2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项读后续写高分技巧 讲义-
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高中英语读后续写高分技巧
技巧一 重视构成句子的成分
生动形象的句子成分--主语
◎用并列连词and或or连接两个或多个主语
Touching or passing food or eating with your lefthand is to be avoided.
要避免接触或传递食物,或者用左手吃食物
〇用定语来修饰主语
Players on a sports team may feel driven to playharder in order to help the team win.
球队的参赛者可能会感到他们是在被迫为了帮助球队获胜更努力地参加比赛
◎描述人物、地点用带同位语的主语
Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel PeacePrize, dedicated the majority of her life tohelping the poorest of the poor in India, thusgaining her the name “Saint of Gutters”
诺贝尔和平奖获得者特蕾莎修女一生的大部分时间都致力于帮助印度最贫穷的人，因此获得了“排水沟圣人”的称号。
〇用带有宾语和状语的非谓语动词作主语
To play football on the soft lawn in the sunnyspring is a great experience.
阳光明媚的春天，在柔软的草坪上踢足球是种很好的体验。
生动形象的句子成分--谓语
〇用并列连词连接两个以上平行的谓语动词
I stopped the car, ordered all kids out and toldthem to meet me up ahead.
我停下车，命令所有孩子们都出去，告诉他们到前面接我。
〇平行的谓语动词可以接各自的宾语
I don't want to wake up one day and havenothing but a pile of pictures and notes.
我不希望有一天醒来，只有一堆图片和笔记
生动形象的句子成分--宾语
Obring,hand,lend,mail,offer,owe,pass, paypost,read,return, send,sell,serve, show, take ，teach, tell, throw, book, buy, choose, cookdraw, award, fetch, find, fix, get, make, picksave, sing,spare, prepare等动词可以接双宾语
The teacher gave the students a set of tests.
老师给学生们做了一系列测试。
Ocall,elect, choose, find, make, name, cut,beat, drive,get,lay,leave,paint, pull,push,set, tear, wish, believe, consider, feel,know,observe,prove，see,show，think等动词可以接复合宾语
Once, I saw the street lamps lighting up peopletrying to hide from the rain.
有一次，我看到街灯照亮了试图躲雨的人们。
〇谓语动词可以带有多个宾语
I was busy recording every incident, name andplace I came across.
我正忙着记录每一个事件，名字和我遇到的地方。
〇用复杂的结构作宾语
I still record ideas and quotations that strike mein books,or observations that are particularlymeaningful.
我仍然记录书中使我感兴趣的思想,语录或有特殊意櫨氌屡义的观感。
生动形象的句子成分--表语
◎作表语的名词可以接定语从句
All I remembered of the previous few days were the dull characterizations I had set down in my diary.
我所记得的前几天的事就是我在日记里的枯煤的描述。
◎作表语的形容词可以接宾语从句
Iwas sure my son would learn English in a couple of months.
我确信我的儿子将在两个月内学会英语，
〇作表语的名词常接介词短语作定语
The upper floor is a quiet zone with over athousand places for silent reading, and placeswhere you can sit and work with your owncomputer.
楼上是一个安静的区域,有超过一千个无声阅读的地方，也有你可以坐下来独自使用自己的电脑工作的地方。
生动形象的句子成分--定语
〇用不定式复合结构作定语
The library has lockers for students to store course literature.
图书馆有储物柜供学生存放课程文献:
〇用介词短语经作后置定语
I can still recall the excitement of being invitedto dance with the most attractive boy at the school party.
我还记得在学校聚会上被邀请和最有魅力的男孩跳舞时的兴奋。
〇用过去分词短语作后置定语
It's such a happy-looking library, paintedyellow, decorated with palm-tree stickers andsheltered from the Florida sun by its own roof.
这是一个看起来很快乐的图书馆,涂成黄色,用棕榈树贴纸装饰,屋顶还可以遮挡佛罗里达州的阳光。
生动形象的句子成分--状语
◎过去分词短语作状语,如:
Faced with pressure of study, senior high schoo)students should learn to relax themselves properly
面对学习压力,高中生应该学会适当放松自己
Founded in 1900,it is one of the most famousEnglish newspapers at home and abroad.
它创立于1900年,是国内外最著名的英文报纸
○现在分词短语作状语，如:
Living in an environment full of fierce competition.we, a generation born in the 9Os, are faced withmore difficulties, problems and competition.
生活在一个充满激烈竞争的环境中，我们出生于90年代的这代人，面临着更多的困难、问题和竞争。
People tend to eat in expensive restaurants andorder unusual food , believing that with more moneyin their pockets,it is absolutely reasonable to eatwhatever they like.
人们倾向于在昂贵的餐馆吃饭，点不寻常的食物,认为口袋里有更多的钱,想吃什么就吃什么是绝对合理的。
◎不定式短语作状语,如:
lo stop such uncivilized phenomena from happeningagain, I think more strict rules should be made and carried out.
为了防止这种不文明现象再次发生,我认为应该制定和执行更严格的规则。
技巧二 重视使用高级词汇
用文雅的词汇替换一般词汇
◎be supposed to 替换 should
The applicants should be an outgoing person.The applicants are supposed to be an outgoingperson.
申请者需要是一个外向的人。
contribute to 替换 be helpful/useful
My skill in communication and teamwork arehelpful to my application for the job.My skill in communication and teamwork
contribute to my application for the iob.
我的沟通和团队合作能力有助于我申请这份工作。
◎the majority of 替换 most
Most of the students prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.
The majority of the students prefer watching TY at home to going to the cinema.
大多数学生喜欢在家看电视而不是去电影院
◎apart from 替换and,also或except
Our club consists of paid staff and a small teamof unpaid volunteers.
Apart from paid staff, our club consists of a small team of unpaid volunteers.
除了带薪员工外,我们的俱乐部还包括一小队无薪志愿者。
增色的高级词汇--巧用评注、总括、衔接类副词或短语
恰当运用诸如 meanwhile,furthermore,fortunately, generally,besides, personally, worsestill, in addition, in a word, on the contrary, asis known to all, to tell you the truth, what'smore 等评注、总括、衔接类副词或短语,平时注意积累。如:
〇恰当运用meanwhile
To achieve the goal, we'll call on the school tocommunicate with each other in polite words.We should also behave ourselves and obeyschool rules.
To achieve the goal, we'll call on the schoo!to communicate with each otherinpolitewords. Meanwhile,we should behave ourselvesand obey school rules.为了实现这一目标,我们将呼吁学校用礼貌的语言相互交流。同时,我们应该遵守校规。
〇怡当运用besides 和 therefore
With the development of economy, people canafford to go abroad, More people are becominginterested in foreign cultures, They are eagerto visit other countries with their own eyes.With the development of economy, peoplecan afford to go abroad. Besides, more peopleare becoming interested in foreign cultures.Therefore, they are eager to visit them withtheir own eyes.
随着经济的发展,人们有能力出国。此外,越来越多的人对外国文化感兴趣。因此,他们渴望亲眼见识他们。
◎恰当运用 as a result 和 worse stillSo they become lazy and develop bad studyinghabits. This may kill their creative thinking.>As a result, they become lazy and developbad studying habits. Worse still, it may killtheir creative thinking.
结果,他们变得懒惰,养成了不良的学习习惯更糟糕的是,这可能会扼杀他们的创造性思维◎恰当运用 in conclusion
Being self-disciplined not only helps us improveourselves,but contributes to building upaharmonious and civilized society.
In conclusion, being self-disciplined not onlyhelps us improve ourselves, but contributes tobuilding up a harmonious and civilized society.
总之,自律不仅有助于我们提高自己,而且有助于建立一个和谐文明的社会。
◎恰当运用 to begin with, what's more 和 without doubt
After entering college, I intend to set newgoals in my studies until l succeed. It isnecessary for me to learn to live independently and I should do laundry and cleanup all bymyself.
