2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之环境保护类(含分析)

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2024中考英语书面表达热点话题之环境保护类
1.(2024·陕西西安·二模)假如你是李明,你们学校校报正在就“绿色环保,人人有责”这一话题征文。请你根据下面征稿启事中的提示问题写一篇英语短文,参加此次投稿活动。
提示:
参考词汇:pollution, cut down, protect, public transportation, instead of, rubbish, recycle, cloth bag,…
要求:1. 参考提示信息,选择使用提示词,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Hello! I’m Li Ming. I want to share my opinions about environment protection here. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Hello! I’m Li Ming. I want to share my opinions about environment protection here.
As we can see, our environment is badly damaged by what we human beings have done. The polluted water, air and food have a great effect on our health. Therefore, it’s high time that everyone should try their best to do what they can to protect the environment.
As middle school students, we also can do a lot of things for the environment. First of all, we should protect the environment by saving energy, including turning off electrical equipment and taps in time. In addition, we must contact environmental protection departments secretly if we find factories are polluting our environment. Above all, we should also plant more trees and travel green. As for me, I often go to school by bike to protect the environment. Besides, I pick up rubbish in the park on weekends.
In a word, the effort from everybody can make a great difference to our world.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍我们面临的问题以及原因;
第二步,具体阐述解决问题的办法以及你是如何帮助保护环境的;
第三步,最后表达总结。
[亮点词汇]
①in addition此外
②above all最重要的是,尤其是
③in a word总而言之
④make a great difference产生巨大的影响
[高分句型]
①As we can see, our environment is badly damaged by what we human beings have done.(as引导的定语从句,what引导的宾语从句)
②Therefore, it’s high time that everyone should try their best to do what they can to protect the environment.(what引导的宾语从句)
③In addition, we must contact environmental protection departments secretly if we find factories are polluting our environment.(if引导的条件状语从句)
2.(2024·北京房山·一模)环境就是民生,青山就是美丽,蓝天也是幸福。
假如你是李华,你们学校英语社团公众号正在进行以“低碳生活(Low-carbon Life)”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对低碳生活的看法和做法。
提示词语:important, save, plant, reuse, bicycle
提示问题:What do you think of low-carbon life
What do you often do to practice low-carbon life
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【范文】
Living a Low-carbon life is important for everyone.
We should save energy. To help with the environment, I live a low-carbon life. I always walk or ride a bicycle to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. Finally, we should plant more trees.
If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place. Let’s change ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我对低碳生活的看法以及为了低碳生活我日常的做法和我的建议”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“低碳生活对每个人来说都很重要。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“我对低碳生活的看法和我的做法以及我的建议”重点介绍低碳生活的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“让我们改变自己。”
[亮点词汇]
①save energy节能
②turn off关掉
[高分句型]
①Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.(that引导的定语从句,when引导的时间状语从句)
②If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.(if引导的条件状语从句,省略that的宾语从句)
3.(2024·四川内江·一模)习近平总书记曾提出“人不负青山,青山定不负人”(we humanity do not fail Nature, Nature will not fail us.)。人类应秉持生态文明理念,共同建设美好的家园,作为中学生,请你结合以下的提示用英语写一篇关于如何保护环境的文章。
1)做好榜样 (Set a good example)
在学校,主动打扫教室,不乱扔垃圾,爱护花草树木,不践踏草坪;参与学校保护环境的各项活动……
2)绿色出行 (Choose the green travel)
为了减少污染,尽量坐公共汽车、骑自行车或者步行上学……
3)小事做起(Start with small things)
节约用电,离开教室或其他房间随手关灯;节约用水,减少洗澡淋浴的时间,使用布袋……
提示词: reduce(vt) 减少 cloth(n) 布
注意:1)内容须包括所有提示要点,并自拟1~2点,可适当增加细节;
2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3)字数100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
How to Protect the Environment
If we humanity do not fail Nature, Nature will not fail us. So it’s our duty to protect our environment.
As middle school students, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
How to Protect the Environment
If we humanity do not fail Nature, Nature will not fail us. So it’s our duty to protect our environment.
As middle school students, we should set a good example. At first, we should clean the classroom actively, and not throw away rubbish everywhere at school. We should take care of flowers and trees. Don’t step on the lawn. We can participate in a variety of environmental protection activities of the school, such as publicizing environmental protection knowledge, making environmental protection posters, and participating in environmental protection speeches. Besides, we can choose the green travel. To reduce pollution, we try to go to and from school by bus, by bike or on foot. At last, we should start with small things. We had better save electricity, and turn off lights when leaving the classroom or other rooms. We should save water, and use waste water to flush toilets and reduce shower time. We try not to use plastic bags to reduce rubbish.
