2024年中考英语作文（2023年山东省真题+2024模拟）（含解析）

2024中考英语作文（2023山东省真题+2024模拟）
1、（2023威海）
为倡导广大青少年积极参与体育运动，在运动中增强体质，享受乐趣，收获健康，某报刊英语专栏以“Together for a Healthy Future”为题向中学生开展征文活动。请结合自身实际，从以下两种情况中任选其一，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
情况 要点
1.经常运动 你运动习惯、经历、运动对你的影响，……
2.不常运动 不常运动的原因、你对运动的看法、今后的打算，……
注意：
1.词数100左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容需涵盖所选情况的要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
4.以下表达仅供参考：
improve health增强体质 build up confidence树立信心
Together for a Healthy Future
As we all know doing sports can make us strong and healthy.
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2、（2023临沂）
45. 作为家庭的一员，每个人都有做家务的责任和义务。请以“My Experience of Doing Housework”为题，根据以下提示与要求，用英语写一篇短文。提示：
1. What housework do you usually do
2. Tell an experience of doing housework.
3. What have you learned from it
要求：
1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2.不少于80词。
My Experience of Doing Housework
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3、（2023东营）
56. 旅游是我们看世界的重要方式，它可以让我们开阔视野，增长见识，丰富阅历，陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？为什么想去那个地方？你想在那个地方干些什么？请以“The place I want to visit”为题，写一篇100 词左右的短文。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
The place I want to visit
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（2023滨州）
71. 假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than other girls since I was little. For a long time, this really troubled me. I feel more worried because I will start my senior high school life soon! I am afraid that the students in the new school will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide to look more beautiful, so I want to lose weight by dieting. What do you think of my plan Can you give me some advice
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Amy
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；
4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
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Yours, Li Hua
5、（聊城真题）
46. 假设你家有一台电脑，由你和父亲共同使用。你父亲是位公司经理，你是个中学生。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你们平时用电脑做什么，并谈谈你对玩电脑游戏的看法。
提示：
1. 你父亲经常用电脑跟顾客交谈、上网查看火车信息，等等。
2. 你在周末用电脑听音乐、看电影，但很少玩电脑游戏。
3. 你对玩电脑游戏的看法。
注意事项：
1. 短文词数：80 左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
We have a computer in our home, and my father and I share it.
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6、（2023菏泽真题）
56. 假如你是李华，某英语报正在开展以“My Favorite English Homework”为题的征文活动，请你根据图表中的调查结果，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点如下：
1.描述调查结果；
2.介绍你最喜欢的作业形式并陈述理由。
学生最喜欢的英语作业调查结果(人数百分比)
要求：
1.字数：100词左右；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
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（德州真题）
51. 作为全市文明家庭成员，请你给即将到来的交换生David写一封信，介你的家庭情况，除了提示内容外，至少再补充一条家庭美德（Merit）。
1. Family information: members, hobbies
2. Merits: respect the old and care for the young, protect the environment, …
要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范：
2.文中不得出现在实的姓名和学校名称：
3.80—100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Welcome to my home! I’d like to introduce my family to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Now you see what my family are like. I’m sure you will enjoy your stay in my home. Looking forward to your coming!
Sincerely.
Your friend
（淄博真题）
52. 某中学生英语杂志开展主题为“My favorite book”的征文活动，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿，文中要包含这本书的主要内容和你喜爱它的理由。
注意：
1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
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（2024山亭模拟）
47. 某英文网站正在开展以“家务劳动我能行”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请根据以下提示，以“My Experience of Doing Housework” 为题，写一篇英文短文投稿。
1. 你通常做什么家务？ 2. 你某一次做家务的经历。3. 你从中学到了什么？
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：80~100 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My Experience of Doing Housework
As a family member, it’s our duty to help our parents do housework. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024市中模拟）
47. 为提高自理能力，适应未来发展，青少年应学会做日常家务，培养必备生活技能，如烹饪、洗衣、种花、打扫、整理等。请以“Doing Chores Makes Me Better” 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
要点提示：1.你会做哪些家务？2.你想学哪些家务？为什么？3.对你有何帮助和意义？
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
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【答案】例文
Version 1
Together for a Healthy Future
As we all know, doing sports can make us strong and healthy. Besides P.E. classes, I usually play badminton with my parents on weekends. During the summer holiday, I also get up early in the morning to run along the beach or climb the mountains.
