2024年中考英语(书面表达)题型突破 (湖北专用)(含解析)

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1.(2024·湖北宜昌·三模)你们学校将举办以“如何应对压力,尽享快乐生活”为主题的英语短文比赛。请根据以下通知要求,并结合自身实际,用英文写一篇短文。
Notice You’ve all worked very hard over the last three years. Are you under much pressure Where is the pressure from How do you deal with pressure What is your way to get pleasure in your life Share with us! SCHOOL ADMINISTRATION
要求:
(1)你的短文至少包含通知中提到的两项(黑体部分);
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Pressure and Pleasure
Nowadays many students say they are under much pressure.
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【答案】例文
Pressure and Pleasure
Nowadays many students say they are under much pressure. So am I. Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming! I believe everyone wants to enter a good high school. But entering a good high school is challenging for me. Besides, my parents expect me to be excellent, which makes me stressful. To deal with my pressure, I usually turn to my parents or teachers for help, share my feelings with them and they offer me advice. In addition, I often do something interesting like exercising, reading and listening to music and so on. They are good
ways to relax ourselves. It’s important to learn to relax ourselves so that we can live a happy and healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应结合给出的通知写作,并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述自己的压力以及自己是如何处理这种压力的;
第二步,说明放松的方式。
[亮点词汇]
①in addition此外
②so that以便
[高分句型]
Besides, my parents expect me to be excellent, which makes me stressful.(定语从句)
2.(2024·湖北·三模)习主席时刻关心青少年的成长,强调要培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。为此,学校开展了系列主题活动。请你根据下面的思维导图,围绕“如何成为全面发展的中学生”这个话题,结合实际,以“To Be Good Students”为标题,写一篇演讲稿参加演讲比赛。
要求:1.语言表达准确,语意连贯、通顺;
2.文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
4.词数80词左右。文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To be good students
Boys and girls,
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it
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Let’s take action to be good students.
【答案】例文
To be good students
Boys and girls,
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it
First, show love and duty to our country, people and home. We must keep them in mind, work for them and serve them. Next, learn more to be wise, able and creative. We must live and learn. Then, build strong bodies and minds. Exercise every day and be brave to face difficulties in our life. Fourth, develop hobbies and interests to be able to find and enjoy the beauty in life. Last, respect labor, love labor. Learn basic living skills by sharing housework at home and taking part in labor at school.
Let’s take action to be good students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据思维导图内容介绍如何成为全面发展的中学生,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍如何成为全面发展的中学生;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep sth. in mind记住
②be able to能够做某事
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①First, show love and duty to our country, people and home. (祈使句)
②Learn basic living skills by sharing housework at home and taking part in labor at school. (动名词作宾语)
3.(2024·湖北荆州·二模)假设你叫李明,你刚结识的美国笔友Mike 给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解你的学校生活。请你阅读他的邮件并用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Ming,
Glad to make friends with you.
Can you tell me something about your school life What time do you usually go to school How do you get to school What subjects do you have in school What’s your favorite subject Why Oh, I’m wondering what your school life is like. Is it different from mine
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Mike
要求:
(1)回复Mike的邮件,邮件中需涵盖以上内容要点提示(黑体部分),可适当增加相关信息;
(2)词数80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to get your email.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to get your email. I am glad to tell you about my school life. Our school is big and beautiful. There is a tall teaching building with many classrooms. I usually go to school at 7:20 from Monday to Friday. I get to school by bike. I have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths, English, PE and so on. I like Chinese best. I often play ball games after school. I always have a good time at school. I think that it is different from your school life.
I hope we can be good friends.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴收到你的邮件”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——上学时间、上学的交通方式、所学科目、最喜欢的科目、评价学习生活及不同等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“我希望我们能成为好朋友”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①big and beautiful又大又漂亮
②have a good time玩得开心
③is different from与……不同
[高分句型]
①There is a tall teaching building with many classrooms. (there be句型)
②I think that it is different from your school life. (宾语从句)
4.(2024·湖北武汉·二模)不积跬步无以至千里,充实的初中生活已接近尾声。这三年里你一定取得了很多进步,比如学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成、学科成绩的提升等。请以My Progress in Middle School为题,结合自身经历选取一个方面,根据以下问题用英文写一篇短文向校广播台投稿。
What progress have you made
How did you make it
How do you feel about your progress
Something more about it.
注意:1.文中不得透露个人真实信息;2.词数 100 词左右;开头已给出,不计入总字数。
My Progress in Middle School
No doubt, everyone is sure to change and so am I.
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【答案】例文:
My Progress in Middle School
No doubt, everyone is sure to change and so am I. My three-year middle school life will be over. Looking back, I want to share my progress in middle school with you.
