书面表达35篇
1.学校广播站正在征稿,请按以下要求用英文写一篇广播稿。
要求 :(1)描述三年中令你难忘的一节课(包括这节课中令你难忘的活动、事件发生的过程);
(2)谈谈你的感受或评价。
注意: (1)60词左右; (2)文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
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【答案】
An Unforgettable Lesson
I’ve had many lessons in my school life. The most unforgettable is the one that was given by an American young man.
It was on Tuesday morning in March. A sunny young man came into our classroom, with a big smile on his face. He greeted us in English and then began his class. He was not serious at all. During his class, he neither taught us English grammar rules nor asked us to do lots of written exercises. He just played games with us, taught us several English songs and helped us act out a conversation. When it was my turn to show, I was too nervous to say a word. He smiled at me and told me I could do it. With his help, I played the conversation with my partner at last. I was really encouraged. He taught me the most important lesson of my life: to believe in myself.
Happy time always flies! The class was over. We took a photo with him in the classroom. This lesson was quite different from those we had before. I will never forget his smile, his songs and everything he had done in his class.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇广播稿;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述最难忘的一课是什么;
第二步,具体阐述令你难忘的人、活动以及事件发生的过程;
第三步,阐述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①①neither...nor...两者都不
②be different from不同于
③not...at all一点也不
④④at last最后
[高分句型]
①When it was my turn to show, I was too nervous to say a word. (when引导时间状语从句)
2.(2024·河北承德·二模)助人为乐是中国的传统美德 (virtue)。每一个人都有遇到困难需要帮忙的时候,每个人也可以献出爱心,帮助他人。假如你们班要召开主题为:Pleasure in helping others (助人为乐) 的主题班会,请从以下几个方面谈谈你的看法。
提示:
(1)Why help others
(2)How do you provide help to others in life (give 1-2 short examples)
(3)Give your views.
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Pleasure in helping others
Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Pleasure in helping others
Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. Every one needs help, and everyone can help others. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it’s necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. I always try my best to help others, especially when they need help. For example, my deskmate is not good at math, and I often help him to solve the difficult math problems. I sometimes help the students who are on duty clean the floor. For another example, once when I was walking in the street, I found an old man who is blind was crossing the road himself. So I ran to him and help him go across the road safely.
In my opinion, helping others is not only a traditional virtue, but also a pleasant thing. There is a saying that goes like this: The meaning of life is about helping others live a better life. If everyone can help each other, the world will be full of love.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍我们为什么要帮助别人;
第二步,结合实例介绍自己是如何帮助别人的;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②a lot of许多
③for example例如
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.(动名词作主语)
②So it’s necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.(动词不定式作主语;定语从句)
③If everyone can help each other, the world will be full of love.(if引导的条件状语从句)
3.(2024·河北保定·一模)“这么近,那么美,周末到河北!”已经成为河北的金字招牌。假如英语课上老师要求同学们介绍自己的家乡河北,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,推荐大家来河北游玩。
提示:(1)Where is Hebei
(2)Where can people go for a visit What can people do there
(3)What special foods can people enjoy
注意:(1)短文须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:Chengde Mountain Resort (承德避暑山庄), Zhaozhou Bridge, beaches in Qinhuangdao, ski resort in Zhangjiakou (张家口滑雪场)
Hello, everyone. I want to introduce my hometown Hebei. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So near! So beautiful! Welcome to Hebei on weekends.
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I want to introduce my hometown Hebei.
Hebei is to the north of the Yellow River and to the east of the TaihangMountains. It has a population of about 75 million. Its capital city is Shijiazhuang. There are many places of interest in my hometown,such as Chengde Mountain Resort, Zhaozhou Bridge, beaches in Qinhuangdao and ski resort in Zhangjiakou. You can visit the places where the ancient emperor have been. Besides, relaxing on the beaches is also a good choice. Of course you can also enjoy skiing here. There are also many kinds of delicious local foods in my hometown such as meat pie and smoked meat. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time travelling here.
