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1．初三这一年，你一直为自己的目标而努力。而实现目标需要精细的计划、不懈的努力和他人的帮助。山西省某中学九年级四班对全年级300名同学就“What helps achieve your goal most ”做了一个调查，下图是调查的统计结果。
What helps achieve your goal most
假如你是该校九年级的学生，请结合以上图表信息，以“I Have Achieved My Goal”为题，用两段话写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈你是如何实现自己的目标的。
要求：
词数不少于80（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
I Have Achieved My Goal
Our school did a survey among 300 students on the topic of “What helps achieve your goal most ” Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
I Have Achieved My Goal
Our school did a survey among 300 students on the topic of “What helps achieve your goal most ” Here are the results. According to the survey, 22% of the students think a good plan is important. 30% of the students think others’ help may be necessary. 48% of the students think hard work can help achieve the goal most.
As for me, hard work is the most important way to achieve my goal. Never can I forget the experience in Grade 8. My English teacher asked me to play a part in an English speech competition. Nervousness and fear swept over me. But I realized if I work hard to do it, I could succeed. From then on, I spent all my free time practicing my pronunciation. I trained myself hard and tried my best to memorize more words and expressions. When the important day finally came, I kept calm and spoke loudly and clearly. The time I finished my speech, I heard a thunder of applause. As you can imagine, how excited I was! Hard work surely brought me great success. Our hard work can always bring out the best in us!
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：注意要结合自己的经历阐述不懈的努力使得目标实现。
［写作步骤］
第一步，分析图表；
第二步，结合自己的经历谈谈如何实现目标。
［亮点词汇］
① As for me 对我来说
②play a part in在……里起作用
③all my free time我所有的空闲时间
［高分句型］
①When the important day finally came, I kept calm and spoke loudly and clearly.（时间状语从句）
②As you can imagine, how excited I was! （感叹句）
2．“职业规划教育”旨在引导学生发现自己的兴趣和特长，寻找自己的价值。为了帮助同学们增进对不同职业的了解，某中学围绕“我的职业期望（job expectancy）”，对本校的980名学生做了问卷调查。以下是相关项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的一名学生，请你根据图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；2. 从图表中选出你认为最重要的一项内容，结合自己的经历，谈谈自己的职业期望。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
A survey was done among 980 students about their job expectancy in our school. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文：
A survey was done among 980 students about their job expectancy in our school. Here are the results. 53 percent of the students expect their job can bring happiness to them. 49 percent consider that helping others in some ways is important. And there are 43 percent of students who hope they can make use of their talents at work. 12 percent have other choices.
As for me, I hope what I do can help others in some ways, which is the most important to me. One reason is that helping others makes the job meaningful. I learned this from my father. The other day, when we were taking a walk, we heard someone call help. Then we found an old man lying on the ground. Seeing this, my father checked him and gave him some medicine. Luckily, the old man woke up. Later, my father told me that because many old people have heart problems and as a doctor, he was so happy to help them. Since then, I have decided that I will choose a job which can help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据图表提示信息并结合自身经历进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，从图表中选出你认为最重要的一项内容，结合自己的经历，谈谈自己的职业期望。
[亮点词汇]
①as for sb.至于某人
②learn sth. from sb.向某人学习某事
③wake up醒来
[高分句型]
①Later, my father told me that because many old people have heart problems and as a doctor, he was so happy to help them.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Since then, I have decided that I will choose a job which can help others.（宾语从句；定语从句）
3．《荀子·劝学》中曾写到“锲而舍之，朽木不折；锲而不舍，金石可镂”。坚持是一种优秀的品质，也是我们人生道路上一种必不可少的精神。某中学随机抽取500人，做了一项“你坚持时间最长的事情是什么？”的调查问卷。下面是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校学生，请根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中选出一种你曾经坚持时间最长的事情，并结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈这种坚持给你带来的积极影响。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 提示词汇仅供参考；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Word Bank persist v. 坚持 persistent adj. 坚持不懈的 persistence n. 坚持 quality n. 品质
A school did a survey among 500 students about what they persist in doing. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文：
A school did a survey among 500 students about what they persist in doing. Here are the results.
26% of these students persist in reading books. They think reading books can open up their minds. 47% of them persist in doing sports because they think sports can make them strong and healthy. What comes third is practicing a hobby, which is persisted by 23% of the students. And the students who choose other ways of persistence accounts for 4%.
As far as I am concerned, books are of great significance to persist. One day, after passing an exam, a strong feeling of tiredness rose from the bottom of my heart. Just then, my friend gave me the book Little Women instead of accompanying me. I began to fall in love with the book which brought me to a new world where I could do anything or even nothing. The book made me appreciate the beauty of lives and encouraged me to love life. That’s how I get into the habit of reading.
As is known to all, books are the ladder of human progress. Not only can books give us the sense of relaxing, but also they can tell us the meaning of study. Therefore, I persist in reading. I read different types of articles and travel in the sea of books freely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出做了调查，要给出调查结果；
第二步，具体介绍调查的结果是什么，每一项所占的百分比；
第三步，介绍自己坚持做的事情以及自己的一次经历；
第四步，总结阅读的好处，并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
① persist in doing sth坚持做某事
② instead of代替
③ not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① 47% of them persist in doing sports because they think sports can make them strong and healthy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② Not only can books give us the sense of relaxing, but also they can tell us the meaning of study.（部分倒装）
4．参加社团是丰富学生校园生活的途径之一。为了解学生们参加社团的目的，某校对800名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合图表信息，以“Different Purposes of Students Taking Part in Clubs”为题，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）简要说明图表内容；
（2）从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你产生的积极影响。
Word Bank enrich v.使丰富 sociability n.社交能力
要求：
（1）词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Different Purposes of Students Taking Part in Clubs
Our school did a survey among 800 students on the topic of “Different Purposes of Students Taking Part in Clubs”. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
Different Purposes of Students Taking Part in Clubs
Our school did a survey among 800 students on the topic of “Different Purposes of Students Taking Part in Clubs”. Here are the results.
