书面表达19篇
1.(2024·山东济宁·二模)“2024中外青年文化交流营”即将于今年五一假期在济宁举办,一些外国学生将到曲阜“三孔”参观,现急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华,请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。提示:
1. 自荐目的:成为志愿者;
2. 个人信息:身份,年龄,性格(外向、善于与人相处),假期有空;
3. 个人优势:擅长英语;
4. 表达期望:获得机会并能做好,请本周五前回复。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 须包括以上所有信息,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息。
提示词汇:曲阜三孔 The Three Holes of Qufu
要求:
1. 须包括以上所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息;
3. 100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. On the coming May Day, some foreign students
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. On the coming May Day, some foreign students will visit The Three Holes of Qufu. I’m willing to be a volunteer. Let me introduce myself to you.
I’m a middle school student aged 15. I’m an outgoing girl who can always get on well with others. As for the time, I will be available this holiday. My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends. More importantly, I know a lot about The Three Holes of Qufu culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding of it. I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance.
Please reply to me by Friday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自荐的目的;
第二步,具体描述个人信息和优势;
第三步,最后表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do乐意做
②get on well with sb和某人相处得好
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m an outgoing girl who can always get on well with others.(who引导定语从句)
②My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends.(so...that...引导结果状语从句)
③I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance.(if引导条件状语从句)
2.(2023·江苏淮安·中考真题)假如你是李华,你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼,健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题,根据以下要点,写一篇英语演讲稿。
我的日常锻炼 1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处(不少于两点)
给同学的建议 1. 校内锻炼方式(不少于两点)
2. 校外锻炼方式(不少于两点)
号召 1. 希望大家多锻炼
2. …
参考词汇:做早操do morning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessons
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise properly
注意:
1. 词数在80—100之间,已给出的文字不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
My favorite exercise is playing basketball. I often play basketball for about ten hours a week. Because I think it is interesting and relaxing and it also enables me to make friends with others.
I think we should do morning exercises every day to start our day. What’s more, when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities. We can also run for half an hour every day to build up our body. If we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.
I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据表格中的提示信息进行写作,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己的日常锻炼;
第三步,介绍给同学的建议;
第四步,发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in参与
③on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.(省略that的宾语从句)
3.(2024·山东济宁·二模)2024年3月,河北邯郸一名初中生被同学残忍杀害,此消息震惊全国,为
杜绝校园欺凌 (say no to school bully),打造和谐安定校园 (build a harmonious and stable campus),作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?请根据以下提示,写一篇英语作文。
提示:
1.尊敬老师,努力学习,锻炼身体,培养一个兴趣爱好。
2.与同学融洽相处,互相帮助。
3.不要与他人吵架,不偷盗他人物品。
4.遵守学校的规章制度,不携带管制刀具 (restricted knives)。
5.不要私自会见陌生人,遇险应报警。
要求:
1.语句通顺,语意连贯。
2.运用以上提示词,内容可适当发挥。
3.词数100词左右,作文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus.
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【答案】例文
It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus. Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again. Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also expressed their great concern about it. Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem.
First of all, we should respect the teachers, study hard and do some exercise to keep healthy. Then we can develop some hobbies, like playing basketball. Next, we should get on well with other students and help each other. What’s more, don’t argue with others and do not steal their belongings. More importantly, follow the school rules
and don’t carry restricted knives. Last but not least, don’t meet strangers privately, and if you are in danger, you should call the police in time.
All in all, every student should behave himself and keep away from school-bullying.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点信息,可适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据开头,引出话题:我们应该怎么做;
第二步,根据提示,具体介绍我们应该做的事情;
第三步,书写结语:规范自己的行为,远离校园欺凌。
[亮点词汇]
①reach some agreements 达成协议
②get on well with 与……相处融洽
③argue with 与……争吵
④in danger 处于危险
⑤all in all 总之
[高分句型]
Last but not least, don’t meet strangers privately, and if you are in danger, you should call the police in time.(否定祈使句,if引导的条件状语从句)
4.(2024·山东济宁·二模)日本政府于日前表示将逐步把数吨经过处理的福岛第一核电站废水排放到海洋中,此举受到多方谴责。保护环境与自然和谐相处是人类今天面对的大问题。
假如你是李雷,你们班级正就“保护地球,从我做起”这一话题开展征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
请根据表格内容,谈谈你周边的环境问题,在保护环境方面你通常是怎么做的,以及你这样做的感受。
环境问题 不关灯、不关水龙头、资源浪费、乱扔垃圾、工厂排污水、污气、汽车尾气……
采取措施 节约水电、绿色出行、绿色购物、回收利用……
感想 自己的感受——责任、必要、自豪,以及对世界的巨大影响……
要求:
1. 每个要点必须包含一至两个信息,可以适当发挥;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数90左右,短文开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
提示词语:reduce, reuse, recycle, energy, plant, happy
Many people pay little attention to protecting our environment, so pollution is more and more serious. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Many people pay little attention to protecting our environment, so pollution is more and more serious. Some people waste water, food, and other things.
