2024中考英语面表达热点话题之五育并举类（含解析）

2024中考英语面表达热点话题之五育并举类
1．（2024·江苏常州·一模）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德，劳动建设美丽校园，劳动营造和谐家庭，劳动创建文明社区。作为一名中学生，要积极参加劳动实践。你校英语报发起了“Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life”主题征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，谈谈你在不同的场合可以做哪些劳动，在劳动中你收获了什么，并发起倡议，呼吁更多的青少年热爱劳动，热爱生活。
要点如下：
1. What kind of labor can you do at school, at home or in the community
2. What can you learn from labor
3. What advice will you give to the teenagers
注意：
1.词数100左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love.
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【范文】
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love. However, some students are rarely given the opportunity to enjoy labor, while others are too busy with their studies to labor. There are also some students who are unwilling to labor because they are lazy.
As a middle school student, I often do some labor activities in everyday life. For example, I clean the classroom and playground with my classmates at school. I do some cooking, cook dishes, wash clothes and tidy rooms at home. And in the community, I do volunteer work to help the old or disabled.
By doing these, I’ve learnt some basic life skills to take care of myself. Besides, I have not only got the strong feeling of satisfaction but also become more and more independent and responsible.
All in all, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all the teenagers to actively engage in labor activities. Let’s take an active part in doing the daily labor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示要点进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据介绍一些自己在学校、家中和社区的劳动实践；
第三步，介绍从劳动中的收获；
第四步，书写结语，给青少年一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①help the old or disabled帮助老人或残疾人
②all in all总的来说
③take an active part in积极参加
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①And in the community, I do volunteer work to help the old or disabled. (动词不定式作
目的状语)
②All in all, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all the teenagers to actively engage in labor activities. (and引导的并列句)
2．（2024·陕西西安·二模）教育家苏霍姆林斯基说：“离开劳动，不可能有真正的教育。”劳动教育在中学生的日常生活中越来越重要。假如你是赵伟。为了提高同学们对劳动的认识，你们学校决定举行一次以“Let’s grow up in labor”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下面思维导图的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你在家里、学校以及社区参加劳动的情况，以及你对劳动的看法。
参考词汇：housework, cooking, spare my free time, volunteer, pick up, the old,attend, independence 独立
要求：1.短文必须包括所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70 词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Nowadays, labor plays an important role in our daily life. Today, I’d like to share my experience about labor with you.
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【范文】
Nowadays, labor plays an important role in our daily life. Today, I’d like to share my
experience about labor with you.
First of all, I usually help my parents do housework after school, such as doing dishes, cooking meals and so on. What’s more, I often take an active part in all kinds of activities at school like sweeping the floor and watering flowers. Last but not least, I would spare my free time on weekends as a volunteer for our communities. For example, I sometimes pick up litter and look after the old in the old people’s home. I can have a strong feeling of satisfaction by doing these volunteer activities.
In a word, we’re supposed to attend labor classes, because doing labor not only develops our independence but also makes us healthier. Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作思维导图已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给出的参考词汇，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述自己在家、在学校和在社会上所做的劳动内容；
第二步，阐述劳动的重要性及给出合理建议；
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②take an active part in积极参与
③be supposed to do应该做某事
④satisfaction满意
[高分句型]
In a word, we’re supposed to attend labor classes, because doing labor not only develops our independence but also makes us healthier. （动名词作主语；使用连词not only…but also…）
3．（2024·山东日照·一模）为倡导广大青少年积极参与体育运动，在运动中增强体质，享受乐趣，收获健康，某报刊英语专栏以Together for a healthy future为题向中学生开展征文活动。请结合自身实际，从以下两种情况中任选其一，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
1.经常运动：你的运动习惯、运动对你的影响，……
2.不常运动：不常运动的原因、你对运动的看法、今后的打算，……
参考词汇：improve health 增强体质 build up confidence 树立信心
要求：1. 条理清晰，语言通顺，内容积极，书写规范；
2.80~100 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Together for a healthy future
As we all know, doing sports can make us strong and healthy. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】
Together for a Healthy Future
As we all know, doing sports can make us strong and healthy. As students, we are often told by parents or teachers to do exercise regularly.
Many of my friends love sports, but I seldom exercise. To be honest, I’m not quite good at it. Sports like running or playing basketball are difficult for me. Also, I don’t have much free time to exercise. I only do sports in P.E. classes. After P.E. classes, I just feel too tired to do other things. That’s why I don’t want to do sports.