I have made great progress in learning English. When I entered middle school, I had great difficulty in learning English. I couldn’t remember English words and I got bad results in English tests. However, I didn’t give up. In class, I listened to my teachers carefully and spoke English as much as possible. After class, I often asked teachers and classmates for help. I also kept writing English diaries and tried to use the new grammar rules that I learned from the books. All of these have helped me a lot.
Now, I have much confidence when facing challenges. I become patient and careful. What’s more, I am not afraid to make mistakes any more.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态是“一般现在时”,“一般过去时”以及“现在完成时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作开头已给出,写作时可直接写作目的。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“取得的进步”、“怎么取得进步的”以及“取得进步的感受”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be sure to do sth.确定做某事
②be over结束
③want to do sth.想要做某事
④make great progress取得极大的进步
⑤give up放弃
⑥listen to听
⑦as much as possible尽可能多地
⑧ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
⑨keep doing sth.保持做某事
⑩try to do sth.尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①When I entered middle school, I had great difficulty in learning English. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I also kept writing English diaries and tried to use the new grammar rules that I learned from the books. (that引导的定语从句)
5.(2024·湖北武汉·二模)中华优秀传统文化正在复兴,引起许多国外友人的关注。你的英国笔友Mike想了解下中国的节日。请你给他写一封邮件,向他介绍一个中国传统节日。
提示:
1、What is the festival
2、 When is it
3、How do people celebrate the festival
4、 Why do you introduce this festival
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad you are interested in Chinese festivals.
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【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad you are interested in Chinese festivals. I want to tell you about Chongyang Festival. It’s on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month, so it’s also called the Double Ninth Festival. We like to climb mountains and enjoy the beautiful sights of the autumn. We enjoy a kind of food called Chongyang Cake, which comes from the food in season. It’s also a time to remember the ancestors and respect the old in our family. There are so many poems about the festival that this festival has been a symbol of Chinese traditional culture. That’s why I introduce it to you.
Best wishes!
Wang Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍一个中国传统节日,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,表示要介绍哪个节日;
第二步,介绍节日的时间;
第三步,介绍这个节日的传统。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②come from来自
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①We enjoy a kind of food called Chongyang Cake, which comes from the food in season. (which引导定语从句)
②There are so many poems about the festival that this festival has been a symbol of Chinese traditional culture. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
6.(2024·湖北武汉·二模) 在你成长过程中,一定有许多值得你学习的榜样。学校英语角将举办“The Person
I Admire”为题的演讲比赛。请从他 (她) 性格如何、你欣赏他 (她) 的原因和你是否想成为这样的人及如何做等方面,根据以下问题用英文写一篇短文投稿。
What kind of person is he/she
Why do you admire him/her
Do you want to become a person like him/her How
Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100 词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Person I Admire Hello, everyone! The person I admire most is
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【答案】 例文:
The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone! The person I admire most is the Chinese scientist, Tu Youyou, who is well-known as a winner of the Nobel Prize.
Professor Tu has been devoted to researching into traditional Chinese medicine since graduating from college. And when she was conducting research into artemisinin, she met with a lot of challenges, but she didn’t give up easily. Instead, she repeated the experiments again and again.
Professor Tu is so great a role model that she inspires me to study medicine in the future. I would like to be a scientist just like her. So I will study hard and try my best to make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;一般过去时;
③提示:写作内容应包括三个英文提示的所有内容,并适当扩展。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明“我”所欣赏的人;
第二步,简要介绍“我”所欣赏的人和欣赏的原因;
第三步,总结,写出是否想成为“我”所欣赏的那样的人,如何做。
[亮点词汇]
①well-known著名的
②be devoted to doing sth.致力于做某事
③conduct into引导进入
④inspire sb. to do sth.激励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Professor Tu has been devoted to researching into traditional Chinese medicine since graduating from college. (since引导的时间状语从句)
②Professor Tu is so great a role model that she inspires me to study medicine in the future.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
7.(22-23九年级上·江西赣州·期末)本试卷阅读理解C篇谈及Labor Education (劳动教育)。习近平总书记强调:要把劳动教育贯穿大中小学各阶段和家庭、学校、社会各方面。请你根据下列提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对劳动的观点、你的一次劳动经历以及你对学校的建议。
Labor Education Your opinions: important, necessary, helpful...
Your experience: at school or at home...
Your advice to school: courses, activities... (可参考阅读理解C篇,但不得照搬原文)
要求:
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数80-120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It’s reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
例文
It’s reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it’s important and helpful. And it’s necessary for us to learn some life skills and form good habits in our life.
I remembered one day at home, I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. It was the first time for me to cook for them. A little bit tired but happy, I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents. From this unforgettable experience, I’ve also got a deeper understanding of labor.
