2024届4月南京高三二模英语应用文---对教材的评价及建议 讲义
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2024年南京市高三英语二模应用文写作----对教材的评价及建议
假定你是李华，英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见。请给你所用教材的主编 Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件，内容包括:
1.使用教材的收获;
2.改进教材的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
相关词汇积累：
全英文语言环境（an English only environment）
真实的阅读材料（authentic reading materials）
全面的话题分类（a wide range of topics）
完整的语言项目（perfect language programs）
高效的练习设计（highly effective exercises）
沉浸式学习体验 （an immersive learning experience）
语言能力提升（an increased level of language competence）
洞悉多元文化 （deep insights into diverse cultures）
国际视野（an international perspective）
全面发展的人（an well-rounded individual）
语音矫正（pronunciation correction）
口头交流技巧（verbal communication skills）
适宜背诵篇目（writings suitable for recitation）
增加趣味性（adding spice to the contents）
解决问题的技巧（problem-solving skills）
题目评析：
这个应用文写作题目很好地结合了高考评价体系中的四层和四翼考查的要求。它不仅考查了学生的基础英语写作能力，还考查了学生的综合应用能力和创新思维。通过这样的题目，可以有效地评估学生在实际语境中的英语交流能力，以及他们对英语学习的深入理解和批判性思考。此外，题目还鼓励学生表达自己的观点，这有助于培养学生的自主学习能力和批判性思维能力。
写作思路：开门见山：首先交代写信的缘由，也可礼貌地向Professor Nunan致谢，感谢他提供了教材，并表示你很高兴有机会提供反馈。积累不够的同学也可以介绍一下自己来凑凑字数。使用教材的收获：在这一部分，你需要具体说明使用该教材给你带来了哪些积极的影响。比如，教材可能帮助你提高了英语水平，或者通过教材中的案例学习到了实用的知识。提出建议：在这部分，你需要提出一些具体的建议来改进教材。这些建议应该基于你的实际使用体验，可以是关于内容的更新、练习题的改进，或者是教学方法的创新。礼貌结束：在邮件的结尾，再次表达感谢，并表示期待对方考虑你的反馈或教材的改进。
官方范文
Dear Professor Nunan,
Learning that you are gathering feedback on our English textbooks, I'm glad to share my thoughts.
I find the textbooks incredibly beneficial. The well-selected materials, filled with intriguing stories and fresh opinions, have aroused my interest in language learning and opened up a new world for me. My language sill have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook.
However, it would be better to include more interactive activities, such as role-plays or debates, to add more fun to our learning experience.
Thank you for consideration.
默写版：
Dear Professor Nunan,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________得知您正在收集对我们英语教材的反馈，我很高兴与您分享我的想法。
I find the textbooks incredibly beneficial._____________________________________
__________________________________这些精心挑选的材料，充满了有趣的故事和新鲜的见解，激发了我对语言学习的兴趣，为我打开了一个新的世界. My language sill have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook.
______________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________然而，最好包括更多的互动活动，如角色扮演或辩论，为我们的学习体验增添更多乐趣.
Thank you for consideration.
下水文1：
Dear Professor Nunan,
As a user of the textbook you compiled, I am writing to share my feedback on it.
I have a deep gratitude for the textbook. Written all in English, it offers me the opportunity for total immersion, which greatly facilitates language learning. It also provides fascinating insights into different cultures, enabling me to view things from an international perspective.
Nevertheless, I wish in future editions there would be more writings suitable for recitation. It is a reliable avenue towards fluency in English.
Thank you for your attention. Best regards,
Li Hua
下水文2
Dear Professor Nunan,
I am writing to share with you my perspectives on the textbook we have been using in class. The material has contributed considerably in sharpening my comprehensive English ability, particularly in reading and writing. So compelling and engaging are the exercises and activities that they entitle me to use the language in a wide spectrum of contexts.
However, I believe the textbook could be elevated to a new level by designing more listening and speaking activities specially tailored to us students’ needs. Additionally, having more real-life situations and examples incorporated into the lessons would make the material more relatable and practical.
Thank you for considering my suggestions. Keenly anticipate your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
下水文3
Dear Professor Nunan.
I am writing to you as a student who has been using the English textbook you edited. I am grateful for the opportunity to provide feedback on the material.
The textbook has been a valuable resource in my English learning journey. It has not only helped me expand my vocabulary but also provided engaging content that has made learning a pleasure.However, I have a few suggestions that I believe could I enhance the textbook further. Firstly, updating the cultural references to reflect contemporary society would make the material more relatable to modern students. Secondly,incorporating more interactive exercises styles could cater to different learning styles and keep students more engaged.
