2024届 高考英语 二轮复习 读后续写 专题练习（有发文与解析）
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Writing 1
Heiss, 61, has lived in southeastern Bisbee for more than three decades. Ten years ago, he and his wife lost their only child, a son. They have no grandchildren.
On December 16, 2018, Heiss noticed a balloon's string was attached to a piece of paper.
“Dayami，” it read on one side, in a child's writing. Heiss turned the paper over and found it was a Christmas list. He wondered whether he could find the girl who had sent this one.
It would be difficult, but Heiss had a few clues. About 20 miles to the southwest, just across the border, was the city of Nogales Mexico, with a population of about a quarter million.
Based on the prevailing (当时的) wind, he was quite sure that was where it had come from.
On December 19, 2018, he decided to send a private Facebook message to Radio XENY, an AM radio station based in Nogales.
To his surprise, someone from the station called him back right away.
The next morning, Heiss awoke to another message from Radio XENY: They had found Dayami, an eight year old girl. She and her family indeed lived in Nogales. Would they be willing to arrange a get together at the radio station
Heiss went with his wife to Walmart. They bought just about everything on Dayami's list except for the Enchantimals dollhouse (it was sold out). They also bought a few other toys, as they had learned that Dayami had a younger sister, four year old Ximena.
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Then the Heisses drove for 45 minutes and reached Nogales.
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This was the first time anyone had found the note.
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Writing 2
That summer I turned 18. I was wild with excitement because I just took my driving license and my parents bought me a new perfect car. I was reminded repeatedly by my parents to drive cautiously. Along with this new privilege (特权) came new responsibilities. I would practice the same routine－call my parents and tell them where I was going, whom I was with, and when I would be home. It became a typical cycle.
I had been working all day in the hot sun. I was exhausted and ready for a nap. But my stomach told me something different. So I called my friend Mike and made our way into town. After our meal, we never knew our day would soon change for the worse.
It takes only a moment to turn your life upside down. I recalled later that I was driving fast. Actually too fast. I reached the conclusion two years later that the mistake would be with me for the rest of my life.
Mike and I were driving down a dusty gravel (沙砾) road. I was driving a shiny black Saturn, which was the car I had admired for long. I was overflowing with excitement and pride to be driving it. It was perfect in my eyes. I could see the rolling hills in the distance. Tall pine trees traveled on both sides of the road. The music playing loudly, we both were in high spirits. Somehow, without realizing it, I sped up.
Enjoying ourselves in my car, we came across a loose spot of gravel. My tires were stuck in it and desperate to escape. My car started fishtailing (摆尾行驶). Terrified, I pressed hard on the brakes and all of a sudden the car lost control. I froze, my body was stiff, great panic holding me entirely in its power. Looking into the right, I took a glimpse of Mike, whose body had leaned towards me. His face went pale but he was trying to balance himself. The car was rushing left to right, coasting (惯性滑行) along the gravel as if it were ice. It was only seconds later that my car crashed head on into a big pine tree.
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I heard a roaring sound of my car hitting the tree.
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Fortunately enough, Mike and I were not seriously injured.
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Writing 3
Jungle Shorts
It was Friday afternoon. Class 3 were waiting to go home. Lenny was at the back because the zip on his anorak (防水衣) had stuck. “Here is a letter for you all.” said Mr. Cox. “Give it to your parents.”
Lenny rushed to meet his mum. She read it, “Class 3 is going to have football lessons. Next week.”
“Wow！”shouted Lenny. “Real football！I bet I score fifteen goals！”
At home Lenny couldn't get out of his anorak and his mum had to help him. “I'm glad you didn't break the zip.I can't get you another coat until next month.” she said.
“I don't want a new coat，” said Lenny, “but can I have real football shorts？”
Mum said, “We'll go to the market tomorrow to look for some.”
That night Lenny lay awake thinking. He was going to make sure his mum bought white football shorts. Then he could score many goals.
After breakfast the next day they left for the market. On the way they saw Ted and Shane from Class 3 kicking a ball, who lived near Lenny on Lyon Street. “We've got new shorts！” they cried out.
The market was very crowded. One man was selling jungle shorts. “Big or small, they don't cost much，” said the man. “No thanks，” said Lenny. “I need real football shorts.” He pulled at his mum's hand and struggled through the crowds, trying to find real football shorts, but failed. They went slowly back and bought a pair of jungle shorts. On the way home they saw Tessa and Pam from Class 3 living on Lenny's street. “We've got new shorts for football！” said the girls .
“So have I，” said Lenny. But he didn't open his bag to show them.
On Monday afternoon, 20 children from Class 3 were waiting for their first football lesson. Everybody in the changing room was noisy and excited, swinging their bags of football things. Lenny was at the back with the jungle shorts in his bag. He didn't want to put them on.
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“Now, put on your football things and be quick to get in line, everyone！” Mr. Cox said.________________________________________________________________________
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Mr. Cox smiled, “Five children in Lyon Street in the same shorts！” he said. “You 5 must all play for the same team. You can be the Lyon Street Lions.”
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Writing 4
When I first met George, I was in my early 30s, trying to find something creative to get away from the boring housework and raising little ones. My children, then aged three and five, were just entering kindergarten and school life.
At 55, George had recently retired and was seeking a rewarding hobby for his golden years. For both of us, painting was “it” and we met at a local painting class. Thus began a friendship that was to last for 25 years—until the day he died.
George was a man who lived life to the full; he worked hard, played hard, and had an opinion about everything. He loved his wife, his family, his friends, and took pride in his fitness and health and walked three kilometres every day. And as the only male in a painting class full of women, George ruled the roost and we were his hens. He looked after everyone with the same attention.
He took to painting with a great passion and commitment, even transforming the spare bedroom of his home into a studio (工作室). His painting equipment was comprehensive—an easel (画架), quality paints, brushes, palette, canvases, charcoal pencils, etc. George housed many of these items in a red metal tool box with the original shop sticker with the price. Not fancy, but shiny and very red.
For about six years George and I studied together until the completion of the course drew us apart. We kept in touch as we lived within a couple of kilometres of each other. I'd sometimes see him on his daily walk or at the local shops and occasionally we'd chat over an afternoon tea.
Last year George was about 80 years old. He rang one day and asked me to come to his house. While his wife Dorothy served tea and cake, George explained that he was giving up painting and giving away all his “stuff”．
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Everything—paints, boards, canvases, completed works and even the precious red tool box！
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I failed to persuaded him and felt quite upset about his decision.
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Writing 5
Reflections of Hope in the Snowstorm
I was homesick. My husband, Keith, was attending Utah State University in Logan, Utah. We lived eight hundred miles away from my parents and family back home in California. We couldn't afford to go home for Christmas. We would just stay home in Hyrum.
Then a most unexpected gift arrived in a Christmas card: enough money for gas for the eight hundred mile drive home. We were so excited. Keith took time off from his part time job and we packed the car. We prayed for safety and good traveling conditions.
We drove all day to the west coast of California. Everything went well and we finally drove up the familiar driveway, honking (按喇叭) the horn to signal our arrival. My family rushed out to greet us, welcoming us with love and Christmas cheer.
We celebrated Christmas in my childhood home, all of us together again for the first time in three years. All too soon, the time came for us to return to Utah. My parents gave us some money for gas. With tears and hugs, we started on our way. Hoping to make good time, we drove steadily through the day.
Toward evening, snow flurries swirled (盘旋飞舞) around the car. We stopped just long enough to fuel up the car. With no credit card and very little cash, we did not even consider staying overnight in a motel.
If the road and weather conditions were good, we had about two hours of driving to get to Salt Lake City, where we could just make it to Keith's parents' home that night for a rest. Then we could go on to Hyrum in the morning, and he would make it to work on time. We drove into the darkening night. Snow swirled wildly about the car. Keith was having trouble seeing the road, as the headlights seemed dim. He pulled over, and got out to brush the snow away from them.
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Then he climbed back into the driver's seat and told me, “We have only one headlight.”
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Hours later, we reached the welcome streetlights and plowed roads of Salt Lake City following the truck.
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Writing 6
I live in a poorer quarter of my small Maine town. But I like it here. It's pretty, and I know all my neighbors.
