2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题 (上海专用)（含解析）

2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题 (上海专用)
1．（2024·上海崇明·一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Take it easy ” according to the given situation (根据以下情境，以“放轻松”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
你的好朋友 Sandy 正在准备一场关于传统文化的演讲比赛，尽管她每天练习至少半小时，但仍然无法记住整份演讲稿。此外，Sandy 因为太紧张，晚上无法入睡。请你写一封信给 Sandy，鼓励她，让她放轻松。信中至少给她二个建议，并给出合适理由，同时注意信件格式。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
Take it easy
Dear Sandy,
I know that you are preparing for a contest about traditional culture and you can’t remember the whole content of the speech though you have practiced it at least half an hour every day. And I also know that you can’t fall asleep because of the nervousness. So, I have two advice for you. First, divide the content into several parts and recite every part carefully. Second, do not force yourself to recite anything if you feel very nervous. Find a proper time to do it. Hope you can do it.
Yours,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍好朋友最近的状态；
第二步，给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for为......做准备
②at least至少
③fall asleep入睡
④divide...into...把......分成......
[高分句型]
①I know that you are preparing for a contest about traditional culture and you can’t remember the whole content of the speech though you practiced it at least half an hour every day. (that引导的宾语从句)
②Second, do not force yourself to recite anything if you feel very nervous.(if引导的条件状语从句)
2．（2024·上海奉贤·一模）Write a letter to Rebecca in at least 60 words according to the following situation. (根据以下情境给Rebecca写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。)
生活中，总有一些人在我们遇到困难、困惑的时候给我们提供帮助或者建议。Rebecca也遇到了成长的烦恼，她父母希望她把更多的时间和精力放在学习上，让她放弃弹钢琴的兴趣爱好。 她不知道该怎么办？假设你是她的朋友David，请你针对她的烦恼，给她写一封不少于60词的信，帮助她。
注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Rebecca,
I heard that you’re going through a tough time with your parents wanting you to focus more on your studies and give up your passion for playing the piano. I understand how difficult this must be, but I want you to know that I’m here for you and I have some advice that might help.
Firstly, have a conversation with your parents about how important music is to you and how it helps you relax. Remember to express yourself in a polite way.
Secondly, try to find a compromise that involves both studying and playing the piano. For example, you could make a time-table for practicing piano and stick to a strict study schedule during the rest of the day.
Remember, it’s always good to have a hobby that you enjoy, and it can actually make you more energetic in your studies. So don’t give up on your passion, and keep working hard to achieve your goals.
Best regards,
David
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表述已明白对方的问题；
第二步，给出对应的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① go through 经历
② focus more on 更专注
③ stick to坚持
[高分句型]
① I understand how difficult this must be.（宾语从句）
② Secondly, try to find a compromise that involves both studying and playing the piano.（定语从句）
3．（23-24九年级·上海青浦·一模）Write an Email of at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格。）
你所在的学校社团正在举行新学期招聘活动。假如你是初三学生李华，请阅读以下两幅海报，写一封邮件给张老师，报名参加其中一个社团，邮件须包含以下内容：
(1)你会参加哪一个社团，并说明理由；
(2)简要阐述你对社团活动的期待。
debate 辩论 Chinese painting 中国画
注意：
1. 电子邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
Thanks for offering such meaningful activities. I prefer Art Club on February 26th because all the drawing skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life. I’m so excited that I can learn traditional Chinese painting. Moreover, what makes me interested is that I am sure we will have a lot of fun learning about Chinese traditional cultures. Besides, it’s a good chance to make more friends and broaden my horizons. I believe it will be an unforgettable experience. I am looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件；
② 时态：一般现在时态和一般将来时；
③ 提示：根据题干所给内容完成写作，考生注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，并突出重点，注意邮件格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山，表明自己要参加“艺术俱乐部”；
第二步，具体阐述你对社团活动的期待和选择的原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①thanks for doing感谢做……
②be of great value非常有价值
[高分句型]
①I prefer Art Club on February 26th because all the drawing skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life.（原因状语从句）
②I believe it will be an unforgettable experience. （宾语从句）
4．（23-24九年级·上海黄浦·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
初三毕业典礼即将到来，为此学校开展了主题海报设计活动。目前初步确定了三幅主题为“友谊长存”、“感谢师恩”、“美好未来”的候选海报，并在学校网站展示，征询学生们的意见。假设你是该校学生李华，请在学校网站留言，选择其中的一幅海报，并结合海报内容阐述你的理由。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I would like to say “thank you” to my English teacher.
He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s
humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.
I think he is the best in my mind. I will remember him forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：选择其中一幅海报进行阐述，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表达想感谢哪位老师；
第二步，描述老师的基本特征及老师对我的影响；
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with sb对某人严格
②play football踢足球
③it’s no use doing sth做某事是没用的
[高分句型]
He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know.（that引导宾语从句，what引导的宾语从句）
5．（23-24九年级·上海青浦·一模）Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic “I want to say to my school ‘________ ’”. （以我想对我的学校说“ _________ ” 为题写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格）
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）
Questions for reference:
1. What would you like to say to your school
2. Why do you want to say these words to your school
3. What do those words or sentences mean to you or your school
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【答案】例文：
I want to say to my school “Thank you” I am about to become a high school student, and on the occasion of my graduation, I would like to say “Thank you” to my school.
