2024年中考英语书面表达考前预测【广西专用】
征文投稿
演讲稿
话题作文
材料作文
电子邮件
书信作文
图表作文
最新模考、往年作文真题(23年)
1.艺术充满魅力,艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favourite art course”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学校开设的艺术课(如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等);
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况(如上课时间、活动等);
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:art course(艺术课),painting(n.绘画),calligraphy(n.书法),drama(n.戏剧)
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school.
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【答案】例文:
My favourite art course
Art courses are important in school. We have many art classes in our school, such as music, painting, dance, calligraphy, drama and so on. However, my favorite art class is painting.
I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m. Our school holds a painting competition on June 30 every year.
I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness. With my crayons, I can paint a vibrant world and anything that catches my fancy. Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail
me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给的要点提示,介绍最喜欢的一门艺术课,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,并点明自己最喜欢的艺术课是绘画;
第二步,具体介绍课程、活动的安排;
第三步,介绍自己喜欢绘画的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②from...to...从……到……
③allow sb to do允许某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m. (which引导的限制性定语从句)
②I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail me.(when引导的时间状语从句)
2.假设你是李华,你校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant):球类(Ball Games),演讲(Speech),器乐(Instrumental Music),故事(Story),音乐(Music),摄影(Photography)。请你结合自己的兴趣和特长,给教务处马老师写一封信,推荐自己担任其中一门活动课的小助手,并说明理由。
注意:
1.内容必须包含所给要点的信息;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4.词数80左右(短文句首已给出,不计入总词数)。
提示词:应聘 apply for;愿意帮助别人be willing to help others
Dear Mr. Ma,
My name is Li Hua, a student from Class Two. I want to apply for the teaching assistant of
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Ma,
My name is Li Hua, a student from Class Two. I want to apply for the teaching assistant of the ball games.
I have a strong interest in sports and am proficient in various ballgames, such as basketball and volleyball. As a teaching assistant, I believe that I would be able to assist the teacher in organizing the activities and ensuring the smooth running of the class. I am also willing to help others improve their skills and enjoy the game. I am confident that my experience and enthusiasm for ball games will make me a valuable addition to the teaching team.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍自己的能力和信心;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a strong interest in 有浓厚的兴趣
②such as 例如
③be willing to 乐意做某事
[高分句型]
①As a teaching assistant, I believe that I would be able to assist the teacher in organizing the activities and ensuring the smooth running of the class.(宾语从句)
②I am confident that my experience and enthusiasm for ball games will make me a valuable addition to the teaching team.(宾语从句)
3.你所在的学校社团正在举行新学期招聘活动。假如你是初三学生李华,请阅读以下两幅海报,写一封邮件给张老师,报名参加其中一个社团,邮件须包含以下内容:
(1)你会参加哪一个社团,并说明理由;
(2)简要阐述你对社团活动的期待。
debate 辩论 Chinese painting 中国画
注意:
1. 电子邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
3. 词数为80左右;
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
Thanks for offering such meaningful activities. I prefer Art Club on February 26th because all the drawing skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life. I’m so excited that I can learn traditional Chinese painting. Moreover, what makes me interested is that I am sure we will have a lot of fun learning about Chinese traditional cultures. Besides, it’s a good chance to make more friends and broaden my horizons. I believe it will be an unforgettable experience. I am looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为邮件;
② 时态:一般现在时态和一般将来时;
③ 提示:根据题干所给内容完成写作,考生注意不要遗漏要点,适当增加细节,并突出重点,注意邮件格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山,表明自己要参加“艺术俱乐部”;
第二步,具体阐述你对社团活动的期待和选择的原因;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①thanks for doing感谢做……
②be of great value非常有价值
[高分句型]
①I prefer Art Club on February 26th because all the drawing skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life.(原因状语从句)
②I believe it will be an unforgettable experience. (宾语从句)
4.你校将举办英语文化节,现向全校学生征求活动意见。假如你是李华,请用英语给负责人写一封书信,从学校的活动意向表中推荐2—3个活动并阐明理由。
□sing English songs □read English novels □watch English movies □tell English stories □make English posters □perform English sitcoms
注意:(1)书信内容要点应选自上表,可适当发挥;
(2)词数: 80左右;
(3)书信开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions.
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I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear sir,
For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions. I think watching English movies is a good choice. Not only can we enjoy the performance of the actors, but we can also learn English in a fun way. Also, I recommend telling English stories as a way to celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich our knowledge as well as share favorite stories with each other in English. Another way I would like to recommend is to play English sitcoms. The reason is that it helps to improve our spoken English and acting skills. At the same time, we can learn to work together well.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“英语文化节”来引出下文中对推荐的活动的介绍;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“看英文电影、讲英文故事和演英语情景喜剧”三方面入手,重点介绍推荐这些活动的理由;
③第三步,书写结语。希望自己的建议能够被采纳。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also 不但……而且
②as well as 和
③share sth with sb 与某人分享某物
④at the same time 同时
[高分句型]
①Not only can we enjoy the performance of the actors, but we can also learn English in a fun way.(倒装句)
②Also, I recommend telling English stories as a way to celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich our knowledge as well as share favorite stories with each other in English.(定语从句)
③The reason is that it helps to improve our spoken English and acting skills. (表语从句)
5.初中生活即将结束,你一定参加过各种伴随着你成长的社团,如篮球队、合唱团等。请以“My Favorite Club at School”为题,写一篇英文短文,向校刊的School Life栏目投稿,介绍你最喜欢的社团。
注意:(1) 短文必须包括思维导图中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3) 词数:80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in.