Some years back I returned home to find that my house had been broken into. As I said, I know all my neighbors and therefore had a pretty good idea who the burglar was. I spoke with the police, and when I made my suspicions known they rolled their eyes. “He's got quite a record already，” they told me. “If you accused Jared, (not his real name) he will go to juvenile detention (少管所) until he's 21.”
I asked the police to hold off until I could speak with Jared. In the interim (期间) I went to his high school and told the principal what had happened. I also came up with a way that wouldn't involve the law.
My next stop was Jared's house. When he saw me, fear filled his eyes. “It's OK. Let's take a walk.” I said. As he walked beside me I asked why he had broken into my home. “If I take you to court, you'll go to the youth center for six years.”
A look of regret spread across Jared's face and I seized the moment. “Look，” I said, “and listen carefully. I spoke to the high school. I've offered to mentor (辅导) you for one school year. This means you have to meet with me for one hour every week. We'll spend a half hour on homework and a half hour talking about anything you like. But you must commit, and you must repay the money you stole from my house.”
He took the offer. To Jared's credit, he showed up in a quiet, dedicated (专用的) space in the school every Friday morning.
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I learned about his broken family.
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I held out my hand to Jared and said, “That's it.”
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Writing 7
One pleasant New year morning, Edward rose, washed and dressed himself in a hurry. He wanted to be the first to wish a happy New Year to his family. He turned up at every door of the house, and shouted the words of “Happy New Year” in an excited voice. After a quick breakfast, he hopped along the street like a happy bird, greeted and repeated the words to those he met.
When he came back, his father gave him 50 dollars, saying he could buy whatever he had been wishing for. His face lighted up as he took them. He had wished for a long time to buy some interesting books that he had seen at the bookstore located near the river through the city. He thanked his father and danced out of the house again with a light heart, intending to buy those books.
As he ran down the street, he noticed a poor family, the father, the mother, and three children shivering with cold in the winter wind. “I wish you a happy New Year，” cried Edward, as he was happily passing on. The man took a look at the happy boy and shook his head sadly.
Edward stopped and said, “It seems that you do not belong to this country.” The man again shook his head, a confused expression flashed over his face, for he could not understand or speak English.
But the poor man pointed to his dry mouth, and to the children with hungry looks, as if to say, “These little ones have had nothing to eat for a long time.”
Edward quickly realized that these poor people were in distress (贫困).
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He took out his dollars, and gave them all to the man.
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“My dear boy，” said his father, “Here are a dozen of books for you.”
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Writing 8
One afternoon Amy wanted to go with Meg and Jo to the theater, but Jo refused, saying, “No, Laurie only invited us.”
“I'll make you sorry of this, Jo March！”Amy shouted.
The two sisters enjoyed themselves at the theater, but Jo couldn't stop worrying as she wondered what Amy would do to “make her sorry”. She found out the next afternoon.
Amy and Meg were sitting together when Jo ran into the room, asking “Has anyone taken my notebook？” Meg said “No” at once, but Amy said nothing.
“Amy, you've got it，” said Jo, “Don't lie, or I'll make you！”
“Do what you like，” said Amy, “You'll never see your stupid book again！I burned it！”
Jo's face went white. “What！I worked so hard writing my stories！”
“I said I'd make you sorry, and I have！” said Amy.
Jo jumped at Amy and shook her shoulders. “You wicked (邪恶的) girl！” cried Jo. “I'll tell Mom！”
“Oh, how could you do that, Amy？” Mrs. March said, “That was Jo's book of stories. She wrote them all herself.”
Amy understood the terrible thing she had done and cried. Later, Amy begged her sister to forgive her. “I shall never forgive you，” Jo answered.
Next day, Amy complained Jo and Laurie went skating without her. “It's hard for her to forgive you, Amy，” said Meg. “Go after them and do something kind.”
Jo and Laurie were skating when Amy arrived. Jo saw Amy but turned away. Laurie was carefully skating along the edge of the ice and didn't see Amy. “Keep near the edge. The ice isn't safe in the middle，” Laurie called to Jo.
Jo heard and realized Amy probably hadn't heard, but she said nothing and skated after Laurie. “Let Amy look after herself ！” Jo thought.
Amy skated out towards the middle of the river. Jo reached the bend, and a strange feeling made her turn round—just in time to see Amy throw up her hands and go crashing through the ice into the cold water！Amy gave a cry that made Jo's heart stop with fear. She tried to call Laurie, but her voice was gone, and for a second she could only stand and stare at the blue hood (兜帽) of Amy's coat above the water.
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Suddenly, Laurie skated past her and shouted, “Bring a piece of wood from the side of the river, quickly！”
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Amy moved in her sleep and Jo looked at her.
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Writing 9
This past summer, my family went on our annual vacation in a cottage on a lake. There were various activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and building sand castle on the beach. In the evenings, we gathered on the beach, having great fun.
However, by the third day of our vacation, I noticed my sister, Jane, spent most of her time watching videos and looking through online shops indoors. She was so addicted to her cell phone！Over dinner, I told Jane we would hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning. I stared at her, “Put your phone away and enjoy the scenery. It's really amazing.”
“Well，” Jane shrugged (耸) her shoulders and answered unwillingly, “there are some bargains tomorrow in several online shops, so I'll not be available.”
“Come out to enjoy the fresh air and many views. Hiking is fun！”
“Sounds more like punishment than a vacation，” she didn't look up from her soup and mumbled (嘟囔), “I can not walk that far.”
When I said it only took half an hour of steady walking to climb to the top, she nodded, “OK. I'll go.”
The next morning was perfect for a hike, with sunny clear skies and gentle winds. I got up early and packed some sandwiches and bottles of water into my backpack along with the camera. Jane came slowly downstairs, and announced in a very unenthusiastic voice, “I'm ready to go, Jim.”
Anyway, we stepped out of our cottage and quite a different view unfolded before our eyes. Against the blue skies, a rough path wound to the top of the mountain across the lake with wild flowers and grass on both sides. The sunlight brightened on the glassy surface of the lake. We began from the path.
“I'm still wondering if this is a good idea, but if you could do it, I could also do.” She complained, frowning.
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She followed me, her mind wandering.
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Reaching the top, Jane widened her eyes, shouting, “How awesome！”
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续写思路
原文 大意 Heiss和妻子失去了唯一的儿子，也没有孙子。12月16日他们发现了一张系在气球上的圣诞清单。他们在电台的帮助下找到了放气球的女孩，并按照清单买了礼物。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“Heiss夫妇开了45分钟的车到了诺加莱斯”可写和两姐妹见面的过程。 ②第二段：根据所给句“这是第一次有人发现那张字条”，可写姐妹俩的吃惊，打开礼物时的惊喜，Heiss夫妻的感受。
续写 线索 到达电台→见面解释→打开礼物→感受。 情感线的走向应该是：激动→吃惊→开心→感激，以惊喜为主。
范文
ThentheHeissesdrovefor 45 minutesandreachedNogales. They arrived at the radio station. With presents in a big bag, they went upstairs and entered the office. There they were warmly greeted by two very excited little girls and their parents. “Are you Santa Claus？” They were confused by their appearances. Not wanting to spoil Santa Claus for the girls, who still believe, Heiss and his wife told them they were “Santa's helpers”. Their parents explained to the Heisses that Dayami had been writing a letter to Santa and sending it by balloon for years.
Thiswasthefirsttimeanyonehadfoundthenote. The two sisters' eyes were wide open with both surprise and wonder. As each present was taken from the bag, their eyes got bigger and bigger with surprise. They danced excitedly, and cried gratefully, “Oh, this really did work！” Seeing their smiling faces and laughing eyes, Heiss and his wife realized it was a beautiful and quite healing experience for them. The two families became friends for life after that.
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满分靓词 ①with surprise吃惊地 ②dance excitedly兴奋地雀跃
满分句式 Seeing their smiling faces and laughing eyes神态描写＋心理描写，分词作状语＋宾语从句， Heiss and his wife realized it was a beautiful and quite healing experience for them.