Although I don’t like it, there is no doubt that doing sports plays an important part in our life. Not only can it improve our health but also it is a good way to build up our confidence. So maybe it’s time for me to change.
For the coming vacation, it is necessary to make some plans about doing exercise. I’m considering looking for a partner to play sports with. Perhaps badminton or ping-pong will be a good choice.
As the saying goes, “Health is the basis of all”. Let’s do sports from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明自己并不常运动；
第二步，具体介绍不运动的原因以及自己对运动的看法；
第三步，介绍自己今后的运动打算；
第四步，书写结语。表明“健康很重要，从现在开始动起来”。
[亮点词汇]
①to be honest老实说
②be good at it擅长
③play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色
④from now on从现在起
[高分句型]
①That’s why I don’t want to do sports.（why引导表语从句）
②Although I don’t like it, there is no doubt that doing sports plays an important part in our life.（although引导让步状语从句；there be句型）
③Not only can it improve our health but also it is a good way to build up our confidence.（倒装句）
4．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·三模）为了丰富学校30分钟大课间体育活动内容，使青少年变得更健康、更强壮。学校校刊英语专栏面向学生进行征文。请你根据专栏内容，用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。
1. What physical activities do you often do during the 30-minute break 2. How do you feel about these activities 3. What other activities can you suggest In order to make the 30-minute break more colorful, we need you to give us more advice . Please send your article to QHSchool@ or call us at 66551279.
注意：
1. 要点齐全，适当拓展，
2. 语法正确，书写规范。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。
4. 100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：physical exercise（体育锻炼）；relaxing; be good for;
The 30-minute break at school is filled with lively activities. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
The 30-minute break at school is filled with lively activities. In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. We sometimes do morning exercises. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground. Then we do exercises. I think it is quite boring.
In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as badminton exercises, rope skipping. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class. Having a variety of activities during our rest time will certainly benefit us a lot.
I really hope that our school can organize more such activities to ensure the overall development of our students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍学校30分钟大课间体育活动内容，并建议一些其他活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校30分钟大课间体育活动内容以及对这些活动的感受；
第二步，建议一些其他的活动。
第三步，书写结语
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion以我来看
②such as例如
③a variety of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I really hope that our school can organize more such activities to ensure the overall development of our students. (宾语从句)
5．（2024·黑龙江鸡西·二模）习总书记在二十大报告中指出“青年强，则国家强”。作为中学生的我们，更要努力发展自身，做拼搏上进的中国少年！请根据以下图片，联系自身实际，从德智体美劳等方面谈谈自己将如何努力做合格的中国少年。
要求：1．话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2．词数：80~100之间，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3．字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager
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【范文】
A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager
Firstly, helping others will make us feel happy. For example, we should help others who have fallen down. After we see their smiles on their faces, we must be happier too. Secondly, we should study hard. In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. Thirdly, healthy bodies can bring us happiness. Health is important to everyone. Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. So we should keep on doing more exercise. Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful and interesting. So we should develop a good habit to learn more and more skills when we are in our free time. Finally, we can do more social work. For example, we can plant more trees to protect the environment. We can also work as volunteers and clean up the parks.
From doing these, I must be a better teenager.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据图片内容以及提示单词，联系自身实际介绍自己将如何做合格的中国少年。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，突出主题：如何成为一名好少年？
第二步，结合图片内容，分别从帮助他人、努力学习、体育锻炼、发展兴趣及参与社会实践活动等五个方面具体阐述如何做一名合格的中国少年。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己做一名好少年的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①fall down落后
②broaden our eyes开阔我们的眼界
③develop a good habit培养好的习惯
④be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
[高分句型]
①For example, we should help others who have fallen down. (who引导的定语从句)
②In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. (动词不定式作目的状语)
③Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful
and interesting. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
④Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. (倒装结构)
6．（2024·吉林长春·二模）“奋斗也是一种美德，没有人能够随便成功”。请根据自己的经历或者见闻，谈一谈你对这句话的理解，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
2. 书写规范，卷面整洁；
3. 词数不少于80词；
4. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
参考词汇： struggle v./n. 奋斗； virtue n. 美德
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【范文】
As the saying goes, “Struggle is also a virtue, and no one can succeed easily.” For myself, I can’t agree more. It tells us we can only succeed through hard work and struggle.
