pollution is……，I try to……，It can……，I wish……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了环境污染越来越严重，接下来介绍我从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”，最后号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。此处cut down, try to do sth, turn off, make full use of, make sth+adj.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
书面表达之谚语
（一）
《21世纪英文报》以"A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step"（千里之行始于足下）为题向中学生征集优秀作品，请你用英文完成一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你对谚语的理解；
（2）你生活中的一个事例（如：运动，乐器，家务，学习等）；
（3）你的感悟。
注意：
（1）词数 100左右，开头已给出，不计入总数；
（2）内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step
Have you heard of the saying "a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step"？It means that
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A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step
Have you heard of the saying "a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step"？It means that starting a good life is the result of the beginning. （对谚语的理解）
Last summer holiday，I wanted to learn how to swim. I asked my father to teach me. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first，I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But my father always encouraged me. He said he would protect me.【高分句型一】Then I began to swim，but I couldn't swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then my father told me how to move，how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly I could move a little. It took me about four hours to learn to swim. I felt quite happy.（经历是什么）
From this experience，I have learned a lot. The first step is always the hardest. But if you do it in a proper way and never give up，you will make it.【高分句型二】（学到了什么）
书面表达之志愿者和慈善活动
（一）
2022年8月江苏省运动会将在泰州举行，不少同学想加入到省运会志愿者的队伍中来。假如你是学生会主席王涛，请以“What makes a good volunteer”为题，从必备品格、关键能力和相关知识等方面写一篇演讲稿，阐述成为优秀志愿者的条件。
注意： 1. 词数100词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所要求的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
What makes a good volunteer
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Tao. Jiangsu Provincial Games are coming. Many students want to be volunteers. What makes a good volunteer I think we should have necessary qualities, key abilities and some related (相关的) knowledge.
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In a word, any help would mean a lot. Being a good volunteer not only gets to help others but also improves ourselves.
Thank you for listening!
【答案】
What makes a good volunteer
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Tao. Jiangsu Provincial Games are coming. Many students want to be volunteers. What makes a good volunteer I think we should have necessary qualities, key abilities and some related (相关的) knowledge.
Above all, we should have some necessary qualities. First, it’s important for volunteers to be kind and friendly. Second, we need to be patient enough to do our work one-to-one. Third, we should always be ready to help others at any time. Fourth, as a volunteer, we can’t be too careful to avoid making mistakes.
Also, we need to be good at some key abilities, such as team-work, communication and organizing abilities. As volunteers, we should learn how to work with team members. We’d better know how to communicate with different people. And we should be well organized and solve problems wisely because we may face some difficult situation.
What’s more, it’s necessary for volunteers to learn some related knowledge, like good manners,
communication skills, first aid knowledge and knowledge of saving energy and protecting the environment.
In a word, any help would mean a lot. Being a good volunteer not only gets to help others but also improves ourselves.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
1.题干解读：题目要求以“What makes a good volunteer”为题写一篇演讲稿，并从必备品格、关键能力和相关知识等方面阐述成为优秀志愿者的条件。写作时，要包括所列列举的要点，适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：写作主要以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。在写作时，要适当增加内容，阐述成为优秀志愿者的必备品格、关键能力和相关知识。句子符合英文表达习惯，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句和复合句，同时注意上下文意的衔接，是文意连贯，表达流畅。
（二）
你是阳光中学八年级学生。上周六，你们班在校园里组织了一次爱心义卖活动，并将钱款捐给了 “希望工程”（Project Hope）。请你根据下表信息给学校英文报写一篇报道，简要介绍本次活动，并谈谈你的体会。
What you did What you’ve learned
●hand out leaflets ●sell things like… ●… ● donate the money ●communicate with others ●…
注意：
1. 词数80左右。报道已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。
2. 报道需包括上表所有信息，可适当发挥。
3. 报道中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】
Last Saturday, our class had a charity sale in our school for Project Hope. Before the sale, we handed out leaflets to make people know our sale. Then we began to sell different things like food and toys. Some were taken from our home, others were hand-made. It was so much fun! Our monitor even sang a song to attract more people to buy them. We were very happy to see that all the things were sold out in a short time! Then, we gave away the money to help children in poor areas.
I think it was a meaningful experience. Making things helps develop our life skills. Meanwhile, we can learn how to communicate with others well. Last but not least, helping people makes us happy.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍学校的爱心义卖活动的情况，同时谈一下自己的体会。具体的内容要包含所给的提示，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段介绍学校的爱心义卖活动的情况；第二段谈一下自己的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
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学校英文网站将开展题为“Volunteers around us”的征文活动，请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：
1. What have the volunteers done
2. What do you think of them
注意事项：
（1）词数：90词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Volunteers around us
There are a lot of volunteers around us.
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【答案】
Volunteers around us
There are a lot of volunteers around us. They do a lot of meaningful things for us and ask for nothing in return.