To begin with, after entering college,Iintend to set new goals in my studies until Isucceed, What's more, it is necessary for me tolearn to live independently. Without doubt Ishould do laundry and clean-up all by myself.
首先,进入大学后,我打算在学业上设定新的目标,直到成功。更重要的是,我有必要学会独立生活。毫无疑问,我应该自己洗衣服和打扫卫生。
增色的高级词汇--巧用评注、总括、衔接类副词或短语
过渡词语将语义有机联系起来,是衔接前后语甸之间的纽带,使语义自然而然的由上文转人下文。过渡词语恰当用在两个内容的接驳处,起到承上启下的衔接作用。
表示举例(for example，for instance,such as...，take...for example等),如:
Take myself for example, Because I am busy instudving on weekdays, I have little time tolook after my parents , which makes me guilty.
以我自己为例。因为我平日忙于学习,几乎没有时间照顾父母,这让我感到内疚。
What you receive may be much different fromwhat is in your mind, for instance, strangecolor, wrong size or bad quality.
你收到的东西可能与你想象中的东西有很大不同,例如,奇怪的颜色、错误的尺寸或糟糕的质量
表示比较(be similar to, similarly, in contrast,compared with/to等),如:Luckilv, she was not badly injured and we senther to the nearest pared with theescaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
幸运的是,她伤势不重,我们把她送到了最近的医院。与逃跑的司机相比,我为自己的作法感到骄傲。
Then why should we have regrets for whathappened in the past Similarly, we should notattach too much importance to the future.
那么我们为什么要为过去发生的事情感到遗憾呢 同样,我们也不应过分重视未来。i
表示目的(for this reason, for this purpose, sothat, in order to, so as to等),如:具林
Most importantly, I found every chance to speak bravely so as to build up my confidence.
最重要的是,我努力寻找每一个勇敢发言的机会,以建立我的信心。
We must attach great importance to protectingthe environment so that we'll have a betterhometown in the future.
我们必须高度重视保护环境,以便将来有一个更好的家乡。
表示罗列增加(Firstly,secondly，thirdly,onthe one hand... on the other hand, what'smore, in addition等),如:
On (the) one hand, it's an occasion for people toknow about the western culture; on the otherhand, it's also an enjoyable chance for friends toget together to promote their friendship.
一方面,这是人们了解西方文化的机会;另一方面,这也是朋友们聚在一起增进友谊的好机会
表示时间顺序(afterwards,immediately，atthat moment, meanwhile, not...until等),如:
On the morning, we'll first show you aroundour campus. Afterwards, you will be led intothe auditorium, where a group of Chinesestudents will meet you.早上,我们将首先带你参观我们的校园。之后,你将被带进礼堂,一群中国学生将在那里与你见面。 表示解释说明(in this case,moreover, furthermore ,in fact, actually等),如:
He,in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi, introducedmodern technologies and ideas to China. Thatopened our eyes to the world.In fact, heinspires me to major in English in college and tobe a bridge between China and the world.他在《海国图志》一书中向中国介绍了现代技术和思想。这打开了我们对世界的眼界。事实上,他激励我在大学主修英语,成为中国与世界之间的桥梁。
表示概括归纳(in a word,in conclusion，in brief, on the whole,as we all know, as hasbeen stated等),如:In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging toeveryone.
总之,微笑是属于每个人的一种语言。
On the whole, it is a good thing to studyabroad. However, one must not lose sight ofthe disadvantages.
总的来说,出国留学是一件好事。然而,我们不能忽视有些缺点。
升华的句式结构--变换句子的语态、语序
◎变换语态，如:
We will appreciate fyour impression of ourschool as the closing of the interview.
Your impression of our school will be appreciated as the closing of the interview.
面试结束后,我们将感谢您对我们学校的印象。
The government should take measures to stop the water pollution.
Measures should be taken by the government to stop the water pollution.
政府应采取措施制止水污染。
We should make good use of time to learn our lessons well.
Time should be made good use of to learn ourlessons well.
应该好好利用时间学好我们的课程。
We should pay enough attention to improving our pronunciation.
Enough attention should be paid by us to improving our pronunciation.
我们应该加以足够注意去改善我们的发音。
◎转换语序,如:
He little realizes how important this meeting is.
Little does he realize how important this meeting is.
他几乎没有意识到这次会议有多么重要。
We had no sooner reached the airport than theplane took off.
No sooner had we reached the airport than the plane took off.
我们一到达机场,飞机就起飞了。
When he returned home he realized what had happened.
>Only when he returned home did he realizewhat had happened.
他回家后才意识到发生了什么事。
I found it difficult to work out the problem, so I decided to ask Tom for advice.
So difficult did I find it to work out theproblem that I decided to ask Tom for advice.
我发现解决这个问题太难了，所以决定向汤姆请教。
A young man sat by the window with a magazine in his hand.
By the window sat a young man with a magazine in his hand.
窗边坐着一个年轻人,手里拿着一本杂志。
升华的句式结构---前置状语、表语等句子成分
◎把句子中的表语前置,以状语的形式开头,如:
I was sad and annoyed,but triedito calm(myself down and had a talk with him later.
Though sad and annoyed,ol tried to calmmyself down and later had a talk with him.
尽管伤心和烦恼,我还是努力让自己平静下来，后来和他谈了谈。s
Our apartment is large, fully-equipped sandlocated in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood.So our apartment meets all their needs.
Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood ,our large fully-equipped apartment meets altheir needs.
我们的大型设备齐全的公寓位于一个美丽而安静的社区,满足了他们的所有需求。
It is beneficial and importantto develop apositive attitude towards life,
More importantly, it is beneficial to develop a positive attitude towards life.
更重要的是,养成积极的生活态度是有益的。
Though some people may seem weak, they are actually strong in mind.
Weak though some people may seem, they are actually strong in mind.
虽然有些人看起来很软弱,但实际上他们内心很强大。
〇把句子中的部分主语前置,以状语的形式开头
如口:
My classmates and I will do what we can tomake your stay in China enjoyable.
Together with my classmates, will do what I can to make your stay in China enjoyable.
和我的同学们一起,我将尽我所能让你们在中国过得愉快。
升华的句式结构--巧用同位语、插入语
◎使用同位语(多用于人物、地点介绍),如:
Mr. Shao is our English teacher. He is 1.75meters tall and weighs 75 kilograms. He wasborn in Hebei Province in October, 1981.
Mr. Shao, our English teacher, is 1. 75meters with the weight of 75 kilograms, whowas born in Hebei Province in October, 1981.
邵先生,我们的英语老师,身高1.75米,体重75公斤,1981年10月出生于河北省。
Guilin is a famous international tourist city. It is well-known for its beautiful scenery.
Guilin, a famous international tourist city, is well-known for its beautiful scenery.
桂林是著名的国际旅游城市，以其美丽的风景而闻名。
◎使用插人语,如:
Jack is a good teacher. He teaches well at school.
Jack is a good teacher; that is to say, heteaches well at school.
杰克是个好老师,也就是说,他在学校教得很好。
I enjoy staying with young students, who arealways energetic and have new ideas.
Personally,l enjoy staying with youngstudents, who are always energetic and havenew ideas.
As for me,l enjoy staying with youngstudents, who are always energetic and havenew ideas.
就我个人而言,我喜欢和年轻的学生呆在一起，他们总是精力充沛,有新的想法。
升华的句式结构--转换成复合句
转换成状语从句.如:The world is becoming a global village, English isgetting more and more important.
As the world is becoming a global villageEnglish is getting more and more important.
