2024年中考英语（书面表达）题型突破 （杭州专用）（含解析）

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1．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假设你是第五中学的学生，在五一劳动节到来之际，学校英语俱乐部以“How often do you help do chores at home ”为主题就学生在家做家务情况进行了调查。你作为俱乐部的一员，将在下次俱乐部活动上对调查结果进行汇报，请根据下列图表描述学生在家做家务的调查结果，并分析其原因，提出恰当的建议。
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2.词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
Hello, everyone! We asked students of No.5 Middle School about how often they help do chores at home. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! We asked students of No.5 Middle School about how often they help do chores at home. Here are the results.
Good news is that most of the students do chores at least once a week. However, we were surprised to find that a quarter of them never share housework while only 1% do it every day. Students may think they are too tired on weekdays to do chores. Some even think it’s their parents’ job.
But I think everyone should share the work and sometimes we can take some break from schoolwork by
doing chores. So I suggest we should do some basic housework every day, like making our own bed or sweeping the floor.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据下列图表描述学生在家做家务的调查结果，并分析其原因，提出恰当的建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，描述学生在家做家务的调查结果并分析原因；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①at least至少
②be surprised to do做某事很惊讶
③sweep the floor扫地
[高分句型]
①Good news is that most of the students do chores at least once a week. (that引导的表语从句)
②But I think everyone should share the work and sometimes we can take some break from schoolwork by doing chores. (宾语从句)
2．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否想起很多人很多事，有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部向九年级学生征集稿件，题为“给*的一封信”，请你参考以下内容写一封稿件投稿。
内容要点
Person Memories Feelings
myself/parent/teacher/classmate/... 1. have great time/make progress... 2. have trouble/make mistakes… 3. ... sweet/sad/happy thankful/regretful/proud ...
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
2.词数80—100，开头已给出（不计词数）。
A letter to ________
Dear ________,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A letter to myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you don’t even have the courage to ask your teacher about your study. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you have become more confident and outgoing. Do you remember fighting with your best friend Sometimes silence can lead to misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题和收信人；
第二步，具体阐述你对初中生活的回忆；
第三步，说明你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①warm-hearted热心的
②confident自信的
③misunderstanding误解
④unforgettable难忘的
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.（what引导的宾语从句）
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.（强调句）
3．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）英语杂志社Sunday Mail正在开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的英语征文活动。请根据广告中的信息用英语写一篇100 词左右的征文，分享一件你自己认为自豪的事情。开头已给出 (不计词数)。
Articles Wanted
One Thing I’m Proud of
What is the thing you are proud of
When did it happen and what did you do
Why does this thing make you feel proud Or what important lesson did you learn from this thing
Tell us what you think!
Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was still a teenager. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that all the old women’s sons and daughters were far away from her, making their lives in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.
I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit these old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. One of them was so moved that tears fell down. Caring for those around us and passing our happiness to others are what have learnt that day. I made it, and I feel really proud of myself that gave comfort to those who needed most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给广告中的信息完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍事情发生的经过；
第三步，介绍这件事为什么使你感到骄傲或者从中学到什么重要的事情以及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①silently静静地
②have a chat with sb.和某人聊天
③far away from…离……很远
④sympathetic同情的
⑤occur to被想起
[高分句型]
We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
4．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假设你是李华，现以“An unforgettable experience with my family”为题，向你校
英语杂志社“亲子空间”栏目投稿。
注意：
1.包含图中的所有内容，可适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实学校、姓名等信息。
3. 词数：80—100。
An Unforgettable Experience with My Family
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Experience with My Family
Last winter holiday, my family and I had an unforgettable experience. My parents took me to a village for three days.
On the first day, we went to the forest near the village and saw many lovely rabbits and squirrels. The next day, my mother taught me how to make dumplings in a family. She patiently guided me through every step. On the last day, my family went skating on a frozen lake near the village. It’s my first time skating and I’m a little nervous. However, with the help and encouragement of my parents, I slowly got the hang of it. I felt very happy.
