2024年中考英语复习：书面表达（江苏省连云港市）
A
假定你是李辉，你所在学校上周进行了一次关于和谐校园的问卷调查，请结合所给图示写一篇调查报告向校英文报School Life栏目投稿。
要点如下：
1. 描述结果；2. 分析原因；3. 提供对策。
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不可出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 词数80-100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：harmonious school (和谐校园)
A Survey on Harmonious School
Last week, our school did a survey on harmonious school.
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【答案】
A Survey on Harmonious School
Last week, our school did a survey on harmonious school. The survey suggests that three quarters of the students think our school is harmonious, and the rest don’t think so. The students who disagree have two reasons: bad habits and poor communication.
In our school, a small number of students have some bad habits, such as smoking. I think the school should protect them from these bad habits with the help of their parents.
Poor communication can lead to an inharmonious school as well. The students who are not good at expressing themselves seldom get along well with others. They had better improve their speaking skills and think twice before saying something.
It’s our duty to build our school a more harmonious one. Let’s do our best!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：文章需包括所有要点，可适当补充，注意行文连贯，无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述问卷调查结果；
第二步，从“不良习惯”的角度分析并提出对策；
第三步，从“不善交流”的角度分析并提出对策；
第四步，呼吁大家一起行动。
[亮点词汇]
①the rest剩余的部分
②protect sb. from sth.保护某人免受……伤害
③as well也
[高分句型]
①The students who disagree have two reasons: bad habits and poor communication.（定语从句）
②It’s our duty to build our school a more harmonious one. （it作形式主语）
B
三年的初中生活让你收获满满。假如你校英语报邀请你写一篇英语短文，给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹提一些建议。请你根据以下提示并结合自己的学习经历写一篇短文，阐述
你的观点。
提示：
要求：
1. 习作必须包括提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；
3. 100词左右。
How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9.
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How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. Here I’d like to tell you something to make your school life more meaningful.
First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so don’t forget to exercise every day and have a balanced diet. You should always look on the bright side when you’re in trouble. Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. For example, you can have a good study plan and preview the new lessons as well. Besides, you should finish the exercises on your own and solve problems with the help of your classmates or teachers. Third, you should be thankful for your parents because they are the persons who are always behind you. You can communicate more and share the happiness and sadness with them. You can also help them with some housework. In addition, you should take good care of them when they feel sick.
I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：题目要求根据提示要点，给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或他们的父母提一些建议。必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，引出话题；
第二步，给出建议；
第三步，提出希望。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②forget to do sth.忘记做某事
③be in trouble陷入困境
④make great progress取得进步
⑤take good care of好好照顾
[高分句型]
①Here I’d like to tell you something to make your school life more meaningful.（倒装句）
②Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③Third, you should be thankful for your parents because they are the persons who are always behind you.（because引导的原因状语从句）
④In addition, you should take good care of them when they feel sick.（when引导的时间状语从句）
⑤I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.（省略that的宾语从句）
C
三年的初中生活即将结束，你的父母亲一路艰辛，在学习和生活上给予你关怀、鼓励、支持与帮助，你心存感激。假如你叫谢恩，请你给你的父母亲写一封感谢信，谈谈你对他们的印象，回忆他们是怎么帮助你的，并表达你对他们的祝福。
注意：
①格式要完整、正确；
②可以根据情节需要适当发挥；文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息；
③词数：80～100，短文首句不计入总词数。
Dear father and mother,
I’m glad to write to you.
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【答案】
Dear father and mother,
I’m glad to write to you. I want to let you know how much I love you and how much I’ve appreciated the things you’ve done for me.
Since I was born, you have given me all your love and care, but never expect anything in return. You have brought me up and taken good care of me carefully and patiently.
Last year, I was chosen to take part in a speech competition. I felt very nervous. You tried hard to help me prepare for it. You encouraged me to be confident and told me not to care much about the result. You said the process was more meaningful. With your help, I did very well that time. I felt happy and proud.
My dear parents, thanks a lot! You’re great. I will love you forever!
Yours,
Xie En
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封感谢信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写信的目的：感谢父母；
第二步，谈谈你对父母的总体印象；
第三步，回忆一件往事，讲述父母帮助你的经过；
第四步，书写总结，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②prepare for准备
[高分句型]
①Since I was born, you have given me all your love and care, but never expect anything in return. (since引导时间状语从句)
②You said the process was more meaningful. (宾语从句)
D
美丽中国（Beautiful China）栏目面向全国中学生开展旅游胜地推荐活动，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍张家界的基本情况，并给出推荐理由。
提示：
1. 面积：大约480平方千米；
2. 景色：有山有河有森林、不同种类的植物和动物、奇特形状的岩石等；
3. 景点：天子山、金鞭溪……
4. 推荐理由。
注意事项：
1. 短文词数：80左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Zhangjiajie is in Hunan Province.