As for how to run the courses at school, I have some ideas. The school can offer chances to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What’s more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club, paper-cutting club and so on. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. I believe these activities can make our school life more colorful and meaningful. I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:描述过去的经历,用一般过去时;描述你的观点和建议用一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中省略处需要补充相关内容,注意行为逻辑要通顺,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。谈谈你对劳动的观点,表明它的重要性,引出下文你的经历和你对学校的建议。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中“你对劳动的观点、你的一次劳动经历以及你对学校的建议等”几个重点方面提出你的想法,注意行为逻辑要通顺,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
第三步,书写结语。表达你对学校新学期劳动课程的期待和信心。
[亮点词汇]
①unforgettable难忘的
②looking forward to doing sth期待做某事
③feel proud of sb对某人感到自豪
[高分句型]
①And it’s necessary for us to learn some life skills and form good habits in our life.(it作形式主语)
②The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes.(who引导的宾语从句)
③I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents. (because引导原因状语从句)
8.(2023·湖北武汉·二模)你校英文报正开展以 “How to Keep a Good Relationship with Parents” 为主题的征文活动。请根据以下内容提示问题,写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
内容提示问题:
What’s the problem between you and your parents
How do you deal with the problem
What do you do to keep a good relationship with your parents
……
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60—80;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep a Good Relationship with Parents
Nowadays, many students can’t get on well with their parents. And this is really a common problem. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Keep a Good Relationship with Parents
Nowadays, many students can’t get on well with their parents. And this is really a common problem.
There are too many strict rules for me at home and my parents don’t quite understand me. They never allow me to go out with my friends at night. And they care too much about my grades.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they give me much pressure, I know it’s because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, tell them my troubles and often help them do chores.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出现在许多孩子不能和父母融洽地相处;
第二步,具体阐述自己和父母之间的问题和处理方式;
第三步,具体阐述自己解决和父母之间问题的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
②care too much about太在意
③try one’s best to do sth.尽最大努力做某事
④in order to为了
[高分句型]
①Although they give me much pressure, I know it’s because they really love me and want me to have a bright future. (although引导让步状语从句,because引导表语从句)
②There are too many strict rules for me at home and my parents don’t quite understand me. (运用there be句型)
9.(2024·湖北武汉·二模)假如你是李伟,转眼间你即将毕业,你给你的英国朋友Peter写一封信,告诉他这三年在你身上发生了哪些变化?请根据以下内容提示从外貌性格、学习习惯、生活方式等方面讲述你的变化。
内容提示:
1. What changes do you have
2. How have you changed
3. What do you think of the changes
4. Something more about your changes.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校;词数 100 词左右。
Dear Peter,
How time flies! And I have changed a lot during the past three years.
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Yours,
Li Wei
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How time flies! And I have changed a lot during the past three years.
I used to be thin and had long hair, but now I am strong and have short hair. At the beginning, I wasn’t good at English. With my English teacher’s help, I have made progress in it. I often get good grades on my exams now. I even develop many good learning habits, such as keeping English diaries, reviewing English notes and so on. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I attend many activities in my after-school service and make more friends. Last but not least, I can balance my life and schoolwork better than I used to.
Thanks to the middle school life, I have changed much! I will never forget the valuable middle school life!
Yours,
Li Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,由于开头已给出,故接下来具体介绍你的变化;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌性格、学习习惯、生活方式”等方面讲述你的变化;
第三步,书写结语。表示永远不会忘记初中生活。
[亮点词汇]
①make progress进步
②develop养成
③balance平衡
④thanks to多亏
⑤valuable有价值的,宝贵的
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be.(形容词比较级)
10.(2024·湖北武汉·二模)书面表达 (本题共15分)
你校正在开展以“好习惯促成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下问题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的一个好的学习习惯以及具体做法,并说明这个习惯给你学习带来的益处。
What’s your good learning habit
How do you achieve this habit
What benefits (益处) have you got from this habit
Something more about it.
注意:文中不能透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
Good habits benefit a person’s whole life. Let me tell you something about my learning habits.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Dear sir,
Good habits benefit a person’s whole life. Let me tell you something about my learning habits. One of my good habits is taking notes in class. I take down what my teachers write on the blackboard and other important points about my lessons. I keep my notes well-organized and tidy so that I can find information easily later. After class I read the notes and try to remember the information as much as possible. Before I do my homework and take exams, I review my notes carefully.
