2024中考英语书面表达常考邀请信、申请信类
2.(2024·上海黄浦·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
“世界地球日”即将来临,学校将举办公益宣传活动,具体活动安排如下表格所示。请你为校园网站写一篇通知,邀请同学们踊跃参与,通知内容包括活动主题、目的,以及具体活动安排等。
Time Events
8:00-8:30 Check in
9:00-10:00 Drawing competition
10:00-11:00 Tree planting activity
12:00-13:00 Lunch break
13:30-14:30 Science experiment
15:00-15:30 Photo show
You can begin like this:
It’s time to celebrate Earth Day. You are welcome to join us!
注意:1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文:
Notice
It’s time to celebrate Earth Day. Welcome to join us!
On the occasion of World Earth Day, our school will be hosting a series of public welfare activities to raise awareness about environmental protection. The theme of this event is “Love the Earth, Protect Our Home”. We hope to inspire our students to take action and contribute to the preservation of our planet.
The event will start checking in from 8:00 am to 8:30 am. All participants are required to register upon arrival. From 9:00 to 10:00 am, there will be a drawing competition, providing students with the opportunity to showcase their artistic talents while expressing their love for nature. Following that, from 10:00 to 11:00 am, we will organize a tree planting activity. After a lunch break from 12:00 to 1:00 pm, a science experiment session will take place from 1:30 to 2:30 pm. To conclude the day, a photo show will be held from 3:00 to 3:30 pm, showcasing photographs taken by students that capture the beauty of nature.
Thank you for your attention and we look forward to your active participation!
School Administration
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇通知;
②时态:时态主要为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,点出“世界地球日”的主题和目的。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,阐述具体活动安排。
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①preservation保持,维护
②showcase展示优点
③contribute to为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①From 9:00 to 10:00 am, there will be a drawing competition, providing students with the opportunity to showcase their artistic talents while expressing their love for nature. (there be句
型)
②To conclude the day, a photo show will be held from 3:00 to 3:30 pm, showcasing photographs taken by students that capture the beauty of nature.(定语从句)
3.(2024·贵州毕节·一模)2023年12月22日, 第78届联合国大会协商一致通过决议,将中国春节确定为联合国假日。假如你是刘华,欣喜之间,很想你的英国笔友Tony来跟你一起过春节。请你写一封信邀请他。
内容要点:
1. 发出邀请;
2. 根据图片内容介绍春节;
3. 表达期许与愿景。
要求:
1. 内容须包括所提示的信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 80词左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
How is everything I’m happy that last month the UN officially listed the Spring Festival as one of its holidays. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Liu Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
How is everything I’m happy that last month the UN officially listed the Spring Festival as one of its holidays. I’m writing to invite you to come to celebrate the Lunar New Year with me this year.
Chinese Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is usually in January or February. People often do some cleaning and buy new clothes before the festival. On the eve of the festival, they often have a big dinner with families and they usually eat dumplings and chicken, duck and fish. They also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up till midnight. On the first day of the festival, people usually put on new clothes and visit relatives and friends with some nice presents. They wish each other a happy year and good luck. Kids can get lucky money from older people and it is called hongbao. Children can also set off firecrackers.
I hope you can come and spend the Spring Festival with me. I think if you come here, you will have a good time.
Yours,
Liu Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据图片内容介绍中国春节,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,邀请对方来跟你一起过春节;
第二步,详细介绍春节的传统;
第三步,表达期许与愿景。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
②stay up熬夜
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①On the eve of the festival, they often have a big dinner with families and they usually eat dumplings and chicken, duck and fish.(and连接的并列句)
②I think if you come here, you will have a good time.(省略that的宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句)
4.(2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模)假如你是李明,你的英国笔友Tom听说去年冬天你的家乡“尔滨”因其独特的冰雪文化吸引了世界各地游客前来参观,很感兴趣,请你给他写一封信,介绍一下2023年冬冰雪旅游的盛况,并邀请他今年冬天来“尔滨”旅游。
写作要点:
1. 表达你以家乡为傲。
2. 介绍2023年冬哈尔滨冰雪旅游的盛况:
(1) 冰城之美;
(2) 世界各地游客前来参观。
3. 给他提供一些来“尔滨”旅游的建议。
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80 词。
Dear Tom,
How are you _______________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
How are you I want to tell you something about Harbin.