As a student, I always remember these three words: reduce, reuse, recycle. For example, I turn off the lights when I leave the room and I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. I don’t use paper cups in my daily life. We often collect plastic bottles in our classroom. What’s more, I always take a bus to school instead of asking my parents to drive me.
I feel happy to do these things, because I believe if everyone of us does a little, we will make a difference to our environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应按要求写作,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,写作时可直接写环境问题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“你周边的环境问题”、“采取措施”展开,适当补充,丰富细节;
第三步,书写结语,写自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to 关注
②for example 例如
③turn off 关闭
④brush one’s teeth 刷牙
⑤what’s more 此外
⑥make a difference to 对……有影响
[高分句型]
①For example, I turn off the lights when I leave the room and I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I feel happy to do these things, because I believe if everyone of us does a little, we will make a difference to our environment. (because引导原因状语从句,if引导条件状语从句)
5.(2024·山东济宁·二模)假定你是李华,你参加了你校开展的主题为“创新体验,快乐成长”的科技节活动。请结合以下图示,用英语给笔友John写一封信,分享此次活动的过程和感受。词数100左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear John,
How is everything going Our school’s science and technology festival was a great success. Let me tell you something about it.
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【答案】例文:
Dear John,
How is everything going Our school’s science and technology festival was a great success. Let me tell you something about it.
The festival took place on January 20th in the school hall. There were many kinds of activities on that day. First, the science teacher gave an interesting speech. He encouraged us to be more active and creative. Then, we had a design competition. Some students’ works were really perfect. After the competition we shared inventions with others.
Students showed talents for science and technology and enjoyed the happiness that they brought them. Also, these activities not only made our school life more colorful but helped us realize the importance of science and technology.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍科技节活动的过程和感受,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍科技节活动的时间、地点和具体的活动;
第三步,介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
Students showed talents for science and technology and enjoyed the happiness that they brought them. (that引导的定语从句)
6.(2024·山东济宁·一模)随着孩子不断长大,很多父母与孩子之间的沟通成为问题。可在孩子们的心里,一定有很多话想跟父母说。假如你是刘欣,请根据以下内容提示给父母写一封信。
内容提示:
1.告诉父母自己三年来的学习情况和收获;
2.和父母说说自己在成长过程中的一些心里话;
3.表达自己对父母的爱,并告诉父母自己会继续努力学习,不让他们担心,做开心的一家人。
要求:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.必须包含所给提示,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4.词数:100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear parents,
I will graduate from junior high school soon, and I’d like to talk about my life and studies in school to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Liu Xin
【答案】例文
Dear parents,
I will graduate from junior high school soon, and I’d like to talk about my life and studies in school to you.
In the past three years, I think I have worked hard and made some good friends, and I am really happy. But there is probably something wrong between us. I know you love me so much, but I also know you may be not interested in some of my hobbies, such as playing basketball, playing the guitar and chatting with my friends. They really waste time, but they are parts of my life. So I hope you can encourage and support me to do something that I like. Now I have already grown up a lot. I will keep on studying hard to get good grades and achieve my dream. Besides, I hope you can spare your time to stay and chat with me, so we can get on better. I love you very much and
I believe we will be a happy family forever.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Liu Xin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,想要和父母谈谈在学校的生活和学习;
第二步,具体阐述自己的学习情况和收获,告诉父母自己的一些心里话及以后会继续努力学习;
第三步,书写结语表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be not interested in不感兴趣
②such as例如
③grown up长大
[高分句型]
①Besides, I hope you can spare your time to stay and chat with me, so we can get on better. (so引导的结果状语从句)
②I love you very much and I believe we will be a happy family forever. (省略that的宾语从句)
7.(2024·山东济宁·一模)当前,我国已经进入了老龄化社会,尊敬老人,关爱老人应从我们身边的小事做起。假如你是李华,李奶奶是你的邻居,她是一位独居老人,上周六,她生病住院了,请以“Could you please help the old woman ”为题,给朋友Mike写一封求助信,请他在本周末给予帮助。
要求:1.须包括以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息;3.100词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Could you please help the old woman
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Could you please help the old woman
Dear Mike,
Grandma Li is an old woman, who lives alone. She is kind to others, so she is greatly respected by neighbors.