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Zhangjiajie is in Hunan Province. It’s well-known for its magnificent natural scenery. Zhangjiajie Scenic Area covers an area of about 480 square kilometers. It is one of the most popular tourist destinations in China.
There are thousands of pillars and peaks throughout the scenic area. You will be impressed by the unique rocks and stones there. This place is covered with green forests. You can also see sparkling rivers, lakes and waterfalls here and there. It’s the home to many plants and animals, some of which you can only find there. The main attractions there include Tianzi Mountain, which is known as “the King of Needle Karst”, and the Golden Whip Stream, which is the most beautiful canyon in the world.
I highly recommend visiting Zhangjiajie Scenic Area for its distinctive natural beauty. You can hike, take photos and enjoy the fresh air there. If you like adventures or just love nature, Zhangjiajie Scenic Area is a must-visit place!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇介绍张家界风景区的材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点信息，适当补充细节，让文章逻辑通顺完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍张家界，写明地理位置、面积、特点等；
第二步，具体描写张家界的自然美景，描写著名景点等；
第三步，写出推荐去张家界旅游的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①magnificent natural scenery 壮丽的自然风景
②popular tourist destination 热门的旅游目的地
③be well-known for 因……出名
④highly recommend 强烈推荐
[高分句型]
①The main attractions there include Tianzi Mountain, which is known as “the King of Needle Karst”, and the Golden Whip Stream, which is the most beautiful canyon in the world. （定语从句）
②If you like adventures or just love nature, Zhangjiajie Scenic Area is a must-visit place!（if条件状语从句）
E
习总书记在二十大报告中指出“青年强，则国家强”。作为中学生的我们，更要努力发展自身，做拼搏上进的中国少年！请根据以下图片，联系自身实际，从德智体美劳等方面谈谈自己将如何努力做合格的中国少年。
要求：1．话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2．词数：80~100之间，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3．字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager ____________________________________________________________
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【答案】
A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager
Firstly, helping others will make us feel happy. For example, we should help others who
have fallen down. After we see their smiles on their faces, we must be happier too. Secondly, we should study hard. In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. Thirdly, healthy bodies can bring us happiness. Health is important to everyone. Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. So we should keep on doing more exercise. Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful and interesting. So we should develop a good habit to learn more and more skills when we are in our free time. Finally, we can do more social work. For example, we can plant more trees to protect the environment. We can also work as volunteers and clean up the parks.
From doing these, I must be a better teenager.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据图片内容以及提示单词，联系自身实际介绍自己将如何做合格的中国少年。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，突出主题：如何成为一名好少年？
第二步，结合图片内容，分别从帮助他人、努力学习、体育锻炼、发展兴趣及参与社会实践活动等五个方面具体阐述如何做一名合格的中国少年。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己做一名好少年的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①fall down落后
②broaden our eyes开阔我们的眼界
③develop a good habit培养好的习惯
④be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
[高分句型]
①For example, we should help others who have fallen down. (who引导的定语从句)
②In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. (动词不定式作目的状语)
③Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful and interesting. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
④Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. (倒装结构)
F
初中生活马上就要结束了，三年初中生活中，你一定拥有一些美好或难忘的经历。请你根据下面的思维导图，用英文简单描述一个最值得你回忆的故事。
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in about two months. ________________________________________________
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【答案】
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in about two months. In the three years’ life, I had so many memories. Now I’d like to share one of them that impressed me most with you.
