2024年中考英语(书面表达)模拟真题 (浙江专用)
1.(2024·浙江金华·二模)假定你是李华,请你对英国朋友Max的邮件进行回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, Long time no talk! I bet you are busy with your upcoming exams. Big news—I’m moving to Zhejiang with my parents, starting Grade Two there next term. Can’t wait to see you! But I’m a bit nervous about my coming school life. Would you mind sharing your middle school experience and giving me some advice Hope you’re doing well. Thanks! Yours, Max
Dear Max,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Max,
Glad to hear from you! Yes, exams are keeping me on my toes, but I’m managing. Congratulations on your move to Zhejiang! It’ll be exciting to start a new school here.
Middle school was a mix of challenges and fun for me. At first, I felt a bit nervous, but I quickly found my way by making friends and joining interesting activities in school clubs.
My advice would be to get involved in activities you enjoy—it’s a great way to meet people. Also, hug the cultural differences, which will enrich your experience. You’ll get used to everything soon.
Looking forward to seeing you in Zhejiang!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据信中提到的问题写一封回信,给出自己的建议,注意语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题,引出下文要给出的建议;
第二步,详细介绍自己的中学生活;
第三步,给出建议。
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……的信
②making friends交朋友
③get used to习惯于
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
① At first, I felt a bit nervous, but I quickly found my way by making friends and joining interesting activities in school clubs.(but表示转折)
②Also, hug the cultural differences, which will enrich your experience.(which引导的定语从句)
③Looking forward to seeing you in Zhejiang!(动名词作宾语)
2.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)假设你是第五中学的学生,在五一劳动节到来之际,学校英语俱乐部以“How often do you help do chores at home ”为主题就学生在家做家务情况进行了调查。你作为俱乐部的一员,将在下次俱乐部活动上对调查结果进行汇报,请根据下列图表描述学生在家做家务的调查结果,并分析其原因,提出恰当的建议。
注意:
1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
2.词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
Hello, everyone! We asked students of No.5 Middle School about how often they help do chores at home. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! We asked students of No.5 Middle School about how often they help do chores at home. Here are the results.
Good news is that most of the students do chores at least once a week. However, we were surprised to find that a quarter of them never share housework while only 1% do it every day. Students may think they are too tired on weekdays to do chores. Some even think it’s their parents’ job.
But I think everyone should share the work and sometimes we can take some break from schoolwork by doing chores. So I suggest we should do some basic housework every day, like making our own bed or sweeping the floor.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据下列图表描述学生在家做家务的调查结果,并分析其原因,提出恰当的建议,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,描述学生在家做家务的调查结果并分析原因;
第三步,提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①at least至少
②be surprised to do做某事很惊讶
③sweep the floor扫地
[高分句型]
①Good news is that most of the students do chores at least once a week. (that引导的表语从句)
②But I think everyone should share the work and sometimes we can take some break from schoolwork by doing chores. (宾语从句)
3.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你是否想起很多人很多事,有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部向九年级学生征集稿件,题为“给*的一封信”,
请你参考以下内容写一封稿件投稿。
内容要点
Person Memories Feelings
myself/parent/teacher/classmate/... 1. have great time/make progress... 2. have trouble/make mistakes… 3. ... sweet/sad/happy thankful/regretful/proud ...
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
2.词数80—100,开头已给出(不计词数)。
A letter to ________
Dear ________,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A letter to myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to my junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you don’t even have the courage to ask your teacher about your study. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you have become more confident and outgoing. Do you remember fighting with your best friend Sometimes silence can lead to misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要是一般现在时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要漏写你的感受,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全标题和收信人;
第二步,具体阐述你对初中生活的回忆;
第三步,说明你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①warm-hearted热心的
②confident自信的
③misunderstanding误解
④unforgettable难忘的
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.(what引导的宾语从句)
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.(强调句)
4.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)英语杂志社Sunday Mail正在开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的英语征文活动。请根据广告中的信息用英语写一篇100 词左右的征文,分享一件你自己认为自豪的事情。开头已给出 (不计词数)。
Articles Wanted
One Thing I’m Proud of
What is the thing you are proud of
When did it happen and what did you do
Why does this thing make you feel proud Or what important lesson did you learn from this thing
Tell us what you think!
Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was still a teenager. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that all the old women’s sons and daughters were far away from her, making their lives in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.
