2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之理想与未来类（含解析）

2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之理想与未来类
1．（2024·河南周口·二模）某英文网站正在开展以“理想”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的理想是什么，为了实现理想你是怎么做的，有哪些收获，词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
提示问题：
·What is your dream
·What do you do to realize your dream in daily life
·What have you achieved
Everyone has their own dreams. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Everyone has their own dreams. For me, I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. In order to realize my dream, I make a list of things I need to do, then I follow my plan. For example, I take an active part in class activities and communicate with teachers and classmates in English as much as possible. What’ s more, I take every opportunity to show myself in front of people. I think if I want to be a teacher, I should have the ability and courage to speak out in public. I also try to help my classmates with their study so that I can exercise my thinking ability.
By doing these things, I have not only improved my English but also developed my communication skills. I can express my ideas quickly and clearly in English now. A clear goal guides me better plan my study and life,and helps me feel a sense of success in different areas of
life.
【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
【写作步骤】第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，为了实现梦想，自己在日常生活中做了哪些事情；
第三步，自己已经实现了什么。
【亮点词汇】① grow up长大
② realize实现
③ a list of一系列的
【高分句型】① In order to realize my dream, I make a list of things I need to do, then I follow my plan. (省略关系词的定语从句)
② In order to realize my dream, I make a list of things I need to do, then I follow my plan. (not only...but also...不但……而且……)
2．（2024·广西钦州·一模）每个人都有自己的独特之处，我们要学会欣赏自己，努力成为理想中的样子！为此你校“暖心树洞”社团开展了以“A Real Me, A Better Me”为题的征文活动。假如你是李华，现请你根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：
1. 你的基本信息(如年龄、体貌、性格等)；
2. 你的“闪光点”(至少列举两点，如学习、运动、文明礼仪或助人为乐等其中两点)；
3. 你需要改进的地方。
写作要求：
1. 内容包括写作要点所给信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露真实的姓名及校名；
4. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：shortcoming (缺点、不足)，improve (改进、提升)
A Real Me, A Better Me
My name is Li Hua. _______________________________________________________________________________
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【范文】
A Real Me, A Better Me
My name is Li Hua. I am 15 years old. I am tall and strong with big eyes. I always wear a confident smile because I believe it’s the best way to present myself.
I am friendly and kindhearted. At school I often help my teachers and classmates. As I am good at English, I help my classmates a lot with their English study. I also like doing sports. My favourite sport is basketball and I am a member of our school basketball team. I am also polite. I always follow our school rules and I often listen to the teachers carefully. Therefore I’m one of the top students in my class.
However, nobody is perfect. I have my shortcomings as well. I need to improve my time management. Moreover, I am trying to improve my social skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示进行写作，人称用第一人称，注意要点齐全，可适当增添细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的基本信息，包括年龄、外貌、性格等；
第二步，举例介绍自己的“闪光点”；
第三步，介绍自己需要改进的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①wear a confident smile面带着自信的笑容
②kindhearted好心肠的
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
①I always wear a confident smile because I believe it’s the best way to present myself. (because引导原因状语从句)
②My favourite sport is basketball and I am a member of our school basketball team. (and连接的并列句)
3．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·二模）科学研究发现，快乐的人更容易找到生活的乐趣并实现自己的理想。假如你是班长李平，请你在英语课上为全班同学做一个“如何保持快乐”的演讲。独乐乐不如众乐乐，希望同学们听了你的演讲之后能保持快乐，并传递快乐。
写作要点；
1.做一名快乐的中学生很重要。
2.快乐的好处：
(1)身体更健康，思维更敏捷；
(2)在压力下，快乐的人更容易战胜困难。
3.说一说中学生如何保持快乐。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
My dear classmates,
As students, we’re busy every day and sometimes we feel stressed._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my speech can cheer you up, and that will also bring me a happier day.
【范文】
My dear classmates,
As students, we’re busy every day and sometimes we feel stressed. I think it is very important to be a happy middle school student. On the one hand, being happy can not only make our bodies
healthier, but also make our minds sharper. On the other hand, happy people are more likely to overcome difficulties under pressure. Here are some ways to be a happy middle school student.
First, doing sports is one of them, such as playing soccer, running, swimming and so on. Second, we should also have healthy eating habits. We’d better have more fruit and vegetables, but less meat and junk food. Third, reading can make us smarter and stronger.
I hope my speech can cheer you up, and that will also bring me a happier day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作要点”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明“做一名快乐的中学生很重要”的观点；
第二步，阐述快乐的好处；
第三步，说一说中学生如何保持快乐。
[亮点词汇]
①on the one hand一方面
②not only…but also不仅……而且
③overcome克服
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①I think it is very important to be a happy middle school student.（it作形式主语）
②Third, reading can make us smarter and stronger.（动名词作主语）
4．（2024·云南昭通·二模）提示：我们的未来不是梦，每个人都会为自己编织一个美好的未来。请以“My Future Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，从职业理想、学习生活、度假休闲等方面畅想一下自己未来的生活。
要求：
1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
My Future Life
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【范文】：
My Future Life
My life in the future will be colorful and meaningful.