I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I feel I am so lucky to become one of her students. From her, I learned that it is a happy thing to help others when they are in trouble.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐
述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我已经在我们学校学习三年了”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——发生的事、感受及收获等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我学到了当别人有困难时帮助别人，是一件快乐的事情。”的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①do well in在某方面擅长
②as soon as一……就
③little by little一点点地
[高分句型]
①No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. (状语从句）
②I feel I am so lucky to become one of her students. (宾语从句)
G
根据要求完成英语短文写作，请将英语短文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
榜样的力量是巨大的。作为中学生，相信我们都有自己的榜样。下周学校英语俱乐部将举行“主题征文”活动，请你根据表格信息提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。
我的好榜样 谁是我的好榜样？
为什么是我的好榜样？
这个好榜样给我带来什么影响？ (或你的感受体会)
举1个自己受好榜样影响的事例。
我的呼吁。
注意：
1) 不能使用本试卷所有短文的人物和事迹作为自己文章的例子。要写正能量人物例子，不能写负面或反面人物例子，否则得0分。不能照抄本试卷所有短文原文的完整句子；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
2) 语句连贯，词数不少于80个。
参考表达： to set a good example for sb. 给某人树立好榜样
to carry on the spirit of…/to inherit the spirit of… 传承……的精神
My Good Example
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【答案】
My Good Example
Lei Feng is my good example, because he would help others who were in need. His spirit of great love and being ready to help others has been encouraging me all the time. What he did set a good example for me.
When I was in the primary school, my teachers would tell us pupils the stories of Lei Feng, which moved me a lot. From then on, I have looked Lei Feng as my good example. I always give others a hand whenever they are in need. Especially in my holidays, I like working as a volunteer to do others a favor like doing some cleaning in the streets, giving others directions when asked, doing housework for the olds and so on.
I feel quite happy when helping others. In my opinion, helping others not only brings us and others happiness, but also helps us grow healthily, which makes our society more harmonious, peaceful and full of love and respect for each other.
Let’s make every effort to carry on/inherit the spirit of Lei Feng.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍榜样是谁及其原因；
第二步，叙述受榜样影响的事例；
第三步，表达感受和体会；
第四步，表达呼吁。
［亮点词汇］
①in need 在困难中
②not only…but also… 不但……而且……
［高分句型］
①What he did set a good example for me. (what引导主语从句)
②When I was in the primary school, my teachers would tell us pupils the stories of Lei Feng, which moved me a lot. (when引导时间状语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句)
H
假设广州新文化馆 ( Guangzhou Cultural & Art Center）将开展主题（theme）为“岭南文化”的活动，现征集新一期岭南文化展的设计方案。请你根据右边的内容写一份电子邮件，向文化馆提出你的建议。
注意：
（1）可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展；
（2）词数 80 词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear sir,
I am excited to know you are collecting designs for the Lingnan Culture Exhibition.
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【答案】
Dear sir,
I am excited to know you are collecting designs for the Lingnan Culture Exhibition. Here are my suggestions. As we all know, Lingnan culture includes calligraphy, architecture, embroidery, tea drinking culture and so on. We can invite calligraphers to write in the exhibition hall, and we can show architectural models. Visitors are invited to make Cantonese dim sum.
Lingnan culture is an important part of Chinese culture, which is obviously different from northern culture. Through exhibition and participation, visitors from all over the country and even around the world can understand our culture and love our culture.
A local student
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表达对文化展的关注并提出建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详述展示的内容和展示的方式，并说明展示的目的；
第三步，书写结语。希望参观者喜爱“岭南文化”。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know 众所周知
②and so on 等等
③an important part of… ……的重要部分
④be obviously different from 明显不同于
[高分句型]
①We can invite calligraphers to write in the exhibition hall, and we can show architectural models.（不定式作宾补）
②Visitors are invited to make Cantonese dim sum.（被动语态）
I
生活中，总有很多重要的人或者事情，帮助我们成长。比如：一本书、一句话、一次经历等等。请你以“________help/helps me grow up”为题，结合图示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1. 短文需包含如图所示的所有要点；
2. 词数90~100；
3. 短文中不得泄露个人信息。
________ help/helps me grow up
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Failure helps me grow up
It’s known that failure is the mother of success. If we can learn to turn a failure into our
advantage, we will learn another secret to success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go. As long as we face it bravely, we will succeed one day.
There was once a time when I had difficulty in maths. However hard I tried, my maths grade was still bad. Later, I failed to pass an important examination. Before I decided to give up, it was my maths teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson. What she told me encouraged me to face my maths problem bravely. Knowing the importance of failure, I was not afraid of maths any longer. Finally, my maths grades improved.
Taking my experience into conclusion, everyone can conquer the unavoidable failure in our life so long as we have faith in ourselves. Treasure the failure, and you will win the treasure.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全题目，开头引出本文主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“什么帮助我成长、帮助我成长的原因、帮助我成长的方式等”几个方面进行阐述；
第三步，书写结语，发表感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①as long as只要
②fail to do sth.没做成某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①If we can learn to turn a failure to our advantage, we will learn another secret to success. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②As long as we face it bravely, we will succeed one day. (as long as引导的条件状语从句)
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善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以“Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork”为主题的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可从下表中选择一项或自行确定。
Teamwork Activities
take part in a ball match prepare for a party clean the classroom make a poster (海报) make a survey (调查) join in a relay race (接力赛) do social practice (社会实践) ...