So near! So beautiful! Welcome to Hebei on weekends.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文写作;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时;
③ 提示:写作主题已给出,写作时注意围绕提示展开,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,寒暄并引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍河北的地理位置、景点、人们可以做的事以及美食;
第三步,书写结语,表达欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
① such as例如
② of course当然
③ enjoy doing享受某事
④ many kinds of许多种类的
[高分句型]
①You can visit the places where the ancient emperor have been. (定语从句)
② I’m sure you will have a wonderful time travelling here. (宾语从句)
4.(2024·河北邯郸·一模)假如你是 Tom,中考马上结束,某网站委托你做一项关于你校初三学生暑期技能学习计划的问卷调查。请根据下列图表中的数据,用英语写一篇调查报告,并谈谈你的计划及看法。
学做美食 学做手工 学会游泳 学一门乐器 其他
35% 25% 20% 15% 10%
参考词汇:做传统手工 make traditional handicrafts
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【答案】例文
An English website invited me to do a survey about what skills students of Grade 9 in our school will learn in the coming summer vacation. Here are the results. Thirty-five percent of the students plan to learn how to cook. Twenty-five percent of the students are going to learn how to make traditional handicrafts. Twenty percent of them plan to learn swimming. Fifteen percent of them plan to learn a musical instrument. Ten percent of them plan to do other things. I’m going to be a volunteer to teach the children English in the countryside. I think we should do what we can to help people in need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据图表介绍学生们暑期要学习的技能和所占比例,注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,点出本文是关于初三学生暑期技能学习计划的问卷调查报告;
第二步,参照图表,具体介绍学生们暑期要学习的技能和所占比例;
第三步,谈谈自己的计划及看法。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth. 计划做某事
②make traditional handicrafts 做传统手工
③in need 需要帮助的
[高分句型]
①Thirty-five percent of the students plan to learn how to cook. (疑问词+不定式)
② I think we should do what we can to help people in need.(what引导的宾语从句)
5.(2024·河北邢台·二模)王梅的英国朋友 Jenny去到了一个新学校,遇到了一些问题,她向王梅寻求帮助。下面是 Jenny发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容,以王梅的名义回复。
I have some problems now. I have been in my new school for one month, but I haven’t made any friends. And I also have some trouble with my schoolwork. I don’t know what to do. Can you give me some suggestions
注意:
(1)针对 Jenny的问题,给出合理的建议,可适当发挥。
(2)回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you. Don’t worry. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Mei
【答案】例文
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you. Don’t worry. I can give you some suggestions on how to solve the problems.
To make friends, I think you can communicate with your classmates more often to let them get to know you. What’s more, join a club or take part in some activities. They are good ways to know more students and make friends with them.
As for schoolwork, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. It can not only help you solve your problems but also help you get closer to your classmates and teachers. In addition, it’s best to make a plan before
studying because it can help you make full use of your time.
I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是封电子邮件;
②时态:本文时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏邮件中需要回答的两个问题,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述回信内容关于如何解决问题的建议;
第二步,关于交朋友和学业的建议;
第三步,结束语,希望建议有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
① What’s more此外;
②not only...but also...不仅……而且
③ In addition除此之外
[高分句型]
①In addition, it’s best to make a plan before studying because it can help you make full use of your time. (原因状语从句)
② I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.(宾语从句)
6.(2024·河北邯郸·二模)春天是万物复苏的季节,各个学校都组织学生参加春游,九年级的学生是否也应该参与其中?同学们在英语课堂上展开了热烈地讨论!
Pros(正方):relax;independent(独立的);exercise...
Cons(反方):exams;tired;dangerous...
提示:1.选择你的观点。(We should/shouldn’t...)
2.并阐述理由。(至少三点)
要求:1.文章中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
2.字数80词左右,短文开头不计入总词数。
Spring is coming. There is a spring outing activity in our school.
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【答案】例文
Spring is coming. There is a spring outing activity in our school. In my opinion, we should take part in the spring outing activity.
Firstly, given short breaks from schoolwork, we can relax ourselves. Long-time study will only make us tired and stressed. Secondly, it is also a good chance for us to learn how to take care of ourselves. Thirdly, we can be more connected to both our teachers and our classmates. We may understand each other better through this trip. Finally, the last school trip for us could be our everlasting memory.
In a word, we should go and have fun!
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:采用“一般现在时” ;
③提示:要求包含所有要点提示,内容完整,句子衔接自然,注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述自己的观点;
第二步,阐述自己的理由;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②take part in参加
③connect...to...将……和……联系
[高分句型]
Secondly, it is also a good chance for us to learn how to take care of ourselves.(it作形式主语)
7.(2024·河北沧州·一模)习主席时刻关心青少年的成长,强调要培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。作为新时代青少年中的一员,未来属于我们,希望寄予我们,奋斗的青春更美丽。请你根据下面的思维导图,以“How to Make Myself Better”为题,谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
要求:
1.语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
2.文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3.80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to Make Myself Better
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
How to Make Myself Better
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better.