I’m going to be a good doctor after I graduate from university. I believe I’ll bring my patients health and happiness. In my spare time, I’ll stay with my family. We’ll travel a lot and do lots of sports. I’ll also read as many books as I can, because I want to improve myself. Even if I’m busy with my work, I will never give up studying.
I’m sure my dream will come true because of my hard work now and the life in the future will get better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者畅想的未来生活；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者从工作学习、生活和度假休闲等方面畅想自己未来的生活；
第三步，书写结语。作者相信自己的梦想会成真。
[亮点词汇]
①be going to be 将成为……
②bring sb. sth.带给某人某物
③Even if即使，尽管
④give up doing sth.放弃做某事
⑤because of因为
[高分句型]
①I’ll also read as many books as I can, because I want to improve myself. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I’m sure my dream will come true because of my hard work now and the life in the future will get better and better. (并列句、省略that的宾语从句；the life in the future介词短语作定语)
5．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）毕业在即，阳光中学某班英语老师请同学们在成长档案中加入主题为“My Dream Job”的一页，希望大家记录憧憬，分享自己对理想职业的理解和行动计划。假设你是该班的一名学生，请结合自身特点撰写一篇英语短文。下表是你从教材中找到的相关信息，仅供参考。
Name Job Personality Action Saying
Liu Tao Chief engineer careful;serious and organized pay attention to every detail; work to high standards A miss is as good as a mile.
Dr Ma doctor kind and patient do more volunteer work to help more people …
Wu Bing teacher kind and helpful
注意事项：
1.短文内容须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数在100个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【范文】
My Dream Job
Students always have dreams for the future. What’s your dream job when you grow up For me, I hope to be a doctor.
First, both my father and mother are doctors who are very kind and patient. They often do more volunteer work to help more people in their spare time. When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine. Second, the doctors work in the front line to fight against the serious illness. They move me a lot. Third, the doctors use their knowledge to help people have better lives. I dream of becoming one of them.
I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine. I also plan to read more books about medicine. Then I will know better about the job. I’m sure I will be a good doctor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：考生应紧扣“My Dream Job”主题，根据提示进行写作，介绍自己理想的职业、理由以及行动计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。阐述想要从事的职业；
第二步，具体阐述你想从事这个职业的理由和行动计划；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①both…and…两者都
②take an interest in对……感兴趣
③fight against反抗
④plan to计划
[高分句型]
①First, both my father and mother are doctors who are very kind and patient. (who引导的定语从句)
②When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine. (so that引导的结果状语从句)
6．（2024·河北沧州·一模）习主席时刻关心青少年的成长，强调要培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。作为新时代青少年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
要求：
1.语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2.文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Make Myself Better
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop
fully.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
How to Make Myself Better
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better.
First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I’ll not be afraid to face challenges anymore and try my best to solve the problems. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people.
By doing these, I will make myself better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。点出我们需要塑造更好的自己；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生活方式、关系、学习”等角度具体阐述我们应当怎么做；
第三步，书写结语。再次点题。
[亮点词汇]
①it is important to do sth做某事是重要的
②not... any more不再
③try one’s best to do尽全力做某事
[高分句型]
①I’ll also do what I can to help other people.（宾语从句）
②By doing these, I will make myself better and better.（比较级+比较级“越来越……”）
7．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）从生物的解构、科幻小说的涌现、太极奥秘的探索、“嫦娥四号与玉兔”的中国式太空浪漫再到智能家居的日益普及。从古至今，人类对科学的追求从未止步。科学的不断发展给你的生活带来了怎样的影响？请以“Science Shapes Our Life”为题写一篇英语文章。内容应包括：
1.你对该问题的理解；
2.你的一次亲身经历；
3.你对未来科学的畅想。
注意：
1.词数100；
2.内容涵盖要点，照抄本卷语篇不得分；
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Science Shapes Our Life
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【范文】
Science Shapes Our Life
In the last few decades, science has developed at high speed, and played an important role in our daily lives. It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.
Recently, my family decided to embrace the future of transportation by purchasing a new energy vehicle. I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car. Furthermore, new energy vehicles use electric energy as a power source. Electricity can be obtained through a variety of ways, including renewable energy such as solar and wind energy, so the popularity of electric vehicles has a positive impact on the environment.