随着世界成为一个地球村,英语变得越来越重
The most important thing to success lies in doing every simple thing well.
When it comes to the key to success, the most important thing lies in doing every simple thing well.
到成功的关键,最重要的是做好每一件简单的事情。
转换成定语从句,如:
The host family is made up of three people.Their flat is only two hundred meters awayfrom the school. You will be studying in thatschool.The host family, whose flat is only twohundred meters away from the school where youwill be studying, is made up of three people.
寄宿家庭由三个人组成,他们的公寓距离你将就读的学校只有200米。
Some people could be richer than us. Themedia have reported that.->As has been reported in the media, somepeople could be richer than us.
正如媒体报道的那样,有些人可能比我们更富有。
使用名词性从句,如:
I am writing to tell you about how studentsfrom different grades spend weekends with theirfamily.
我写信告诉你不同年级的学生如何与家人共度周末。
Initially, what I'm concerned about lies inwhether the major will be suitable for me.
最初,我关心的是这个专业是否适合我。
But the most important thing is that the numberof private cars should be put under control.
但最重要的是,应该控制私家车的数量
升华的句式结构--巧用独立主格结构
独立主格结构,如:
When the test'was finished, we began our holiday.
The test finished, we began our holiday.
考试结束了,我们开始了假期。
If weather permits, we will go on an outing to the beach tomorrow.
Weather permitting, we will go on an outing to the beach tomorrow.
如果天气允许,我们明天将去海滩郊游。
As the meeting went over, everyone tried to gohome carlier.
The meeting gone over,everyone tried to gohome earlier.
会议结束了,大家都想早点回家。
Because there was nothing else to do, we wenthome.
There being nothing else to do,we went home.
没有别的事可做,我们回家了。
Because her glasses were broken,she couldn't see the words on the blackboard.
Her glasses broken, she couldn't see thewords on the blackboard.
她的眼镜坏了,她看不清黑板上的字。
升华的句式结构--巧用 with 复合结构
with复合结构可以充当状语，表示方式，伴随,原因,结果,也可以作定语。with复合结构可以与相应的从句互换,写作时可灵活运用。
As the pace of modern life becomes faster andfaster,time is quite precious.
With the pace of modern life becoming fasterand faster , time is quite precious.
随着现代生活的节奏越来越快,时间非常宝贵。
Because many of Chinese idioms are widelyused in our daily life, a good knowledge ofthem contributes to better understanding bothspoken Chinese and written Chinese.
With many of Chinese idioms widely used in ourdaily life, a good knowledge of them contributes tobetter understanding both spoken Chinese andwritten Chinese.
随着许多中国成语在我们的日常生活中广泛使用,对它们的良好了解有助于更好地理解汉语口语和书面语。
A terrible accident happened yesterday，inwhich nine people were killed and almosteighty injured.
A terrible accident happened yesterday, withnine people killed and almost eighty injured.昨天发生了一起可怕的事故,9人死亡，近80人受伤。
技巧三 闪亮的特殊句式
通过点缀强调句、倒装句、省略句、祈使句、感叹句、反问句、谚语等来使写作语句更美,增加得分亮点。
点缀强调句,如:
It was with their help and support that I eventually overcame my shyness and built up confidence.
正是在他们的帮助和支持下,我终于克服了害羞,建立了信心。
As for my senior high school life, I do have anunforgettable experience.
至于我的高中生活,我确实有一段难忘的经历。
点缀倒装句，如:
Only by using our time more efficiently can we become a better learner.
只有更有效地利用时间,我们才能成为更好的学习者。
Now as a teacher, not only does she have richteaching experience to instruct all her studentsbut also she has published many books.
现在作为一名教师,她不仅有丰富的教学经验来指导所有的学生,而且还出版了许多书。
点缀省略句,如:
While cycling, don't forget the traffic lights.
骑自行车时,不要忘记红绿灯。
They learn French and we English.
他们学法语,我们学英语。
Someone has used my mobile phone, but I don't know who.
有人用过我的手机,但我不知道是谁。
After long hours of work, Mother should take a rest but she won't.
长时间工作后,妈妈应该休息,但她不会。
A sound must be heard,a colour seen, a flavour tasted.
必须听到声音,看到颜色,品尝味道。
点缀感叹句,如:
How happy I am to learn that your family will be my host family!
得知你家将成为我的寄宿家庭,我真高兴!
What a pleasant surprise to get your email today!
今天收到你的电子邮件真是一个惊喜!
How time flies! We will take the college entrance examination in 30 days.
时间过得真快!我们将在30天后参加高考。
点缀反问句，如:
Personally,it is of great benefit to join in thecampaign and form a good habit of clearing theenvironment. And it is essential to start withourselves and start from now. Don't you thinkSo
就个人而言,加人这场运动并养成清理环境的良好习惯是非常有益的。必须从我们自己开始，从现在开始。你不这么认为吗
点缀谚语,如:
As a coin has two sides, the mobile phones, while providingconvenience, cause trouble too.
正如硬币有两面一样,手机在提供便利的同时也会带来麻烦。
As the old saying goes, “ Your future dependson many things, but mostly on you.”
正如老话所说,“你的未来取决于很多事情,但主要取决于你。”
出彩的语段构架--丰富句式搭配
The Season I Like BestiSpring, the symbol of beauty and hope , is theseason I like best.
I am fond of spring because it treats mepoetic scenery of nature. Blooming flowers addvivid colors to my sight. Also, the symphony oall kinds of insects and birds brings aestheticharmony to me.What's more, the gentle rainmakes spring a fantasy world.And it's because spring arouses everyone'shope that I'm keen on spring most. Look! Thefrozen ice is melting. Listen! All living creaturesare waking up.Spring pictures a world wherecold and death are fading away while warmth and life are coming back. Thus, everyone is bound tcbe filled with hope and love. I love spring, whichcan't be too admirable and cherished.
春天是美丽和希望的象征,是我最喜欢的季节
我喜欢春天,因为它给我带来了诗意的自然景色。盛开的花朵为我的视野增添了鲜艳的色彩。此外,各种昆虫和鸟类的交响也带来了美感更重要的是,温柔的雨使春天成为一个梦幻的世界。
因为春天唤起了每个人的希望,所以我最喜欢春天。看!冰冻的冰正在融化。听!所有的生物都在苏醒。春天描绘了一个世界,寒冷和死亡正在消退,而温暖和生命正在回归。因此,每个人都必然充满希望和爱。我爱春天，这是一个令人敬佩和珍惜的春天。
出彩的语段构架--语意无缝衔接
转折关系(but，yet，however,while),如:There is no doubt that this practice does goodto the environment. However, we can't denythe fact that it also brings inconvenience to thecustomers and therefore some customers don'twelcome such a practice.
毫无疑问,这种做法对环境有益。然而,我们不能否认,这也给客户带来了不便,因此一些客户不欢迎这种做法。
In addition, we are quick-minded and creativeand we can work efficiently. Yet, we still needto learn more from those experienced.
此外,我们思维敏捷,富有创造力,能够高效地工作。然而,我们仍然需要向经验丰富的人多学习。
递进关系(besides，moreover, in additionfurthermore等),如:
In conclusion, breakfast is the necessary mealfor you to provide the 30% of energy in awhole day. Moreover, it makes an offer todevelop the creative thinking.
总之,早餐是你提供全天30%能量所必需的一餐。此外,它还提供了发展创造性思维的机会
They think homework helps them review whathas been taught in class. Besides, by doingdaily homework, they can better understand and memorize their lessons. Furthermore, theirskills in managing time can also be improved.
他们认为家庭作业有助于他们复习课堂上所教的内容。此外,通过做家庭作业,他们可以更好地理解和记忆他们的课程。并且,他们管理时间的技能也可以提高。
选择关系(or，either...or...等),如:
I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me.
