2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题(安徽专用)（含解析）

书面表达15篇(安徽名校真题)
1．（2024·安徽合肥·二模）假如你是李辉，你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的英语作文比赛。请你用英文写一则活动通知，内容包括：
1.介绍活动目的；
2.说明参赛要求（主题、字数……）。
注意：
1.词数80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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School English Newspaper
【答案】例文
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
In order to draw attention of saving food from more students, our school English Newspaper plans to hold a competition with the theme of “Acting together to save food”.
To attend the competition, you are supposed to write an English article which is centered around saving food. You should write more than 100 words. What’s more, you should give some true examples in order to tell the different ways of saving food.
You need to hand in your articles before this Sunday. You can send your paper to your English teacher or send an e-mail to our newspaper. Your early articles will be highly expected.
School English Newspaper
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一则通知；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动目的；
第二步，介绍参赛要求。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to 为了
②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
③more than 超过
④hand in 提交
[高分句型]
To attend the competition, you are supposed to write an English article which is centered around saving food.（which引导的定语从句）
2．（2024·安徽安庆·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David写邮件告诉你，他最近有点沉迷于网络，向你寻求帮助。请你结合下表中的信息，给David回封邮件指出沉迷网络的危害并提出建议。
Problems grades, health, relationship, …
Advice books, exercise, talk, …
注意：
(1)短文须包含上表中的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和所在的学校。
(3)词数80-100。
参考词汇：convenience (n. 便利) destroy (v. 破坏)
Dear David,
I am so glad to hear from you. As your best friend, I’m sorry to hear that you have lost in the Internet and you have wasted a lot of time. I’m so worried about you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I look forward to your good news. Please write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear David,
I am so glad to hear from you. As your best friend, I’m sorry to hear that you have lost in the Internet and you have wasted a lot of time. I’m so worried about you.
As we all know, computers are very important in our daily life. They bring convenience to us. However, spending too much time on them will affect our life. For example, the grades will go down, and using computers too much does harm to your health. What’s worse, it may destroy your relationship with your family.
In my opinion, you should exercise more and read more meaningful books instead. You can also go for a walk in the park to enjoy nature. Have a talk with your parents. They’re always behind you. I hope my advice can work out.
I look forward to your good news. Please write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主体时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明态度。对David沉迷网络感到抱歉和担心；
第二步，呈现问题。依照表格给出的沉迷游戏出现的问题——成绩下降、危害健康、破坏家庭关系等均要一一阐述；
第三步，提出建议。依照表格提出的防止沉迷游戏的建议——读有意义的书、锻炼身体、和父母交谈等均要一一阐述；
第四步，书写结语。期待收到David的好消息。
[亮点词汇]
①affect our life影响我们的生活
②go down下降
③destroy your relationship破坏我们的关系
[高分句型]
①For example, the grades will go down, and using computers too much does harm to your health.（一般将来时will do结构；动名词作主语）
3．（2024·安徽合肥·二模）假定你是李辉，你所在学校上周进行了一次关于和谐校园的问卷调查，请结合所给图示写一篇调查报告向校英文报School Life栏目投稿。
要点如下：
1. 描述结果；2. 分析原因；3. 提供对策。
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不可出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 词数80-100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：harmonious school (和谐校园)
A Survey on Harmonious School
Last week, our school did a survey on harmonious school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文：
A Survey on Harmonious School
Last week, our school did a survey on harmonious school. The survey suggests that three quarters of the students think our school is harmonious, and the rest don’t think so. The students who disagree have two reasons: bad habits and poor communication.
In our school, a small number of students have some bad habits, such as smoking. I think the school should protect them from these bad habits with the help of their parents.
Poor communication can lead to an inharmonious school as well. The students who are not good at expressing themselves seldom get along well with others. They had better improve their speaking skills and think twice before saying something.
