2024年中考英语（书面表达）题型突破 （山东济南专用）（含解析）

书面表达20篇
1．（2023·江苏无锡·中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents Can you give me some advice
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with和某人争吵
②care about关心
③take painting lessons上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)
2．（2024·山东济南·二模）随着科技的发展，智能化应用软件如“作业帮”、“小猿搜题”等正被应用于一些学生的课后学习中。上周五的主题班会同学们就此展开了激烈的讨论。请根据表格提示，描述正反两方观点；并表明你的观点, 且陈述理由。
Some think Others think My opinion
1. save much time 2. act like patient teachers …… 1. more screen time 2. be poorer in problem solving …… ……
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Last Friday, we had a discussion on whether the apps like “Zuoyebang” and “Xiaoyuansouti” can truly help us in study.
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【答案】例文
Last Friday, we had a discussion on whether the apps like “Zuoyebang” and “Xiaoyuansouti” can truly help us in study.
Some think we can save much time by using them. Once we have problems, we needn’t take time to look for someone for help. Instead, we can use Apps anytime and anywhere. What’s more, such Apps act like patient teachers and never get fed up with anyone. Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often. Moreover, we might be poorer in problem solving if we rely more on Apps.
After entering junior school, my parents can’t help me with my study any longer. Unlike humans, Apps never get angry with us. So I agree that we can use them for help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表面写作意图；
第二步，介绍正反两方的观点；
第三步，介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①take time to do sth.花时间做某事
②get up with…对……感到厌烦
③not…any longer不再……
[高分句型]
Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often.(省略that的宾语从句；if引导条件状语从句)
3．（2024·山东济南·二模）2023年12月22日，春节被确定为联合国假日，“中国年”升级为“世界年”。为宣传春节，学校英语社团将举行以“Spring Festival in My Heart”为主题的摄影展。请选择一张你拍摄的最能代表春节文化的照片参展，如拜年（My Favourite Visit )、聚会（Get-together )、剪纸（Paper Cutting）等，写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 描述你参展照片的内容；
2. 结合个人春节经历，阐述照片的意义。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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I think the photo named My Favourite Visit is great. It shows two children visiting their grandparents with their parents. The family are wearing new clothes and carrying some nice presents. Everyone looks happy.
Visiting relatives is one of the most important traditions during Spring Festival. It’s my favourite as well. Every Spring Festival, my family pay visits to our relatives. Like the family in the photo, we also prepare presents
that are proper to show our best wishes. During the visits, family members get together and have great fun talking. I always get a hongbao which means lucky money.
Spring Festival is a time for family reunion. The photo best shows the love among family members, so I think it should be in the photo exhibition.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文是推荐一张最能代表春节文化的照片，并结合你的春节经历阐述其意义，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，推荐一张最能代表春节文化的照片，并描述你参展照片的内容；
第二步，结合个人春节经历，阐述照片的意义；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①as well也
②pay visits to拜访
[高分句型]
①Like the family in the photo, we also prepare presents that are proper to show our best wishes. (定语从句 )
②The photo best shows the love among family members, so I think it should be in the photo exhibition. (so连接的并列句；宾语从句)
4．（2024·山东济南·二模）假如你创立了一个充满国潮魅力的服装品牌——“China Heart”，为了向世界宣传这个品牌，吸引更多人的关注和喜爱，你计划以“Touching China Heart”为题，写一篇英语短文发布在社交媒体上。
内容包括：
1.服装的材质及适合的人群；
2.服装设计中的中国元素及其所代表的文化意义；
3.品牌的灵感来源，以及你对中国传统文化的理解。
注意：
1.词数100词；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
单词提示：麻：hemp 纤维：fiber 元素：element
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【答案】例文
Touching China Heart
More and more products made in China are playing an important role in people’s daily lives. And many people are using products made in China. Among these products, I created a Clothing brand—China Heart.
The clothes is made of hemp, so it is comfortable. Though it is not expensive, it is of high quality. It suits people of all ages. It incorporates many traditional elements into it, such as the Chinese twenty-four solar terms. I believe that as Chinese people, we should pass on traditional culture. Chinese culture has a long history and it is broad and profound.
