2024届江苏省南京市高三下学期二模英语试题读后续写“爱与宽容：一位智慧妈妈助力儿子的成长 讲义-
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。
I am not a gamer. I’ll be honest: video games and I don’t really see eye to eye, and I have no ambitions to become better. I never have the experience playing against my kids and winning. And that’s okay. Board games, on the other hand, are a different story. At least there, I stand a chance of victory.
One day, my 12-year-old son begged me to play a game with him. He held, out a game controller and begged, “Just one game with me You can use it to control the game through your movements.” His eyes were full of anticipation and I could see the excitement welling up within him. How could I possibly resist such a sincere and heartfelt request “Just one game.” My son’s face lit up. In a matter of minutes, we were standing in our living room, virtually bowling away.
My son’s amusement at my lack of gaming skills was evident. 1 could see the struggle on his face as he fought to hold back his laughter. The game controller felt awkward and unfamiliar in my hand, but I did my best to copy my son' movements and follow his lead. At one point, my son said, “No, Mom. You really have to put some force into it. Like this.” With that, he threw his arm back, stepped forward, and with plenty of force extended out his arm that was holding the controller.
Instead of sending the virtual bowling ball flying, the controller went off his hand and broke the TV screen. The impact was immediate and destructive. The screen cracked (碎裂), sending a crazy mosaic (马赛克) of colors dancing across its surface. It looked like something straight out of a dream.
The air stood still at that moment. The look on my son’s face was a funny mixture of horror, disbelief, and guilt. He stayed absolutely frozen for a long moment. Then, slowly, he turned to me. “Mom…” with a weak smile, “Did I just...break the TV ”
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Surprisingly, I wasn’t angry at all. But my son insisted on keeping the broken TV.
文章解读：
线索句解读：
1."Just one game with me You can use it to control the game through your movements.” - 这句话表明儿子非常想和作者一起玩游戏，而且他教作者如何使用游戏手柄。
2. "The game controller felt awkward and unfamiliar in my hand, but I did my best to copy my son' movements and follow his lead." - 这句话表明作者对电子游戏并不熟悉，但是她还是尽力去模仿儿子的动作。
3. "The air stood still at that moment. The look on my son's face was a funny mixture of horror, disbelief, and guilt." - 这句话描绘了电视屏幕被打破后，儿子脸上的表情，表明他感到非常内疚和不安。
第一段续写：作者并没有因为电视屏幕被弄坏而生气，而是理解儿子的内疚和不安。她可能会安慰儿子，告诉他没关系。
第二段续写：尽管作者理解儿子的内疚，但是儿子还是坚持要保留被弄坏的电视。这可能是因为他觉得自己有责任，或者他想记住这个教训。
下水文：
Surprisingly, I wasn’t angry at all. In fact, the longer I gazed at the cracked TV screen, the less unable I was to hold back my tears of amusement. Nodding my head, I burst into a long howling laughter, which were soon joined by my previously petrified son. It was an exhilarating moment, one intertwined with pure chaos, utter disbelief and sudden waking up from the immersion in the game. Despite the mess and the expense of repairing or replacing the TV, I found myself feeling grateful for this unexpected moment of connection with my son. Later, after both of us calmed down, I comforted my son who was still fretting over the loss and proposed we fix or substitute the TV with a new one.
But my son insisted on keeping the broken TV. He argued that it would serve as a funny reminder of our gaming misadventure and the laughter we shared that day. Reluctantly, I agreed, realizing in amazement that he was actually right. As we cleaned up the mess and made arrangements to fix the TV, it seemed I was enveloped by an enormous sense of intimacy with my son. Sometimes, it’s the unexpected moments of chaos and laughter that bring us closer together, reminding us to find joy in the midst of mishaps and to embrace life’s little surprises. Yes, I am not a gamer, but the cracked television spoke volumes of how much I cherished the treasured time of playing video games with my beloved son.
