2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之旅行与安全类（含解析）

2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之旅行与安全类
1．（2024·安徽滁州·二模）某英文报征稿《一次难忘的旅行》，请用英语描述你曾经经历的一次旅行，讲述地点、时间、人物和旅行的目的，讲述旅行过程中一、两个印象深刻的活动或经历。并谈谈这次旅行给你带来的收获或启示。
要求：
1.词数80~100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.请在标题补充地点后，展开写作。
An Unforgettable Trip to ________
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【范文】例文：
An Unforgettable Trip to Beijing
Last summer, I had an unforgettable trip to Beijing, the capital of China. The journey was filled with cultural exploration and personal growth.
I went to Beijing with my parents during the summer vacation. Our main purpose was to learn more about China’s history and culture. One of the most memorable experiences was visiting the Forbidden City. Walking in it, I felt a deep sense of respect for the wisdom of ancient Chinese.
This trip taught me a lot about China’s history and culture. It also inspired me to love our country. The experience left a lasting impression on me, and I will always cherish the memories of this trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题目要求进行展开，适当添加细节，突出写作重点，注意上下文联系紧密。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍自己曾经经历的一次旅行。
第二步，详细介绍活动经历。
第三步，讲述这次旅行给自己带来的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with充满
②during the summer vacation在暑假期间
③a deep sense of深刻的感觉
[高分句型]
①Our main purpose was to learn more about China’s history and culture. (动词不定式作表语)
2．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假如你是李明，你们学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“An unforgettable ”为主题，开展征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你最难忘的一次经历及感受。
要求：
1.请先将题目补全后再作答；
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数 80—100 词左右。
An Unforgettable___________
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【范文】
An Unforgettable Trip
Last month, I went to Xi’an with my classmates. The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it.
We went there by train and it took us three hours to get there. On the first day, we visited some museums and saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings. They were wonderful. In the evening, we had some special food, such as biangbiang noodles, liangpi, roujiamo and so on. I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. The next day, we went to some famous places in Xi’an, such as the Terra-cotta Warriors, the Bell Tower and the Drum Tower. Of course, we took a lot of photos.
We had a great time and we also learned a lot about Chinese history. It was an interesting trip and I hope to pay a visit to Xi’an again!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：介绍自己的一次令自己难忘的旅行经历，可适当发挥，注意逻辑清晰，表达准确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍去了哪里旅行；
第二步，具体介绍旅行的过程；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③have a great time玩得开心
④pay a visit to参观
[高分句型]
①The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it. (so ... that引导结果状语从句)
②I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. (which引导定语从句)
3．（2024·河北邯郸·一模）假如你叫李华，你们班将在今年暑假参加以“亲近大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营。其中包括小组自由活动。请根据下面你设计的小组活动方案写一封电子邮件，发给交换生Mike，告知Mike你所设计的计划。
Morning climb mountains
Noon picnic singing, dancing, tell stories
Afternoon pick fruits
要求：
（1）电子邮件包含计划中所有的活动，并给出理由；
（2）邮件不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
（3）词数80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group.
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We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school,
and I believe we’ll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
【范文】例文
Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group.
First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. It’s also a great way to improve our physical fitness. At noon, we’ll have a picnic. We can share our food. We can enjoy ourselves by singing dancing and telling stories. We can develop our English speaking and communication skills. In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.
We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we’ll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，从上午、中午和下午三个时间段来指定夏令营活动计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，指定夏令营计划；
第二步，详述自己的计划；
第三步，收尾，相信会玩得愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②enjoy oneself 玩得愉快
③each other 彼此，相互
[高分句型]
①First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which
will help us know each other better.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
4．（2024·北京西城·一模）假设你是李华。你校交换生将与你们共同参加学校的外出活动。作为学生会主席，你将给他们做行前动员。请用英文写一篇讲话稿，告知他们外出的时间、地点和活动内容，以及相关的安全建议。
提示词语：park, climb, careful, avoid
提示问题：● When and where will you take the field trip
●What activities are you going to do during the trip
●What safety advice would you like to give them
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to tell you that we are going to take a field trip. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope we can have a good time.
【范文】
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to tell you that we are going to take a field trip. We are going to Yanxi Lake next Friday. We will first get together at the school gate at 8 am, and go there together by bus.