Things made in China have been accepted by people around the world. And I strongly believe things made in China will be more popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要点提示已给出，不要遗漏提示内容，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己的服装品牌。
第二步，介绍服装的材质、适合的人群、其中的中国元素以及灵感来源和自己对中国传统文化的理解；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己对品牌、对国家的信心。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in发挥重要作用
②is made of由……制成
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Though it is not expensive, it is of high quality.（让步状语从句）
②And I strongly believe things made in China will be more popular.（宾语从句）
5．（2024·山东济南·二模）难忘的初中四年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获也有不足，也有对未来的期盼。假如你是李华, 你们学校英语报社近期将举办以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。
内容提示：
1.介绍自己难忘的校园生活；
2.描述对未来的期盼。
注意：
1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】范文：
My Unforgettable Middle School Life
How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and
that made my teachers angry.
Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者的初中生活即将结束；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者介绍自己难忘的校园生活；
第三步，书写结语。作者描述对未来的期盼。
[亮点词汇]
①be grateful to 对……表示感激；
②get on well with sb 与某人相处融洽；
③do well in 在……方面做得好；
④give up 放弃；
⑤used to do sth 过去常常做某事。
[高分句型]
①Here is what I think about myself (表语从句)；
②In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. (not only…but also…结构)
6．（2024·山东济南·一模）你校上周组织学生去附近的河岸清理垃圾，请你为校英语报写一篇报道。内容包括：1、活动介绍：2．活动意义。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】
A Successful Cleanup Activity
Last weekend, a volunteer activity, aimed at cleaning up the river nearby, was organized for students of our school. Early in the morning, we, accompanied by our teachers, arrived at the river with garbage bags in hand. For several hours, we worked in groups, collecting bottles, cans, plastic bags and other garbage along the riverbanks. With our hard work, the river soon returned to its former cleanliness.
By participating in this activity, not only did we contribute to the beautification of the local community, we also gained valuable team-working skills and developed a sense of responsibility towards our environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据要点提示完成写作，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述活动时间、地点以及活动内容；
第二步，阐述活动意义。
[亮点词汇]
①return to恢复
②contribute to致力于
③a sense of responsibility责任感
[高分句型]
①By participating in this activity, not only did we contribute to the beautification of the local community, we also gained valuable team-working skills and developed a sense of responsibility towards our environment.(倒装句)
②With our hard work, the river soon returned to its former cleanliness.(with结构)
7．（2024·山东济南·一模）在我们的初中生活中，同学之间难免发生这样那样的矛盾或问题。应该如何化解矛盾并建立和谐的同学关系呢？假如学校英语报社正在举办以此为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据下
面的要点写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1.你如何认识同学之间的矛盾；提示：矛盾 contradiction
2.同学之间的矛盾如何化解；
3.关于和同学和谐相处，你还有哪些建议？
注意
词数：100 词左右。
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【答案】例文
In our daily life, it is very common for us to have contradiction with classmates. We need to have a good relationship with our classmates. So we must try to deal with the contradiction and work to resume the friendship as soon as possible.
To deal with the contradiction, we need to calm down and talk with each other honestly when we argued with others. Talk about your feeling and explain the situation clearly. A face to face talk can help people forgive each other after an argument. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.
How to get on well with our classmates First, we should be friendly to our classmates. People always like to make friends with kind persons. Second, we should be helpful to our classmates. When friends are in trouble, it is nice of us to help them. And it will enhance our friendship. Finally, we should be positive. When we do something wrong, it is not easy to say sorry first, but it is very important for you to do that.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：考生需注意根据所给的提示要点进行写作，注意合乎情理。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，点明同学之间有矛盾是正常的；
第二步，讲述同学之间的矛盾应该如何化解；
第三步，讲述如何与同学和谐相处。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with解决
②resume恢复；重新开始
③calm down冷静
④argued with sb.和某人争论
⑤get on well with…和……和睦相处
⑥be friendly to sb.对某人友好
[高分句型]
To deal with the contradiction, we need to calm down and talk with each other honestly when we argued with others.(when引导时间状语从句)
8．（2024·山东济南·一模）人生道路崎岖不平，充满荆棘和挑战，但我们最大的敌人不是来自外部的困难，而是我们自己。只有勇于战胜自我，超越自我，我们才能最终获得成功！请以“I once beat myself”为题，写一篇文章。
要点：
1. 记叙你战胜自己的一件事情；
2. 你战胜自己之后的感受；
3. 你对如何战胜自己的建议。
要求：
1. 文中必须包含以上信息，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名，校名等相关信息；
3. 100词左右。
I once beat myself
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【答案】例文
I once beat myself
Once, I faced a difficult challenge that seemed insurmountable.
