2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之学校生活和学习活动类（含答案）

2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之学校生活和学习活动类
1．（2024·四川泸州·一模）朋友之间的友谊本应是纯真的，但是近日少数校园里出现了一些不和谐的现象，偶有校园暴力 (campus violence) 的发生，对同学造成了伤害。请你根据下面的写作要求，以How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence为题写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1）校园暴力的危害：不利于身心健康；学习能力下降……
2）如何解决：学校教育学生友好相处；家校联合共建和平校园；学生学会尊重他人，自信应对……
3）人人有责保持校园安全，并呼吁同学们抵制校园暴力。
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇：violent (adj.暴力的)， confident (adj.自信的)，respect (n./v.尊敬)，harmonious (adj.和谐的)
How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence
Good afternoon, everyone. Today I am going to talk something about bullying (霸凌) in school.
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【范文】
How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence
Good afternoon, everyone. Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school.
Campus violence is bad for students’ physical and mental health. The students’ ability to learn is declining. They are also likely to suffer from mental illness. So how to solve campus violence
First, the school teaches students to get along well with each other. Second, the school and the family should work together to build a peaceful campus. Third, students should learn to respect others and deal with them confidently. Finally, when we encounter violence on campus, we should seek help from teachers and parents in time.
Everyone has the responsibility to keep the campus safe. We should work together to resist campus violence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明演讲主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容,从“校园霸凌的危害、如何抵制校园霸凌等”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家共同抵制校园霸凌。
[亮点词汇]
①is bad for对……有害
②suffer from忍受
③get along well with与……友好相处
[高分句型]
①Finally, when we encounter violence on campus, we should seek help from teachers and parents in time. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②We should work together to resist campus violence. (动词不定式作目的状语)
2．（2024·北京丰台·一模）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国中学生的校园生活很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件想了解你们所学的科目、学习方式以及学校活动等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你们的校园生活情况。
提示词语： maths, work in pairs, play ball games
提示问题：
● What subjects do you study
● How do you study
● What activities do you do
Dear Chris, How is everything going ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Chris,
How is everything going I’m very glad to tell you something about my school life.
In my school we have more than ten subjects to study, such as Chinese, maths, English, physics and so on. The subject that I like most is physics because it is very interesting.
We study in different ways. In class our teachers always ask us questions to make sure if we have understood what they teach us. Sometimes they ask us to work in pairs or in groups to share
what we have learned or discuss what we don’t understand. What’s more, the teachers often lead us to learn new things by playing games.
Of course, there are plenty of colorful school activities. Different clubs enrich our school life. We play ball games in the sports club, and we sing songs in the music club. What’s more, we do some volunteer work, so we not only help others but also improve ourselves.
All in all, we can enjoy ourselves at school every day. What about you
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示问题”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍校园生活；
第二步，具体介绍你们的校园生活情况，包括所学的科目、学习方式以及学校活动等；
第三步，书写结语，期待来信。
[亮点词汇]
①more than超过
②make sure确保
③plenty of大量，许多
④all in all总之
[高分句型]
①The subject that I like most is physics because it is very interesting. (主语从句和原因状语从句)
②Sometimes they ask us to work in pairs or in groups to share what we have learned or discuss what we don’t understand. (宾语从句)
③What’s more, we do some volunteer work, so we not only help others but also improve ourselves. (not only…but also…句型)
3．（2024·河南平顶山·二模）你校开展“新时代学习之星”推荐宣传活动。假如你想推荐李华，请以“The star of learning”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊英语专栏投稿。
写作要求：
1)介绍李华的基本情况；
2)说明推荐理由；
3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
4)词数100左右。
参考词汇： recommend 推荐
The star of learning
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【范文】
The star of learning
Li Hua is fifteen, an excellent student of Class One, Grade Nine. He is the star of learning in my heart.
First, he is hardworking and does well in all subjects. He has been honored as a “three-good” student for many times. Second, Li Hua gets along with teachers and students. He respects teachers and is warm-hearted when we ask him for help. Last, Li Hua is a student with responsibility. He always bears in mind to fight for our motherland.
Li Hua sets a good example for me, so I want to recommend him as the star of learning.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，需适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指明心中的合适人选是李华；
第二步，介绍李华的基本情况，以及从学习、生活等方面说明推荐李华的理由；
第三步，总结全文并再次强调推荐人选为李华。
[亮点词汇]
①be honored as被授予，被誉为
②get along with与……和睦相处
③bear in mind记住
④fight for为……斗争
⑤set a good example for为……树立好榜样
[高分句型]
①He respects teachers and is warm-hearted when we ask him for help.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Li Hua sets a good example for me, so I want to recommend him as the star of learning.（含so的并列句）
4．（2024·北京西城·一模）初中三年， 一定有很多课给你留下了深刻的印象。
假设你是李华。你校英文公众号正在开展以“My Most Memorable Class”为主题的征文活动，请用英文写一篇文章投稿，介绍你最难忘的一节课，并谈谈这节课为什么令你难忘。
提示词语： science, music, experiment, sing, interesting
提示问题： ●What was your most memorable class
●Why was the class memorable
My Most Memorable Class
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【范文】
My Most Memorable Class
We have had thousands of lessons in middle school. Some of them have left a deep impression on me. Among them, the most memorable one is a physics class I had last term.