Last term, one of my friends invited me to join his basketball team. To be honest, I was not good at playing basketball at that time. But he told me not to be worried and taught me how to play in person. Gradually, I got much pleasure from this exiting sport. We took part in my life.
As you can see, doing sports has influenced me a lot. Firstly it greatly improved my physical health. Secondly, I have made a lot of new friends who share the same interest with me. Most importantly, it has built up my confidence. It encourage me to face difficulties.
Thanks to sports, my life has been so colorful and meaningful. Let’s exercise together for a healthy future!
Version 2
Together for a Healthy Future
As we all know, doing sports can make us strong and healthy. As students, we are often told by parents or teachers to do exercise regularly.
Many of my friends love sports, but I seldom exercise. To be honest, I’m not quite good at it. Sports like running or playing basketball are difficult for me. Also, I don’t have much free time to exercise. The only time when I do play sports is in P.E. classes. After PE. classes, I just feel too tired to do other things. That why I don’t want to do it.
Although I don’t like it, there is no doubt that doing sports plays an important part in our life. Not only can it improve our heath but also it is a good way to build up our confidence. So maybe it’s time for me to change.
For the coming vacation, it is necessary to make some plans about doing exercise. I’m considering looking for a partner to play sports with. Perhaps badminton or ping-pong will be a good choice.
As the saying goes, “Health is the basis of all”. Just stop being lazy and step out side!
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从所给的两种情况选出一种（情况1）；
第二步，具体阐述你的运动习惯、经历；
第三步，最后表达运动对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① as we all know众所周知
② invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
③ in person亲自
④ take part in参加
[高分句型]
①As you can see, doing sports has influenced me a lot.（动名词作主语）
②I have made a lot of new friends who share the same interest with me.（who引导的定语从句）
2、
【答案】例文
My Experience of Doing Housework
As a family member, it’s our duty to help our parents do housework.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping to buy food for lunch, I began to clean my house. First, I swept the floor and wiped the table. Then, I collected all the books and other things and put them in place. Finally, I took all the rubbish out. When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me. I felt so happy at that time. So I keep doing housework, such as sweeping the floor or tidying the room.
Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them. So I suggest all of us should take action from now on.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明帮助做家务是我们的责任；
第二步，具体阐述你做家务的经历以及你经常做的家务；
第三步，最后表达你从中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
② begin to do开始做
③ at that time那时
④ such as比如
[高分句型]
①Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping to buy food for lunch, I began to clean my house.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them.（动名词短语作主语）
3、
【答案】例文：
The place I want to visit
Beijing, the second largest city in our country, is the place I want to visit.
There are several reasons why I would like to visit Beijing. First, Beijing is the capital of China, and has a history of more than 3,000 years. It has been the capital for many dynasties. Second, there are many historical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. There are also some new stadiums, including the Bird Nest and the Water Cube, which were built for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
I am really looking forward to going there and visiting all the wonderful places. At the same time, I hope Beijing will be more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求以“The place I want to visit”为题写短文介绍自己想要参观的地方。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍想要去参观哪里；
第二步，谈谈想去这个地方的原因；
第三步，介绍想要在那里干些什么。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth. 想要做某事
②such as 例如
③look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
④at the same time 与此同时
[高分句型]
①There are several reasons why I would like to visit Beijing.（why引导定语从句）
②Second, there are many historical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace.（there be句型）
4、
【答案】例文
Dear Amy,
I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting. As you mentioned in the letter, I have some advice for you.
Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident and positive, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble. Inner beauty is more important than appearance. Secondly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight. Thirdly, doing proper exercise is necessary. You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly.
The more you exercise, the healthier you’ll be. I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；
第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；
第三步，总结全文，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①there is no need to do sth没必要做某事
②stay away from…与……保持距离
③have courage to do sth有勇气做某事
[高分句型]
①I hope my advice will be helpful to you.（宾语从句）
②Stay away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead.（祈使句）
5、
【答案】例文
We have a computer in our home, and my father and I share it. My father is a manager of a company, so he often talks to his customers on the computer. He also goes on the Internet to check the times of trains, make travel plans, and buy tickets.