It was a math problem that had me stumped for days. The numbers and formulas swirled in my head, and I felt overwhelmed. But I refused to give up. I took a deep breath, calmed my mind, and tackled the problem step by step. Finally, I solved it! The feeling of overcoming my own limitations was indescribable. It was a sense of empowerment and accomplishment. I realized that the biggest obstacle in my path was not the external challenges, but my own doubts and fears. To beat oneself, one must believe in oneself. Face challenges head-on, stay calm and focused, and never give up.
Remember, the journey to success is filled with obstacles, but with perseverance and courage, we can overcome them all.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息”中“我战胜自己的事情，战胜后的感受以及提出如何战胜自己的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“有一次，我面临着一个似乎无法克服的艰难挑战。”来引出要重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，包括战胜自己的一件事、战胜后的感受及如何战胜自己的建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“记住，通往成功的旅程充满了障碍，但只要有毅力和勇气，我们就能克服所有障碍。”
[亮点词汇]
① give up 放弃
② step by step 一步一步地
③ believe in 相信
④ be filled with 充满
[高分句型]
① Once, I faced a difficult challenge that seemed insurmountable. (that引导的定语从句)
② I realized that the biggest obstacle in my path was not the external challenges, but my own doubts and fears. (that引导的宾语从句)
9．（2024·山东济南·一模）近年来，环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。请你写一篇演讲稿向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起。为保护环境尽一份力。
措施 1.节约水电； 2.少用塑料袋，不乱扔垃圾； 3.绿色出行，如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等； 4.……
提出希望 ……
注意
(1)100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数：
(2)参考表格提示，可适当增加内容，行文连贯，字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Fellow students ,
The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, we should do something to protect the environment.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Fellow students ,
The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, we should do something to protect the environment.
First, it’s very important to save water and energy in our daily life. Don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room. Second, we are supposed to reuse the plastic bags when shopping. What’s more, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. Third, we’d better walk, ride a bike or take the bus when we go to school or go shopping. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful. How important it is for us to protect the environment! If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better.
Let’s do it together from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意文章必须包括所给提示内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借由说明环境的问题号召大家为环保尽一份力；
第二步，具体阐述保护环境的建议和措施；
第三步，书写结语。希望大家从现在就做起。
[亮点词汇]
①throw rubbish everywhere乱扔垃圾
②daily life日常生活
③turn off关掉
④be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①It’s very important to save water and energy in our daily life.（it固定句型）
②Don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room.（祈使句、when引导时间状语从句）
③If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better.（if引导条件状语从句）
10．（2024·山东济南·一模）读书改变人生，2024年世界读书日的主题是“阅读推动未来”。学校英语社团在社区开展了以People’s Favorite Book-reading Ways为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 描述并评价调查结果；
2. 陈述你的选择并说明理由。
人们最喜欢的阅读方式调查结果（人数百分比）
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
For people, there are many book-reading ways.
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【答案】例文
For people, there are many book-reading ways.
Recently, the school’s English club conducted a survey in the community on the theme of People’s Favorite Book-reading Ways. Different people have different views about them. Now here are the results.
As the e-books become more and more popular, about 51% students like e-books. They like reading on the phone. 21% students like reading online. 18% students like listening to e-books. However, only 10% students like reading a physical book.
In my opinion, both e-books and paper books have advantages and disadvantages. I prefer e-books, because I
can read books on the phone no matter where I am. And I think what we should do is to use e-books wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述并评价调查结果；
第二步，陈述你的选择并说明理由。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion按我的观点
②no matter where无论在哪里
[高分句型]
I prefer e-books, because I can read books on the phone no matter where I am.（because引导原因状语从句）
11．（2023九年级·广东·专题练习） 坚定文化自信，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，做中华文明的传播者是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华，近期，一批外国朋友要到你所在的学校参观访问，请用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍中华优秀传统文化。
内容包括：
1.欢迎朋友们的到来；
2.总体介绍中国传统文化种类多、历史悠久；
3.列举至少两个中国传统文化的例子，可以从其历史、特点、用途、或受欢迎程度等方面具体介绍。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和考生的真实姓名；
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。
Dear friends,
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Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文：
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school and wish you a good time here. Today I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.
There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. They have influenced many people.
Beijing Opera comes first. As one of Chinese national treasures, Beijing Opera comes from “Huiban” and it has three parts, including singing, dancing, and speaking. It’s full of famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.