First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I’ll not be afraid to face challenges
anymore and try my best to solve the problems. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people.
By doing these, I will make myself better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的。点出我们需要塑造更好的自己;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“生活方式、关系、学习”等角度具体阐述我们应当怎么做;
第三步,书写结语。再次点题。
[亮点词汇]
①it is important to do sth做某事是重要的
②not... any more不再
③try one’s best to do尽全力做某事
[高分句型]
①I’ll also do what I can to help other people.(宾语从句)
②By doing these, I will make myself better and better.(比较级+比较级“越来越……”)
8.(22-23九年级上·浙江台州·期末)随着我们国家国际影响力的提升,越来越多的外国人对中国非常感兴趣,包括你的外国朋友Tim。他给你写了一封邮件,请根据邮件内容给他回信。
Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going I’d like to share a piece of exciting news with you. My family plan to take a trip to China next year. Isn’t that amazing In order to get myself prepared for the trip, I’m learning Chinese now. However, I find it’s not easy. Can you give me some advice Also, can you tell me some Chinese customs Many thanks! Yours, Tim
要求:1. 应包含邮件中的所有要点,可适当进行拓展;
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3. 词数:80-100(短文开头已给出,仅供选择使用,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tim,
I’m really glad to know that you’re coming to China next year. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tim,
I’m really glad to know that you’re coming to China next year. Here I’d like to provide you with some suggestions.
First of all, if you want to learn Chinese well, it’s a good idea to learn Chinese songs. By doing so you can remember Chinese words more easily. Besides, practice makes perfect. You’d better find more chances to talk with others in Chinese.
As for the Chinese customs, people are supposed to shake hands when they meet for the first time. Also, giving gifts and treating people to dinner is a common practice, especially during festival days.
Hope my suggestions can be helpful.
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏邮件问题,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题。然后建议;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。包括学中文的建议和中国习俗;
第三步,书写结语。期待自己的建议有用。
[亮点词汇]
① provide sb. with sth.提供某人某物
② by doing通过做某事
③ chance to do sth.做某事的机会
④ as for至于
⑤ be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
⑥ Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧
[高分句型]
① As for the Chinese customs, people are supposed to shake hands when they meet for the first time.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② Also, giving gifts and treating people to dinner is a common practice, especially during festival days.(动名词作主语)
9.(2024·河北石家庄·一模)假如你是Tony,你的同学Mike上周因病未能来上学,他给你留了言。请你根据留言内容进行回复。
Hi Tony, I was ill because of my bad habits, like eating junk food, never doing sports. … I know you’re always in good health. Can you give me some advice to help me keep healthy
注意:
(1)回复须回答留言所提出的问题,可适当发挥。
(2)回复不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出)
Hi Mike,
I am happy that I can help you.
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I hope you can be better.
Tony
【答案】例文:
Hi Mike,
I am happy that I can help you. As we all know, good habits can help us stay healthy. So firstly, I think you’d better eat more fruits and vegetables often instead of junk food. Secondly, you should exercise more, such as playing basketball or football after school or on weekends with your friends. Lastly, it’s necessary to get enough sleep every day. You’d better not stay up late, it’s harmful to you if you often do so. I’m sure if you have these good habits, you will be in good health.
I hope you can be better.
Tony
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为留言回复;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏留言中给出的关键信息,写短文对留言进行回复。可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,希望能帮到对方;
第二步,给出具体的建议;
第三步,确信如果有好习惯就能保持健康;
第四步,希望对方能更好。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know 众所周知
②instead of 代替,而不是
③stay up late 熬夜
[高分句型]
①Lastly, it’s necessary to get enough sleep every day.(it固定句式)
②You’d better not stay up late, it’s harmful to you if you often do so.(if引导条件状语从句)
10.(2024·河北邯郸·一模)假如你是李涛,你们学校英语社团正在开展以“感恩”为主题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知,并按要求用英语写一篇短文,参加此次活动。
Notice
Dear students,
Mothers play a very important role in our life. Mother’s Day is coming in a month. How will you thank her Please write a short passage about your plan.
Here are some questions to help you.
●What do you want to say to her
●What are you going to do for her (至少三点)
●Why are you going to do these
We are looking forward to your passage.