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in. There are the Robot Club, the Solar Power Club, the Singing Club and so on. All of them are fun and interesting. My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much.
In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. We often went out to practise our skills. And we showed our photos in the club. I made lots of friends in the club and I also became better at taking photos. It is interesting and exciting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据所给内容介绍我最喜欢的俱乐部,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍参加的俱乐部以及最喜欢的俱乐部;
第二步,具体介绍自己经常做的活动;
第三步,介绍从俱乐部学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②make lots of friends交许多朋友
[高分句型]
①My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. (“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语)
6.你所在学校的英语校报正在举行公开竞选。假如你是学生李华,请阅读竞选职位和要求,参与其中一个职位的竞选,并完成竞选演讲稿。
演讲稿须包含以下内容:
(1)你想要参与校报工作的原因;
(2)你想竞选哪个职位,并说明理由。
Job What to do
reporter write news articles/conduct interviews
photographer take photos
editor take charge of a section
secretary arrange meetings/take notes
注意:
1.演讲稿中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
3.词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
Hello, teachers and classmates! My name is Li Hua. I’m excited to share with you why I want to be a part of our school newspaper and why I want to be a reporter.
First, I love writing news articles. I think it’s fun to put my thoughts and ideas into words. Working on the school newspaper will give me a chance to write news stories and share them with everyone.
Also, I want to be a reporter because I enjoy interviewing people and learning about their stories. As a reporter, I can talk to different students and teachers, find out interesting things, and then write about them in the newspaper.
I believe I have the skills to be a good reporter. I’m good at observing and listening, and I can ask good questions. I hope you’ll support me and give me a chance to show what I can do. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,打招呼并表明演讲目的;
第二步,讲述想要参与校报工作和竞选记者职位的原因;
第三步,介绍自己的优势,并表达想要成为记者的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②find out找出
[高分句型]
①I’m excited to share with you why I want to be a part of our school newspaper and why I want to be a reporter.(why引导的宾语从句)
②I think it’s fun to put my thoughts and ideas into words.(省略that的宾语从句;it作形式主语)
③I want to be a reporter because I enjoy interviewing people and learning about their stories.(because引导的原因状语从句)
7.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件,向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。
Presents Reasons
a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it
Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … …
注意:
(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数:80左右。
Dear Michael,
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Michael,
There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.
For your mother, I think a silk scarf from Hangzhou is a nice present. It’s soft and comfortable. There are usually beautiful Chinese paintings on it. And you can give your father some Chinese tea. It’s a kind of healthy drink with a long history. Paper cutting is a traditional Chinese art. Chinese artists cut the paper into different shapes, such as flowers or buildings. I believe your friends will like paper cuts.
I hope these can help you.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可参考表格中给出的礼物来推荐三件有特色的礼物。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,推荐礼物;
第二步,具体推荐三种有特色的礼物;
第三步,收尾,希望能帮到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①give sb. sth. 给某人某物
②traditional Chinese art 传统中国艺术
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.(There be句型)
②I believe your friends will like paper cuts.(省略that的宾语从句)
8.假如你是李明,你们学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“An unforgettable ”为主题,开展征文活动,请你写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你最难忘的一次经历及感受。
要求:
1.请先将题目补全后再作答;
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3.词数 80词左右。
An Unforgettable
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Trip
Last month, I went to Xi’an with my classmates. The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it.
We went there by train and it took us three hours to get there. On the first day, we visited some museums and saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings. They were wonderful. In the evening, we had some special food, such as biangbiang noodles, liangpi, roujiamo and so on. I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. The next day, we went to some famous places in Xi’an, such as the Terra-cotta Warriors, the Bell Tower and the Drum Tower. Of course, we took a lot of photos.
We had a great time and we also learned a lot about Chinese history. It was an interesting trip and I hope to pay a visit to Xi’an again!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:介绍自己的一次令自己难忘的旅行经历,可适当发挥,注意逻辑清晰,表达准确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍去了哪里旅行;
第二步,具体介绍旅行的过程;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③have a great time玩得开心
④pay a visit to参观
[高分句型]
①The trip was so wonderful that I would never forget it. (so ... that引导结果状语从句)
②I like Yangrou paomo best, which is a famous local snack in Xi’an. (which引导定语从句)
9.呵护心灵,快乐成长。你校英语报正在举行以“心理健康(mental health)”为主题的征文比赛。假
如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息,用英文写一篇倡议书投稿谈谈心理健康的重要性,提出改善建议,并表达你的祝愿。
注意:
(1)短文必须包括表格中的要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80—100。倡议书格式和首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Importance ● be connected with physical health ● influence one’s daily life
Ways to improve ● do sports ● build good relationships ● …
My hope ● …
Dear fellow students,
Mental health is important to everyone.
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【答案】例文:
Dear fellow students,
Mental health is important to everyone. It is closely connected with physical health. Mental health influence everyone’s daily life. There are things we can do to improve mental health.
First, do sports regularly. Exercise can help us relax and improve our ability to cope with stress. Second, we should build good relationships with the people around us. Finally, happiness is important for us too. We should
learn to smile and be active. Be happy to be healthy.