25% of students want to enrich lives. 36% of students want to increase knowledge. 27% of students would like to improve sociability so that they can work better. 12% of students have other reasons.
As for me, I want to increase knowledge. I think we learn too little knowledge in class. I like to communicate with different people in the club in order to improve myself. I’ve been here for over a year. Through communicating with my friends, I have different understandings and opinions about a problem. I also learned how to deal with problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：要求根据图表信息进行写作，并介绍自己喜欢的俱乐部，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢的俱乐部，并结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with与……交流
②in order to为了
③deal with处理
[高分句型]
①27% of students would like to improve sociability so that they can work better. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②I think we learn too little knowledge in class. (省略that的宾语从句)
5．没有人是一座孤岛。我们每个人的生活都受他人的影响并影响着他人。每个人顺手的小事与平常的爱心都感动并温暖着他人。某校在 200名学生中做了一个调查，了解同学们通常怎样帮助他人。下图是调查结果。
请你用两段话写一篇英语短文，第一段简要说明图表内容； 第二段结合你的经历谈一谈你帮助他人的事及你的感受。
要求：1. 需包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数不少于80 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
As a saying goes, “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.”Helping others is our traditional virtue. Last week, our school did a survey about how you usually help others among 200 students. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文：
As a saying goes, “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.” Helping others is our traditional virtue. Last week, our school did a survey about how you usually help others among 200 students. Here are the results. 40 percent of the students help others by giving away money or things to people in need. The percentage of the students who help old people and homeless children is 30%. And one fifth of the students choose to help protect the environment. The rest of them usually do other things.
Once I was on a crowded bus on my way home. It was at that moment that I saw an old woman slowly getting on the bus. Without thinking twice, I offered my seat to her. She smiled at me and said “thank you”. When I saw the old woman sit comfortably on the seat, I got a strong feeling of happiness. By helping others, I’ve realized it’s our duty to do our part in making our society better. Small actions can make a big difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述个人经历用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容，不要遗漏要点；
第二步，介绍你帮助他人的事情；
第三步，谈谈帮助他人的感受，号召大家都能互相帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①give away捐赠
②the rest剩下的
③crowded拥挤的
④think twice三思
⑤make a big difference产生重大影响
[高分句型]
①The percentage of the students who help old people and homeless children is 30%. (定语从句)
②It was at that moment that I saw an old woman slowly getting on the bus. (强调句)
6．课间10分钟是学生消除学习疲劳，放松身心的时间。为了有效利用课间10分钟，缓解学生的疲劳，增强体质，某校以“What should we do during the 10-minute break ”为主题，对本校600名学生进行了调查，下图是统计结果。
假如你是该校学生，请结合以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 结合自己的经历，谈谈课间活动的重要性。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文：
Our school did a survey on the topic of “What should we do during the 10-minute break ” among 600 students. Here are the results. 59% of the students believe they should do activities such as playing games and doing rope skipping. 20% of them think it’s best for them to spend the 10-minute break studying while 15% make use of the break to nod off. Still 6% prefer to do something else.
As for me, I think we should spend most of the break relaxing ourselves by doing some interesting and healthy activities. I used to nod off over the desk to avoid being sleepy in class. But it didn’t work well. Later my classmates encouraged me to do rope skipping and play games with them during the break. I find they are not just for fun and even they help to remove my stress and develop the friendship. More importantly, I can keep more active and focus better in class.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图标内容；
第二步，在图表中选择一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈自己的看法；
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①As for me, I think we should spend most of the break relaxing ourselves by doing some interesting and healthy activities.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I find they are not just for fun and even they help to remove my stress and develop the friendship.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．勇气是一种力量，激励我们突破困境；勇气是一种精神，指引我们突破自我；勇气更是一种品质，帮助我们保持坚定。某校为了引导同学们提升克服困难的勇气，以“The Moment I Showed Courage”为主题，对1329名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你结合以上图表信息，以“The Moment I Showed Courage”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
要求:
1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入人总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文
The Moment I Showed Courage
Our school did a survey among 1,329 students on the topic of “The Moment I Showed Courage”. Here are the results. 43 percent of the students think they show courage in the face of problems, while 35 percent show courage to try new things. 28 percent consider they show courage when they stick to the right thing. 18% have other moments to show their courage.
As for me, I will always remember the great moment when I picked up courage to try a new sport-swimming. Last summer, I took part in a sports camping which provided several courses including swimming. When I was standing by the pool, I felt so scared. However, I thought if I had a try, I might fall in love with it. Finally, I picked up my courage and jumped into the pool. Surprisingly, it wasn’t that scary or difficult. Since then, I have kept trying new things. This way, not only can I enjoy the pleasure of developing new skills, but bring out the best in myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍图表内容；
第二步，从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① in the face of面对
② as for至于
③ keep doing sth一直做某事
[高分句型]
①28 percent consider they show courage when they stick to the right thing.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I thought if I had a try, I might fall in love with it.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．在我们前行的路上，有风有雨是常态。只有经历了风雨洗礼，我们才能看到美丽的风景。为了引导同学们积极面对人生路上的“风雨”，某校以“The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced”为主题，对600名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的一名学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出你所面临的一个挑战，结合自己的经历，谈谈你是如何克服的，并说明你从中获得的启示。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced
Recently, a survey was done among 600 students in our school about the biggest challenges they have ever faced. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文：
The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced
Recently, a survey was done among 600 students in our school about the biggest challenges they have ever faced. Here are the results. 56 percent of the students think the biggest challenge is that they have problems with their schoolwork, while 22 percent believe they can’t get on well with family or friends. And 18 percent think they are unconfident. 4 percent have faced other challenges.