School English Club
参考词汇:cook a meal, make a gift, take a walk with her, delicious, special, …
要求:(1)短文必须包括所给要点,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4)词数:80词左右(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Mother’s Day is coming in a month. I want to do something meaningful for my mother.
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【答案】例文:
Mother’s Day is coming in a month. I want to do something meaningful for my mother.
First, I will cook a meal for her. My mother is very busy but she often makes delicious food for me. So I want to thank her and let her have a rest. Also, I plan to make a special gift by myself. I think she will like it. Last, I am going to take a walk with her. I can tell her interesting stories to make her happy.
All in all, I really love my mother. And I really want to say, “I love you, mom.”
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据开头,介绍想为母亲做点什么;
第二步,介绍你打算为母亲做什么以及原因;
第三步,最后作小结,介绍想对母亲说的话。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth想要做某事
②have a rest休息
③by oneself独自
④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①My mother is very busy but she often makes delicious food for me.(but连接转折句)
②I can tell her interesting stories to make her happy.(动词不定式作目的状语)
11.(2024·河北石家庄·一模) 和谐是一种美德(virtue),和谐社会由一个个和谐的家庭构成。构建和谐家庭是我们每个人的贵任。和谐的家庭给予我们精神支持,并使我们倍感幸福。假如你是李华,你的家被社区评为 ”和谐家庭”。请你用英语写一篇短文,给某英文网站投稿,谈谈你的和谐家庭是什么样子,以及为使家庭和谐你做了些什么。
提示:1. What’s your harmonious family like
2. What did you do for your family
3. … (适当发挥)
要求:1. 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不要出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数:80个左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Everyone wants to live in a harmonious family.
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【答案】例文:
Everyone wants to live in harmonious family. I live in a harmonious family full of laughter. Each of the family members gets on well with each other. We often sit together to share our problems and happiness and everyone feels supported and relaxed at home.
As for me, I respect and love my parents. When I’m at school, I always study hard and try not to make my parents worried about my schoolwork. When I’m at home, I often help them with some housework, so they can have more time to do what they love. When my sister is in trouble, I usually try my best to help her.
I love my harmonious family and feel comfortable at home. I think everyone should take responsibility to create a harmonious family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容谈谈你的和谐家庭是什么样子,为使家庭和谐你做了些什么。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你的和谐家庭是什么样子;
第二步,介绍为使家庭和谐你做了些什么;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②get on well with和谐相处
③as for至于
④in trouble陷入麻烦
[高分句型]
①When I’m at school, I always study hard and try not to make my parents worried about my schoolwork. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think everyone should take responsibility to create a harmonious family. (宾语从句)
12.(2024·河北邯郸·一模)假如你叫李华,你们班将在今年暑假参加以“亲近大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营。其中包括小组自由活动。请根据下面你设计的小组活动方案写一封电子邮件,发给交换生Mike,告知Mike你所设计的计划。
Morning climb mountains
Noon picnic singing, dancing, tell stories
Afternoon pick fruits
要求:
(1)电子邮件包含计划中所有的活动,并给出理由;
(2)邮件不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)词数80左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group.
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We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe
we’ll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group.
First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. It’s also a great way to improve our physical fitness. At noon, we’ll have a picnic. We can share our food. We can enjoy ourselves by singing dancing and telling stories. We can develop our English speaking and communication skills. In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.
We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we’ll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息,从上午、中午和下午三个时间段来指定夏令营活动计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,指定夏令营计划;
第二步,详述自己的计划;
第三步,收尾,相信会玩得愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②enjoy oneself 玩得愉快
③each other 彼此,相互
[高分句型]
①First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.(so that引导目的状语从句)
②In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
13.(2024·河北·一模)假如你叫李华,你的加拿大朋友Mike给你发来了电子邮件,请根据邮件的内容回复。
Dear Li Hua, You know I like Chinese culture very much. I plan to travel to China this summer holiday. I’m learning Chinese now, but I can’t do it well. Can you give me some advice Yours, Mike
注意:(1)邮件中必须包含提示中的要点,可适当发挥。
(2)邮件中不得出现真实的地名,校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mike,
I am very glad to know that you are learning Chinese now. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to seeing you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I am very glad to know that you are learning Chinese now. Let me give you some advice on how to learn it well.
First, you should read books or watch programs about Chinese culture. They can help you understand
Chinese better. Second, you should speak Chinese as much as possible. There are different dialects in many cities. Talking to local people can improve your speaking skills. Last but not least, take notes when you learn some new words and review them. I think these suggestions can help you.
