2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题(江苏专用) （含解析）

书面表达15篇(江苏名校真题)
1．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）2024年贾玲主导、主演的励志电影《热辣滚烫》上映以来吸引人们的广泛关注，引发热烈的讨论。 “Live life to the fullest, you only live once”，作为青少年的我们更应该燃烧自己的青春年华，让每一天过得热辣滚烫。为此，《金桥之声》广播站诚邀各位同学积极投稿，以“Live Life to the Fullest”为题，从热爱学习、直面挑战和关爱社会三个方面呼吁更多的同学过充实而有意义的生活，并在稿件最后表达对同学们的期待。
注意事项：
1. 稿件内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数100个左右，稿件开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Live Life to the FullestDear classmates,
I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I have made up my mind to live life to the fullest since I watched the film YOLO. As teenagers, we ________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Live Life to the Fullest
Dear classmates,
I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I have made up my mind to live life to the fullest since I watched the film YOLO. As teenagers, we should study hard to get into our dream college. We should try our best to study so that we can provide a better life for ourselves in the future. What’s more, we should never give up when we face difficulties. We should face challenges bravely and find ways to solve them. Last but not the least, we also should care for society. We can clean up the parks in our city when we are free. We can also volunteer to help the people in need.
In a word, I hope everyone can live life to the fullest.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文是从热爱学习、直面挑战和关爱社会三个方面呼吁更多的同学过充实而有意义的生活，并在稿件最后表达对同学们的期待。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，从热爱学习、直面挑战和关爱社会三个方面呼吁更多的同学过充实而有意义的生活；
第三步，表达对同学的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①try our best to do sth.尽我们最大的努力做某事
②provide sth. for sb.为某人提供某物
③give up放弃
④care for关心
[高分句型]
①we should never give up when we face difficulties. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②In a word, I hope everyone can live life to the fullest. (宾语从句)
2．（2024·江苏泰州·一模）初中三年的学习生活中，总有一些美好的瞬间令人难以忘怀。请选择一个你经历过的美好时刻，与大家分享你的故事和感受。以“一次美好而难忘的经历”为主题内容，写一篇演讲稿，参加我们的征文比赛。内容须包括：
1.What story is it
2.What have you learned from it
注意：
1.字数100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数；
2.内容必须包括上述所有信息，并作适当的发挥；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息；
4.语言规范，信息完整，结构连贯，书写工整。
Good morning，everyone!
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Thank you for listening.
【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, everyone!
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. Of them, I’d like to share my favorite story about a basketball game with you.
Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams. However, our captain hurt his finger during the third game. He is the brain of our team. When thinking of losing of the center, we were all down and couldn’t pay attention to the next match. Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up.
With the help of our captain, we played as well as the first two games. Seeing our captain waving his injured finger, we made our biggest efforts in the following games. With the cheers of our students, we won the champion. During the celebrations, we threw our captain into the air.
Just as the saying goes, “One tree does not make a forest.” I will never forget it because I have understood the importance of teamwork since then.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，表达从此处经历学到的东西时，用“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接描写一次美好而难忘的经历。
第二步，主要围绕“从这次经历中学到的东西”展开，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，重述主题，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多的
②would like to do sth.想要做某事
③hurt+身体部位 伤到……
④think of认为
⑤pay attention to注意
⑥encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
⑦cheer sb. up使某人高兴
⑧With the help of…通过……的帮助
⑨as well as和
⑩make one’s biggest efforts尽某人最大的努力
[高分句型]
①I will never forget it because I have understood the importance of teamwork since then. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3．（2024·江苏南京·一模） 请仔细观察下面图片并发挥想象，用英语写出一篇涵盖每张图片内容且结局完整的故事。故事的开头已经给出。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右。
Millie is a middle school student who loves playing with little animals. One day, when she was on her way to school, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文：
Millie is a middle school student who loves playing with little animals. One day, when she was on her way to school, she saw a homeless orange cat. The cat was very weak. It kept miaowing in a small box. Millie wanted to help the cat, so she decided to take the cat to school. She put the cat in her school bag. Soon the cat fell asleep.
When the first lesson began, Millie opened her bag to take out her book. To her surprise, the cat jumped out of the schoolbag and started running around the classroom. It even jumped onto Mrs. Lin’s desk. Mrs. Lin caught the cat quickly and took the cat to the teachers’ office. She gave the cat some water and food. A few moments later, the cat fell asleep.