I hope we are all mentally healthy and we will have a happy and successful middle school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息,要保证语法和单词拼写正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,谈谈心理健康的重要性;
第二步,具体介绍如何提高心理健康水平;
第三步,书写结语,谈谈自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life 日常生活
②cope with 处理
[高分句型]
①There are things we can do to improve mental health.(There be句型;省略that定语从句)
②Be happy to be healthy.(祈使句)
10.在校 “劳动教育月” 期间,你校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home” 主题征文活动。请根据下表信息,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的至少两项家务以及你的感受。
What you often do at home What you have learned
◆cook meals ◆water flowers ◆wash the dishes ◆look after pets ◆take out the rubbish ◆… ◆life skills; ◆responsibility (责任); ◆…
注意:
(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当增加细节;
(2)词数:80-100;
(3)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
短文首句:I have always been a good helper at home.
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【答案】例文:
I have always been a good helper at home. As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework.
Last Sunday, after breakfast, I began to help my parents wash clothes. Though washing clothes isn’t difficult, it took me a long time. After that, I tried to tidy my bedroom. I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things. Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework for my parents, but also learn life skills.
I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为 “一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出自己在家里是个好帮手;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从几个方面讲述自己做的家务;
第三步,书写结语。介绍做家务的感受及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know 众所周知
②a good helper 一个好帮手
③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
④try to do sth. 尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①Though washing clothes isn’t difficult, it took me a long time. (though引导让步状语从句;动名词作主语)
②Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework for my parents, but also learn life skills. (现在分词作伴随状语;because引导原因状语从句;not only…but also…不仅……而
且……)
③I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. (省略that的宾语从句)
④In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be. (介词短语;the+比较级…, the+比较级…“越……越……”)
11.假如你是李华,你所在的村庄有幸荣获“中国美丽休闲乡村”的荣誉。为更好地服务游客,正在招募志愿者担任导游。请你根据以下提示,用英语给负责人赵先生写一封自荐信,报名成为一名志愿者导游。
写作要求:1.要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文流;
3.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Zhao,
I’m glad to hear that some volunteer guides are wanted in our village.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhao,
I’m glad to hear that some volunteer guides are wanted in our village. I am writing to apply for this position.
I’m a Junior 3 student, who was born in the village. I believe I am fit for the position. I’m polite and outgoing. So I am confident that I can show the visitors around our village and introduce it to them patiently. Besides, I speak
good English and I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. What’s more, as a local villager, I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce it to foreign guests.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意要介绍自己的性格和特长,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明你想报名成为一名志愿者导游;
第二步,具体介绍自己的所在年级、性格、特长等;
第三步,书写结语。感谢对方的考虑。
[亮点词汇]
①fit合适的
②confident自信的
③besides此外
④what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①I’m a Junior 3 student, who was born in the village.(who引导的定语从句)
②I believe I am fit for the position.(省略that的宾语从句)
③I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce it to foreign guests.(省略that的宾语从句,when引导的时间状语从句)
12.假如你是李华,交换生Peter即将来你校学习,他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息,用英文写一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示词语: take part in , improve, benefit
提示问题: What club did you join
What did you do in the club
Why do you recommend the club
注意:
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2) 内容须包含以上内容,可适当发挥;
(3) 词数:80-100词。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school!
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school! I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. I, as a basketball lover, highly recommend you join the “BasketballClub”. This club provides a platform for us students to improve their basketball skills and build up our bodies. With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth.
Looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will actively take part in the activities together with you during your stay. Wish you a pleasant stay at our school!
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear the exciting news recently that you will be coming to our school as an exchange student! As an experienced student who took part in various activities, I would like to recommend the “Science Club” to you.
We can learn science knowledge through various lectures here. We also have the chance to work on several exciting projects, which can not only enrich our learning experience but also develop our team work and leadership
skills.
Looking forward to your arrival and I'm sure you’ll find it both educational and fun. If you have any questions or need more information, feel free to ask.
Best regards,
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】范文一:
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出作者向Peter推荐的社团;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。作者讲述参加社团的收获及推荐该社团的原因;
第三步,书写结语。作者表达了希望Peter来参加他们的俱乐部并一起参加活动的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物
③not only…but also 不仅……而且
④take part in 参加(活动)
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. (宾语从句);
②With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth. (介词短语;定语从句)
13.假定你是校英文报记者李平。你校以“Fly My English Dream”为主题的英语节在昨天结束。请你写一篇英语短文对此次活动进行报道。
内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;
(2)主要活动;
(3)同学们的反响。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(2)词数:80—100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
The English Festival Takes Off at Our School
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【答案】例文
The English Festival Takes Off at Our School
Yesterday afternoon, the English festival themed “Fly My English Dream” was held in the school hall.
The English festival was mainly made up of three parts. It began with a wonderful opening. Next, great performances like singing English songs, lively dancing, gifted instruments playing won the praise and laughter again and again. At last, a fantastic English speech contest was held. Their excellent spoken English and amazing performances set good examples to all of us.
Through the English festival, all of students had a great time. At the same time, it lit the interests and passions of learning English. They promised to make great efforts to learn English better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍活动时间和地点;
第二步,介绍主要活动内容;
第三步,分享同学们的反响。
[亮点词汇]
①be made up of由……组成
②set examples to sb为某人树立了榜样
[高分句型]
At the same time, it lit the interests and passions of learning English.(并列结构)
14.良好的时间管理能力能够帮助我们更好地规划生活,使我们的时间得到充分利用,提高学习效率。但现在很多同学无法高效管理时间以致影响了学习。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法。内容提示:
Manage your time well A task that you failed to finish Reasons and results
Your suggestions: 1) keep away from... 2)...
注意:(1)短文必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
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【答案】例文
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
Last summer vacation, my Chinese teacher asked us to read some classics. I planned to read one book every week. However, I spent too much time chatting with my classmates on WeChat. Then, I had to stay up late to do the task on the last day. But I couldn’t finish it and was punished by the teacher.