Look forward to seeing you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍学习汉语的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①as much as possible尽可能多
②take notes记笔记
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Let me give you some advice on how to learn it well.(祈使句)
②There are different dialects in many cities.(there be句型)
14.(2024·河北廊坊·一模)你的朋友Peter在微信中和你谈到他最近经历的一件令他沮丧的事情,请你根据下面所给内容,回复他的信息。
注意:
(1)回答Peter的两个问题,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
You know, I can’t sleep well these days. I lost the soccer game. All my teammates will probably never let
me play again. My coach might kick me off the team. I think it’s all my fault. How can I face them again What should I do now
I’m sorry to hear that. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I’m sorry to hear that. In fact, it’s common to win and lose games. You don’t have to blame yourself too much. If it was your mistake that caused the game to be lost, you can formally apologize to your teammates and coach. I’m sure they’ll understand. You need to cheer yourself up and summarize what you didn’t do well in the game and correct it. What’s more, you should practice more so that you can try your best in the next competition.
I hope my suggestions are useful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据Peter的烦恼进行写作,考生应注意不要遗漏Peter的两个问题,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,说明比赛输赢是很常见的;
第二步,具体给出建议,告诉Peter应该怎么做;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact事实上
②cheer up振作起来
③what’s more更重要的是
④so that以便
[高分句型]
①If it was your mistake that caused the game to be lost, you can formally apologize to your teammates and coach.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②You need to cheer yourself up and summarize what you didn’t do well in the game and correct it.(what引导的宾语从句)
③What’s more, you should practice more so that you can try your best in the next competition.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
15.(2024·河北廊坊·一模)青少年是国家的希望,少年强则国强。学校英语俱乐部正在就此征文。假如你是魏民,请你写一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈如何成为一名更好的青少年。
文章至少包含以下要点:(1)你认为中国当代青少年应该具备什么品质;
(2)你认为怎么做才能成为更好的青少年。
要求:(1)根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:keep one’s promise遵守诺言;be thankful to sb.对某人心存感激;creative有创造力的;beauty美;nature自然;protect保护;activity 活动
How to Be a Better Teenager
Boys and girls,
My name is Wei Min. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager with you.
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【答案】例文:
How to Be a Better Teenager
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager with you. As a teenager, I think we should be healthy, creative, honest and thankful. The most important thing is that we must love our country and home. How to be a better teenager
Firstly, we should work hard to make our country stronger and stronger. Then we need to keep our promises. What’s more, we should be thankful to those who have helped us. At last, it is helpful to take exercise, which keeps us healthy both physically and mentally.
All in all, if we show our love in our daily life, we can be anyone we want to be. That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍如何成为一个更好的青少年,要适当补充内容,使文章充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,简述当代青少年应具有的品质;
第三步,介绍如何成为一个更好的青少年;
第四步,总结并表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①keep our promises 信守承诺
②be thankful to 对……心存感激
③be helpful to对……有帮助
[高分句型]
①We should be thankful to those who have helped us. (who引导定语从句)
②At last, it is helpful to take exercise, which keeps us healthy both physically and mentally. (which引导的定语从句)
16.(2024·河北保定·一模)中国自古以来就是礼仪之邦,文明礼仪是中华民族的优良传统,是做人的美德,更是一个现代文明人必备的素养。作为新一代的青少年,在学习和生活中,如何提升自身的文明素养?请以“I Am a Student with Good Manners”为题,根据提示内容,用英语写一篇短文。
提示:(1) To be polite, what do you usually do at school
(2) What do you usually do at home
(3) In public, how do you behave politely
要求:(1) 短文须包括提示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计人总词数)。
I Am a Student with Good Manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school,
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【答案】例文
I Am a Student with Good Manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, we should always greet our teachers and classmates with a smile and a hello. I respect my teachers. I am friendly to my classmates and we often help each other.
At home, I respect my parents and our grandparents. Also, I love my family members and do things by myself.
Then, I usually say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, I never talk with food in my mouth.
Besides, I follow the traffic rules when walking or riding. In public, I don’t speak loudly. What’s more, to keep the environment clean, I don’t drop litter everywhere.
