2024届 高考英语 二轮复习： 短文改错 强化训练（含答案）

I used to afraid of insects, but last Friday's biology class make a big change in me. In that class, Miss Zhao, our biology teacher, showed we insects on stamps. The bees, butterfly and many other insects looked lovely and beautifully on the stamps. Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or described their living habits. She even played some recordings of their singing, what was fun. Now, I've come to love those of small living things. In the evening, when I take the walk in the school garden, the singing of insects become more meaningful to me.
My aunt was a biology professor. When I was young, she was used to take me to the biology lab. There I saw mouse, cats and other animals. My aunt also gave me lessons in the wild places. She often takes me for a walk in the backyard that we would catch frogs and snakes, and find fireflies in the sky. She seemed know everything about wildlife. In these days, think about my aunt and her influence on her life, I feel very lucky. I am gratefully that I've got the chance to learn for her. She helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and death around me.
I was jogging in a park yesterday while I caught sight of a handbag on a bench. Obviously, someone had left it there careless. I opened the handbag to see what was inside. I found a wallet, some keys and a notebook in it. Luckily, there was a telephone number in notebook. I immediately dial the number and a lady answered the call. On hearing that I said, she told me she would come back at once. Ten minute later, she arrived by taxi. Having been confirmed she was the owner, I gave the handbag back for her. The owner expressed his gratitude to me repeatedly. I felt very delighting.
Dear Ricky，
How's it going I've been busy planned for the Sports Day with my friends, who took place last Friday. Our team was training the final of the 4×400 relay race. The big day came，and I was a bit anxious. So are my friends. I, captain of our team, had to mask our worries while relieving theirs. The meeting started punctual at 8 am. When it was our turn, I was silently prayed and prepared to run. I was the last runner. Jerry, our second lap runner, lowered the stick and missed a few second. Still, believe it or not, I poured all I had into the final lap, but we won! What a exciting day !
Yours，
Ryan
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People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can't agree complete. Last Friday, I wake up very early and decided to take a walk. In the square there many senior citizens were dancing, I found several elders absorb in feeding birds. Without many cars, I realized that the city looked so clean but beautiful. Some coffee shop, which used to be old and shabby, were decorated pretty well and caught my attention. On both sides of the street were big trees covering the whole city, making a green city. At that moment, I found a city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty!
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I have always wanted to be cheerleader. The other day, I had a chance to try out for my school's cheerleading team. It was a real hard try out. Firstly, we had to dancing up and down around the basketball court for 20 minutes. The coach showed us how to move, and then we try very hard. Secondly, we practised singing a shorter fight song about the school basketball's team. Finally, some of the stronger girls had to lift their partner. The other girls jumped very high and cheered so loudly. I think I did quite well in the try out, though many of the other girls were even better. I'm not so sure that I will make the cheerleading team or not this year. But anyhow, I will not lose my heart even if I am not accepted.
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As a volunteer, I get the pleasure of spending my free time do something I love. I share my passion for the natural world with anyone would like to listen. It can be as simply as pointing out the direction of a café. It can also be about using our knowledge to inspire people to think more about a natural world around them. Over the years, I've seen thousand of children and young people visiting to the zoo. I knew that I have a role in helping them learn about protecting the world they live in. It reminds me of what I have been inspired by them to become a conservationist. Knowing that in my own way I can make a difference have always been my inspiration.
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In your e mail, you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my advice. Generally spoken, a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First, it is obviously that parents should treat their children equally, that is important for the family. What's more, children or parents both benefit from having some day to day routines. In the addition, every member should give other member right expectations. Finally, you should love my own family life. In a word, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that are of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.
Test 9
Looking back at my senior school life,I have so many things to share them with all of you.I still remember that I step into my high school with high expectations.Therefore,I felt so frustrated after the first month test.I even began to doubt that I was qualified to be a senior school student.With the helps of friendly classmates,teachers and parents,I picked up my courage and regained the spirits to devote myself to study,thus do well in some academic performances.Besides,I took active part in colorful after-school activities such as basketball matches,singing competitions and English debates,on which I benefit a lot.In a word,I am really satisfied with my senior school life which are part of my growth.
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I like keeping a diary.I think keeping diaries are a good habit.It interests people of all age.Older people want to look back on the past and see which they’ve done and like.They also hope to leave something usefully for their grandchildren.Middle-aged people explore their lives by keep diaries.Why do young people enjoy keeping diaries With my opinion,they wish to find out who they are,and where they’re going.If you want to remember your past life,and you need to keep a personal diary throughout their life.That’s because it is impossible for you remember everything you’ve experienced.
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[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。作者回顾了自己的高中生活。
1.第一句:将them去掉　考查代词。分析句子结构,to share作many things的后置定语,them是多余的。故将them去掉。
2.第二句:step→stepped　考查动词的时态。此处陈述过去发生的事情,使用一般过去时。故将step改为stepped。
3.第三句:Therefore→However　考查副词。上文提到“我怀着很高的期望进入高中”,下文提到“我感到非常沮丧”,上下文之间形成转折关系。故将Therefore改为However。
4.第三句:month→monthly　考查形容词。修饰名词test需用形容词monthly作定语。故将month改为monthly。
5.第四句:that→whether/if　考查连词。此处引导宾语从句,从句不缺成分,连接词表示“是否”的含义,需用连接词whether/if。故将that改为whether/if。
6.第五句:helps→help　考查名词的数。help为不可数名词,没有复数形式。故将helps改为help。
7.第五句:do→doing　考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,已有谓语动词picked up和regained,此处为非谓语动词作状语,I和do为逻辑上的主谓关系,需用现在分词形式。故将do改为doing。
8.第六句:在active前面加an　考查冠词。take an active part in为固定搭配,意为“积极参加”。故在active前面加an。
9.第六句:on→from/through/by　考查介词。benefit from...为固定搭配,意为“从……中受益”,可以将on改为from;或者考虑前面句子和定语从句的关系,表示“通过这些课外活动,我受益良多”,需用介词through/by。故将on改为from/through/by。
10.第七句:are→is　考查主谓一致。which指代school life,不可数,谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。故将are改为is。
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[语篇解读]本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍人们都喜欢写日记的原因和写日记的好处。
1.第二句:are→is　考查主谓一致。主语是动词-ing形式短语keeping diaries,谓语要用单数形式。故将are改为is。
2.第三句:age→ages　考查名词的数。可数名词age前面有all,名词要用复数形式。故将age改为ages。
3.第四句:which→what　考查连词。see后是宾语从句,从句中缺少动词done和like的宾语,意为“什么”,用连接代词what引导。故将which改为what。
4.第四句:like→liked　考查谓语动词。分析句子结构和意思可知,这里like和前面have done是并列的谓语动词,都用现在完成时,因此like用过去分词。故将like改为liked。
5.第五句:usefully→useful　考查形容词。修饰前面的不定代词something,应用形容词。故将usefully改为useful。
6.第六句:keep→keeping　考查非谓语动词。介词by的宾语应用keep的动词-ing形式。故将keep改为keeping。
7.第八句:With→In　考查介词短语。这里考查介词短语in my opinion,意为“在我看来”。故将With改为In。
8.第九句:删除and　考查连词。这句话是if引导的条件状语从句,后面的连词and多余。故将and删除。
9.第九句:their→your　考查代词。从句提到的人称代词是you,所以用you的形容词性物主代词。故将their改为your。
10.第十句:在remember前面加to　考查非谓语动词。此处为固定句型:it be+adj.+for sb.to do sth.,it作形式主语,后面用动词不定式作真正的主语。故在remember前面加to。