As far as I am concerned, we should do our best to do something to protect our planet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏相关介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“做好榜样、绿色出行、小事做起等”几个方面重点介绍我们可以做些什么来保护我们的地球的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“就我而言,我们应该尽我们最大的努力来保护我们的星球”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①set a good example树立一个好榜样
②participate in参加
③a variety of许多
④turn off关上
[高分句型]
①To reduce pollution, we try to go to and from school by bus, by bike or on foot. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②We had better save electricity, and turn off lights when leaving the classroom or other rooms. (had better+动词原形)
4.(2024·广东东莞·一模)假设你叫李明,你校英文报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集宣传稿,你打算向校刊投稿。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇题目为“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!”的短文。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. It’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. As middle school students, we have the power to make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees, and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle the wastes whenever possible. Besides, choosing to ride a bike instead of taking a car to help stop the pollution is also what we can do.
By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“保护地球”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,引出保护地球,每个人都要行动的话题;
第二步,根据思维导图中的要点,具体介绍做法和意义;
第三步,收尾,并号召大家都加入到保护地球的行动中来。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference起作用
②instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①It’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment.(it is+名词+to do的句型)
②Besides, choosing to ride a bike instead of taking a car to help stop the pollution is also what we can do.(动名词作主语)
5.(2024·四川雅安·二模)4月22日是地球保护日,为了号召更多的人加入保护环境的行列,学校的英语俱乐部征文保护环境倡议书。请你写一篇短文,介绍一下作为青少年我们应该如何保护环境并且号召更多的人加入进来。
写作要点:
1.每周帮忙打扫一次公园或学校;
2.在日常生活中节约用水;
3.乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学;
4.至少补充两点环保措施。
注意:
1.词数80-100,已经给出的部分不计入总词数;
2.演讲稿必须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear friends,
As we all know April is World Earth Day. As teenagers, there are a lot of things we can do to protect the environment.
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That’s all. Thank you.
【范文】例
Dear friends,
As we all know April is World Earth Day. As teenagers, there are a lot of things we can do to protect the environment.
First, we can help clean the park or school once a week to make them more beautiful and cleaner. Second, we should save water in our daily life. Third, we should take a bus, ride a bike or walk to school every day. Fourth, we should use paper bags instead of plastic bags when shopping. We should turn off the lights when we leave rooms. And we should turn off the shower while we are washing hair.
Let’s get together and take action to protect the environment.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍保护环境可以做的事情,包括给出的三点提示和补充的两点环保措施;
第二步,书写结语,提出一起保护环境的倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是
②turn off关闭
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①First, we can help clean the park or school once a week to make them more beautiful and cleaner. (动词不定式表目的)
②And we should turn off the shower while we are washing hair. (时间状语从句)
6.(2024·湖南永州·一模)日本政府不顾国际社会的坚决反对,于2023年8月24日启动福岛核污染水排海,据统计,福岛核污水排海至少要持续30年,这将对全世界的海洋造成极大的污染。国际海洋日即将来临,假如你是李华,请根据以下表格和提示,以“Protecting Our Oceans from Pollution”为题,写一篇英语短文,呼吁大家保护我们的海洋环境。
What were the problems The ocean was polluted. More and more marine life (海洋生物) is dying from pollution.
What caused the problems Plastic waste, ships’ waste oil spills (泼洒) , chemicals from factories, nuclear wastewater. . .
What should we do Don’t throw rubbish into the sea. Stop factories from pouring chemical waste water. . . . . . .
要求:
1. 结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰;
2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名,学校名等信息;
3. 不少于80个单词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:release排放 nuclear wastewater核污水 chemicals化学品
Protecting Our Oceans from Pollution
Our ocean is a vast and beautiful place, full of mysterious creatures and colorful coral reefs (珊瑚礁).
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【范文】
Protecting Our Oceans from Pollution
Our ocean is a vast and beautiful place, full of mysterious creatures and colorful coral reefs (珊瑚礁). But now the ocean is polluted. More and more marine life is dying from pollution.
Plastic waste, ship waste oil, factory chemicals, nuclear wastewater have led to increasingly severe marine pollution.
It’s our duty to protect the ocean. First of all, we should not pour the rubbish into the sea. Next, our government should take action to stop factories from pouring chemical waste water.