官方范文
Surprisingly, I wasn't angry at all. After all, it was just an accident. "Yes, sweetie." I approached him, fighting to keep a straight face. "You did just break it," I added with a playful grin. "next time let's stick to board games." My boy buried his head in my arms. From the way he hugged me, I could tell how apologetic he was. It was an innocent mistake and I hated to blame a child filled with guit. "Don't worry we'll throw the broken TV away and buy a new one." (85 words)
But my son insisted on keeping the broken TV. He carried it to the corner of the sitting room. On seeing my confused look, he explained, "It will remind me to be cautious." As my gaze fell upon that cracked screen, I couldn't help but recall my son's fateful words: "Like this." These two words congive in my mind, seeming to offer a profound life lesson. Accidents happen and it is the parental forgiveness that plays a significant role in shaping a childs character. The incident indeed brought us even closer as a family. (85 words)
范文点评：
这篇续写范文延续了原文的主题，展示了母亲对儿子意外损坏电视的宽容和理解。以下是对这篇续写范文的点评：
1. 情感表达：作者通过对话和行为描写，有效地传达了母亲对儿子的宽容和爱。母亲的回应“Don't worry we'll throw the broken TV away and buy a new one.”（不用担心，我们会扔掉坏掉的电视，再买一个新的。）简洁而温馨，体现了对孩子情感的关怀。
2. 角色行为：儿子坚持保留损坏的电视，用作提醒自己要更加小心，这个细节增加了故事的深度，展示了儿子从错误中学习并寻求成长的愿望。
3. 主题深化：通过儿子的行为和母亲的反思，续写强调了宽容和教训在塑造孩子性格中的重要性。这与原文中的主题相呼应，即通过理解和宽恕来加深家庭关系。
4. 语言使用：续写中的语言表达清晰，情感真挚。"As my gaze fell upon that cracked screen, I couldn't help but recall my son's fateful words: "Like this.""（当我的目光落在那破裂的屏幕上时，我不禁回想起儿子那句命中注定的话：“像这样。”）这句话有效地连接了过去和现在的情境，加深了情感的传递。
5. 结构安排：续写在结构上与原文相衔接，形成了一个完整的故事。从事故发生到情感处理，再到教训的吸取，整个故事流畅自然。
6. 生活教训：最后一段"Accidents happen and it is the parental forgiveness that plays a significant role in shaping a child's character."（事故发生了，父母的宽恕在塑造孩子性格方面起着重要作用。）直接点明了故事想要传达的生活教训，使读者能够从中获得启示。
总体来说，这篇续写范文成功地延续了原文的情感和主题，通过具体的场景和对话，传达了宽容、理解和教训的重要性。
I am not a gamer. I’ll be honest: video games and I don’t really see eye to eye, and I have no ambitions to become better. I never have the experience playing against my kids and winning. And that’s okay. Board games, on the other hand, are a different story. At least there, I stand a chance of victory.
One day, my 12-year-old son begged me to play a game with him. He held, out a game controller and begged, “Just one game with me You can use it to control the game through your movements.” His eyes were full of anticipation and I could see the excitement welling up within him. How could I possibly resist such a sincere and heartfelt request “Just one game.” My son’s face lit up. In a matter of minutes, we were standing in our living room, virtually bowling away.
My son’s amusement at my lack of gaming skills was evident. 1 could see the struggle on his face as he fought to hold back his laughter. The game controller felt awkward and unfamiliar in my hand, but I did my best to copy my son' movements and follow his lead. At one point, my son said, “No, Mom. You really have to put some force into it. Like this.” With that, he threw his arm back, stepped forward, and with plenty of force extended out his arm that was holding the controller.
Instead of sending the virtual bowling ball flying, the controller went off his hand and broke the TV screen. The impact was immediate and destructive. The screen cracked (碎裂), sending a crazy mosaic (马赛克) of colors dancing across its surface. It looked like something straight out of a dream.
The air stood still at that moment. The look on my son’s face was a funny mixture of horror, disbelief, and guilt. He stayed absolutely frozen for a long moment. Then, slowly, he turned to me. “Mom…” with a weak smile, “Did I just...break the TV ”
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Surprisingly, I wasn’t angry at all. But my son insisted on keeping the broken TV.
