2024年中考英语总复习：书面表达之命题作文（辽宁专用）
【题型概述】
命题作文是指在中考中给出一个具体的题目，要求学生根据这个题目进行写作。这种类型的作文题目通常具有明确的写作方向和内容要求，学生需要在规定的范围内完成作文。中考英语作文是对学生英语综合运用能力的考查，命题作文作为其中一种类型，需要学生在理解题目要求的基础上，合理构思、准确表达。通过不断练习和总结经验，学生可以提高写作能力
【命题解读】
理解题目： 仔细阅读题目，确保完全理解要求。明确补全对象，以及所给信息或提示的内容。
分析信息： 仔细分析所给的信息或提示，包括关键词、主题、时态等。理解信息的含义和要求，确定如何补全文本。
构思内容： 根据所给信息或提示，构思文章、段落或故事的内容。确定主题和大意，并考虑如何展开和组织内容。
确定结构： 根据所给信息和构思的内容，确定文章、段落或故事的结构。包括引言、主体和结论，确保逻辑清晰、条理清楚。
扩展细节： 根据需要，添加细节或补充信息，以丰富内容，增加可读性和吸引力。
语言表达： 注意语言表达的准确性和流畅性。选择恰当的词汇和句式，确保表达清晰、连贯。
【应试技巧】
紧扣主题：确保文章的每一部分都与题目紧密相关。
合理布局：合理安排文章的结构，使文章条理清晰。
词汇运用：使用恰当的词汇和短语，避免重复和单调。
语法准确：注意语法的准确性，避免语法错误。
个性化表达：在文章中加入个人的观点和感受，使文章更具个性。
“研学旅行”是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园，以各种不同的形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的教育活动。每个学期学校都会组织类似活动，大部分学生会参加，他们认为通过研学活动可以增加不一样的体验，也有小部分学生不参加，他们认为学习时间过于紧张，不如在学校自习。对此，你的看法是什么？请以“The Study Trip”为题给校刊写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：
①介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
②表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由(至少2点)。
注意事项：
①短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
②80词左右；
③文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：研学旅行 study trip； 乘骑设施 ride
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
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例文：
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Last year, we went to the USA. We had a good time there. We made friends with them who are interested in
Chinese. We studied English with them. I think a study trip is a good way for students to study.
When we have a study trip, we can visit many places of natural beauty. During the study trip, we can learn many things that we can’t learn at school. We can be served with different new food and know more things about different customs.
In my opinion, we should hold more activities like this. If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries.
I hope study trips are becoming more and more popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”关于研学旅行的写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，点名主题，“研学旅行”现在很受学生欢迎；
第二步，介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
第三步，表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由；
第四步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②have a good time玩得高兴
③be served with向……提供
④in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. (who引导的定语从句)
②If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries. (If引导的条件状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句)
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（一）
良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长非常重要。假如你的学校准备举办一个健康讲座呼吁同学们养成良好的生活习惯。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，谈一谈自己的看法。
提示：（1）Develop healthy living habits (eating, living, sleeping...).
（2）Give some suggestions (exercise, after school activities...).
注意：（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Health is the greatest wealth to everyone.
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【答案】范文：
Health is the greatest wealth to everyone. So we should develop healthy living habits. First, we should have healthy eating habits. As we know, we must have enough healthy food. It’s necessary to have breakfast on time. When we have meals, we should eat more fish, eggs and meat. Remember to eat enough fruit and vegetables. Second, don’t forget to wash your hands before meals. Brushing your teeth twice a day is also important. Third, getting enough sleep is necessary for you. Staying up late is bad for our health. So we’d better go to bed early and get up early.
What’s more, it’s good for us to take more exercise, such as swimming, running and playing basketball. It will keep us active and strong. Last but not least, we should take up a hobby because hobbies are enjoyable and relaxing activities. They help us live happier and healthier.
All in all, if we are able to follow these tips, we can live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍健康的重要性；
第二步，提出如何养成良好生活习惯的建议；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①on time按时
②stay up late熬夜
③be bad for对……有坏处
④such as例如
⑤take up培养
[高分句型]
①It’s necessary to have breakfast on time.（动词不定式作主语）
②Remember to eat enough fruit and vegetables.（动词不定式作宾语）
（二）
我们也许还不能做出多么惊天动地的事情，但我们可以为别人做一些力所能及的小事。你为陌生人做过哪些小事？或者你接受过陌生人的帮助吗？请你以“A small act of kindness”为题，写一篇英语作文。
要点：1. Describe the cause, process, and outcome of the event;
2. Talk about how it affected you.
注意：1. 短文须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80左右。
A small act of kindness
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【答案】例文
A small act of kindness
I felt so upset when I failed the math exam. As I was about to cross the street to my home, I dropped all the exam papers and books at the crossing. I hurried to pick them up, but some papers blew away in the wind. At that moment, a young girl gave me a hand. After I stood up with all the papers and books under my arm, I wanted to thank her. She just smiled at me and left quickly. I suddenly felt the world didn’t seem so bad.