The biggest challenge I’ve ever faced is that I was unconfident because I always thought I was too common. But things changed because of a little girl. One day, a little girl was crying on the subway and her mom couldn’t stop her. I was reading a storybook at that time. Seeing this, I shared the book with her and tried to tell the story. To my surprise, she stopped crying and listened. Before she got off the subway, she told me that I was really good at telling stories. That gave me lots of courage. Gradually, I became more confident. I have learned an important lesson from the experience: Everyone is special. Believe in yourself first, and then others will believe you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作内容包括三部分：图表内容、自己的经历、感受；经历部分时态是一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明图表内容；
第二步，介绍自己的相关经历和启发；
[亮点词汇]
① get on well with sb与某人相处融洽
② because of由于
③ To my surprise令我惊讶的是
[高分句型]
① 56 percent of the students think the biggest challenge is that they have problems with their schoolwork.（that引导的表语从句）
② Before she got off the subway, she told me that I was really good at telling stories.（before引导的时间状语从句）
9．家乡是一个人灵魂最深处的记忆，是一个人心底最柔软的一方田土。对于家乡，每个人心中都有一份炽热的情感。某校为增强学生的爱国热情、故土情怀和民族自豪感，号召学生积极参与“我为家乡做代言”的活动，针对“如何展示家乡新风采”，对2000名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的方法，结合自己的经历，谈谈选择这种方法的理由。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名：
3.参考词汇仅供参考。
A school did a survey among 2, 000 students about their plans on how to show the new style of their hometown. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
A school did a survey among 2, 000 students about their plans on how to show the new style of their hometown. Here are the results. 37% of them want to make hand-written newspaper to show it. 24% think writing articles to the local newspaper is a good idea. 18% want to make short videos. 12% choose to make posters. 9% have their own special ideas.
As far as I’m concerned, making short videos is a good choice because I am quite interested in taking pictures to record my daily life. Last weekend, I went to a park with my parents. A group of old people were singing Jin Opera there. I filmed a short video and put it online. To my surprise, the next day, there were many comments. From that experience, I realized that short videos have the power to connect people around the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何展示家乡新风采，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的方法，结合自己的经历，谈谈选择这种方法的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①As far as I’m concerned据我所知
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③to my surprise令我惊讶的是
[高分句型]
①As far as I’m concerned, making short videos is a good choice because I am quite interested in taking pictures to record my daily life. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I realized that short videos have the power to connect people around the world. (宾语从句)
10．废旧物品循环利用是环保实践的有效方法之一。为了解学生们如何循环利用旧物，某校对1000名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合图表信息，以“How to Make Use of Old Things”为题，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你产生的积极影响。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
How to Make Use of Old Things
How to Make Use of Old Things
Our school did a survey among 1,000 students on the topic of “How to Make Use of Old Things”. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
How to Make Use of Old Things
Our school did a survey among 1,000 students on the topic of “How to Make Use of Old Things”. Here are the results. 58 percent of the students sell their old things on the website. There are 23 percent of the students exchanging their old things for something useful. 10 percent of the students choose to give their old things away and 9 percent of the students deal with them in other ways.
As for me, I always sell my old things on the website. It not only saves my money, but also stops wasting. And there is no doubt that their new lives in another place can make our world more beautiful and cut down the pollution. Recycling is easy, so take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何利用旧物，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，结合自己的经历，谈谈旧物利用对你产生的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①give away捐赠
②deal with处理
③there is no doubt that毫无疑问
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①10 percent of the students choose to give their old things away and 9 percent of the students deal with them in other ways. (and连接的并列句)
②And there is no doubt that their new lives in another place can make our world more beautiful and cut down the pollution. (同位语从句)
11．“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。帮助别人意味着承担责任、分享快乐、建立信任、提升自我价值。某校为了鼓励学生参加社会公益活动，针对“你通常是如何帮助他人的？”这一话题，对1200名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
How do you usually help others
假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 结合你的经历，谈谈你帮助他人的一件事以及从中获得的感悟。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Last week, our school did a survey about how you usually help others among 1,200 students. Here are the results.
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【答案】A possible version:
Last week, our school did a survey about how you usually help others among 1,200 students. Here are the results. 40 percent of the students help others by giving away money and things to people in need. 30 percent prefer to help old people and sick children. And one fifth of the students choose to help their neighbors. The rest of them usually do other things.
When it comes to helping others, a story enters my mind. Lin Fang is a new student who just came to our class this term. She felt lonely and unhappy because she had no friends here. Seeing this, I offered to share my favorite books with her and chatted with her after class. On weekends, I often invited her to my home. Gradually, smile appeared on her face. She began to share her ideas and feelings with me. Helping Lin Fang makes me gain a true friendship. Not only can helping others make us happy but also we can get a lot from it and enjoy our lives more.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示及要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，根据提示简要说明图表内容；
第三步，结合自己的经历，谈谈自己帮助他人的一件事以及从中获得的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①give away捐赠
②prefer to较喜欢
③choose to选择
④when it comes to一谈到
⑤offer to主动提出
⑥appear出现
⑦not only…but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
Not only can helping others make us happy but also we can get a lot from it and enjoy our lives more. (倒装句)
“研学旅行 (study tour)”就是综合实践活动。请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的经历，谈谈“研学旅行”的收获和感受。
要求: 1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】One possible version:
Without doubt, the study tour plays an important part in our school life. It makes our life meaningful and helps us be knowledgeable. I’d like to share one of the most impressive experiences.