Looking ahead, the future of science appears promising, with endless possibilities waiting to be explored and discovered. Advances in fields such as artificial intelligence, biotechnology, and space exploration hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍科学发展带给生活什么样的影响；
第二步，讲述科学发展影响自身生活的经历；
第三步，表达对未来科学的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in在……中起重要作用
②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
③compared with与……相比
④have a positive impact on对……有积极的影响
[高分句型]
①It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.（强调句）
②I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car.（省略that的宾语从句）
③…hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.（省略that的定语从句）
8．（2024·广东广州·一模）学校英语报以“Important Skills for the Future”为题向学生征稿，想了解对于未来的青少年，你认为哪些技能是至关重要的？请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，分享你的想法并给出掌握此技能的好处。
Important Skills for the Future
Important Skills Advantages
communicating ... with (people)
learning ... knowledge …
doing housework 请补充
注意：
1. 可在思维导图提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2. 80词左右（短文的开头已经给出，不计入词数）。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
4. 参考词汇：skill能力/技能；challenging具有挑战性的。
Important Skills for the Future
Our future life is hopeful but challenging. As teenagers, what important skills should we develop in the future
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【范文】
Important Skills for the Future
Our future life is hopeful but challenging. As teenagers, what important skills should we develop in the future The following are some important skills.
First, communication skills are necessary because they help to communicate better and leave a good impression on others. Second, learning skills are significant in our study and work. We can use learning skills to learn knowledge at school and they are the basis for us to learn other skills. Third, the skills of doing housework are useful because they help to live more independently and
help reduce the stress of parents.
Let’s equip ourselves with different skills and face the future with more confidence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出下文；
第二步，具体介绍应该培养哪些重要的技能；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①leave a good impression on others 给别人留下好印象
②reduce the stress of... 减轻……的压力
③equip ourselves with different skills 用不同的技能装备自己
[高分句型]
①First, communication skills are necessary because they help to communicate better and leave a good impression on others.（原因状语从句）
②We can use learning skills to learn knowledge at school and they are the basis for us to learn other skills.（并列句）
9．（2024·河南周口·一模）良好的身心健康能为我们的未来打下坚实的基础，为此，学校校报特发起关于青少年的心理健康的征文活动。
请以“How to Keep Mentally Healthy”为题，结合下列要点，联系实际写一篇英语文稿，谈谈我们作为青少年学生，可以从哪些方面来帮助自己心理健康地发展。
要求：1. 内容应包含图中要点，并且对每个要点再进行补充说明；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Healthy in Mind
As is known to all, psychological health is as important as physical health. As middle school students, how can we develop our mental health I think the following suggestions might be helpful.
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I hope these suggestions will help you.
【范文】
How to Keep Mentally Healthy
As is known to all, psychological health is as important as physical health. As middle school students, how can we develop our mental health I think the following suggestions might be helpful.
Firstly, we should communicate with not only our parents and friends but also our teachers
and munication is a bridge to connect people. Secondly, don’t be afraid of all kinds of problems. We should be brave to face them. Thirdly, we should be confident in ourselves. Believe that it’s you who shape your own future. What’s more, we should love both ourselves and others, which makes us become a warm person. Last but not least, be independent. We should learn to look after ourselves so that we can live on our own when we grow up.
I hope these suggestions will help you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍可以从哪些方面来帮助自己心理健康地发展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍可以从哪些方面来帮助自己心理健康地发展；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和……交流
②be afraid of害怕
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Believe that it’s you who shape your own future. (强调句)
②What’s more, we should love both ourselves and others, which makes us become a warm person. (which引导的定语从句)
③We should learn to look after ourselves so that we can live on our own when we grow up. (so that引导的目的状语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句)
10．（2024·湖北孝感·一模）时光荏苒，毕业季来临。你们学校的英文月刊发起了题为“校园生活”的征文活动，内容是畅想未来三年的高中校园生活，请你根据提示和要求，写一篇英语短文投稿。
School life in the coming three years
What is your dream or plan And how do you achieve it
What outdoor activities do you hope to join in And why do you like them Who do you hope to meet (teachers, classmates, relatives...)
写作要求：
1.围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充，使文章内容充实；
2.语意通顺，表达准确，条理清晰，书写规范；
3.词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名、校名等信息。
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about
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【范文】
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school life in the coming three years.
I am interested in history and I hope to be a history teacher in the future. So I decide to study hard to get good grades so that I can enter my dream school which offers the best history education in China to achieve my dream. Besides, I plan to join the history club in high school and meet many friends who share the same interest with me. What’s more, I wish I can have some strict but kind teachers who can offer useful suggestions to me.
I can’t wait to hug my new school life in high school. I hope that day will come soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容畅想未来三年的高中校园生活，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的梦想以及如何实现自己的梦想；
第三步，介绍希望加入什么户外活动以及原因；
第四步，介绍想遇到什么样的人；
第五步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
①So I decide to study hard to get good grades so that I can enter my dream school which offers the best history education in China to achieve my dream. (so that引导的目的状语从句，which引导的定语从句)
②I wish I can have some strict but kind teachers who can offer useful suggestions to me. (who引导的定语从句)