When we arrive at the lake, we will be divided into several groups. Then we will walk along it and enjoy the natural and historical sights. After that, we can rest beside the lake and have a picnic.
By the way, I also have some safety tips for you. First, please stay with your group members so that you won’t get lost. Furthermore, don’t run beside the lake. That’s dangerous!
Hope we will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时和一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍外出的时间、地点和活动内容，以及相关的安全建议，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍外出活动的时间及地点；
第二步，介绍在旅行中将进行的活动；
第三步，给出旅行中相关的安全建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be divided into被分成
②by the way顺便说一下
③get lost迷路
[高分句型]
①When we arrive at the lake, we will be divided into several groups. (when引导时间状语从句)
②please stay with your group members so that you won’t get lost. (so that引导目的状语从句)
5．（2024·广东广州·一模）《二十一世纪英文报》举行“未来之城”征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心目中的未来城市。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意：
1.100词以上（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
2.不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分。
Our city of the future
What will our city be like in 2050
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【范文】
Our city of the future
What will our city be like in 2050 I think it will be quite different from now. The living environment will be greatly improved in the following ways.
The houses will be both green and smart. Everything will be made by environmental-friendly materials. What’s more, the house will be connected to the shops and hospitals so that you can order all kinds of services without going out. Most of the time, people will work at home and they will have fewer working hours because of new technologies. If you want to go travelling, there will be no traffic jam at all. You can take different kinds of transportations, such as the flying buses and the driverless cars. The most exciting thing for students will be the widely use of E-books and VR technology at school. As a result, there will be paperless exams and more fun in learning.
Our city in 2050 will be full of hope and we should work hard to realize it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“2050年我们的城市将会怎么样”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be made by由……制成
②so that以至于
③different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①If you want to go travelling, there will be no traffic jam at all. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②As a result, there will be paperless exams and more fun in learning. (there be句型)
6．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）中华文化源远流长，博大精深。我校学生会特组织用英语讲好中国故事活动，邀请同学们分系列介绍中国文化。本期主题是“我最喜欢的城市”，请介绍你最喜欢的城市并陈述理由。
注意事项：
1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右，文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
My Favourite City
My favourite city is
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I hope you can visit it some day.
【范文】
My Favourite City
My favourite city is Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, has a long history and culture. This city is famous in the world for its spectacular historical sites, modern buildings and rich cultural activities.
Beijing is a city with multi-ethnic cultures, with colorful folk culture and delicious food, so that people can feel the charm of Chinese culture. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. Also, you can try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
I hope you can visit it some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最喜欢的城市”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“地理位置、景点、美食、文化”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①the capital of……的首都
②such as例如
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I think Beijing is worth a visit.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．（2024·山东聊城·二模）请根据以下提示以“A Holiday Journey”为题目介绍一下贝蒂的假期旅行。
1. 贝蒂现在在巴黎。她和珍妮(Jenny) 是前天乘飞机到达的。
2. 昨天她们去了卢浮宫(the Lourve Museum)。那里有许多世界著名的艺术品。晚上她们在一家法国餐馆吃饭。
3. 今天早上她们去散步，看见到处是商店和餐馆。下午大约三点钟，她们乘地铁去埃菲尔铁塔(the Eiffel Tower)。塔很高，游客很多。太漂亮了！
4. 明天她们将要去参观一个著名的宫殿，然后在塞纳河(the River Seine)上乘船旅行。
要求：1. 文章要包含所有要点，不能有遗漏。
2. 词数80左右。
3. 要使用第三人称。
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【范文】
A Holiday Journey
Betty is in Paris now. Jenny and she arrived there by plane the day before yesterday. Yesterday they went to the Lourve Museum. It has many world-famous works of art. In the evening, they had dinner in a French restaurant.
This morning they took a walk. There are many shops and restaurants everywhere. At about three o’clock in the afternoon, they took the Paris underground to the Eiffel Tower. It is really high. There were lots of tourists. It was wonderful!