Harbin is a city of ice. I suggest that you definitely come to Harbin for a trip, as you can enjoy the joyful “ice and snow” of winter and encounter the “Romantic Ice City” here. I’m very proud of my hometown. In the winter of 2023, its ice and snow culture attracted tourists from all over the world. Everyone who came here praised its beauty. The Ice and Snow World showed the unique charm of Harbin ice and snow culture and tourism to the world.
You’d better take warm clothes when you come here. As everyone knows, Harbin is a crowded city. And the subway is one of the most convenient ways to travel in this city. So I advise you to take the subway to take around. There are many places of interest in Harbin. So you can’t miss visiting it. In addition, you can try much special food. During your travel, don’t throw litter everywhere and keep quiet in public. I believe your trip will be full of fun and hope you will have a good time in Harbin!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍哈尔滨并表达以家乡为傲;
第二步,介绍2023年冬哈尔滨冰雪旅游的盛况;
第三步,提供旅行建议;
第四步,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of以……为傲
②from all over the world来自世界各地
③places of interest名胜古迹
④in addition此外
[高分句型]
①I suggest that you definitely come to Harbin for a trip, as you can enjoy the joyful “ice and snow” of winter and encounter the “Romantic Ice City” here.(that引导的宾语从句,as引导的原因状语从句)
②You’d better take warm clothes when you come here.(when引导的时间状语从句)
5.(2024·陕西宝鸡·一模)除了假期与家人一起出游,你一定也参加过学校旅行吧。假如你是李华,你们班将组织研学旅行,你打算邀请外教Mr. Brown 参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
提示:1. 写信意图和邀请原因;2. 研学旅行的时间:4月10日;3. 集合时间和集合地:八点在学校门口。
参考词汇:invite, join, experience, meaningful, take place, school gate, bus, look forward to
要求:1. 所写内容包含所提供的的信息;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词。 (开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
Dear Mr. Brown,
How are you doing
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr. Brown,
How are you doing I am writing to invite you to join our study tour. We believe that your presence will make the educational experience more meaningful to us.
The study tour will take place on April 10th and we are going to visit a historical place in the nearby city. We will travel by bus. And we will meet at the school gate at 8:00 that day.
If you’d like to join us, please let me know as soon as possible so that we can make necessary preparations. Thank you for considering our invitation. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要所给提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要邀请Mr. Brown参加研学旅行并说明原因;
第二步,具体阐述研学旅行的时间及集合地点;
第三步,书写结语。表达希望Mr. Brown能加入我们的研学旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①presence出席
②more meaningful更有意义的
③take place发生
④preparation准备
⑤consider考虑
[高分句型]
①I am writing to invite you to join our study tour. (动词不定式表目的)
②We believe that your presence will make the educational experience more meaningful to us. (宾语从句)
③If you’d like to join us, please let me know as soon as possible so that we can make necessary preparations. (条件状语从句;目的状语从句)
6.(2024·浙江宁波·一模)2024年巴黎奥运会(Paris 2024)志愿者项目的报名通道现已开启! 假如你是李华,请根据下方赛事官方的报名要求,写一篇英语短文作为你的申请信。
PARIS 2024 VOLUNTEER PROGRAMME
Conditions to Be A Volunteer※Be at least 14 years old. ※Speak French or English well. ※Have at least one volunteer experience and tell us about it. ※Tell us what you can do to help. ※Tell us your hope for Paris 2024.
注意:
(1)短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)书信开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Paris 2024,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Paris 2024,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old boy from China. I think I am qualified to be a volunteer for you next summer.
I can speak English very well. I have taken part in several English speech contests in the past three years. Besides, I have some volunteer experiences. For example, I was a volunteer at the 19th Asian Games in 2023. I helped many foreign visitors and athletes. If I become a member of you, I could help organize activities or check tickets.
Last but not least, I sincerely hope that everyone will be able to share exciting moments and unforgettable memories!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“自己补充”内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出请求:希望加入2024年巴黎奥运会(Paris 2024)志愿者;
第二步,具体介绍自己申请加入的目的、原因、优势、打算等内容;
第三步,书写结语,希望能通过申请。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②in the past three years在过去的三年里
③become a member of成为……的成员
④be able to能
[高分句型]
①I think I am qualified to be a volunteer for you next summer.(省略that的宾语从句)
②If I become a member of you, I could help organize activities or check tickets.(if引导的条件状语从句)
③I sincerely hope that everyone will be able to share exciting moments and unforgettable memories!(that引导的宾语从句)
7.(2024·吉林长春·一模)假如你是李华,你校英语阅读社团正在招募 (recruit) 新成员,你非常渴望加入。请你根据下面内容提示和要求,用英语写一封不少于 40 词的申请信 (application)。
内容提示:1.写信目的;
2.加入英语阅读社的原因;
3.希望获准。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua. Learning the English Reading Club is recruiting new members, I am writing to
tell I want to be one of them.