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
(2)词数：90—110。
参考词汇(仅供选择使用)：
teamwork (团队合作) work with (与……合作)
team spirit (团队精神) make an effort to (努力去……)
Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork
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【答案】
Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life.
I remembered that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance. After that, I realized this was a
team sport. I should work together with other teammates.
All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children’s social skills, but also develop their communication skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：要求介绍自己与他人合作的一次活动经历，并表达自己的感受，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍团队合作的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己与他人合作的活动经历；
第三步，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①in all areas of life在生活的各个领域
②because of因为
③all in all总之
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I remembered that I took part in a football match last month. (that引导宾语从句)
②All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children’s social skills, but also develop their communication skills. (not only ... but also句型)
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Will Never Forget ________
提示：转眼间，初中生活即将结束，回首过去的时光，总有某个人、某件事、某个时刻或某次活动，如同闪耀的星星，在记忆的夜空中熠熠生辉，令你难以忘怀。请你以“I Will Never Forget ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲述其背后的故事，并谈谈你的收获或感受。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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I will never forget my teacher
How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. Here I want to say thanks to my English teacher, Mrs. Liu. She is really an unforgettable teacher.
I used to be lazy and wasn’t interested in English. So my English is very poor. I almost gave it up. Two years ago, my English teacher, Mrs. Liu, had a long conversation with me. She gave me great help and encouraged me not to give up. She taught me some good ways of learning English, such as taking notes in class, watching English movies as often as possible and so on. I still remember when I failed in an exam, she encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, she told me to be brave. Because of her help, I become more and more interested in English and make much progress.
Now I am not only good at English, but also good at other subjects. I will always remember her kindness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，将题目补全；
第二步，介绍她在英语和生活方面对我的帮助；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①say thanks to sb.向某人表示感谢
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③gave up放弃
④as often as possible尽可能经常
⑤encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I still remember when I failed in an exam, she encouraged me to keep trying.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Because of her help, I become more and more interested in English and make much progress.（Because of her help介词短语）
③Now I am not only good at English, but also good at other subjects.（not only…but also…不但……而且……）
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2024年3月，河北邯郸一名初中生被同学残忍杀害，此消息震惊全国，为杜绝校园欺凌 (say no to school bully)，打造和谐安定校园 (build a harmonious and stable campus)，作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语作文。
提示：
1.尊敬老师，努力学习，锻炼身体，培养一个兴趣爱好。
2.与同学融洽相处，互相帮助。
3.不要与他人吵架，不偷盗他人物品。
4.遵守学校的规章制度，不携带管制刀具 (restricted knives)。
5.不要私自会见陌生人，遇险应报警。
要求：
1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.运用以上提示词，内容可适当发挥。
3.词数100词左右，作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus.
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It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus. Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again. Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also expressed their great concern about it. Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem.
First of all, we should respect the teachers, study hard and do some exercise to keep healthy. Then we can develop some hobbies, like playing basketball. Next, we should get on well with other students and help each other. What’s more, don’t argue with others and do not steal their belongings. More importantly, follow the school rules and don’t carry restricted knives. Last but not least, don’t meet strangers privately, and if you are in danger, you should call the police in time.
All in all, every student should behave himself and keep away from school-bullying.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点信息，可适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头，引出话题：我们应该怎么做；
第二步，根据提示，具体介绍我们应该做的事情；
第三步，书写结语：规范自己的行为，远离校园欺凌。
[亮点词汇]
①reach some agreements 达成协议
②get on well with 与……相处融洽
③argue with 与……争吵
④in danger 处于危险
⑤all in all 总之
[高分句型]
Last but not least, don’t meet strangers privately, and if you are in danger, you should call the police in time.（否定祈使句，if引导的条件状语从句）
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我们只看见了别人的成功，却未看见他们背后的荆棘满路。成功并非偶然。每一位成功人士的背后都有一段鲜为人知的努力和坚持的经历。我们赞美成功者，不仅仅因为他们的成就，还因为他们的品质为我们树立了榜样。请根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文介绍刘翔、张桂梅、钱学森等英雄人物的成就和品质，并就“如何做才能成功地成为一名优秀的中学生”发表自己的观点。
注意：
1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名；
2.包含思维导图所有要点；
3.至少表达出一条自己的观点；
4.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数
How should we define (定义) success Different people have different ideas about it. But one thing we should be sure is that it’s not easy to be successful. Now let’s take a look at some examples._______________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
How should we define success Different people have different ideas about it. But one thing we should be sure is that it’s not easy to be successful. Now let’s take a look at some examples.
