2024年中考英语冲刺解题技巧:书面表达之观点看法类
观点类文章一般来说可以有以下几种类型:A.针对某一问题提出观点和看法,论证这一观点;B.针对某一现象,分析原因,提出你的观点;C.针对某一现象,阐述正反方观点,提出你的观点。
认真审题,确定时态、人称
观点类文章的主体时态是一般现在时,表达自己观点时使用第一人称,描述现象、用论据进行论证时使用第三人称。
构思提纲。
A.针对某一主题提出观点,论证这一观点。
这类文章,可以按总分总的思路进行写作,注意第一部分要开篇点题,即开门见山地表明作者的观点;第二部分要条理清晰地阐述论据;第三部分要简洁准确地进行总结。
针对某一主题提出观点类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 针对某一主题表明观点 In my opinion/view, …… According to me, …… As far as I am concerned, ……[] I think it is good/bad to …… As for me, …… Personally, ……
第二段 提供论据论证观点 First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, What’s more, Besides, Finally For one thing, For another thing, Besides
第三段 总结观点 In a word, …… To sum up ,…… All in all, …… In short, ……
B.针对某一现象,分析原因,提出你的观点
针对现象,分析原因, 提出观点类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 描述现象 Nowadays, the computer is playing an important role in our daily life. With the development of technology, more and more students are using smart phones. As we all know, most middle school students spend little time doing sports. It is known to all that many students have to take various classes in their spare time.
第二段 分析原因 First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, What’s more, Besides, Finally For one thing, For another thing, Besides On the one hand, On the other hand
第三段 提出观点 In my opinion/view, …… According to me, …… As far as I am concerned, …… I think it is good/bad to …… As for me, …… Personally, ……
C. 针对某一现象,阐述正反方观点,提出你的观点
提出建议类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 描述现象,说明人们有不同观点。 …… Different people have different opinions about it. We have discussed whether students should take mobile phones to school. We have debated whether teachers should punish students. …… Opinions vary from person to person.
第二段 阐述正方观点 On the one hand, …… On the other hand,…… Almost half of the students suggest that …… Some students believe/ think that ……[] The rest of the students agree that ……[]
第三段 阐述正方观点[]
第四段 提出你的观点 In my opinion/view, …… According to me, …… As far as I am concerned, …… I think it is good/bad to …… As for me, …… Personally, ……
三、遣词造句。
在造句时,初习写作者可以按照由简单句到复合句、特殊句式的写作思路进行写作。在保证句子基本正确的基础上,再将简单句润色为稍为复杂的句式。
四、组句成篇。
写作的第三个步骤是通读文章,并在句与句之间加一些衔接性、过渡性的词汇或短语,使文章更加流畅,并检查是否存在拼写和语法错误。
1.劳动不仅创造美好生活,也有助于培养生活技能和精神品质。某英文报社正在开展以“劳动最光荣”为主题的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对劳动的看法,平时参加哪些劳动,有什么收获。
提示词语:labor (劳动), glorious (光荣), improve, knowledge, skills
提示问题:
What do you think of labor
What kind of labor do you often do
What have you learned from doing so
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【参考答案】
Labor is a very important part of our life. I think it is very glorious for everyone to take part in labor.
At home, I often do some chores, such as cleaning the floor, washing the dishes, making the bed, cooking meals and so on. At school, I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides these, I still take an active part in some garbage sorting activities in the community. By doing so, I can not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge. The most important thing is that I improve my life skills for my future.