Reading classics can give me a deep insight into history and culture. So, the club becomes what I’m willing to join. For one thing, challenging to read English books will improve my English level. For another, I can make more friends and share my ideas.
I would be thankful if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“想加入英语阅读社团”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的写信目的;
第二步,表明自己想加入社团的原因;
第三步,希望获得批准并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do想要
②be thankful感谢
[高分句型]
①Learning the English Reading Club is recruiting new members, I am writing to tell I want to be one of them.(宾语从句)
②I would be thankful if you could consider my application.(if引导的条件状语从句)
8.(2024·湖南长沙·一模)根据要求完成短文写作。学校参加了国际志愿者项目(Global Volunteers),面向全校招募志愿者培养对象,请你结合以下提示,写一封申请邮件。
要求:
(1)短文必须包含提示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(给出的开头内容不计入总词数);
(3)不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like to become a member of Global Volunteers.
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【答案】例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like to become a member of Global Volunteers.
I really enjoy helping people and think volunteering is fun! I am good at organizing games and I love to teach others new things. At school, I help my classmates with their homework, and we often play sports together after classes. I think being a volunteer will let me help even more people and make new friends.
I also want to learn about other cultures and how kids in different countries live. I believe that being a part of Global Volunteers will teach me a lot and help me grow up to be a kind person who cares about the world.
Thank you for considering my application!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示中的四个主要内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,介绍自己的兴趣爱好和能力;
②第二步,介绍自己的想法;
③第三步,说明自己希望加入的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②make friends交朋友
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
I believe that being a part of Global Volunteers will teach me a lot and help me grow up to be a kind person who cares about the world.(宾语从句,定语从句)
9.(2024·山东烟台·一模)假如你是李华,想参加学校举办的以 “梦想职业体验” 为主题的实践活动。请给主办人Mr. Brown写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。
主要内容:
1. 个人信息和兴趣爱好;
2. 梦想职业和个人计划。
写作要求:
1. 包括所有内容要点,并适当拓展,以使语言通顺,行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称;
3. 80—120 词之间,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
Dear Mr. Brown,
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Your Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Mr. Brown,
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hua. I like reading and writing. I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates. And I have a habit of keeping a diary.
I want to be a writer when I grow up. So after learning about the activity, I feel very excited because it’s about dream job experience. If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job, I will cherish this chance. After the activity, I will spend more time making a summary.
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍个人信息及爱好;
第二步,介绍职业梦想和个人计划;
第三步,书写结语。表达希望能加入活动并得到尽快回复。
[亮点词汇]
①have a habit of 有……的习惯
②keep a diary 写日记
③opportunity机会
④cherish珍惜
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I want to be a writer when I grow up. (时间状语从句)
②If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job, I will cherish this chance. (if引导条件状语从句)
10.(2024·吉林长春·一模)假设你是文兴中学的王强,你从校园英语广播站获悉,你校正在为中美两国学生的文化交流活动招募志愿者。你有意愿参加此活动,请用英语给活动的负责人Miss Zhang写一封不少于40词的申请信。
要点:1. 简单自我介绍;
2. 自身优势(英语口语或交流能力);
3. 参加意图(传播中国传统文化);
4. 期待答复。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Miss Zhang,
I’m Wang Qiang, a student from Wenxing Middle School. After hearing the news, I’d like to apply for the position as a volunteer for a cultural exchange between Chinese and American students.
In an attempt to let foreigners have a deeper insight into our tradtional culture, I believe I am fit for the job for I have patience and intelligence to solve problems, which are necessary qualities for volunteers. Besides, as an outgoing boy, I’m easy to get along with others and always ready to help others. More importantly, I have a good command of spoken and written English.
I would be very grateful if you could give me the opportunity. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Wang Qiang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,写一则申请信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容;
第三步,期待答复。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②get along with和睦相处
③have a good command of精通
[高分句型]
①I believe I am fit for the job for I ahve patience and intelligence to solve problems, which are necessary qualities for volunteers.(定语从句)
②I would be very grateful if you could give me the opportunity.(if引导的条件状语从句)