原文词汇积累 ①be attached to系在……之上；依恋；附属于
②with a population of有……人口
续写思路
原文 大意 “我”刚满18岁的那年夏天，拿到了梦寐以求的驾照，“我”带着朋友，开得很快。“我们”遇到了一处疏松的沙丘，车开始摆尾。惊慌失措的“我”猛踩刹车，汽车失去控制，最后撞上一棵大树。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“我听到汽车撞到树上的轰隆声”可知，接下来应写车祸现场如何？车撞成什么样了？“我”和朋友怎么样了？“我”的心情如何？ ②第二段：根据所给句“幸运的是，我和Mike受伤不严重”可知，接下来要写事故后“我”和Mike恢复的情况，还应描写这次事故给“我”的教训，对“我”生活的警示甚至改变。
续写 线索 Mike的状况→“我”的状况→汽车受损→“我”的内疚→目击者救援→康复→事故后的感悟。 情感线的走向应是：惊慌→内疚→宽慰感激→感悟。
范文
Iheardaroaringsoundofmycarhittingthetree.The white airbag hit Mike violently. His body flew back in the seat like a rag doll. My body was thrown forward, meeting the seat belt I was thankfully wearing. The window got broken, and the passenger door was completely destroyed. A mixture of fear, guilt and regret flooded over me. It was all my fault. I put both my life and Mike's life in danger. If only I had driven slowly and carefully! If only I had not put my friend's life at risk!
Fortunatelyenough, MikeandIwerenotseriouslyinjured. Though shocked, those who witnessed the accident dashed to us, helped us out of the damaged car and rushed us to the nearest hospital as soon as possible. I felt relieved and grateful. Though we both recovered soon, I was in low spirits for a long time after the accident, from which I learned to cherish life. From then on, I drove carefully and cautiously and observed the traffic rules. After all, nothing is more precious than life .
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满分靓词 ①put...in danger/at risk使……处于危险中 ②in low spirits情绪消沉
满分句式 1.His body flew back in the seat like a rag doll.比喻的修辞手法
2．Though shocked, those who witnessed the accident dashed to us, helped us out of the damaged car and rushed us to the nearest hospital as soon as possible. （形容词作状语＋三连动词）
原文词汇积累 ①be wild with excitement非常兴奋 ②change for the worse变得糟糕 ③turn sth. upside down使颠倒；使混乱
续写思路
原文 大意 Lenny班级要开足球课了，老师要求准备短裤。Lenny渴望一条白色的真正的足球短裤。但是没有钱的妈妈只能给他买丛林短裤，他在路上遇见的四个朋友都买好了短裤。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“换上衣服站队”，可写学生们换衣服，结合第二段所给句中关键信息“in the same shorts”可写原文提到的四个孩子和Lenny穿着同样的短裤。 ②第二段：根据所给句“你们五人一个队”，可交代五个穿一样短裤的孩子组成一个队和其他人比赛，获胜。
续写 线索 换衣服→Lenny发现四个小伙伴穿着和他一样的短裤→组队踢足球→比赛中获胜→开心回家。 情感线的走向应该是：焦虑尴尬→惊讶→激动→开心。
范文
“Now, putonyourfootballthingsandbequicktogetinline, everyone！”Mr. Coxsaid. Lenny got changed in a corner behind the door. Not wanting anybody to see his jungle shorts, Lenny hid behind Ted, embarrassed. It gave him a surprise when he looked down and saw what Ted was wearing. Ted was wearing jungle shorts as well！Lenny nudged him in the back and said “Your shorts are the same as mine ！” “Yes.” said Ted. Then he noticed all the friends from Lenny's street were wearing jungle shorts.
Mr. Coxsmiled , “FivechildreninLyonStreetinthesameshorts！”hesaid. “You 5 mustallplayforthesameteam. YoucanbetheLyonStreetLions.” When Mr. Cox grouped three more teams they dashed to the playing field with great excitement. They played until home time. The lions team beat all the others and Lenny scored five goals. “All shorts must be washed clean for next Monday.” said Mr. Cox. Lenny danced home beside his mum, telling her about his five goals and the Lyon Street Lions. Driving home, Mr. Cox smiled to himself. On Lyon Street, there were five pairs of jungle shorts blowing on the washing lines.
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满分靓词 give sb. a surprise使某人吃惊
满分句式 1.Lenny danced home beside his mum, telling her about动作描写＋语言描写 his five goals and the Lyon Street Lions.
2．On Lyon Street, there were five pairs of jungle shorts blowing on the结尾描述场景，呼应前文标题 washing lines.
原文词汇积累 ①on one's way home在某人回家的路上 ②struggle through the crowds奋力挤过人群
续写思路
原文 大意 “我”和George是在绘画班认识的并成了朋友，在学完绘画后“我们”仍然保持联系，然而有一天他打电话跟“我”说要放弃绘画。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“一切绘画设备、完成的作品，甚至珍贵的红色工具箱！”，再结合续写第二段开头关键信息“我没能说服他，对他的决定感到很难过。”可知，该段应叙述George说明放弃绘画的原因、送“我”绘画设备的理由和决心。 ②第二段：根据所给句“我没能说服他，对他的决定感到很难过。”可知，该段可写“我”接受了绘画设备→是否利用绘画设备→感受。
续写 线索 George坚持放弃绘画→无人能说服→送绘画设备给“我”→“我”接受礼物→绘画的时候怀念朋友→朋友无价。 情感线的走向应是：恼火→感激→怀念。
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Everything—paints, boards, canvases, completedworksandeventhepreciousredtoolbox! “I can't paint, but I don't know why I ever thought I could.” he sighed. I was a little annoyed by his words, because he had painted some unique and wonderful works. However, George insisted on giving up painting, and his determined look showed no one could persuade him. Presenting all his painting equipment to me, George said in a cheerful voice, “You are talented and are most likely to use it.”
Ifailedtopersuadehimandfeltquiteupsetabouthisdecision. I accepted this precious gift on the condition that he could reclaim it at any time. He never did, of course, and I still use much of his equipment today. As I paint I often remember George, his big personality, and generous spirit. The most treasured item is the Red Tool Box, still in good shape, and red. The original shop sticker is still firmly in place although the price is worn off. But that's all right because to my mind some things, like friendship, are beyond price.
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满分靓词 ①on the condition that条件是 ②in good shape状况良好
满分句式 However, George insisted on giving up神态描写 painting, and his determined look showed no one could persuade him.
原文词汇积累 ①live life to the full充实地生活 ②give away赠送
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原文 大意 作者和丈夫回父母家过完圣诞节后回家途中遭遇大雪，贫穷的夫妻没钱住汽车旅馆，只好继续冒雪开车，然而这时大灯坏了一个。
续写 部分 ①第一段：由所给句“大灯坏了一个”可写车灯坏了一个后雪夜道路黑暗看不清路面的状况、人物内心的焦虑和担忧；又由二段中的the truck可写卡车的突然出现，卡车的灯光是否照亮前行的道路。 ②第二段：由所给句“我们跟着卡车到了盐湖城”可知，下文可描写安全到达、对卡车司机的感激并呼应文章标题中的hope。
续写 线索 焦虑地在黑暗的车道上艰难前行→来了一辆卡车→跟着卡车的灯光往前开→安全到达→感激→感受。 情感线的走向应该是：焦虑担忧→吃惊→宽慰→感激
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Thenheclimbedbackintothedriver'sseatandtoldme, “Wehaveonlyoneheadlight.” Full of anxiety, we had no choice but to head slowly through the snowy darkness. We desperately tried to keep our eyes on the white line in the road, but it disappeared quickly in the accumulating snow. We seemed alone on that dark freeway with no traffic in either direction. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a truck appeared, gaining quickly upon us. The driver could have sped ahead. Instead, he stayed right with us, lighting our way. We cautiously crept along, following the truck.
Hourslater, wereachedthewelcomestreetlightsandplowedroadsofSaltLakeCityfollowingthetruck. To signal our gratitude, Keith blinked our one headlight at the truck driver in front of us. Our one headlight had reflected off the back of his truck as he had lighted our way in the dark night. As I gratefully lay down at last that night, the images of the steadily blowing snow drifted before my eyes. More importantly, though, my mind's eye was fixed on the reflection of the truck driver who had stayed with us, giving us hope through the darkest hours of that snow filled night.
