2024年中考英语复习 书面表达 17篇 山西 模拟汇编（23--24）（含答案）

2024年中考英语复习 书面表达 17篇 山西 模拟汇编（23--24）
1．课间10分钟是学生消除学习疲劳，放松身心的时间。为了有效利用课间10分钟，缓解学生的疲劳，增强体质，某校以“What should we do during the 10-minute break ”为主题，对本校600名学生进行了调查，下图是统计结果。
假如你是该校学生，请结合以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 结合自己的经历，谈谈课间活动的重要性。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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2．家乡是一个人灵魂最深处的记忆，是一个人心底最柔软的一方田土。对于家乡，每个人心中都有一份炽热的情感。某校为增强学生的爱国热情、故土情怀和民族自豪感，号召学生积极参与“我为家乡做代言”的活动，针对“如何展示家乡新风采”，对2000名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的方法，结合自己的经历，谈谈选择这种方法的理由。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名：
3.参考词汇仅供参考。
A school did a survey among 2, 000 students about their plans on how to show the new style of their hometown. Here are the results.
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3．假如你是你校英语辩论社的一员，社团负责人要求大家思考职业有无高低贵贱之分并发言。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，为发言做准备。
要求：1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
Word Bankcourier 快递员 guardian 守卫者 soul 灵魂
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4．适当的放松有助于缓解学生压力，使他们保持精力充沛，促进其身心健康。为更有效地助力学生成长，某校针对“你最喜欢的放松方式”，对某年级1000名学生进行了抽样调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
请你用两段话写一篇英文短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈你喜欢的放松方式的好处。
要求：1. 词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
The school did a survey among 1, 000 students about different students’ favorite ways to relax. Here are the results. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．在成长过程中，我们难免会遇到各种各样的问题。学着解决这些问题就是成长的过程，比如，如何正确地与家长沟通交流；如何理性地处理与同学之间的矛盾；如何高效地学习……请你根据以上提示信息，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.你曾经遇到过的问题；
2.你是如何解决这个问题的；
3.你从这个经历中得到的启示或收获。
WORD BANK conflict n.矛盾 efficiently adv.高效地
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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6．没有人是一座孤岛。我们每个人的生活都受他人的影响并影响着他人。每个人顺手的小事与平常的爱心都感动并温暖着他人。某校在 200名学生中做了一个调查，了解同学们通常怎样帮助他人。下图是调查结果。
请你用两段话写一篇英语短文，第一段简要说明图表内容； 第二段结合你的经历谈一谈你帮助他人的事及你的感受。
要求：1. 需包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数不少于80 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
As a saying goes, “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.”Helping others is our traditional virtue. Last week, our school did a survey about how you usually help others among 200 students. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．近朱者赤，近墨者黑。朋友对我们的影响很大。爱读书的朋友以书结缘，爱踢球的朋友以球论道，爱搞怪的朋友以笑言欢。请为“My best friend”主题活动征文投稿，分享一位积极影响你的好朋友。
内容包括：
·Introduce your best friend in your junior high school.
·Describe an experience happened between you and your friend.
·Tell what influence the experience has had on you.
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
My best friend
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8．情绪管理对于中学生来说至关重要。面对学业压力和种种挑战，我们需要有效地管理自己的情绪，以便更好地学习和生活。为了让同学们学会调节自己的情绪，某校心理协会针对“如何改善自己的情绪”，对1000名学生进行了问卷调查。下图是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息，以How to Improve Our Emotions为主题，用两段话写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1．简要说明图表内容；
2．选择一种你经常使用的调节情绪的方式，并结合自己的经历，谈谈它给你带来的积极影响。
要求：
1．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
How to Improve Our Emotions
Recently, a survey was done among 1,000 students in our school about how to improve our emotions. Here are the results.
