2024年中考英语（书面表达）题型突破 （宁波专用）（含解析）

书面表达13篇
1．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Lee在你学校公众号上了解到你们这学期举行了许多安全教育活动。请你阅读他的邮件与部分活动提示，根据信中内容与实际情况进行回复。
TO LIHUA@
SUBJECT Safety Activities
Hi there, Li Hua!
How’s everything going
Well, I read some articles from your school public account (公众号) and showed interest in the safety activities your school held, so could you introduce two of them And let me know your opinions.
Take care and hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Lee
注意：
1. 词数80—100左右，开头与结尾已给，不计入总词数；
2. 回复须符合要求，包含所提内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Lee,
Glad to receive your e-mail. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about your school activities Could you tell me some Have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你在网上读到一则网名为Flying guy的学生所发布博文，内容如下。请根据博文内容，给博主留言回复。
Help！ Always tired on Monday！
To tell the truth, I am always tired on Monday and don’t feel like taking classes or doing homework. I guess there must be something wrong. Is it because I don’t make good use of my weekends Can anyone share your experience with me and give me some advice to solve the problem
注意：
1）请回复博文中所提及的问题，可适当发挥；
2）回复中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
3）词数：80—100词。
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3．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你叫李华，近日你收到了你的英国笔友Alice发来的电子邮件。请根据邮件内容用英语回复，与她交流自己看法，提出合理的建议，为她排忧解难。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（2）词数80-100。
Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going I’ve been at my new school for a week, but I feel lonely and unhappy. I miss my old friends so much. What’s worse, I even have a headache these days. I can’t sleep well at night. What shall I do Yours, Alice
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）呵护心灵，快乐成长。你校英语报正在举行以“心理健康（mental health）”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息，用英文写一篇倡议书投稿谈谈心理健康的重要性，提出改善建议，并表达你的祝愿。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80—100。倡议书格式和首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Importance ● be connected with physical health
● influence one’s daily life
Ways to improve ● do sports ● build good relationships ● …
My hope ● …
Dear fellow students,
Mental health is important to everyone.
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5．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你是李华，为了提高学生对科学的兴趣，你校上周五在学校体育馆举行了校园科学节活动。你的英国笔友Tom 得知后，发邮件向你咨询科学节相关情况。请你根据邮件内容给他回复 一封邮件，并谈谈你的感受!
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(2)需包含邮件中划线的所有要点提示；
(3)词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(4)参考词汇： attend a science lecture、make science works、give a science speech
To : LiHua@ Subject: Science Festival Dear Li Hua. How is it going You know I am quite interested in science and I think it is important for the development of a
country. Yesterday, I was told that there was a fantastic science festival in your school. Could you please tell me something about it When and where was the festival held Why did your school hold the festival What activities did you take part in Which one was the most interesting to you And how do you like the festival Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Tom
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你是李华，收到加拿大笔友Mike的邮件，请阅读邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
To: lihua@
From: mike2010@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Li Hua， How’s it going I hope everything is OK with you. I hear that your junior high school life is coming to an end. How have you changed since you started junior high Do you have any special memories How do you like your teachers and classmates Looking forward to your reply!Mike
To: mike2010@
From: lihua@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
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7．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）随着科技的发展，智能化应用软件如“作业帮”、”小猿搜题”、“文心一言”等正不断深入教学领域，在赋能教学的同时也不断挑战着我们的认知。上周五的主题班会同学们就此展开了激烈的讨论, 请根据表格提示描述正反两方观点，并表明你站在哪一方，且陈述理由。
Some think Others think My opinion
1. save much time 2. act like patient teachers 1. more screen time 2. be poorer in problem solving ...
注意: (1) 必须包含所有要点，可适当拓展。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
(3) 词数80-100；首句已给，不计入总词数。
Last Friday, we had a heated discussion on whether the Apps like “Zuoyebang”, ”Wenxinyiyan”, and the like can truly help us in study.
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8．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）2024年巴黎奥运会（Paris 2024）志愿者项目的报名通道现已开启! 假如你是李华，请根据下方赛事官方的报名要求，写一篇英语短文作为你的申请信。
PARIS 2024 VOLUNTEER PROGRAMME
Conditions to Be A Volunteer※Be at least 14 years old. ※Speak French or English well. ※Have at least one volunteer experience and tell us about it. ※Tell us what you can do to help. ※Tell us your hope for Paris 2024.