我希望你要么退还我的钱,要么给我送一套新书。
With such a pen friend,I think I can sharewith her our traveling experiences, taking carof pets, or whatever we have in common.
有了这样一位笔友,我想我可以和她分享我们的旅行经历,照顾宠物,或者我们的共同点。
因果关系(because of，owing to,due tothanks to;so, therefore, thus, as a result等),如:
Some people refuse to help the old becausethey don't think they can give the old correctmedical care'due to a lack of professiona!skills.
有些人拒绝帮助老人,因为他们认为由于缺乏专业技能,他们无法为老人提供正确的医疗服务。Therefore, it's very important for us to formhealthy eating habits.
因此,养成健康的饮食习惯对我们来说非常重要,
比较关系(on the contrary,by comparison,compared to 等),如:
Only when we are strong and healthy can wehave enough energyto learn our lessonsefficiently. On the contrary, if we spend all ofour time on subject study, we will becomeweak for lack of exercise, which will have abad effect on our study in return.
只有当我们强壮和健康时,我们才有足够的精力有效地学习我们的课程。相反,如果我们把所有的时间都花在学科学习上,我们会因为缺乏锻炼而变得虚弱,这反过来会对我们的学习产生不良影响。
Compared with the escaped driver, I am proudof what I did.
与逃跑的司机相比,我为自己的行为感到骄傲。
列举事例(for example,such as， take...for example等),如:
Besides studies, we have a variety of associations.such as the drama club, the music club and the reading bar and so on.
除了学习,我们还有各种各样的社团,如戏剧俱乐部、音乐俱乐部和阅读吧等等。
However, some people behave very badly inforeign countries.For example, they droplitter everywhere, as well as spit freely inpublic, which not only shows bad personalqualities, but also does great harm to theimage of the country.
然而,有些人在国外表现得很糟糕。例如,他们随地乱扔垃圾,以及在公共场所随意吐痰,这不仅显示了不良的个人品质，而且对国家的形象也有很大的危害。
出彩的语段构架--段落多方位架构
叙述法(按时空排列顺序构架段落),如:
In the morning you will be shown around ourschool and listen to an introduction of theschool history in the lecture hall. After lunch ,there’ll be a football match between British andChinese students on the playground. Studentsfrom both of our schools are welcome to jo1nin. In the evening, we’ll have a party by theschool lake.
早上,你将被带着参观我们学校,并在报告厅听取学校历史的介绍。午饭后,英国和中国学生将在操场上进行足球比赛。欢迎我们两所学校的学生加人。晚上,我们将在学校湖边举行-个聚会。
When you come out of your hotel, go straightalong the road and turn right on the firstcorner. You will see a hospital on your left.Then walk along the road towards north, andyou can find a restaurant. On the opposite isjust Cuihu Park, You are expected to arrive atthe main gate before 9 o'clock. I'm sure youcan find us easily.
当你从酒店出来时,沿着路一直走,在第一个拐角处右转。你会在左边看到一家医院。然后沿着路向北走,你可以找到一家餐馆。对面就是翠湖公园。你预计在9点钟之前到达正门。我相信你很容易找到我们。
列举法(分条列举构架段落),如:
In my opinion, Internet voting has begunto show its negative impacts on people andsociety. Firstly, people may feel forced whenasked to do things that they don't want to.Secondly, voting of this kind does not dependon the strong points of the competitors, butrather on how many social-networking resourcesthey have. Thirdly, the voters or"even thecompetitors in many cases are possibly takenadvantage of by the organizers for commercialpurposes.
在我看来,互联网投票已经开始对人们和社会产生负面影响。首先，当被要求做他们不想做的事情时,人们可能会感到被迫。其次,这种投票并不取决于竞争对手的优势,而是取决于他们拥有多少社交网络资源。第三,在许多情况下,选民甚至竞争对手可能被组织者利用,用于商业目的。
It's not surprising for them to do so, For onething, with the pace of modern life becomingfaster and faster, time is quite precious. Intheir eyes, it is unnecessary to take time tocook. For another thing, home cooking food issimpler in kind and less delicious, especially forthose who are particular about food.
他们这样做并不奇怪。首先,随着现代生活的节奏越来越快,时间非常宝贵。在他们看来,没有必要花时间做饭。另一方面,家庭烹饪的食物种类更简单,也不那么美味,尤其是对于那些对食物很讲究的人来说。
举例法(通过列举例子构架段落),如:
Actually, we can findsome impolite andimproper behavior when we travel at home. Forexample, some travelers drop litter anywhere atscenic spots , smoke in the wooded mountains ortake photos when they are not supposed to.
事实上,当我们在国内旅行时,我们会发现一些不礼貌和不恰当的行为。例如,一些游客在景点随处乱扔垃圾,在树木繁茂的山区吸烟,或者在不应该的时候拍照。
Learning how to learn and developing the goodhabit of learning are the two vital parts in theprocess of study. For instance, we are supposed topreview before class, pay close attention to whatour teachers aresaying,andreviewtheknowledge we have gained, Only in this way canwe form the good habit of learning.
学习如何学习和养成良好的学习习惯是学习过程中的两个重要部分。例如,我们应该在上课前预习,密切关注老师的讲话,并复习所学的知识。只有这样,我们才能养成良好的学习习惯。
因果分析法(通过分析原因构架段落),如:
To begin with,I have a good command ofEnglish and can speak English fluently. Sothere is no doubt that I have no difficultycommunicating with foreigners.Besides, I'moutgoing,warm-hearted,and quick in mindwhich I think is a basic quality for a volunteer.Above all, as a native of Tangshan, I know thiscity and its culture very well. So I'm sure thatthe visitors will appreciate my work and enjo)their stay in our city.
首先,我精通英语,能流利地说英语。因此,毫无疑问,我与外国人交流毫无困难。此外,我性格外向、热情、思维敏捷,我认为这是志愿者的基本素质。最重要的是,作为唐山人,我非常了解这座城市及其文化。因此,我相信游客会喜欢我带给他们的快乐,并享受在我们城市的逗留。
At present, more and more people choose totravel abroad when they have holidays. Thereare some vital reasons. With the developmentof people's living standard and economy, theycan afford to go abroad. Besides, more peopleare becoming interested in foreign cultures.Therefore, they are eager to visit them withtheir own eyes.
目前,越来越多的人在度假时选择出国旅游。有一些重要的原因。随着人们生活水平的提高和经济的发展,他们有能力出国。此外,越来越多的人对外国文化越来越感兴趣,因此,他们渴望亲眼看看。
对比法(对比异同,优缺点等),如:
Besides, schools in big cities are equipped withadvanced facilities, and teachers there canoften get a high-paid job with short workinghours, However, the students in rural areas haveinsufficient educational facilities and teachersthere are often less valued with longer workinghours and lower income.
此外,大城市的学校配备了先进的设施,那里的教师通常工作时间短而工资高。然而,农村地区的学生没有足够的教育设施,那里的教师往往不太受重视,工作时间长,收人低。
Some people supported the idea of bringing inmore industry to our city. They thought moreindustry would benefit our city a lot. For onething,it would create more job opportunitiesfor the local people, For another, it would alsomake great contributions to the economy of ourSome people were strongly against thecity.idea, saying that more industry meant morepollution to the city, It would be not only badfor the people's health but also bad for theimage of our city and thus do harm to thetourism.
一些人支持为我们的城市带来更多工业的想法。他们认为更多的工业将使我们的城市受益匪浅。一方面，这将为当地人创造更多的就业机会。另一方面,它也将对我们城市的经济做出巨大贡献。一些人强烈反对这个想法，认为更多的工业意味着对城市的污染。这不仅对人民的健康有害,而且对我们城市的形象也有害从而对旅游业造成危害。
技巧一 重视构成句子的成分
生动形象的句子成分--主语
◎用并列连词and或or连接两个或多个主语
Touching or passing food or eating with your lefthand is to be avoided.