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9．“和谐邻里，互助互爱”是中华民族的传统美德。最近，我的社区发生的一件事在当地传为佳话：半个月前，张大明八十五岁的父亲独自在家，他突然生病了，而张大明夫妇在离家很远的城市工作。幸亏邻居王先生的帮助，老人被及时送往医院，现已脱离危险。张大明十分感激。请根据上述材料，用英语写一篇短文，文章必须包括以下要点：
1．简述张大明父亲被救的经过；
2．你对这件事的感悟（拥有好邻居很重要……）；
3．如何成为好邻居（和睦相处……）。
注意：
1．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2．词数80词左右，已给出的词不计入总词数。
“Enjoying a harmonious neighborhood” is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What has happened in one community recently is a good example.
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10．在青少年成长过程中，常常会遇到各种烦恼，合适的解决途径有助于调节情绪，排解烦恼。某校为引导青少年健康成长，针对“解决烦恼的方法”，对800名学生进行了问卷调查，下面是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.结合自己的经历，讲述你所遇到过的烦恼及解决方法，并谈谈烦恼解决后的感受。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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11．近期你校英语社团举办了“第三届看图编故事”比赛，根据比赛规则，每位参赛选手抽签选择图片。假如你是参赛选手李华，你抽到的故事见下图，请根据图片内容用英语写一篇短文为你的即兴讲故事做准备。
要求：
1. 仔细观察图片内容，展开合理想象叙述故事；
2. 词数不少于80词，故事的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：灌木丛bush；手提箱suitcase
At three last Sunday a group of boys were playing football happily. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．劳动是成长的必修课，我们要在全社会倡导崇尚劳动，让热爱劳动蔚然成风，让劳动的种子深植学生心中，使学生成长为堪当民族复兴大任的时代新人。
为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德，进一步加强中小学劳动教育，促进五育并举，全国已有很多学校开设劳动课（labor class）。为此，你校校报英语栏目发起征文，请你根据以下要点写一篇关于劳动教育的短文，向其投稿。
提示：1. 你对学校开设劳动课程有什么样的看法？（说明理由）
2. 你建议学校开设什么样的劳动课程？（内容及方式）
3. 呼吁青少年积极参与劳动。
要求：1. 词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
WORD BANKresponsibility n. 责任 competition n. 竞赛
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13．后疫情时代，生活中多出了一个关键词——“健康管理”。健康管理真正的价值在于自我管理，我们需要关注自己的饮食、作息、运动、心态等诸多方面，学会自我管理，某校针对“影响健康的因素”在2, 200名学生中做了问卷调查，如图是统计结果。
假设你是该校学生，请你根据以上图表信息，写一篇短文。
内容包括：
(1)简要说明图表内容；
(2)从图中选取影响你健康的最大因素，并结合亲身经历说明你是如何自我管理的。
要求：
(3)词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(4)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
(5)参考词汇仅供参考。
Word Bank factor n.因素 diet n.饮食 balance v.&n.保持平衡
A survey was done among 2, 200 students in our school about the factors influencing our health. Here are the results...
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14．参与志愿服务活动不仅能够帮助同学们在实践中运用所学知识，提高人际交往能力，还有助于提升思想品德，培养社会责任感。同时，参与志愿服务活动也满足了社会对志愿服务的需要。
请写一篇相关短文，内容须包括：
●your opinion about volunteering
●one of your experiences of volunteering
●your understanding of volunteering
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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15．习近平总书记强调：雷锋是时代的楷模，雷锋精神是永恒的，三月是学雷锋月，你的学校开展了一系列轰轰烈烈的学雷锋活动。请你写一篇通讯稿，介绍一次你参加学雷锋活动的经历，并号召大家践行雷锋精神、弘扬社会正气。
1.介绍你参加学雷锋活动的一次经历及感想。
2.你认为青少年应该如何践行雷锋精神？(至少两点)
作文要求: 1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数在80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
The Spirit of Lei Feng Goes on
Our school usually organizes all kinds of activities in March to remember Lei Feng. This year I _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．随着“双减”政策的逐步落实，学生的课余生活变得丰富多彩，充满活力。学生可以遨游书海，吸取智慧；锻炼身体，增强体质；欣赏艺术、启发心灵；劳动实践，体悟生活……更好地实现了“德智体美劳”全面发展。你在课余时间最喜欢做什么呢？请写一篇短文告诉我们。短文需包括以下要点：
◆What do you prefer to do in your free time
◆Tell us an experience about it.