I learned my lesson that day and spent the whole night thinking about it. To manage my time well, I should keep away from my phone so that I can put all my efforts into my tasks. I should also make a good study plan and
follow it strictly.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作内容包括:自己未能管理好时间的经历和从中学到的教训;经历部分时态是一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步,叙述自己时间管理失败的经历;
第二步,表达学到的教训,提出具体建议。
[亮点词汇]
① spend time doing sth花时间做某事
② stay up late熬夜
③ keep away from远离
[高分句型]
① But I couldn’t finish it and was punished by the teacher.(被动语态)
② I should keep away from my phone so that I can put all my efforts into my tasks. (so that引导的结果状语从句)
假如你是Joe,你所在学校将在学期结束前举办开放日,邀请家长了解校园文化生活。下面是一份活动安排。请给校方写一封邮件,针对方案中的一项你认为需要修改或完善的内容,谈谈你的想法和建议。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(2)词数:80—100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Open Day Program
Parents arrive; look at notice board 2:00 p.m.
Visit classroom and observe one lesson 2:20 p.m.
Watch art performance 3:00 p.m.
Meet the teachers 3: 30 p.m.
Look at display board for high schools 4:00 p.m.
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【答案】例文:
Dear School,
I’m Joe. I think the Open Day is great for parents to see our school. But I have a small suggestion. The part where parents look at the display board for high schools could be better.
Instead of just looking, we can have a small talk or game about high school. That way, parents will learn more and have fun too! Or we can invite some high school students to come and talk about their school life.
I think this would make the Open Day even more exciting for everyone. Thank you for listening!
Best regards,
Joe
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:活动安排已给出,针对其中一项给出修改或完善的想法和建议,需适当补充细节,并注意邮件的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的——对开放日的安排有建议,并指出需要修改或完善之处;
第二步,具体阐述至少两点需要修改或完善的建议;
第三步,总结自己建议的好处,并表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是,代替
②invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
③talk about谈论
[高分句型]
①The part where parents look at the display board for high schools could be better.(where引导的定语从句)
②I think this would make the Open Day even more exciting for everyone.(省略that的宾语从句)
初中的学习即将结束。你所在的学校正在筹备毕业典礼(graduation ceremony),部分学生将有机会在毕业典礼上演讲,演讲的主题是“我和我的校园”。假如你是Joe,请从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等中选择一项内容,结合自己的经历,写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你的感受,给出你的建议。演讲稿开头已经写好。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(2)词数:80—100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文
My dear teachers and classmates,
I’m very glad to make a speech on the graduation ceremony. It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful schoool. The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life.
I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. Here I want to say, thank you, my best teacher. Finally, I hope that all the students will have a good future and our school will become better and better.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是演讲稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸在毕业典礼上发言”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等选一项内容、结合经历、谈感受、给建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达感谢您的聆听”的谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech做演讲
②Little by little一点一点地
③a precious treasure一个珍贵的财富
[高分句型]
①The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life. (定语从句)
②I hope that all the students will have a good future and our school will become better and better. (宾语从句)
17.学校为下学期“Love English, Show Myself”的英语节活动,向全校师生征集活动建议,同时希望师生利用寒假时间完成必要的活动准备。假设你是初三学生李华,请根据以下要求写一封邮件给学校负责活动的王老师,邮件须包含以下内容:
(1)你是否会参加英语节的展示或比赛,并简述理由;
(2)请从下列四种选项中为初三年级挑选一种活动形式,说明原因并就寒假中初三学生参加该项活动可做的准备,提出你的建议。
课本剧表演 (text-based drama show) 影视配音 (movie dubbing show)
歌唱比赛 (singing competition) 演讲比赛(speech contest)
注意:
1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄本卷材料不得分。词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to tell you that I will take part in the English activities next term because I think it is an importance chance for me to improve my English learning and show my talent.
As for the activities, I think singing competition is a good choice for Grade Nine students. Every student in every class can take part in the singing competition and classmates will get closer to each other through this activity.
During the winter vacation, Grade Nine students can learn the songs at home by themselves with the help of the Internet at the beginning. Later, the whole class can gather together at school and practice singing once a week. It will be a very good way for them to relax since they still have to be busy studying during the vacation.
I hope my advice would be helpful to you. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写信目的,表示是否会参加活动,并简述理由;
第二步,从给出的四项活动中挑选一种活动,说明原因并就寒假中初三学生参加该项活动可做的准备,提
出建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①show one’s talent展示才艺
②take part in参加
③with the help of在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
①I am writing to tell you that I will take part in the English activities next term because I think it is an importance chance for me to improve my English learning and show my talent.(that引导的宾语从句,because引导的原因状语从句)
②I hope my advice would be helpful to you.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
18.中国是有着悠久的历史和光辉灿烂的传统文化的文明古国,拥有着很多的传统节日,如春节、元宵节、中秋节、龙舟节、重阳节……。请以“I like…best”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你喜欢的传统节日。
内容包括:
1. 补充完整题目;
2. 节日的基本信息(如时间、习俗、活动、意义等);
3. 你喜欢这个节日的原因。
写作要求:
1. 内容包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得透露真实个人信息;
3. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:
春节 Spring Festival 元宵节 Lantern Festival 中秋节 Mid Autumn Festival
龙舟节 Dragon Boat Festival 重阳节 Double Ninth Festival 庆祝 celebrate
I like ________ best
There are many different kinds of traditional festivals in China.
