Module 8 Story time写作指导 外研版英语七年级下册

七年级英语下册
Module 8写作指导
【写作目标】
对一则英文故事进行续写。
【写作任务】
本节课后，英语老师要求同学们对Unit 2中的故事Goldilocks and the Three Bears进行续写。请你想象一下Goldilocks离开三只熊的房子后会发生什么，写一篇英语小短文完成这则故事的续写。
【指点迷津】
本次写作任务要求用英语对Unit 2的故事进行续写，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容：首先介绍人物和地点；然后描述事件，即对Goldilocks在三只熊的房子里做过的事以及她吸取到的教训进行续写。(2) 人称：第三人称。(3) 时态：一般过去时。(4) 文体：记叙文。
【谋篇布局】
续写故事Goldilocks and the Three Bears
介绍人物和地点
Goldilocks匆忙回到家。
Goldilocks hurried back home.
描述事件
(1) Goldilocks很害怕，所以她哭了。
Goldilocks was afraid so _______ _______.
(2) Goldilocks想对小熊说声对不起，因为她吃完了他碗里的食物，把他的椅子弄散架了，还用了他的床。
Goldilocks _______ _______ _______ _______ _______ Baby Bear because she _______ _______ _______ in his bowl, made his chair in pieces and used his bed.
(3) Goldilocks认识到，当没有人在家里时，进入别人的家并使用他们的东西是不对的。
Goldilocks learned that it isn't right to _______ _______ _______ or use their things when nobody is at home.
【巧衔接】
在讲述简短的故事时，可通过first、next及finally等表示时间顺序的词语有条理地展开，使行文自然、流畅。
【连句成文】
同学们，根据【谋篇布局】的练习，赶快动笔完成这个故事续写吧！
续写故事Goldilocks and the Three Bears
【收藏夹】
用英文讲故事时常用的英语连接词
当用英文讲故事时，使用适当的连接词可以使叙述更加流畅、连贯。以下是一些常用的英语连接词。
●表示顺序
first / at first, then / and then, after that, next, later, finally / at last / in the end ...
●表示转折
but, however (然而) ...
●表示递进
also, moreover / besides (此外), what's more (另外) ...
●表示因果
because / because of, due to (由于), so / thus / therefore / hence, as a result (结果) ...
【小试身手】
同学们，请参考课本第 53 页 Module task 中的图片，结合左边提到的连接词，用英语写一则故事并讲给你的同学们吧！参考词汇：用鹅卵石填满大海 fill up the sea with pebbles
答案
【谋篇布局】
(1) she cried(2) wanted to say sorry to; finished the food(3) enter others' houses
【连句成文】
续写故事Goldilocks and the Three BearsGoldilocks hurried back home. First, she was afraid so she cried. Next, she wanted to say sorry to Baby Bear because she finished the food in his bowl, made his chair in pieces and used his bed. Finally, she learned that it isn't right to enter others' houses or use their things when nobody is at home.
【小试身手】
One possible version:Once upon a time there was a little girl called Nüwa. Her father was Emperor Yan and he loved Nüwa very much. He often played games with Nüwa. One day Nüwa travelled alone by boat. At first, the weather was fine. But later it changed. A strong wind knocked over Nüwa's boat. In the end, Nüwa died. After that Nüwa changed into a bird named Jingwei and returned home to her father. Her father was sad because his daughter died. However, when he watched the bird, he knew his daughter was back. Jingwei didn't like the sea, so she decided to return to the sea and fill it up with pebbles.