要避免接触或传递食物,或者用左手吃食物
〇用定语来修饰主语
Players on a sports team may feel driven to playharder in order to help the team win.
球队的参赛者可能会感到他们是在被迫为了帮助球队获胜更努力地参加比赛
◎描述人物、地点用带同位语的主语
Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel PeacePrize, dedicated the majority of her life tohelping the poorest of the poor in India, thusgaining her the name “Saint of Gutters”
诺贝尔和平奖获得者特蕾莎修女一生的大部分时间都致力于帮助印度最贫穷的人，因此获得了“排水沟圣人”的称号。
〇用带有宾语和状语的非谓语动词作主语
To play football on the soft lawn in the sunnyspring is a great experience.
阳光明媚的春天，在柔软的草坪上踢足球是种很好的体验。
生动形象的句子成分--谓语
〇用并列连词连接两个以上平行的谓语动词
I stopped the car, ordered all kids out and toldthem to meet me up ahead.
我停下车，命令所有孩子们都出去，告诉他们到前面接我。
〇平行的谓语动词可以接各自的宾语
I don't want to wake up one day and havenothing but a pile of pictures and notes.
我不希望有一天醒来，只有一堆图片和笔记
生动形象的句子成分--宾语
Obring,hand,lend,mail,offer,owe,pass, paypost,read,return, send,sell,serve, show, take ，teach, tell, throw, book, buy, choose, cookdraw, award, fetch, find, fix, get, make, picksave, sing,spare, prepare等动词可以接双宾语
The teacher gave the students a set of tests.
老师给学生们做了一系列测试。
Ocall,elect, choose, find, make, name, cut,beat, drive,get,lay,leave,paint, pull,push,set, tear, wish, believe, consider, feel,know,observe,prove，see,show，think等动词可以接复合宾语
Once, I saw the street lamps lighting up peopletrying to hide from the rain.
有一次，我看到街灯照亮了试图躲雨的人们。
〇谓语动词可以带有多个宾语
I was busy recording every incident, name andplace I came across.
我正忙着记录每一个事件，名字和我遇到的地方。
〇用复杂的结构作宾语
I still record ideas and quotations that strike mein books,or observations that are particularlymeaningful.
我仍然记录书中使我感兴趣的思想,语录或有特殊意櫨氌屡义的观感。
生动形象的句子成分--表语
◎作表语的名词可以接定语从句
All I remembered of the previous few days were the dull characterizations I had set down in my diary.
我所记得的前几天的事就是我在日记里的枯煤的描述。
◎作表语的形容词可以接宾语从句
Iwas sure my son would learn English in a couple of months.
我确信我的儿子将在两个月内学会英语，
〇作表语的名词常接介词短语作定语
The upper floor is a quiet zone with over athousand places for silent reading, and placeswhere you can sit and work with your owncomputer.
楼上是一个安静的区域,有超过一千个无声阅读的地方，也有你可以坐下来独自使用自己的电脑工作的地方。
生动形象的句子成分--定语
〇用不定式复合结构作定语
The library has lockers for students to store course literature.
图书馆有储物柜供学生存放课程文献:
〇用介词短语经作后置定语
I can still recall the excitement of being invitedto dance with the most attractive boy at the school party.
我还记得在学校聚会上被邀请和最有魅力的男孩跳舞时的兴奋。
〇用过去分词短语作后置定语
It's such a happy-looking library, paintedyellow, decorated with palm-tree stickers andsheltered from the Florida sun by its own roof.
这是一个看起来很快乐的图书馆,涂成黄色,用棕榈树贴纸装饰,屋顶还可以遮挡佛罗里达州的阳光。
生动形象的句子成分--状语
◎过去分词短语作状语,如:
Faced with pressure of study, senior high schoo)students should learn to relax themselves properly
面对学习压力,高中生应该学会适当放松自己
Founded in 1900,it is one of the most famousEnglish newspapers at home and abroad.
它创立于1900年,是国内外最著名的英文报纸
○现在分词短语作状语，如:
Living in an environment full of fierce competition.we, a generation born in the 9Os, are faced withmore difficulties, problems and competition.
生活在一个充满激烈竞争的环境中，我们出生于90年代的这代人，面临着更多的困难、问题和竞争。
People tend to eat in expensive restaurants andorder unusual food , believing that with more moneyin their pockets,it is absolutely reasonable to eatwhatever they like.
人们倾向于在昂贵的餐馆吃饭，点不寻常的食物,认为口袋里有更多的钱,想吃什么就吃什么是绝对合理的。
◎不定式短语作状语,如:
lo stop such uncivilized phenomena from happeningagain, I think more strict rules should be made and carried out.
为了防止这种不文明现象再次发生,我认为应该制定和执行更严格的规则。
技巧二 重视使用高级词汇
用文雅的词汇替换一般词汇
◎be supposed to 替换 should
The applicants should be an outgoing person.The applicants are supposed to be an outgoingperson.
申请者需要是一个外向的人。
contribute to 替换 be helpful/useful
My skill in communication and teamwork arehelpful to my application for the job.My skill in communication and teamwork
contribute to my application for the iob.
我的沟通和团队合作能力有助于我申请这份工作。
◎the majority of 替换 most
Most of the students prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.
The majority of the students prefer watching TY at home to going to the cinema.
大多数学生喜欢在家看电视而不是去电影院
◎apart from 替换and,also或except
Our club consists of paid staff and a small teamof unpaid volunteers.
Apart from paid staff, our club consists of a small team of unpaid volunteers.
除了带薪员工外,我们的俱乐部还包括一小队无薪志愿者。
增色的高级词汇--巧用评注、总括、衔接类副词或短语
恰当运用诸如 meanwhile,furthermore,fortunately, generally,besides, personally, worsestill, in addition, in a word, on the contrary, asis known to all, to tell you the truth, what'smore 等评注、总括、衔接类副词或短语,平时注意积累。如:
〇恰当运用meanwhile
To achieve the goal, we'll call on the school tocommunicate with each other in polite words.We should also behave ourselves and obeyschool rules.
To achieve the goal, we'll call on the schoo!to communicate with each otherinpolitewords. Meanwhile,we should behave ourselvesand obey school rules.为了实现这一目标,我们将呼吁学校用礼貌的语言相互交流。同时,我们应该遵守校规。
〇怡当运用besides 和 therefore
With the development of economy, people canafford to go abroad, More people are becominginterested in foreign cultures, They are eagerto visit other countries with their own eyes.With the development of economy, peoplecan afford to go abroad. Besides, more peopleare becoming interested in foreign cultures.Therefore, they are eager to visit them withtheir own eyes.
随着经济的发展,人们有能力出国。此外,越来越多的人对外国文化感兴趣。因此,他们渴望亲眼见识他们。
◎恰当运用 as a result 和 worse stillSo they become lazy and develop bad studyinghabits. This may kill their creative thinking.>As a result, they become lazy and developbad studying habits. Worse still, it may killtheir creative thinking.
结果,他们变得懒惰,养成了不良的学习习惯更糟糕的是,这可能会扼杀他们的创造性思维◎恰当运用 in conclusion
Being self-disciplined not only helps us improveourselves,but contributes to building upaharmonious and civilized society.
In conclusion, being self-disciplined not onlyhelps us improve ourselves, but contributes tobuilding up a harmonious and civilized society.
总之,自律不仅有助于我们提高自己,而且有助于建立一个和谐文明的社会。
◎恰当运用 to begin with, what's more 和 without doubt
After entering college, I intend to set newgoals in my studies until l succeed. It isnecessary for me to learn to live independently and I should do laundry and cleanup all bymyself.