As a middle school student, I believe I should do more for our country. So I will work harder to build a bright future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍作为一名中学生,在学习和生活中,如何提升自身的文明素养,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己在学校、在家以及在公共场合是如何做的;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对某人友好
②all the time总是
③in public在公共场合
[高分句型]
①I am friendly to my classmates and we often help each other. (and连接的并列句)
②What’s more, to keep the environment clean, I don’t drop litter everywhere. (动词不定式作目的状语)
③I believe I should do more for our country. (宾语从句)
17.(2024·河北保定·一模)假如你是森和国际学校的李华,你校将举行一场象棋比赛。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一则广播稿,鼓励大家积极参与。
Chinese Chess Competition Time 2:00 p.m.~4:00 p.m. April 21st
Place the school gym
Advantages ◆learn skills
◆…
Website www.
注意:(1)广播稿须包含表格中所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(3)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please A Chinese chess competition will be held from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon in our school gym on April 21st. Everyone is welcome to join in it!
In the competition you can learn chess skills while playing with different players. Besides, it’s a great chance for you to know more about Chinese traditional culture and make more friends. If you are interested in it, please visit www. for more information.
The meaningful and exciting activity is waiting for you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍比赛的时间、地点;
第二步,介绍参加比赛的益处,以及网址。
[亮点词汇]
①are interested in对……感兴趣
②know about了解
[高分句型]
If you are interested in it, please visit www. for more information.(if引导的条件状语从句)
18.(2024·河北衡水·一模)假如你是李华,你的朋友Peter来中国旅游,回国前他给你发了一封邮件,表达想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物的想法。请你根据所给内容,回复邮件。
I am about to go back to my own country. I want to buy a gift for my family that represents Chinese culture, but I don’t know what to buy. Can you give me a recommendation Why do you recommend this gift
注意:
(1)回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题,可适当发挥;
(2)回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture.
I’d love to give you my suggestion about Chinese gifts. From my point of view, paper-cut is a good choice to be special Chinese gifts for your family.
Paper-cuts are usually used to decorate the house. They are put on windows, doors and walls to celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China. People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.
I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据题干中的提示信息介绍一件代表中国文化的礼物,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作方法]
第一步,介绍推荐的礼物是什么;
第二步,介绍这个礼物;
第三步,说明推荐理由。
[亮点词汇]
①from my point of view依我看来
②be used to do被用来做某事
③be seen as被看成
[高分句型 ]
①Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China.(介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.(because引导原因状语从句)
19.(2024·河北唐山·一模)假如你是李华,你的英国好友Tom发来邮件,说下周将作为交换生来你校学习一个学期,希望你帮助他选择一个社团。请从下面三个社团中选择一个并根据表格中的相关信息回复Tom。
ping-pong club the national sport of China, healthy...
Erhu club one traditional Chinese instrument, beautiful sound...
paper-cutting club one of Chinese traditional arts, interesting...
提 示: (1) Which club will you choose for Tom
(2) Why do you choose it
注 意:(1) 回复邮件中须包括提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥。
(2) 回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hi Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are coming to our school to study for a term.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Hi, Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are coming to our school to study for a term. There are many clubs in our school that you may be interested in. But I think ping-pong club is the best one for you. Ping-pong is the national sport of China. Many people can play it. If you master it, you can play ping-pong with your Chinese classmates or people in the park. It’s a good way to communicate with Chinese people. Besides, I know you like sports, and playing ping-pong is healthy. You can have a lot of fun in playing ping-pong.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
LiHua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:从三个俱乐部中选择一个写作,要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先承接开头,介绍学校有很多俱乐部;
第二步,介绍推荐参加俱乐部;
第三步,介绍选择这个俱乐部的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②communicate with沟通
[高分句型]
①If you master it, you can play ping-pong with your Chinese classmates or people in the park.(if引导条件状语从句)
②It’s a good way to communicate with Chinese people.(不定式作定语)
③There are many clubs in our school that you may be interested in.(There be句型)
20.(2024·河北邯郸·一模)每个人在成长的过程中都会遇到困难和麻烦,我们应该积极地解决和处理它们。作为一名中学生,不少同学在学习和生活中也会遇到困惑、烦恼等麻烦事。面对这些麻烦事,聪明的你是怎么解决的呢?请以“That Day, I Solved a Trouble” (那天,我解决了一个麻烦)为题写一篇英语短文,向你校英文专刊投稿。
The following questions are for your reference (参考):
*What trouble did you meet with
*How did you solve the trouble
*What did you learn from this experience
注意:1、内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.词数80个左右 (已给出的开头不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
As a middle school student, I have a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
As a middle school student, I have a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles.
One day, it was my grandma’s eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn’t lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake.