It’s our duty to build our school a more harmonious one. Let’s do our best!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：文章需包括所有要点，可适当补充，注意行文连贯，无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述问卷调查结果；
第二步，从“不良习惯”的角度分析并提出对策；
第三步，从“不善交流”的角度分析并提出对策；
第四步，呼吁大家一起行动。
[亮点词汇]
①the rest剩余的部分
②protect sb. from sth.保护某人免受……伤害
③as well也
[高分句型]
①The students who disagree have two reasons: bad habits and poor communication.（定语从句）
②It’s our duty to build our school a more harmonious one. （it作形式主语）
4．（2024·安徽合肥·二模）初中阶段你参与过的印象最深刻的体育比赛是哪一次呢？某英文报正在举行题为An Unforgettable Match的征文比赛。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文参赛。
1. 时间和地点；
2. 比赛的过程；
3. 收获和感受。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80~100。
An Unforgettable Match
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【答案】One possible version
An Unforgettable Match
The most unforgettable match in my school life is the football match which was held last term in the school
playground. My class played against Class Five.
Although I wasn’t the football player in the team, I watched the whole match. At the beginning, both the two teams played well. My class scored first and we were so excited. However, players from Class Five were strong-minded and got a point very soon. Nervous but hopeful, we kept cheering our players on. Finally, our class team scored again when the match almost came to an end.
The good result came from our hard work and strong will. We should always keep trying and fighting.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍体育比赛的时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述比赛的过程；
第三步，最后表达收获和感受。
[亮点词汇]
① at the beginning一开始
② keep doing sth一直做某事
③ come to an end结束
[高分句型]
①The most unforgettable match in my school life is the football match which was held last term in the school playground.（定语从句）
②Although I wasn’t the football player in the team, I watched the whole match.（让步状语从句）
5．（2024·安徽六安·一模）中考结束后的暑假，你有时间去参加各类社会实践活动。如去当一回社区志愿者，奉献一份爱心；如来一场citywalk，感受城市的脉搏，又如去找一份part-time job，积累工作的经验，又如……你最想参加什么社会实践活动？请陈述你的理由。
注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
In the coming summer vacation, I plan to do some social activities._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
In the coming summer vacation, I plan to do some social activities.
I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself. I can do many things. For example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out leaflets and put up notices.
I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求介绍自己最想参加的社会实践活动，并讲述理由，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题“暑假打算做一些社会活动”；
第二步，介绍自己最想参加的社会活动及理由；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up打扫
②at the same time同时
③hand out分发
④put up张贴
[高分句型]
①I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful. (宾语从句)
6．（2024·安徽滁州·二模）某英文报征稿《一次难忘的旅行》，请用英语描述你曾经经历的一次旅行，讲述地点、时间、人物和旅行的目的，讲述旅行过程中一、两个印象深刻的活动或经历。并谈谈这次旅行给你带来的收获或启示。
要求：
1.词数80~100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.请在标题补充地点后，展开写作。
An Unforgettable Trip to ________
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【答案】例文：
An Unforgettable Trip to Beijing
Last summer, I had an unforgettable trip to Beijing, the capital of China. The journey was filled with cultural exploration and personal growth.
I went to Beijing with my parents during the summer vacation. Our main purpose was to learn more about China’s history and culture. One of the most memorable experiences was visiting the Forbidden City. Walking in it, I felt a deep sense of respect for the wisdom of ancient Chinese.
This trip taught me a lot about China’s history and culture. It also inspired me to love our country. The experience left a lasting impression on me, and I will always cherish the memories of this trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题目要求进行展开，适当添加细节，突出写作重点，注意上下文联系紧密。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍自己曾经经历的一次旅行。
第二步，详细介绍活动经历。
第三步，讲述这次旅行给自己带来的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with充满
②during the summer vacation在暑假期间
③a deep sense of深刻的感觉
[高分句型]
①Our main purpose was to learn more about China’s history and culture. (动词不定式作表语)
7．（2024·安徽池州·三模）假如你是李辉，你班正在举行一个名为“家的记忆”的主题班会，请你回忆发生在你家里的一件有意义的事情，按照下图提示写一个主题发言。
注意：1.短文须包含上图所有的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名：
3.词数80~100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Family Memories
Hi, everyone. I am very happy to share some of my memories about my home with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Family Memories
Hi, everyone. I am very happy to share some of my memories about my home with you.
