2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项冒险类读后续写 课件(共57张PPT)
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2022浙江1月卷
when Dr. Henderson was assigning( 指定) project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hope she wouldn’t assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate(命运)would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.
I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself, He looked at me as though I weren’t there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasn't mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed better if he did it alone. Needless to say, I didn't look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse. The project required each team to develop a hypothesis (假说), set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades -- the exact opposite of me. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what. After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasn't sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.
Para1. We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans
Para2. One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease.
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. The more we met , the more I knew about his ability. I was aware that my teammate was much more advanced than I. He knew technical things and approached every detail with great patience, I, on the contrary, had little to share, We discussed a lot and decided on an intelligent yet simple experiment, Part of our job was to select students who had volunteered to be subjects for our project. I decided to devote myself to the task of working with the subjects, while he developed the scientific model.
One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease. Apparently, the stress of getting the best grade had made his body break down. When visiting him, I noticed his weakness and depression for the first time, I assured him I would finish the project alone and that I wouldn't let him down, I poured more time and energy into that project. Finally, my hard work paid off - we got an A, which gave me great satisfaction. More importantly, I eared my teammate’s recognition and we have become good friends since then.
2021浙江卷续写-我和父亲
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn’t really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号).
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb’s-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn’t sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step to growing up. I’m glad you will be contributing to the household. ” My dad’s words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn’t interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
Para1. When I came home, my dad seemed to say something to me
Para2: I was surprised that my parents allowed me to spend money of my own
When I came home, my dad seemed to say something to me. Then my mother came over and told me that the farmer was waiting for me in the farm, But I lied to her that I had finished the tiring work there. Realizing my dishonesty from my words, Mom asked me what had happened, " I don't think it is fair to hand in all my earnings to the family. I should have the right to manage my earnings," I said in an unpleasant voice. After hearing what I said, Mom smiled, patting me on the shoulder," Everyone is a member of the family. As a man, you are supposed to shoulder your responsibility, However, your dad and I agree that you can still use your money as you wish.”
I was surprised that my parents allowed me to spend money of my own. At the moment, I learned what my dad meant and became willing to contribute more to our family. I no longer feel confused about why I should hand in my earnings, with which I had planned to buy a new football, as it's indeed my responsibility to support my family.
2021浙江卷1月卷续写-万圣节南瓜
Pumpkin( 南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition, We visit a local farm every October. in the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage -- I caried an 85-pounder back last year.
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner, Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table , with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter , but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork( 软木容) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. " I'm going to set it down, now ," I said , and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle , but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
Para1: I was struck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer
Para2. That video was posted the day before Halloween
I was struck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. I was overwhelmed by a feeling of regret and annoyance, while my parents and Jason burst into laughter. I pointed to the pumpkin on my head, saying“Help me! I can’t support its weight.” Much sooner than could be expected, my dad was determined to break the pumpkin with the help of a sharp knife. Eventually, I could take a breath of fresh air, only to find that my mom was engaged in filming my embarrassing and awkward situation.
That video was posted the day before Halloween.No sooner had the clip been posted on the internet than it managed to attract the attention of people online, racking up hundreds and thousands of views. It was when reporters called for the interview that I realized how popular the video was. Wild with joy, I became a celebrity in my city. There was no denying that this was the most unforgettable Holloween I had ever had.
2020浙江卷续写-人站北极熊
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
Para1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp
Para2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
Para1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp
意识到喷雾无用，熊更凶狠
我害怕，不知咋办
Elli 行动，扔面包
行动有用，熊跑去吃面包
熊吃完又折回，惊险时刻
Para2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
我们开心，得救(心理+语言)
登直升机脱险(动作+心理)
俯瞰营地，发现惊人一幕
熊终于冲破栅栏吃食物
我拍照，心想:“熊得逞了!”
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad, My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn't long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived, “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved, When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene - we were robbed by a polar bear!
2016浙江卷续写-荒野求生
2016年10月浙江卷
Para.1 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.
Para.2&3With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Para.4 Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
Para.5 As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
7月Jane和Tom去森林野营，爆发争吵，Jane独自离开
Jane迷路了，呼救得不到回应，在黑暗中睡去，非常想念和爱着Tom,非常后悔吵架
Jane苏醒时找到河流，吃了浆果，沿着河流寻找露营地
听到直升机的声音，树木太密，他跑到空旷的地方，挥舞黄色上衣，希望被直升机看到
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
1.突然，绝对的黑暗控制了森林，一波恐惧感席卷了他
Immediately, an absolute + n. + ruled the＋地点n。+ and a wave of + 情绪n. +swept over sb.
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her.