Labor makes me feel very happy.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,谈谈自己对劳动的看法;
第二步,具体介绍自己经常做的劳动;
第三步,书写结尾,介绍自己在劳动中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②do some chores做家务
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①I think it is very glorious for everyone to take part in labor.(省略that的宾语从句)
②The most important thing is that I improve my life skills for my future.(that引导的表语从句)
2.人们常说:同学之情是彼此最纯洁最珍贵的友谊。可有些同学们不懂得如何建立良好的同学关系。当前,学生欺凌 (bully v.) 事件在中小学校时有发生,同学们对彼此之间如何友好相处,常常把握不好。假设你们学校将围绕“How to get on well with yourclassmates”这一主题召开班会,请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文作为班会课的发言稿,提出你的建议与看法。
要求:
1.要点齐全,适当拓展;
2.行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
4.80 词左右 (文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear friends,
When we are at school, it’s important for us to get on well with our schoolmates. But how can we make
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【参考答案】
Dear friends,
When we are at school, it’s important for us to get on well with our schoolmates. But how can we make it
First of all, we should always be polite and friendly to each other. When we meet a classmate, we can say hello to him or her. Always keep a smile on our face when talking with others. Try to make friends with our schoolmates. Second, treat others warmly, offer necessary help to those who are in trouble, help each other when we meet difficulties.
What’s more, we should treat our schoolmates in an honest way. We can share our happiness as well as sadness with others. We must respect others, don’t laugh at others. Never fight with our schoolmates. If I am bullied or if I see somebody else being bullied, I will keep calm. And then I will tell my teachers and parents as soon as possible. What’s more, I will call the police for help in time.
I hope we can all get on well with our schoolmates and make an effort to stop bullying together. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍如何与同学相处,包括所给的五个要点及自己补充的,并做适当拓展;
第二步,表达希望,希望大家都能友好相处,阻止霸凌。
[亮点词汇]
①warmly温暖地
②difficulty困难
③as well as和
④make an effort做出努力
[高分句型]
①If I am bullied or if I see somebody else being bullied, I will keep calm. (条件状语从句)
②I hope we can all get on well with our schoolmates and make an effort to stop bullying together. (宾语从句)
3.进入九年级以后,我们的学习任务越来越重。在这种情况下,我们要更加重视自己的身体健康。只有拥有健康的身体,我们才能保证学习上的成功。请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题,按照提出的问题谈谈你的看法。
提示:1. Is it important to keep healthy
2. Your advice to students about how to keep healthy.
提示词:keep a balanced diet (保持均衡的饮食)
注意:文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health. _________________________________
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【参考答案】
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health. So it is of great importance for us to know how to keep healthy.
First of all, keeping good living habits is good for our health. We should go to bed early and get up early. We must wash our hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. Secondly, it’s necessary to keep a balanced diet. We should eat less meat and eat more vegetables and fruit which have lots of vitamins. What’s more, make sure we take proper exercise every day. Running or walking, simple as it is, has a good influence on our health. Last but not
least, we are supposed to keep a good mood and always have an active attitude. In this way, nothing bad can beat us.
In a word, there is a lot we can do to keep healthy. Let’s take action to be healthier.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍如何保持健康,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍保持健康是重要的;
第二步,详细介绍如何保持健康;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②keep a balanced diet保持均衡的饮食
③make sure确保
④be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
[高分句型]
①We should eat less meat and eat more vegetables and fruit which have lots of vitamins. (which引导的定语从句)
②Running or walking, simple as it is, has a good influence on our health. (as引导的让步状语从句)
4.助人为乐是中国的传统美德 (virtue)。每一个人都有遇到困难需要帮忙的时候,每个人也可以献出爱心,帮助他人。假如你们班要召开主题为:Pleasure in helping others (助人为乐) 的主题班会,请从以下几个方面谈谈你的看法。
提示:
(1)Why help others
(2)How do you provide help to others in life (give 1-2 short examples)
(3)Give your views.
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Pleasure in helping others
Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.______________________________
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【参考答案】
Pleasure in helping others
Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. Every one needs help, and everyone can help others. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it’s necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. I always try my best to help others, especially when they need help. For example, my deskmate is not good at math, and I often help him to solve the difficult math problems. I sometimes help the students who are on duty clean the floor. For another example, once when I was walking in the street, I found an old man who is blind was crossing the road himself. So I ran to him and help him go across the road safely.