Last Sunday, my grandma celebrated her 80th birthday. All of my family came together and celebrated my grandma’s birthday on their own way.
My father bought a big cake, and “Happy Birthday” in Chinese was written on it. My grandma really liked the cake. My mother cooked some of my grandma’s favourite dishes, like dumplings and tomatoes with eggs. She also prepared a bowl of noodles for my grandma, which means long life in Chinese culture. My grandma was moved and said thanks to my mum. I made a picture book for my grandma. I put all the pictures of our family in it. She read the picture book again and again, and said she was really lucky to have such a happy family. I agreed with my grandma. Family brought happiness to us. It is also the place to make us forget all the terrible memories
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述事情发生的时间；
第二步，具体阐述发生了什么；
第三步，最后表达你的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① prepare...for为……准备
② again and again一次又一次
③ agree with sb同意某人的看法
[高分句型]
She also prepared a bowl of noodles for my grandma, which means long life in Chinese culture.（定语从句）
8．（2024·安徽淮南·二模）假如你是李华，你的班级将于本周六上午组织一次关于“中国剪纸”的学习活动。请结合下图图示信息，用英语写一封邮件，邀请你的外国朋友Peter参加。
注意：
1. 邮件须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80~100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Peter,
How is it going _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our paper-cutting activity. We can learn about paper-cutting and learn to do it through this activity.
The activity will take place at the School Library Hall and start at 9:00 a.m. this Saturday. First, we will learn about paper-cutting and its culture. Then, we can see a lot of paper-cutting works in different shapes. Next, some teachers and students who are good at making paper-cutting will teach us how to make it. Finally, we can make our own paper-cutting works.
Would you like to come If so, please meet me at 8:30 a.m. on Saturday at the school gate.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容邀请外国朋友参加关于“中国剪纸”的学习活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写作目的；
第二步，详细介绍关于“中国剪纸”的学习活动的相关信息；
第三步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②take place发生
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
Next, some teachers and students who are good at making paper-cutting will teach us how to make it. (who引导的定语从句)
9．（2024·安徽阜阳·二模）你遇到过困难或麻烦事吗？当别人帮助你的时候，你的内心会觉得温暖。请以“Warmth comes into my heart”为题，写一篇短文，记叙你记忆中的一件暖心事。
要点如下：
1. 你遇到了什么困难或麻烦事；
2. 他/她是如何帮助你的；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不可出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80～100（题目已写好，不计入总词数）。
Warmth comes into my heart
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【答案】例文：
Warmth in My Heart
In my memory, I have met some problems in my life. However, there is one thing that left a deep impression on me and I still remember it now.
I had a few problems with my English when I was in the first year of junior high school. Unluckily, I had a bad illness that winter and I stayed in hospital for one month. I had trouble in learning English. Having heard of it, my English teacher came to the hospital to help me after school. One day, it snowed heavily, and the road was covered with ice and snow. But he didn’t give up. With the help of him, I was brave to face my difficulties in English and then I made great progress in it.
Now I am confident about studying English and I still feel warm in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己有一件事记忆深刻；
第二步，具体介绍这件事情的经历；
第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① have trouble in doing sth做某事有困难
② hear of听说
③ with the help of在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
① I am confident about studying English and I still feel warm in my heart.（and连接的并列句）
② there is one thing that left a deep impression on me. （that引导的定语从句）
10．（2024·安徽芜湖·二模）假如你是李华，你们学校正在以“How to Face Problems”为题进行征文。请根据以下内容提示及要求，写一篇短文。
内容提示：1.勇敢面对问题，不放弃；
2.认真对待问题，不紧张；
3.找出原因，解决问题；
4.……
要求：1.短文必须包含以上信息；
2.内容可适当发挥，以保证内容丰富与完整；
3.文章不可出现真实的人名、地名及校名；
4.词数：80—100。作文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Face Problems
There are always problems in our life. We must learn to face them. Here are my opinions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Facing problems correctly means we are on half way to success.
【答案】例文
How to Face Problems
There are always problems in our life. We must learn to face them. Here are my opinions.