◆How were you influenced by it
要求：1.词数不少于80词；2.文中不得出现真实的人名，校名。
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17．劳动教育是提高中小学生综合素质、成就幸福圆满的人生有效途径。2022 年颁布的《义务教育课程方案》将劳动教育（labor education）正式纳入中小学国家课程，体现了国家对劳动教育的重视。
请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。所给词汇不计入总数。
内容包括：
●What you think of this decision；
●Your experience about taking part in the labor activities；
●What you have learned from the labor activities.
要求:
（ 1）词数不少于80词；
（ 2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Labor education was officially included in the national course of primary and middle schools.
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参考答案：
1．例文：
Our school did a survey on the topic of “What should we do during the 10-minute break ” among 600 students. Here are the results. 59% of the students believe they should do activities such as playing games and doing rope skipping. 20% of them think it’s best for them to spend the 10-minute break studying while 15% make use of the break to nod off. Still 6% prefer to do something else.
As for me, I think we should spend most of the break relaxing ourselves by doing some interesting and healthy activities. I used to nod off over the desk to avoid being sleepy in class. But it didn’t work well. Later my classmates encouraged me to do rope skipping and play games with them during the break. I find they are not just for fun and even they help to remove my stress and develop the friendship. More importantly, I can keep more active and focus better in class.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图标内容；
第二步，在图表中选择一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈自己的看法；
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①As for me, I think we should spend most of the break relaxing ourselves by doing some interesting and healthy activities.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I find they are not just for fun and even they help to remove my stress and develop the friendship.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．例文
A school did a survey among 2, 000 students about their plans on how to show the new style of their hometown. Here are the results. 37% of them want to make hand-written newspaper to show it. 24% think writing articles to the local newspaper is a good idea. 18% want to make short videos. 12% choose to make posters. 9% have their own special ideas.
As far as I’m concerned, making short videos is a good choice because I am quite interested in taking pictures to record my daily life. Last weekend, I went to a park with my parents. A group of old people were singing Jin Opera there. I filmed a short video and put it online. To my surprise, the next day, there were many comments. From that experience, I realized that short videos have the power to connect people around the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何展示家乡新风采，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的方法，结合自己的经历，谈谈选择这种方法的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①As far as I’m concerned据我所知
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③to my surprise令我惊讶的是
[高分句型]
①As far as I’m concerned, making short videos is a good choice because I am quite interested in taking pictures to record my daily life. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I realized that short videos have the power to connect people around the world. (宾语从句)
3．例文:
In my opinion, there is neither lowliness nor nobleness in careers. In other words, there are neither good careers nor bad careers because all careers play an important role in our daily lives. For example, couriers are creators and guardians of our good life, street cleaners make our cities beautiful and teachers are engineers of human souls.
As for me, I want to be a teacher in the future. I hope to teach my students what I have learned and lead them to a bright future. I also hope to set an example for them and help them become better people. Teaching is a common career, but I think it is meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料图片所示要点不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己的观点——职业无高低贵贱之分；
第二步，阐述支持观点的论据；
第三步，介绍自己的理想职业及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①in other words换句话说
②play an important role发挥重要作用
③as for me就我而言
[高分句型]
①In other words, there are neither good careers nor bad careers because all careers play an important role in our daily lives. （原因状语从句）
②Teaching is a common career, but I think it is meaningful.（宾语从句）
4．例文：
The school did a survey among 1, 000 students about different students’ favorite ways to relax. Here are the results. 41% of the students like doing exercise.28% of the students think it’s relaxing to have trips. And the percentage of the students who prefer to spend time with their friends is 22%. The other 9% choose other ways to relax. As for me, I am interested in doing exercise. It helps me reduce stress and keep active.