This winter holiday has taught me the importance of spending quality time with my family and trying new
things. At the same time, it makes me understand my parents better. I decide to be more helpful and considerate to them in future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在这个难忘的经历中你做了什么；
第二步，具体描述经历和自己感受；
第三步，最后介绍自己学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① a little有点
② the importance of……的重要性
③ make sb do sth使某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It’s my first time skating and I’m a little nervous.（and并列句）
②The next day, my mother taught me how to make dumplings in a family. （“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语）
5．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）你校的结对学校——英国Sunshine School师生团将来你校，学生会提供了活动计划（Plan A和Plan B）表，请你选择其中之一，在英语课上介绍该方案和目的。
Plan A Plan B
Time 2:00 p.m.~5:00 p.m. Friday, May 10th 2:00 p.m.~5:00 p.m. Friday, May 100th
Places the art room & the square the school playground
Activities 1. make kites; 2. fly the kites; 3. … 1. play some games; 2. have a soccer match; 3. …
Purposes communicate with each other; a good way to relax;
enjoy the beautiful sights of the school; … build friendship; …
要求：1. 两个计划中任选其一；
2. 必须包括一个计划中的所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Some teachers and students from our partner school — Sunshine School will visit us on May 10th. I think Plan ________ is more suitable for them.
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【答案】例文1：
Some teachers and students from our partner school — Sunshine School will visit us on May 10th. I think Plan A is more suitable for them.
The activities will begin at 2 o’clock and finish at 5 o’clock in the afternoon. All the activities are about kites, a traditional Chinese folk art form. First, the teachers and students will learn how to make kites with the help of our volunteers in the art room. After that, they will go to the square to fly the kites. At the same time, we can communicate with each other and enjoy the beautiful sights of our school. What a great idea! Finally, in order to know more about the art form, they will also watch a video about the kite festival.
I hope the teachers and students will like the plan!
例文2：
Some teachers and students from our partner school — Sunshine School will visit us on May 10th. I think Plan B is more suitable for them.
The activities will begin at 2 o’clock and finish at 5 o’clock in the afternoon. We have three activities in total. The first activity is Chinese Games. Students and teachers will have a chance to experience some traditional Chinese games together, like playing cuju, an old Chinese soccer game. Playing games is a good way to relax.
Also, we will have a soccer match, which can help us build friendship and learn from each other. After that, there will be a music show. All the students and teachers can show themselves while having fun together.
I hope the teachers and students will like the plan!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，选择一个计划介绍该方案及目的。
[写作步骤]
第一步，选择计划A或计划B；
第二步，介绍具体的时间、地点、活动及目的；
第三步，收尾，希望老师和学生们喜欢这个计划。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of ... 在……的帮助下
②at the same time 与此同时
③in total 总共
④have fun 玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①First, the teachers and students will learn how to make kites with the help of our volunteers in the art room.（疑问词+动词不定式）
②Also, we will have a soccer match, which can help us build friendship and learn from each other.（which引导非限定性定语从句）
6．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。
Presents Reasons
a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it
Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … …
注意：
(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数：90-140。
Dear Michael,
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Michael,
There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.
For your mother, I think a silk scarf from Hangzhou is a nice present. It’s soft and comfortable. There are usually beautiful Chinese paintings on it. And you can give your father some Chinese tea. It’s a kind of healthy drink with a long history. Paper cutting is a traditional Chinese art. Chinese artists cut the paper into different shapes, such as flowers or buildings. I believe your friends will like paper cuts.
I hope these can help you.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可参考表格中给出的礼物来推荐三件有特色的礼物。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，推荐礼物；
第二步，具体推荐三种有特色的礼物；
第三步，收尾，希望能帮到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①give sb. sth. 给某人某物
②traditional Chinese art 传统中国艺术
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.（There be句型）
②I believe your friends will like paper cuts.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假如你是李明，你们学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“An unforgettable ”为主题，开展征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你最难忘的一次经历及感受。
要求：
1.请先将题目补全后再作答；
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数 80—100 词左右。
An Unforgettable
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Trip
Last month, I went to Xi’an with my classmates. The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it.
We went there by train and it took us three hours to get there. On the first day, we visited some museums and saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings. They were wonderful. In the evening, we had some special food, such as biangbiang noodles, liangpi, roujiamo and so on. I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. The next day, we went to some famous places in Xi’an, such as the Terra-cotta Warriors, the Bell Tower and the Drum Tower. Of course, we took a lot of photos.