Last term, I took part in a study tour with my classmates. We visited the history museum. The guide led us to different halls to learn about the history of CPC. Seeing the pictures of different wars, we were deeply moved. When we watched the videos about how the soldiers fought against the enemies and achieved success, we were so shocked by their strong will that we couldn’t control the tears. All of us showed our respect to our ancestors because of the peaceful life they fought for. At the end of the trip, we took a special photo.
As teenagers, we should try to learn in various ways. Only in this way can we improve in different ways.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，根据导图内容，介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时。写作时可分为三段式，首先开篇点题，介绍研学是学校生活中很重要的一部分，进而点出分享自己的一次研学经历；其次是具体介绍这段研学经历；最后是表达感受。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
13．周末某学校打算组织七八年级的学生进行户外拓展活动(outdoor development activities)，九年级学生因为面临中考，学业紧张，所以不参加此次活动。但很多九年级学生认为他们应该参加此次活动。为此英语课上老师举办了辩论会，请你根据以下信息写一篇短文阐述你的观点。
Should the ninth graders take part in outdoor development activities
内容包括：
1.阐明你的观点；
2.结合自己的经历，说明理由。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文
Outdoor development activities are good for our students’ overall development. They can not only help to deal with our stress and worries but also develop team spirit and make us more healthy physically and mentally.
My own experience is a good example. Since I got into Grade 9, I have felt more stressed out because of heavy schoolwork. I spent most of my time taking different classes and was tired. My parents encouraged me to do some outdoor development activities. They took me to the farm and spent time with animals. I also went out for a picnic and mountain climbing with my friends on the weekend. After doing these relaxing activities, I have become more cheerful and energetic.
Therefore, doing some outdoor development activities is an effective way to reduce our stress and make us more focused on our schoolwork.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：注意以自己的经历说明理由，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步， 阐述自己的观点；
第二步，以自己的经历阐述理由；
第三步，结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①are good for对……有好处
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Therefore, doing some outdoor development activities is an effective way to reduce our stress and make us more focused on our schoolwork.（动名词作主语）
②Since I got into Grade 9, I have felt more stressed out because of heavy schoolwork.（since引导时间状语从句）
14．回首过往，在十几年的人生中，你学习、运动、旅游、交友、玩耍……其中你有收获、有遗憾，会欣喜、会难过……请结合发生在你身上的一个事例，以“Learn from Yesterday”为题写一篇作文，并谈谈你从中得到的启示。
要求：
（1）书写工整，结构合理；
（2）短文不少于 80 词；
（3）不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Learn from Yesterday
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【答案】例文
Learn from Yesterday
A good student should adopt a positive attitude towards life.
In the past, I had a lot of trouble in learning English. I tried many ways to improve it, but I was still poor in my English. I asked my English teacher for help. She said that my hard work would be useful. After a few months, I made great progress in my English.
So I know that I should learn from yesterday. I can get useful lessons from my experience. If I learn from the past, I should be positive to life and study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍发生在自己身上的一件事，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己的经历；
第三步，介绍从中得到的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble in doing sth.做某事有困难
②ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
③make great progress取得很大的进步
[高分句型]
①She said that my hard work would be useful. (that引导的宾语从句)
②If I learn from the past, I should be positive to life and study. (if引导的条件状语从句)
15．阅读伴随着人的一生，为了激发同学们的阅读兴趣，你所在的班级准备开展“书香班级”活动。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对阅读的看法以及自己的阅读习惯，并对培养同学们的阅读兴趣提出一些建议。
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4. 词数不少于 80 词。
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【答案】例文：
Reading is like sunshine, warming my heart and making my world brighter. I love reading and I think it is very helpful.
I read books as long as I have time. Books on science are my favorite. Besides, I enjoy reading different kinds of stories. I always take notes while reading. It helps me remember the important points better.
I think it’s necessary for everyone to take an interest in reading. We can start by joining a reading club. It will encourage us to read more. It’s also a good idea to discuss with other readers. Sharing can better help us discover the fun of reading.
Reading can make us a better person, so let’s form a good habit of reading!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明你对阅读的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍自己的阅读习惯；
第三步，表达自己的建议。
第四步，书写结语，希望大家都能养成好的读书习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①as long as 只要
②encourage 鼓励
③discover 发现
[高分句型]
①I read books as long as I have time. (as long as引导的条件状语从句)
②I think it’s necessary for everyone to take an interest in reading. (省略that的宾语从句)
16．改变是一种勇气, 改变是一种态度, 改变是一种影响……改变无处不在。在点滴的改变中我们慢慢成长, 逐渐遇见更好的自己。请你用两段话写一篇短文, 第一段结合自己的亲身经历讲述做出的改变, 第二段谈谈这次改变带给你的影响。
要求:
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 提示词汇仅供参考；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文
Hello, my name is Jane. I used to be a shy girl. I was really afraid of speaking in front of people, even in class. So I had no friends or good grades. I was unhappy until one day in the sixth grade. On that day, I was hiding myself behind my book as usual when my math teacher called me. I stood up and said nothing because I was so nervous. My teacher said softly, “Don’t be afraid and believe yourself. ”I looked up and saw her warm smile. Finally, I gave a right answer. From then on, I have changed. I began to put up my hand in class and answer questions aloud. I began to smile at others and make friends.