文章解读：
线索句解读：
1."Just one game with me You can use it to control the game through your movements.” - 这句话表明儿子非常想和作者一起玩游戏，而且他教作者如何使用游戏手柄。
2. "The game controller felt awkward and unfamiliar in my hand, but I did my best to copy my son' movements and follow his lead." - 这句话表明作者对电子游戏并不熟悉，但是她还是尽力去模仿儿子的动作。
3. "The air stood still at that moment. The look on my son's face was a funny mixture of horror, disbelief, and guilt." - 这句话描绘了电视屏幕被打破后，儿子脸上的表情，表明他感到非常内疚和不安。
第一段续写：作者并没有因为电视屏幕被弄坏而生气，而是理解儿子的内疚和不安。她可能会安慰儿子，告诉他没关系。
第二段续写：尽管作者理解儿子的内疚，但是儿子还是坚持要保留被弄坏的电视。这可能是因为他觉得自己有责任，或者他想记住这个教训。
下水文：
Surprisingly, I wasn’t angry at all. In fact, the longer I gazed at the cracked TV screen, the less unable I was to hold back my tears of amusement. Nodding my head, I burst into a long howling laughter, which were soon joined by my previously petrified son. It was an exhilarating moment, one intertwined with pure chaos, utter disbelief and sudden waking up from the immersion in the game. Despite the mess and the expense of repairing or replacing the TV, I found myself feeling grateful for this unexpected moment of connection with my son. Later, after both of us calmed down, I comforted my son who was still fretting over the loss and proposed we fix or substitute the TV with a new one.
But my son insisted on keeping the broken TV. He argued that it would serve as a funny reminder of our gaming misadventure and the laughter we shared that day. Reluctantly, I agreed, realizing in amazement that he was actually right. As we cleaned up the mess and made arrangements to fix the TV, it seemed I was enveloped by an enormous sense of intimacy with my son. Sometimes, it’s the unexpected moments of chaos and laughter that bring us closer together, reminding us to find joy in the midst of mishaps and to embrace life’s little surprises. Yes, I am not a gamer, but the cracked television spoke volumes of how much I cherished the treasured time of playing video games with my beloved son.
官方范文
Surprisingly, I wasn't angry at all. After all, it was just an accident. "Yes, sweetie." I approached him, fighting to keep a straight face. "You did just break it," I added with a playful grin. "next time let's stick to board games." My boy buried his head in my arms. From the way he hugged me, I could tell how apologetic he was. It was an innocent mistake and I hated to blame a child filled with guit. "Don't worry we'll throw the broken TV away and buy a new one." (85 words)
But my son insisted on keeping the broken TV. He carried it to the corner of the sitting room. On seeing my confused look, he explained, "It will remind me to be cautious." As my gaze fell upon that cracked screen, I couldn't help but recall my son's fateful words: "Like this." These two words congive in my mind, seeming to offer a profound life lesson. Accidents happen and it is the parental forgiveness that plays a significant role in shaping a childs character. The incident indeed brought us even closer as a family. (85 words)
范文点评：
这篇续写范文延续了原文的主题，展示了母亲对儿子意外损坏电视的宽容和理解。以下是对这篇续写范文的点评：
1. 情感表达：作者通过对话和行为描写，有效地传达了母亲对儿子的宽容和爱。母亲的回应“Don't worry we'll throw the broken TV away and buy a new one.”（不用担心，我们会扔掉坏掉的电视，再买一个新的。）简洁而温馨，体现了对孩子情感的关怀。
2. 角色行为：儿子坚持保留损坏的电视，用作提醒自己要更加小心，这个细节增加了故事的深度，展示了儿子从错误中学习并寻求成长的愿望。
3. 主题深化：通过儿子的行为和母亲的反思，续写强调了宽容和教训在塑造孩子性格中的重要性。这与原文中的主题相呼应，即通过理解和宽恕来加深家庭关系。
4. 语言使用：续写中的语言表达清晰，情感真挚。"As my gaze fell upon that cracked screen, I couldn't help but recall my son's fateful words: "Like this.""（当我的目光落在那破裂的屏幕上时，我不禁回想起儿子那句命中注定的话：“像这样。”）这句话有效地连接了过去和现在的情境，加深了情感的传递。
5. 结构安排：续写在结构上与原文相衔接，形成了一个完整的故事。从事故发生到情感处理，再到教训的吸取，整个故事流畅自然。
6. 生活教训：最后一段"Accidents happen and it is the parental forgiveness that plays a significant role in shaping a child's character."（事故发生了，父母的宽恕在塑造孩子性格方面起着重要作用。）直接点明了故事想要传达的生活教训，使读者能够从中获得启示。
总体来说，这篇续写范文成功地延续了原文的情感和主题，通过具体的场景和对话，传达了宽容、理解和教训的重要性。