In my opinion, helping others is not only a traditional virtue, but also a pleasant thing. There is a saying that goes like this: The meaning of life is about helping others live a better life. If everyone can help each other, the world will be full of love.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍我们为什么要帮助别人;
第二步,结合实例介绍自己是如何帮助别人的;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②a lot of许多
③for example例如
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.(动名词作主语)
②So it’s necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.(动词不定式作主语;定语从句)
③If everyone can help each other, the world will be full of love.(if引导的条件状语从句)
5.作为中国人,我们理应学好汉语。随着中国国际地位的提高,有部分人认为现在学好汉语就可以了,没有必要再学习英语了。你认为还需要学英语吗?近日,你校校园网英语论坛上正在开展以“Is it necessary to learn English ”为主题的讨论。请你写一篇英语短文,结合现在的社会现状和自身的经历,谈谈你的看法并给出相关建议。
提示:
(1)Is it necessary to learn English
(2)Why do you think so
(3)What advice can you give to the people who want to learn English well
要求:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【参考答案】
Is it necessary to learn English With the rise of China’s international status, I think it is important to learn English well.
Learning English well can not only help you get good grades, but also help you communicate with foreign friends. Take myself for example. Last Saturday I met a foreigner who asked for directions on the road, but I couldn’t say exactly what I meant, so I couldn’t help him. Through this, I understand the importance of learning English well. If you want to learn English well, you can do many things, such as making word cards, reading English textbooks, studying with friends and so on.
Finally, I wish your English is getting better and better.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,点明学习英语很重要。
第二步,具体介绍为什么自己觉得学好英语很重要以及对学好英语的一些建议。
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① it is important to do sth.做某事很重要
②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
③do word cards做单词卡片
[高分句型]
①Learning English well can not only help you get good grades, but also help you communicate with foreign friends.(not only...but also 不仅……而且……)
②If you want to learn English well, you can do many things, such as making word cards, reading English textbooks, studying with friends and so on.(If 引导的条件状语从句)
6.午睡(take a nap),对于许多人来说,是一种日常习惯,尤其在炎热的夏季。然而,对于是否应该午睡,人们有不同的看法。假如你是李明,上周你们班举行了一次关于“初三学生是否应该午睡”的班会。你的笔友Peter对此非常感兴趣,请你根据以下信息给他写一封回信,介绍一下讨论内容,并说明你的观点及理由。写作要点:
1. 讨论主题:初三学生是否应该午睡
2. 讨论情况:
(1)三分之一的学生认为应该利用一切时间学习,可以不午睡;
(2)大多数学生认为健康是重要的,午睡是必要的。
3. 说说你的观点及理由。
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确;
4. 至少80词。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing ______________________________________________________________________
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Li Ming
【参考答案】
Dear Peter,
How are you doing Last week, our class held a class meeting on whether students in the third year of junior high school should take a nap. Different students had different views.
1/3 of the students thought that they were supposed to use all their time to study instead of taking a nap. However, most students thought that health was important and taking a nap was necessary. As for me, Sleep is like food for the brain. Enough sleep helps the body and brain grow. Students without enough sleep may get poor grades. They cannot pay attention in class or do well in sports. Therefore, I think that students should get less
schoolwork and more time to sleep. Taking a 20-minute nap during the day is useful.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Li Ming
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封回信,属于书信作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”与“一般现在时”;
③提示:书信开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接书信开头,介绍班会的主题;
第二步,先按照要点提示介绍同学们的讨论情况;
第三步,介绍自己的观点及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①were supposed to应该
②instead of而不是
③pay attention注意
[高分句型]
Therefore, I think that students should get less schoolwork and more time to sleep.(宾语从句)
7.短视频虽然篇幅短小,但是内容丰富、形式多样,它已经成为现代人获取信息和娱乐消遣的一种方式。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向学校校刊英语专栏投稿,谈谈你对短视频的看法。
写作要求:1)介绍短视频的优缺点(short and interesting; harmful information; meaningless...);
2)谈谈你的看法;
3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Short videos are very popular with people now. _________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
Short videos are very popular with people now. They are mostly short and interesting. We can watch them anywhere at any time we like. We can also feel relaxed as well as getting some useful information from them. As a result, not only children but also adults are crazy about short videos now.