From my point of view, we should stop polluting the ocean from now on. We all need to raise awareness of these problems. It now becomes necessary for us to take action now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“海洋是个美丽的地方”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述内容。介绍海洋环境被污染的原因及应采取哪些应对措施;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁大家保护海洋环境。
[亮点词汇]
①stop doing sth.停止做某事
②pour...into把……倒入
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①It’s our duty to protect the ocean.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
②But now the ocean is polluted.(一般现在时的被动语态)
7.(2024·宁夏银川·一模)假如你是李华,目前是校英语微信公众号Save the earth专栏的负责人。请你根据以下海报,用英语写一篇宣传稿,向同学们宣传保护环境的一些方法。
提示:
要求:1. 内容要包括海报中对的要点,可适当增加细节;
2. 语言表达要准确,句意要通顺;
3. 词数100词左右。
As we all know, the earth is the only home for humans. But with global warming (全球变暖) and pollution, it has become ill in recent years. I’d like to share with you some ways to save it.
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【范文】
As we all know, the earth is the only home for humans. But with global warming (全球变暖) and pollution, it has become ill in recent years. I’d like to share with you some ways to save it.
To protect the earth, we can start by planting more trees and reducing pollution. Trees are important and they can help reduce the pollution. What’s more, we can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution. We should always throw trash into the proper bins. Last but not the least, we should recycle used things. We can give the clothes that we do not wear to those in need.
By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据图示,介绍如何保护地球,可适当补充,使文章内容充实;尽量多使用短语,写作中要适当使用连接词,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题;
第二步,介绍保护地球的具体措施;
第三步,书写结语,展望美好的未来。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是
②make a positive impact on对……有积极影响
[高分句型]
To protect the earth, we can start by planting more trees and reducing pollution. (动词不定式作目的状语)
8.(2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模)节约是美德;节约是环保。学校团委正在开展“小节约,大贡献(Small savings and big contributions) ”征文活动,请你写一篇投稿,分享你生活中的节约措施,如节约粮食、节约能源等,并发表你对此类行为的看法。
要求:
1.需写出适当的开头和结尾;至少包括四个方面的措施。
2.要点齐全,语言流畅,书写规范,可适当增加细节。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等。
4. 词数 80—100 左右。
Saving from ourselves
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【范文】
Saving from ourselves
Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference to waste.
First, don’t waste things. We’d better go to school on foot or ride a bike instead of taking a car. Turn off the lights as soon as we leave the classroom. Remember to turn off the tap at once after washing our hands. When we go out to eat in a restaurant, ask for smaller dishes and take the leftover home. Before we buy something new, think whether it is necessary. Next, use things for as long as possible. When we buy things, make sure that they can last a long time. Don’t use a paper cup or a paper bag. It’s better to use a china cup and a lunch box because you can use them again. Finally, collect something that can be recycled in your classroom or in your neighborhood and sell them. We should also buy things made from recycled materials.
In a word, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it will make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点名主题——小节约,大贡献;
第二步,分享你在生活中的节约措施,如节约粮食、节约能源等;
第三步,书写结语,倡导节约。
[亮点词汇]
①had better do sth. 最好做某事
②on foot步行
③ride a bike骑自行车
④instead of代替
⑤turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①Turn off the lights as soon as we leave the classroom.(as soon as引导时间状语从句)
②When we go out to eat in a restaurant, ask for smaller dishes and take the leftover home.(when引导时间状语从句)
9.(2024·福建福州·二模)假设你是李华,你所在的班级将举行一次跑步捡垃圾 (plogging) 的活动,你想邀请你们班外教Steve参加,请你结合下面的思维导图写一封邀请邮件。词数80左右。
Plogging
When April 27th, 2024
Meeting place the school playground
Route (路线) from our school to West Lake
What to take white gloves, a rubbish bag
Purposes healthy…
Your opinion …
注意事项:
●必须包含思维导图的信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
●意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
●文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Dear Steve,
Our class will hold an activity called “plogging”.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lihua
【范文】
Dear Steve,
Our class will hold an activity called “plogging”. First of all, I think it necessary to introduce what is plogging. Actually, it is a kind of popular sports way, which combines sports with social service. This activity will take place on April 27th, 2024. And we will do it from our school to West Lake. We will meet at the school playground. What exactly should we do We should take trash bags and white gloves with us and then pick up the trash while running. What’s more, we can also stay healthy. In my opinion, this is a meaningful activity. I hope you can all join us.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:本文应使用“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍邀请对方参加此次活动”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍自己的意图;
第二步,根据题干的思维导图介绍活动的时间,要求等信息;
第三步,表达对这次活动的肯定,并期待对方来参加活动。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②pick up捡起
[高分句型]
①Actually, it is a kind of popular sports way, which combines sports with social service.(定语从句)
②I hope you can all join us.(宾语从句)
10.(2024·江苏扬州·一模)假定你是李华,接到笔友Tommy的邮件询问有关垃圾分
类的情况。请根据邮件内容给他回复,词数100字左右。
To: Lihua 2024@
From: Tommy@
Subject: Waste sorting
Dear Li Hua, I hear that you are carrying out waste sorting in Yangzhou. Would you please share your ideas with me Why should you carry out waste sorting What do you do about waste sorting at school or at home What else can you do to protect the environment I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Tommy
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(3)词数在100词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
相关词汇:厨余垃圾kitchen waste;可回收垃圾recyclable waste;有害垃圾hazardous waste
Dear Tommy,
I’m happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about waste sorting here in Yangzhou. Now I’ll tell you something about it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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All the best,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Tommy,
I’m happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about waste sorting here in Yangzhou. Now I’ll tell you something about it.
