Unit7-10 单元主题写作课件(共53张PPT) 2023-2024学年鲁教版(五四学制)九年级英语全册

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Unit 7 Life is full of the unexpected.
单元主题写作
一、话题分析
本单元话题是“难以预料的事情（Unexpected events）”, 通过谈论发生在身边的令人尴尬或难忘的事，引导学生以积极的心态、正确的方式应对生活中发生的各种意外。
二、写作方法
“三步一注意六要素法”写“难以预料的事情类”作文
步骤一：点明主题，说出事情的主要内容；
步骤二：写出事情的经过；
步骤三：事情的结果。
一注意：注意时态。描述事情的经过，常用一般过去时。
六要素：时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果。
三、素材积累
(一)“难以预料的事情类”作文的常用词汇：
as usual // feeling // ask // happen // not ... until //
though // but // suddenly
(二) “难以预料的事情类”作文的常用句型：
开头句
1. Li Hua is a boy who ...
2. Life is full of the unexpected ...
3. It was a nice day ...
中间句
1. One night, after dinner, he started ...
2. A few hours later, a strong feeling of ...
3. His father took him to ...
4. By the time I arrived at the party, everyone else ...
结尾句
1. After that Li Hua said that ...
2. What an unusual day!
3. What sweet memories!
四、写作任务
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack 在上次的电子邮件中讲述了他遭遇的尴尬事。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，讲讲你的一次尴尬经历。
要求：100 词左右。电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【写作模板】
点明主题
事情经过
事情结果
Once, I invited my friend, Peggy, to dinner.
Peggy had to pay for the dinner instead of me.
While enjoying the delicious food, we talked
about ...
It was a great time ...
But only when I was about to ... did I realize ...
【高分作文】
Dear Jack,
Here I’d like to tell you about my embarrassing experience.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Jack,
Here I’d like to tell you about my embarrassing experience.
Once, I invited my friend, Peggy, to dinner. We hadn’t seen each other for three years. While enjoying the delicious food, we talked about the people we knew, the places we had been to and the things we found interesting.
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We shared each other’s joys and pains. It was a great time. But only when I was about to pay for the dinner did I realize I had left my wallet at home. This meant Peggy had to pay for the dinner instead of me. I will never forget this embarrassing experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
单元主题写作
Unit 8
We’re trying to save the earth!
一、话题分析
本单元话题是“保护环境”，旨在培养学生爱护环境和保护动物的意识。通过学习，学生了解了濒危动物及珍稀动物的生存现状，意识到保护濒危动物和拯救地球的重要性。
二、写作方法
“一提二展三结尾法”写“环境保护类”作文
1. 开篇提出论点；
2. 根据背景材料和提示展开正文；
3. 结尾总结。
三、素材积累
“环境保护类”作文的常用词汇：
plant // animal // human // cut down // pour // waste // law // stop // reuse // recycle // turn off // environment // protect // pollute // pollution // in danger // dirty // throwaway
“环境保护类”作文的常用句型：
开头句
1. It’s necessary/ important to...
2. The environment today is becoming worse and worse...
3. Now, many wild animals are in great danger of dying out because of ...
4. It is our duty to protect ...
5. I think it is necessary for ... to ...
中间句
1. First, we should turn off the tap...
2. Second, we can use...
3. Third, try not to...
4. What’s more, in order to save paper, we should ...
结尾句
1. Let’s try our best to ...
2. As long as we pull together ...
四、写作任务
“绿水青山就是金山银山”是中国生态文明建设的目标, 实现这个目标需要我们保护环境, 从我做起, 从小事做起。请根据下面表格提示, 结合自己的生活实际, 以 “Build a beautiful China”为题写一篇10 0 词左右的短文。
做法 ◆及时关掉水龙头，离开家时关灯
◆购物时尽量不使用塑料袋
◆少开私家车
◆不用一次性筷子和杯子
目的 节约水，减少白色污染，节约纸
要求：
1. 短文需包含表格中所有信息, 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 可适当发挥;
2. 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
tap, cloth bag, walk, throwaway
【写作模板】
开篇点题
展开正文
总结收尾
To build a beautiful China, we must…
Let’s try our best to…
First, we should…Second, we can use…
【高分作文】
Build a beautiful China
Nowadays, our environment is getting worse and worse. To build a beautiful China, we must protect our environment.