Confidence can bring us courage. This change makes me confident and optimistic. Thanks to my responsible math teacher.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中“用两段话写一篇短文”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山阐明自己曾经的情况，从而引出自己发生变化的经历；
第二步，具体阐述发生改变的过程和结果；
第三步，阐明这次改变对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① used to be曾经是
② be afraid of doing sth.害怕做某事
③ say nothing什么也没说
④ look up抬头，向上看
[高分句型]
①I was hiding myself behind my book as usual when my math teacher called me. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
②This change makes me confident and optimistic. (make，实义动词，其宾语后续形容词作宾语补足语)
17．如今，在电子科技飞速发展的今天，敲字和语音软件不断更新，有人说写一手好字 (have a good handwriting) 已经没有意义。也有人说写一手赏心悦目的好字是个人文化素养的体现，也是中国文化的传承 (passing down our traditional culture)，同时对学生而言在考试升学方面也有好处。请结合自己的经历，谈谈你的看法。
内容包括：
●Your opinion
●An experience you had
●Something you have learned
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文：
In my opinion, it’s necessary and important to have a good handwriting. To be honest, having a good handwriting can not only be beneficial for passing down and spreading our traditional culture, but also provide us students with satisfying grades.
I was always confident about my English level and grades. But one exam made me realize the importance of handwriting. Last term, I was shocked to find that I had a low grade in an exam, which made me fall behind sharply. My teacher told me the reason why I didn’t do well in the exam was that I had a poor handwriting and a bad attitude. After a deep communication with my teacher, I had made a determination to practice my handwriting. Also I asked my classmate for help and followed her carefully. Finally, I improved my handwriting largely and regained the confidence.
Developing a great handwriting is supposed to be regarded as the necessary and the best way to improve our confidence and grades. We can also pass down our traditional culture by insisting on writing good characters.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表达自己的观点；
第二步，具体介绍自己的一次书写经历；
第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己在经历中的教训与收获。
[亮点词汇]
①not only, but also不仅……而且……
②ask for help寻求帮助
③be regarded as被视作
[高分句型]
①My teacher told me the reason why I didn’t do well in the exam was that I had a poor handwriting and a bad attitude.（定语从句）
②Last term, I was shocked to find that I had a low grade in an exam, which made me fall behind sharply. （宾语从句）
③Developing a great handwriting is supposed to be regarded as the necessary and the best way to improve our confidence and grades.（动名词作主语）
18．很多家长觉得应该允许孩子自己做决定，认为这样可以锻炼他们独立思考问题的能力，培养自觉和自律。也有人觉得青少年缺乏经验，不适合自己做决定。你对此有什么看法呢？请写一篇短文，分享一下你的观点和经历。
内容包括：
—Your opinions
—One of your own experiences
—What you have learned from the experience
要求：
1．词数不少于80词；
2．参考词汇仅供参考；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文：
Teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions. This will help them develop the ability to think independently and a sense of responsibility.
I remember when I got into Grade 8, I became interested in hip-hop dancing and wanted to take a dance class on Sunday. My parents didn’t agree because they thought it would get in the way of my schoolwork. But I thought I could decide for myself to practice my hobby, and I could manage my time. Finally my parents allowed me to have a try. And now I am a member of a street dance club, and dance makes me more confident.
By making decisions myself, I realize that we should be responsible for what we have decided to do and we should do it well.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中家长应该允许孩子自己做决定的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍家长应该允许孩子自己做决定”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“你的观点、自己的经历、从经历中学到了什么等”几个方面重点介绍家长应该允许孩子自己做决定的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语：我们应该对我们决定要做的事情负责，我们应该把它做好。
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to do被允许做某事
②become interested in对……感兴趣
③decide to do决定做某事
[高分句型]
①I remember when I got into Grade 8, I became interested in hip-hop dancing and wanted to take a dance class on Sunday. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②By making decisions myself, I realize that we should be responsible for what we have decided to do and we should do it well.（what引导的宾语从句）
19．最近，我们都在讲“不忘初心，方得始终”，只有不忘记自己最初的想法，才能有始有终地去完成自己的梦想。你还记得你的梦想吗？是因为什么而有了这样的梦想呢？你又将做出怎样的努力来实现你的梦想呢？现在，请你以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，记录你的“初心”。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
My Dream
It’s important for us to have a dream, which can offer us enough courage. My dream is to be a doctor in the future.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时“和一般过去时”；
③ 提示：要求写出梦想是什么，梦想从何而来以及将如何达成梦想，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题并介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，结合自身经历写明为什么会有这样的梦想以及将如何实现梦想；
第三步，文章总结，希望自己的梦想早日实现。
[亮点词汇]
① be friendly to... 对……友好
② cheer sb up 使某人振作起来
③ in order to do 为了做……
④ as...as possible 尽可能地……
[高分句型]
① It’s important for us to have a dream, which can offer us enough courage.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
② I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.（and连接并列谓语）
20．某校展开“我是课堂小主人”建议征集活动，各班就此展开讨论，同学们纷纷发言：“我希望能够有足够的自主学习时间······”“我喜欢的课堂是每个人都有一台笔记本电脑，方面上网查询······”“课上我们能自由地讨论，充分展示我们的学习成果······”等等。请你结合同学们讨论的结果，给校长以电子邮件的形式写一封信，建议什么样的课堂形式更为同学们喜爱，也更有利于同学们未来的发展。内容须包含以下要点：
What is your favorite class like
Please tell us an unforgettable experience you’ve had in your class.