The habit of taking notes helps me become a successful student. It not only improves my learning abilities, but also helps me get good grades.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:结合题目给出的三个问题展开描述,可适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题。介绍自己良好的学习习惯;
第二步,具体阐述内容。介绍自己是如何养成这个好习惯的;
第三步,书写结语。总结自己从这个好习惯中获得的益处。
[亮点词汇]
① take down 记录,记下
② as...as possible 尽可能
[高分句型]
① I keep my notes well-organized and tidy so that I can find information easily later. (so that引导目的状语从句)
② It not only improves my learning abilities, but also helps me get good grades. (not only...but also...连接并列句)
11.(2024·湖北咸宁·二模)亲爱的同学们,随着年龄的增长,你们承担的责任和面临的挑战会更多。学校英文月刊发起了题为“I Am Ready for the Future”的征文活动。请根据以下征文要求,结合自身实际,用英文写一篇短文,参加征文活动。
Notice
As you are growing up, are you going to be prepared for the future
What kind of person do you want to be Why
What are your dreams
How are you going to achieve them
Share with us!
ENGLISH MONTHLY
要求:
(1)你的征文应包含通知中黑体部分内容;
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数 80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I Am Ready for the Future
As a teenager, I will have more and more duty and challenges.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One Possible Version
As a teenager, I will have more and more duty and challenges. But I am ready for the future!
First of all, I want to be a doctor. Because doctors can help more people in need. Thanks to the doctors like Zhong Nanshan, we become healthier and we can live a happier life. What’s more, I’ll study harder to get into a medical college so that I can realize my dream—work as a doctor. After that, I will learn more practical skills. Besides, I also need to exercise to be stronger both in body and mind.
No matter what may happen to me, I will be ready for the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明已经为未来做好准备;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍你想成为什么样的人及原因,你的梦想及如何实现;
第三步,书写结语。表达无论发生什么,都会为未来做好准备。
[亮点词汇]
①in need有需要
②practical skills实用的技能
③body and mind身心
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I’ll study harder to get into a medical college so that I can realize my dream-work as a doctor. (动词不定式表目的;目的状语从句)
②No matter what may happen to me, I will be ready for the future. (让步状语从句)
12.(2024·湖北黄冈·二模)他们,在生活中,无微不至地照顾你;他们,在你困难时,关心陪伴你。他们就是你的父母亲。重阳节之际,英语社团将开展“感恩父母”主题征文活动。请你根据下面写作思维导图,用英文写一篇题为“Thank you, my dear parents”短文,参加征文活动。
要求:
(1) 文中需包括提示的全部内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
(2) 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3) 词数90词左右,开始语已给出,不计入总词数。
Thank you, my dear parents
My dear parents, I’d like to express my thanks for your care and love. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Thank you, my dear parents
My dear parents, I’d like to express my thanks for your care and love.
First of all, I want to thank you for raising me. One day, when I got home I felt uncomfortable. In the evening I felt worse and worse. My parents took me to the hospital at once. My parents stayed in the hospital the whole night. They didn’t feel better until the doctor told my parents I was fine.
I would also like to thank you for your trust and care about my personal feelings. Once I failed my English exam, Father had a long talk with me. He encouraged me not to give up. When I am in trouble, you often give me a big hand! So I have to study hard to repay you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容表达对父母的感激,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍父母是如何照顾你的;
第二步,介绍父母是如何处理你的问题的;
第三步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①forget doing sth忘记做过某事
②wait for等待
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
When I am in trouble, you often give me a big hand! (when引导的时间状语从句)
13.(2024·湖北·一模)《论语》中说:“不学礼 ,无以立。”意思是不学会礼仪礼貌,就难以有立身之
处。假如你们学校的英文月刊发起了题为I am a student with good manners的征文活动。请根据以下通知要求,并结合自身实际,用英文写一篇短文。
Notice Good manners are very important in our daily life. As a middle school student, what do you usually do to be a person with good manners You can talk about what you do at school, at home or in public. Share with us! ENGLISH MONTHLY
注意:
1.请任选通知中的一部分来介绍;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数80词左右,标题、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
I am a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. As a middle school student, I always try my best to be polite and respectful to others. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, good manners are essential for us to get on well with others and build a harmonious society. I will continue to work hard to be a person with good manners.
【答案】例文
I am a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. As a middle school student, I always try my best to be polite and respectful to others. Politeness is a good tradition in our country. No one likes impolite people. It is important for us. At school, we should respect our teachers. We should also be friendly to our classmates and help each other. At home, we should respect the elderly. Also, we should love family members and do things by ourselves. Then, we should say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, we shouldn’t talk with food in our mouth. Besides, we should obey traffic rules when walking or riding. In public, don’t shout loudly. Take action now. Behave well!