I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit these old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. One of them was so moved that tears fell down. Caring for those around us and passing our happiness to others are what have learnt that day. I made it, and I feel really proud of myself that gave comfort to those who needed most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据所给广告中的信息完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍事情发生的经过;
第三步,介绍这件事为什么使你感到骄傲或者从中学到什么重要的事情以及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①silently静静地
②have a chat with sb.和某人聊天
③far away from…离……很远
④sympathetic同情的
⑤occur to被想起
[高分句型]
We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
5.(2024·浙江丽水·一模)4月22日是世界地球日 (The World Earth Day),2024年度的主题为“全球战塑” (Planet vs Plastics),你校英文报就该主题征集环保倡议书,请你根据下表内容,用英文写一则倡议书投稿。
Theme of 2024: Planet vs. Plastics
内容要点 参考词汇
Actions ·stop using plastic bags... ·reuse/ recycle books and... ·ride a bike or walk to school …
Purposes ·reduce plastic pollution …
注意:
1. 文中必须包含表格中的内容要点,可适当发挥 (参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;倡议书的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Saving the earth begins with small things.
Let’s take action now!
【答案】例文:
Saving the earth begins with small things. It is much easier than you may think to help in daily life.
For example, we can stop using plastic bags when shopping, or recycle our old books and clothes, which will surely help cut down pollution. Walking and biking are also good ways to reduce greenhouse gases. If the destination is a bit far, we can take public transportation. We can also join environmental programs, such as the City Park Clean-up Day, to help make a greener world.
All these small things can make a difference and lead to a better future. Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:材料“行动”和“目的”部分不得遗漏,文章以第一人称视角叙述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,点题说明拯救地球从小事做起;
第二步,详细阐述环保的具体行动以及目的;
第三步,总结全文,发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life日常生活
②cut down削减
③such as例如
④make a difference起作用;有影响
[高分句型]
①If the destination is a bit far, we can take public transportation. (条件状语从句)
②We can also join environmental programs, such as the City Park Clean-up Day, to help make a greener world.(不定式作目的状语)
6.(2024·浙江湖州·三模)你校英语文化节举办了主题为“Sharing My Hometown”的短视频征集活动,你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿,在英语课上分享你们的创作历程及收获。
Process Gains
·make a plan ·understand local culture better
·...
·collect information
·create a video
注意:
(1)发言稿必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;
(2)你们的收获至少两条;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:收获 gain
Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with,
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Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文:
Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully. After that, we made every effort to collect information in different ways. For example, we talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.
From this experience, we have gained a lot. Above all, we now understand our local culture better. In addition, our English has improved greatly. Last but not least, we’ve realized how important good teamwork is!
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为发言稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括表格中所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,道出发言目的:分享制作经验;
第二步,分享收获与感受;
第三步,感谢大家聆听。
[亮点词汇]
① to start with 首先
② above all 最重要的是
③ last but not least 最后但同样重要的
[高分句型]
①Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.(which引导定语从句)
②Last but not least, we’ve realized how important good teamwork is!(宾语从句)
7.(2024·浙江舟山·二模)某英文报正开展“Our life has changed for the better”征文竞赛,请你投稿,从下表所列的几个方面描述过去和现在美好生活的变化,并谈谈你的感受。
In the past Now
Living condition small house, … comfortable house, …
Leisure (休闲) activity swim in the river or sea, few books, ... swim in the swimming pool, more books, ...
注意:
(1)短文中必须描述表格中所列的内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80—100,短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
首句:Our life has developed rapidly.
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【答案】例文:
Our life has developed rapidly. People’s living conditions have improved a lot. In the past, most people lived in small houses with no air conditioners. But now they live in big houses which are more comfortable. And people now have more leisure activities. Before, they swam only in the river or sea. Now they can play in the pool with warm water. For children, they used to have few books to read, but they can enjoy more books munications are becoming easier and quicker, as people use mobile phones, and computers instead of writing letters.
With the development of the society, our life is becoming better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息,写短文介绍过去和现在生活中的变化。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题并根据表格内容介绍人们生活条件及休闲活动的变化;
第二步,谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①air conditioners空调
②used to do sth.过去常常做某事
③instead of代替,而不是
[高分句型]
①But now they live in big houses which are more comfortable.(which引导定语从句)
8.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)你校的结对学校——英国Sunshine School师生团将来你校,学生会提供了活动计划(Plan A和Plan B)表,请你选择其中之一,在英语课上介绍该方案和目的。
Plan A Plan B
Time 2:00 p.m.~5:00 p.m. Friday, May 10th 2:00 p.m.~5:00 p.m. Friday, May 100th
Places the art room & the square the school playground
Activities 1. make kites; 2. fly the kites; 3. … 1. play some games; 2. have a soccer match; 3. …
Purposes communicate with each other; enjoy the beautiful sights of the school; … a good way to relax; build friendship; …
要求:1. 两个计划中任选其一;
2. 必须包括一个计划中的所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
3. 词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Some teachers and students from our partner school — Sunshine School will visit us on May 10th. I think Plan ________ is more suitable for them.