Please give at least two suggestion.
要求：1. 词数 80 词左右，提示词仅供参考；2. 邮件的格式已给出，开头，结尾不计入总数；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名，校名；4. 将答案写在答题卡相应的位置上。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Li,
My favorite class is an open and free class where I can learn by myself and discuss in groups, which is good for my development, I think. I still remember an unforgettable experience in my maths class. Several days ago I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class, but they were too hard for me to work them out. So I had to ask my classmates for help. After a considerable discussion, we solved the problems in our group. How excited I was!
Having such a great experience, I want to give two suggestions. Firstly, please don’t teach us too much in class. We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class. Secondly, please provide us with some laptops if possible, so we can surf the Internet easily.
No doubt, we need an open and free class, you see.
That’s all. Thank you.
Best wishes,
Zhang Hua
【详解】题干解读：是一篇应用文--电子邮件，邮件的内容是向校长叙述开展“我是课堂小主人”的建议征集．首先根据内容要点提示写出“自己最喜欢的课堂是什么样的？”用一般现在时态。接下来讲述自己课堂上难忘的一次经历，要用一般过去时态。然后根据学生们讨论的结果提出自己的建议，至少两条。
例文点评：篇文章主要运用了一般现在时和一般过去时，详细地阐述了题目的要点。文章主要以第一人称进行叙述，内容清晰有条理，方便读者理解。文章紧扣题目要求并且提出了切实有效的建议。
高分亮点：
短语：sb spend time doing sth；work out；ask sb for help。
句型：where、which引导的定语从句；感叹句。
21．某班开展主题为“感受生活中的美”的主题班会活动，号召大家拥有发现美的眼睛。活动要求每位同学根据自己的经历或者见闻写一篇演讲稿，和同学们分享自己在生活中发现的美及感受。假如你是该班的同学，请你结合自己的经验，写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
·Tell a story about how you find the beauty in life.
·Express your feelings.
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】One Possible Version:
Life is full of beauty. If we put our heart to appreciate it, we will discover the simple but great beauty of life.
The heartwarming scene on the road is still fresh in my mind. An old man fell down on the road by accident. A middle school student walked forward to hold the man up. She was careful and gentle. And then, the people around them called 120. They took care of the old man until the ambulance arrived.
Thanks to those kind people, I realized that life was full of beauty. Many people will give others a hand when they are in trouble. And the experience makes it possible for me to always do right things.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作主题。点明主题“生活中充满美以及用心感受美”；
第二步，具体阐述故事内容。描述自己生活中发现美的经历；
第三步，书写感受。分享自己发现美的感受。
【亮点词汇】①be full of充满
②fall down摔倒
③take care of照顾，照料
④thanks to多亏了，由于
【高分句型】①If we put our heart to appreciate it, we will discover the simple but great beauty of life（if引导条件状语从句）
②They took care of the old man until the ambulance arrived.（until引导时间状语从句）
22．生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，山西教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人（父/母亲、老师、朋友…），请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在80个左右；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
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【答案】例文：
The Person I Want to Thank
In my life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is my father. He is tall and thin. He is humorous and friendly to everyone. Besides, my father is the person who knows me best.
On special days, like my birthdays, my father always gives me a surprise. He knows exactly what I like. Also, whenever I meet with any difficulties with my studies or feel upset, my father will read my mind immediately, show me ways to do things right, and tell me to face it bravely.
My father has a great influence on me. He has helped me get through those hard times and will surely lead me to a bright future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出想感谢的人物；
第二步，具体介绍父亲对自己的帮助；
第三步，介绍其对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①give me a surprise给我一个惊喜
② have a great influence on对我有很大影响
③get through通过
[高分句型]
① Besides, my father is the person who knows me best. (who引导的定语从句)
②He knows exactly what I like. (what引导的宾语从句)
23．（2023·山西·中考真题）青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题，对1127名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2·文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53 percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don’t like to complain.
As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为图表作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍调查结果；
第二步，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①As for至于
②play a role in扮演角色
③made an effort to尽力去做某事
④all the time一直
[高分句型]
①I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.（which引导的定语从句）
②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.（强调句）
24．（2022·山西·中考真题）有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对1267名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
Students’ Favorite Kinds of English Homework
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
3.参考词汇仅供参考。
WORD BANK
arouse interest 微发兴趣 enrich experiences 丰富经历 promote competence 提升素养
A possible version:
A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results.
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【答案】A possible version:
A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. 42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, and 29% enjoy reading and writing. The percentage of the students who like the hands-on project is 22% and 7% choose other kinds of homework.
As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learnt with real life in an interesting way. Three weeks ago, we were asked to make an English poster about Dragon Boat Festival. Then I collected lots of information on the festival. Finally, not only did I finish the task perfectly, but also I got a deeper understanding of our colorful culture. In my opinion, it’s the hands-on project that arouses my interest in English and enriches my experiences in learning.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍问卷的调查结果，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍调查结果；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的作业类型和这种作业的好处。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
25．
25．（2022·山西·中考真题）
在我们成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择，选择读一本喜欢的书；选择做感兴趣的事；选择与志趣相投的人交朋友……在选择面前，如何客观、理性，并且遵从自己内心的感受，这是我们应有的处事态度。
请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1.从以上提示中选择某个方面，谈谈你对这个选择的观点；
2.围绕以上观点，描述你曾经历过的一件事；
3.这件事带给你的思考。要求：
4.词数不少于 80 词；
5.提示词会仅供参考；
6.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Word BANK objective adi.客观的 reasonable adj.理性的 attitude n.态度
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【答案】例文
There is no denying that it is important for us to make a reasonable choice in life. I am a volleyball fan so I choose to join the school volleyball club, which is beneficial to my growth.