Last year, I was chosen to participate in the sports meeting. Because I was not good at sports, I felt anxious. I didn’t want to let others down. Through struggling with exercise, I got the third place in the race walking. When I heard my name was called out, I realized that only through hard work and struggle could we succeed.
All in all, no pains, no gains. Struggle leads to success. And please remember, the genius work harder than you do.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应围绕对“奋斗也是一种美德，没有人能够随便成功”的理解并结合个人经历或见闻进行阐述，要适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈对“奋斗也是一种美德，没有人能够随便成功”的理解；
第二步，结合个人经历或见闻，谈谈如何通过奋斗取得成功；
第三步，书写总结：奋斗造就成功。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in the sports meeting参加运动会
②let sb. down使某人失望
[高分句型]
①For myself, I can’t agree more. (比较级的否定意义表示最高级)
②When I heard my name was called out, I realized that only through hard work and struggle could we succeed. (when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的时间状语从句，部分倒装)
7．（2024·山东泰安·二模）习近平总书记同北大师生代表座谈时提出：“人才培养是育人和育才相统一的过程。育人是本，人无德不立，育人的根本在于立德，这是人才培养的辩证法。”为落实立德树人根本任务，各学校围绕德育教育举办了一系列的活动，请根据下面思维导图内容提示以 “Moral (德育) Education” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍如何践行德育教育。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，书写认真规范；
2.文章包含表格提示内容，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to practice moral education.
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【范文】
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to practice moral education.
At home, we should do some housework. We also should save electricity and water when using them. As for the relationship with our parents, we should have a good communication with them. At school, we should obey the school rules. The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. What’s more, we can plant more trees to protect the environment. We should do what we can to save animals. Last but not least, we should love our country. We should try our best to spread our culture. We should study hard to realize our dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出“如何践行德育教育”的话题；
第二步，根据提示内容分别从家里、学校、社会、感受等方面提出自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②have a good communication with 与……有良好的沟通
③try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. （the+比较级，the+比较级）
8．（2024·河北保定·一模）中国自古以来就是礼仪之邦，文明礼仪是中华民族的优良传统，是做人的美德，更是一个现代文明人必备的素养。作为新一代的青少年，在学习和生活中，如何提升自身的文明素养？请以“I Am a Student with Good Manners”为题，根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：(1) To be polite, what do you usually do at school
(2) What do you usually do at home
(3) In public, how do you behave politely
要求：(1) 短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计人总词数)。
I Am a Student with Good Manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school,
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【范文】
I Am a Student with Good Manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, we should always greet our teachers and classmates with a smile and a hello. I
respect my teachers. I am friendly to my classmates and we often help each other.
At home, I respect my parents and our grandparents. Also, I love my family members and do things by myself. Then, I usually say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, I never talk with food in my mouth.
Besides, I follow the traffic rules when walking or riding. In public, I don’t speak loudly. What’s more, to keep the environment clean, I don’t drop litter everywhere.
As a middle school student, I believe I should do more for our country. So I will work harder to build a bright future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍作为一名中学生，在学习和生活中，如何提升自身的文明素养，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己在学校、在家以及在公共场合是如何做的；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对某人友好
②all the time总是
③in public在公共场合
[高分句型]
①I am friendly to my classmates and we often help each other. (and连接的并列句)
②What’s more, to keep the environment clean, I don’t drop litter everywhere. (动词不定式作目的状语)
③I believe I should do more for our country. (宾语从句)
9．（2024·山东淄博·二模）“孝敬长辈”是中华民族的传统美德。请结合你的情况和提示谈谈：1.在你的长辈（family members）中你最爱的人是谁？2.他或她是怎么对你的（对学习要求严格但和蔼可亲；鼓励你努力学习将来上大学）？3.你是如何孝敬长辈的（做些家务；努力学习）？
要求：
1、语言正确，行文流畅，书写规范；
2、词数80词左右；
3、文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校或所在地名等。
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【范文】
Of all my family members, I love my father most. He is a taxi driver and works hard every day to support the family. He is strict in my study but kind to me. He always encourages me to study hard and go to a good university in the future. However, when he comes back home every day, he looks tired. What can I do to help my family I can do some housework after school, such as cooking, cleaning the house, washing the clothes and so on. Of course, I always try my best to study hard, which is more important and makes my father happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最爱的长辈；
第二步，介绍他是怎么对你的；
第三步，介绍你是如何孝敬长辈的。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict in对某事要求严格
②encourage sb. to do鼓励某人去做
[高分句型]
①Of course, I always try my best to study hard, which is more important and makes my
father happy.（定语从句）
②However, when he comes back home every day, he looks tired.（时间状语从句）
10．（2024·山东济南·二模）随着科技的发展，智能化应用软件如“作业帮”、“小猿搜题”等正被应用于一些学生的课后学习中。上周五的主题班会同学们就此展开了激烈的讨论。请根据表格提示，描述正反两方观点；并表明你的观点, 且陈述理由。
Some think Others think My opinion
1. save much time 2. act like patient teachers …… 1. more screen time 2. be poorer in problem solving …… ……
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Last Friday, we had a discussion on whether the apps like “Zuoyebang” and “Xiaoyuansouti” can truly help us in study.