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【答案】例文
I like the Spring Festival best
There are many different kinds of traditional festivals in China. My favourite Chinese traditional festival is the Spring Festival. It is also called Chinese New Year. It’s the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar. When the Spring Festival is coming, people are busy cleaning the house and cooking traditional food. On the evening before the festival, people get together to have a big family dinner. During the festival, people in new clothes visit each other and give money to kids to send good wishes. When I follow the traditions, I have a lot of fun and also feel proud of the traditional culture. And it’s relaxing to have time off and stay with friends and families.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示内容适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍喜欢的节日的基本信息;
第二步,介绍你喜欢这个节日的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy doing sth忙于做某事
②get together聚在一起
③have time off休假
[高分句型]
①When the Spring Festival is coming, people are busy cleaning the house and cooking traditional food. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②And it’s relaxing to have time off and stay with friends and families. (It作形式主语)
19.在校园生活和家庭生活中,我们经常会遇到一些困难。在克服这些困难的过程中,我们收获了解决问题的经验且能力也在逐步提升。你校英文报正在开展“Difficulties Help Me Grow Up”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 介绍你曾遇到过的一个困难;
2. 你是如何面对并战胜它的;
3. 克服困难后你的收获。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:get over克服
Difficulties Help Me Grow Up
Everyone meets difficulties on the way to success.
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【答案】例文
Difficulties Help Me Grow Up
Everyone meets difficulties on the way to success. When I was in middle school, I had a big problem with learning English. It was really hard for me to understand grammar rules and remember new words.
To deal with this challenge, I decided not to be afraid. Every day, I spent more time studying English. I made cards for vocabulary and practiced writing simple sentences. My teacher also helped by encouraging me to speak more often in class. Day by day, my English improved. I could read stories without looking up dictionary. Getting
over this difficulty taught me that practice makes perfect and asking for help is important.
Now, I feel more confident. This experience has shown me that facing and getting over difficulties helps me grow up. I like each challenge because it makes me stronger and better prepared for life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,注意不要遗漏,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述自己曾经遇到的一个困难;
第二步,讲述自己克服困难的经过;
第三步,总结自己克服困难后的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with 处理
②spend…doing sth. 花费……做某事
③practice doing 练习做某事
④encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①When I was in middle school, I had a big problem with learning English. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Getting over this difficulty taught me that practice makes perfect and asking for help is important.(that引导的宾语从句)
20.初中的学习即将结束,你有想过自己要读一所什么样的高中吗?为了让同学们更明确自己的学习目标,学校英语广播站将征集以“My dream high school”为主题的征文稿件,请你写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要点:1.你梦想中的学校外观;
2.你向往的学校生活及原因(如课程设置、校园活动、人际关系);
3.你的期待。
写作要求:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称:
3.词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:beautiful(美丽的);fresh(新鲜的),activity(活动),come true(实现)
My dream high school
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’m working hard in order to enter my dream high school.
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【答案】例文
My dream high school
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’m working hard in order to enter my dream high school. My dream school is very big and beautiful. There will be fresh air and many green trees. I can do different things in different buildings.
I hope the lessons there will be interesting. I can do more experiments in my lessons. After class, I can take part in different kinds of activities in different clubs to develop my hobbies. Moreover, I hope I can make more friends in the new school and study together.
I hope I can go to this dream high school, live healthily and study happily. I hope my dream will come true some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己梦想中的学校,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你梦想中的学校外观;
第二步,介绍你向往的学校生活及原因;
第三步,表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②different kinds of各种各样的
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①I hope the lessons there will be interesting. (宾语从句)
②After class, I can take part in different kinds of activities in different clubs to develop my hobbies. (动词不定式作目的状语)
21.现在我们进入了后疫情时代,人们在“阳康”之后比以前更加注重身心健康。你所就读的学校公众号以“How to keep healthy”为题向全校进行征稿,请你写一份宣传稿。
内容包括:
(1)描述一项你最喜欢的运动以及你喜欢它的原因。
(2)就如何保持身心健康给同学提一些建议。
(3)呼吁同学要积极锻炼身体和要以乐观的心态面对生活。
作文要求:
(1)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
How to keep healthy
I think being in good health is important after being caught by COVID-19.
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【答案】例文
How to keep healthy
I think being in good health is important after being caught by COVID-19.
My favorite sport is running because it can make me relaxed and keep fit. Everyone wants to be healthy, do you know how to keep healthy First, it’s necessary to have a good eating habit. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat every day. We can’t eat too much or too little. We should keep the balance. Second, we should exercise often to build us up. Try to exercise for half an hour, we can do it twice or three times every week. Doing exercise can make us strong. Third, don’t stay up late at night. Because it is bad for our health. If we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache. Finally, we must go to see a doctor when we get ill. If we try our best, we will be very healthy.
I hope students can do exercise actively and face life optimistically. I also hope students try to be happy because happiness is important for our health and it’s the best medicine.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要漏写你最喜欢的运动以及你喜欢它的原因,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述一项你最喜欢的运动以及你喜欢它的原因;
第二步,就如何保持身心健康给同学提一些建议;
第三步,呼吁同学要积极锻炼身体和要以乐观的心态面对生活。
[亮点词汇]
①relaxed放松的
②necessary必要的
③build sb. up增强某人的体质
④stay up late熬夜
⑤optimistically乐观地
[高分句型]
①If we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②I hope students can do exercise actively and face life optimistically. I also hope students try to be happy because happiness is important for our health and it’s the best medicine.(省略that的宾语从句,because引导的原因状语从句)
22.我们的点滴成长和进步都离不开家长的细心照顾和支持,老师的辛勤教诲和鼓励,以及同学和朋友对我们的帮助。请根据以下的提示信息,以“The Person I Want to Thank Most”为题,写一篇英语短文来表达你的感激之情。内容包括:
1.你要感谢的人是谁
2.感谢的原因是什么
3.你打算如何用行动回报
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.短文应包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:remember记得 helpful有帮助的 be thankful to对……存感激
The Person I Want to Thank Most
In my life, a lot of people have helped me.