Last month, when the teacher told us we would have a math test. I felt so worried that I couldn’t fall asleep until midnight. As a result, I was tired in class and I couldn’t follow my math teacher. To be less stressed out, I played basketball with my friend. We talked and played, sharing our problems and happiness. It was basketball that brought me courage to speak out my problems. I felt relaxed and active. In the following days, my friend often led me to think about some math problems when we practiced basketball on the playground. Gradually, I could do better in math.
To relax myself, I will keep developing good habits. I will travel, have a party with my friend or go to the movies. I will also learn to communicate more with others while doing these things. Only in this way can I be better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据图表内容完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主，可自由发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，结合自己的经历，说明自己喜欢的放松方式；
第三步，总结自己的放松方式，以及这些方式的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①fall asleep入睡
②communicate with sb.和某人交流
③keep doing sth一直做某事
[高分句型]
①And the percentage of the students who prefer to spend time with their friends is 22%.（who引导的定语从句）
②I felt so worried that I couldn’t fall asleep until midnight.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
③It was basketball that brought me courage to speak out my problems.（强调句）
④Only in this way can I be better.（倒装句）
5．例文：
Solving problems in time plays an important role in our lives.
Once in an English class, the teacher mentioned different kinds of pollution to us. Among them, I didn’t know much about light pollution. Therefore I searched on the Internet right away and found that light pollution has a serious influence on our normal life. That’s why we need to turn off lights when we leave the classroom or the room. And I deeply understood the importance of saving electricity.
From this experience, I realize that when we meet problems, the first step is to solve the problems in a proper and suitable way rather than run away from them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容包括”中给出的关键信息，结合自己的经历写短文谈谈自己解决问题的经历及收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，强调解决问题的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己曾经遇到的问题及解决问题的经过；
第三步，谈谈自己从这次经历中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①play an impotant role in 在……中扮演着重要角色
②right away 立刻
③turn off 关掉
④rather than 而不是
[高分句型]
①Therefore I searched on the Internet right away and found that light pollution has a serious influence on our normal life.（that引导宾语从句）
②That’s why we need to turn off lights when we leave the classroom or the room.（why引导表语从句；when引导时间状语从句）
6．例文：
As a saying goes, “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.” Helping others is our traditional virtue. Last week, our school did a survey about how you usually help others among 200 students. Here are the results. 40 percent of the students help others by giving away money or things to people in need. The percentage of the students who help old people and homeless children is 30%. And one fifth of the students choose to help protect the environment. The rest of them usually do other things.
Once I was on a crowded bus on my way home. It was at that moment that I saw an old woman slowly getting on the bus. Without thinking twice, I offered my seat to her. She smiled at me and said “thank you”. When I saw the old woman sit comfortably on the seat, I got a strong feeling of happiness. By helping others, I’ve realized it’s our duty to do our part in making our society better. Small actions can make a big difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述个人经历用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容，不要遗漏要点；
第二步，介绍你帮助他人的事情；
第三步，谈谈帮助他人的感受，号召大家都能互相帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①give away捐赠
②the rest剩下的
③crowded拥挤的
④think twice三思
⑤make a big difference产生重大影响
[高分句型]
①The percentage of the students who help old people and homeless children is 30%. (定语从句)
②It was at that moment that I saw an old woman slowly getting on the bus. (强调句)
7．例文
My best friend
Mike is my good friend. He is a tall boy. He is kind and it’s easy to get on well with him. He is also very healthy because he loves sports. He swims twice a week. But I hardly did any sports before. So I was weak. Once I had a cold and Mike took care of me. He went to my home every day to help me learn. And he also advised me to do more exercise. After I got well, he taught me to swim. He is a good teacher. Now I love swimming. If we have time on weekends, we often go swimming together in the swimming pool.