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【范文】
Last Friday, we had a discussion on whether the apps like “Zuoyebang” and “Xiaoyuansouti” can truly help us in study.
Some think we can save much time by using them. Once we have problems, we needn’t
take time to look for someone for help. Instead, we can use Apps anytime and anywhere. What’s more, such Apps act like patient teachers and never get fed up with anyone. Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often. Moreover, we might be poorer in problem solving if we rely more on Apps.
After entering junior school, my parents can’t help me with my study any longer. Unlike humans, Apps never get angry with us. So I agree that we can use them for help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表面写作意图；
第二步，介绍正反两方的观点；
第三步，介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①take time to do sth.花时间做某事
②get up with…对……感到厌烦
③not…any longer不再……
[高分句型]
Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often.(省略that的宾语从句；if引导条件状语从句)
11．（2024·北京平谷·一模）以体树德、以体增智、以体育美、以体促劳。随着平谷区“阳光·乐跑”活动的开展，学生们展现了朝气蓬勃的精神风貌。
假设你是李华。请你以“我的乐跑”为题，用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，谈谈你日常的乐跑，对其作简要描述，说说乐跑给你带来了哪些好处，以及今后打算怎么做。
提示词语：relax, energy, build up, confidence, keep doing
提示问题：·How do you take part in the activity
·What have you achieved
·What will you do in the future
Everyone takes part in the activity of Fun Run.
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【范文】
Everyone takes part in the activity of Fun Run. So do I. This summer, I took part in this activity. Every morning, I followed the Fun Run team and ran along the sunny road with their rhythm.
I feel really comfortable when I listen to the birds singing on the road. Fun Running makes me feel relaxed, energetic, and physically strong. My confidence has increased because I often communicate with people while running.
In the future, I will keep joining in Fun Run and pass on this activity, calling on more people to take part in this activity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍我是如何参加活动的；
第二步，介绍我在活动中取得的成就；
第三步，介绍我将来的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②listen to听
③communicate with sb.与某人交流
④keep doing继续做
⑤pass on传递
[高分句型]
①I feel really comfortable when I listen to the birds singing on the road.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② Fun Running makes me feel relaxed, energetic, and physically strong.（动名词作主语）
③My confidence has increased because I often communicate with people while running.（because引导的原因状语从句）
12．（2024·湖北·三模）习主席时刻关心青少年的成长，强调要培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。为此，学校开展了系列主题活动。请你根据下面的思维导图，围绕“如何成为全面发展的中学生”这个话题，结合实际，以“To Be Good Students”为标题，写一篇演讲稿参加演讲比赛。
要求：1.语言表达准确，语意连贯、通顺；
2.文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
4.词数80词左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To be good students
Boys and girls,
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it
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Let’s take action to be good students.
【范文】
To be good students
Boys and girls,
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it
First, show love and duty to our country, people and home. We must keep them in mind, work for them and serve them. Next, learn more to be wise, able and creative. We must live and learn. Then, build strong bodies and minds. Exercise every day and be brave to face difficulties in our life. Fourth, develop hobbies and interests to be able to find and enjoy the beauty in life. Last, respect labor, love labor. Learn basic living skills by sharing housework at home and taking part in labor at school.
Let’s take action to be good students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据思维导图内容介绍如何成为全面发展的中学生，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍如何成为全面发展的中学生；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep sth. in mind记住
②be able to能够做某事
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①First, show love and duty to our country, people and home. (祈使句)
②Learn basic living skills by sharing housework at home and taking part in labor at school. (动名词作宾语)
13．（2024·湖北襄阳·一模）阅读使人充实，阅读使人明智。某英文报为了了解中学生的课外阅读情况，开展了以“Reading Outside Class”为题的征文活动。请结合下面图示信息写
一篇短文，向该英文报投稿。
要求：
(1)短文须包含图中所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages.