In the class, our physics teacher Mr. Liu brought some materials and asked us to use them to do an experiment. I was confident that I could do a good job, because I had worked out all of the experiment homework problems. I offered to perform the experiment in front of the whole class. However, I just couldn’t put what I had learnt into practice no matter how hard I tried. As you can imagine, I was so embarrassed!
The physics class was really memorable because I learned an important life lesson that real knowledge comes from practice. I also learned to be modest, which will positively influence my future life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最难忘的课；
第二步，阐述难忘的原因；
第三步，总结说明从难忘的课程中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①left a deep impression留下深刻印象
②perform the experiment做实验
[高分句型]
①However, I just couldn’t put what I had learnt into practice no matter how hard I tried. (what引导宾语从句)
②The physics class was really memorable because I learned an important life lesson that
real knowledge comes from practice. (because引导原因状语从句)
5．（2024·四川乐山·二模）邯郸初中生被害案件引发了人们对校园欺凌的热议，它损害了学生身心健康。为此，请以“Say no to school bullying”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文并发表你的看法。内容包括：
1. 严格要求自己，不嘲笑他人；
2. 与同学友好相处，不打架；
3. 被欺凌时向父母和老师求助；
4. 勇敢地制止校园欺凌行为。
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右；
2. 应覆盖所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：欺凌 bully n.& v.
Say no to school bullying
School bullies happen in almost every school. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As students, we must say no to school bullying. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Say no to school bullying
School bullies happen in almost every school. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As students, we must say no to school bullying.
First, we should be strict with ourselves. It’s good for us to obey the school rules. We shouldn’t abuse or laugh at others. Then, we should be friendly to our classmates and don’t fight with them. If we are bullied by others, we should ask our teachers and parents for help. When we meet the school bullies, we should be brave to stop it.
I think schools and families should guide and educate students well. In this way, our school
can become safer and safer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。遇到霸凌要勇于阻止；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍如何保护自己，注意涵盖要点；
第三步，书写结语。只有这样做，学校未来才没有霸凌。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with对……严格
②obey the school rules遵守学校规则
③be friendly to对……友好
④fight with与……打架
[高分句型]
①If we are bullied by others, we should ask our teachers and parents for help. (条件状语从句)
②I think schools and families should guide and educate students well. (宾语从句)
6．（2024·江苏南京·一模）劳逸结合，方能游刃有余。课间十分钟是一幅多彩的画卷。请根据学校的征稿要求，写一篇英语短文。
Now, more and more students are busy studying all day long. This week we want you to have your say about the ten-minute break. Why is it necessary to have the break What do you and your classmates do during the break What is your good advice on planning the break
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数 80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
We have a ten-minute break between classes._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
We have a ten-minute break between classes. In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break is necessary, because it makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. The ten-minute break is meant for us to relax and prepare for the next class. Only doing so can we have more energy to study effectively in class. My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercise. Sometimes my classmates have a free chat with me happily or just take a walk outside. Therefore, I always feel energetic and listen carefully to teachers. You shouldn’t run too far from your classroom. Besides, don’t take some energetic exercise. I hope that everyone will have a wonderful ten-minute break.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“课间我们有十分钟的休息时间。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——课间休息重要的原因、你和同学所做的事、你的建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望每个人都将有一个美好的课间10分钟”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for为……做准备
②take a walk散步
③feel energetic 感到精力充沛
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break is necessary, because it makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. (状语从句）
②I hope that everyone will have a wonderful ten-minute break. (宾语从句)
7．（2024·福建福州·二模）现我校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library. It will be greatly different from the present ones. The library is green, blue and white. And it’s in the shape of spaceships with all kinds of electrical appliances. It will use solar power and be controlled by computers. What’s more, it’s made up of
recyclable materials and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun, which are environment-friendly to our earth. Thanks to the modern computer system, we can lend the books we are interested in and return them conveniently by scanning our face. The most exciting thing is that you can listen to music in your seat to relax yourself when you feel tired. It is large enough so that you can also rest inside and feel comfortable. What a wonderful library it is!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”与“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示写一篇作文，介绍你所设计的图书馆。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍图书馆的样子；
第二步，具体阐述它是如何体现绿色环保的；
第三步，最后介绍我们可以在那里做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be made up of由……组成
②Thanks to幸亏
③are interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①All its energy comes from the sun, which are environment-friendly to our earth. （定语从句）
②The most exciting thing is that you can listen to music in your seat to relax yourself when you feel tired.（when引导的时间状语从句）
8．（2024·福建厦门·一模）假如你是李华，你校正在举办英语读书节活动。作为组织者，你遇到了一些困难。请你根据下列提示，给学校的外教Mr. White写一份电子邮件，请求他给予帮助。词数80左右。
The English Reading Festival Time: June 2, 2024
Activities: read English books, have an English speech contest (竞赛)
Difficulties: have no experience in organizing, activities,…
注意事项:
（1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Mr. White,
How is everything going I am writing to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Mr. White,
How is everything going I am writing to ask for your help. The English Reading Festival is going to be held in our school on June 2, 2024. There will be some interesting activities, such as reading English books and having an English speech contest. However, I meet some difficulties.