The next one is about paper cuttings. Paper cuttings are in all kinds of shapes like animals, flowers or characters from Chinese folk stories. During the Spring Festival, paper cuttings are put on windows, doors and walls. Chinese people believe that they are symbols of wishes for good luck.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向外国朋友的到来表示欢迎；
第二步，总体介绍中国传统文化种类多、历史悠久；
第三步，分别具体介绍至少两个中国传统文化的例子；
第四步，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②all kinds of各种各样的
③put on张贴
④symbols of……的象征
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture.（there be句型）
②It’s full of famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.（and连接的并列句）
③Chinese people believe that they are symbols of wishes for good luck.（that引导的宾语从句）
12．（2024·山东济南·一模）勇敢是一种可贵的品质。每个人都应该勇敢地面对困难、挑战新事物。某英文网站正在开展以 “勇往直前”为主题的征文活动。请你以 Braveness Makes a Difference 为题目， 用英文写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1. 谈谈你曾经做过的一件勇敢的事；
2. 谈一下这件事情对你产生的影响。
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2. 100 词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Braveness Makes a Difference
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【答案】例文
Braveness Makes a Difference
Braveness is a valuable quality that can help us overcome many challenges and difficulties in life. It is the courage to face our fears, the determination to push through obstacles. I would like to share one of my experiences.
It was a cold winter morning, and I was standing at the top of a mountain, looking down at the treacherous descent ahead of me. I had come to hike this mountain with my friends, and while they had all made their way down safely, I had frozen in place. Then, I remembered what my grandfather had told me about braveness. He said that braveness wasn’t about being fearless, but about facing our fears and moving forward despite them. So, I took a deep breath, squared my shoulders, and began to carefully pick my way down the mountain. I focused on each step, one by one, and I didn’t look down or ahead, only at the ground in front of me. I kept going, and eventually, I made it down the mountain.
I still feel proud that I finish the trip. Facing bravely makes me want to do everything better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出“勇敢”这一话题；
第二步，具体介绍自己经历；
第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己在这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①look down向下看
②focus on专注于
[高分句型]
①Braveness is a valuable quality that can help us overcome many challenges and difficulties in life.（定语从句）
②Then, I remembered what my grandfather had told me about braveness.（宾语从句）
13．（2024·山东济南·一模）阳光，照亮大地，温暖人心。生活中的阳光，亦是如此。它可能来自父母无微不至的关怀、师长如沐春风的教诲、朋友大公无私的帮助，抑或是陌生人的一个微笑，都会成为你心中平凡而美好的瞬间。这些阳光，让我们在困境中找到希望，在挫折中重新站起，在迷茫中找到方向。正是生活中无处不在的阳光让你感受到生活中的美好和幸福，请以“Sunshine in my life”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点:(1) 是什么事情让你感受到生活是美好的；
(2) 这件事的经过是什么；
(3) 经历了这件事后你的感受是什么。
2. 要求:(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
(2) 词数 100 左右。
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【答案】
例文：
Sunshine in my life
Everyone has different ideas about life. In my opinion, life is beautiful and full of sunshine.
Several weeks ago, one of my classmates Sun was badly ill. He had to be in hospital for a long time. But his family was too poor to afford it. What could we do We decided to collect money for him. Everyone in our class took out our pocket money. Then, we went to the street on Sunday to collect money from others. When we sent all the money to him, he and his parents were deeply moved.
Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky, but we should believe life is beautiful. Help and love will be around us forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：在写作时注意阅读题目要求，学生应根据所给提示并结合事件进行描述，适当使用副词和连词等和一些名言警句来增加亮点，保证条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，生活中感受到温暖的事件；
第三步，书写事后的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion在我看来
②be full of充满
[高分句型]
①When we sent all the money to him, he and his parents were deeply moved. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Then, we went to the street on Sunday to collect money from others. (不定式表目的)
14．（2024·山东济南·一模）教育部提出劳动教育是义务教育的重要组成部分。劳动有助于我们提升生活技能，创造美好生活，也有助于培养我们的精神品质。你校将开展以“劳动最光荣”为主题的英文征文活动，
请你写一篇文章投稿，谈谈你对劳动的看法，平时参与了哪些劳动，有什么收获。
内容包括：
1. What do you think of labor
2. What kind of labor do you often do
3. What have you learned from doing so
参考词汇：labor 劳动；glorious 光荣的
写作要求：
1.文中须包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
3. 表意清晰、流畅，行文连贯，书写规范;
4. 词数100左右;
5. 文章开头第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Labor is a very important part of our life.