All in all, good manners are essential for us to get on well with others and build a harmonious society. I will continue to work hard to be a person with good manners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏通知中提到的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“懂礼貌很重要”来引出下文中对具体行为的介绍;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“学校、家和其他场合”三方面入手,重点介绍如何做一个懂礼貌的学生;
③第三步,书写结语。要做一个懂礼貌的人。
[亮点词汇]
①by oneself 独自
②all the time 总是,一直
③as for 至于
④in public 在公共场所
⑤take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
①At school, we should respect our teachers.(情态动词后接动词原形)
②In public, don’t shout loudly.(否定祈使句)
14.(2024·湖北宜昌·一模)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike给你发来一封电子邮件,请你根据他的邮件内容回复他。
From: Mike
To: Li Hua
Dear Li Hua, How is everything going I have a terrible week. On Tuesday, I caught a bad cold and coughed a lot. But a worse thing was that I hurt my knees when I was playing football with my friends. Have you heard about “brittle college students (脆皮大学生)” I think I am a “brittle middle school student”. Do you have any advice on how I can get stronger and healthier
Yours, Mike
要求:
(1)语言表达准确,语句通顺、连贯;
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you had a terrible week. But don’t worry. I’m here to give you some advice on how to keep healthy.
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Remember, take it easy and listen to your body. As time goes by, you’ll feel stronger and healthier.
Yours,
Mike
【答案】例文:
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you had a terrible week. But don’t worry. I’m here to give you some advice on how to keep healthy.
First, doing morning exercises every day is a good choice for you and it just takes you about 15 to 30 minutes. Second, you can take part in some outdoor activities, such as playing basketball, running and so on. On weekends, it is good for you to go out with your friends and have a great time. Third, it is important to have a good sleep. Don’t stay up too late. Last but not least, you should eat a lot of fruit and vegetables every day and don’t drink too much juice or cola.
Remember, take it easy and listen to your body. As time goes by, you’ll feel stronger and healthier.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据邮件内所提问题进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点;注意上下文内容的衔接,不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据开头提示,引出自己要介绍的内容:关于保持健康的建议;
第二步,从锻炼、课外活动、作息以及饮食等方面提出建议;
第三步,结尾再次提醒对方,并预测良好结果。
[亮点词汇]
①do morning exercises 做早操
②take part in 参加
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①Third, it is important to have a good sleep.(it固定句型)
②Don’t stay up too late.(否定祈使句)
15.(2024·湖北荆州·一模)假如你是李华,你所在的英语戏剧社 (English Drama Club) 将要举办演出,请给你的好友Alice 写一封邀请函。
内容包括以下信息:
Plays by the English Drama ClubTime: 5:00 p.m.—7:40 p.m. Names: Monkey King Hit Lady White Bone (孙悟空三打白骨精) Time: 8:00 p.m.—10:30 p.m. Names: Green Snake (青蛇) Place: Second floor of the Lab Building-Drama Hall Welcome!
要求:
1. 包含以上要点,可以适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,内容积极,使用电子邮件格式;
3. 不少于80词,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数。
Dear Alice,
I know you are interested in drama.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
I know you are interested in drama. Our English Drama Club will perform two plays this Friday. One is Monkey King hit Lady White Bone, and the other is Green Snake. Monkey King hit Lady White Bone was written by Wu Cheng’en. The novel is so popular that people like to turn it into movies and dramas. Green Snake is a famous Chinese folk story. It’s also a good play.
The performances will be in the Drama Hall, on the second floor of the lab building. The first play will begin at 5:00 p.m. and the second one will finish at 10:30 p.m. I do hope you will be able to come on Friday evening.
We put a lot of effort into practicing the two plays, so I sincerely invite you to watch our performances. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为邀请函;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:根据所给的要点内容完成写作,注意要点齐全,语法准确,语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍要上演的两部戏剧;
第二步,详细介绍活动时间、地点等信息;
第三步,书写结语,表达真诚地期待。
[亮点词汇]
①one...the other...一个……另一个……
②be able to能够
③put sth into practicing将某事物付诸实践
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①The novel is so popular that people like to turn it into movies and dramas.(状语从句)
②I do hope you will be able to come on Friday evening.(宾语从句)
16.(2024·湖北襄阳·一模)4月 23 日为世界读书日(World Reading Day)。你们学校开展了“分享书籍,传播快乐”的主题活动。请根据以下通知要求,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对读书的看法,并进行好书推荐,让更多的人参与读书。
World Reading Day is coming!
Do you like reading Why
Which book do you like best What’s it about Why do you like it What can you learn from it
● What do you hope your friends to do about reading
Share with us!
要求:
(1)围绕表格内容进行写作,可根据行文适当增减。
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Share Books To Spread Happiness
April 23th is World Reading Day. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Share Books To Spread Happiness
April 23th is World Reading Day. Reading can give us fun and knowledge. For me, I like reading very much. Because it can make me relaxed and learn more about the world.
I like books about history. I like them because I want to learn more about the Chinese history. I hope to understand more historical stories by reading books. I usually spend more than three hours reading books a week.