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【答案】例文1:
Some teachers and students from our partner school — Sunshine School will visit us on May 10th. I think Plan A is more suitable for them.
The activities will begin at 2 o’clock and finish at 5 o’clock in the afternoon. All the activities are about kites, a traditional Chinese folk art form. First, the teachers and students will learn how to make kites with the help of our volunteers in the art room. After that, they will go to the square to fly the kites. At the same time, we can communicate with each other and enjoy the beautiful sights of our school. What a great idea! Finally, in order to know more about the art form, they will also watch a video about the kite festival.
I hope the teachers and students will like the plan!
例文2:
Some teachers and students from our partner school — Sunshine School will visit us on May 10th. I think Plan B is more suitable for them.
The activities will begin at 2 o’clock and finish at 5 o’clock in the afternoon. We have three activities in total. The first activity is Chinese Games. Students and teachers will have a chance to experience some traditional Chinese games together, like playing cuju, an old Chinese soccer game. Playing games is a good way to relax. Also, we will have a soccer match, which can help us build friendship and learn from each other. After that, there will be a music show. All the students and teachers can show themselves while having fun together.
I hope the teachers and students will like the plan!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息,选择一个计划介绍该方案及目的。
[写作步骤]
第一步,选择计划A或计划B;
第二步,介绍具体的时间、地点、活动及目的;
第三步,收尾,希望老师和学生们喜欢这个计划。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of ... 在……的帮助下
②at the same time 与此同时
③in total 总共
④have fun 玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①First, the teachers and students will learn how to make kites with the help of our volunteers in the art room.(疑问词+动词不定式)
②Also, we will have a soccer match, which can help us build friendship and learn from each other.(which引导非限定性定语从句)
9.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件,向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。
Presents Reasons
a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it
Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … …
注意:
(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数:90-140。
Dear Michael,
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Michael,
There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.
For your mother, I think a silk scarf from Hangzhou is a nice present. It’s soft and comfortable. There are usually beautiful Chinese paintings on it. And you can give your father some Chinese tea. It’s a kind of healthy drink with a long history. Paper cutting is a traditional Chinese art. Chinese artists cut the paper into different shapes, such as flowers or buildings. I believe your friends will like paper cuts.
I hope these can help you.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可参考表格中给出的礼物来推荐三件有特色的礼物。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,推荐礼物;
第二步,具体推荐三种有特色的礼物;
第三步,收尾,希望能帮到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①give sb. sth. 给某人某物
②traditional Chinese art 传统中国艺术
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.(There be句型)
②I believe your friends will like paper cuts.(省略that的宾语从句)
10.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)假如你是李明,你们学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“An unforgettable ”为主题,开展征文活动,请你写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你最难忘的一次经历及感受。
要求:
1.请先将题目补全后再作答;
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3.词数 80—100 词左右。
An Unforgettable
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Trip
Last month, I went to Xi’an with my classmates. The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it.
We went there by train and it took us three hours to get there. On the first day, we visited some museums and saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings. They were wonderful. In the evening, we had some special food, such as biangbiang noodles, liangpi, roujiamo and so on. I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. The next day, we went to some famous places in Xi’an, such as the Terra-cotta Warriors, the Bell Tower and the Drum Tower. Of course, we took a lot of photos.
We had a great time and we also learned a lot about Chinese history. It was an interesting trip and I hope to pay a visit to Xi’an again!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:介绍自己的一次令自己难忘的旅行经历,可适当发挥,注意逻辑清晰,表达准确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍去了哪里旅行;
第二步,具体介绍旅行的过程;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③have a great time玩得开心
④pay a visit to参观
[高分句型]
①The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it. (so ... that引导结果状语从句)
②I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. (which引导定语从句)
11.(2024·浙江宁波·一模)假如你是李华,为了提高学生对科学的兴趣,你校上周五在学校体育馆举行了校园科学节活动。你的英国笔友Tom 得知后,发邮件向你咨询科学节相关情况。请你根据邮件内容给他回复 一封邮件,并谈谈你的感受!
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(2)需包含邮件中划线的所有要点提示;
(3)词数80左右,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(4)参考词汇: attend a science lecture、make science works、give a science speech
To : LiHua@ Subject: Science Festival Dear Li Hua. How is it going You know I am quite interested in science and I think it is important for the development of a country. Yesterday, I was told that there was a fantastic science festival in your school. Could you please tell me something about it When and where was the festival held Why did your school hold the festival What activities did you take part in Which one was the most interesting to you And how do you like the festival Looking forward to your reply. Yours,
Tom
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
Happy to learn that you want to know about our science festival, I’m writing to share my experience and feelings with you .