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First, we should turn off the tap in time so as to save water if we are not using it. Turn off the lights when we leave a room.
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Second, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic ones while shopping, so we can reduce the “white pollution”. Third, try not to drive our personal cars. We can walk to school or work. Riding bikes and taking buses are also good choices. By doing this, the air can become better. What’s more, in order to save paper, we should use both sides of paper.
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And at the same time, stop using throwaway chopsticks and cups, so fewer trees will be cut down.
Let’s try our best to protect our environment. As long as we pull together, we will build a beautiful China.
Unit 9 It’s important to have
good habits.
单元主题写作
一、话题分析
本单元话题是“健康的生活”，主要围绕青少年的日常生活习惯展开讨论。学生通过学习，培养良好的学习和生活习惯，学会学习和健康生活，提高自身综合素质。
二、写作方法
运用“三维法”写“健康生活介绍类”作文
1. 明确介绍主题；
2. 描述主题细节；
3. 概括作文主旨。
三、素材积累
“健康生活介绍类”作文常用词汇：
live a healthy life // good habits // necessary //
exercise // healthy food // instead of // lifestyle //
besides... // in order to // so that // skill // basic
“健康生活介绍类”作文常用句型：
开头句
1. Life skills are necessary for us teenagers.
2. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to ...
3. And it’s important for us to live a healthy life ...
中间句
1. As for me, I would like to ...
2. It’s wonderful /important to ...
3. Besides, learning to look after ...
4. In order to develop ..., I will ...
5. And it’s also a good idea to ...
结尾句
1. I hope my advice will be helpful.
2. Let’s take action now.
四、写作任务
[2023 泰安] 强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面提示，以 “How to be good students in the new era”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代 (era)的好学生。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。
品德
学业
生活
热爱祖国 诚实友善
增强体质 勤劳自立
勤奋学习 合作互助
To be good students
【写作模板】
明确
主题
描述
细节
概括
主旨
Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students in this new era.
As long as we work hard, we will be ...
First, we should love ...
Second, we should study hard ...
Third, we should take more ...
【高分作文】
How to be good students in the new era
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The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students in this new era.
First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who help us.
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We should be friendly to our classmates. Second, we should study hard and be creative. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent.
As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.
单元主题写作
Unit 10 I remember meeting all of
you in Grade 6.
一、话题分析
本单元话题为“在校时光”，学生通过学习，培养珍惜美好校园时光的意识，能够与他人分享快乐的学校生活，珍惜初中生活的点点滴滴，感恩身边的每个人，用感恩传递爱，感悟美好人生，体会生活多姿多彩。
二、写作方法
运用“一点二介三感谢法”写“回忆初中生活类”作文
1. 开篇点题；
2. 介绍人物事件；
3. 感谢祝愿。
三、素材积累
“回忆初中生活类”作文常用词汇：
junior school // say goodbye to // have trouble //not only ... but also // teach // fall in love //excellent // confident // problem // deal with //solve // in the future // believe // wish
“回忆初中生活类”作文常用句型：
开头句
1. It’s time for me to say goodbye to ...
2. I’m here to say thanks to ...
中间句
1. When I started my junior school life at first, I had trouble ...
2. Because ... , I fell in love with ...
3. He/She not only taught me ... but also taught me ...
4. I believe ...
结尾句
1. Thank you, ...
2. Give my best wishes to you!
3. Best wishes to you!
四、[2023 凉山] 写作任务
在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他（她）的感谢，请你以“Thanks, _________”为标题，根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。
要求：
1. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【写作模板】
开篇
点题
人物
事件
感谢
祝愿
The person that I want to thank most is my mother.
I will remember her love and be thankful to her.
I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.
She is 40 years old.
She is tall and thin.
She is friendly, but strict with me.
She always gives me the warmest love and takes care of me all the time.
【高分作文】
Thanks, ____________
Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life. Your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend ...
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Thanks, Mom
Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life. Your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend ... The person that I want to thank most is my mother.
She is 40 years old. She works in a hospital, and she works very hard. She is tall and thin.
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She is friendly, but strict with me. She always gives me the warmest love and takes care of me all the time. She is willing to do everything for me.
To express my love, I can buy presents for her, study hard and help her do something useful. I will remember her love and be thankful to her. I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.