In my childhood, I fell in love with volleyball. Then when I was in Grade 8, I was eager to be a member of the school volleyball club. However, my parents wanted me to focus time and energy on schoolwork. I had a long talk with them calmly. After that, I trained hard with persistence in the club and learned what the true meaning of the teamwork was. Meanwhile, I reviewed my schoolwork as long as I finished training. To my joy, I got a satisfying result in the test. All this showed that my choice was right.
Needless to say, no matter what the choice is, if it is reasonable, just make it to follow your heart. Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。描述一件自己感兴趣的事，是如何遵从自己内心的感受，并坚持下来的短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。描述过去的事情要用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历；第三段谈谈这件事带来的思考。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。2024年中考英语书面表达考前预测【山西专用】
图表作文
材料作文
电子邮件
书信作文
征文投稿
演讲稿
话题作文
最新模考、往年作文真题（23年、22年、21年）
1．初三这一年，你一直为自己的目标而努力。而实现目标需要精细的计划、不懈的努力和他人的帮助。山西省某中学九年级四班对全年级300名同学就“What helps achieve your goal most ”做了一个调查，下图是调查的统计结果。
What helps achieve your goal most
假如你是该校九年级的学生，请结合以上图表信息，以“I Have Achieved My Goal”为题，用两段话写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈你是如何实现自己的目标的。
要求：
词数不少于80（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
I Have Achieved My Goal
Our school did a survey among 300 students on the topic of “What helps achieve your goal most ” Here are the results.
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2．“职业规划教育”旨在引导学生发现自己的兴趣和特长，寻找自己的价值。为了帮助同学们增进对不同职业的了解，某中学围绕“我的职业期望（job expectancy）”，对本校的980名学生做了问卷调查。以下是相关项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的一名学生，请你根据图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；2. 从图表中选出你认为最重要的一项内容，结合自己的经历，谈谈自己的职业期望。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
A survey was done among 980 students about their job expectancy in our school. Here are the results.
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3．《荀子·劝学》中曾写到“锲而舍之，朽木不折；锲而不舍，金石可镂”。坚持是一种优秀的品质，也是我们人生道路上一种必不可少的精神。某中学随机抽取500人，做了一项“你坚持时间最长的事情是什么？”的调查问卷。下面是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校学生，请根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中选出一种你曾经坚持时间最长的事情，并结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈这种坚持给你带来的积极影响。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 提示词汇仅供参考；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Word Bank persist v. 坚持 persistent adj. 坚持不懈的 persistence n. 坚持 quality n. 品质
A school did a survey among 500 students about what they persist in doing. Here are the results.
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4．参加社团是丰富学生校园生活的途径之一。为了解学生们参加社团的目的，某校对800名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合图表信息，以“Different Purposes of Students Taking Part in Clubs”为题，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）简要说明图表内容；
（2）从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你产生的积极影响。
Word Bank enrich v.使丰富 sociability n.社交能力
要求：
（1）词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Different Purposes of Students Taking Part in Clubs
Our school did a survey among 800 students on the topic of “Different Purposes of Students Taking Part in Clubs”. Here are the results.
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5．没有人是一座孤岛。我们每个人的生活都受他人的影响并影响着他人。每个人顺手的小事与平常的爱心都感动并温暖着他人。某校在 200名学生中做了一个调查，了解同学们通常怎样帮助他人。下图是调查结果。
请你用两段话写一篇英语短文，第一段简要说明图表内容； 第二段结合你的经历谈一谈你帮助他人的事及你的感受。
要求：1. 需包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数不少于80 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
As a saying goes, “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.”Helping others is our traditional virtue. Last week, our school did a survey about how you usually help others among 200 students. Here are the results.
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6．课间10分钟是学生消除学习疲劳，放松身心的时间。为了有效利用课间10分钟，缓解学生的疲劳，增强体质，某校以“What should we do during the 10-minute break ”为主题，对本校600名学生进行了调查，下图是统计结果。
假如你是该校学生，请结合以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 结合自己的经历，谈谈课间活动的重要性。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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7．勇气是一种力量，激励我们突破困境；勇气是一种精神，指引我们突破自我；勇气更是一种品质，帮助我们保持坚定。某校为了引导同学们提升克服困难的勇气，以“The Moment I Showed Courage”为主题，对1329名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你结合以上图表信息，以“The Moment I Showed Courage”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
要求:
1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入人总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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8．在我们前行的路上，有风有雨是常态。只有经历了风雨洗礼，我们才能看到美丽的风景。为了引导同学们积极面对人生路上的“风雨”，某校以“The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced”为主题，对600名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的一名学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出你所面临的一个挑战，结合自己的经历，谈谈你是如何克服的，并说明你从中获得的启示。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Faced
Recently, a survey was done among 600 students in our school about the biggest challenges they have ever faced. Here are the results.
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9．家乡是一个人灵魂最深处的记忆，是一个人心底最柔软的一方田土。对于家乡，每个人心中都有一份炽热的情感。某校为增强学生的爱国热情、故土情怀和民族自豪感，号召学生积极参与“我为家乡做代言”的活动，针对“如何展示家乡新风采”，对2000名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的方法，结合自己的经历，谈谈选择这种方法的理由。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名：
3.参考词汇仅供参考。
A school did a survey among 2, 000 students about their plans on how to show the new style of their hometown. Here are the results.