Since then, Millie’s class have started a club to help homeless cats. They take turns to take care of little cats. Now they hope more students can join them.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是图片作文；
②时态：以一般过去时为主；
③提示：注意要能根据图片内容编一个合理的故事。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍第一幅图，发现一只猫；
第二步，介绍如何处理这只猫；
第三步，教室里发生的事；
第四步，从此开设了俱乐部帮助无家可归的猫。
［亮点词汇］
① fell asleep入睡
② Since then自那时起
［高分句型］
① Millie wanted to help the cat, so she decided to take the cat to school. (结果状语从句)
② Now they hope more students can join them. (宾语从句)
4．（2024·江苏南京·一模）劳逸结合，方能游刃有余。课间十分钟是一幅多彩的画卷。请根据学校的征稿要求，写一篇英语短文。
Now, more and more students are busy studying all day long. This week we want you to have your say about the ten-minute break. Why is it necessary to have the break What do you and your classmates do during the break What is your good advice on planning the break
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数 80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
We have a ten-minute break between classes._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
We have a ten-minute break between classes. In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break is necessary, because it makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. The ten-minute break is meant for us to relax and prepare for the next class. Only doing so can we have more energy to study effectively in class. My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercise. Sometimes my classmates have a free chat with me happily or just take a walk outside. Therefore, I always feel energetic and listen carefully to teachers. You shouldn’t run too far from your classroom. Besides, don’t take some energetic exercise. I hope that everyone will have a wonderful ten-minute break.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“课间我们有十分钟的休息时间。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——课间休息重要的原因、你和同学所做的事、你的建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望每个人都将有一个美好的课间10分钟”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for为……做准备
②take a walk散步
③feel energetic 感到精力充沛
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break is necessary, because it makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. (状语从句）
②I hope that everyone will have a wonderful ten-minute break. (宾语从句)
5．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）2024年“世界读书日”(World Book Day) 的主题是“Read Your Way”，为此你校英语俱乐部正在开展征文活动，要求介绍你读过的一本书及其阅读方法。请根据以下四方格图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
注意事项：
1.短文须根据四方格图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.提供的书名非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3.词数在100个左右；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】例文：
A good book is valuable. In my opinion, reading not only helps us relax in our spare time, but also allows us to learn more about the world.
Among all the books I’ve read, the book I’d like to share with you is Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe. Robinson had to stand hunger and fought against bad conditions. He overcame a lot of difficulties when he was left alone on an island. However, with his strong will and great determination he was successful.
No one is born to know how to study. We need to learn a few reading skills. Taking notes while reading helps us to record the important information. And we can also share ideas with our friends after reading. What’s more, when we read something interesting, we can play the roles of the book. The more we read, the more knowledgeable and intelligent we’ll have.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。作者引出阅读的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者介绍一本他读过的好书《鲁滨逊漂流记》及书中细节；
第三步，作者建议的几条关于阅读的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s opinion在某人看来
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③be born to do sth.天生会做某事
④need to do sth.需要做某事
[高分句型]
①Taking notes while reading helps us to record the important information. (动名词作主语)
②The more we read, the more knowledgeable and intelligent we’ll have. (the+比较级，the+比较级)
6．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）毕业在即，阳光中学某班英语老师请同学们在成长档案中加入主题为“My
Dream Job”的一页，希望大家记录憧憬，分享自己对理想职业的理解和行动计划。假设你是该班的一名学生，请结合自身特点撰写一篇英语短文。下表是你从教材中找到的相关信息，仅供参考。
Name Job Personality Action Saying
Liu Tao Chief engineer careful;serious and organized pay attention to every detail; work to high standards A miss is as good as a mile.
Dr Ma doctor kind and patient do more volunteer work to help more people …
Wu Bing teacher kind and helpful
注意事项：
1.短文内容须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数在100个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】例文：
My Dream Job
Students always have dreams for the future. What’s your dream job when you grow up For me, I hope to be a doctor.
First, both my father and mother are doctors who are very kind and patient. They often do more volunteer work to help more people in their spare time. When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine. Second, the doctors work in the front line to fight against the serious illness. They move me a lot. Third, the doctors use their knowledge to help people have better lives. I dream of becoming one of them.