Tomorrow they’re going to visit a famous palace and take a boat tour on the River Seine.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍贝蒂的假期旅行，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍贝蒂现在在巴黎；
第二步，详细介绍她在巴黎的假期旅行；
第三步，介绍她明天的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①by plane乘飞机
②take a walk散步
③lots of很多
[高分句型]
There are many shops and restaurants everywhere. (there be结构)
8．（2024·广东广州·一模）英语课上，班级开展了研学活动的分享会。请你根据以下图示，结合自身实际，写一篇英语发言稿，分享你的一次研学活动经历。
备 注 ：DIY (Do It Yourself) learning
注意：
1. 词数80-120个左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥)
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
A trip of __________
Hello, everyone! It’s my great honor to share my ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【范文】
A trip of nature
Hello, everyone! It’s my great honor to share my trip to Guangzhou Chimelong Safari Park, a wonderful place to learn about animals. I went there by bus together with my teachers and classmates last term. We enjoyed a lot of fun activities there.
One of them was collecting information about animals we are interested in. It was so fascinating to watch the pandas climbing the trees that I was completely attracted by these lovely creatures. And sharing our favourite animals in groups made the visit more exciting. When my classmates described the dolphin show she enjoyed, I was impressed. It was my first time to know they were such good performers. I couldn’t wait to know more about them.
What an unforgettable and meaningful trip! It increased my knowledge as well as my curiosity about animals. In the future, I hope to get closer to nature and make friends with more animals. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要向新同学介绍广州长隆野生动物园之行，包括时间和同行人；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了旅行内容，园内活动及你的感受；
第三步，书写结语。说明这次旅行对你的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①fascinating有极大吸引力的
②completely 完全地
③unforgettable难忘的
④curiosity好奇心
[高分句型]
①One of them was collecting information about animals we are interested in. (定语从句)
②It was my first time to know they were such good performers. (宾语从句)
9．（2024·河南南阳·一模）为了开展学习和体验相结合的校外活动，你的学校即将进行为期三天的研学旅行(study trip)。请你根据写作要求，用英语为校报写一篇短文，介绍这次研学旅行计划并谈谈你对研学旅行的看法及建议。
Time Activities Meanings
The first day Visit the history museum Learn about the history
The second day Learn to make kites …
The third day … …
写作要求：
1. 根据表格介绍三天的活动和意义，并简单谈谈你的看法；
2. 你对研学旅行的有什么更好的建议；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
4. 词数 100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
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【范文】
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school will hold a three-day study trip next month. Let me tell you something about
it.
On the first day, we will visit the history museums as well as places of interest, and we can learn about Chinese history and culture more deeply. On the second day, we will learn to make kites in person and make things by hand to experience life. On the third day, we will visit famous schools to increase cultural exchange and enhance learning objectives.
In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us. I hope our school can offer more study trips. We can have more chances to experience these kinds of activities and learn more knowledge that can’t be learned in class. Certainly, we must keep safe during these trips.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍即将来到的研学旅行；
第二步，具体介绍三天的活动和意义，可以适当增加细节；
第三步，表达自己的观点，谈谈对研学旅行的看法。
［亮点词汇］
① as well as 也
② by hand 用手
［高分句型］
① On the third day, we will visit famous schools to increase cultural exchange and enhance learning objectives. (动词不定式作目的状语)
② We can have more chances to experience these kinds of activities and learn more knowledge that can’t be learned in class. (定语从句)
10．（2024·山东济宁·一模）假定你是李华。你的加拿大笔友Chris给你发来邮件，询问在你生活的城市中，你最喜欢什么地方。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件，参考提示向他介绍这个地方，谈谈你经常在那里做什么，以及你喜欢它的理由。
提示词语：park, beautiful, walk, read, relax
提示问题：
What is your favorite place Please describe it.
What do you often do there
Why do you like it
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【范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to tell you about my favorite place. It is a beautiful park near my home with many trees and flowers. There is also a small lake in it.
I often go to the park after supper to take a walk or run around the lake with my parents. Sometimes I play sports with my friends at the weekend. What I like most is to bring a book and read under a tree. Whenever I go, I always have a great time there.
I like the park very much because I feel relaxed each time I go there. Meanwhile, I can enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful environment there.
Could you please tell me about your favorite place
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的地方、在那里做什么及原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk散步
②play sports运动
③have a great time玩得很开心
④meanwhile同时
[高分句型]
What I like most is to bring a book and read under a tree.(what引导主语从句)