注意：
（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）书信开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Paris 2024,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）初中生活即将结束，你一定参加过各种伴随着你成长的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。请以“My Favorite Club at School”为题，写一篇英文短文，向校刊的School Life栏目投稿，介绍你最喜欢的社团。
注意：(1) 短文必须包括思维导图中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3) 词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in.
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10．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）中国人一直为古代的四大发明感到骄傲。如今，新的四大发明——高铁、电子支付、共享单车、网上购物再次影响着人们的生活，请你写一篇英语短文，向外国友人介绍其中一项你认为最重要的新四大发明并说明理由，帮助外国友人更好地了解中国。
注意：(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等；
(2)词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Now China has once again shown its ability to change the world with its “four great new inventions”.
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11．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假定你是校英文报记者李平。你校以“Fly My English Dream”为主题的英语节在昨天结束。请你写一篇英语短文对此次活动进行报道。
内容包括：
(1)时间和地点；
(2)主要活动；
(3)同学们的反响。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
(2)词数：80—100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
The English Festival Takes Off at Our School
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12．（23-24九年级上·浙江杭州·期末）假设你叫张华，你们班在英语课上讨论了“茶”，请你根据以下思维导图写一封邮件给你的笔友Mike，介绍中国茶。
注意：
1. 邮件必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数80～100。邮件的称谓和署名已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
13．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）良好的时间管理能力能够帮助我们更好地规划生活，使我们的时间得到充分利用，提高学习效率。但现在很多同学无法高效管理时间以致影响了学习。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法。内容提示：
Manage your time well A task that you failed to finish Reasons and results
Your suggestions: 1) keep away from... 2)...
注意：(1)短文必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
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参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Lee,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school held quite a few safety activities this term. Let me tell you two of
them.
First of all, we had the knowledge contest about the drowning prevention. We realized that we shouldn’t swim alone without permission. Besides, what impressed me most was the fire drill. We learned how to run away from danger quickly. In addition, we learned how to put out fire. It was really an unforgettable experience. Besides, we gave some speeches about traffic safety. It was really useful. We must remember to follow traffic rules when we are out.
All those activities not only tell us that we should try our best to protect ourselves, but also remind us that we need to treasure our lives. Stay safe, stay pleased.
How about your school activities Could you tell me some Have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍学校的安全教育活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍学校举办的安全教育活动；
第三步，介绍自己从此活动中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①run away from逃离
②put out扑灭
③try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力去做某事
[高分句型]
①Besides, what impressed me most was the fire drill. (what引导的主语从句)
②All those activities not only tell us that we should try our best to protect ourselves, but also remind us that we need to treasure our lives. (that引导的宾语从句)
2．例文
You are not the only one who feels tired on Monday. I used to have the same problem as you.
I used to play all weekends and had to stay up late to finish my homework. Every Monday I felt tired and it had bad effects on my study. I knew it was time to make a change. So I planned my time carefully and made good use of my weekend. Anyway, don’t play too much on weekends and try to go to bed earlier on Sunday. I hope you will manage time well and keep happy on Monday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出自己与博主有相同的问题；
第二步，叙述出现问题的原因，并提出建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②stay up熬夜
③make good use of好好利用
[高分句型]
①You are not the only one who feels tired on Monday.（who引导的限制性定语从句）
②I hope you will manage time well and keep happy on Monday.（省略that的宾语从句）
3．例文
Dear Alice,
Everything goes well. I’m sorry to hear that you’ve got some trouble these days. It’s normal to feel lonely in a new environment. In fact, it’s a good idea to make some new friends by joining some clubs. There’s no need for you to make many friends as long as they’re good. If you have problems in sleeping well, you should see a doctor in time. Taking the right medicine will also help relieve your headache.