To arouse the students’ interest in science, our school held the science festival at the school gym last Friday. Besides attending a science lecture, I also gave a science speech and made some science works. Though I am not good at making works, I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. It was really an unforgettable experience in my school life. And all of us thought highly of this meaningful festival.
How about your school science festival Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:需包含邮件中划线的所有要点,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述写作意图,想介绍科学节分享自己的经验和感受;
第二步,介绍科学节的目的,活动和自己的经验,感受;
第三步,对科学节的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①share…with…和……分享……
②be good at 擅长于
③look forward to盼望
④arouse激起
[高分句型]
①I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. (It作形式宾语)
②Though I am not good at making works, I still find it the most interesting activity that I have ever joined in during the festival. (让步状语从句)
12.(23-24九年级下·浙江绍兴·期中)在校 “劳动教育月” 期间,你校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home” 主题征文活动。请根据下表信息,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的至少两项家务以及你的感受。
What you often do at home What you have learned
◆cook meals ◆water flowers ◆wash the dishes ◆look after pets ◆take out the rubbish ◆… ◆life skills; ◆responsibility (责任); ◆…
注意:
(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当增加细节;
(2)词数:80-100;
(3)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
短文首句:I have always been a good helper at home.
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【答案】例文:
I have always been a good helper at home. As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework.
Last Sunday, after breakfast, I began to help my parents wash clothes. Though washing clothes isn’t difficult, it took me a long time. After that, I tried to tidy my bedroom. I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things. Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework for my parents, but also learn life skills.
I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为 “一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出自己在家里是个好帮手;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从几个方面讲述自己做的家务;
第三步,书写结语。介绍做家务的感受及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know 众所周知
②a good helper 一个好帮手
③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
④try to do sth. 尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①Though washing clothes isn’t difficult, it took me a long time. (though引导让步状语从句;动名词作主语)
②Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework for my parents, but also learn life skills. (现在分词作伴随状语;because引导原因状语从句;not only…but also…不仅……而且……)
③I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. (省略that的宾语从句)
④In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be. (介词短语;the+比较级…, the+比较级…“越……越……”)
13.(23-24九年级下·浙江·期中)中国文化博大精深,为了传承中国传统文化,你校近日将举办“传
统艺术展会”(The Traditional Art Fair)。假如你是李华,请根据下面表格给外教Mr. Green 写一封电子邮件,介绍该展会并邀请他参加活动。
When 1:00—4:00 this Friday afternoon
Where school hall
Who …
What ·live shows ·handicrafts (手工艺品) ·…
Why · understand...better ·…
注意:1.内容需包括表格中所有要点,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数 100词左右,邮件首尾句已给出,仅供参考。
To: Mr. Green
From: Li Hua
Dear Mr. Green, I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Art Fair.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua
【答案】Possible version:
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Art Fair. It will be held in the school hall from 1:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. this Friday.
In order to help more people understand the traditional Chinese culture much better as well as build up cultural confidence, all the students and teachers will join in the fair. At the fair, you’ll enjoy live shows like traditional dance and folk music. Also, there will be a display of handicrafts, including paper cuttings and sky lanterns. What’s more, if you are interested, you can take part in any of these activities on your own.
It would be a great honor to have you with us. Please let me know if you can make it.
Looking forward to your reply!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:根据所给表格完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,根据表格,介绍传统艺术展会的相关信息;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②as well as以及
③build up建立
④display展览
⑤take part in参加
[高分句型]
What’s more, if you are interested, you can take part in any of these activities on your own.(if引导条件状语从句)
14.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)每年的“世界读书日”(4月23日) 之前,中国新闻出版研究院都会发布“青少年阅读调查报告 (Youth Reading Survey)”。请根据下表信息,并结合自身实际, 谈谈你的观点和看法。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名:
2. 词数80—100,开头已给出 (不计词数)。
Reading is very important in our daily life. Last week, we made a survey about reading among the teenagers. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
Reading is very important in our daily life. Last week, we made a survey about reading among the teenagers. Here are the results. Only 6% of teenagers read books less than 1 hours a week. About 27% like to read books 1-2 hours a week. 25% of teenagers read books more than 2 hours a week. About 42% like to read books more than 3 hours a week.
In my opinion, reading can not only open our minds, but also make us clever and happy. Reading can cultivate oneself. One who is filled with knowledge always behaves with elegance. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will be very helpful for us!