We had a great time and we also learned a lot about Chinese history. It was an interesting trip and I hope to pay a visit to Xi’an again!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：介绍自己的一次令自己难忘的旅行经历，可适当发挥，注意逻辑清晰，表达准确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍去了哪里旅行；
第二步，具体介绍旅行的过程；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③have a great time玩得开心
④pay a visit to参观
[高分句型]
①The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it. (so ... that引导结果状语从句)
②I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. (which引导定语从句)
8．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）每年的“世界读书日”(4月23日) 之前，中国新闻出版研究院都会发布“青少年阅读调查报告 (Youth Reading Survey)”。请根据下表信息，并结合自身实际， 谈谈你的观点和看法。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名：
2. 词数80—100，开头已给出 (不计词数)。
Reading is very important in our daily life. Last week, we made a survey about reading among the teenagers. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
Reading is very important in our daily life. Last week, we made a survey about reading among the teenagers. Here are the results. Only 6% of teenagers read books less than 1 hours a week. About 27% like to read books 1-2 hours a week. 25% of teenagers read books more than 2 hours a week. About 42% like to read books more than 3 hours a week.
In my opinion, reading can not only open our minds, but also make us clever and happy. Reading can cultivate oneself. One who is filled with knowledge always behaves with elegance. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will be very helpful for us!
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是看图作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“读书在我们日常生活中是非常重要的”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——图表信息、你的观点及看法等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“让我们现在开始读书”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①start reading开始读书
②open our minds放开我们的思想
③cultivate oneself修养自己
[高分句型]
①One who is filled with knowledge always behaves with elegance. (定语从句）
②Let’s start reading now. (祈使句)
9．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）你校英语节举办了主题为“Sharing My Hometown”的短视频征集活动，你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿，在英语课上分享你们的创作过程及收获。
Process Gains (收获)
Make a plan Collect materials Create a video Learn about local culture better …
注意：
(1) 发言稿必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
(2) 你们的收获至少两条；
(3) 次数：110字左右。
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【答案】参考范文：
Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown.
To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully. After that, we made effort to collect information in different ways. For example, We talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.
From this experience we have gained a lot. Above all, we now understand our local culture better. In addition, our English has improved greatly. Last but not least, we’ve realized how important good teamwork is!
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：考生应该根据表格中所列要点进行写作，可适当补充细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明写作目的：分享制作经验；
第二步，陈述短视频制作过程；
第三步，分享收获与感受；
第四步，感谢大家聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①make every effort to do尽最大努力去做某事
②for example例如
③one of……之一
④in addition此外
⑤last but not least最后但并非最不重要的
[高分句型]
①we talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. (who引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③we’ve realized how important good teamwork is! (how引导的宾语从句)
10．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件，题为“写给自己的一封信”，请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself 内容要点 参考词汇
Memories Sweet: make progress…have a great time… Bitter: make mistakes…have trouble…
Feelings positive: take pride in…thankful… Negative: regretful…
注意：
（1）文中必须包含两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考）；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数：80~100，稿件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. You had trouble asking your
teachers about your study. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you have made progress and become more confident and outgoing. You did have a great time in school. You took pride in yourself and were grateful to the people who helped you.
Do you remember the mistake of fighting with your best friend You felt regretful. Sometimes silence can lead to misunderstandings.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般过去时与一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆；
第二步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①had trouble doing有困难做
②with the help of在……帮助下
③took pride in以……为骄傲
[高分句型]
It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (强调句)
11．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）当前中小学生近视率居高不下，对于中小学生的近视问题，你有何看法和建议？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，说明近视的原因并告诉大家如何保护视力。
要求：
1.包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2.词数80—100；
3.请勿在文中出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。

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【答案】例文
How to Protect Our Eyesight
As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight
First, it’s necessary for us to eat healthy food. A healthy diet that is rich in vitamins and minerals can help to protect our eyes. We should also avoid eating too much junk food and sugary snacks. Secondly, remember to develop good habits of using eyes. Don’t read in the sun or in a poor light. Don’t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye exercises every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. Finally, we should reduce the amount of time we spend looking at screens.
If you obey the rules above, I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.
【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，可对要点进行适当补充。
【写作步骤】第一步，引出要点；
第二步，给出建议，并说明原因；
第三步，表明自己观点：如果对方遵守，就不会近视。
【亮点词汇】①eyesight实力
②protect保护
③diet饮食
④avoid避免
【高分句型】So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. (it is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.)