I hope that everyone should read more books, especially classics, so that we can spread our Chinese culture to the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己是否喜欢看书以及原因;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢的读书类型,为什么喜欢它们;
第三步,希望朋友多读经典书籍,有助于传播中国文化
[亮点词汇]
①learn more about多了解
②more than超过
③so that以至于
[高分句型]
①Reading can give us fun and knowledge.(动名词作主语)
②I like them because I want to learn more about the Chinese history.(because引导原因状语从句)
17.(2024·湖北武汉·一模)同学们,生命是美好的,生活是多姿多彩的,而要拥有这一切的前提是安全,因此我们一定要加强安全意识,努力增强自我防范能力,关爱生命健康成长。请以“How to Keep Safe”为题,写一篇70词左右的英语小短文。
内容提示:
1. 交通安全,遵守交通规则,如不在马路上踢球等。
2. 食物安全,吃健康食物,不吃垃圾食品。
3. 活动安全,进行体育锻炼时,不要弄伤自己,不私自下河游泳。
4. 交友安全,谨慎交友,尤其是网友;和同学们友好相处,不打架。
5. 不要伤害自己,也不要伤害别人,懂得如何求助。
写作要求:
1. 词数:70词左右;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 写作要点供参考,可适当发挥;开头词汇不计入总数。
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:traffic rules交通规则 net friend网友 especially尤其是
How to Keep Safe
There is no doubt that safety is very important to us. As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Keep Safe
There is no doubt that safety is very important to us. As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions.
Traffic safety is everybody’s business. We must obey the rules. Don’t play football on the road. We should pay attention to the food safety. We should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Don’t hurt yourself when doing physical exercise. Don’t swim in the river without permission. Besides, we should be careful to make friends, especially net friends. Learn to get along well with our classmates and don’t fight. What’s more, don’t hurt others and don’t hurt yourself. It’s very important to know how to ask for help.
In short, safety must come first.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为材料作文;
②时态:时态应用一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,写作时不可遗漏,学生还可适当进行拓展,提升文章内容丰富度。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出如何保证安全这一话题;
第二步,给出如何保证安全的建议;
第三步,文章收尾,再次强调安全的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②get along well with和……友好相处
[高分句型]
①Don’t hurt yourself when doing physical exercise(when doing sth.结构)
②It’s very important to know how to ask for help.(it作形式主语)
18.(2024·湖北武汉·一模)假如你是李华,你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给Tom回封邮件,请根据以下内容提示,告知他你的暑假计划。内容提示:
What will you do to open up your mind
What will you do to improve your health
What will you do to improve the relationship with your parents
Something more about your summer plans.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80词左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about yours Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy to hear from you. Firstly, if I have any inner thoughts, I will tell my parents. Sometimes I also talk to my good friends. Secondly, for my health, I will eat more fruits and vegetables. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. Thirdly, I will help my parents with household chores to improve our relationship. Finally, I will also use my free time to listen to more music and do things I enjoy to relax myself.
How about yours Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己的暑期计划”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的暑期计划;
第二步,根据题干的提示详细介绍暑期的安排;
第三步,介绍自己如何放松,并收尾,期待对方的来信。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①Firstly, if I have any inner thoughts, I will tell my parents.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②Thirdly, I will help my parents with household chores to improve our relationship.(不定式表目的)
19.(2024·湖北武汉·一模)假设你是李华,来英语网站正在举办以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示,从饮食、睡眠、体育锻炼及如何面对生活中的苦恼等方面来写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
内容提示:
How can teenagers eat and sleep well
Why should teenagers play sports at least an hour every day
What can teenagers do when they’re in trouble
Something more about your ideas.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;标题和首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Live a Healthy Life
Health is important to everyone. But how can we teenagers live a healthy life
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In a word, health is wealth. I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind and enjoy a better life.
【答案】例文:
Health is important to everyone. But how can we teenagers live a healthy life Firstly, a balanced diet is the foundation. Eating plenty of fruits, vegetables, and whole grains ensures our bodies receive the necessary nutrients. Secondly, adequate sleep is vital. Seven to nine hours of sleep each night rejuvenates our minds and bodies. Moreover, engaging in sports for at least an hour daily is beneficial. It not only keeps us physically fit but also boosts our mood and reduces stress. When faced with troubles, it’s essential to seek help from friends, family, or munication and sharing often lead to solutions. Additionally, I believe in the power of positive thinking. A positive mindset can turn challenges into opportunities and make life more enjoyable.