I do hope you’ll feel better soon and I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给邮件提炼出写作要点；考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达关切；
第二步，针对孤独和睡眠问题提出合理的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends交朋友
②as long as只要
③hear from 收到……来信
[高分句型]
If you have problems in sleeping well, you should see a doctor in time.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4．例文：
Dear fellow students,
Mental health is important to everyone. It is closely connected with physical health. Mental health influence everyone’s daily life. There are things we can do to improve mental health.
First, do sports regularly. Exercise can help us relax and improve our ability to cope with stress. Second, we should build good relationships with the people around us. Finally, happiness is important for us too. We should learn to smile and be active. Be happy to be healthy.
I hope we are all mentally healthy and we will have a happy and successful middle school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，要保证语法和单词拼写正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈心理健康的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍如何提高心理健康水平；
第三步，书写结语，谈谈自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life 日常生活
②cope with 处理
[高分句型]
①There are things we can do to improve mental health.（There be句型；省略that定语从句）
②Be happy to be healthy.（祈使句）
5．例文
Dear Tom,
Happy to learn that you want to know about our science festival, I’m writing to share my experience and feelings with you .
To arouse the students’ interest in science, our school held the science festival at the school gym last Friday. Besides attending a science lecture, I also gave a science speech and made some science works. Though I am not good at making works, I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. It was really an unforgettable experience in my school life. And all of us thought highly of this meaningful festival.
How about your school science festival Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：需包含邮件中划线的所有要点，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述写作意图，想介绍科学节分享自己的经验和感受；
第二步，介绍科学节的目的，活动和自己的经验，感受；
第三步，对科学节的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①share…with…和……分享……
②be good at 擅长于
③look forward to盼望
④arouse激起
[高分句型]
①I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. (It作形式宾语)
②Though I am not good at making works, I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. (让步状语从句)
6．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. My life in junior high is colorful and I’ve changed a lot. First, I have become better at solving problems. Besides, I have become more confident. I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates. I’ve made great progress.
The past three years has also left me warm memories. I remember falling down in a running race in Grade 8. My friend helped me stand up and encouraged me to finish the race.
I value my life in junior high!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：根据邮件问题所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的近况；
第二步，介绍上初中以来的变化和特别的记忆；
第三步，书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① be worried that担心
② with the help of在……帮助下
③ encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons.（宾语从句）
7．One possible version:
Last Friday, we had a heated discussion on whether the Apps like “Zuoyebang”, “Wenxinyiyan”, and the like can truly help us in study.
Some think we can save much time by using them. Once we have problems, we needn’t take time to look for someone for help. Instead, we can use Apps anytime and anywhere. What’s more, such Apps act like patient teachers and never get fed up with anyone. Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often. Moreover, we might be poorer in problem solving if we rely more on Apps.
After entering junior school, my parents can’t help me with my study any longer. Unlike humans, Apps never get angry with us. So I agree that we can use them for help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍正反两方的观点；
第三步，介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①save节省
②take time to do sth.花时间做某事
③get fed up with…对……感到厌烦
④screen time屏幕时间
⑤rely on依靠
⑥not…any longer不再……
[高分句型]
Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often.(省略that的宾语从句；if引导条件状语从句)
8．例文：
Dear Paris 2024,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old boy from China. I think I am qualified to be a volunteer for you next summer.
I can speak English very well. I have taken part in several English speech contests in the past three years. Besides, I have some volunteer experiences. For example, I was a volunteer at the 19th Asian Games in 2023. I helped many foreign visitors and athletes. If I become a member of you, I could help organize activities or check tickets.
Last but not least, I sincerely hope that everyone will be able to share exciting moments and unforgettable memories!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“自己补充”内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出请求：希望加入2024年巴黎奥运会（Paris 2024）志愿者；
第二步，具体介绍自己申请加入的目的、原因、优势、打算等内容；
第三步，书写结语，希望能通过申请。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②in the past three years在过去的三年里
③become a member of成为……的成员
④be able to能
[高分句型]
①I think I am qualified to be a volunteer for you next summer.（省略that的宾语从句）
②If I become a member of you, I could help organize activities or check tickets.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③I sincerely hope that everyone will be able to share exciting moments and unforgettable memories!（that引导的宾语从句）
9．例文
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in. There are the Robot Club, the Solar Power Club, the Singing Club and so on. All of them are fun and interesting. My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much.