With the help of Mike, I become healthier and happier. I hope our friendship can last forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的好朋友，适当补充，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友的基本信息；
第二步，介绍发生在你和你朋友之间的经历；
第二步，介绍朋友对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with sb.与某人相处得好
②take care of照顾
③with the help of在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
①If we have time on weekends, we often go swimming together in the swimming pool.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I hope our friendship can last forever.（宾语从句）
8．例文
How to Improve Our Emotions
Recently, a survey was done among 1,000 students in our school about how to improve our emotions. Here are the results. 35 percent of the students consider it a good way to talk with others, while 22 percent say they will feel better after having a good rest. The percentage of students who prefer to play sports is 27. And the rest choose to eat delicious food.
As for me, when I’m down and upset, I’d like to talk with others, especially my friends, parents, or teachers who are the closest to me. I still remember clearly last term when I failed the final English exam, I felt so sad that I couldn’t accept such a terrible result. After arriving home, I had a good conversation with my parents and asked them for advice. Then, my parents encouraged me and told me how to deal with the problem. In the end, I felt much better. From then on, whenever I felt bad, I would share my thoughts and feelings with others. In my opinion, it’s a good way to improve our emotions.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何改善自己的情绪，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，选择一种你经常使用的调节情绪的方式，并结合自己的经历，谈谈它给你带来的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①talk with和某人说话
②choose to do sth.选择做某事
③as for至于
④deal with处理
[高分句型]
①The percentage of students who prefer to play sports is 27. (who引导的定语从句)
②As for me, when I’m down and upset, I’d like to talk with others, especially my friends, parents, or teachers who are the closest to me. (when引导的时间状语从句，who引导的定语从句)
③I felt so sad that I couldn’t accept such a terrible result. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
9．例文：
“Enjoying a harmonious neighborhood” is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What has happened in one community recently is a good example. Two weeks ago, Li Ming’s eighty-year-old father suddenly fell ill at home. Li Ming and his wife worked in a school far away from home. Thanks to the help of his neighbor Mr. Zhang, the old man was sent to the hospital in time and now he was out of danger. Li Ming was quite thankful to his neighbor.
It’s important to have a kind-hearted neighbor. We should get on well with our neighbors. When anyone is in trouble, the others should offer a hand in time.
In daily life, we should greet each other when meeting and say something kind to our neighbors in order to build a good relationship with them. We can create a harmonious neighborhood in this way.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍张大明父亲被救的经过；
第二步，阐述自己的感受；
第三步，阐述如何成为好邻居。
[亮点词汇]
①fall ill生病
②Thanks to the help of多亏了……的帮助
③in order to为了
[高分句型]
①When anyone is in trouble, the others should offer a hand in time.（when引导的时间状语从句）
10．例文：
A school did a survey among 800 students about their solutions to troubles. Here are the results. When students have troubles in life, 52% of them talk to their friends, and 22% ask their teachers or parents for help. The percentage of the students who solve troubles by themselves is 17%. And 7% choose other ways to solve the troubles.
As for me, asking parents for help is one of the best ways to solve the trouble I have. I still remember when I just entered the middle school, I really wanted to have a good impression to my teachers and classmates. So I tried my best and stayed up late every day. And I always felt sleepy in class. As a result, I got a poor grade in my first exam, which made me disappointed. I got up courage to tell my parents the truth. To my surprise, they encouraged me to be more confident and taught me how to balance the study and life. I suddenly felt a lot relaxed. After that, I changed a lot and made it to the top in my class. From the experience, I realized the proper solution will make us live a relaxed and pleasant life. In this way, we will be more confident and meet all challenges bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏统计图及内容提示中的相关信息，介绍调查结果并结合自己的经历谈谈遇到烦恼时的解决方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍图表中的统计结果；
第二步，结合自身经历谈谈遇到烦恼时该如何解决。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. for help 向某人求助
②try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
③stay up late 熬夜
④get up courage to do sth. 鼓起勇气做某事
[高分句型]
①When students have troubles in life, 52% of them talk to their friends, and 22% ask their teachers or parents for help.（when引导时间状语从句；and连接表等同关系的并列句）
②The percentage of the students who solve troubles by themselves is 17%.（who引导定语从句）
③To my surprise, they encouraged me to be more confident and taught me how to balance the study and life.（“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语）
11．例文：
At three last Sunday a group of boys were playing football happily. When it was Jim’s turn, he kicked the ball so hard that it landed in a bush. He had to get it. To his surprise, he found a suitcase as well as the ball. He looked at the suitcase carefully, and thought it must be valuable. He called the police at once. Very soon, a policeman came over and took the suitcase away. Several days later, Jim received a call. He said he was the owner of the suitcase. He thanked Jim again and again. Thanks to Jim, he found the money that he was going to use to save his sick son. How happy Jim felt!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：结合图片内容，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体阐述事件发生的过程；
第二步，对于整件故事进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
① to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是
② as well as也
③thanks to sb. 多亏了某人
[高分句型]
①He looked at the suitcase carefully, and thought it must be valuable.（and连接两个并列句，thought后接宾语从句）
②Thanks to Jim, he found the money that he was going to use to save his sick son.（that引导的定语从句）
12．例文：
In my opinion, I think it is necessary to set up labor classes which are good for our students. The reason is that we can not only learn the basic skills of managing life, but also develop a sense of responsibility. As a student, I would like to share some suggestions for setting up the course.