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【答案】例文
The Person I Want to Thank Most
In my life, a lot of people have helped me. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher —Ms. Lee.
She is very kind and easy-going. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of me and often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. Thanks to her, I made great progress in English and became increasingly interested in it.
I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. I’ll try my best to live up to her expectations.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己想要感谢的人是谁;
第二步,讲述她是如何帮助我的;
第三步,表达自己的感激以及如何回报。
[亮点词汇]
①take good care of好好照顾
②cheer up使振作起来
③thanks to多亏
④be thankful for 对……表示感激
[高分句型]
①When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.(when引导时间状语从句)
②She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.(动词不定式作定语)
23.每个人都有自己的独特之处,我们要学会欣赏自己,努力成为理想中的样子!为此你校“暖心树洞”社团开展了以“A Real Me, A Better Me”为题的征文活动。假如你是李华,现请你根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 你的基本信息(如年龄、体貌、性格等);
2. 你的“闪光点”(至少列举两点,如学习、运动、文明礼仪或助人为乐等其中两点);
3. 你需要改进的地方。
写作要求:
1. 内容包括写作要点所给信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露真实的姓名及校名;
4. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:shortcoming (缺点、不足),improve (改进、提升)
A Real Me, A Better Me
My name is Li Hua.
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【答案】例文
A Real Me, A Better Me
My name is Li Hua. I am 15 years old. I am tall and strong with big eyes. I always wear a confident smile because I believe it’s the best way to present myself.
I am friendly and kindhearted. At school I often help my teachers and classmates. As I am good at English, I help my classmates a lot with their English study. I also like doing sports. My favourite sport is basketball and I am a member of our school basketball team. I am also polite. I always follow our school rules and I often listen to the teachers carefully. Therefore I’m one of the top students in my class.
However, nobody is perfect. I have my shortcomings as well. I need to improve my time management. Moreover, I am trying to improve my social skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据要点提示进行写作,人称用第一人称,注意要点齐全,可适当增添细节,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的基本信息,包括年龄、外貌、性格等;
第二步,举例介绍自己的“闪光点”;
第三步,介绍自己需要改进的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①wear a confident smile面带着自信的笑容
②kindhearted好心肠的
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
①I always wear a confident smile because I believe it’s the best way to present myself. (because引导原因状语从句)
②My favourite sport is basketball and I am a member of our school basketball team. (and连接的并列句)
24.你校英文周刊开设了中国传统文化专栏,正以“My favourite Chinese traditional festival”为题征稿,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.节日名称;
2.节日时间;
3.庆祝方式;
4.你过节时的感受。
写作要求:
1.将节日名称补充在首句;
2.包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4.词数80左右。
参考词汇:lunar calendar (n.农历), celebrate (v.庆祝), Spring Festival (春节), Mid-Autumn Festival (中秋节), get together (聚在一起), meaningful (adj.有意义的)
My favourite Chinese traditional festival
My favourite Chinese traditional festival is
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【答案】例文
My favourite Chinese traditional festival
My favourite Chinese traditional festival is the Spring Festival. It is also called Chinese New Year. It’s the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar.
When the Spring Festival is coming, people are busy cleaning the house and cooking traditional food. On the evening before the festival, people get together to have a big family dinner. During the festival, people in new
clothes visit each other and give money to kids to send good wishes.
When I follow the traditions, I have a lot of fun and also feel proud of the traditional culture. And it’s relaxing to have time off and stay with friends and families.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示内容适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍最喜爱的传统节日;
第二步,介绍春节的庆祝方式;
第三步,介绍过春节时的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy doing sth忙于做某事
②get together聚在一起
③time off休假
[高分句型]
①When the Spring Festival is coming, people are busy cleaning the house and cooking traditional food. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②And it’s relaxing to have time off and stay with friends and families. (It作形式主语)
25.为提高同学们学习英语的兴趣,班级决定举办一个英语派对。假如你是Wang Yan,请你根据思维导图中的内容要点提示,写一封电子邮件邀请你校外教Mr Green参加班级英语派对。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:party n.派对;talk show 脱口秀;give performances节目表演
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m glad to tell you that
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Wang Yan
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Green,
I’m glad to tell you that we will have an English party in our class. In order to increase students’ interest of learning English. First of all, we plan to hold it in the music room. Then the beginning of the party time is three p.m. on the Friday of next week. It will continue for an hour and half an hour. Beside, there are many exciting activities on that day. We will have an English talk show. It is good to practice English speaking. Students will try their own best to show themselves. What’s more, we will give performances, such as singing English songs, telling English stories and so on. There is no doubt that we will have a good time.
In a word, I want to invite you to take part in it. We are all looking forward to seeing you on that day!
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Wang Yan
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍班级要举办一个英语派对;
第二步,介绍这个派对的具体时间,地点,目的以及内容;
第三步,最后邀请对方参加。
[亮点词汇]
① in order to为了
② plan to do sth计划做某事
③ in a word总之
[高分句型]
①In order to increase students’ interest of learning English.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②There is no doubt that we will have a good time.(同位语从句)2024年中考英语书面表达考前预测【广西专用】
征文投稿
演讲稿
话题作文
材料作文
电子邮件
书信作文
图表作文
最新模考、往年作文真题(23年)
1.艺术充满魅力,艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favourite art course”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学校开设的艺术课(如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等);
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况(如上课时间、活动等);
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:art course(艺术课),painting(n.绘画),calligraphy(n.书法),drama(n.戏剧)
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school.
