写作示范课如何写作文 牛津深圳版（广州沈阳通用）七年级英语下册
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如何写作文
理解：
写： 书写分 → 字迹段落 → 格式要求 → 称呼落款
作： 创作分 → 自己观点 → 积极正能量
文： 文采分 → 句式多样化 → 复合句、并列句、简单句
问题：
词穷空白 → 中式翻译 → 语法混杂 → 粗心大意 → 书写
解决措施：
词汇找高级替身【尤其重视连接词】
语法找细节错误【尤其重视动词语法】
段落找过渡连接【尤其重视结构梳理】
写作原则：主干部分（中国式）翻译，
修饰部分（前后置）翻译
以【深圳中学期中真题卷】为例
2024年3月24日晚，在习主席的邀请下，美国华盛顿州中学生代表团到访深圳。假如你是深圳接待团的成员李华，负责接待外国友人Mike。请你写一篇报道，向班级同学介绍这次经历。要点如下:
关于Mike ①友好，善于与人沟通;也喜欢养宠物狗 ②喜欢亲近大自然
关于活动 ①参观了笔架山公园，欣赏花展，共植友谊树 ②参观了西丽动物园，了解不同的动物
你的感受 ……(至少一点)
要求:
1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内:
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名:
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯:
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇:Bijia Mountain Park笔架山公园friendship tree友谊
Hello! My dear classmates! Last month, I was so honored to have the chance to receive Mike.
▼来个1.0版本：
Mike is friendly and he is good at communicating.
He likes keeping pet dogs and enjoys nature.
We visited the Bijia Mountain Park , enjoyed the flowers fairs and plated friendship trees happily.
We visited the Xili Zoo and learned about different animals.
I think is was a wonderful experience.
▼来个2.0版本：
① Let me introduce Mike and something about this activity to you.
Mike is very friendly and he is good at communicating with others.
② He is fond of keeping pet dogs and he also enjoys nature.
③ When it comes to the activity, we all visited the Bijia Mountain Park , enjoyed the flowers fairs and plated friendship trees together.
④ There were many kinds of plants and flowers in the park.
⑤Then we visited the Xili Zoo and learned about different animals,especially the lovely and intelligent monkeys.
⑥ In my opinion, it was an educational and unforgettable experience for us.
写作思路：【列提纲—3段式】
1.书信寒暄语+背景介绍+过渡句
2.正文介绍（独立成段）
介绍Mike：外貌；性格；兴趣爱好；能力
介绍活动：具体时间/事件/地点；
介绍感受：意义；收获
书信结尾， 总述感受，表达期许
————————————————————————————
▼来个3.0版本：
Hello! My dear classmates! Last month, I was so honored to have the chance to receive Mike. It is a pleasure for me to introduce Mike and something about this activity to all of you.
First of all , I’d like to introduce something about Mike who is tall and thin. He is so friendly a boy that all of us likes to stay with him. Besides, he is good at communicating with others. He is fond of keeping pet dogs and he also enjoys nature.
When it comes to the activity, we first visited the Bijia Mountain Park .There were many kinds of plants and flowers in the park.Then we all went to enjoy the flower fairy . It had variety of color flowers there . How fantastic it was ! Last, we visited the Xili Zoo together and learned about different animals. Especially the lovely and intelligent monkeys gave us a deep impression.
In a word, from our points of view, this activity was an educational and unforgettable experience .We learned a lot from it . And we all hope to have another chance to enjoy it.
理解：
写： 书写分 → 字迹段落 → 格式要求 → 称呼落款
作： 创作分 → 自己观点 → 积极正能量
文： 文采分 → 句式多样化 → 复合句、并列句、简单句
问题：
词穷空白 → 中式翻译 → 语法混杂 → 粗心大意 → 书写
解决措施：
词汇找高级替身【尤其重视连接词】
语法找细节错误【尤其重视动词语法】
段落找过渡连接【尤其重视结构梳理】
写作原则：主干部分（中国式）翻译，
修饰部分（前后置）翻译
以【深圳中学期中真题卷】为例
2024年3月24日晚，在习主席的邀请下，美国华盛顿州中学生代表团到访深圳。假如你是深圳接待团的成员李华，负责接待外国友人Mike。请你写一篇报道，向班级同学介绍这次经历。要点如下:
关于Mike ①友好，善于与人沟通;也喜欢养宠物狗 ②喜欢亲近大自然
关于活动 ①参观了笔架山公园，欣赏花展，共植友谊树 ②参观了西丽动物园，了解不同的动物
你的感受 ……(至少一点)
要求:
1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内:
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名:
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯:
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇:Bijia Mountain Park笔架山公园friendship tree友谊
Hello! My dear classmates! Last month, I was so honored to have the chance to receive Mike.
▼来个1.0版本：
Mike is friendly and he is good at communicating.
He likes keeping pet dogs and enjoys nature.
We visited the Bijia Mountain Park , enjoyed the flowers fairs and plated friendship trees happily.
We visited the Xili Zoo and learned about different animals.
I think is was a wonderful experience.
▼来个2.0版本：
① Let me introduce Mike and something about this activity to you.
Mike is very friendly and he is good at communicating with others.
② He is fond of keeping pet dogs and he also enjoys nature.
③ When it comes to the activity, we all visited the Bijia Mountain Park , enjoyed the flowers fairs and plated friendship trees together.
④ There were many kinds of plants and flowers in the park.
⑤Then we visited the Xili Zoo and learned about different animals,especially the lovely and intelligent monkeys.
⑥ In my opinion, it was an educational and unforgettable experience for us.
写作思路：【列提纲—3段式】
1.书信寒暄语+背景介绍+过渡句
2.正文介绍（独立成段）
介绍Mike：外貌；性格；兴趣爱好；能力
介绍活动：具体时间/事件/地点；
介绍感受：意义；收获
书信结尾， 总述感受，表达期许
————————————————————————————
▼来个3.0版本：
Hello! My dear classmates! Last month, I was so honored to have the chance to receive Mike. It is a pleasure for me to introduce Mike and something about this activity to all of you.
First of all , I’d like to introduce something about Mike who is tall and thin. He is so friendly a boy that all of us likes to stay with him. Besides, he is good at communicating with others. He is fond of keeping pet dogs and he also enjoys nature.
When it comes to the activity, we first visited the Bijia Mountain Park .There were many kinds of plants and flowers in the park.Then we all went to enjoy the flower fairy . It had variety of color flowers there . How fantastic it was ! Last, we visited the Xili Zoo together and learned about different animals. Especially the lovely and intelligent monkeys gave us a deep impression.
In a word, from our points of view, this activity was an educational and unforgettable experience .We learned a lot from it . And we all hope to have another chance to enjoy it.