Above all, schools can provide students with courses on learning how to cook or how to fix up daily things. For example, it’s a good idea for us to practice cooking noodles or making cakes. In addition, we will have more ways to learn in class. It would be interesting if the school could hold some competitions, such as cooking competitions.
Last but not least, I call on every student to take an active part in labor courses. The more we do, the better our life will be.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，表达对学校开设劳动课的看法以及理由；
第二步，给出开设劳动课的建议；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①In one’s opinion在某人看来
②set up建立
③be good for对……有好处
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
⑤Above all首先
⑥provide sb with sth给某人提供某物
⑦fix up修理
⑧In addition另外
⑨Last but not least最后但同样重要的
⑩call on号召
take an active part in积极参加
the more...the more...越……越……
[高分句型]
①I think it is necessary to set up labor classes which are good for our students.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句，其中that已省略；句型：it is+形容词+to do sth）
②The reason is that we can not only learn the basic skills of managing life, but also develop a sense of responsibility.（由that引导表语从句）
③It would be interesting if the school could hold some competitions, such as cooking competitions.（状语从句：由if引导条件状语从句）
13．例文
A survey was done among 2,200 students in our school about the factors influencing our health. Here are the results. 34 percent of the students think eating is the most important factor. 30 percentage see sleeping as the biggest factor. There are 25 percent of the students who choose attitude. The other 11 percent have other choices.
As for me, eating is the biggest factor which influences my health. I used to go to school without breakfast because I usually get up late. However, I found myself sometimes can’t focus on what my teacher was saying. Once I even felt sick in PE class. At that time I realized the importance of having breakfast. And till now I stick to this habit. What’s more, I try to eat different kinds of food including vegetables, fruits and so onto keep a balanced diet. As the saying goes, you are what you eat. I must eat well and be responsible for my health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先简要说明图表内容、调查结果；
第二步，从图中选取影响你健康的最大因素，结合亲身经历谈谈如何自我管理；
第三步，谈谈自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth曾经做某事
②stick to坚持
③try to do sth尝试做某事
[高分句型]
① I used to go to school without breakfast because I usually get up late.（原因状语从句）
14．One possible version:
The volunteering spirit has spread quickly among students in recent years. My school once needed some volunteers to welcome the new students on the first day of the new term, and my classmates and I took an active part in the activity.
It was a bit cold that day. We all waited for the new students early morning at the school gate. When I saw a girl with two heavy bags, I hurried to help her carry one to the dormitory. She smiled and said thanks. Then I returned to the school gate to help others. I was busy climbing up and down the steps that day. My classmates and I had a great time helping all the new students enter the school safely and quickly.
At the opening ceremony, our headteacher spoke highly of what we did. All the new students extended their thumbs to us. I felt very proud.