In order to make an effort to make our city more beautiful, we carry out waste sorting. We separate the wastes into different types, and then throw them into the rubbish bins. We will be able to save resources by making use of recyclable waste. Hazardous waste will not pollute our environment after special treatment.
Here are some actions we can take to make the waste sorting better while we are at home. First, we can collect more information about waste sorting and prepare different rubbish bins for different wastes. Paper can be recycled, while kitchen waste especially leftovers can be collected as food for pigs or processed as fertilizer for plants. Above all, such harmful waste as plastics and used batteries should not be mixed with other wastes. What’s more, we can tell our parents and relatives about the importance of waste sorting.
As well as waste sorting, keeping power off while electricity equipment is not in use is also a good idea to protect our environment.
If everybody takes action, we can make a big difference to our environment.
All the best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括邮件中所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍垃圾分类情况,从而引出话题;
第二步,阐述垃圾分类的意义;
第三步,介绍在家或在学校你是如何进行垃圾分类的?
第四步,介绍其他为了保护环境的做法;
第五步,书写总结,呼吁大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
① make an effort 作出努力
② carry out 执行
[高分句型]
① Here are some actions we can take to make the waste sorting better while we are at home. (定语从句)
② If everybody takes action, we can make a big difference to our environment. (if引导的条件状语从句)
11.(2024·江苏宿迁·二模)世界环境保护日就要到了,你校组织以“Being a Volunteer of Going Green”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以林涛的名义,根据以下内容写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
品质 有条理,有创意(各举一例)
最爱的颜色 绿色,因为……
事迹 做过环保志愿者, 帮助同学们解决烦恼(举一例)
环保措施 ……(至少两点)
注意:
1.必须包括所有要点,并适当拓展;表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2.词数:100词左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Being a Volunteer of Going Green
Hello, everyone. I’m Lin Tao. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
【范文】
Being a Volunteer of Going Green
Hello, everyone. I’m Lin Tao. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I have many strong qualities. I’m so confident that I’m not afraid of making a speech in public. I’m creative, so I often come up with new ideas. I’m also organized. I always keep all my things in good order.
My favourite colour is green, because it’s the colour of nature and represents new life. I have worked as a volunteer for protecting the environment. I have also helped my classmates deal with their problems. For example, some of them felt sleepy in class. I advised them to manage the time better and go to bed earlier.
If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can throw the rubbish into the rubbish bin. It’s necessary for me to save water by turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. I shouldn’t use plastic bags. Instead, I should take my own bags when shopping. I must try my best to make a big difference to the environment.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时,一般过去时和现在完成时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍自己的品质,最爱的颜色和原因,志愿事迹和环保措施;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid of 害怕
②come up with 想出
③deal with 处理
④make a big difference to the environment 对环境产生重大影响
[高分句型]
①I’m so confident that I’m not afraid of making a speech in public.(结果状语从句)
②My favourite colour is green, because it’s the colour of nature and represents new life.(原因状语从句)
③If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment.(条件状语从句)
12.(2024·四川广元·二模)如今外出旅游备受欢迎,但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。学校校报正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题,向广大学生征稿,倡导大家文明旅游。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识,写一篇英文稿件。
写作要点:
1.列举常见的不文明行为 (不少于两个);
2.根据不文明行为提出个人观点及建议 (不少于两点建议);
3.倡导文明旅游。
写作要求:
1.文中须包含以上要点;
2.文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名;
3.词数80左右,标题和开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: tourist attractions (景区)
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular.