In a word, health is wealth. I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind and enjoy a better life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意围绕“信息提示”从饮食、睡眠、体育锻炼及如何面对生活中的苦恼等方面阐述如何过健康的生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引言,导入正文;
第二步,从饮食、睡眠、体育锻炼及如何面对生活中的苦恼等方面阐述如何过健康的生活;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① engage in参与
② at least至少
③ believe in相信
[高分句型]
① Moreover, engaging in sports for at least an hour daily is beneficial.(使用非谓语动词)
② It not only keeps us physically fit but also boosts our mood and reduces stress.(使用并列连词)
20.(2024·湖北武汉·一模)你校新来的外教Tony想通过问卷了解学生的爱好。问卷中有关于音乐和运动等方面的问题。请你根据以下问卷问题用英文向Tony作详细介绍。
1.What music do you listen to when you feel...
2.How often do you do sports
3.Do your friends have the same hobbies as you
4.Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my hobbies about music and sports to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my hobbies about music and sports to you.
I enjoy listening to music very much. When I feel nervous or tired, I always listening to country music. It makes me relax. I like playing football and my friends like it too. I think playing football can not only make me fit, but also increase my sense of teamwork. So after class, if I have time, I often go to the playground with my classmates to play football. Every Friday afternoon, we go to the gym to play games and practice. I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic. So I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting. I will keep the good habit all my life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏材料中给出的四点提示,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我最喜欢的音乐和运动”来引出下文的详细介绍;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“常听的音乐、运动的频度、朋友是否有相同的爱好和其他”四方面入手,重点介绍自己的音乐和体育爱好;
③第三步,书写结语。希望保持良好的生活习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to music 听音乐
②not only...but also 不但……而且
[高分句型]
①When I feel nervous or tired, I always listening to country music.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②So after class, if I have time, I often go to the playground with my classmates to play football.(if引导的条件状语从句)
③I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic.(which引导的定语从句)
21.(2024·湖北恩施·一模)假设你是李明,你的美国笔友Tony发来电子邮件,告诉你他将于今年暑假来中国旅游,并到恩施参观游览。但他有些情况不清楚,请你给他回复一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Ming, I feel very excited about my visit to China and meeting you for the first time! But I’m still not sure about the following things: 1. When will you be free 2. How can I get to Enshi 3. What’s the weather like there 4. What shall we do together Please let me know. Yours, Tony
要求:(1) 文中必须包含邮件中提到的所有要点;
(2) 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3) 词数80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
英文提示:Enshi Grand Canyon (恩施大峡谷),Enshi Tusi Castle (恩施土司城)
Girls’ Town (女儿城),Lichuan Tenglong Cave (利川腾龙洞)
Dear Tony,
I am so excited that you’ll come to China and visit Enshi during the summer vacation.
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Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I am so excited that you’ll come to China and visit Enshi during the summer vacation.
I will be free on 28th June. I am very happy I can play with you and I can be your guide at that time. You can take the plane to Enshi. Then We will meet at Enshi Xujiaping Airport. Then we will go to the city center by bus. It’s very hot there, so you can’t bring many clothes. Do you know Enshi Grand Canyon or Enshi Tusi Castle They are very famous. I will bring you there. We will also go to Girls’ Town and Lichuan Tenglong Cave because they are worth a visit. I think you can have a good time.
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时与一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明自己空闲的时间;
第二步,说明对方如何到达恩施,以及天气如何;
第三步,介绍要参观的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②be free空闲的
[高分句型]
We will also go to Girls’ Town and Lichuan Tenglong Cave because they are worth a visit.(because引导的原因状语从句)
22.(2024·湖北孝感·一模)假设你是李辉。初中生活即将结束,学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,为录制视频做准备。要点如下:
1) 回顾过去(表达感谢,难忘的人和事);
2) 珍惜现在;
3) 展望未来。
要求:
1) 毕业感言必须是正能量,包括三个要点,可适当发挥;
2) 发言稿中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名;
3) 词数 80 以上,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Hui. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you.
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【答案】例文
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Hui. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you. I have been in this school for three years, which will be an unforgettable experience in my memory. The school is beautiful and my school life is really colourful. In the past, I learned a lot from my teachers and classmates and made much progress. I also made a lot of friends who helped me a lot.
I want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻
辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述过去的3年生活。
第二步,表达对老师、同学的感谢以及表达美好祝福。
第三步,最后结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past在过去
②make much progress取得很大进步
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character.(部分倒装句)
23.(2024·湖北随州·一模)十年树木,百年树人。青少年是国家的希望,少年强则国强。假如你是李华,请你写一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈如何成为一名更好的青少年。
要点:(1)你认为中国当代青少年应该具备什么品质;
(2)你认为怎么做才能成为更好的青少年。
要求:(1)根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:keep one’s promise 遵守诺言;be thankful to sb.对某人心存感激;creative 有创造力的;beauty 美;nature 自然;protect 保护;activity 活动
How to Be a Better Teenager
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文:
How to Be a Better Teenager
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager with you.