When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them. In our daily life, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己遇到了什么问题;
第二步,具体介绍是如何处理的;
第三步,表达自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be occupied with 忙于做……
②invite sb to do sth 邀请某人做某事
③find fault with sb 挑某人的毛病
④be faced with 面对
[高分句型]
①Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake.(Since引导的原因状语从句)
②When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them.(When引导的时间状语从句)
21.(2024·河北邯郸·一模)纸上得来终觉浅,绝知此事要躬行。在初中三年的学习与生活中,你一定习得了丰富的知识和技能。请你介绍一种知识或技能,并谈谈你是如何在生活中应用的。
请包含一下信息:
1. What kind of knowledge or skill have you learned
2. How did you put it into practice in your daily life
注意:
1.包含所要求信息,可适当发挥。
2.不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3.词数80个左右。
提示词语:computer, helpful, design, webpage, successful
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【答案】例文:
In my middle school life, I have learned a lot of knowledge and skills to prepare me for the future.
One of the most important things I have learned is how to make better use of the computer. This has been very helpful for me in my studies, as well as in my personal life. I learned to use the computer to write stories, make posters, and even design web pages.
I believe the computer skills will be important for my future success.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”;
③提示:文章要点及相关提示词已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇引出话题;
第二步,按照提示的关键词,先说明你学会的技能是如何使用电脑,再说明你是如何把这个技能应用在日常生活中的,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare sb for sth为……做好准备
②be helpful for有助于
[高分句型]
①One of the most important things I have learned is how to make better use of the computer.(省略引导词that引导的定语从句,疑问词+动词不定式作表语)
②I believe the computer skills will be important for my future success.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
22.(2024·河北邯郸·一模)起初是我们造就习惯,后来是习惯造就我们。习惯很小,藏在我们的一举一动、一言一行中;习惯很大,足以改变我们的一生。一个好习惯的形成可以让我们终身受益。请选择所给出图片中的一幅,以“A Good Habit Changes My Life”为题, 写一篇英语短文,谈谈你坚持的这一个好习惯。
提示:
(1)How did you develop the habit
(2)How do you benefit (益处) from the habit
注意:
(1)根据提示及图片写作文, 可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右。
A Good Habit Changes My Life
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【答案】例文
A Good Habit Changes My Life
Good habits can change the life over time. I have a good habit of reading. I didn’t like reading before. But now I insist on reading for an hour every day.
It changed me a lot. I’m very organized in everything I do, because I learned how to deal with things in books. I’m also more patient than before. Through reading, I become better and better. I think reading is important in the whole life for people. It has many advantages. It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent. We can learn more about the world by reading. Besides, it can help us develop the way of thinking. Also, it can make our life more colorful.
Keeping reading every day is a good habit. Let’s start reading now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,参考图片,以“A Good Habit Changes My Life”为题写一篇英语短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍阅读是我的爱好以及如何养成这个习惯;
第二步,说明一下通过阅读,有什么益处。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on坚持
②deal with处理
③not only...but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①I think reading is important in the whole life for people. (宾语从句)
②I’m very organized in everything I do, because I learned how to deal with things in books.(because引导原因状语从句)
23.(2024·河北承德·一模)李平的英国朋友Jack要来中国当交换生,恰好可以一起过中秋节。下面是Jack给他发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容,以李平的名义回复。
注意:
(1)回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的问题,可适当发挥。
(2)回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
I plan to be at your school for the exchange visit next term. And I can spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with you. I’m really excited about it! Well, why am I writing right now I really want to know something about this festival. So, could you introduce it to me
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy to hear from you.
Everything is fine. I’m excited to know that you’ll come to China and we can spend the Mid-Autumn Festival together.
It falls on August 15th in Chinese lunar calendar every year. And it’s a time for the whole family to get together. We usually have a big dinner, admire the moon and share mooncakes. As for the Chinese traditional art forms, paper cutting is one of them. It has been around for over 1500 years. The red paper is cut with scissors and the pictures are usually flowers, animals and things about Chinese history.
Enjoy your stay in China.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据邮件的问题提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己很高兴知道对方会来中国;
第二步,具体描述有关中秋节的事情;
第三步,最后表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① get together聚在一起
② as for至于
[高分句型]
I’m excited to know that you’ll come to China and we can spend the Mid-Autumn Festival together.(宾语从句)
24.(2024·河北张家口·一模)为了帮助学生们在互动与体验中学习英语,学校英语社团准备发起“I am a little teacher”的学习活动,你也将在社团活动中争做小老师。请发挥你的想象,用英文写出你对该活动的看法及计划。
提示:(1)What do you think of this activity
(2)What will you do to be a little teacher
(3)How will you help your classmates if you are a little teacher
要求:(1)短文须包括提示中全部要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
In order to help students to learn English from experiences, our English Club will start a new activity named “I am a little teacher”.