Last Saturday, Grandma Li was ill in hospital. Our community volunteers took turns to take care of her. This weekend, it’s my turn, but I have an exam. So there is no one around her. Could you please go to the hospital to visit her with some flowers and fruit In the hospital, you can help the old woman wash clothes, or chat with her. I hope she will be very happy and feel much better with your help.
Hope to get the reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题干中所给得信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出要介绍的主人公李奶奶;
第二步,表明写作目的,请求对方帮助;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be kind to sb对某人友好;
②take turn to do轮流做某事
③take care of照顾
④chat with sb和某人聊天
[高分句型]
①Grandma Li is an old woman, who lives alone. (定语从句)
②She is kind to others, so she is greatly respected by neighbors. (被动语态)
③I hope she will be very happy and feel much better with your help. (宾语从句)
8.(2024·山东济宁·一模)如今社会上越来越多的人喜欢饲养宠物,有些人甚至把养的宠物视为家庭的一名成员。而养宠物也引发了一系列的社会问题,如:咬伤小孩、随地大小便、污染环境等。那么,同学们是怎样看待饲养宠物这一现象的呢?请根据以下提示以 “Pets” 为题写一篇100个词左右的短文,谈谈自己的看法和观点。(首句已给出,不计入总词数)
提示:
1. 宠物是人们的好朋友,能给人带来快乐和温暖,减少孤独;
2. 宠物能帮助人做各种事情;
3. 养宠物浪费时间和金钱;
4. 宠物吵闹,污染环境,危害我们的健康,有的甚至伤人……
5. 你的看法和观点。
参考词汇:
regard as…把……当作……
reduce loneliness 减少孤独
Pets
Nowadays, more and more people like to keep pets. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
要求:
1. 字数100 字左右。短文必须包含要点提示里的所有内容。
2, 开头已给出,不计入总字数。
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。
【答案】例文:
Pets
Nowadays, more and more people like to keep pets. Some of them even regard their pets as one of their family members. They say that pets can help them do some useful things and bring them joy and happiness. I also like pets. Pets are our good friends. But I don’t think it’s good for people to keep so many animals as pets. Why Because too many pets may cause a lot of problems. For example, if there are more pets on the streets, it’s easy for people to get some diseases from them. Sometimes, some pets are dangerous to people. What’s more, keeping pets may cost people lots of time and money.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍越来越多的人喜欢养宠物;
第二步,具体介绍养宠物的好处;
第三步,阐述养宠物的坏处。
[亮点词汇]
①regard as把……当作……
②be good for有益于
③for example例如
④what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①For example, if there are more pets on the streets, it’s easy for people to get some diseases from them. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②What’s more, keeping pets may cost people lots of time and money. (动名词作主语)
9.(2024·山东济宁·一模)爱心和善举犹如一种无形的力量,它能春风化雨,润物无声,凡人小事,感动你我。我们应该尽自己最大的努力帮助他人,帮助他人就是帮助自己。某青少年英语网站开展以“Every Little Action Matters.” (每个小行动都很重要/勿以善小而不为) 为主题的英语征文活动,请你给该网站投稿。内容包括:
(1) 谈谈你对人与人之间互帮互助的看法;
(2) 描述你帮助他人或受人帮助的一次经历与感受;
(3) 呼吁大家互帮互助,传递正能量。
注意:1.须包括以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息;
3.100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数) 。
Every Little Action Matters
There are many kinds of difficulties in our lives which we may not be able to overcome all by ourselves. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Every Little Action Matters
There are many kinds of difficulties in our lives which we may not be able to overcome all by ourselves. It’s necessary for each of us to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble. I always help others, even strangers.
Once I met a foreigner who was looking for a hotel on my way to the library. I showed him the way and took him to the hotel. To my surprise, he thanked me a lot and later we became pen pals. I feel great to help him and extremely grateful that I can develop friendship in this way.