Volunteering is a good opportunity to help others. If I get another chance, I’m still willing to show my kindness to others. I like this job very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你对志愿服务的看法；
第二步，具体阐述你的一段志愿经历；
第三步，最后说明你对志愿服务的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①wait for等待
②be busy doing sth忙于做某事
③speak highly of高度赞扬
④be willing to do乐意做某事
[高分句型]
①When I saw a girl with two heavy bags, I hurried to help her carry one to the dormitory（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If I get another chance, I’m still willing to show my kindness to others.（if引导的条件状语从句）
15．范文：
The Spirit of Lei Feng Goes on
Our school usually organizes all kinds of activities in March to remember Lei Feng. This year I went to an Old People’s Home with some volunteers from my school. As soon as we got there, the old people gave us a warm welcome. We brought some flowers and fruit to the elderly people. Then we helped to clean the windows and sweep the floor. After that, we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them. How happy we were! When it was time to leave, they were thankful for our kindness. It was an unforgettable experience for me. We have learned a lot and formed our team spirit, which is an important lesson.
In my opinion, everyone should copy Lei Feng’s spirit in our daily life. First, we can do our best to help people in need and raise money for the poor. What’s more, we can do a lot of voluntary work to make our city more beautiful.
Let’s learn from Lei Feng and try to make our world more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“至少两点”的要求，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山引出学校组织学雷锋活动；
第二步，具体阐述自己参加学雷锋活动的一次经历及感想；
第三步，阐述青少年应该如何践行雷锋精神及感想。
[亮点词汇]
①as soon as一……就
②gave us a warm welcome热烈地欢迎我们
③chat with each other互相聊天
④what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①When it was time to leave, they were thankful for our kindness. (when引导时间状语从句)
②We have learned a lot and formed our team spirit, which is an important lesson. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
16．范文：
Recently, my life has been different since the “double reduction” policy was carried out. Thanks to the policy, we have less homework than before. And we are required to finish it all at school, which means there are no more school assignments at home. The most exciting thing is that I don’t need to take off-campus tutoring classes anymore. So I can have enough sleep every day. And I can spend more time on physical exercise. I think it’s better for our health. Even though parents are worrying about our grades, we students seem to be happy. Our school offers many after-school activities. I have joined some sports clubs. I love to play basketball and football with my friends. I used to do my homework after dinner until 10:00 pm.
Can you imagine that now I get free time to read novels at night I love “double reduction” policy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是材料作文；
②时态：本文主要要用一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，说说“双减”政策的给你的影响；
②第二步，介绍自己关于“双减”政策的经历；
③第三步，说说自己业余时间喜欢的事情，
[高分词汇]
①doulbe reduction 双减
②thanks to 多亏
③be required to do 被要求做……
④off-campus tutoring class 课外辅导班
⑤spend…on… 在……上花费……
[高分句型]
①And we are required to finish it all at school, which means there are no more school assignments at home. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②The most exciting thing is that I don’t need to take off-campus tutoring classes anymore. (that引导表语从句)
17．例文
Labor education was officially included in the national course of primary and middle schools. I like doing housework and enjoy doing volunteer work, because in my opinion, through these I can develop basic life skills as well as helping others.
Last week, our head teacher took us to a nearby farm to plant trees. As soon as we arrived there, we quickly began our work. Some tried hard to dig holes, and some put the young trees into the holes carefully. And the others were busy watering the trees. We worked so hard that we finished our work in advance. Looking at the lines of the young trees, we felt happy, forgetting our tiredness.
I think it is necessary for schools to set up labor education courses, because they can improve our independence. Labor makes us healthy and confident, so let’s take an active part in labor work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示问题讲述对于劳动教育的看法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍你对这个决定有何看法；
第三步，介绍你参加劳动活动的经历；
第四步，介绍你从劳动活动中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion以我来看
②be busy doing sth.忙于做某事
③in advance提前
④set up建立
[高分句型]
①I like doing housework and enjoy doing volunteer work, because in my opinion, through these I can develop basic life skills as well as helping others.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②As soon as we arrived there, we quickly began our work.(as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
③We worked so hard that we finished our work in advance.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)