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2.假设你是李华,你校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant):球类(Ball Games),演讲(Speech),器乐(Instrumental Music),故事(Story),音乐(Music),摄影(Photography)。请你结合自己的兴趣和特长,给教务处马老师写一封信,推荐自己担任其中一门活动课的小助手,并说明理由。
注意:
1.内容必须包含所给要点的信息;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4.词数80左右(短文句首已给出,不计入总词数)。
提示词:应聘 apply for;愿意帮助别人be willing to help others
Dear Mr. Ma,
My name is Li Hua, a student from Class Two. I want to apply for the teaching assistant of
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.你所在的学校社团正在举行新学期招聘活动。假如你是初三学生李华,请阅读以下两幅海报,写一封邮件给张老师,报名参加其中一个社团,邮件须包含以下内容:
(1)你会参加哪一个社团,并说明理由;
(2)简要阐述你对社团活动的期待。
debate 辩论 Chinese painting 中国画
注意:
1. 电子邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
3. 词数为80左右;
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.你校将举办英语文化节,现向全校学生征求活动意见。假如你是李华,请用英语给负责人写一封书信,从学校的活动意向表中推荐2—3个活动并阐明理由。
□sing English songs □read English novels □watch English movies □tell English stories □make English posters □perform English sitcoms
注意:(1)书信内容要点应选自上表,可适当发挥;
(2)词数: 80左右;
(3)书信开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions.
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I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
5.初中生活即将结束,你一定参加过各种伴随着你成长的社团,如篮球队、合唱团等。请以“My Favorite Club at School”为题,写一篇英文短文,向校刊的School Life栏目投稿,介绍你最喜欢的社团。
注意:(1) 短文必须包括思维导图中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3) 词数:80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in.
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6.你所在学校的英语校报正在举行公开竞选。假如你是学生李华,请阅读竞选职位和要求,参与其中一个职位的竞选,并完成竞选演讲稿。
演讲稿须包含以下内容:
(1)你想要参与校报工作的原因;
(2)你想竞选哪个职位,并说明理由。
Job What to do
reporter write news articles/conduct interviews
photographer take photos
editor take charge of a section
secretary arrange meetings/take notes
注意:
1.演讲稿中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
3.词数80左右。
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7.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件,向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。
Presents Reasons
a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it
Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … …
注意:
(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数:80左右。
Dear Michael,
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Li Hua
8.假如你是李明,你们学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“An unforgettable ”为主题,开展征文活动,请你写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你最难忘的一次经历及感受。
要求:
1.请先将题目补全后再作答;
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3.词数 80词左右。
An Unforgettable
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9.呵护心灵,快乐成长。你校英语报正在举行以“心理健康(mental health)”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息,用英文写一篇倡议书投稿谈谈心理健康的重要性,提出改善建议,并表达你的祝愿。
注意:
(1)短文必须包括表格中的要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80—100。倡议书格式和首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Importance ● be connected with physical health ● influence one’s daily life
Ways to improve ● do sports ● build good relationships ● …
My hope ● …
Dear fellow students,
Mental health is important to everyone.
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10.在校 “劳动教育月” 期间,你校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home” 主题征文活动。请根据下表信息,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的至少两项家务以及你的感受。
What you often do at home What you have learned
◆cook meals ◆water flowers ◆wash the dishes ◆look after pets ◆take out the rubbish ◆… ◆life skills; ◆responsibility (责任); ◆…
注意:
(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当增加细节;
(2)词数:80-100;
(3)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
短文首句:I have always been a good helper at home.
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11.假如你是李华,你所在的村庄有幸荣获“中国美丽休闲乡村”的荣誉。为更好地服务游客,正在招募志愿者担任导游。请你根据以下提示,用英语给负责人赵先生写一封自荐信,报名成为一名志愿者导游。
写作要求:1.要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文流;
3.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Zhao,
I’m glad to hear that some volunteer guides are wanted in our village.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
12.假如你是李华,交换生Peter即将来你校学习,他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息,用英文写一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示词语: take part in , improve, benefit
提示问题: What club did you join
What did you do in the club
Why do you recommend the club
注意:
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2) 内容须包含以上内容,可适当发挥;
(3) 词数:80-100词。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school!
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Yours,
Li Hua
13.假定你是校英文报记者李平。你校以“Fly My English Dream”为主题的英语节在昨天结束。请你写一篇英语短文对此次活动进行报道。
内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;
(2)主要活动;
(3)同学们的反响。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(2)词数:80—100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
The English Festival Takes Off at Our School
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14.良好的时间管理能力能够帮助我们更好地规划生活,使我们的时间得到充分利用,提高学习效率。但现在很多同学无法高效管理时间以致影响了学习。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法。内容提示:
Manage your time well A task that you failed to finish Reasons and results
Your suggestions: 1) keep away from... 2)...
注意:(1)短文必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
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假如你是Joe,你所在学校将在学期结束前举办开放日,邀请家长了解校园文化生活。下面是一份活动安排。请给校方写一封邮件,针对方案中的一项你认为需要修改或完善的内容,谈谈你的想法和建议。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(2)词数:80—100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Open Day Program
Parents arrive; look at notice board 2:00 p.m.
