书面表达
(中考真题+名校最新真题)
1.(2023·北京·中考真题)同学们参加过各种各样的社团,如篮球队、合唱团等。
假设你是李华。请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿,介绍一个你参加过的社团,谈谈这个社团的活动内容以及你的收获。
提示词语:take part in, practice, skill, benefit, progress
提示问题:What club did you join
What did you do in the club
What have you learned from the experience
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【答案】例文:
I have been in the basketball club for three years. We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams. During the three years, my skill of playing basketball improved a lot. And I also made a lot of friends. Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit, but also helps me understand the importance of teamwork. I will keep playing and try to be good at it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题涉及的关键信息,写短文谈谈自己参加过的
社团、这个社团的活动内容及你考生的收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明参加了什么社团;
第二步,介绍社团中的活动;
第三步,谈谈从社团活动中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②on the weekend 在周末
③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
④be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
We used to practice from Monday to Friday, and on the weekend, we played games with other teams.(and连接表等同关系的并列句)
2.(2023·北京·中考真题)假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事,如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。
提示词语:invite, plant, meaningful, beautiful, library
提示问题:What activity do you plan to do
Why do you want to organize this activity
When and where will you have this activity
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’m writing to invite you to join us. As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together. We all know that trees can stop the wind from blowing the sand, and they can also make our school beautiful. So we decide to plant a tree for our school. Next Sunday, we will meet at the gate of the school and then go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant the tree and then water it. I believe we all will have a great time.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示问题中包含的关键信息,写邮件告诉Peter活动内容、意义及安排。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写电子邮件的目的是邀请Peter参加活动;
第二步,介绍计划什么活动、组织这一活动的原因及具体安排;
第三步,期待收到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
②join sb. 加入某人
③stop ... from doing sth. 阻止……做某事
[高分句型]
①As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together.(as引导原因状语从句)
②I believe we all will have a great time.(省略that的宾语从句)
3.(2022·北京·中考真题)
某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的,取得了什么效果。
提示词语:plan, task, attention, make use of, progress
提示问题:How do you increase your efficiency(效率)
What have you achieved
High efficiency is important for a busy student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
High efficiency is important for a busy student. It is necessary for everyone to learn how to increase efficiency.
I have tried many ways to increase my efficiency since I was a middle school student. Before the beginning of a day, I always think about my goals and make a list of things I need to do. Then, I organize my to-do list to make an effective plan for the day. I always spend time doing important tasks first and make good use of the rest of the time.
By managing my time well, I have made progress. I usually finish my homework on time and still have time to relax myself. High efficiency and time management have helped me be successful in various areas of my life.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“提升效率”为主题,结合提示问题进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己是如何提高效率的以及取得了什么成就;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
4.(2022·北京·中考真题)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣,他给你发来邮件,询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。提示词语:manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题:· What do we do when we meet people for the first time
· How do we behave properly at table
Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them.
Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have
your soup.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示问题,给Chris介绍中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第二人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段从待人接物、餐桌礼仪方面给出建议;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
5.(2024·北京·一模)心若芬芳,花自开。生活中总有一些瞬间让我们心生欢喜,一杯热茶、一个偶遇、亦或是一次成功……
某英文网站正在开展以“我的小欢喜”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,分享一次让你心生欢喜的经历,为什么心生欢喜,并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语:fail an exam, comfort, promise, moved, mean a lot
提示问题:
● What happened
● Why were you happy at that time
● What have you learned from the experience
Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it. I’d love to tell you what happened in class that day. I am a shy girl. I am always afraid of failing in the exam, because I don’t study very well. However, that day, I mustered up my courage. When the teacher told me my grades were not higher than others, I was very upset. But my teacher added, “Your handwriting is the most beautiful writing in the class”, all my classmates cheered for me. What’s more, my teacher praised me, which made me happy. I have made up my mind to study better, answer more questions in class and work harder on tests.
I will always remember this experience, because it gave me confidence, courage and support from my classmates and teachers.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为材料作文;
②时态:文章主要是对过去经历的回忆,时态应用一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作行文思路应根据所给问题提示展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步,叙述自己的一次经历;
第二步,描述当时的心情;
第三步,谈谈自己在这次经历的收获。
[亮点词汇]
① be afraid of害怕
②muster up鼓起
③made up one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
①I am always afraid of failing in the exam, because I don’t study very well.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②What’s more, my teacher praised me, which made me happy.(定语从句)
6.(2024·北京·一模)根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
4月22日是“世界地球日”,旨在提高民众对于现有环境问题的认识,并动员民众通过绿色低碳生活,改善地球的整体环境。
某英文网站正在开展以“Low-carbon Life低碳生活”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你是怎样理解低碳生活的,并描述你在日常生活中实现低碳生活的具体做法。
提示词语:protect,recycle,reduce,environment,energy
提示问题:
● What do you think of low-carbon life
● What do you do to have a low-carbon life
“Low-carbon lifestyle” is a kind of new pattern of lifestyle.
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【答案】例文
Low-carbon Life
“Low-carbon lifestyle” is a kind of new pattern of lifestyle. Living a low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help protect the environment, I live a low-carbon life. I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. We need to use less energy.
I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.
