2024年中考英语话题写作课件 主题三　自我认识与自我提升

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2024中考话题写作
全效学习 中考学练测
主题三　自我认识与自我提升
分析浙江近三年和全国其他省市近两年中考书面表达可知，2022衢州、2023山西、2022北京和2022江西都考查了“自我认识与自我提升”这一主题。
1 命题探究
【人教版】
新课标主题 年级与单元 单元话题
自我认识 七上 Unit 2　This is my sister. The family
七下Unit 1　Can you play the guitar？ Joining a club
七下 Unit 9　What does he look like？ Physical appearance
八上 Unit 3　I'm more outgoing than my sister. Personal traits
九全Unit 9　I like music that I can dance to. Music and movies
自我提升 八上Unit 6　I'm going to study computer science. Life goals
九全 Unit 4　I used to be afraid of the dark. How we have changed
【外研版】
新课标主题 年级与模块 模块话题
自我认识 七上Module 8　Choosing presents Personal preference
七下Module 2　What can you do？ Personal background
七下Module 7　My past life Personal background
七下Module 9　Life history Writers
八下Module 1　Feelings and impressions Feelings and moods
八下Module 6　Hobbies Hobbies
(一)熟记下列单词
1．describe v．描述
2．hard－working adj.工作努力的；辛勤的
3．outgoing adj.爱交际的；友好的；外向的
4．difficult adj.难对付的
5．weight n．重量
6．common adj.普通的
2 词汇积累
7．handsome adj.英俊的
8．prefer v．更喜欢
9．ability n．能力
10．humorous adj.幽默的
11．silent adj.沉默的
12．brave adj.勇敢的
13．honest adj.诚实的
14．serious adj.严肃的；稳重的
(二)翻译下列短语
1．善于应付孩子__________________________
2．留短发/长发/卷发/直发
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3．中等身高_______________________
4．在音乐方面有天赋_________________________________
5．使我表现出最好的一面________________________
be good with children/kids
have/with short/long/curly/straight hair
(be)of medium height
be talented in/have a talent for music
bring out the best in me
6．我的自我提高
________________________________________________
7．成功之路_____________________
8．克服害羞___________________
9．逗得大家大笑不止________________________
10．爱读书的人______________
my own personal improvement/my self－improvement
the road to success
deal with shyness
make people laugh a lot
book lover
(一)教材母句回顾
3 句型荟萃
(二)佳句扩展积累
自我认识
1．It's my personality that enables me to live happily.Being an outgoing girl，I can make friends easily and express my thoughts freely.[强调句句型：It's…that…；express one's thought(s)表达某人的想法]
是我的个性使我能够快乐地生活。作为一个外向的女孩，我可以轻松地结交朋友并自由表达我的想法。
2．As long as he makes a promise，he will never break it even when he is in trouble. [as long as 只要；make a promise 许下诺言]
只要他做出承诺，即使遇到麻烦，他也绝不会违背。
3．My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends.[so…that…如此……以至于……；have(no) difficulty(in)doing sth.做某事(没)有困难]
我的英语口语非常出色，与外国朋友交流没有困难。
4．Outgoing and energetic，I get on well with others.[outgoing and energetic形容词作状语；get on (well)with与……和睦相处]
我外向而精力充沛，与他人相处融洽。
5．In the past，I used to be short and fat，like an ugly duckling because I always eat junk food.[in the past 在过去；used to do sth.过去常常做某事]
过去，我曾经又矮又胖，像一只丑小鸭，因为我总是吃垃圾
食品。
自我提升
1．What's more，being self－disciplined helps us prepare for a better and brighter future.[what's more 更为重要的是；prepare for为……做准备]
更重要的是，自律有助于我们为更美好、更光明的未来做好
准备。
2．Action speaks louder than words.I will try my best to become a better person. [Action speaks louder than words.行动胜于语言。]
行动胜于语言。我会尽力成为一个更好的人。
3．It's of great importance to learn emotion management which will help us make friends and build a closer relationship with them．[of importance＝important 重要的；build a closerelationship with sb.与某人建立亲密的关系]
学习情绪管理非常重要，这将有助于我们结交朋友并与他们建立更密切的关系。
4．In my opinion，a more meaningful life must be full of ups and downs．We should never be afraid of any failure and shouldn't give up easily.[ups and downs起落，浮沉；be afraid of 害怕]
在我看来，更有意义的人生一定是跌宕起伏的。我们永远不应该害怕任何失败，也不应该轻易放弃。