Visit classroom and observe one lesson 2:20 p.m.
Watch art performance 3:00 p.m.
Meet the teachers 3: 30 p.m.
Look at display board for high schools 4:00 p.m.
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初中的学习即将结束。你所在的学校正在筹备毕业典礼(graduation ceremony),部分学生将有机会在毕业典礼上演讲,演讲的主题是“我和我的校园”。假如你是Joe,请从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等中选择一项内容,结合自己的经历,写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你的感受,给出你的建议。演讲稿开头已经写好。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(2)词数:80—100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
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17.学校为下学期“Love English, Show Myself”的英语节活动,向全校师生征集活动建议,同时希望师生利用寒假时间完成必要的活动准备。假设你是初三学生李华,请根据以下要求写一封邮件给学校负责活动的王老师,邮件须包含以下内容:
(1)你是否会参加英语节的展示或比赛,并简述理由;
(2)请从下列四种选项中为初三年级挑选一种活动形式,说明原因并就寒假中初三学生参加该项活动可做的准备,提出你的建议。
课本剧表演 (text-based drama show) 影视配音 (movie dubbing show)
歌唱比赛 (singing competition) 演讲比赛(speech contest)
注意:
1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄本卷材料不得分。词数80左右。
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Yours,
Li Hua
18.中国是有着悠久的历史和光辉灿烂的传统文化的文明古国,拥有着很多的传统节日,如春节、元宵节、中秋节、龙舟节、重阳节……。请以“I like…best”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你喜欢的传统节日。
内容包括:
1. 补充完整题目;
2. 节日的基本信息(如时间、习俗、活动、意义等);
3. 你喜欢这个节日的原因。
写作要求:
1. 内容包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得透露真实个人信息;
3. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:
春节 Spring Festival 元宵节 Lantern Festival 中秋节 Mid Autumn Festival
龙舟节 Dragon Boat Festival 重阳节 Double Ninth Festival 庆祝 celebrate
I like ________ best
There are many different kinds of traditional festivals in China.
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19.在校园生活和家庭生活中,我们经常会遇到一些困难。在克服这些困难的过程中,我们收获了解决问题的经验且能力也在逐步提升。你校英文报正在开展“Difficulties Help Me Grow Up”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 介绍你曾遇到过的一个困难;
2. 你是如何面对并战胜它的;
3. 克服困难后你的收获。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:get over克服
Difficulties Help Me Grow Up
Everyone meets difficulties on the way to success.
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20.初中的学习即将结束,你有想过自己要读一所什么样的高中吗?为了让同学们更明确自己的学习目标,学校英语广播站将征集以“My dream high school”为主题的征文稿件,请你写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要点:1.你梦想中的学校外观;
2.你向往的学校生活及原因(如课程设置、校园活动、人际关系);
3.你的期待。
写作要求:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称:
3.词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:beautiful(美丽的);fresh(新鲜的),activity(活动),come true(实现)
My dream high school
I’m a student in Grade 9. Now I’m working hard in order to enter my dream high school.
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21.现在我们进入了后疫情时代,人们在“阳康”之后比以前更加注重身心健康。你所就读的学校公众号以“How to keep healthy”为题向全校进行征稿,请你写一份宣传稿。
内容包括:
(1)描述一项你最喜欢的运动以及你喜欢它的原因。
(2)就如何保持身心健康给同学提一些建议。
(3)呼吁同学要积极锻炼身体和要以乐观的心态面对生活。
作文要求:
(1)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
How to keep healthy
I think being in good health is important after being caught by COVID-19.
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22.我们的点滴成长和进步都离不开家长的细心照顾和支持,老师的辛勤教诲和鼓励,以及同学和朋友对我们的帮助。请根据以下的提示信息,以“The Person I Want to Thank Most”为题,写一篇英语短文来表达你的感激之情。内容包括:
1.你要感谢的人是谁
2.感谢的原因是什么
3.你打算如何用行动回报
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.短文应包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:remember记得 helpful有帮助的 be thankful to对……存感激
The Person I Want to Thank Most
In my life, a lot of people have helped me.
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23.每个人都有自己的独特之处,我们要学会欣赏自己,努力成为理想中的样子!为此你校“暖心树洞”社团开展了以“A Real Me, A Better Me”为题的征文活动。假如你是李华,现请你根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 你的基本信息(如年龄、体貌、性格等);
2. 你的“闪光点”(至少列举两点,如学习、运动、文明礼仪或助人为乐等其中两点);
3. 你需要改进的地方。
写作要求:
1. 内容包括写作要点所给信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露真实的姓名及校名;
4. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:shortcoming (缺点、不足),improve (改进、提升)
A Real Me, A Better Me
My name is Li Hua.
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24.你校英文周刊开设了中国传统文化专栏,正以“My favourite Chinese traditional festival”为题征稿,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.节日名称;
2.节日时间;
3.庆祝方式;
4.你过节时的感受。
写作要求:
1.将节日名称补充在首句;
2.包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4.词数80左右。
参考词汇:lunar calendar (n.农历), celebrate (v.庆祝), Spring Festival (春节), Mid-Autumn Festival (中秋节), get together (聚在一起), meaningful (adj.有意义的)
My favourite Chinese traditional festival
My favourite Chinese traditional festival is
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25.为提高同学们学习英语的兴趣,班级决定举办一个英语派对。假如你是Wang Yan,请你根据思维导图中的内容要点提示,写一封电子邮件邀请你校外教Mr Green参加班级英语派对。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:party n.派对;talk show 脱口秀;give performances节目表演
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m glad to tell you that
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Wang Yan