To begin with, after entering college,Iintend to set new goals in my studies until Isucceed, What's more, it is necessary for me tolearn to live independently. Without doubt Ishould do laundry and clean-up all by myself.
首先,进入大学后,我打算在学业上设定新的目标,直到成功。更重要的是,我有必要学会独立生活。毫无疑问,我应该自己洗衣服和打扫卫生。
增色的高级词汇--巧用评注、总括、衔接类副词或短语
过渡词语将语义有机联系起来,是衔接前后语甸之间的纽带,使语义自然而然的由上文转人下文。过渡词语恰当用在两个内容的接驳处,起到承上启下的衔接作用。
表示举例(for example，for instance,such as...，take...for example等),如:
Take myself for example, Because I am busy instudving on weekdays, I have little time tolook after my parents , which makes me guilty.
以我自己为例。因为我平日忙于学习,几乎没有时间照顾父母,这让我感到内疚。
What you receive may be much different fromwhat is in your mind, for instance, strangecolor, wrong size or bad quality.
你收到的东西可能与你想象中的东西有很大不同,例如,奇怪的颜色、错误的尺寸或糟糕的质量
表示比较(be similar to, similarly, in contrast,compared with/to等),如:Luckilv, she was not badly injured and we senther to the nearest pared with theescaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
幸运的是,她伤势不重,我们把她送到了最近的医院。与逃跑的司机相比,我为自己的作法感到骄傲。
Then why should we have regrets for whathappened in the past Similarly, we should notattach too much importance to the future.
那么我们为什么要为过去发生的事情感到遗憾呢 同样,我们也不应过分重视未来。i
表示目的(for this reason, for this purpose, sothat, in order to, so as to等),如:具林
Most importantly, I found every chance to speak bravely so as to build up my confidence.
最重要的是,我努力寻找每一个勇敢发言的机会,以建立我的信心。
We must attach great importance to protectingthe environment so that we'll have a betterhometown in the future.
我们必须高度重视保护环境,以便将来有一个更好的家乡。
表示罗列增加(Firstly,secondly，thirdly,onthe one hand... on the other hand, what'smore, in addition等),如:
On (the) one hand, it's an occasion for people toknow about the western culture; on the otherhand, it's also an enjoyable chance for friends toget together to promote their friendship.
一方面,这是人们了解西方文化的机会;另一方面,这也是朋友们聚在一起增进友谊的好机会
表示时间顺序(afterwards,immediately，atthat moment, meanwhile, not...until等),如:
On the morning, we'll first show you aroundour campus. Afterwards, you will be led intothe auditorium, where a group of Chinesestudents will meet you.早上,我们将首先带你参观我们的校园。之后,你将被带进礼堂,一群中国学生将在那里与你见面。 表示解释说明(in this case,moreover, furthermore ,in fact, actually等),如:
He,in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi, introducedmodern technologies and ideas to China. Thatopened our eyes to the world.In fact, heinspires me to major in English in college and tobe a bridge between China and the world.他在《海国图志》一书中向中国介绍了现代技术和思想。这打开了我们对世界的眼界。事实上,他激励我在大学主修英语,成为中国与世界之间的桥梁。
表示概括归纳(in a word,in conclusion，in brief, on the whole,as we all know, as hasbeen stated等),如:In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging toeveryone.
总之,微笑是属于每个人的一种语言。
On the whole, it is a good thing to studyabroad. However, one must not lose sight ofthe disadvantages.
总的来说,出国留学是一件好事。然而,我们不能忽视有些缺点。
升华的句式结构--变换句子的语态、语序
◎变换语态，如:
We will appreciate fyour impression of ourschool as the closing of the interview.
Your impression of our school will be appreciated as the closing of the interview.
面试结束后,我们将感谢您对我们学校的印象。
The government should take measures to stop the water pollution.
Measures should be taken by the government to stop the water pollution.
政府应采取措施制止水污染。
We should make good use of time to learn our lessons well.
Time should be made good use of to learn ourlessons well.
应该好好利用时间学好我们的课程。
We should pay enough attention to improving our pronunciation.
Enough attention should be paid by us to improving our pronunciation.
我们应该加以足够注意去改善我们的发音。
◎转换语序,如:
He little realizes how important this meeting is.
Little does he realize how important this meeting is.
他几乎没有意识到这次会议有多么重要。
We had no sooner reached the airport than theplane took off.
No sooner had we reached the airport than the plane took off.
我们一到达机场,飞机就起飞了。
When he returned home he realized what had happened.
>Only when he returned home did he realizewhat had happened.
他回家后才意识到发生了什么事。
I found it difficult to work out the problem, so I decided to ask Tom for advice.
So difficult did I find it to work out theproblem that I decided to ask Tom for advice.
我发现解决这个问题太难了，所以决定向汤姆请教。
A young man sat by the window with a magazine in his hand.
By the window sat a young man with a magazine in his hand.
窗边坐着一个年轻人,手里拿着一本杂志。
升华的句式结构---前置状语、表语等句子成分
◎把句子中的表语前置,以状语的形式开头,如:
I was sad and annoyed,but triedito calm(myself down and had a talk with him later.
Though sad and annoyed,ol tried to calmmyself down and later had a talk with him.
尽管伤心和烦恼,我还是努力让自己平静下来，后来和他谈了谈。s
Our apartment is large, fully-equipped sandlocated in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood.So our apartment meets all their needs.
Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood ,our large fully-equipped apartment meets altheir needs.
我们的大型设备齐全的公寓位于一个美丽而安静的社区,满足了他们的所有需求。
It is beneficial and importantto develop apositive attitude towards life,
More importantly, it is beneficial to develop a positive attitude towards life.
更重要的是,养成积极的生活态度是有益的。
Though some people may seem weak, they are actually strong in mind.
Weak though some people may seem, they are actually strong in mind.
虽然有些人看起来很软弱,但实际上他们内心很强大。
〇把句子中的部分主语前置,以状语的形式开头
如口:
My classmates and I will do what we can tomake your stay in China enjoyable.
Together with my classmates, will do what I can to make your stay in China enjoyable.
和我的同学们一起,我将尽我所能让你们在中国过得愉快。
升华的句式结构--巧用同位语、插入语
◎使用同位语(多用于人物、地点介绍),如:
Mr. Shao is our English teacher. He is 1.75meters tall and weighs 75 kilograms. He wasborn in Hebei Province in October, 1981.
Mr. Shao, our English teacher, is 1. 75meters with the weight of 75 kilograms, whowas born in Hebei Province in October, 1981.
邵先生,我们的英语老师,身高1.75米,体重75公斤,1981年10月出生于河北省。
Guilin is a famous international tourist city. It is well-known for its beautiful scenery.
Guilin, a famous international tourist city, is well-known for its beautiful scenery.
桂林是著名的国际旅游城市，以其美丽的风景而闻名。
◎使用插人语,如:
Jack is a good teacher. He teaches well at school.
Jack is a good teacher; that is to say, heteaches well at school.
杰克是个好老师,也就是说,他在学校教得很好。
I enjoy staying with young students, who arealways energetic and have new ideas.
Personally,l enjoy staying with youngstudents, who are always energetic and havenew ideas.
As for me,l enjoy staying with youngstudents, who are always energetic and havenew ideas.
就我个人而言,我喜欢和年轻的学生呆在一起，他们总是精力充沛,有新的想法。
升华的句式结构--转换成复合句
转换成状语从句.如:The world is becoming a global village, English isgetting more and more important.
As the world is becoming a global villageEnglish is getting more and more important.
随着世界成为一个地球村,英语变得越来越重
The most important thing to success lies in doing every simple thing well.