5．You should learn to be a person with a good sense of time．[a sense of time 时间感]
你应该学会做一个有时间感的人。
6．Being independent，I don't depend on my parents too much and I can think wisely.[being independent 现在分词作伴随状语；depend on依赖]
我独立自主，不太依赖父母，并且可以明智地思考。
7．So no matter what I do in the future，I will make a plan and complete it in strict accordance with the plan. [no matter what 无论什么，引导让步状语从句；make a plan制订计划]
所以以后不管我做什么，我都会制订一个计划，严格按照计划完成。
8．Of course，we have to be honest with ourselves.That means we must realise our own disadvantages.Only then can we try to make ourselves better. [be honest with sb.对某人坦诚；“only＋副词”放句首时，句子要用部分倒装]
当然，我们必须对自己诚实。这意味着我们必须认识到我们自己的缺点。只有这样，我们才能努力让自己变得更好。
9．I record my good and bad behaviours from time to time，and then I will remember to behave well next time.[from time to time 时常；remember to do sth.记得去做某事]
我时不时地记录自己的好行为和坏行为，然后我会记得下次表现好。
(一)阅读下面短文，然后根据括号内所给汉语意思写出单词的正确形式(每空一词)
Sally and Ann are sisters.They're both 1._________(高的). And each has dark 2.________(头发)and brown eyes.They look quite 3._________(相像的)，but their characters are different. Sally is really confident and 4.__________(友好的).She's always talking and 5.__________(说笑话；开玩笑)with many people，and she does things quickly.Ann always keeps 6.__________(沉默的).She isn't very active.She's more 7.________(稳重的). And she has a cool brain and does things slowly.It's her happiest moment when she's sitting quietly in her room，reading a book.
tall
hair
similar
friendly
joking
silent
serious
4 语境应用
(二)用方框中所给单词的适当形式填空，每词仅用一次(每空
一词)
As for me，a middle school student，one of my most important responsibilities is to study hard.To be responsible，I listen to teachers carefully and take part in activities
1.__________ in class.Instead of watching TV or playing
2.__________，I do my homework first when I get home.As a
result，I have 3.__________ great progress in my
actively
games
made
studies.Another responsibility I have is loving my parents.I spend my free time with them，telling them about things that happened at school 4.__________ just watching our favourite movies together.What's more，5.__________ a citizen，I must be responsible for my actions.No matter where I am，I behave properly and follow the rules.
or
as
子主题1　自我认识
[杭州中考]假设你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件，以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。词数80左右。
5 写作指导
From: Linda
To: Li Ping
…
I'm really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer.I can show him around the city！Please tell me something about him！How old is he？What does he look like？What kind of person is he and what's he interested in？
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love，
Linda
From: Li Ping
To: Linda
Dear Linda，
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Ping
一审(审主题、文体、人称、时态等)
主题 对象 人称 时态
__________ __________ __________ _____________
介绍人物
外国朋友
第三人称
一般现在时
一审，二圈，三分段，四升格，五成篇
二圈(圈题眼)
三分段(列框架)
四升格(修改润色)
连句成篇初体验
Dear Linda，
How is everything going？①Thanks a lot for agreeing to show my brother James around Rome. I must tell you something about him so that you can form a close friendship with him more quickly.
②James is a fifteen－year－old boy and he is outgoing and talented in music. If you see a boy in black singing popular songs and dancing at the airport，that must be him.I'm sure you will like him at first glance.Like many teenagers，③he has big eyes，short black hair and he is a bit tall．“Rome cannot be built in one day.” is his favourite motto which encourages him to become a persistent boy.