I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine. I also plan to read more books about medicine. Then I will know better about the job. I’m sure I will be a good doctor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：考生应紧扣“My Dream Job”主题，根据提示进行写作，介绍自己理想的职业、理由以及行动计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。阐述想要从事的职业；
第二步，具体阐述你想从事这个职业的理由和行动计划；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①both…and…两者都
②take an interest in对……感兴趣
③fight against反抗
④plan to计划
[高分句型]
①First, both my father and mother are doctors who are very kind and patient. (who引导的定语从句)
②When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine. (so that引导的结果状语从句)
7．（23-24九年级下·江苏南京·阶段练习）在我们的学习和生活中，能够全身心地投入到一件事情中去，享受做事情的过程，是一种幸福！但求耕耘，不问收获！某英文网站正在以“全身心投入 (Devotion)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是慧洁，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，包含下列问题：
1. What did you devote yourself to 2. How did you do it 3. What have you learnt from the experience
注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2.词数90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Devotion
I’m glad to share my ideas about my devotion in my life.
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【答案】例文：
Devotion
I’m glad to share my ideas about my devotion in my life. Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life.
One day, I saw some of my schoolmates painting in the art room. The colorful pictures caught my attention immediately. I was so drawn to the beauty in front of me that I joined the Painting Club. After that, no matter whatever happened, I still was on time to each art lesson and finished each painting carefully.
By doing this, I developed my ability and decided that I wanted to completely devote myself to painting. Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意不要遗漏信息提示，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明自己全心投入到画画中去；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述自己是如何爱上绘画的以及自己的做法是怎样的；
第三步，书写结语。简单地阐述自己在这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①devote oneself to全身致力于
②in front of在……之前
③on time按时
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.（倒装句）
8．（23-24九年级下·江苏无锡·阶段练习）近年来越来越多的交流学生来到中国。为了让他们更好地了解中国，21 世纪英文报开辟了“Cities in China” 的专栏，鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。假如你是张华，请你选择中国的一个城市，根据下列流程图完成一篇 100 词左右的征文。
注意事项：
1.短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.括号中提供的信息为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3.词数在 100 个左右，短文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者想要介绍的中国城市——北京；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者从地理位置、当地食物和名胜古迹等几个方面介绍北京；
第三步，讲述推荐北京的理由并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lie in位于
②places of interest名胜古迹
③be worth…值得……
[高分句型]
①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. (if引导条件状语从句)
②I think Beijing is worth a visit. (省略that的宾语从句)
9．（2024·江苏泰州·一模）随着现代生活节奏加快，健康生活方式已成为人们越来越迫切的需求。作为一名中学生，我们怎样健康生活呢？学校校刊英语专栏以“How to live a healthy life”为题举办征文比赛, 请根据下表的提示要点，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
生活方式 兴趣爱好
人际交往
……
情绪管理 乐观自信
自身完善
……
写作要求：
1.内容须包括表格中所给要点，并作适当发挥；
2.表达清晰，语句连贯，衔接自然，字迹工整；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
4.词数100左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。
How to live a healthy life
Nowadays, more and more people care about health. Here are my ideas about how we teenagers live a healthy life.
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In a word, we can live a healthy life when we have both healthy lifestyles and good moods.
【答案】One possible version
Nowadays, more and more people care about health. Here are my ideas about how we teenagers live a healthy life.
On one hand, we need to have healthy lifestyles. First, we are supposed to develop good interests and hobbies, like playing ball games or reading interesting books. They can help us relax after a day’s busy study. Second, we should have several good friends. When we have problems, they are always there to offer help. And what’s more, healthy diets are also necessary for us. Healthy diets always mean strong bodies.
On the other hand, it’s good for us to be in good moods all the time. We should always wear smiles on our
faces. That not only cheers us up, but also has good influences on others. We need to be confident to show ourselves in front of others. And of course, learning is a good way to improve ourselves. When we are good and strong enough, we can deal with every difficulty we face. Always be active, and life will be better and better.
In a word, we can live a healthy life when we have both healthy lifestyles and good moods.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从生活方式角度介绍如何健康生活，比如兴趣爱好、人际交往及健康饮食等；
第二步，从情绪管理角度介绍如何健康生活，比如乐观自信、自身完善及心态积极等。
[亮点词汇]
①are supposed to应该
②necessary有必要的
③influence影响
④deal with处理
[高分句型]
①When we have problems, they are always there to offer help. (时间状语从句)
②That not only cheers us up, but also has good influences on others. (并列句)
10．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）大运河马拉松系列赛，传递着积极向上的乐观精神和健康文明的生活态度。我们应该如何使自己的生活过得更积极、健康？请以“How to Live a Better Life”为题，写一篇英文短文，从运动、饮食、作息习惯、业余爱好等方面进行阐述。
要点提示：
1.运动有助于增强体质，我们可以有哪些常见的运动；
2.健康的食物能为身体提供能量(举例说明)；
3.良好的作息习惯是必须的 (举例说明)；
4.业余爱好能拓展我们的视野，使人更加开心，读书、音乐、旅游……
注意事项：1.词数90左右，必须包含写作要点，开头已给出，不计入词数。
2. 不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名筹信息。
How to Live a Better Life
It’s important for us to live healthily and actively. We can try to live a better life in the following ways.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Live a Better Life
It’s important for us to live healthily and actively. We can try to live a better life in the following ways.