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【答案】例文
Labor is a very important part of our life. I think it is very glorious for everyone to take part in labor. At home I often do some chores, such as cleaning the floor, washing the dishes, making the bed, cooking meals and so on. At school, I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides these, I still take an active part in some garbage sorting activities in the community. By doing so, I can not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge. The most important thing is that I improve my life skills for my future. Labor makes me feel very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，谈谈自己对劳动的看法；
第二步，具体介绍自己经常做的劳动；
第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己在劳动中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①The most important thing is that I improve my life skills for my future.（表语从句）
②I think it is very glorious for everyone to take part in labor.（宾语从句）
15．（2024·山东·一模）世界卫生组织和联合国儿童基金会将生活技能(life skills)作为全球青少年儿童发展的重要主题之一。请根据图中提示或自行补充其他生活技能，选择2~4条，写一篇英语短文，描述作为青少年应提高哪些及如何提高自己的生活技能。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文
Life skills are necessary for us. What life skills should we teenagers develop And how Here is my opinion.
Firstly, managing time is a necessary skill for teenagers. We need to learn how to use our time efficiently. This can be achieved by creating a schedule or to-do list, setting goals and deadlines. Secondly, working with others is another important life skill. We need to learn how to communicate effectively, listen actively, and work with others. This can be practiced through group projects, team sports, and volunteering in the community.
In conclusion, developing life skills is important for teenagers to become successful adults. By managing time and working with others, we can prepare ourselves for the challenges of the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍作为青少年应提高哪些及如何提高自己的生活技能。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍作为青少年应提高哪些及如何提高自己的生活技能；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①set goals设置目标
②in conclusion总而言之
③prepare oneself for...使自己做好准备
[高分句型]
Firstly, managing time is a necessary skill for teenagers. (动名词作主语)
16．（2024·山东济南·一模）生活在变化，社会在进步，我们的家乡也越来越好。你学校英语俱乐部本
周日将在你的家乡举办“走进秀美乡村一日游”研学活动。请你以“Changes in My Hometown”为题写一篇英语短文，届时介绍一下你的家乡。
内容提示：
1. 过去几年你家乡的变化；
2. 你的感想和对未来的展望。
写作要求：
1. 100词左右；
2. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名。
I’m glad to hear that a study trip to my hometown will be organized this Sunday.
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【答案】One possible version:
I’m glad to hear that a study trip to my hometown will be organized this Sunday. The past ten years witnessed great changes in my hometown.
In the past, people lived in old and broken houses. But now lines of beautiful tall buildings can be seen everywhere. Besides, there are not only more private cars but also wider streets. The environment around my hometown also takes on a new look. All these surprising changes bring us much convenience and comfort. People are living a much richer and happier life than before.
I am proud of the rapid development of our country. And I am sure that my hometown will be more and more liveable in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表达对在自己家乡举办研学旅行的开心；
第二步，介绍家乡过去和现在的变化对比；
第三步，表达自己的感想以及对家乡未来的展望。
[亮点词汇]
①witness great changes 见证了巨大的变化
②take on a new look 焕然一新
③be proud of 以……为傲
[高分句型]
And I am sure that my hometown will be more and more liveable in the future.（宾语从句）
17．（2024·山东济南·一模）中考即将到来，有一小部分同学感到焦虑。学会放松，保持阳光健康的心态，有助于同学们愉快学习。最近，学校英语广播站举行以“健康成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文参赛。提示如下：
焦虑的表现 无法安心学习、担心成绩……
保持阳光心态 重要性 有益身心，有助于学习……
具体做法 多运动、按时作息、多与他人交流……
要求：1. 必须包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
4. 词数100词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
The high school entrance examination is coming soon, and a small number of students are feeling anxious. They are unable to study with peace of mind and worried about grades. I have a good mind to offer them some advice on how to study effectively. It is important to have a sunny attitude. It is good for our mind and body. It is also helpful for us to study.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure. One way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind. In this way we can memorize things faster and longer. Resting on time is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better. Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study. Keep trying, and we will make it.
I hope all these can benefit them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时为主；
③提示：本文的要点已给出，注意要点的衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述部分学生的焦虑表现；
第二步，讲述要保持阳光心态的的重要性；
第三步，具体建议如何做。
[亮点词汇]
a small number of少量
Not only...but also不仅……而且
effectively有效地
[高分句型]
Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.（定语从句）
Keep trying, and we will make it.（祈使句）
Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind.（not only...but also）
18．（2024·山东济南·一模）假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Mike给你发了一封电子邮件，请认真阅读并用英语回复。
Dear Li Ming, I’m going to China as an exchange student this September. I will spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family. Could you tell me: What is the Mid-Autumn Festival How do you celebrate it What table manners should I pay attention to when I have dinner with them Write soon. Mike
要求：
1. 应回复所有问题，可适当发挥：
2. 词数100 左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数：
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Mike,
It’s fantastic that you will come to China and spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family.