When it comes to the key to success, the most important thing lies in doing every simple thing well.
到成功的关键,最重要的是做好每一件简单的事情。
转换成定语从句,如:
The host family is made up of three people.Their flat is only two hundred meters awayfrom the school. You will be studying in thatschool.The host family, whose flat is only twohundred meters away from the school where youwill be studying, is made up of three people.
寄宿家庭由三个人组成,他们的公寓距离你将就读的学校只有200米。
Some people could be richer than us. Themedia have reported that.->As has been reported in the media, somepeople could be richer than us.
正如媒体报道的那样,有些人可能比我们更富有。
使用名词性从句,如:
I am writing to tell you about how studentsfrom different grades spend weekends with theirfamily.
我写信告诉你不同年级的学生如何与家人共度周末。
Initially, what I'm concerned about lies inwhether the major will be suitable for me.
最初,我关心的是这个专业是否适合我。
But the most important thing is that the numberof private cars should be put under control.
但最重要的是,应该控制私家车的数量
升华的句式结构--巧用独立主格结构
独立主格结构,如:
When the test'was finished, we began our holiday.
The test finished, we began our holiday.
考试结束了,我们开始了假期。
If weather permits, we will go on an outing to the beach tomorrow.
Weather permitting, we will go on an outing to the beach tomorrow.
如果天气允许,我们明天将去海滩郊游。
As the meeting went over, everyone tried to gohome carlier.
The meeting gone over,everyone tried to gohome earlier.
会议结束了,大家都想早点回家。
Because there was nothing else to do, we wenthome.
There being nothing else to do,we went home.
没有别的事可做,我们回家了。
Because her glasses were broken,she couldn't see the words on the blackboard.
Her glasses broken, she couldn't see thewords on the blackboard.
她的眼镜坏了,她看不清黑板上的字。
升华的句式结构--巧用 with 复合结构
with复合结构可以充当状语，表示方式，伴随,原因,结果,也可以作定语。with复合结构可以与相应的从句互换,写作时可灵活运用。
As the pace of modern life becomes faster andfaster,time is quite precious.
With the pace of modern life becoming fasterand faster , time is quite precious.
随着现代生活的节奏越来越快,时间非常宝贵。
Because many of Chinese idioms are widelyused in our daily life, a good knowledge ofthem contributes to better understanding bothspoken Chinese and written Chinese.
With many of Chinese idioms widely used in ourdaily life, a good knowledge of them contributes tobetter understanding both spoken Chinese andwritten Chinese.
随着许多中国成语在我们的日常生活中广泛使用,对它们的良好了解有助于更好地理解汉语口语和书面语。
A terrible accident happened yesterday，inwhich nine people were killed and almosteighty injured.
A terrible accident happened yesterday, withnine people killed and almost eighty injured.昨天发生了一起可怕的事故,9人死亡，近80人受伤。
技巧三 闪亮的特殊句式
通过点缀强调句、倒装句、省略句、祈使句、感叹句、反问句、谚语等来使写作语句更美,增加得分亮点。
点缀强调句,如:
It was with their help and support that I eventually overcame my shyness and built up confidence.
正是在他们的帮助和支持下,我终于克服了害羞,建立了信心。
As for my senior high school life, I do have anunforgettable experience.
至于我的高中生活,我确实有一段难忘的经历。
点缀倒装句，如:
Only by using our time more efficiently can we become a better learner.
只有更有效地利用时间,我们才能成为更好的学习者。
Now as a teacher, not only does she have richteaching experience to instruct all her studentsbut also she has published many books.
现在作为一名教师,她不仅有丰富的教学经验来指导所有的学生,而且还出版了许多书。
点缀省略句,如:
While cycling, don't forget the traffic lights.
骑自行车时,不要忘记红绿灯。
They learn French and we English.
他们学法语,我们学英语。
Someone has used my mobile phone, but I don't know who.
有人用过我的手机,但我不知道是谁。
After long hours of work, Mother should take a rest but she won't.
长时间工作后,妈妈应该休息,但她不会。
A sound must be heard,a colour seen, a flavour tasted.
必须听到声音,看到颜色,品尝味道。
点缀感叹句,如:
How happy I am to learn that your family will be my host family!
得知你家将成为我的寄宿家庭,我真高兴!
What a pleasant surprise to get your email today!
今天收到你的电子邮件真是一个惊喜!
How time flies! We will take the college entrance examination in 30 days.
时间过得真快!我们将在30天后参加高考。
点缀反问句，如:
Personally,it is of great benefit to join in thecampaign and form a good habit of clearing theenvironment. And it is essential to start withourselves and start from now. Don't you thinkSo
就个人而言,加人这场运动并养成清理环境的良好习惯是非常有益的。必须从我们自己开始，从现在开始。你不这么认为吗
点缀谚语,如:
As a coin has two sides, the mobile phones, while providingconvenience, cause trouble too.
正如硬币有两面一样,手机在提供便利的同时也会带来麻烦。
As the old saying goes, “ Your future dependson many things, but mostly on you.”
正如老话所说,“你的未来取决于很多事情,但主要取决于你。”
出彩的语段构架--丰富句式搭配
The Season I Like BestiSpring, the symbol of beauty and hope , is theseason I like best.
I am fond of spring because it treats mepoetic scenery of nature. Blooming flowers addvivid colors to my sight. Also, the symphony oall kinds of insects and birds brings aestheticharmony to me.What's more, the gentle rainmakes spring a fantasy world.And it's because spring arouses everyone'shope that I'm keen on spring most. Look! Thefrozen ice is melting. Listen! All living creaturesare waking up.Spring pictures a world wherecold and death are fading away while warmth and life are coming back. Thus, everyone is bound tcbe filled with hope and love. I love spring, whichcan't be too admirable and cherished.
春天是美丽和希望的象征,是我最喜欢的季节
我喜欢春天,因为它给我带来了诗意的自然景色。盛开的花朵为我的视野增添了鲜艳的色彩。此外,各种昆虫和鸟类的交响也带来了美感更重要的是,温柔的雨使春天成为一个梦幻的世界。
因为春天唤起了每个人的希望,所以我最喜欢春天。看!冰冻的冰正在融化。听!所有的生物都在苏醒。春天描绘了一个世界,寒冷和死亡正在消退,而温暖和生命正在回归。因此,每个人都必然充满希望和爱。我爱春天，这是一个令人敬佩和珍惜的春天。
出彩的语段构架--语意无缝衔接
转折关系(but，yet，however,while),如:There is no doubt that this practice does goodto the environment. However, we can't denythe fact that it also brings inconvenience to thecustomers and therefore some customers don'twelcome such a practice.
毫无疑问,这种做法对环境有益。然而,我们不能否认,这也给客户带来了不便,因此一些客户不欢迎这种做法。
In addition, we are quick-minded and creativeand we can work efficiently. Yet, we still needto learn more from those experienced.
此外,我们思维敏捷,富有创造力,能够高效地工作。然而,我们仍然需要向经验丰富的人多学习。
递进关系(besides，moreover, in additionfurthermore等),如:
In conclusion, breakfast is the necessary mealfor you to provide the 30% of energy in awhole day. Moreover, it makes an offer todevelop the creative thinking.
总之,早餐是你提供全天30%能量所必需的一餐。此外,它还提供了发展创造性思维的机会
They think homework helps them review whathas been taught in class. Besides, by doingdaily homework, they can better understand and memorize their lessons. Furthermore, theirskills in managing time can also be improved.
他们认为家庭作业有助于他们复习课堂上所教的内容。此外,通过做家庭作业,他们可以更好地理解和记忆他们的课程。并且,他们管理时间的技能也可以提高。
选择关系(or，either...or...等),如:
I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me.