However, not all short videos are meaningful and do good to people. People sometimes get harmful information. Besides, we’ll waste a lot of time if we watch too many short videos. Meanwhile, it is bad for our eyes if we spend too much time watching them.
In my opinion, we should learn good things from short videos. At the same time, we shouldn’t spend too much time on them.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要求已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍短视频的现状;
第二步,介绍短视频的优缺点;
第三步,谈谈自己对短视频的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① as a result结果,因此
② be crazy about迷上
③ be bad for对……有害
④ at the same time同时
[高分句型]
Besides, we’ll waste a lot of time if we watch too many short videos.(if引导的条件状语从句)
8.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents ”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇80—100 词的英语短文参加此次活动。要点提示:
1、父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;
2、你对这些问题的看法;
3、你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. _________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给要点提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,陈述自己与父母意见相左的问题;
第二步,陈述自己对这些问题的看法;
第三步,陈述要如何与父母保持良好关系。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
②pay too much attention to太过关注
③try one’s best to尽某人最大的努力
④in order to为了
[高分句型]
Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.(although引导让步状语从句;that引导宾语从句;because引导表语从句)
9.朋友之间的友谊本应是纯真的,但是近日少数校园里出现了一些不和谐的现象,偶有校园暴力 (campus violence) 的发生,对同学造成了伤害。请你根据下面的写作要求,以How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence为题写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1)校园暴力的危害:不利于身心健康;学习能力下降……
2)如何解决:学校教育学生友好相处;家校联合共建和平校园;学生学会尊重他人,自信应对……
3)人人有责保持校园安全,并呼吁同学们抵制校园暴力。
要求:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
3)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇:violent (adj.暴力的), confident (adj.自信的),respect (n./v.尊敬),harmonious (adj.和谐的)
How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence
Good afternoon, everyone. Today I am going to talk something about bullying (霸凌) in school.
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【参考答案】
How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence
Good afternoon, everyone. Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school.
Campus violence is bad for students’ physical and mental health. The students’ ability to learn is declining. They are also likely to suffer from mental illness. So how to solve campus violence
First, the school teaches students to get along well with each other. Second, the school and the family should work together to build a peaceful campus. Third, students should learn to respect others and deal with them confidently. Finally, when we encounter violence on campus, we should seek help from teachers and parents in time.
Everyone has the responsibility to keep the campus safe. We should work together to resist campus violence.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,点明演讲主题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“校园霸凌的危害、如何抵制校园霸凌等”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语,号召大家共同抵制校园霸凌。
[亮点词汇]
①is bad for对……有害
②suffer from忍受
③get along well with与……友好相处
[高分句型]
①Finally, when we encounter violence on campus, we should seek help from teachers and parents in time. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②We should work together to resist campus violence. (动词不定式作目的状语)
10.4月 23 日为世界读书日(World Reading Day)。你们学校开展了“分享书籍,传播快乐”的主题活动。请根据以下通知要求,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对读书的看法,并进行好书推荐,让更多的人参与读书。
World Reading Day is coming!
Do you like reading Why
Which book do you like best What’s it about Why do you like it What can you learn from it
● What do you hope your friends to do about reading
Share with us!
要求:
(1)围绕表格内容进行写作,可根据行文适当增减。
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Share Books To Spread Happiness
April 23th is World Reading Day. ___________________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
Share Books To Spread Happiness
April 23th is World Reading Day. Reading can give us fun and knowledge. For me, I like reading very much. Because it can make me relaxed and learn more about the world.
I like books about history. I like them because I want to learn more about the Chinese history. I hope to understand more historical stories by reading books. I usually spend more than three hours reading books a week.