First of all, it’s normal to have problems. We should face problems bravely and never give up, so that we won’t be afraid of them any more. Secondly, we should take the problems seriously and not run away from them. When we are calm and not nervous, the problems will be solved gradually. In addition, before solving the problems, we need to find the cause of the problem. Finally, when we meet problems that can’t be solved, we shouldn’t keep them to ourselves. On the contrary, we should ask our parents or teachers for help.
Facing problems correctly means we are on half way to success.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍有问题是很常见的；
第二步，根据提示以及适当补充介绍如何去面对问题。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②be afraid of害怕
③in addition此外
④on the contrary相反
[高分句型]
①We should face problems bravely and never give up, so that we won’t be afraid of them any more.（目的状语从句）
②When we are calm and not nervous, the problems will be solved gradually. （时间状语从句）
11．（2024·安徽阜阳·一模）一学期很快就要结束了，英语老师就同学们这一学期在学习和生活中出现的问题给出了一些解决的方法。下图就是这周你们学校对100名学生进行问卷调查的结果。请你结合调查结果并以“How do the students solve their problems ”为题写一篇英语短文，在下周的英语主题班会上展示你的佳作。
提示：
要求：
1. 短文必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
How do the students solve their problems
Our school asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文：
How do the students solve their problems
Our school asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results.
52% of students talk to their friends when they have problems. 22% of them ask their teachers or parents for help. And 17% solve problems by themselves. And 9% choose other ways to solve their problems.
For me, asking the teachers or parents for help is the best way to solve problems. I was too shy to make friends when I was in Grade 7. So I was upset. I told my parents the problem. They advised me to join some clubs and taught me how to make friends during activities. From the experience, I know that sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. I believe that as long as we work hard, we will find a solution to the problem. I hope we can get better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容陈述问卷调查结果，并向大家介绍你解决问题的方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，陈述问卷调查结果；
第三步，介绍自己解决问题的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb for help向某人求助
②choose to do选择做某事
[高分句型]
52% of students talk to their friends when they have problems. (when引导的时间状语从句)
12．（2024·安徽滁州·二模）近年来，春季游学一直受到热捧。假设你们学校今年继续开展春季游学活动，你作为班长，需要在游学前的班级动员大会上作发言。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写篇发言稿。
提示：
要求：
1. 发言稿须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
3. 词数80~100（演讲稿标题、开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Spring Study Tour
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to tell you that we’ll take part in a Spring Study Tour. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Spring Study Tour
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to tell you that we’ll take part in a Spring Study Tour. Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, we should make preparations for the study tour carefully, such as wearing school uniforms, comfortable sports shoes, taking a backpack and so on. Secondly, we make sure to follow the following rules. Safety must come first, we mustn’t take action alone without asking. And then we should take notes while visiting some museums. And what’s more, we’ll hold the study tour because it can not only broaden our horizons, but it can also let us learn about the traditional culture of our country.
All in all, I’m sure the study tour will be an unforgettable experience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Spring Study Tour”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头；
第二步，介绍春季游学的注意事项，包括准备工作以及游学所需遵循的规则；说明游学的好处。
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①make preparations for为……做准备
②come first排在首位
③broaden one’s horizons拓宽某人视野
④all in all总之
⑤unforgettable难忘的
[高分句型]
①And what’s more, we’ll hold the study tour because it can not only broaden our horizons, but it can also let us learn about the traditional culture of our country. （because引导的原因状语从句）
13．（2024·安徽·二模）积极的心态对于我们非常重要。假定你是李华，英语课上老师组织了主题为“The Power of Positive Thinking”的讨论和分享。请结合以下要点，通过一件你自己的具体事例，谈一谈积极心态对于你的帮助并分享你对如何调整心态、积极乐观看待事物的建议。
要点：
1. 一件具体事例
2. 两点你的建议
注意：
1. 短文需回答以上全部问题，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80~100。
The Power of Positive Thinking
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【答案】例文
The Power of Positive Thinking
Positive thinking plays an important role in our life. It can help us a lot. Once, I failed a math test. Instead of feeling hopeless, I thought, “This is a chance to learn and improve!” I sought help from my teacher and practiced hard. My next score was better. Positive thinking gives me the strength to face challenges and find solutions.