For example, some high school and college students spend their free time as volunteers in hospital, orphanage or homes for the aged. They read books to the people in these places, or they just visit them and listen to their problems to cheer them up.
Being a volunteer not only helps others, but also enriches our life experiences. I think the person who is willing to be a volunteer must be a kind person, because they are ready to help others and don’t expect any rewards.
【解析】
1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，要求我们以“Volunteers around us”为题写一篇英语短文。写作内容包括：我们身边志愿者通常都做了什么事情，以及是怎样看待他们的。写作前可以提前列举可能会用到的单词、短语或句子；写作时要符合英语的表达方式；写作后注意检查。
2.写作指导：作文时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第三人称，注意谓语动词的三单形式。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段点明写作的对象；第二段详细地介绍志愿者通常会做什么；第三段写对身边志愿者的看法。
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假如你是学校的小记者，日前对学校“最美志愿者”Amy进行了采访。请根据以下采访记录，用英语写一篇稿件，向读者介绍她的情况。
兴趣爱好 1.读书。每天约花一小时阅读。 2.旅游。去过中国西部地区。
感人事迹 1.贫困学生患重病，为其集资做手术。 2.发现女童辍学，联系政府帮助其复学。
未来计划 1.今年暑假:宣传环境保护，因为……(原因自拟)。 2.以后有机会时:……(内容自拟)
注意:
1.词数90词左右。短文开头已写好，不计入总词数。
2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school.She likes reading. She spends about one hour reading every day. And she likes travelling. Too. She has visited many places in the west of our country.
When a boy from a poor family got a serious disease. Amy organized several activities to raise money for him. With her support, the boy was cured after the operation. Last year, she found a girl had to leave
school, she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to school.
This summer, she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse. If possible, she may take part in some charities to work for more people. She thinks it will be meaningful.
【解析】
本篇书面表达以介绍“最美志愿者”为主题，结合所给的写作材料，阐述“最美志愿者”Amy的兴趣爱好、感人事迹和未来计划。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态、一般过去时态和一般将来时态等，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中了spend…doing…，the west of our country, With her support，help...do..., decide to do, take part in 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、原因状语从句、条件状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。
书面表达之自我变化和成长的介绍
（一）
社会不断在发展进步，成绩好已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生”的大讨论，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？提示如下：
平时 1.学会照顾自己, 高标准工作，谦虚，易于合作； 2.有好的阅读习惯，提高自己； 3.注意保护环境，不乱丢垃圾，步行或骑自行车上学； 4.懂餐桌礼仪，举止文明......(自由发挥1-2句)
空余时间 1.关注残疾人，给他们向公众展示技能的机会； 2.欣赏大自然的美，理解保护大自然的重要性。
总结 (1-2句)
要求：1.注意人称和时态。
2.要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。
3.不要逐字翻译，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
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【答案】
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, we usually learn to look after ourselves. We should work to high standards and we are modest and easy to work with. Second, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. Third,we should pay attention to protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Fourth, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before you leave the table. We should queue, we must not push in before others.
Moreover,in our spare time,we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their skills to the public.Also,we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature in order to understand the importance of protecting nature.
In a word, if we follow the advice,we will make a big difference to ourselves.\The more we act,the better we will improve.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈我觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……，First, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
（二）
在八年级即将结束之际，八（1）班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Simon准备一份100字左右的演讲稿，具体内容如下：
过去 现在
业余生活 大部分业余时间听音乐，看电视，上网玩游戏 在老师的帮助下，意识到……， 阅读，锻炼
礼仪 举止不文明，乱扔垃圾，在公共场所大声喧哗 举止文明，力行环保，受到表扬（praise）
爱心 不关心他人，零用钱用来…… 了解到贫困地区的孩子上不起学，把零用钱捐给希望工程
展望未来 自我发挥（至少两点）
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress(进步) in some ways.
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress(进步) in some ways.
First, I spent most of my free time listening to music, watching TV and playing computer games.
Luckily, with my teacher’s help, I have realized that it’s meaningless to do so. And now I try to spend my free time reading and doing exercise.
Second, I was an impolite boy before. I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in the public place. Now, I can behave politely. I always try to go green and I am praised by my teacher and parents.
Third, I cared little about others in the past. I always spent my pocket money on things like snacks, CDs and so on. But now I donate my pocket money to Project Hope because I have learnt that children in poor areas can’t afford to go to school. I want to give them a helping hand.
I’m sure I can be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【解析】
作文要求写成一篇演讲稿的形式，因此要注意演讲稿的书写格式，语言要简练，有条理性，有说服力。动笔前要先认真阅读表格中的要点提示，然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所列举的内容，可知本文人称为第一人称，由于现在与过去从三个大的方面去比较，因此要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态进行叙述。注意多种句式的交替使用，运用表示顺序的副词First，Second，Third等能使叙事更加清晰、条理。