Thank you for considering my feedback. I am looking forward to future editions of the textbook.Best regards,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见。请给你所用教材的主编 Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件，内容包括:
1.使用教材的收获;
2.改进教材的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
相关词汇积累：
全英文语言环境（an English only environment）
真实的阅读材料（authentic reading materials）
全面的话题分类（a wide range of topics）
完整的语言项目（perfect language programs）
高效的练习设计（highly effective exercises）
沉浸式学习体验 （an immersive learning experience）
语言能力提升（an increased level of language competence）
洞悉多元文化 （deep insights into diverse cultures）
国际视野（an international perspective）
全面发展的人（an well-rounded individual）
语音矫正（pronunciation correction）
口头交流技巧（verbal communication skills）
适宜背诵篇目（writings suitable for recitation）
增加趣味性（adding spice to the contents）
解决问题的技巧（problem-solving skills）
题目评析：
这个应用文写作题目很好地结合了高考评价体系中的四层和四翼考查的要求。它不仅考查了学生的基础英语写作能力，还考查了学生的综合应用能力和创新思维。通过这样的题目，可以有效地评估学生在实际语境中的英语交流能力，以及他们对英语学习的深入理解和批判性思考。此外，题目还鼓励学生表达自己的观点，这有助于培养学生的自主学习能力和批判性思维能力。
写作思路：开门见山：首先交代写信的缘由，也可礼貌地向Professor Nunan致谢，感谢他提供了教材，并表示你很高兴有机会提供反馈。积累不够的同学也可以介绍一下自己来凑凑字数。使用教材的收获：在这一部分，你需要具体说明使用该教材给你带来了哪些积极的影响。比如，教材可能帮助你提高了英语水平，或者通过教材中的案例学习到了实用的知识。提出建议：在这部分，你需要提出一些具体的建议来改进教材。这些建议应该基于你的实际使用体验，可以是关于内容的更新、练习题的改进，或者是教学方法的创新。礼貌结束：在邮件的结尾，再次表达感谢，并表示期待对方考虑你的反馈或教材的改进。
官方范文
Dear Professor Nunan,
Learning that you are gathering feedback on our English textbooks, I'm glad to share my thoughts.
I find the textbooks incredibly beneficial. The well-selected materials, filled with intriguing stories and fresh opinions, have aroused my interest in language learning and opened up a new world for me. My language sill have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook.
However, it would be better to include more interactive activities, such as role-plays or debates, to add more fun to our learning experience.
Thank you for consideration.
默写版：
Dear Professor Nunan,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________得知您正在收集对我们英语教材的反馈，我很高兴与您分享我的想法。
I find the textbooks incredibly beneficial._____________________________________
__________________________________这些精心挑选的材料，充满了有趣的故事和新鲜的见解，激发了我对语言学习的兴趣，为我打开了一个新的世界. My language sill have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook.
______________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________然而，最好包括更多的互动活动，如角色扮演或辩论，为我们的学习体验增添更多乐趣.
Thank you for consideration.
下水文1：
Dear Professor Nunan,
As a user of the textbook you compiled, I am writing to share my feedback on it.
I have a deep gratitude for the textbook. Written all in English, it offers me the opportunity for total immersion, which greatly facilitates language learning. It also provides fascinating insights into different cultures, enabling me to view things from an international perspective.
Nevertheless, I wish in future editions there would be more writings suitable for recitation. It is a reliable avenue towards fluency in English.
Thank you for your attention. Best regards,
Li Hua
下水文2
Dear Professor Nunan,
I am writing to share with you my perspectives on the textbook we have been using in class. The material has contributed considerably in sharpening my comprehensive English ability, particularly in reading and writing. So compelling and engaging are the exercises and activities that they entitle me to use the language in a wide spectrum of contexts.
However, I believe the textbook could be elevated to a new level by designing more listening and speaking activities specially tailored to us students’ needs. Additionally, having more real-life situations and examples incorporated into the lessons would make the material more relatable and practical.
Thank you for considering my suggestions. Keenly anticipate your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
下水文3
Dear Professor Nunan.
I am writing to you as a student who has been using the English textbook you edited. I am grateful for the opportunity to provide feedback on the material.
The textbook has been a valuable resource in my English learning journey. It has not only helped me expand my vocabulary but also provided engaging content that has made learning a pleasure.However, I have a few suggestions that I believe could I enhance the textbook further. Firstly, updating the cultural references to reflect contemporary society would make the material more relatable to modern students. Secondly,incorporating more interactive exercises styles could cater to different learning styles and keep students more engaged.
Thank you for considering my feedback. I am looking forward to future editions of the textbook.Best regards,
Li Hua