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10．废旧物品循环利用是环保实践的有效方法之一。为了解学生们如何循环利用旧物，某校对1000名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合图表信息，以“How to Make Use of Old Things”为题，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你产生的积极影响。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
How to Make Use of Old Things
How to Make Use of Old Things
Our school did a survey among 1,000 students on the topic of “How to Make Use of Old Things”. Here are the results.
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11．“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。帮助别人意味着承担责任、分享快乐、建立信任、提升自我价值。某校为了鼓励学生参加社会公益活动，针对“你通常是如何帮助他人的？”这一话题，对1200名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
How do you usually help others
假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 结合你的经历，谈谈你帮助他人的一件事以及从中获得的感悟。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Last week, our school did a survey about how you usually help others among 1,200 students. Here are the results.
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“研学旅行 (study tour)”就是综合实践活动。请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的经历，谈谈“研学旅行”的收获和感受。
要求: 1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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13．周末某学校打算组织七八年级的学生进行户外拓展活动(outdoor development activities)，九年级学生因为面临中考，学业紧张，所以不参加此次活动。但很多九年级学生认为他们应该参加此次活动。为此英语课上老师举办了辩论会，请你根据以下信息写一篇短文阐述你的观点。
Should the ninth graders take part in outdoor development activities
内容包括：
1.阐明你的观点；
2.结合自己的经历，说明理由。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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14．回首过往，在十几年的人生中，你学习、运动、旅游、交友、玩耍……其中你有收获、有遗憾，会欣喜、会难过……请结合发生在你身上的一个事例，以“Learn from Yesterday”为题写一篇作文，并谈谈你从中得到的启示。要求：
（1）书写工整，结构合理；
（2）短文不少于 80 词；
（3）不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Learn from Yesterday
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15．阅读伴随着人的一生，为了激发同学们的阅读兴趣，你所在的班级准备开展“书香班级”活动。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对阅读的看法以及自己的阅读习惯，并对培养同学们的阅读兴趣提出一些建议。
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4. 词数不少于 80 词。
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16．改变是一种勇气, 改变是一种态度, 改变是一种影响……改变无处不在。在点滴的改变中我们慢慢成长, 逐渐遇见更好的自己。请你用两段话写一篇短文, 第一段结合自己的亲身经历讲述做出的改变, 第二段谈谈这次改变带给你的影响。
要求:
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 提示词汇仅供参考；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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17．如今，在电子科技飞速发展的今天，敲字和语音软件不断更新，有人说写一手好字 (have a good handwriting) 已经没有意义。也有人说写一手赏心悦目的好字是个人文化素养的体现，也是中国文化的传承 (passing down our traditional culture)，同时对学生而言在考试升学方面也有好处。请结合自己的经历，谈谈你的看法。
内容包括：
●Your opinion
●An experience you had
●Something you have learned
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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18．很多家长觉得应该允许孩子自己做决定，认为这样可以锻炼他们独立思考问题的能力，培养自觉和自律。也有人觉得青少年缺乏经验，不适合自己做决定。你对此有什么看法呢？请写一篇短文，分享一下你的观点和经历。
内容包括：
—Your opinions
—One of your own experiences
—What you have learned from the experience
要求：
1．词数不少于80词；
2．参考词汇仅供参考；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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19．最近，我们都在讲“不忘初心，方得始终”，只有不忘记自己最初的想法，才能有始有终地去完成自己的梦想。你还记得你的梦想吗？是因为什么而有了这样的梦想呢？你又将做出怎样的努力来实现你的梦想呢？现在，请你以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，记录你的“初心”。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 不得出现真实的人名和校名。
20．某校展开“我是课堂小主人”建议征集活动，各班就此展开讨论，同学们纷纷发言：“我希望能够有足够的自主学习时间······”“我喜欢的课堂是每个人都有一台笔记本电脑，方面上网查询······”“课上我们能自由地讨论，充分展示我们的学习成果······”等等。请你结合同学们讨论的结果，给校长以电子邮件的形式写一封信，建议什么样的课堂形式更为同学们喜爱，也更有利于同学们未来的发展。内容须包含以下要点： What is your favorite class like
Please tell us an unforgettable experience you’ve had in your class.
Please give at least two suggestion.
要求：1. 词数 80 词左右，提示词仅供参考；2. 邮件的格式已给出，开头，结尾不计入总数；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名，校名；4. 将答案写在答题卡相应的位置上。
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21．某班开展主题为“感受生活中的美”的主题班会活动，号召大家拥有发现美的眼睛。活动要求每位同学根据自己的经历或者见闻写一篇演讲稿，和同学们分享自己在生活中发现的美及感受。假如你是该班的同学，请你结合自己的经验，写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
·Tell a story about how you find the beauty in life.
·Express your feelings.
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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22．生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，山西教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人（父/母亲、老师、朋友…），请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在80个左右；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
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23．（2023·山西·中考真题）青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题，对1127名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2·文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results.
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24．（2022·山西·中考真题）有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对1267名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
3.参考词汇仅供参考。
WORD BANK
arouse interest 微发兴趣 enrich experiences 丰富经历 promote competence 提升素养
A possible version:
A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results.
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25．（2022·山西·中考真题）
在我们成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择，选择读一本喜欢的书；选择做感兴趣的事；选择与志趣相投的人交朋友……在选择面前，如何客观、理性，并且遵从自己内心的感受，这是我们应有的处事态度。
请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1.从以上提示中选择某个方面，谈谈你对这个选择的观点；
2.围绕以上观点，描述你曾经历过的一件事；
3.这件事带给你的思考。要求：
4.词数不少于 80 词；
5.提示词会仅供参考；
6.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Word BANK objective adi.客观的 reasonable adj.理性的 attitude n.态度
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