我希望你要么退还我的钱,要么给我送一套新书。
With such a pen friend,I think I can sharewith her our traveling experiences, taking carof pets, or whatever we have in common.
有了这样一位笔友,我想我可以和她分享我们的旅行经历,照顾宠物,或者我们的共同点。
因果关系(because of，owing to,due tothanks to;so, therefore, thus, as a result等),如:
Some people refuse to help the old becausethey don't think they can give the old correctmedical care'due to a lack of professiona!skills.
有些人拒绝帮助老人,因为他们认为由于缺乏专业技能,他们无法为老人提供正确的医疗服务。Therefore, it's very important for us to formhealthy eating habits.
因此,养成健康的饮食习惯对我们来说非常重要,
比较关系(on the contrary,by comparison,compared to 等),如:
Only when we are strong and healthy can wehave enough energyto learn our lessonsefficiently. On the contrary, if we spend all ofour time on subject study, we will becomeweak for lack of exercise, which will have abad effect on our study in return.
只有当我们强壮和健康时,我们才有足够的精力有效地学习我们的课程。相反,如果我们把所有的时间都花在学科学习上,我们会因为缺乏锻炼而变得虚弱,这反过来会对我们的学习产生不良影响。
Compared with the escaped driver, I am proudof what I did.
与逃跑的司机相比,我为自己的行为感到骄傲。
列举事例(for example,such as， take...for example等),如:
Besides studies, we have a variety of associations.such as the drama club, the music club and the reading bar and so on.
除了学习,我们还有各种各样的社团,如戏剧俱乐部、音乐俱乐部和阅读吧等等。
However, some people behave very badly inforeign countries.For example, they droplitter everywhere, as well as spit freely inpublic, which not only shows bad personalqualities, but also does great harm to theimage of the country.
然而,有些人在国外表现得很糟糕。例如,他们随地乱扔垃圾,以及在公共场所随意吐痰,这不仅显示了不良的个人品质，而且对国家的形象也有很大的危害。
出彩的语段构架--段落多方位架构
叙述法(按时空排列顺序构架段落),如:
In the morning you will be shown around ourschool and listen to an introduction of theschool history in the lecture hall. After lunch ,there’ll be a football match between British andChinese students on the playground. Studentsfrom both of our schools are welcome to jo1nin. In the evening, we’ll have a party by theschool lake.
早上,你将被带着参观我们学校,并在报告厅听取学校历史的介绍。午饭后,英国和中国学生将在操场上进行足球比赛。欢迎我们两所学校的学生加人。晚上,我们将在学校湖边举行-个聚会。
When you come out of your hotel, go straightalong the road and turn right on the firstcorner. You will see a hospital on your left.Then walk along the road towards north, andyou can find a restaurant. On the opposite isjust Cuihu Park, You are expected to arrive atthe main gate before 9 o'clock. I'm sure youcan find us easily.
当你从酒店出来时,沿着路一直走,在第一个拐角处右转。你会在左边看到一家医院。然后沿着路向北走,你可以找到一家餐馆。对面就是翠湖公园。你预计在9点钟之前到达正门。我相信你很容易找到我们。
列举法(分条列举构架段落),如:
In my opinion, Internet voting has begunto show its negative impacts on people andsociety. Firstly, people may feel forced whenasked to do things that they don't want to.Secondly, voting of this kind does not dependon the strong points of the competitors, butrather on how many social-networking resourcesthey have. Thirdly, the voters or"even thecompetitors in many cases are possibly takenadvantage of by the organizers for commercialpurposes.
在我看来,互联网投票已经开始对人们和社会产生负面影响。首先，当被要求做他们不想做的事情时,人们可能会感到被迫。其次,这种投票并不取决于竞争对手的优势,而是取决于他们拥有多少社交网络资源。第三,在许多情况下,选民甚至竞争对手可能被组织者利用,用于商业目的。
It's not surprising for them to do so, For onething, with the pace of modern life becomingfaster and faster, time is quite precious. Intheir eyes, it is unnecessary to take time tocook. For another thing, home cooking food issimpler in kind and less delicious, especially forthose who are particular about food.
他们这样做并不奇怪。首先,随着现代生活的节奏越来越快,时间非常宝贵。在他们看来,没有必要花时间做饭。另一方面,家庭烹饪的食物种类更简单,也不那么美味,尤其是对于那些对食物很讲究的人来说。
举例法(通过列举例子构架段落),如:
Actually, we can findsome impolite andimproper behavior when we travel at home. Forexample, some travelers drop litter anywhere atscenic spots , smoke in the wooded mountains ortake photos when they are not supposed to.
事实上,当我们在国内旅行时,我们会发现一些不礼貌和不恰当的行为。例如,一些游客在景点随处乱扔垃圾,在树木繁茂的山区吸烟,或者在不应该的时候拍照。
Learning how to learn and developing the goodhabit of learning are the two vital parts in theprocess of study. For instance, we are supposed topreview before class, pay close attention to whatour teachers aresaying,andreviewtheknowledge we have gained, Only in this way canwe form the good habit of learning.
学习如何学习和养成良好的学习习惯是学习过程中的两个重要部分。例如,我们应该在上课前预习,密切关注老师的讲话,并复习所学的知识。只有这样,我们才能养成良好的学习习惯。
因果分析法(通过分析原因构架段落),如:
To begin with,I have a good command ofEnglish and can speak English fluently. Sothere is no doubt that I have no difficultycommunicating with foreigners.Besides, I'moutgoing,warm-hearted,and quick in mindwhich I think is a basic quality for a volunteer.Above all, as a native of Tangshan, I know thiscity and its culture very well. So I'm sure thatthe visitors will appreciate my work and enjo)their stay in our city.
首先,我精通英语,能流利地说英语。因此,毫无疑问,我与外国人交流毫无困难。此外,我性格外向、热情、思维敏捷,我认为这是志愿者的基本素质。最重要的是,作为唐山人,我非常了解这座城市及其文化。因此,我相信游客会喜欢我带给他们的快乐,并享受在我们城市的逗留。
At present, more and more people choose totravel abroad when they have holidays. Thereare some vital reasons. With the developmentof people's living standard and economy, theycan afford to go abroad. Besides, more peopleare becoming interested in foreign cultures.Therefore, they are eager to visit them withtheir own eyes.
目前,越来越多的人在度假时选择出国旅游。有一些重要的原因。随着人们生活水平的提高和经济的发展,他们有能力出国。此外,越来越多的人对外国文化越来越感兴趣,因此,他们渴望亲眼看看。
对比法(对比异同,优缺点等),如:
Besides, schools in big cities are equipped withadvanced facilities, and teachers there canoften get a high-paid job with short workinghours, However, the students in rural areas haveinsufficient educational facilities and teachersthere are often less valued with longer workinghours and lower income.
此外,大城市的学校配备了先进的设施,那里的教师通常工作时间短而工资高。然而,农村地区的学生没有足够的教育设施,那里的教师往往不太受重视,工作时间长,收人低。
Some people supported the idea of bringing inmore industry to our city. They thought moreindustry would benefit our city a lot. For onething,it would create more job opportunitiesfor the local people, For another, it would alsomake great contributions to the economy of ourSome people were strongly against thecity.idea, saying that more industry meant morepollution to the city, It would be not only badfor the people's health but also bad for theimage of our city and thus do harm to thetourism.
一些人支持为我们的城市带来更多工业的想法。他们认为更多的工业将使我们的城市受益匪浅。一方面，这将为当地人创造更多的就业机会。另一方面,它也将对我们城市的经济做出巨大贡献。一些人强烈反对这个想法，认为更多的工业意味着对城市的污染。这不仅对人民的健康有害,而且对我们城市的形象也有害从而对旅游业造成危害。