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满分靓词 gain quickly upon快速超过
满分句式 More importantly, though, my mind's eye was fixed on the reflection of the truck driver who had stayed with us, giving us hope through the darkest hours of that snow filled night.（升华句，呼应标题中的reflection和hope）
原文词汇积累 ①take time off from请假 ②make it to到达 ③pull over靠边停车
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原文 大意 “我”认识小镇的所有邻居，有一天家里的钱被盗，“我”知道是杰瑞德干的，但却没有提出指控，而是提出了一个不涉及法律的办法。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“我了解到他破碎的家庭”可知，第一段应描述杰瑞德的不幸和生活中的困难等，还应叙述杰瑞德的转变等。 ②第二段：据段首句“我说就这样”可知，第二段的续写应体现“我”和杰瑞德宣布辅导结束时，杰瑞德的感激和“我”的感受。
续写 线索 了解杰瑞德的家庭情况→交谈倾听→变好→结束辅导→杰瑞德表示感谢→感受。 情感线的走向应是：如释重负→吃惊→感激。
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Ilearnedabouthisbrokenfamily. His parents got divorced and his mother earned just enough to make ends meet. He was often left alone at home and he hardly had friends. Friday after Friday we sat, we chatted, and I listened. To my joy, he became happier, talkative and even made several good friends. He repaid the money he had stolen from my house. The neighborhood got more peaceful, and prettier. When the 10 months ended, I met him in the quiet, dedicated space for the last time.
IheldoutmyhandtoJaredandsaid, “That'sit.” Surprised, he laid his hand in mine tentatively, and looked at me. “That's it ？” he echoed, still a little doubtful. “Yeah，” I nodded, smiling. In no time, a broad smile danced in his face, and he hugged me tightly, thanking me over and over. In return the neighborhood benefited from a well behaved and responsible Jared. I realized that the wide world often lets us down, but it's still possible to do our part to make a huge difference to others' lives.
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满分靓词 ①in no time立刻 ②make a difference to对……产生影响
满分句式 In no time, a broad smile danced in his face, and he hugged me tightly, thanking me over and over.（无灵主语句＋分词作状语）
原文词汇积累 to one's credit某人值得赞扬的是
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原文 大意 Edward新年这一天拿着父亲给的50美元开心地去书店买书，路上遇见一家贫困的人。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据首句“他把钱给了那个男人”可叙述，夫妻二人的反应，接着应叙述Edward没钱了只能回家，又由第二段首句中的“他父亲说”，可知Edward回家后应向父亲解释钱的去向。 ②第二段：根据首句“我亲爱的孩子，这些书是给你的”可知，第二段可叙述父亲奖励他书的原因，父亲鼓励他帮助他人，这样每年都是快乐的新年。
续写 线索 拿着Edward给的钱，夫妇二人表示感谢→回家父亲问买了什么书→告诉父亲实情→父亲送书→Edward开心→父亲开心骄傲→父亲希望他帮助困境中的人。 人物情感以感激、高兴、骄傲为主。
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Hetookouthisdollars, andgavethemalltotheman. How their eyes sparkled with gratitude！They said something in their language, which doubtlessly meant, “We thank you a thousand times.” Edward walked slowly home, thinking he could wait for his books till next New Year. Upon arriving home, he was asked by his father what books he had bought. He hung his head for a moment, but quickly looked up. “I have bought no books，” said he, “I gave my money to some poor people, who seemed to be very hungry.” “Oh, if you had seen how glad they were to receive the money！” added he.
“Mydearboy，”saidhisfather, “Hereareadozenofbooksforyou.” His father added with a big smile, “I give them to you, more as a reward for your kindness than as a New year gift.” Edward gave a jump for happiness and excitedly threw himself to the books. Realizing it was not a small sum for a little boy to give to the poor people cheerfully, his father felt both joyful and proud. He wished him to be willing to help those in need so every year of his life would be a happy New Year to him.
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满分靓词 ①doubtlessly adv.无疑地 ②hang one's head低头
满分句式 Realizing it was not a small sum for a little boy to give to现在分词作状语 the poor people cheerfully, his father felt both joyful and proud.
原文词汇积累 ①turn up出现；露面 ②take a look at看一看
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原文 大意 Jo，Meg和Laurie三姐妹一起去剧院没有带Amy，Amy气恼之下烧了Jo写作的本子，Jo非常生气，说不会原谅Amy。然而Jo和Laurie滑冰的时候Amy也去了，她没听到Laurie的警告滑到了中间，落入水中。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句Laurie滑过她身边，对她喊：“到岸边拿块木头来，快！”，由此推知接下来应写拿木头架在冰上，将Amy救出带回家？Jo是否内疚难过？ ②第二段：根据所给句“Amy在睡梦中动了动，Jo看了看她”可知，接下来可写Jo的内心活动：后悔、后怕、难过？接着可写Jo落泪→Amy醒来姐妹二人拥抱原谅彼此。
续写 线索 救出Amy→回家→Amy安全在家里睡着→后怕→和解。 情感线的走向应是：害怕→后悔内疚→难过→原谅。
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Suddenly, Laurieskatedpastherandshouted, “Bringapieceofwoodfromthesideoftheriver, quickly！” Wild with fear, Jo fetched some wood and pulled it across the ice, while Laurie held Amy's head above the water. Together, they got Amy out, who was more frightened than hurt and was quickly taken home. They covered her in blankets and tried to calm her, and after a while she fell asleep in front of the warm fire. Jo threw herself into Mrs. March's arms. “Mom, if she should die, it would be my fault.” Mrs. March patted her gently.
AmymovedinhersleepandJolookedather. I refused to forgive her, and today, she nearly died! And it was Laurie who saved her. How could I be so wicked？Tears rolled down Jo's cheeks. Then Amy opened her eyes and held out her arms, with a smile that went straight to Jo's heart. Neither of them said a word, but they held each other close, and everything was forgiven and forgotten.
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满分靓词 ①wild with fear非常害怕 ②hold sb. close紧紧抱住某人
满分句式 Then Amy opened her eyes and held out her arms, with a smile that went straight to Jo's heartＷ. （神态描写＋肢体动作描写）
原文词汇积累 ①jump at sb.扑向某人 ②in time to do sth.及时做某事
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原文 大意 作者一家到湖边度假，玩得很开心。但到了第三天，作者注意到妹妹Jane大多时候都待在屋里，沉迷于玩手机，作者想让Jane充分享受大自然的乐趣，于是邀她一起登山，但她很不愿意。经过作者的一番劝说，Jane勉强同意了。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“Jane心不在焉”再结合续写第二段开头可知，Jane最终和“我”一起登上山顶，故第一段可描述Jane和“我”在途中看到了什么？ ②第二段：根据所给句“到达山顶，Jane睁大眼睛，喊到‘真美啊’”可知，Jane被山顶的美景所吸引，故本段应描写他们在山顶欣赏的景色、Jane的情感和行为变化、“我”的感受等。
续写 线索 开始爬山→“我”拍照，Jane却不感兴趣→不放弃→登上山顶→欣赏景色→约定去湖边远足。 Jane情感线的走向应是：不情愿，不感兴趣→厌倦→坚持→快乐、惊喜和激动→渴望。
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Shefollowedme, hermindwandering. Minutes later, we started to climb a steep slope. Jane sighed, dragging her legs behind me. I was surprised to find some rarely seen trees and flowers, and took many photos but Jane showed no interest. She stopped and sat on a rock, thirsty, sweaty and bored. I handed her a bottle of water and we took a break. “I missed my phone，” she complained as we continued climbing. Though unhappy, she just climbed along with me.
Reachingthetop, Janewidenedhereyes, shouting, “Howawesome！” She looked around dreamily, her eyes twinkling with indescribably wild excitement. A refreshing breeze brushed the mountain top, miles of trees spread out below us and birds chirped between branches. We sat on a large rock and ate sandwiches, enjoying the sounds, the smells and the sunlight. “Anyone still wants her phone？” I joked. She rolled her eyes, laughing out loud. The next morning, Jane danced to my room, crying, “Let's hike around the lake today.”“Sure, get our backpack then，” I beamed, relieved and joyful.
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满分靓词 ①show no interest不感兴趣 ②roll one's eyes翻白眼
满分句式 1.She looked around dreamily, her eyes twinkling with indescribably wild excitement.（神态描写＋情感描写）
2．A refreshing breeze brushed the mountain top, miles of trees spread out below us and birds chirped between branches.（自然环境描写：微风，树木和鸟鸣）Ｗ．
原文词汇积累 ①be addicted to沉溺于 ②shrug one's shoulders耸耸肩
Heiss, 61, has lived in southeastern Bisbee for more than three decades. Ten years ago, he and his wife lost their only child, a son. They have no grandchildren.