I often listen to music or watch movies on it at weekends. But I seldom play computer games on the Internet. In my opinion, playing computer games is very funny, but it wastes our time and it is also bad for our health and eyes.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点提示，介绍你和爸爸平时用电脑做什么，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，谈谈你对玩电脑游戏的看法并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go on the Internet上网
②make travel plans制订旅游计划
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, playing computer games is very funny, but it wastes our time and it is also bad for our health and eyes.（动名词短语作主语）
6、
【答案】例文
My Favorite English Homework
There is a survey about your favorite English homework. Here is the result.
15% of students like copying English words and sentences, because they think it is very easy. 25% of students prefer to read English books from which they can learn a lot. 35% of students like to watch English movies so that they can learn a lot about foreign culture. Other students like to listen to English songs.
As for me, I like watching movies. It can only bring me happiness and fun, but also it can broaden my horizon.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的调查结构介绍自己最喜欢的英语作业。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，描述调查结果；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的作业形式并陈述理由。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事
②as for至于
③not only...but also不但……而且
[高分句型]
①15% of students like copying English words and sentences, because they think it is very easy.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②25% of students prefer to read English books from wh
7、
【答案】例文
Dear David,
Welcome to my home! I’d like to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my brother and I. My parents are both math teachers and they like reading books very much. My brother and I are in the same school. He likes playing football with his classmates and I like drawing.
In my family, there are many merits. We respect the old and care for the young. When we meet someone who needs help, we will be willing to help them. What’s more, we try our best to protect the environment. When we see rubbish on the ground, we will pick it up.
Now you see what my family are like. I’m sure you will enjoy your stay in my home. Looking forward to your coming!
Sincerely.
Your friend
【解析】
详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己的家庭情况，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家庭成员以及爱好；
第二步，介绍自己的家庭美德；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①try our best to do sth.尽我们最大的努力做某事
②pick up捡起
[高分句型]
When we meet someone who needs help, we will be willing to help them.(when引导的时间状语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
8、
【答案】例文
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the Monkey King is my favourite book.
The Monkey King is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. He is not a normal monkey. In fact, he is brave enough to fight with any bad person and he can always win the fights. So I like to read it.
The book mainly talks about three things. First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. Secondly, the book shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but not least, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. And it also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it tells us to keep trying in our lives and never give up.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求介绍自己最喜欢的书，包括其主要内容及喜欢它的理由；考生应按照要求写作，正确用词，使作文表达流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己最喜欢的书是什么；
第二步，详细介绍这本书的主要内容以及你喜欢它的理由；
第三步，介绍从这本书中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact 事实上
②try his best to do sth. 尽他最大的努力做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. (why引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句)
②I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.(because引导的原因状语从句)
9、
【答案】例文
My Experience of Doing Housework
As a family member, it’s our duty to help our parents do housework.
In my spare time, I usually help my parents clean the house. Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping to buy food for lunch, I began to clean my house. First, I swept the floor and wiped the table. Then, I collected all the books and other things and put them in place. Finally, I took all the rubbish out. When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me.
I felt so happy at that time. So I keep doing housework, such as sweeping the floor or tidying the room. Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them. So I suggest all of us should take action from now on.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：要求以“My Experience of Doing Housework”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，并注意语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头；
第二步，介绍自己通常做什么家务以及做家务的经历；
第三步，表达感受并建议大家参与做家务。
[亮点词汇]
①began to do开始做
②put them in place将它们放回原位
③at that time在那时
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping to buy food for lunch, I began to clean my house.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②So I suggest all of us should take action from now on.（省略that的宾语从句）
10、【答案】A possible version：
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
As teenagers, doing chores is one of the most important life skills in our daily life.
My mum always encourages me and teaches me to do chores. She wants me to learn more life skills and take good care of myself in the future. Thanks to her help, I can make simple food, tidy my room, wash clothes and take the dog for walks. Recently I have also learned to make cookies in my labor class at school. Later, I hope to learn how to cook beef noodles, because my family are fond of them. Flower arranging is another skill that I want to learn because it can keep me calm and improve my life. During learning, I can have a better communication with my parents.
Doing chores makes me more independent, confident and sociable. The more chores I can do, the better life I will have!
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍做家务的重要性；
第二步，分享自己会做的家务以及希望学哪些家务，并说说明原因；
第三步，介绍做家务给我带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②take good care of好好照顾
③be fond of喜欢
[高分句型]
①As teenagers, doing chores is one of the most important life skills in our daily life.（动名词作主语）
②The more chores I can do, the better life I will have!（the+比较级，the+比较级）