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I think I will be a kind and patient teacher.
【答案】Possible versions
In order to help students to learn English from experiences, our English Club will start a new activity named “I am a little teacher”. I am excited at this activity. I think it is a good chance to learn English from others. So, I want to catch this good opportunity to improve myself.
To be a little teacher, I will work hard and try my best to learn English well.
If I am a little teacher, I will try my best to help my students learn English well. And I’ll get on well with them. No matter what problem they have, I will help them to solve.
I think I will be a kind and patient teacher.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍活动,并表达自己对这个活动的看法;
第二步,介绍自己作为小老师将做什么;
第三步,介绍自己作为小老师,将如何帮助同学;
第四步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事
②get on well with sb. 与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
①I think it is a good chance to learn English from others.(省略that的宾语从句)
② No matter what problem they have, I will help them to solve.(让步状语从句)
25.(2024·河北承德·一模)作为新时代青年中的一员,未来属于我们,希望寄予我们,奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题,谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
提示:(1)Give your suggestions (lifestyle, relationship, study…).
(2)The advantages brought to you.
注意:(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to Make Myself Better
As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better.
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【答案】例文:
How to Make Myself Better
As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better. First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables and get rid of junk food. Also, I shouldn’t be afraid to face challenges. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. I will spend more time staying with them. Last but not least, it’s my responsibility to take care of my parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people.
By doing these things, I will make myself better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中每一项内容,谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的(已给出);
第二步,具体介绍如何提高自己;
第三步,谈谈能带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②get rid of 摆脱
③be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事
④spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事
⑤take care of 照顾
[高分句型]
Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends.(it固定句式)
26.(2024·河北石家庄·一模)某中学生英文报正举办以“做时间的主人,成为更好的自己”为主题的征文活动。以下是约稿信,请阅读内容并根据信件要求写一篇稿子。
Dear students,
We’d like you to share your ideas about time. We all know that we should value the time. But as students, why is it important for us to value the time How do you manage your time in study and life Can you give some advice on it Look forward to hearing from you,
Mr. Editor (编辑).
注意:(1) 稿件需包含约稿信中提及的三个要点,可适当发挥。
(2) 词数80个左右。
Dear my friends
I’d like to share my ideas about time with you.
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【答案】例文
Dear my friends
I’d like to share my ideas about time with you.
Time management plays an important role in our life. It’s necessary for everyone to learn how to manage time well.
I’ve tried different ways to manage my time well since entering middle school. Before I began a day, I would think about my goals and make a list of things I needed to do. Then, I organized my to-do list to make an effective plan for the day. I always spent time doing important tasks first and took advantage of my downtime. By managing my time well, I’ve benefited a lot. Time management allows me to get the most out of each day and has helped me become successful in various areas of my life.
So we need to be the masters of time and become better selves.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:一般过去时、一般现在时、现在完成时;
③ 提示:考生要根据约稿信梳理出写作要点,注意不要遗漏信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“分享一下自己对时间的看法”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“时间的重要性、自己在学习和生活中是如何安排时间的、给出时间管理的建议等”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。发出“做时间的主人,成为更好的自己”的倡议。
[亮点词汇]
① plays an important role in 在……中起重要作用
② make a list 列清单
③ to-do list 待办事项清单
④ make an effective plan 制定有效的计划
⑤ spent time doing 花费时间做……
⑥ took advantage of my downtime 利用我的休息时间
⑦ allows me to 允许我……
[高分句型]
① It’s necessary for everyone to learn how to manage time well.(It作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
② I’ve tried different ways to manage my time well since entering middle school.(动词不定式作目的状语)
③ Before I began a day, I would think about my goals and make a list of things I needed to do.(before引导的时间状语从句;that引导定语从句,that省略)
27.(2024·河北石家庄·一模)《论语》中说: “不学礼,无以立。” 文明礼仪是我们学习、生活的根基,伴随我们成长。作为一名中学生,在学习和生活中,如何提升自身的文明素养的?请以“I am a student with good manners”为题用英语写一篇短文,并表达观点。