Firstly, it was because my school has provided me with a superior learning environment, which has enabled me to successfully complete my studies. Secondly, I have made many good friends here. Thirdly, I have learned many other skills besides studying.
This sentence means that I will enter high school with a grateful heart. I also hope that my school can get better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作题目需自行补充；写作过程注意时态切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题说明想对学校说的话；
第二步，阐述说这些话的原因；
第三步，表达自己感恩的心和对学校的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①be about to即将
②on the occasion of值此……之际
③provide sb. with sth.为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it was because my school has provided me with a superior learning environment...（表语从句）
②I also hope that my school can get better and better.（宾语从句）
6．（23-24九年级·上海浦东新·一模）Suppose your school is organizing a study trip to Britain. What kind of host family would you like to live with And why Write a composition is at least 60 words according to the situation given. (假如你们学校正在组织一次去英国的游学活动，你想选择怎样的住家？为什么？请根据所给情景写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
(注意：短文中不得出现人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评)
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【答案】例文
Given the chance, I will choose a host family with sweet atmosphere in the house, it’s important to have a nice family to live with.
Firstly, I would love that the host family have a beautiful scenery and a perfect view when looking outside the window in a convenient location. I can breathe the fresh air and enjoy the comfortable breeze with my friends. Secondly, I’m really looking forward to making new friends with British students who are of similar age and have many interesting things to talk about.
In conclude, I hope I could not only learn a lot of knowledge but also make many friends during this study trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“如果有机会，我会选择一个家里气氛温馨的寄宿家庭”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——哪一种寄宿家庭、原因等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望在这次游学期间我不仅能学到很多知识，还能结识很多朋友。”的美好期待。
[亮点词汇]
①sweet atmosphere温馨的气氛
②making new friends 交新朋友
③a lot of knowledge许多知识
[高分句型]
①Secondly, I’m really looking forward to making new friends with British students who are of similar age and have many interesting things to talk about. (定语从句）
②I hope I could not only learn a lot of knowledge but also make many friends during this study trip. (宾语从句)
7．（23-24九年级·上海浦东新·一模）Situarion临近毕业，班里的同学们打算举行一次毕业庆祝活动，他们在讨论征集庆祝活动的建议。 以“How to Celebrate Graduation”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的建议并陈述理由。
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【答案】例文
How to Celebrate Graduation
How time flies! We are going to graduate from middle school. To celebrate this unforgettable moment, as one of the graduates, I would like to offer some advice on how to celebrate graduation.
The most common way is to treat our teachers, relatives and friends to a big dinner, during which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. It’s a great way to promote our relations. We can have a trip to celebrate it, which helps us broaden our horizons. What’s more, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our parents. In this way, we can express our thanks to them in return for their love, care and support in our school life.
The above four points are my opinions. I hope they can be accepted.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文主要是谈谈你对毕业庆祝活动的建议以及理由，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己的建议和理由；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①graduate from从……毕业
②broaden our horizons开阔眼界
③in return for作为回报
[高分句型]
①To celebrate this unforgettable moment, as one of the graduates, I would like to offer some advice on how to celebrate graduation. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②The most common way is to treat our teachers, relatives and friends to a big dinner, during which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. (which引导的定语从句)
8．（23-24九年级·上海闵行·一模）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Say goodbye to ______”（根据提示，以“对______的告别”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。）
提示：生命中有许多遇见，许多期待，也终究有许多告别。我们会告别一段美好的时光，一份亲密的关系，一个难缠的坏习惯……告别意味着终将离去的珍惜，也可能是饱含期待的成长。（注意：不得出现考生姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇不得分。）
Say goodbye to ______
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【答案】例文
Say Goodbye to a Bad Habit
Today, I say goodbye to a troublesome bad habit that has been a constant companion in my life—my uncontrollable love for sweets. I used to snack on candies, chocolate, and other sugary treats all day long, without realizing the harm it was doing to my health. But now, I’ve decided to make a change. Goodbye, sugary snacks! Hello, healthy fruits and vegetables. I’m excited to embark on this new journey of healthier eating habits and feel better about myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕“对……的告别”进行展开，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指明要告别的人或事物；
第二步，简单描写要告别的人或事物；
第三步，展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②embark on着手，开始做某事
③eating habits饮食习惯
[高分句型]
I say goodbye to a troublesome bad habit that has been a constant companion in my life…（that引导的定语从句）
9．（23-24九年级·上海虹口·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格）
学校计划在今年暑假组织两个劳动教育项目： The Joy of Harvest（丰收的喜悦） 和 You Are the Chef（你是大厨），现向学生征求建议。假如你是Li Hua，请给项目负责人Miss Liu写一封信，告知她你想参加哪个劳动教育项目，说明理由，并为这个项目再设计1-2个活动。
Labor Program The Joy of Harvest You Are the Chef