I hope we can all lend a hand to others when they are in trouble.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据所给提示内容讲述要尽力帮助他人。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自己对人与人之间互帮互助的看法;
第二步,描述自己帮助他人的一次经历;
第三步,呼吁大家互相帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①in trouble在困境中
②on my way to在我去……的路上
③to my surprise令我惊讶的是
[高分句型]
①It’s necessary for each of us to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble. (it作形式主语;who引导定语从句)
②I hope we can all lend a hand to others when they are in trouble. (省略that的宾语从句;when引导时间状语从句)
10.(2024·山东济宁·一模)假定你是李华。你的加拿大笔友Chris给你发来邮件,询问在你生活的城市中,你最喜欢什么地方。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件,参考提示向他介绍这个地方,谈谈你经常在那里做什么,以及你喜欢它的理由。
提示词语:park, beautiful, walk, read, relax
提示问题:
What is your favorite place Please describe it.
What do you often do there
Why do you like it
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【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to tell you about my favorite place. It is a beautiful park near my home with many trees and flowers. There is also a small lake in it.
I often go to the park after supper to take a walk or run around the lake with my parents. Sometimes I play sports with my friends at the weekend. What I like most is to bring a book and read under a tree. Whenever I go, I always have a great time there.
I like the park very much because I feel relaxed each time I go there. Meanwhile, I can enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful environment there.
Could you please tell me about your favorite place
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢的地方、在那里做什么及原因;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk散步
②play sports运动
③have a great time玩得很开心
④meanwhile同时
[高分句型]
What I like most is to bring a book and read under a tree.(what引导主语从句)
11.(2024·山东济宁·一模)随着校园 “快乐生活,快乐学习” 活动的开展,同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好,把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学,你想做一个快乐的人吗?请你以 “How to Be a Happy Student” 为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1.根据下面的图文信息,选择至少两个方面的内容行文,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息;
3.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,条理清楚;
4.词数不少于100词。
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【答案】One possible version:
How to Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to live a happy life. What should we do to be happy Here are my ideas.
First, good health is the most important of all. So we should exercise often. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play basketball after school. Doing sports is good for our physical and mental health. Second, we should develop some good hobbies. In our free time, we can spend more time reading books we like. We can learn to sing to relax ourselves. We can also travel around to enjoy the beauty of nature. Third, we should be in good moods. We need to love our life and try to be active. We should take an active part in all kinds of activities. And we need to get along well with others. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers or friends. Last but not least, it’s necessary for us to form good habits. We need to have a balanced diet. We should not only eat more fruits and vegetables, but also avoid eating too much junk food. Meanwhile, we need to have enough sleep every day.
In a word, if we do so, I believe we’ll be a happy student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要求已给出,考生注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用问句引出话题——如何才能成为一名快乐的学生;
第二步,从健康、爱好、心情及习惯四个方面表述如何才能快乐;
第三步,书写结语,对文章做出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有益
②learn to do学习做某事
③get along well with与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
① When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers or friends.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② I believe we’ll be a happy student.(省略that的宾语从句)
12.(2024·山东济宁·一模)运动可以让我们增强体质(improve health),树立信心(build up confidence),享受乐趣,获得健康,青少年应该积极参与体育运动。某报刊英语专栏以“Together for a Healthy Future”为题向中学生开展征文活动。请结合自身实际,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
要点:你的运动习惯、经历、运动对你的影响……
要求:1. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.80~100 词。
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【答案】例文
As we all know, doing sports can make us strong and healthy.
Last term, one of my friends invited me to join his basketball team. To be honest, I was not good at playing basketball at that time. But he told me not to be worried and taught me how to play in person. Gradually, I got much pleasure from this exiting sport.
As you can see, doing sports has influenced me a lot. Firstly, it greatly improved my physical health. Secondly, I have made a lot of new friends who share the same interest with me.
Thanks to sports, my life has been so colorful and meaningful. Let’s exercise together for a healthy future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的相关要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,强调运动的重要性;
第二步,结合自身经历,告诉大家运动带给自己的影响;
第三步,号召大家一起做运动,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①to be honest老实说
②in person亲自
[高分句型]
①As we all know, doing sports can make us strong and healthy.(动名词作主语)
②Secondly, I have made a lot of new friends who share the same interest with me.(定语从句)
13.(2024·山东济宁·一模)某报社英文专栏组织初三学子开展“我想对你说”主题征文活动,这句话或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”或许是对老师、同学的一句“谢谢您”或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“I want to say ______ to ______ ” 补充完整,并以此为题写一篇不少于100 词的短文。
要点:
1. 阐述你说这句话的原因或描述背后发生的故事;
2. 谈谈你的感受。
I want to say ________ to ________
How time flies! My junior school life will come to an end. When I look back at those days, I want to say
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【答案】例文
I want to to say sorry to my friend
How time flies! My junior school life will come to an end. When I look back at those days, I want to say sorry to my friend for what I did on that April Fool’s Day.