First, I have no experience in organizing activities, so would you please share some advice on how to organize a good reading festival What’s more, I have no idea what kind of English books are suitable for junior high school students. Could you recommend some books to me
Look forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封电子邮件；
② 时态：一般将来时和一般现在时；
③ 提示：根据要点提示介绍英语读书活动和遇到的困难。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍英语读书节活动；
第二步，寻求帮助，解释具体需要什么帮助。
[亮点词汇]
① have no experience没有经验
② What’s more 而且
③ be suitable for 适合于
[高分句型]
① There will be some interesting activities, such as reading English books and having an English speech contest. （There be 句型）
9．（2024·安徽阜阳·一模）假如你是李辉，你所在的班级将要举行一次毕业研学旅行。请结合下面图示信息用英语给你们班的交换生Mike写一封邮件，邀请他参加。
注意：
1. 邮件须包含图示所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80—100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【范文】
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going I am writing this letter to invite you to take part in the school graduates’ study trip. With our graduation coming closer and closer, our class plans a study trip for school graduates next weekend. Our class is going to take a two-day trip to Tianzhu Mountain. During the trip, we will get to the Tianzhu Peak where we can take photos and have a picnic. To enjoy the beauty of the sunrise, we need to get up early. What’s more, the sea of clouds is really worth seeing from the top of the mountain. I believe we will have a wonderful time. I hope you will join us.
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以问候开头，接着表明写作目的；
第二步，具体介绍毕业研学旅行的时间、地点、参加者及你的计划等内容；
第三步，书写结语，期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②get to到达
③take photos拍照
④have a picnic野餐
[高分句型]
①During the trip, we will get to the Tianzhu Peak where we can take photos and have a picnic. (定语从句)
②I believe we will have a wonderful time. (宾语从句)
10．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）初中生活即将结束，你一定参加过各种伴随着你成长的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。请以“My Favorite Club at School”为题，写一篇英文短文，向校刊的School Life栏目投稿，介绍你最喜欢的社团。
注意：(1) 短文必须包括思维导图中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3) 词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in.
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【范文】
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in. There are the Robot Club, the Solar Power Club, the Singing Club and so on. All of them are fun and interesting. My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much.
In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. We often went out to practise our skills. And we showed our photos in the club. I made lots of friends in the club and I also became better at taking photos. It is interesting and exciting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给内容介绍我最喜欢的俱乐部，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍参加的俱乐部以及最喜欢的俱乐部；
第二步，具体介绍自己经常做的活动；
第三步，介绍从俱乐部学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②make lots of friends交许多朋友
[高分句型]
①My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. （“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语）
11．（2024·北京西城·一模）假设你是李华。你校交换生将与你们共同参加学校的外出活动。作为学生会主席，你将给他们做行前动员。请用英文写一篇讲话稿，告知他们外出的时间、地点和活动内容，以及相关的安全建议。
提示词语：park, climb, careful, avoid
提示问题：● When and where will you take the field trip
●What activities are you going to do during the trip
●What safety advice would you like to give them
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to tell you that we are going to take a field trip. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope we can have a good time.
【范文】
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to tell you that we are going to take a field trip. We are going to Yanxi Lake next Friday. We will first get together at the school gate at 8 am, and go there together by bus.
When we arrive at the lake, we will be divided into several groups. Then we will walk along it and enjoy the natural and historical sights. After that, we can rest beside the lake and have a picnic.
By the way, I also have some safety tips for you. First, please stay with your group members so that you won’t get lost. Furthermore, don’t run beside the lake. That’s dangerous!