First, exercise helps to build up the body. We can do some simple exercise, such as running, swimming, yoga and so on. Second, healthy food can provide our body with enough energy. For example, green vegetables and fruit can provide more vitamin. Third, good work and rest habits are a must. Having enough sleep can make us feel energized next day. Finally, we can also form the good habits, they can make us feel happier and can broaden our horizons.
Following these tips, you will have a better life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头总起，引出下文；
第二步，介绍如何过更好生活的具体方式；
第三步，总结并呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②provide...with...给……提供……
③form the good habits养成好习惯
④broaden our horizons开拓视野
[高分句型]
①Having enough sleep can make us feel energized next day. (动名词短语作主语)
11．（2024·江苏扬州·一模）中国饮食文化博大精深。假如你是李明，上周你校开展了以“品中华美食，传承中华文化”为主题的校园美食节活动。请你根据以下图示提示，用英语给你的英国笔友 Mike写一封电子邮件，分享本次活动的过程和感受。
要求：
1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数 100左右(电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： campus 校园；process 过程
Dear Mike,
How is everything going In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life. Our school held a food festival in the dining hall last Friday.
During the activity, the cooks from our school introduced traditional styles of cooking and cooked many famous dishes like salad, bread, cakes, Yangzhou fried rice, Gong Bao Chicken and etc. Many students enjoyed traditional food and watched the process of cooking. They also cooked by themselves with the help of the cooks. All of them spoke highly of this activity. Meanwhile, they had a better understanding of China’s rich and special food culture.
In a word, I am interested in learning to cook delicious food. I can depend on myself when I am at home alone. What’s more, cooking helps develop a life skill. It is necessary for us to learn to cook in schools.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图片中对于本次美食节的时间、地点、活动及你的感受的描述，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，通过描述美食节的举办意义来引出此次活动；
第二步，具体描述写作内容。详细描述美食节的活动过程；
第三步，谈论一下自己对于此次活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①speak highly of赞扬；
②in a word总之；
③be interested in对……感兴趣；
④depend on依靠
[高分句型]
It is necessary for us to learn to cook in schools. (it作形式主语)
12．（2024·江苏泰州·一模）九年级同学即将参加中考，除了紧张的学习，也应利用课余时间使生活更丰富多彩。学校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据以下提示，
以“How to make our spare time more meaningful ”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. To be a good volunteer, what can we do
2. What sports can we do
3. What club can we join
4. What else can we do
How to make our spare time more meaningful
We Grade 9 students are now busy with our lessons, but we are supposed to make our spare time more meaningful. How should we spend our spare time
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【答案】例文：
How to make our spare time more meaningful
We Grade 9 students are now busy with our lessons, but we are supposed to make our spare time more meaningful. How should we spend our spare time
First, we can work as volunteers to help those in need in our spare time. For example, we can go to the community center to help the old people do some cleaning or shopping. Second, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. I think running or playing basketball is good for us. Third, it’s also a good idea to join different clubs such as the Reading Club, the Swimming Club, the Robot Club and so on.
In my opinion, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Moreover, it is a good chance for us to enjoy the nature and relax ourselves.
In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and make it more meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出下文“如何度过课余时间”的方法；
第二步，分享度过课余时间的方法；
第三步，发表自己的观点；
第四步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to 应该
②for example 例如
③be good for 对……有好处
④such as例如
⑤in one’s opinion 在某人看来
[高分句型]
①I think running or playing basketball is good for us.（省略that的宾语从句，动名词作主语）
②Moreover, it is a good chance for us to enjoy the nature and relax ourselves.（动词不定式作定语）
13．（2024·江苏扬州·一模）最近你校英语报社正举行以“我为父母做件事”为题的演讲活动。假设你是李华，请你根据下列提示，围绕这一话题，写一篇英文演讲稿，谈谈你为父母做这件事的过程和感受，内容包括以下要点：
1. What thing did you do for your parents
2. Why did you do it (at least two points)
3. How did you do it (First, then, ...)
4. How did you feel after doing it
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3. 词数在 100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hello, everybody!