Liu Xiang is still a great player, although he has retired. We all know he won the gold medal in the 110 hurdles race in 2004. He was successful because he trained hard and never gave up. He even has got foot problems which has influenced his whole life.
Zhang Guimei is the most beautiful teacher. She set up the girls’ school. She gives away everything she has to help the poor girls just in order to make them have a good life.
Qian Xuesen, our greatest scientist, led to China’s first successful missile launch in 1960. He made great achievements for our country. His only wish was to make our country stronger.
As for me, I am still a student. I may not do something big. But there is one thing we should know, “Little things can make a big difference”. So for me, success means to learn hard and well. I will try my best to make great progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山点出写作目的。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍刘翔、张桂梅、钱学森三人的事迹。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①look at看
②give up放弃
③make great progress取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
①But one thing we should be sure is that it’s not easy to be successful. （定语从句）
②She gives away everything she has to help the poor girls just in order to make them have a good life.（in order to引导的目的状语从句）
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人们常说：“态度决定一切。”请你据此以“Attitude Decides Everything”为题，写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
写作要求：
1.词数不少于 80词：
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Attitude Decides Everything
1. Your opinions on it.
2. Examples to prove your opinions.
3. A conclusion.
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【答案】
Attitude Decides Everything
Different attitudes lead to different results. Those who take positive attitude towards work will be rewarded. Take Xiao Hua as an example. He is my classmate. Not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students. So he has become a top
student in our class, even in the grade. With his diligence and concentration, he is bound to succeed in entering his ideal university. However, Xiao Li, also my classmate, never cares about his studies because he is addicted to playing games, and he turns a deaf ear to the teachers advice. As a result, he falls far behind others in his studies.
In my opinion, attitude decides everything. No matter what you do, you must do it well even if you may fail many times. Sooner or later you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的举例部分，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表达自己的观点；
第二步，通过正反两个例子来佐证自己的观点；
第三步，首位呼应，再次总结自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①lead to导致
②be helpful to对……有帮助
③be addicted to沉迷于
[高分句型]
①Those who take positive attitude towards work will be rewarded. （who定语从句）
②Not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students. （倒装句）
③No matter what you do, you must do it well even if you may fail many times.（让步状语从句）2024年中考英语复习：书面表达（江苏省连云港市）
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假定你是李辉，你所在学校上周进行了一次关于和谐校园的问卷调查，请结合所给图示写一篇调查报告向校英文报School Life栏目投稿。
要点如下：
1. 描述结果；2. 分析原因；3. 提供对策。
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不可出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 词数80-100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：harmonious school (和谐校园)
A Survey on Harmonious School
Last week, our school did a survey on harmonious school.
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B
三年的初中生活让你收获满满。假如你校英语报邀请你写一篇英语短文，给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹提一些建议。请你根据以下提示并结合自己的学习经历写一篇短文，阐述你的观点。
提示：
要求：
1. 习作必须包括提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；
3. 100词左右。
How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9.
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C
三年的初中生活即将结束，你的父母亲一路艰辛，在学习和生活上给予你关怀、鼓励、支持与帮助，你心存感激。假如你叫谢恩，请你给你的父母亲写一封感谢信，谈谈你对他们的印象，回忆他们是怎么帮助你的，并表达你对他们的祝福。
注意：
①格式要完整、正确；
②可以根据情节需要适当发挥；文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息；
③词数：80～100，短文首句不计入总词数。
Dear father and mother,
I’m glad to write to you.
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美丽中国（Beautiful China）栏目面向全国中学生开展旅游胜地推荐活动，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍张家界的基本情况，并给出推荐理由。
提示：
1. 面积：大约480平方千米；
2. 景色：有山有河有森林、不同种类的植物和动物、奇特形状的岩石等；
3. 景点：天子山、金鞭溪……
4. 推荐理由。
注意事项：
1. 短文词数：80左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Zhangjiajie is in Hunan Province.