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【范文】
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling. For example, some of the travelers throw rubbish everywhere. It’s not only impolite but also harmful to the environment around us. We should put rubbish into dustbins. Some of the travelers like picking flowers in a park. It should also be stopped because flowers are beautiful and we should protect them. We can put up signs beside the flowers to remind travelers not to pick them.
Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,列举两个不文明的行为进行介绍;
第二步,介绍自己对不文明行为的看法并给出改正建议;
第三步,号召大家文明旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①behave themselves文明举止
②put rubbish into dustbins把垃圾扔进垃圾桶
[高分句型]
①However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners.(祈使句)
13.(2024·上海浦东新·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
学校呼吁师生共建美好校园。学生会 (the student union) 收到来自同学们的众多提议(proposal)。请代表学生会选取以下一项提议写一份倡议书。谈一谈提出该倡议的理由并给
出具体实施建议。
Recycling wastepaper 废纸回收 Volunteering in the canteen 食堂志愿工作 Daily jogging 每日慢跑 Weekly talent show 每周才艺秀
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【范文】
The student union has received many proposals on how to make our school better. Among them, recycling wastepaper caught our eye, and we appeal all students to recycle it. Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers which are made from trees. We cut down millions of trees every year and replace hardly any of them. To save paper, you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks before dropping it. You can also take waste papers to the school recycling centre to reuse them. By making a few small changes daily, you can have a huge impact on the amount of paper that gets used.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作主题;
第二步,具体介绍如何使我们学校变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①caught our eye引起我们的注意
②hundreds of几百
③make sure确保
④have a huge impact on有巨大影响
[高分句型]
①Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers which are made from trees.(which引导的定语从句)
②To save paper, you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks before dropping it.(省略that的宾语从句)
14.(2024·山东济南·一模)近年来,环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。请你写一篇演讲稿向同学们发出倡议,呼吁大家从小事做起。为保护环境尽一份力。
措施 1.节约水电; 2.少用塑料袋,不乱扔垃圾; 3.绿色出行,如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等; 4.……
提出希望 ……
注意
(1)100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)参考表格提示,可适当增加内容,行文连贯,字迹工整,段落清晰,表达清楚;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Fellow students ,
The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, we should do something to protect the environment.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Fellow students ,
The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, we should do something to protect the environment.
First, it’s very important to save water and energy in our daily life. Don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room. Second, we are supposed to reuse the plastic bags when shopping. What’s more, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. Third, we’d better walk, ride a bike or take the bus when we go to school or go shopping. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful. How important it is for us to protect the environment! If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better.
Let’s do it together from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意文章必须包括所给提示内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借由说明环境的问题号召大家为环保尽一份力;
第二步,具体阐述保护环境的建议和措施;
第三步,书写结语。希望大家从现在就做起。
[亮点词汇]
①throw rubbish everywhere乱扔垃圾
②daily life日常生活
③turn off关掉
④be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①It’s very important to save water and energy in our daily life.(it固定句型)
②Don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room.(祈使句、when引导时间状语从句)
③If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better.(if引导条件状语从句)
15.(2024·广东广州·一模)6月5日是环境保护日,为了让同学们意识到保护环境的重要性,学校将组织一场以“How to Be a Green Student” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文,倡导同学们从日常生活的细节做起, 一起保护环境。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Ladies and gentlemen, I’m glad to have the chance to give a speech about how to be a green student. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
How to Be a Green Student
Ladies and gentlemen, I’m glad to have the chance to give a speech about how to be a green student. Everyone wants to be a good student, but how to be a good student First we should save water. We should take a shower instead of a bath. And we have to recycle water. Secondly, when we leave the classroom, we should turn off the lights. When we see no one, we should turn off the tap in time. We should also plant more trees. Third, when we go shopping, we try to walk or take a bus. At the same time, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. Finally, when we eat out,
we have to take the leftovers home. If we can keep them a habit in our daily life, the earth will become a safer planet for us to live on.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴有机会做一个有关如何成为环保学生的演讲”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——日常生活的做法、在学校的做法以及为何要成为一个环保学生等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①save water节约水
②instead of代替
③turn off the tap关水龙头
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when we leave the classroom, we should turn off the lights. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we can keep them a habit in our daily life, the earth will become a safer planet for us to live on. (If引导的条件状语从句)