On December 16, 2018, Heiss noticed a balloon's string was attached to a piece of paper.
“Dayami，” it read on one side, in a child's writing. Heiss turned the paper over and found it was a Christmas list. He wondered whether he could find the girl who had sent this one.
It would be difficult, but Heiss had a few clues. About 20 miles to the southwest, just across the border, was the city of Nogales Mexico, with a population of about a quarter million.
Based on the prevailing (当时的) wind, he was quite sure that was where it had come from.
On December 19, 2018, he decided to send a private Facebook message to Radio XENY, an AM radio station based in Nogales.
To his surprise, someone from the station called him back right away.
The next morning, Heiss awoke to another message from Radio XENY: They had found Dayami, an eight year old girl. She and her family indeed lived in Nogales. Would they be willing to arrange a get together at the radio station
Heiss went with his wife to Walmart. They bought just about everything on Dayami's list except for the Enchantimals dollhouse (it was sold out). They also bought a few other toys, as they had learned that Dayami had a younger sister, four year old Ximena.
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Then the Heisses drove for 45 minutes and reached Nogales.
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This was the first time anyone had found the note.
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Writing 2
That summer I turned 18. I was wild with excitement because I just took my driving license and my parents bought me a new perfect car. I was reminded repeatedly by my parents to drive cautiously. Along with this new privilege (特权) came new responsibilities. I would practice the same routine－call my parents and tell them where I was going, whom I was with, and when I would be home. It became a typical cycle.
I had been working all day in the hot sun. I was exhausted and ready for a nap. But my stomach told me something different. So I called my friend Mike and made our way into town. After our meal, we never knew our day would soon change for the worse.
It takes only a moment to turn your life upside down. I recalled later that I was driving fast. Actually too fast. I reached the conclusion two years later that the mistake would be with me for the rest of my life.
Mike and I were driving down a dusty gravel (沙砾) road. I was driving a shiny black Saturn, which was the car I had admired for long. I was overflowing with excitement and pride to be driving it. It was perfect in my eyes. I could see the rolling hills in the distance. Tall pine trees traveled on both sides of the road. The music playing loudly, we both were in high spirits. Somehow, without realizing it, I sped up.
Enjoying ourselves in my car, we came across a loose spot of gravel. My tires were stuck in it and desperate to escape. My car started fishtailing (摆尾行驶). Terrified, I pressed hard on the brakes and all of a sudden the car lost control. I froze, my body was stiff, great panic holding me entirely in its power. Looking into the right, I took a glimpse of Mike, whose body had leaned towards me. His face went pale but he was trying to balance himself. The car was rushing left to right, coasting (惯性滑行) along the gravel as if it were ice. It was only seconds later that my car crashed head on into a big pine tree.
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I heard a roaring sound of my car hitting the tree.
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Fortunately enough, Mike and I were not seriously injured.
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Writing 3
Jungle Shorts
It was Friday afternoon. Class 3 were waiting to go home. Lenny was at the back because the zip on his anorak (防水衣) had stuck. “Here is a letter for you all.” said Mr. Cox. “Give it to your parents.”
Lenny rushed to meet his mum. She read it, “Class 3 is going to have football lessons. Next week.”
“Wow！”shouted Lenny. “Real football！I bet I score fifteen goals！”
At home Lenny couldn't get out of his anorak and his mum had to help him. “I'm glad you didn't break the zip.I can't get you another coat until next month.” she said.
“I don't want a new coat，” said Lenny, “but can I have real football shorts？”
Mum said, “We'll go to the market tomorrow to look for some.”
That night Lenny lay awake thinking. He was going to make sure his mum bought white football shorts. Then he could score many goals.
After breakfast the next day they left for the market. On the way they saw Ted and Shane from Class 3 kicking a ball, who lived near Lenny on Lyon Street. “We've got new shorts！” they cried out.
The market was very crowded. One man was selling jungle shorts. “Big or small, they don't cost much，” said the man. “No thanks，” said Lenny. “I need real football shorts.” He pulled at his mum's hand and struggled through the crowds, trying to find real football shorts, but failed. They went slowly back and bought a pair of jungle shorts. On the way home they saw Tessa and Pam from Class 3 living on Lenny's street. “We've got new shorts for football！” said the girls .
“So have I，” said Lenny. But he didn't open his bag to show them.
On Monday afternoon, 20 children from Class 3 were waiting for their first football lesson. Everybody in the changing room was noisy and excited, swinging their bags of football things. Lenny was at the back with the jungle shorts in his bag. He didn't want to put them on.
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Mr. Cox smiled, “Five children in Lyon Street in the same shorts！” he said. “You 5 must all play for the same team. You can be the Lyon Street Lions.”
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Writing 4
When I first met George, I was in my early 30s, trying to find something creative to get away from the boring housework and raising little ones. My children, then aged three and five, were just entering kindergarten and school life.
At 55, George had recently retired and was seeking a rewarding hobby for his golden years. For both of us, painting was “it” and we met at a local painting class. Thus began a friendship that was to last for 25 years—until the day he died.
George was a man who lived life to the full; he worked hard, played hard, and had an opinion about everything. He loved his wife, his family, his friends, and took pride in his fitness and health and walked three kilometres every day. And as the only male in a painting class full of women, George ruled the roost and we were his hens. He looked after everyone with the same attention.
He took to painting with a great passion and commitment, even transforming the spare bedroom of his home into a studio (工作室). His painting equipment was comprehensive—an easel (画架), quality paints, brushes, palette, canvases, charcoal pencils, etc. George housed many of these items in a red metal tool box with the original shop sticker with the price. Not fancy, but shiny and very red.
For about six years George and I studied together until the completion of the course drew us apart. We kept in touch as we lived within a couple of kilometres of each other. I'd sometimes see him on his daily walk or at the local shops and occasionally we'd chat over an afternoon tea.
Last year George was about 80 years old. He rang one day and asked me to come to his house. While his wife Dorothy served tea and cake, George explained that he was giving up painting and giving away all his “stuff”．
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Everything—paints, boards, canvases, completed works and even the precious red tool box！
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Writing 5
Reflections of Hope in the Snowstorm
I was homesick. My husband, Keith, was attending Utah State University in Logan, Utah. We lived eight hundred miles away from my parents and family back home in California. We couldn't afford to go home for Christmas. We would just stay home in Hyrum.
Then a most unexpected gift arrived in a Christmas card: enough money for gas for the eight hundred mile drive home. We were so excited. Keith took time off from his part time job and we packed the car. We prayed for safety and good traveling conditions.
We drove all day to the west coast of California. Everything went well and we finally drove up the familiar driveway, honking (按喇叭) the horn to signal our arrival. My family rushed out to greet us, welcoming us with love and Christmas cheer.
We celebrated Christmas in my childhood home, all of us together again for the first time in three years. All too soon, the time came for us to return to Utah. My parents gave us some money for gas. With tears and hugs, we started on our way. Hoping to make good time, we drove steadily through the day.
Toward evening, snow flurries swirled (盘旋飞舞) around the car. We stopped just long enough to fuel up the car. With no credit card and very little cash, we did not even consider staying overnight in a motel.
If the road and weather conditions were good, we had about two hours of driving to get to Salt Lake City, where we could just make it to Keith's parents' home that night for a rest. Then we could go on to Hyrum in the morning, and he would make it to work on time. We drove into the darkening night. Snow swirled wildly about the car. Keith was having trouble seeing the road, as the headlights seemed dim. He pulled over, and got out to brush the snow away from them.
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Then he climbed back into the driver's seat and told me, “We have only one headlight.”
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Hours later, we reached the welcome streetlights and plowed roads of Salt Lake City following the truck.
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Writing 6
I live in a poorer quarter of my small Maine town. But I like it here. It's pretty, and I know all my neighbors.
Some years back I returned home to find that my house had been broken into. As I said, I know all my neighbors and therefore had a pretty good idea who the burglar was. I spoke with the police, and when I made my suspicions known they rolled their eyes. “He's got quite a record already，” they told me. “If you accused Jared, (not his real name) he will go to juvenile detention (少管所) until he's 21.”