To keep a positive thinking, I suggest focusing on progress, not just results. Praising your effort helps build confidence. Also, surrounding yourself with supportive people who encourage you during tough times is important. Remember, every problem is a step towards growth. Stay hopeful and believe in yourself!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题目要求，结合自身经历完成写作，注意突出写作重点，无单词拼写错误和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题；
第二部，讲述自己一段关于“积极思考”的经历及自己的感受；
第三步，讲述自己的两点建议并总结全文，再次呼应主题。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替，而不是
②sought (seek的过去式) help from在某人那寻求帮助
③focus on专注在
[高分句型]
①To keep a positive thinking, I suggest focusing on progress, not just results. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②Also, surrounding yourself with supportive people who encourage you during tough times is important. (定语从句)
14．（2024·安徽芜湖·二模）艺术能激发人们的想象力和创造力，也能深化人们对生活和世界的理解，让生活更加美好。假如你是李华，你的国外朋友Jack向你了解中国文化，请你写一封邮件回复，推荐一种中国艺术，如诗歌、音乐、绘画、剪纸、戏剧等，结合自己的兴趣推荐并说明推荐的原因。
提示：
1.短文须包括上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与地名；
3.词数：80—100（开头已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese culture. Chinese art can be quite surprising. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Jack,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese culture. Chinese art can be quite surprising. One of the traditional Chinese art forms is paper cutting. People use scissors to cut paper into different shapes and patterns.
In Chinese culture, paper cuttings are often used as decorations during festivals and celebrations because they are believed to bring good luck and drive away evil spirits. I really enjoy paper cutting because the designs are incredibly beautiful and it is also a way to express creativity.
Paper-cutting has a long history and it represents Chinese culture. I hope more people can learn about it and appreciate its beauty. I feel proud of this traditional art form and I hope we can help preserve it for future generations.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中给出的关键信息，写电子邮件推荐一种中国艺术。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，推荐一种中国艺术；
第二步，谈谈自己对这种艺术的看法；
第三步，谈谈推荐这种艺术的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional Chinese art forms传统中国艺术形式
②drive away驱赶
[高分句型]
In Chinese culture, paper cuttings are often used as decorations during festivals and celebrations because they are believed to bring good luck and drive away evil spirits.（because引导原因状语从句）
15．（2024·安徽铜陵·一模）为了丰富学生的假期生活，让学生学会自己规划安排生活，学校开展了题为“Happy Summer Holiday”的征文比赛，请根据以下提示写一篇短文。
提示：
1.学习活动安排及原因；
2.娱乐活动安排及原因。
注意：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息姓名、校名和地名等.；
4.词数80～100。
Happy Summer Holiday
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【答案】例文
Happy Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is a golden time for relaxation and self-development. During this break, I plan to balance my time between learning and entertainment.
Firstly, I will allocate a significant portion of my time to learning. I intend to revise the subjects I have studied during the school year and preview the ones that will be taught in the next semester. This is crucial as it helps me consolidate my knowledge and prepare for the upcoming academic year. Besides, I have scheduled some entertainment activities such as visiting museums, going to the beach, and spending time with friends and family. These activities not only provide me with an opportunity to unwind but also enrich my life experiences.
In conclusion, my summer holiday will be a blend of learning and entertainment, ensuring that I make the most of this precious time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意文章要包含学习和娱乐活动两方面的安排，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直切主题。通过说明暑假是自我发展和放松的黄金时期来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述学习活动和娱乐活动的安排及原因；
第三步，书写结语。说明自己的暑假将是学习和娱乐的结合。
[亮点词汇]
①self-development自我发展
②balance平衡
③significant相当数量的
④crucial至关重要的
⑤not only...but also...不仅……而且……
⑥in conclusion总而言之
[高分句型]
①I intend to revise the subjects I have studied during the school year and preview the ones that will be taught in the next semester. （定语从句）
②In conclusion, my summer holiday will be a blend of learning and entertainment, ensuring that I make the most of this precious time.（宾语从句）