As a teenager, I think we should be healthy, creative, honest and thankful. The most important thing is that we must love our country and home.
How to be a better teenager Firstly, we should work hard to make our country stronger and stronger. Then we need to keep our promises. What’s more, we should be thankful to those who have helped us. At last, it is helpful to take exercise, which keeps us healthy both physically and mentally.
All in all, if we show our love in our daily life, we can be anyone we want to be.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍如何成为一个更好的青少年,要适当补充内容,使文章充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,简述当代青少年应具有的品质;
第三步,介绍如何成为一个更好的青少年;
第四步,总结与感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①keep our promises 信守承诺
②be thankful to 对……心存感激
[高分句型]
①We should be thankful to those who have helped us. (定语从句)
②At last, it is helpful to take exercise, which keeps us healthy both physically and mentally. (which引导的定语从
句)
24.(2024·湖北孝感·一模)时光荏苒,毕业季来临。你们学校的英文月刊发起了题为“校园生活”的征文活动,内容是畅想未来三年的高中校园生活,请你根据提示和要求,写一篇英语短文投稿。
School life in the coming three years
What is your dream or plan And how do you achieve it What outdoor activities do you hope to join in And why do you like them Who do you hope to meet (teachers, classmates, relatives...)
写作要求:
1.围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充,使文章内容充实;
2.语意通顺,表达准确,条理清晰,书写规范;
3.词数90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名、校名等信息。
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about
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【答案】例文
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school life in the coming three years.
I am interested in history and I hope to be a history teacher in the future. So I decide to study hard to get good grades so that I can enter my dream school which offers the best history education in China to achieve my dream. Besides, I plan to join the history club in high school and meet many friends who share the same interest with me. What’s more, I wish I can have some strict but kind teachers who can offer useful suggestions to me.
I can’t wait to hug my new school life in high school. I hope that day will come soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容畅想未来三年的高中校园生活,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己的梦想以及如何实现自己的梦想;
第三步,介绍希望加入什么户外活动以及原因;
第四步,介绍想遇到什么样的人;
第五步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
①So I decide to study hard to get good grades so that I can enter my dream school which offers the best history education in China to achieve my dream. (so that引导的目的状语从句,which引导的定语从句)
②I wish I can have some strict but kind teachers who can offer useful suggestions to me. (who引导的定语从句)
25.(2024·湖北随州·一模)中考临近,班上部分同学有些紧张,情绪比较低落。这种负面情绪对学习甚至身心健康都造成了不利影响。学校广播站正为此征稿,现在请你以李华的身份根据下列内容提示用英文写一篇短文。从放松方法、生活方式和倾诉对象等方面提供一些有用的建议。
要点提示 :
1. What do you think they can do to relax themselves
2. How can they have a healthy lifestyle
3. Who can they ask for help if necessary
4. Some more suggestions you can think of.
要求:1. 词数100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2. 要点提示均需涉及,可适当增加内容;3. 不使用真实姓名、校名、地名。
Dear friends,
We’re facing important exams and you may
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear friends,
We’re facing important exams and you may feel stressed and upset. This can affect your study even your health. I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
First of all, you could relax yourselves through listening to music or doing exercise. Then, you must have enough sleep even before the coming exams. Eight-hour sleep can keep your brain active. Besides, don’t be shy to ask teachers or parents for help. They’re more experienced and they will be ready to help you anytime. Or just turn to your friends and share your feelings with them. In a word, communication can make you less stressed and more relaxed.
I hope that you can achieve success and stay healthy.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述学生的现状;
第二步,根据学生存在的问题给出合理的建议;
第三步,鼓励大家积极应对。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②be ready to do sth准备好做某事
③share sth with sb与某人分享
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①Besides, don’t be shy to ask teachers or parents for help.(祈使句的否定形式)
②I hope that you can achieve success and stay healthy.(that引导宾语从句)
26.(2024·湖北黄冈·一模)假如你叫李华,初中生活即将结束,你们的英语老师准备举行一个英语毕业典礼,在典礼上,每个同学都将分享一段为自己好朋友写的毕业留言。请根据以上内容及下面的思维导图写一段毕业留言,内容包括:他/她给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光以及对他/她最美好的祝愿。
要求:
(1)需包括提示全部内容,可适当增加细节,使行文流畅;
(2)词数80词左右,开头语已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Our middle school life will soon come to an end. But I’ll never forget you ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Our middle school life will soon come to an end. But I’ll never forget you, Wang Ziyuan. You’re my best friend. You’re tall. You’re so smart and so outgoing that everyone wants to be friends with you. I’ll never forget the smile on your face. I always laughed a lot when