I asked the police to hold off until I could speak with Jared. In the interim (期间) I went to his high school and told the principal what had happened. I also came up with a way that wouldn't involve the law.
My next stop was Jared's house. When he saw me, fear filled his eyes. “It's OK. Let's take a walk.” I said. As he walked beside me I asked why he had broken into my home. “If I take you to court, you'll go to the youth center for six years.”
A look of regret spread across Jared's face and I seized the moment. “Look，” I said, “and listen carefully. I spoke to the high school. I've offered to mentor (辅导) you for one school year. This means you have to meet with me for one hour every week. We'll spend a half hour on homework and a half hour talking about anything you like. But you must commit, and you must repay the money you stole from my house.”
He took the offer. To Jared's credit, he showed up in a quiet, dedicated (专用的) space in the school every Friday morning.
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I learned about his broken family.
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I held out my hand to Jared and said, “That's it.”
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Writing 7
One pleasant New year morning, Edward rose, washed and dressed himself in a hurry. He wanted to be the first to wish a happy New Year to his family. He turned up at every door of the house, and shouted the words of “Happy New Year” in an excited voice. After a quick breakfast, he hopped along the street like a happy bird, greeted and repeated the words to those he met.
When he came back, his father gave him 50 dollars, saying he could buy whatever he had been wishing for. His face lighted up as he took them. He had wished for a long time to buy some interesting books that he had seen at the bookstore located near the river through the city. He thanked his father and danced out of the house again with a light heart, intending to buy those books.
As he ran down the street, he noticed a poor family, the father, the mother, and three children shivering with cold in the winter wind. “I wish you a happy New Year，” cried Edward, as he was happily passing on. The man took a look at the happy boy and shook his head sadly.
Edward stopped and said, “It seems that you do not belong to this country.” The man again shook his head, a confused expression flashed over his face, for he could not understand or speak English.
But the poor man pointed to his dry mouth, and to the children with hungry looks, as if to say, “These little ones have had nothing to eat for a long time.”
Edward quickly realized that these poor people were in distress (贫困).
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He took out his dollars, and gave them all to the man.
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“My dear boy，” said his father, “Here are a dozen of books for you.”
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Writing 8
One afternoon Amy wanted to go with Meg and Jo to the theater, but Jo refused, saying, “No, Laurie only invited us.”
“I'll make you sorry of this, Jo March！”Amy shouted.
The two sisters enjoyed themselves at the theater, but Jo couldn't stop worrying as she wondered what Amy would do to “make her sorry”. She found out the next afternoon.
Amy and Meg were sitting together when Jo ran into the room, asking “Has anyone taken my notebook？” Meg said “No” at once, but Amy said nothing.
“Amy, you've got it，” said Jo, “Don't lie, or I'll make you！”
“Do what you like，” said Amy, “You'll never see your stupid book again！I burned it！”
Jo's face went white. “What！I worked so hard writing my stories！”
“I said I'd make you sorry, and I have！” said Amy.
Jo jumped at Amy and shook her shoulders. “You wicked (邪恶的) girl！” cried Jo. “I'll tell Mom！”
“Oh, how could you do that, Amy？” Mrs. March said, “That was Jo's book of stories. She wrote them all herself.”
Amy understood the terrible thing she had done and cried. Later, Amy begged her sister to forgive her. “I shall never forgive you，” Jo answered.
Next day, Amy complained Jo and Laurie went skating without her. “It's hard for her to forgive you, Amy，” said Meg. “Go after them and do something kind.”
Jo and Laurie were skating when Amy arrived. Jo saw Amy but turned away. Laurie was carefully skating along the edge of the ice and didn't see Amy. “Keep near the edge. The ice isn't safe in the middle，” Laurie called to Jo.
Jo heard and realized Amy probably hadn't heard, but she said nothing and skated after Laurie. “Let Amy look after herself ！” Jo thought.
Amy skated out towards the middle of the river. Jo reached the bend, and a strange feeling made her turn round—just in time to see Amy throw up her hands and go crashing through the ice into the cold water！Amy gave a cry that made Jo's heart stop with fear. She tried to call Laurie, but her voice was gone, and for a second she could only stand and stare at the blue hood (兜帽) of Amy's coat above the water.
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Suddenly, Laurie skated past her and shouted, “Bring a piece of wood from the side of the river, quickly！”
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Writing 9
This past summer, my family went on our annual vacation in a cottage on a lake. There were various activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and building sand castle on the beach. In the evenings, we gathered on the beach, having great fun.
However, by the third day of our vacation, I noticed my sister, Jane, spent most of her time watching videos and looking through online shops indoors. She was so addicted to her cell phone！Over dinner, I told Jane we would hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning. I stared at her, “Put your phone away and enjoy the scenery. It's really amazing.”
“Well，” Jane shrugged (耸) her shoulders and answered unwillingly, “there are some bargains tomorrow in several online shops, so I'll not be available.”
“Come out to enjoy the fresh air and many views. Hiking is fun！”
“Sounds more like punishment than a vacation，” she didn't look up from her soup and mumbled (嘟囔), “I can not walk that far.”
When I said it only took half an hour of steady walking to climb to the top, she nodded, “OK. I'll go.”
The next morning was perfect for a hike, with sunny clear skies and gentle winds. I got up early and packed some sandwiches and bottles of water into my backpack along with the camera. Jane came slowly downstairs, and announced in a very unenthusiastic voice, “I'm ready to go, Jim.”
Anyway, we stepped out of our cottage and quite a different view unfolded before our eyes. Against the blue skies, a rough path wound to the top of the mountain across the lake with wild flowers and grass on both sides. The sunlight brightened on the glassy surface of the lake. We began from the path.
“I'm still wondering if this is a good idea, but if you could do it, I could also do.” She complained, frowning.
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She followed me, her mind wandering.
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Reaching the top, Jane widened her eyes, shouting, “How awesome！”
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续写思路
原文 大意 Heiss和妻子失去了唯一的儿子，也没有孙子。12月16日他们发现了一张系在气球上的圣诞清单。他们在电台的帮助下找到了放气球的女孩，并按照清单买了礼物。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“Heiss夫妇开了45分钟的车到了诺加莱斯”可写和两姐妹见面的过程。 ②第二段：根据所给句“这是第一次有人发现那张字条”，可写姐妹俩的吃惊，打开礼物时的惊喜，Heiss夫妻的感受。
续写 线索 到达电台→见面解释→打开礼物→感受。 情感线的走向应该是：激动→吃惊→开心→感激，以惊喜为主。
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ThentheHeissesdrovefor 45 minutesandreachedNogales. They arrived at the radio station. With presents in a big bag, they went upstairs and entered the office. There they were warmly greeted by two very excited little girls and their parents. “Are you Santa Claus？” They were confused by their appearances. Not wanting to spoil Santa Claus for the girls, who still believe, Heiss and his wife told them they were “Santa's helpers”. Their parents explained to the Heisses that Dayami had been writing a letter to Santa and sending it by balloon for years.
Thiswasthefirsttimeanyonehadfoundthenote. The two sisters' eyes were wide open with both surprise and wonder. As each present was taken from the bag, their eyes got bigger and bigger with surprise. They danced excitedly, and cried gratefully, “Oh, this really did work！” Seeing their smiling faces and laughing eyes, Heiss and his wife realized it was a beautiful and quite healing experience for them. The two families became friends for life after that.
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满分靓词 ①with surprise吃惊地 ②dance excitedly兴奋地雀跃
满分句式 Seeing their smiling faces and laughing eyes神态描写＋心理描写，分词作状语＋宾语从句， Heiss and his wife realized it was a beautiful and quite healing experience for them.