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是看图作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“读书在我们日常生活中是非常重要的”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——图表信息、你的观点及看法等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“让我们现在开始读书”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①start reading开始读书
②open our minds放开我们的思想
③cultivate oneself修养自己
[高分句型]
①One who is filled with knowledge always behaves with elegance. (定语从句)
②Let’s start reading now. (祈使句)
15.(23-24九年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习)最近,你班召开了一次以“What Are Good Parents Like ”为主题的班会。请你综合以下同学的观点,并发表你自己的看法,写一篇短文,向学校校刊投稿。
Sam: Good parents are understanding. They never push us too hard when we get poor grades.
Bob: My parents are supportive. They always bring out the best in me.
Ann: Good parents are like stars in the sky. Sometimes we can’t see them, but they are always there.
要求:
(1)100词左右;
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
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【答案】例文:
What Are Good Parents Like
Recently we have had a lively discussion about what good parents are like. Different students have different
ideas. Sam thinks good parents are understanding. They never push us too hard when we get poor grades. Bob says good parents always bring out the best in us. Amy agrees that good parents are like stars in the sky. Sometimes we can’t see them, but they are always there.
In my opinion, good parents should be good teachers as well as good friends of us. They should also set good examples for us.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。首先介绍同学们就“好父母是什么样的”进行了热烈的讨论;
第二步,具体阐述三位同学的观点;
第三步,表达自己的感受,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a discussion about讨论某个话题
②get poor grades取得糟糕的成绩
③bring out the best in sb激发某人最好的一面
④in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①Sam thinks good parents are understanding.(省略that的宾语从句)
16.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)你校英语节举办了主题为“Sharing My Hometown”的短视频征集活动,你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿,在英语课上分享你们的创作过程及收获。
Process Gains (收获)
Make a plan Collect materials Create a video Learn about local culture better …
注意:
(1) 发言稿必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;
(2) 你们的收获至少两条;
(3) 次数:110字左右。
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【答案】参考范文:
Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown.
To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully. After that, we made effort to collect information in different ways. For example, We talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.
From this experience we have gained a lot. Above all, we now understand our local culture better. In addition, our English has improved greatly. Last but not least, we’ve realized how important good teamwork is!
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:考生应该根据表格中所列要点进行写作,可适当补充细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,表明写作目的:分享制作经验;
第二步,陈述短视频制作过程;
第三步,分享收获与感受;
第四步,感谢大家聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①make every effort to do尽最大努力去做某事
②for example例如
③one of……之一
④in addition此外
⑤last but not least最后但并非最不重要的
[高分句型]
①we talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. (who引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③we’ve realized how important good teamwork is! (how引导的宾语从句)
17.(2024·浙江温州·一模)为倡导理性消费,增强学生理财意识,学校Life Skill Club 开展“零用钱管理能手”评选活动。请结合以下图表,写一篇英语短文参与评选,谈谈你每月零用钱的使用情况及理由。
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:100词左右;首句已给出,不计入总词数。
I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. To use my pocket money properly, I divide it into three parts. I spend 50% of the money on books, pens and crayons. They are necessary for my study and
hobby. Besides, I plan to travel to Xi’an this summer holiday, so about 30% is saved every month to pay for the plane tickets and the hotel. Finally, I donate 20% to help sick children get better medical aid. I believe every little bit of love counts.
Managing money is important for me. It’s not just about spending and saving. It’s about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文的时态以一般现在时为主;
③提示:本文的要点的总方向已给出,需要考生详细地叙述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍文章的主旨是分享如何管理零花钱;
第二步,详细介绍如何做;
第三步,结束语,管理钱很重要。
[亮点词汇]
①properly正确地
②Besides除此之外
[高分句型]
①To use my pocket money properly, I divide it into three parts.(不定式结构表目的)
②Managing money is important for me.(动名词作主语)
18.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你是否有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?假定你是李华,你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件,题为“写给自己的一封信”,请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself 内容要点 参考词汇
Memories Sweet: make progress…have a great time… Bitter: make mistakes…have trouble…
Feelings positive: take pride in…thankful… Negative: regretful…
注意:
(1)文中必须包含两项内容要点,可适当发挥(参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考);
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80~100,稿件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. You had trouble asking your teachers about your study. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you have made progress and become more confident and outgoing. You did have a great time in school. You took pride in yourself and were grateful to the people who helped you.
Do you remember the mistake of fighting with your best friend You felt regretful. Sometimes silence can lead to misunderstandings.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般过去时与一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆;
第二步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①had trouble doing有困难做
②with the help of在……帮助下
③took pride in以……为骄傲
[高分句型]
It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (强调句)