That girl’s small act of kindness changed me and encouraged me to help others in need. I will remember that forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示要点介绍一个小小的善举，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，详细介绍别人对自己的帮助；
第二步，介绍自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up捡起
②blow away吹走
③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I felt so upset when I failed the math exam.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②After I stood up with all the papers and books under my arm, I wanted to thank her.(after引导的时间状语从句)
（三）
经过三年的努力，你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少收获和进步，请你以“I’ve achieved a lot”为题，在生活技能的获得，学习方法的掌握，良好习惯的形成等方面选取其中一个方面，结合自己实际，谈谈你是如何取得进步的。
提示：
（1）What did you achieve
（2）How did you achieve it
注意：
（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I’ve achieved a lot
Looking back on the past three years, I have achieved a lot.
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【答案】例文：
I’ve achieved a lot
Looking back on the past three years, I have achieved a lot.
I used to be a person who lacked self-confidence. And I was not good at study. So I hardly made any progress. But my classmates were actively communicating with me, and I made friends with them. My teachers cared about my study. Therefore, my grades have gone up gradually. Besides, encouraged by my head teacher, I joined the school English club. I have started the habit of reading English every morning. I even won a prize in the English competition. These changes helped me regain my self-confidence.
I’m very happy with my achievements. I believe the harder you work, the more progress you will make.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据提示问题进行写作，同时适当补充细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题，表明自己过去三年有很大的进步；
第二步，详细介绍自己取得了哪些进步以及是如何取得进步的；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②communicate with sb和某人交流
③make friends with和……交朋友
④care about关心，在意
[高分句型]
①I used to be a person who lacked self-confidence.（who引导定语从句）
②I believe the harder you work, the more progress you will make.（the+比较级，the+比较级）
（四）
假如你所在学校的英语杂志社正在举办“Help with Housework and Develop Ourselves”征文活动，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文向杂志社投稿。
提示：
（1）What housework can you help with at home
（2）Why should you help with housework
注意：
（1）短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Help with Housework and Develop Ourselves
It’s important for us to help with housework. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Help with Housework and Develop Ourselves
It’s important for us to help with housework. It can improve our independence and teach us how to take care of ourselves.
I often help my parents do many chores. In the morning, I make the bed and water flowers. They are relaxing and interesting. In the evening, I often clean the room and take out the trash. We can’t depend on parents too much. Besides, when I see the tidy room, I feel proud of myself. My parents are pleased with me. I think it’s our duty to help our parents with some chores.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你在家做的家务活；
第二步，说明你为什么要帮忙做家务；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③depend on依靠
[高分句型]
①Besides, when I see the tidy room, I feel proud of myself. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②I think it’s our duty to help our parents with some chores.（省略that的宾语从句；it固定句式）
（五）
“少年强则国强！”作为新时代青年，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
要求：（1）字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
（2）思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；
（3）词数：80~100。
参考词汇：
How to Make Myself Better
As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By doing this, I will make myself better and better.
【答案】范文：
How to Make Myself Better
As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better.
First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I’ll not be afraid to face challenges anymore and try my best to solve the problems. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people.
By doing this, I will make myself better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇材料作文；
时态:时态为“一般将来时”；
提示:写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“如何塑造更好的自己”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“饮食、锻炼、睡眠、解决困难、保持好的人际关系等”几个方面重点介绍如何塑造更好的自己；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我将会塑造越来越好的自己”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
enough sleep足够的睡眠；
be afraid to害怕做某事。
[高分句型]
①Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends.（it固定句型）
②I’ll also do what I can to help other people.（what引导的宾语从句）
（六）
阅读在英语学习中占有很重要的地位，为此，你的英语老师要举办一场“爱上阅读”分享会。请你以“Let’s enjoy reading!”为题写一篇文章，分享你在英语阅读方面的经历、体会和建议。
要求：
1. 80—100词；
2文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1.回顾你的阅读经历（时间、内容……）；
2.谈淡你的阅读体会（喜好、感悟……）：
3.分享你的阅读建议（读什么、怎么读……）。
Let’s enjoy reading!
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例文：
Let’s enjoy reading!
I like reading a lot. In my spare time, I often read newspaper and magazines, from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what’s going on around the world.
Last summer vacation, I read a story book, mainly about a little girl in a poor mountain area who missed her mother. Her mother had to go to work far away in order to send her to school. The girl and her mother met at most once a year. I was very moved after reading this story. I have better living conditions than the little girl, so I should study harder than her.