I remember I’d spent days planning those jokes. As soon as I saw my friend in the classroom, I went all out to surprise him. However, as the day went on, I noticed his smile disappearing. All of a sudden, I realized I went
too far. I felt so regretful as I saw sadness in his eyes. Unfortunately, I didn’t chose to face my mistake. Since then, our relationship has gone from bad to worse.
Now I’ve come to understand the importance of respect in any kind of humor between friends. I hope he can forgive me for what I did.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:本文时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己想说的话以及原因”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍自己想表达的是抱歉;
第二步,描述事件的经过,自己想道歉的原因;
第三步,表达自己的感受,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①say sorry to对……说抱歉
②all of a sudden突然地
[高分句型]
①As soon as I saw my friend in the classroom, I went all out to surprise him.(as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope he can forgive me for what I did.(省略引导词that的宾语从句)
14.(2024·山东济宁·一模) 初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你是否有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?假定你是李华,你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件,题为“写给自己的一封信”,请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
注意:
1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;稿件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
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Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life. Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you even lacked courage to ask the teachers questions about learning. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you’ve become more confident and outgoing. Do you still remember the quarrel with your best friend Sometimes silence causes misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:根据实际情况灵活运用时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意要按照题干要求,适当添加细节,使作文内容意思完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍即将告别初中生活;
第二步,根据所给图片提示,描述初中三年里难忘的回忆;
第三步,描述自己的感受,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of 在……的帮助下
②quarrel with 和……争吵
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody. (祈使句+and/or+陈述句)
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (定语从句)
15.(2023九年级·全国·专题练习)劳动(Labor)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》,从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中,你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能,比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作等。请你结合自身实际,以“Labor makes me a better person”为题,根据以下要点和要求,写一篇英语短文。
要点:
(1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么?
(2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处?
(3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能?
要求:
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。
(2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。
(3) 词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking. I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking. I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me. In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以“Labor makes me a better person”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么;
第二步,介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处;
第三步,介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②on weekends在周末
③take good care of照顾好
④In the future在未来
[高分句型]
①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
16.(2024·山东济宁·一模)寓意深远的格言不仅丰富我们的生活,同时也会激励我们努力拼搏从而实现我们的梦想。学校“英语之声”栏目正在举办以“My favorite saying”为题的征文活动,请阐述下面的这句格言的意义并结合自己的经历说一下自己的感悟。(100词左右)
Where there is a will, there is a way.(有志者事竟成)
My favorite saying
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【答案】例文
My favorite saying
My favorite saying is “Where there is a will, there is a way.” It has been encouraging me for a long time. Whenever I see the saying, I can’t help thinking of Lily, one of my best friends in my primary school and she’s also my deskmate at Grade Five. At that time, I found math was so difficult that I even wanted to give up. However, Lily wrote the saying on my notebook and encouraged me to believe myself and set goals to try my best to learn math. And she also helped me with it whenever I had some problems. With her encouragement and help, my math was getting better and better. I am even really good at it now.
Thanks for Lily and the saying, I have been a better myself!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:本文主要介绍自己最喜欢的格言,并结合自己的经历介绍自己的感悟,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的格言以及意义;
第二步,介绍自己的经历;
第三步,介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t help doing sth.忍不住做某事
②give up放弃
③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Whenever I see the saying, I can’t help thinking of Lily, one of my best friends in my primary school and she’s also my deskmate at Grade Five. (whenever引导的时间状语从句)
②I found math was so difficult that I even wanted to give up. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
17.(2024·山东济宁·一模)根据相关研究预测,如果缺乏有效干预措施,到2025年中国将有5000万超重儿童。假如你是学校英语协会的一名小记者,请针对这一问题,提出你的建议。根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1.我国青少年肥胖问题日益严重;
2.导致青少年肥胖的主要原因:吃太多的垃圾食品、不运动……
3.建议:……
要求:
1. 须包括以上所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息;
3. 100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn’t done.
【答案】例文:
A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn’t done.
In China, the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they hardly exercise.