If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place. Let’s change from ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍低碳生活的重要性;
第二步,介绍自己都做了些什么;
第三步,呼吁人们行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②instead of代替
③turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①To protect the environment, I live a low-carbon life.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.(省略that的宾语从句)
④If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.(if引导的条件状语从句)
⑤Let’s change from ourselves.(祈使句)
7.(2024·北京西城·一模)假设你是李华。你校交换生将与你们共同参加学校的外出活动。作为学生会主席,你将给他们做行前动员。请用英文写一篇讲话稿,告知他们外出的时间、地点和活动内容,以及相关的安全建议。
提示词语:park, climb, careful, avoid
提示问题:● When and where will you take the field trip
●What activities are you going to do during the trip
●What safety advice would you like to give them
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to tell you that we are going to take a field trip. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope we can have a good time.
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to tell you that we are going to take a field trip. We are going to Yanxi Lake next Friday. We will first get together at the school gate at 8 am, and go there together by bus.
When we arrive at the lake, we will be divided into several groups. Then we will walk along it and enjoy the natural and historical sights. After that, we can rest beside the lake and have a picnic.
By the way, I also have some safety tips for you. First, please stay with your group members so that you won’t get lost. Furthermore, don’t run beside the lake. That’s dangerous!
Hope we will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时和一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍外出的时间、地点和活动内容,以及相关的安全建议,注意要点齐全,逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍外出活动的时间及地点;
第二步,介绍在旅行中将进行的活动;
第三步,给出旅行中相关的安全建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be divided into被分成
②by the way顺便说一下
③get lost迷路
[高分句型]
①When we arrive at the lake, we will be divided into several groups. (when引导时间状语从句)
②please stay with your group members so that you won’t get lost. (so that引导目的状语从句)
8.(2024·北京房山·一模)假设你是李华,你们学校将要举办“科技节”活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动时间、地点及活动内容。
提示词语:school hall, speech, video, invention, experiment
提示问题:When and where will the science festival be held
What activities will be done in the science festival
Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I look forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news.
Our school is going to hold a school Science Festival. I’m glad to invite you to take part in it. The event will be held on January 19th in the school hall. There will be a variety of activities for you to enjoy. Our headmaster will give a speech. You will see amazing inventions and videos about them, which show the latest developments in science and technology. Also, you’ll have the chance to attend interesting lectures on different scientific topics. If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments. It’s going to be a great opportunity to learn and have fun at the same time!
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“邀请Peter来参加科技节,活动时间,地点和内容”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴告诉你一个好消息。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“邀请Peter来参加科技节,科技节举办的时间,地点以及科技节的活动内容”重点介绍科技节的相关情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“我期待你早日答复。”
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②a variety of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Our school is going to hold a school Science Festival.(be going to do sth表示“计划做某事”)
②If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments.(if引导的条件状语从句)
9.(2024·北京平谷·一模)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter对近期举办的“近光讲堂”很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件,询问相关信息。请你用英语回复一封邮件,向他介绍你最喜欢的一次“近光讲堂”,以及主要内容和你的感悟。
提示词语:invite, introduce, experience, change
提示问题:Which speech do you like best
What’s it mainly about
What have you learned from it
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the speeches given by some people with social influence.
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Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the speeches given by some people with social influence.
I like the speech given by Dong Yuhui. Its theme is reading and growth. Dong shares his own experience with us. During his speech, he puts great importance on reading. He thinks reading books can help people grow up.
From this speech, I know that as students, we should read different kinds of books to enrich our knowledge
and improve ourselves. The more we read, the better we will be and the better we can understand Chinese culture.
Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍你最喜欢的一次“近光讲堂”,以及主要内容和你的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍你最喜欢的一次“近光讲堂”以及主要内容;
第三步,介绍你的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②put great importance on非常重视
③grow up成长
[高分句型]
①I like the speech given by Dong Yuhui. (过去分词作定语)
②He thinks reading books can help people grow up. (宾语从句)
③The more we read, the better we will be and the better we can understand Chinese culture. (the+比较级,the+比较级)
10.(2024·北京门头沟·一模)2024年起,北京市中考体育现场考试进行了改革。考试内容调整为4类22项,每名考生须从每类项目中选考1项,共考4项。
学校英文网站正在开展以“我和体育中考”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你选择了什么体育项目,你是怎么准备的,以及你有什么感受。
注意:根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语:volleyball, pull-ups, sit-ups, rope-jumping, Changquan
提示问题:
● What sport events did you choose
● How did you prepare for them
● How did you feel
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【答案】例文
In recent years, our country pays more and more attention to the national physical quality, and calls on students to exercise every day. As a result, PE lessons in school get more and more important.
I chose volleyball because it made me relaxed and strong. I tried my best to prepare for the PE test. First, I kept on playing volleyball after school every day. What’s more, in order to have more strength, I practiced my leg strength by doing 100 high leg lifts. Last but not least, I tried to keep a healthy diet eating as many as vegetables and fruits instead of junk food, which could help me stay in good condition for the test.
Though it was tiring, I passed the PE exam and became healthier and healthier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示问题介绍你选择了什么体育项目,你是怎么准备的,以及你有什么感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍你选择了什么体育项目,你是怎么准备的;
第三步,介绍你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to关注
②as a result结果
③keep on doing sth.坚持做某事
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①I chose volleyball because it made me relaxed and strong. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I tried to keep a healthy diet eating as many as vegetables and fruits instead of junk food, which could help me
stay in good condition for the test. (which引导的定语从句)