I am Li Hua. Last weekend, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文
Hello, everybody!
I am Li Hua. Last weekend, I made a fruit salad for my parents. They were happy. My parents worked so hard that they had no time to have fruit, and I wanted them to relax. What’s more, I wanted to do something for them because I wanted to tell them I could do something by myself and I could look after them well.
It was interesting to make a fruit salad. First, I washed the fruit carefully. Then, I cut them into small pieces. Next, I mixed them with salad cream. Finally, I put some sugar in it. It looked colourful.
I felt proud and happy when I saw them smile. I think I can do more things for my parents in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示的要点进行阐述，不要遗漏任何要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明为父母做了什么事及其原因；
第二步，具体阐述为父母做的这件事的过程；
第三步，抒发做完此事的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①cut sth into small pieces把某物切成小块
②mix…with…把……和……混合起来
[高分句型]
①My parents worked so hard that they had no time to have fruit, and I wanted them to relax.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）
②What’s more, I wanted to do something for them because I wanted to tell them I could do something by myself and I could look after them well.（because引导的原因状语从句，省略引导词that的宾语从句）
③It was interesting to make a fruit salad.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
④I felt proud and happy when I saw them smile.（when引导的时间状语从句）
14．（2024·江苏南通·一模）很多外国友人喜欢中国文化，David就是其中之一。他在抖音上发起Traditional Chinese Stories的话题，向中国网友征集中国传统故事。请你参与话题，介绍一个中国传统故事，传播中国声音。
提示：①What is the story about
②Why do you choose the story (至少两点)
※You can choose one from the following stories or any other one you like.
Yu Gong moves mountains. 愚公移山
The Rabbit and the Turtle. 龟兔赛跑
Look at the Sky from the Bottom of a Well. 坐井观天 ...
要求：①不得出现学校、老师和同学的真实姓名。
②语句连贯，字数90词左右。
Traditional Chinese stories play an important role in Chinese culture. Now I’d like to introduce
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【答案】例文
Traditional Chinese stories play an important role in Chinese culture. Now, I’d like to introduce a well-known story called the Rabbit and the Turtle.
One day a rabbit and a turtle had a race. At first, the rabbit ran so fast that he quickly left the turtle far behind. A moment of pride went through his mind, “if I have a sleep now, the turtle can’t catch up with me,
either.” Then he followed what he thought.
However, the turtle insisted on pulling himself slowly to the end, though he was quite tired. At last, when the turtle reached the finishing line, the whole animal world was surprised. The rabbit regretted a lot.
The story reminds me that something which seems impossible can be achieved if someone puts all his effort into it. As the old saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.” And I think I should take each task seriously not only in my study, but also in my life in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出要介绍的传统故事；
第二步，具体阐述传统故事内容；
第三步，阐述自己从这个故事中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①catch up with赶上
②insist on坚持
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①At last, when the turtle reached the finishing line, the whole animal world was surprised.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②The story reminds me that something which seems impossible can be achieved if someone puts all his effort into it.（宾语从句）
15．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）从生物的解构、科幻小说的涌现、太极奥秘的探索、“嫦娥四号与玉兔”的中国式太空浪漫再到智能家居的日益普及。从古至今，人类对科学的追求从未止步。科学的不断发展给你的生活带来了怎样的影响？请以“Science Shapes Our Life”为题写一篇英语文章。内容应包括：
1.你对该问题的理解；
2.你的一次亲身经历；
3.你对未来科学的畅想。
注意：
1.词数100；
2.内容涵盖要点，照抄本卷语篇不得分；
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Science Shapes Our Life
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【答案】例文
Science Shapes Our Life
In the last few decades, science has developed at high speed, and played an important role in our daily lives. It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.
Recently, my family decided to embrace the future of transportation by purchasing a new energy vehicle. I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car. Furthermore, new energy vehicles use electric energy as a power source. Electricity can be obtained through a variety of ways, including renewable energy such as solar and wind energy, so the popularity of electric vehicles has a positive impact on the environment.
Looking ahead, the future of science appears promising, with endless possibilities waiting to be explored and discovered. Advances in fields such as artificial intelligence, biotechnology, and space exploration hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍科学发展带给生活什么样的影响；
第二步，讲述科学发展影响自身生活的经历；
第三步，表达对未来科学的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in在……中起重要作用
②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
③compared with与……相比
④have a positive impact on对……有积极的影响
[高分句型]
①It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.（强调句）
②I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car.（省略that的宾语从句）
③…hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.（省略that的定语从句）