How should we solve the problem Firstly, children must have healthy eating habits. They should eat more fruit and vegetables. Meanwhile, they shouldn’t eat too much meat or junk food. Secondly, they should often
exercise. It’ll make them healthy and feel good. Finally, keep some good living habits such as getting up early and going to bed early.
In a word, healthy eating, proper exercise and good living habits can keep children from getting fatter.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中建议部分需要补充的内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题。介绍青少年肥胖问题日益严重(开头已给出);
第二步,具体阐述内容。从“导致青少年肥胖的原因”和“解决肥胖问题的建议”两个方面进行叙述;
第三步,书写结语。健康的饮食、适当的运动和良好的生活习惯可以防止青少年变胖。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②make sb. adj.使某人……
③such as例如
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn’t done.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②In China, the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they hardly exercise.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③Finally, keep some good living habits such as getting up early and going to bed early.(祈使句肯定形式,用于提建议)
18.(2024·山东济宁·一模)当今社会,很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱,导致当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此,对孩子 们来说,学会自立相当重要。请根据以上所述,结合表格所提供的图片及文字信息,以“Learn to Be Independent”为题写一篇100词左右的短文。
社会 现象
你的 观点 ◆家长应相信孩子,不要包办一切; ◆家长应提出合理建议,让孩子自己作决定 ; ◆…… ◆孩子不要过度依赖父母,学做家务 ◆照顾自己;勇于面对并解决困难 ; ◆……
要求:
1. 语言流畅,层次清晰,内容包括以上信息,可适当发挥。
2. 词数80-100词,书写规范,卷面整洁。
3. 文中不能出现本人的学校名称和姓名。
Learn to Be Independent
Nowadays, many children are treated as “little emperors” at home.
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【答案】例文:
Learn to Be Independent
Nowadays, many children are treated as “little emperors” at home. They seldom help parents do chores on weekdays. When they meet problems, they don’t know what to do.
In my opinion, first of all, parents should believe their children instead of doing everything for them. On the one hand, parents should give them proper suggestions, and give them more chances to make their own decisions. On the other hand, children shouldn’t depend on their parents too much. They should learn to do housework, and look after themselves well. Besides, teenagers should learn to face challenges bravely. No matter what difficulties
they come meet, they should never give up.
All in all, it’s very important for children to learn to be independent.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据图片内容,引出主题;
第二步,介绍你的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①do chores做家务
②instead of而不是
③depend on依赖
[高分句型]
When they meet problems, they don’t know what to do.(when引导的时间状语从句)
19.(2024·山东济宁·一模)学校公众号发起了主题为“应该在小组学习还是独自学习”的讨论。请仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示,并结合自己的经验写一篇短文。
Opinions Reasons Study in groups Study alone
Reason 1 help and learn from each other think independently
Reason 2 teamwork ability selflearning ability
Reason 3 … …
提示:1.Which way would you like to choose
2.Why do you choose it
注意:1.短文须包括表格中所给的全部信息和提示中的两个要点, 可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、 校名和人名;
3.词数80个左右(开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。
As for me, I prefer
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【答案】高分范文1:
As for me, I prefer to study in groups. I think it is more helpful for me. Here are some reasons why I prefer to study in groups.
Firstly, group study allows me to exchange ideas and knowledge with others, so I can learn from them. For example, if I have some difficulties, I can ask for their opinions. Secondly, I can improve my teamwork ability in this way. Thirdly, I can make more friends with other students and develop a good relationship with my classmates.
In a word, I think studying in groups can greatly improve my performance and efficiency.
高分范文2:
As for me, I prefer to study alone. In my opinion, studying alone is better than studying in groups. Here are some reasons why I choose it.
First of all, I can think independently. I am required to solve problems without depending on the help of others. Secondly, I can improve selflearning ability. When studying alone, I can learn about my strengths and weaknesses so that I can improve my study habits to suit my own condition. Moreover, I can focus on my study and save time when I study alone.
In all, I think studying alone is more helpful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏表格中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我更喜欢小组学习”来引出下文中对小组学习的好处的介绍;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“互帮互助、团队写作能力和交友”三方面入手,重点介绍小组学习的好处;
③第三步,书写结语。总结自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb to do sth 让某人做某事
②learn from sb 向某人学习
③for example 例如
④ask for 询问
⑤in a word 总之,简言之
[高分句型]
①I think it is more helpful for me.(宾语从句)
②For example, if I have some difficulties, I can ask for their opinions.(if引导的条件状语从句)