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【范文】
Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages. For one thing, it can help us know more about the world because books are full of knowledge, and it makes us wiser and richer in life. For another, it’s of great importance to do some reading because reading helps us have a better understanding of history.
I like reading newspapers and magazines, from which I get lots of fun and learn about what’s going on around the world. I also read storybooks and novels in my spare time, which makes me relaxed and happy. I seldom read e-books because it’s bad for eyes. On weekends, I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.
Summer vacation is coming, and I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. I’m sure reading can make a difference to my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意短文须包含图中所有信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。说明阅读的好处；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的阅读情况和阅读计划；
第三步，书写结语。表达对阅读的肯定态度。
[亮点词汇]
①know more about 知道更多关于……
②a better understanding 更好的理解
③spare time 业余时间
④on weekends 在周末
[高分句型]
①For another, it’s of great importance to do some reading because reading helps us have a better understanding of history.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Summer vacation is coming, and I plan to do more reading.（现在进行时表将来）
14．（2024·山西朔州·二模）某班开展主题为“感受生活中的美”的主题班会活动，号召大家拥有发现美的眼睛。活动要求每位同学根据自己的经历或者见闻写一篇演讲稿，和同学们分享自己在生活中发现的美及感受。假如你是该班的同学，请你结合自己的经验，写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
·Tell a story about how you find the beauty in life.
·Express your feelings.
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【范文】
Life is full of beauty. If we put our heart to appreciate it, we will discover the simple but great beauty of life.
The heartwarming scene on the road is still fresh in my mind. An old man fell down on the road by accident. A middle school student walked forward to hold the man up. She was careful and gentle. And then, the people around them called 120. They took care of the old man until the ambulance arrived.
Thanks to those kind people, I realized that life was full of beauty. Many people will give others a hand when they are in trouble. And the experience makes it possible for me to always do right things.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作主题。点明主题“生活中充满美以及用心感受美”；
第二步，具体阐述故事内容。描述自己生活中发现美的经历；
第三步，书写感受。分享自己发现美的感受。
【亮点词汇】①be full of充满
②fall down摔倒
③take care of照顾，照料
④thanks to多亏了，由于
【高分句型】①If we put our heart to appreciate it, we will discover the simple but great beauty of life（if引导条件状语从句）
②They took care of the old man until the ambulance arrived.（until引导时间状语从句）
15．（2024·上海宝山·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
你的学校近期拟开展一次校园艺术节活动 (School Art Festival)，本次活动旨在发挥同学们的艺术特长，营造良好的校园艺术氛围。目前学校德育处正就活动方案征求意见。
假如你是初三学生毕华，请阅读以下活动方案，给德育处王老师写一封信。
信件必须包括以下内容：
1. 你是否会报名参加校园艺术节活动，并简述理由；
2. 针对活动方案中的1-2项内容，提出修改建议。
校园艺术节活动方案
活动主题 “艺术让校园生活更美好” (Art makes school life better)
活动时间 5月6日至5月8日 下午3:30-4:30
活动地点 学校艺术教室 (Art Room)
活动对象 6至8年级学生
活动形式 艺术讲座、学生作品展示 (Art lectures &Students’ works display)
(注意：1. 信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。)
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【范文】
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very happy to learn that our school will have an art festival. The theme of the festival is “Art makes school life better”. I want to take part in it because I can enjoy the beauty of art.
This activity will be held in the Art Room from May 6th to 8th. It will start at 3:30 pm and last for an hour. I think we should begin earlier so that we can have enough time to enjoy ourselves. Students from Grade 6 to 8 can take part in this activity. They can go to the art lectures and enjoy art works from students. I think we can also watch traditional plays and play interesting games.
I’m looking forward to it.
Yours sincerely,
Bi Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。很高兴得知学校要开展校园艺术节；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。一是简述自己是否会参加并给出理由，二是针对活动方案提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。期待艺术节的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②last for持续
③enjoy oneself尽情享受
[高分句型]
①I want to take part in it because I can enjoy the beauty of art.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think we should begin earlier so that we can have enough time to enjoy ourselves.（so that引导的目的状语从句）