原文词汇积累 ①be attached to系在……之上；依恋；附属于
②with a population of有……人口
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原文 大意 “我”刚满18岁的那年夏天，拿到了梦寐以求的驾照，“我”带着朋友，开得很快。“我们”遇到了一处疏松的沙丘，车开始摆尾。惊慌失措的“我”猛踩刹车，汽车失去控制，最后撞上一棵大树。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“我听到汽车撞到树上的轰隆声”可知，接下来应写车祸现场如何？车撞成什么样了？“我”和朋友怎么样了？“我”的心情如何？ ②第二段：根据所给句“幸运的是，我和Mike受伤不严重”可知，接下来要写事故后“我”和Mike恢复的情况，还应描写这次事故给“我”的教训，对“我”生活的警示甚至改变。
续写 线索 Mike的状况→“我”的状况→汽车受损→“我”的内疚→目击者救援→康复→事故后的感悟。 情感线的走向应是：惊慌→内疚→宽慰感激→感悟。
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Iheardaroaringsoundofmycarhittingthetree.The white airbag hit Mike violently. His body flew back in the seat like a rag doll. My body was thrown forward, meeting the seat belt I was thankfully wearing. The window got broken, and the passenger door was completely destroyed. A mixture of fear, guilt and regret flooded over me. It was all my fault. I put both my life and Mike's life in danger. If only I had driven slowly and carefully! If only I had not put my friend's life at risk!
Fortunatelyenough, MikeandIwerenotseriouslyinjured. Though shocked, those who witnessed the accident dashed to us, helped us out of the damaged car and rushed us to the nearest hospital as soon as possible. I felt relieved and grateful. Though we both recovered soon, I was in low spirits for a long time after the accident, from which I learned to cherish life. From then on, I drove carefully and cautiously and observed the traffic rules. After all, nothing is more precious than life .
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满分靓词 ①put...in danger/at risk使……处于危险中 ②in low spirits情绪消沉
满分句式 1.His body flew back in the seat like a rag doll.比喻的修辞手法
2．Though shocked, those who witnessed the accident dashed to us, helped us out of the damaged car and rushed us to the nearest hospital as soon as possible. （形容词作状语＋三连动词）
原文词汇积累 ①be wild with excitement非常兴奋 ②change for the worse变得糟糕 ③turn sth. upside down使颠倒；使混乱
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原文 大意 Lenny班级要开足球课了，老师要求准备短裤。Lenny渴望一条白色的真正的足球短裤。但是没有钱的妈妈只能给他买丛林短裤，他在路上遇见的四个朋友都买好了短裤。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“换上衣服站队”，可写学生们换衣服，结合第二段所给句中关键信息“in the same shorts”可写原文提到的四个孩子和Lenny穿着同样的短裤。 ②第二段：根据所给句“你们五人一个队”，可交代五个穿一样短裤的孩子组成一个队和其他人比赛，获胜。
续写 线索 换衣服→Lenny发现四个小伙伴穿着和他一样的短裤→组队踢足球→比赛中获胜→开心回家。 情感线的走向应该是：焦虑尴尬→惊讶→激动→开心。
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“Now, putonyourfootballthingsandbequicktogetinline, everyone！”Mr. Coxsaid. Lenny got changed in a corner behind the door. Not wanting anybody to see his jungle shorts, Lenny hid behind Ted, embarrassed. It gave him a surprise when he looked down and saw what Ted was wearing. Ted was wearing jungle shorts as well！Lenny nudged him in the back and said “Your shorts are the same as mine ！” “Yes.” said Ted. Then he noticed all the friends from Lenny's street were wearing jungle shorts.
Mr. Coxsmiled , “FivechildreninLyonStreetinthesameshorts！”hesaid. “You 5 mustallplayforthesameteam. YoucanbetheLyonStreetLions.” When Mr. Cox grouped three more teams they dashed to the playing field with great excitement. They played until home time. The lions team beat all the others and Lenny scored five goals. “All shorts must be washed clean for next Monday.” said Mr. Cox. Lenny danced home beside his mum, telling her about his five goals and the Lyon Street Lions. Driving home, Mr. Cox smiled to himself. On Lyon Street, there were five pairs of jungle shorts blowing on the washing lines.
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满分靓词 give sb. a surprise使某人吃惊
满分句式 1.Lenny danced home beside his mum, telling her about动作描写＋语言描写 his five goals and the Lyon Street Lions.
2．On Lyon Street, there were five pairs of jungle shorts blowing on the结尾描述场景，呼应前文标题 washing lines.
原文词汇积累 ①on one's way home在某人回家的路上 ②struggle through the crowds奋力挤过人群
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原文 大意 “我”和George是在绘画班认识的并成了朋友，在学完绘画后“我们”仍然保持联系，然而有一天他打电话跟“我”说要放弃绘画。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“一切绘画设备、完成的作品，甚至珍贵的红色工具箱！”，再结合续写第二段开头关键信息“我没能说服他，对他的决定感到很难过。”可知，该段应叙述George说明放弃绘画的原因、送“我”绘画设备的理由和决心。 ②第二段：根据所给句“我没能说服他，对他的决定感到很难过。”可知，该段可写“我”接受了绘画设备→是否利用绘画设备→感受。
续写 线索 George坚持放弃绘画→无人能说服→送绘画设备给“我”→“我”接受礼物→绘画的时候怀念朋友→朋友无价。 情感线的走向应是：恼火→感激→怀念。
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Everything—paints, boards, canvases, completedworksandeventhepreciousredtoolbox! “I can't paint, but I don't know why I ever thought I could.” he sighed. I was a little annoyed by his words, because he had painted some unique and wonderful works. However, George insisted on giving up painting, and his determined look showed no one could persuade him. Presenting all his painting equipment to me, George said in a cheerful voice, “You are talented and are most likely to use it.”
Ifailedtopersuadehimandfeltquiteupsetabouthisdecision. I accepted this precious gift on the condition that he could reclaim it at any time. He never did, of course, and I still use much of his equipment today. As I paint I often remember George, his big personality, and generous spirit. The most treasured item is the Red Tool Box, still in good shape, and red. The original shop sticker is still firmly in place although the price is worn off. But that's all right because to my mind some things, like friendship, are beyond price.
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满分靓词 ①on the condition that条件是 ②in good shape状况良好
满分句式 However, George insisted on giving up神态描写 painting, and his determined look showed no one could persuade him.
原文词汇积累 ①live life to the full充实地生活 ②give away赠送
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原文 大意 作者和丈夫回父母家过完圣诞节后回家途中遭遇大雪，贫穷的夫妻没钱住汽车旅馆，只好继续冒雪开车，然而这时大灯坏了一个。
续写 部分 ①第一段：由所给句“大灯坏了一个”可写车灯坏了一个后雪夜道路黑暗看不清路面的状况、人物内心的焦虑和担忧；又由二段中的the truck可写卡车的突然出现，卡车的灯光是否照亮前行的道路。 ②第二段：由所给句“我们跟着卡车到了盐湖城”可知，下文可描写安全到达、对卡车司机的感激并呼应文章标题中的hope。
续写 线索 焦虑地在黑暗的车道上艰难前行→来了一辆卡车→跟着卡车的灯光往前开→安全到达→感激→感受。 情感线的走向应该是：焦虑担忧→吃惊→宽慰→感激
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Thenheclimbedbackintothedriver'sseatandtoldme, “Wehaveonlyoneheadlight.” Full of anxiety, we had no choice but to head slowly through the snowy darkness. We desperately tried to keep our eyes on the white line in the road, but it disappeared quickly in the accumulating snow. We seemed alone on that dark freeway with no traffic in either direction. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a truck appeared, gaining quickly upon us. The driver could have sped ahead. Instead, he stayed right with us, lighting our way. We cautiously crept along, following the truck.
Hourslater, wereachedthewelcomestreetlightsandplowedroadsofSaltLakeCityfollowingthetruck. To signal our gratitude, Keith blinked our one headlight at the truck driver in front of us. Our one headlight had reflected off the back of his truck as he had lighted our way in the dark night. As I gratefully lay down at last that night, the images of the steadily blowing snow drifted before my eyes. More importantly, though, my mind's eye was fixed on the reflection of the truck driver who had stayed with us, giving us hope through the darkest hours of that snow filled night.