Hope we will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时和一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍外出的时间、地点和活动内容，以及相关的安全建议，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍外出活动的时间及地点；
第二步，介绍在旅行中将进行的活动；
第三步，给出旅行中相关的安全建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be divided into被分成
②by the way顺便说一下
③get lost迷路
[高分句型]
①When we arrive at the lake, we will be divided into several groups. (when引导时间状语从句)
②please stay with your group members so that you won’t get lost. (so that引导目的状语从句)
12．（2024·江苏连云港·一模）享受阅读，享受生活。为了迎接世界读书日，学校英语俱乐部上个星期组织了“Enjoy reading, enjoy life”为主题的校园读书节系列活动。请你根据以下提示，为校英文报写一篇活动报道。
注意:
(1)词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjoy reading, enjoy life!
To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Enjoy reading, enjoy life!
To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club organized a reading festival last week.
During the festival, we enjoyed colourful activities. Sharing a good book was one of them. We shared our favourite books with other students. We also held a writing competition called“My favourite book”. Moreover, we acted out what we read. We put on the plays in the school hall. We all welcomed these exciting activities.
The reading festival creates a good reading environment. It also provides us with chances to learn more about the world and ourselves. The festival is over, but our reading never ends.
(92 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏，写作过程中可以适当增加细节描述，并且要突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述活动内容；
第三步，说明活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①share…with和……分享
②moreover此外
③put on上演
[高分句型]
①Sharing a good book was one of them. (动名词作主语）
②Moreover, we acted out what we read. (what引导的宾语从句)
13．（2024·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，暑假将有一批英国交换生到你校开展文化交流活动，学校计划通过英语演讲比赛，选出学生代表参与组织活动，你有意竞选。请按照以下要求，结合你的特长设计对应的活动计划，用英语写一份演讲稿。
你的优点 具体表现 活动计划
英语水平好 阅读过大量的英语书籍； 能用英语进行日常交流 ……（请补充一项）
熟悉中国文化 掌握剪纸技巧； ……（请补充一点） ……（请补充一项）
注意：
1．请围绕所给的提示合理发挥；
2．词数80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
3．不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear fellow students,
My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange activities to you....
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
…
I hope you will vote for me. Thank you!
【范文】
Dear fellow students,
My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange activities to you.
Firstly, I have an advantage in English. I’ve read plenty of English books so far and I have
no problem communicating with English speakers. As a result, we can have a discussion on “beauty of your own country” with the exchange students.
What’s more, I konw a lot about Chinese culture. I can not only make paper-cuttings, but also play Erhu. We can hold an art show to show the traditional culture of the two countries. I think it’s everyone’s duty to popularize our traditional culture.
I hope you will vote for me. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的优点及其具体表现；
第二步，介绍活动计划。
[亮点词汇]
①have an advantage in...在……方面有优势
②as a result因此
③what’s more更重要的是
[高分句型]
①I think it’s everyone’s duty to popularize our traditional culture.（省略that的宾语从句）
14．（2024·四川成都·二模）为了丰富学校大课间活动内容，你校校刊英语专栏以”最美大课间，强健青少年”为主题向全校学生征稿。请根据以下图示，写一篇短文向专栏投稿。
注意：
1.请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格 (一空一词)；
2.须全面反映图文信息；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 词数 80 左右。
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【范文】
The colourful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier.
In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classrooms to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. Sometimes we also do long jumps. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class.
Having a variety of activities during our rest time will certainly benefit us a lot. I really hope that our school can organize more such activities to ensure the overall development of our students.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；
③提示：注意图片的信息要涵盖，注意要点齐全。
［写作步骤］
第一步，总述锻炼能让青少年更健康；
第二步，具体介绍活动内容；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
［亮点词汇］
① In my opinion以我的观点看
②such as例如
［高分句型］
① Having a variety of activities during our rest time will certainly benefit us a lot. （动名词作主语）
② I really hope that our school can organize more such activities to ensure the overall development of our students. （宾语从句）
15．（2024·北京房山·一模）假设你是李华，你们学校将要举办“科技节”活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动时间、地点及活动内容。
提示词语：school hall, speech, video, invention, experiment
提示问题：When and where will the science festival be held
What activities will be done in the science festival
Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I look forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
【范文】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news.
Our school is going to hold a school Science Festival. I’m glad to invite you to take part in it. The event will be held on January 19th in the school hall. There will be a variety of activities for you to enjoy. Our headmaster will give a speech. You will see amazing inventions and videos about them, which show the latest developments in science and technology. Also, you’ll have the chance to attend interesting lectures on different scientific topics. If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments. It’s going to be a great opportunity to learn and have fun at the same time!
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“邀请Peter来参加科技节，活动时间，地点和内容”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴告诉你一个好消息。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“邀请Peter来参加科技节，科技节举办的时间，地点以及科技节的活动内容”重点介绍科技节的相关情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我期待你早日答复。”
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②a variety of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Our school is going to hold a school Science Festival.（be going to do sth表示“计划做某事”）
②If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments.（if引导的条件状语从句）