I hope that everyone should read more books, especially classics, so that we can spread our Chinese culture to the world.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己是否喜欢看书以及原因;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢的读书类型,为什么喜欢它们;
第三步,希望朋友多读经典书籍,有助于传播中国文化
[亮点词汇]
①learn more about多了解
②more than超过
③so that以至于
[高分句型]
①Reading can give us fun and knowledge.(动名词作主语)
②I like them because I want to learn more about the Chinese history.(because引导原因状语从句)2024年中考英语冲刺解题技巧:书面表达之观点看法类
观点类文章一般来说可以有以下几种类型:A.针对某一问题提出观点和看法,论证这一观点;B.针对某一现象,分析原因,提出你的观点;C.针对某一现象,阐述正反方观点,提出你的观点。
认真审题,确定时态、人称
观点类文章的主体时态是一般现在时,表达自己观点时使用第一人称,描述现象、用论据进行论证时使用第三人称。
构思提纲。
A.针对某一主题提出观点,论证这一观点。
这类文章,可以按总分总的思路进行写作,注意第一部分要开篇点题,即开门见山地表明作者的观点;第二部分要条理清晰地阐述论据;第三部分要简洁准确地进行总结。
针对某一主题提出观点类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 针对某一主题表明观点 In my opinion/view, …… According to me, …… As far as I am concerned, ……[] I think it is good/bad to …… As for me, …… Personally, ……
第二段 提供论据论证观点 First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, What’s more, Besides, Finally For one thing, For another thing, Besides
第三段 总结观点 In a word, …… To sum up ,…… All in all, …… In short, ……
B.针对某一现象,分析原因,提出你的观点
针对现象,分析原因, 提出观点类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 描述现象 Nowadays, the computer is playing an important role in our daily life. With the development of technology, more and more students are using smart phones. As we all know, most middle school students spend little time doing sports. It is known to all that many students have to take various classes in their spare time.
第二段 分析原因 First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, What’s more, Besides, Finally For one thing, For another thing, Besides On the one hand, On the other hand
第三段 提出观点 In my opinion/view, …… According to me, …… As far as I am concerned, …… I think it is good/bad to …… As for me, …… Personally, ……
C. 针对某一现象,阐述正反方观点,提出你的观点
提出建议类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 描述现象,说明人们有不同观点。 …… Different people have different opinions about it. We have discussed whether students should take mobile phones to school. We have debated whether teachers should punish students. …… Opinions vary from person to person.
第二段 阐述正方观点 On the one hand, …… On the other hand,…… Almost half of the students suggest that …… Some students believe/ think that ……[] The rest of the students agree that ……[]
第三段 阐述正方观点[]
第四段 提出你的观点 In my opinion/view, …… According to me, …… As far as I am concerned, …… I think it is good/bad to …… As for me, …… Personally, ……
三、遣词造句。
在造句时,初习写作者可以按照由简单句到复合句、特殊句式的写作思路进行写作。在保证句子基本正确的基础上,再将简单句润色为稍为复杂的句式。
四、组句成篇。
写作的第三个步骤是通读文章,并在句与句之间加一些衔接性、过渡性的词汇或短语,使文章更加流畅,并检查是否存在拼写和语法错误。
1.劳动不仅创造美好生活,也有助于培养生活技能和精神品质。某英文报社正在开展以“劳动最光荣”为主题的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对劳动的看法,平时参加哪些劳动,有什么收获。
提示词语:labor (劳动), glorious (光荣), improve, knowledge, skills
提示问题:
What do you think of labor
What kind of labor do you often do
What have you learned from doing so
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2.人们常说:同学之情是彼此最纯洁最珍贵的友谊。可有些同学们不懂得如何建立良好的同学关系。当前,学生欺凌 (bully v.) 事件在中小学校时有发生,同学们对彼此之间如何友好相处,常常把握不好。假设你们学校将围绕“How to get on well with yourclassmates”这一主题召开班会,请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文作为班会课的发言稿,提出你的建议与看法。
要求:
1.要点齐全,适当拓展;
2.行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
4.80 词左右 (文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear friends,
When we are at school, it’s important for us to get on well with our schoolmates. But how can we make it __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.进入九年级以后,我们的学习任务越来越重。在这种情况下,我们要更加重视自己的身体健康。只有拥有健康的身体,我们才能保证学习上的成功。请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题,按照提出的问题谈谈你的看法。