Time and Place July 20th the Community Farm July 1st the School Canteen
Activities learn to harvest rice learn to choose the best ingredients (原料)
注意： 1. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
2. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
Dear Miss Liu,
I am glad to hear that the school plans to organize two labor education programs this summer. As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very interested in the program—You Are the Chef in the School Canteen on July 1st. I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is very important and necessary. I can’t wait to learn to choose the best ingredients in this program. In my opinion, We can add an activity—cooking a meal for our parents. In this activity, we can learn how to love our families.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己选择哪个项目；
第二步，细节介绍项目的时间地点，活动；
第三步，为这个项目再设计1-2个活动。
[亮点词汇]
①plays an important role发挥重要作用
②can’t wait to迫不及待
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that the school plans to organize two labor education programs this summer. （that引导宾语从句）
②I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends.（when引导时间状语从句）
10．（23-24九年级·上海浦东新·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校报社做了一次有关学生如何使用零花钱的调查。现假设你是报社编辑李华，请根据以下图表写一份报告，报告必须包含以下内容：
1. 简要描述图表显示的结果；
2. 针对结果，提出改进消费习惯的建议，并阐述理由。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现姓名校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Nowadays, as we are given more and more pocket money by our parents, it’s really necessary for us to make good use of it and develop our ability to manage our money. We did a survey on how the students spend their monthly pocket money. Here is the result.
According to the survey, 20% of the students spend their monthly pocket money on study, and they often buy useful books and magazines to help their study. 30% spend their money on games and cartoons. They usually play computer games or watch cartoon movies. 50% of the students spend their monthly pocket money on snacks and drinks.
In my opinion, it is important for students to use our pocket money wisely. We shouldn’t spend much money on games and cartoons. Games and cartoons are bad for our eyes. As for snacks and drinks, they are not healthy. We should keep away from them. We can spend some money buying some fruits. It’s a good idea to spend money on books and magazines. Reading can improve ourselves.
In all, we should develop a habit to save money. We can write down a daily-cost. What’s more, we can put the rest of our pocket money in the bank and watch it grow.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括调查结果和改进消费的意见，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤］
第一步，介绍所做的调查，引出调查结果；
第二步，具体介绍调查的结果以及数据情况；
第三步，结合消费习惯给出自己的建议；
第四步，书写总结，呼吁大家养成省钱的好习惯。
[亮点词汇］
① make good use of 充分利用
② according to 根据
③ in one’s opinion 在某人看来
[高分句型］
① In my opinion, it is important for students to use our pocket money wisely. (it作形式主语)
② According to the survey, 20% of the students spend their monthly pocket money on study, and they often buy useful books and magazines to help their study. (and连接的并列句)
11．（23-24九年级·上海杨浦·一模）Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字）
学校的漫画社（Cartoon Club）、信息技术社（IT Club）、茶艺社（Tea-making Club）和阅读社（Reading Club）正在招募社长（club secretary）。假设你是吴磊，结合你的特长与爱好，给负责社团工作的王老师（Mr Wang）写一份自我介绍，参与其中一个社团社长的竞选。
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【答案】例文：
Hello, my name is Wu Lei.
My hobby is reading. Since I was a child, I’ve been reading. And that’s the reason why I choose to be the leader of Reading Club. In addition, because I have many years of reading experience and love reading, I believe that under my leadership, Reading Club will become even better.
I really hope that I can get the chance to be the leader. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为竞选文稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏材料内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。结合特长与爱好，写出竞选理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① choose to do选择做
② in addition另外
③ get the chance to do得到做某事的机会
[高分句型]
① Since I was a child, I’ve been reading.（since引导的时间状语从句）
② And that’s the reason why I choose to be the leader of Reading Club.（why引导的定语从句）
③ In addition, because I have many years of reading experience and love reading, I believe that under my leadership, Reading Club will become even better.（because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句）
12．（23-24九年级·上海奉贤·一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ moment in my life”.
(以“我生命中的________一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。
2、短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】
例文
An important moment in my life
An important moment in my life was when I won first place in the school science fair. I had spent weeks working on my project, and when the judges announced my name, I felt a rush of pride and accomplishment. It showed me that hard work and dedication really do pay off. This moment changed the way I saw myself and gave me the confidence to pursue my interests in science.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了我生命中最重要的一刻；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③ 提示：本篇作文为话题作文，写作时需围绕话题进行展开描写，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总结我生命中最重要的一刻是什么时刻。
第二步，描述这一刻的发生的事和感想。
第三步，总结生命中最重要的一刻对自己产生的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
②work on致力于
③a rush of一阵
④pay off回报
[高分句型]
①An important moment in my life was when I won first place in the school science fair.（表语从句）
②It showed me that hard work and dedication really do pay off. （宾语从句）