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Enjoy your stay in China.
Li Ming
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
It’s fantastic that you will come to China and spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is on August 15 of the lunar calendar. It is in the middle of the fall of the year, so it is called the Mid-Autumn Festival.
On that day, all our families get together and have a big dinner. We also eat mooncakes and admire the full moon.
As a guest, you must pay enough attention and give proper praise to the host and the hostess when they’re introducing the dishes. Don’t use your chopsticks to pick a dish on the plate everywhere. You’d better keep quiet when having soup.
Enjoy your stay in China.
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：考生应结合迈克的电子邮件梳理出写作要点，注意不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“你能来中国过中秋节真是太棒了”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“名称由来、庆祝方式、餐桌礼仪等”几个方面重点介绍中秋节的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望迈克在中国过得愉快”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① get together 聚在一起
② have a big dinner 吃一顿丰盛的晚餐
③ admire the full moon 赏月
④ pay enough attention to 足够重视……
⑤ give proper praise to 给予适当的表扬
⑥ had better 最好
[高分句型]
① It is in the middle of the fall of the year, so it is called the Mid-Autumn Festival.（so引导结果状语从句）
② As a guest, you must pay enough attention and give proper praise to the host and the hostess when they’re introducing the dishes.（when引导时间状语从句）
③ Don’t use your chopsticks to pick a dish on the plate everywhere.（祈使句）
19．（2024·山东济南·一模）“投我以桃, 报之以李。”感恩他人是中华民族的一种传统美德。Teens 杂志社现为中英文化交流活动征稿。无论是受人之恩还是伸出援手，一定有很多故事令你铭记于心。请用英语完成这篇稿件。
内容包括：
1. 讲述你和他人之间发生的感恩故事；
2. 我们为何要常怀感恩之心？
注意：
1. 词数不少于100词；
2. 文章不得出现真实的人名校名等信息。
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【答案】范文：
No word can describe my thanks to you, my English teacher.
When I first came into the middle school, I was poor at my English. One day, you asked me to go to your office after school. You listened to my problem patiently and encouraged me to keep studying hard. We made a plan for my English study. After that, you started to help me from time to time. Finally, I made great progress in English. I was moved deeply and really encouraged by your teaching style and your kindness. So I achieved much in your class and I developed a deep love for English. I thank you very much for all the help you have given me.
With gratitude, we will have peace of mind, and we want to be close to others to make more friends. What’s more, thanksgiving is a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation and an important part of our traditional culture. So we should always be grateful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者感激的对象——英语老师；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述英语老师在英语学习方面对作者提供帮助的故事；
第三步，书写结语。作者总结人为什么要怀有感恩之心。
[亮点词汇]
①be poor at 不擅长于……；
②encouraged sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事；
③made a plan for… 为……制定计划；
④a deep love for 对……的热爱。
[高分句型]
①When I first came into the middle school, I was poor at my English. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I was moved deeply and really encouraged by your teaching style and your kindness (介词by表方式)；
③So I achieved much in your class and I developed a deep love for English. (and引导并列句)
20．（2024·山东济南·一模）下面这幅漫画呈现了人们对“垃圾”的不同看法。请根据你对漫画的理解，用英语写一篇100 词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述漫画内容；
2. 陈述个人观点。
要求：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文
Nowadays the rubbish we produced every day has become one of the biggest environmental problems. Waste sorting plays an important role in protecting our earth. As we can see in the picture, tons of rubbish not only takes up too much space but also pollutes the environment. Waste sorting is a good way to protect our environment. By separating our trash into different dustbins, we can recycle more and reduce the amount of waste. If we all take part in sorting waste, it can save energy as well as money. So I think everyone is supposed to take an active part in it.
So, let’s start sorting our waste today and make a difference for our planet!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己对处理垃圾的方式的看法”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍处理垃圾的重要性；
第二步，根据图片内容，介绍垃圾分类，以及可以将废物利用；
第三步，号召大家要垃圾分类，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in在……起重要作用
②take up占据
[高分句型]
①If we all take part in sorting waste, it can save energy as well as money.（if引导条件状语从句）
②So I think everyone is supposed to take an active part in it.（宾语从句）