Thank you again for your help and have a great time！
Yours，
Li Ping
句式升格再挑战
①用be thankful that句式升格
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②用who引导的定语从句升格
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③用with结构升格
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I'm so thankful that you agree to show my brother James around Rome.
James is a fifteen－year－old boy who is outgoing and talented in music.
he is a bit tall with big eyes and short black hair
五成篇(连句成篇，规范书写)
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子主题2　自我提升
为了鼓励同学们放飞青春梦想，努力成为德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人，你校英语俱乐部打算举办题为“How to Improve Myself”的征文活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
注意：(1)短文必须包含要点提示，可适当发挥；
(2)词数：80～100；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
How to Improve Myself
Everyone wants to get better and better，and so do I．In order to improve myself，I'll do as follows.
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一审(审主题、文体、人称、时态等)
主题 文体 人称 时态
______________ __________ __________ _____________
如何自我提升
议论文
第一人称
一般将来时
一审，二圈，三分段，四升格，五成篇
二圈(圈题眼)
三分段(列框架)
四升格(修改润色)
连句成篇初体验
How to Improve Myself
Everyone wants to get better and better，and so do I．In order to improve myself，I'll do as follows
Firstly，I'll try to form some good habits.For example，I used to be poor at managing my time.From now on，I'll make a to－do list so that I can make full use of my time.Secondly，I'll read widely to increase my knowledge in my spare time.①I believe that if I read more，I will be wiser. Thirdly，②I'll develop new hobbies like drawing and gardening. Last but not least，I'll try to do something meaningful such as volunteering in old people's homes and giving away books to people in need.
③If I do these things，I'm sure that I can improve myself.
句式升格再挑战
①用“the＋比较级，the＋比较级”句式升格
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②用take up短语升格
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③用by doing sth.结构升格
_________________________________________________________
I believe that the more I read，the wiser I will be.
I'll take up new hobbies like drawing and gardening.
By doing these things，I'm sure that I can improve myself.
五成篇(连句成篇，规范书写)
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[2023·山西中考]青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题，对1127名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
6 典例再现
假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1．简要说明图表内容；
2．从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
要求：
1．词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1，127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”．Here are the results. _____________________________________________________
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【中考范文】（建议晨读背诵）
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1，127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”．Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes，while 53 percent consider themselves positive.47 percent think they don't like to complain.
As for me，I find myself really positive.Last month，I was chosen to play a role in an English show.It was difficult for me to memorise the lines in a short time.However，I regarded it as a challenge，which was also a good chance to improve my English.So I made an effort to practise.Finally，I made it and received high praise.In fact，it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.
A[2022·北京中考]
某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的，取得了什么效果。
提示词语：plan，task，attention，make use of，progress
提示问题：How do you increase your efficiency(效率)？What have you achieved
7 触类旁通
High efficiency is important for a busy student. __________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is necessary for everyone to learn how to increase efficiency.
I have tried many ways to increase my efficiency since I was a middle school student.Before the beginning of a day，I always think about my goals and make a list of things I need to do.Then，I organise my to－do list to make an effective plan for the day.I always spend time doing important tasks first and make good use of the rest of the time.
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By managing my time well，I have made progress.I usually finish my homework on time and still have time to relax myself.High efficiency and time management have helped me be successful in various areas of my life.
B[2023·湖州模拟]
每个人都是独一无二的，都会发出自身特有的光芒。相信自己，你就会变得了不起；做自己，你就是最棒的！请结合自己的性格、爱好、生活习惯等方面，以“I like myself”为话题写一篇短文向校刊的英语专栏投稿，谈谈你眼中的自己。
*What do you like about yourself？(character，hobby，lifestyle…)
*Why do you like yourself？(give an example/examples)
…
要求：(1)征文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
(3)词数：80－100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
I believe that a person who loves himself can love his life well.
Everyone is special.So am I．What I like about myself is mainly about my healthy life habit as well as good character. First，never stay up late so that I can listen attentively in class.I am outgoing，so I can get on well with others.Besides，jogging for half an hour every day helps me keep in excellent condition. Finally，it's my character that enables me to live happily.What I own has brought me lots of benefits and I will keep on working hard to perfect myself.
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