提示:1. Is it important to keep healthy
2. Your advice to students about how to keep healthy.
提示词:keep a balanced diet (保持均衡的饮食)
注意:文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health. _________________________________
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4.助人为乐是中国的传统美德 (virtue)。每一个人都有遇到困难需要帮忙的时候,每个人也可以献出爱心,帮助他人。假如你们班要召开主题为:Pleasure in helping others (助人为乐) 的主题班会,请从以下几
个方面谈谈你的看法。
提示:
(1)Why help others
(2)How do you provide help to others in life (give 1-2 short examples)
(3)Give your views.
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Pleasure in helping others
Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.______________________________
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5.作为中国人,我们理应学好汉语。随着中国国际地位的提高,有部分人认为现在学好汉语就可以了,没有必要再学习英语了。你认为还需要学英语吗?近日,你校校园网英语论坛上正在开展以“Is it necessary to learn English ”为主题的讨论。请你写一篇英语短文,结合现在的社会现状和自身的经历,谈谈你的看法并给出相关建议。
提示:
(1)Is it necessary to learn English
(2)Why do you think so
(3)What advice can you give to the people who want to learn English well
要求:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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6.午睡(take a nap),对于许多人来说,是一种日常习惯,尤其在炎热的夏季。然而,对于是否应该午睡,人们有不同的看法。假如你是李明,上周你们班举行了一次关于“初三学生是否应该午睡”的班会。你的笔友Peter对此非常感兴趣,请你根据以下信息给他写一封回信,介绍一下讨论内容,并说明你的观点及理由。写作要点:
1. 讨论主题:初三学生是否应该午睡
2. 讨论情况:
(1)三分之一的学生认为应该利用一切时间学习,可以不午睡;
(2)大多数学生认为健康是重要的,午睡是必要的。
3. 说说你的观点及理由。
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确;
4. 至少80词。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing ______________________________________________________________________
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Li Ming
7.短视频虽然篇幅短小,但是内容丰富、形式多样,它已经成为现代人获取信息和娱乐消遣的一种方式。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向学校校刊英语专栏投稿,谈谈你对短视频的看法。
写作要求:1)介绍短视频的优缺点(short and interesting; harmful information; meaningless...);
2)谈谈你的看法;
3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Short videos are very popular with people now. _________________________________________________
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8.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents ”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇80—100 词的英语短文参加此次活动。要点提示:
1、父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;
2、你对这些问题的看法;
3、你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. _________________________________________________
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9.朋友之间的友谊本应是纯真的,但是近日少数校园里出现了一些不和谐的现象,偶有校园暴力 (campus violence) 的发生,对同学造成了伤害。请你根据下面的写作要求,以How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence为题写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1)校园暴力的危害:不利于身心健康;学习能力下降……
2)如何解决:学校教育学生友好相处;家校联合共建和平校园;学生学会尊重他人,自信应对……
3)人人有责保持校园安全,并呼吁同学们抵制校园暴力。
要求:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
3)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇:violent (adj.暴力的), confident (adj.自信的),respect (n./v.尊敬),harmonious (adj.和谐的)
How to Protect Ourselves in Campus Violence
Good afternoon, everyone. Today I am going to talk something about bullying (霸凌) in school.
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10.4月 23 日为世界读书日(World Reading Day)。你们学校开展了“分享书籍,传播快乐”的主题活动。请根据以下通知要求,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对读书的看法,并进行好书推荐,让更多的人参与读书。
World Reading Day is coming!
Do you like reading Why
Which book do you like best What’s it about Why do you like it What can you learn from it
● What do you hope your friends to do about reading
Share with us!
要求:
(1)围绕表格内容进行写作,可根据行文适当增减。
(2)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Share Books To Spread Happiness
April 23th is World Reading Day. ___________________________________________________________
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