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习总书记在二十大报告中指出“青年强，则国家强”。作为中学生的我们，更要努力发展自身，做拼搏上进的中国少年！请根据以下图片，联系自身实际，从德智体美劳等方面谈谈自己将如何努力做合格的中国少年。
要求：1．话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2．词数：80~100之间，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3．字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager ____________________________________________________________
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初中生活马上就要结束了，三年初中生活中，你一定拥有一些美好或难忘的经历。请你根据下面的思维导图，用英文简单描述一个最值得你回忆的故事。
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from
middle school in about two months. ________________________________________________
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根据要求完成英语短文写作，请将英语短文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
榜样的力量是巨大的。作为中学生，相信我们都有自己的榜样。下周学校英语俱乐部将举行“主题征文”活动，请你根据表格信息提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。
我的好榜样 谁是我的好榜样？
为什么是我的好榜样？
这个好榜样给我带来什么影响？ (或你的感受体会)
举1个自己受好榜样影响的事例。
我的呼吁。
注意：
1) 不能使用本试卷所有短文的人物和事迹作为自己文章的例子。要写正能量人物例子，不能写负面或反面人物例子，否则得0分。不能照抄本试卷所有短文原文的完整句子；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
2) 语句连贯，词数不少于80个。
参考表达： to set a good example for sb. 给某人树立好榜样
to carry on the spirit of…/to inherit the spirit of… 传承……的精神
My Good Example
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假设广州新文化馆 ( Guangzhou Cultural & Art Center）将开展主题（theme）为“岭南文化”的活动，现征集新一期岭南文化展的设计方案。请你根据右边的内容写一份电子邮件，向文化馆提出你的建议。
注意：
（1）可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展；
（2）词数 80 词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear sir,
I am excited to know you are collecting designs for the Lingnan Culture Exhibition.
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生活中，总有很多重要的人或者事情，帮助我们成长。比如：一本书、一句话、一次经历等等。请你以“________help/helps me grow up”为题，结合图示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1. 短文需包含如图所示的所有要点；
2. 词数90~100；
3. 短文中不得泄露个人信息。
________ help/helps me grow up
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善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以“Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork”为主题的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可从下表中选择一项或自行确定。
Teamwork Activities
take part in a ball match make a survey (调查)
prepare for a party clean the classroom make a poster (海报) join in a relay race (接力赛) do social practice (社会实践) ...
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
(2)词数：90—110。
参考词汇(仅供选择使用)：
teamwork (团队合作) work with (与……合作)
team spirit (团队精神) make an effort to (努力去……)
Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork
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Will Never Forget ________
提示：转眼间，初中生活即将结束，回首过去的时光，总有某个人、某件事、某个时刻或某次活动，如同闪耀的星星，在记忆的夜空中熠熠生辉，令你难以忘怀。请你以“I Will Never Forget ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲述其背后的故事，并谈谈你的收获或感受。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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2024年3月，河北邯郸一名初中生被同学残忍杀害，此消息震惊全国，为杜绝校园欺凌 (say no to school bully)，打造和谐安定校园 (build a harmonious and stable campus)，作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语作文。
提示：
1.尊敬老师，努力学习，锻炼身体，培养一个兴趣爱好。
2.与同学融洽相处，互相帮助。
3.不要与他人吵架，不偷盗他人物品。
4.遵守学校的规章制度，不携带管制刀具 (restricted knives)。
5.不要私自会见陌生人，遇险应报警。
要求：
1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.运用以上提示词，内容可适当发挥。
3.词数100词左右，作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus.
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我们只看见了别人的成功，却未看见他们背后的荆棘满路。成功并非偶然。每一位成功人士的背后都有一段鲜为人知的努力和坚持的经历。我们赞美成功者，不仅仅因为他们的成就，还因为他们的品质为我们树立了榜样。请根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文介绍刘翔、张桂梅、钱学森等英雄人物的成就和品质，并就“如何做才能成功地成为一名优秀的中学生”发表自己的观点。
注意：
1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名；
2.包含思维导图所有要点；
3.至少表达出一条自己的观点；
4.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数
How should we define (定义) success Different people have different ideas about it. But one thing we should be sure is that it’s not easy to be successful. Now let’s take a look at some examples._______________________________________________________________________
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人们常说：“态度决定一切。”请你据此以“Attitude Decides Everything”为题，写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
写作要求：
1.词数不少于 80词：
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Attitude Decides Everything
1. Your opinions on it.
2. Examples to prove your opinions.
3. A conclusion.
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