Reading can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring more happiness.
In my spare time, I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities. I will read aloud every morning. I will make good use of my summer vacation to read. I will share my favorite books with my friends and classmates. It’s time for us to form a good reading habit because it’s important and necessary for us. I believe I will enjoy reading in the summer vacation. At the same time, I also suggest everyone can read more books to broaden horizons. Let’s see the world in the book.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出自己阅读的经历、感悟以及建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。2024年中考英语总复习：书面表达之命题作文（辽宁专用）
【题型概述】
命题作文是指在中考中给出一个具体的题目，要求学生根据这个题目进行写作。这种类型的作文题目通常具有明确的写作方向和内容要求，学生需要在规定的范围内完成作文。中考英语作文是对学生英语综合运用能力的考查，命题作文作为其中一种类型，需要学生在理解题目要求的基础上，合理构思、准确表达。通过不断练习和总结经验，学生可以提高写作能力
【命题解读】
理解题目： 仔细阅读题目，确保完全理解要求。明确补全对象，以及所给信息或提示的内容。
分析信息： 仔细分析所给的信息或提示，包括关键词、主题、时态等。理解信息的含义和要求，确定如何补全文本。
构思内容： 根据所给信息或提示，构思文章、段落或故事的内容。确定主题和大意，并考虑如何展开和组织内容。
确定结构： 根据所给信息和构思的内容，确定文章、段落或故事的结构。包括引言、主体和结论，确保逻辑清晰、条理清楚。
扩展细节： 根据需要，添加细节或补充信息，以丰富内容，增加可读性和吸引力。
语言表达： 注意语言表达的准确性和流畅性。选择恰当的词汇和句式，确保表达清晰、连贯。
【应试技巧】
紧扣主题：确保文章的每一部分都与题目紧密相关。
合理布局：合理安排文章的结构，使文章条理清晰。
词汇运用：使用恰当的词汇和短语，避免重复和单调。
语法准确：注意语法的准确性，避免语法错误。
个性化表达：在文章中加入个人的观点和感受，使文章更具个性。
“研学旅行”是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园，以各种不同的形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的教育活动。每个学期学校都会组织类似活动，大部分学生会参加，他们认为通过研学活动可以增加不一样的体验，也有小部分学生不参加，他们认为学习时间过于紧张，不如在学校自习。对此，你的看法是什么？请以“The Study Trip”为题给校刊写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：
①介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
②表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由(至少2点)。
注意事项：
①短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
②80词左右；
③文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：研学旅行 study trip； 乘骑设施 ride
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（一）
良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长非常重要。假如你的学校准备举办一个健康讲座呼吁同学们养成良好的生活习惯。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，谈一谈自己的看法。
提示：（1）Develop healthy living habits (eating, living, sleeping...).
（2）Give some suggestions (exercise, after school activities...).
注意：（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Health is the greatest wealth to everyone.
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（二）
我们也许还不能做出多么惊天动地的事情，但我们可以为别人做一些力所能及的小事。你为陌生人做过哪些小事？或者你接受过陌生人的帮助吗？请你以“A small act of kindness”为题，写一篇英语作文。
要点：1. Describe the cause, process, and outcome of the event;
2. Talk about how it affected you.
注意：1. 短文须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80左右。
A small act of kindness
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（三）
经过三年的努力，你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少收获和进步，请你以“I’ve achieved a lot”为题，在生活技能的获得，学习方法的掌握，良好习惯的形成等方面选取其中一个方面，结合自己实际，谈谈你是如何取得进步的。
提示：
（1）What did you achieve
（2）How did you achieve it
注意：
（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I’ve achieved a lot
Looking back on the past three years, I have achieved a lot.
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（四）
假如你所在学校的英语杂志社正在举办“Help with Housework and Develop Ourselves”征文活动，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文向杂志社投稿。
提示：
（1）What housework can you help with at home
（2）Why should you help with housework
注意：
（1）短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Help with Housework and Develop Ourselves
It’s important for us to help with housework. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（五）
“少年强则国强！”作为新时代青年，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
要求：（1）字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
（2）思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；
（3）词数：80~100。
参考词汇：
How to Make Myself Better
As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By doing this, I will make myself better and better.
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阅读在英语学习中占有很重要的地位，为此，你的英语老师要举办一场“爱上阅读”分享会。请你以“Let’s enjoy reading!”为题写一篇文章，分享你在英语阅读方面的经历、体会和建议。
要求：
1. 80—100词；
2文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1.回顾你的阅读经历（时间、内容……）；
2.谈淡你的阅读体会（喜好、感悟……）：
3.分享你的阅读建议（读什么、怎么读……）。
Let’s enjoy reading!
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