In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. We often went out to practise our skills. And we showed our photos in the club. I made lots of friends in the club and I also became better at taking photos. It is interesting and exciting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给内容介绍我最喜欢的俱乐部，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍参加的俱乐部以及最喜欢的俱乐部；
第二步，具体介绍自己经常做的活动；
第三步，介绍从俱乐部学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②make lots of friends交许多朋友
[高分句型]
①My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. （“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语）
10．例文：
Now China has once again shown its ability to change the world with its “four great new inventions”. They are high-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping. I think the most important innovation is high-speed railways. Here are my reasons:
Firstly, high-speed railways are safe. They use electronic information to monitor the on-going driving so that they can avoid some terrible things even in case of bad weather. Secondly, the services are wonderful. They use advanced technology to make passengers feel comfortable. Thirdly, they are nearly as fast as planes. The most
important thing is that you don’t have to stay at the station for a long time because high-speed railways are always on time. With high-speed railway, you can go anywhere in China now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要求，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“新四大发明”来引出下文中对高铁的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“更安全、服务好、速度快和准时”四方面入手，重点介绍高铁；
③第三步，书写结语。高铁有利出行。
[亮点词汇]
①so that 以便
②in case of 以防
③on time 准时
[高分句型]
①I think the most important innovation is high-speed railways.（宾语从句）
②They use electronic information to monitor the on-going driving so that they can avoid some terrible things even in case of bad weather.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③The most important thing is that you don’t have to stay at the station for a long time because high-speed railways are always on time.（that引导的表语从句+because引导的原因状语从句）
11．例文
The English Festival Takes Off at Our School
Yesterday afternoon, the English festival themed “Fly My English Dream” was held in the school hall.
The English festival was mainly made up of three parts. It began with a wonderful opening. Next, great performances like singing English songs, lively dancing, gifted instruments playing won the praise and laughter again and again. At last, a fantastic English speech contest was held. Their excellent spoken English and amazing performances set good examples to all of us.
Through the English festival, all of students had a great time. At the same time, it lit the interests and passions of learning English. They promised to make great efforts to learn English better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动时间和地点；
第二步，介绍主要活动内容；
第三步，分享同学们的反响。
[亮点词汇]
①be made up of由……组成
②set examples to sb为某人树立了榜样
[高分句型]
At the same time, it lit the interests and passions of learning English.（并列结构）
12．One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going Recently, our classmates have discussed Chinese tea in English class. I’m writing to share something with you.
Tea was first invented accidentally by Shen Nong. Now it has been so popular in my hometown that almost everyone likes it, because it is good for both health and business. There are different kinds of tea in China. People especially enjoy Longjing Tea which is also the most famous kind. One important thing is that we as a guest are supposed to say thank you when tea is served.
If you want to know more about tea, please come to China to try it yourself. Write soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出要介绍中国茶；
第二步，具体介绍中国茶的相关信息；
第三步，书写结语，邀请对方来中国品茶。
[亮点词汇]
①share...with...和……分享……
②be good for有益于
③both...and...和
④different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①Now it has been so popular in my hometown that almost everyone likes it, (so...that引导结果状语从句)
②People especially enjoy Longjing Tea which is also the most famous kind. (which引导定语从句)
13．例文
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
Last summer vacation, my Chinese teacher asked us to read some classics. I planned to read one book every week. However, I spent too much time chatting with my classmates on WeChat. Then, I had to stay up late to do the task on the last day. But I couldn’t finish it and was punished by the teacher.
I learned my lesson that day and spent the whole night thinking about it. To manage my time well, I should keep away from my phone so that I can put all my efforts into my tasks. I should also make a good study plan and follow it strictly.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作内容包括：自己未能管理好时间的经历和从中学到的教训；经历部分时态是一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，叙述自己时间管理失败的经历；
第二步，表达学到的教训，提出具体建议。
[亮点词汇]
① spend time doing sth花时间做某事
② stay up late熬夜
③ keep away from远离
[高分句型]
① But I couldn’t finish it and was punished by the teacher.（被动语态）
② I should keep away from my phone so that I can put all my efforts into my tasks. （so that引导的结果状语从句）