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满分靓词 gain quickly upon快速超过
满分句式 More importantly, though, my mind's eye was fixed on the reflection of the truck driver who had stayed with us, giving us hope through the darkest hours of that snow filled night.（升华句，呼应标题中的reflection和hope）
原文词汇积累 ①take time off from请假 ②make it to到达 ③pull over靠边停车
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原文 大意 “我”认识小镇的所有邻居，有一天家里的钱被盗，“我”知道是杰瑞德干的，但却没有提出指控，而是提出了一个不涉及法律的办法。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“我了解到他破碎的家庭”可知，第一段应描述杰瑞德的不幸和生活中的困难等，还应叙述杰瑞德的转变等。 ②第二段：据段首句“我说就这样”可知，第二段的续写应体现“我”和杰瑞德宣布辅导结束时，杰瑞德的感激和“我”的感受。
续写 线索 了解杰瑞德的家庭情况→交谈倾听→变好→结束辅导→杰瑞德表示感谢→感受。 情感线的走向应是：如释重负→吃惊→感激。
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Ilearnedabouthisbrokenfamily. His parents got divorced and his mother earned just enough to make ends meet. He was often left alone at home and he hardly had friends. Friday after Friday we sat, we chatted, and I listened. To my joy, he became happier, talkative and even made several good friends. He repaid the money he had stolen from my house. The neighborhood got more peaceful, and prettier. When the 10 months ended, I met him in the quiet, dedicated space for the last time.
IheldoutmyhandtoJaredandsaid, “That'sit.” Surprised, he laid his hand in mine tentatively, and looked at me. “That's it ？” he echoed, still a little doubtful. “Yeah，” I nodded, smiling. In no time, a broad smile danced in his face, and he hugged me tightly, thanking me over and over. In return the neighborhood benefited from a well behaved and responsible Jared. I realized that the wide world often lets us down, but it's still possible to do our part to make a huge difference to others' lives.
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满分靓词 ①in no time立刻 ②make a difference to对……产生影响
满分句式 In no time, a broad smile danced in his face, and he hugged me tightly, thanking me over and over.（无灵主语句＋分词作状语）
原文词汇积累 to one's credit某人值得赞扬的是
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原文 大意 Edward新年这一天拿着父亲给的50美元开心地去书店买书，路上遇见一家贫困的人。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据首句“他把钱给了那个男人”可叙述，夫妻二人的反应，接着应叙述Edward没钱了只能回家，又由第二段首句中的“他父亲说”，可知Edward回家后应向父亲解释钱的去向。 ②第二段：根据首句“我亲爱的孩子，这些书是给你的”可知，第二段可叙述父亲奖励他书的原因，父亲鼓励他帮助他人，这样每年都是快乐的新年。
续写 线索 拿着Edward给的钱，夫妇二人表示感谢→回家父亲问买了什么书→告诉父亲实情→父亲送书→Edward开心→父亲开心骄傲→父亲希望他帮助困境中的人。 人物情感以感激、高兴、骄傲为主。
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Hetookouthisdollars, andgavethemalltotheman. How their eyes sparkled with gratitude！They said something in their language, which doubtlessly meant, “We thank you a thousand times.” Edward walked slowly home, thinking he could wait for his books till next New Year. Upon arriving home, he was asked by his father what books he had bought. He hung his head for a moment, but quickly looked up. “I have bought no books，” said he, “I gave my money to some poor people, who seemed to be very hungry.” “Oh, if you had seen how glad they were to receive the money！” added he.
“Mydearboy，”saidhisfather, “Hereareadozenofbooksforyou.” His father added with a big smile, “I give them to you, more as a reward for your kindness than as a New year gift.” Edward gave a jump for happiness and excitedly threw himself to the books. Realizing it was not a small sum for a little boy to give to the poor people cheerfully, his father felt both joyful and proud. He wished him to be willing to help those in need so every year of his life would be a happy New Year to him.
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满分靓词 ①doubtlessly adv.无疑地 ②hang one's head低头
满分句式 Realizing it was not a small sum for a little boy to give to现在分词作状语 the poor people cheerfully, his father felt both joyful and proud.
原文词汇积累 ①turn up出现；露面 ②take a look at看一看
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原文 大意 Jo，Meg和Laurie三姐妹一起去剧院没有带Amy，Amy气恼之下烧了Jo写作的本子，Jo非常生气，说不会原谅Amy。然而Jo和Laurie滑冰的时候Amy也去了，她没听到Laurie的警告滑到了中间，落入水中。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句Laurie滑过她身边，对她喊：“到岸边拿块木头来，快！”，由此推知接下来应写拿木头架在冰上，将Amy救出带回家？Jo是否内疚难过？ ②第二段：根据所给句“Amy在睡梦中动了动，Jo看了看她”可知，接下来可写Jo的内心活动：后悔、后怕、难过？接着可写Jo落泪→Amy醒来姐妹二人拥抱原谅彼此。
续写 线索 救出Amy→回家→Amy安全在家里睡着→后怕→和解。 情感线的走向应是：害怕→后悔内疚→难过→原谅。
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Suddenly, Laurieskatedpastherandshouted, “Bringapieceofwoodfromthesideoftheriver, quickly！” Wild with fear, Jo fetched some wood and pulled it across the ice, while Laurie held Amy's head above the water. Together, they got Amy out, who was more frightened than hurt and was quickly taken home. They covered her in blankets and tried to calm her, and after a while she fell asleep in front of the warm fire. Jo threw herself into Mrs. March's arms. “Mom, if she should die, it would be my fault.” Mrs. March patted her gently.
AmymovedinhersleepandJolookedather. I refused to forgive her, and today, she nearly died! And it was Laurie who saved her. How could I be so wicked？Tears rolled down Jo's cheeks. Then Amy opened her eyes and held out her arms, with a smile that went straight to Jo's heart. Neither of them said a word, but they held each other close, and everything was forgiven and forgotten.
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满分靓词 ①wild with fear非常害怕 ②hold sb. close紧紧抱住某人
满分句式 Then Amy opened her eyes and held out her arms, with a smile that went straight to Jo's heartＷ. （神态描写＋肢体动作描写）
原文词汇积累 ①jump at sb.扑向某人 ②in time to do sth.及时做某事
续写思路
原文 大意 作者一家到湖边度假，玩得很开心。但到了第三天，作者注意到妹妹Jane大多时候都待在屋里，沉迷于玩手机，作者想让Jane充分享受大自然的乐趣，于是邀她一起登山，但她很不愿意。经过作者的一番劝说，Jane勉强同意了。
续写 部分 ①第一段：根据所给句“Jane心不在焉”再结合续写第二段开头可知，Jane最终和“我”一起登上山顶，故第一段可描述Jane和“我”在途中看到了什么？ ②第二段：根据所给句“到达山顶，Jane睁大眼睛，喊到‘真美啊’”可知，Jane被山顶的美景所吸引，故本段应描写他们在山顶欣赏的景色、Jane的情感和行为变化、“我”的感受等。
续写 线索 开始爬山→“我”拍照，Jane却不感兴趣→不放弃→登上山顶→欣赏景色→约定去湖边远足。 Jane情感线的走向应是：不情愿，不感兴趣→厌倦→坚持→快乐、惊喜和激动→渴望。
范文
Shefollowedme, hermindwandering. Minutes later, we started to climb a steep slope. Jane sighed, dragging her legs behind me. I was surprised to find some rarely seen trees and flowers, and took many photos but Jane showed no interest. She stopped and sat on a rock, thirsty, sweaty and bored. I handed her a bottle of water and we took a break. “I missed my phone，” she complained as we continued climbing. Though unhappy, she just climbed along with me.
Reachingthetop, Janewidenedhereyes, shouting, “Howawesome！” She looked around dreamily, her eyes twinkling with indescribably wild excitement. A refreshing breeze brushed the mountain top, miles of trees spread out below us and birds chirped between branches. We sat on a large rock and ate sandwiches, enjoying the sounds, the smells and the sunlight. “Anyone still wants her phone？” I joked. She rolled her eyes, laughing out loud. The next morning, Jane danced to my room, crying, “Let's hike around the lake today.”“Sure, get our backpack then，” I beamed, relieved and joyful.
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满分靓词 ①show no interest不感兴趣 ②roll one's eyes翻白眼
满分句式 1.She looked around dreamily, her eyes twinkling with indescribably wild excitement.（神态描写＋情感描写）
2．A refreshing breeze brushed the mountain top, miles of trees spread out below us and birds chirped between branches.（自然环境描写：微风，树木和鸟鸣）Ｗ．
原文词汇积累 ①be addicted to沉溺于 ②shrug one's shoulders耸耸肩