2. 他的心脏狂(fiercely)跳，手掌出汗，内心有一个声音告诉自己要找一个安全的地方。
One's heart pounding fiercely and one's palm sweating, an inner voice told sb. that.
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.
3.尽管她又累又害怕，Jane挣扎着站了起来,尽量不让身心都崩溃。
adj. and adi. as sb. was, sb. did sth, doing sth
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Tired and terrified as she was, Jane struggled to her feet, trying not to have a breakdown both physically and mentally.
4.幸运的是，不久后他就找到了一个洞穴。
Luckily/ Fortunately, it didn't take long before sb. did ...
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a cave.
5.如释重负地叹了口气，他感觉到一丝希望，感觉似乎这个山洞在安慰他，并对他说“快进来，你一定很累。”
sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of sth, and felt as if sth had been doing and saying
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of hope and felt as if the cave had been comforting her and saying, "Come in, you must be exhausted!"
6.从周围安静的环境中判断，很显然Jane仍然困在森林，没有人来救援他
Judging from sth ，it was evident that sb was still trapped in(without any help). sb. was at a loss what to do.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
Judging from the quiet surrounding, it was evident that Jane was still trapped in the forest without anyone coming to the rescue.
7.他突然想到他应该首先找个开阔地，令他开心的是，不久他就找到了这个地方，并且他听到震耳欲聋的噪音在靠近。
It suddenly dawned on sb. that sb. should do ...
It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. To her great joy, it didn't take her long to spot such a place and she heard the deafening noise coming closer.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
7.他突然想到他应该首先找个开阔地，令他开心的是，不久他就找到了这个地方，并且他听到震耳欲聋的噪音在靠近。
It suddenly dawned on sb. that sb. should do ...
It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. To her great joy, it didn't take her long to spot such a place and she heard the deafening noise coming closer.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
8.抬起头并看到了直升机，Jane感觉一股强烈的激动涌上心头，并涌遍全身
Seeing/ Hearing sth, sb. felt a great sense of +情绪+
welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.
Looking up and seeing a helicopter, Jane felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
9.迫切（eager）又激动 (excited),她挥舞 (flagged)着黄村衫 (yellow blouse),不遗余力地大喊 (yell),为了吸引别人的注意力。
情绪+ and + 情绪,sb. spared no effort to do… so as to…
Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others' attention.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
10.幸运的是，她被注意 (notice）到了，并被带上了直升机。在这里，她看到了文夫，注视着 (staring at)自己，满脸安慰
Fortunately, she was noticed and brought into the helicopter. Here,
she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
11.就是在那一时刻他们决定再也不争吵，而要学会妥协。多么宝贵的经验教训啊
It was at the moment that sb. did not do。。。 any more，but did ......
What a valuable lesson for sb to learn!
It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise. What a valuable lesson for the couple to learn!
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
2017浙江卷续写-野狼追击
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back,shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
Para1:The car abruptly stopped in front him
Para2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived
Para1:The car abruptly stopped in front him
(衔接上文）Mac dashed to the car like a bullet and got into it.“Please wait for a moment! My friends were still in danger!”（愈演愈烈） he begged Paul in a shaking voice. As the wolf was waiting for its pray outside the car, Mac was on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do. （悔不当初）Being aware of what a desperate situation he was in, he thought to himself,“What did I do to deserve this If only I stayed at home!”（度日如年）The following minutes felt like years, but he kept telling himself that everything would be all right.
Para2. A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.
(灵光一现）Suddenly, one of the cyclists touched his bag and realized that there was a bag of beef. It flashed through his mind that maybe he could lead the wolf away with the beef. Without any hesitation, he pulled the bag out and threw it straight to the fierce animal.
(正向结局）Fortunately, the wolf instantly caught the smell of the bag, jumped to it and began enjoying its meal. Seeing this, they immediately jumped off their bicycles and climbed into the car. Exhausted and scared to death though they were, their hearts were filled with gratitude. “Thank God!”they uttered the words in the same breath.
2022浙江1月卷
when Dr. Henderson was assigning( 指定) project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hope she wouldn’t assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate(命运)would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.
I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself, He looked at me as though I weren’t there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasn't mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed better if he did it alone. Needless to say, I didn't look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse. The project required each team to develop a hypothesis (假说), set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades -- the exact opposite of me. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what. After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasn't sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.
Para1. We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans
Para2. One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease.
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. The more we met , the more I knew about his ability. I was aware that my teammate was much more advanced than I. He knew technical things and approached every detail with great patience, I, on the contrary, had little to share, We discussed a lot and decided on an intelligent yet simple experiment, Part of our job was to select students who had volunteered to be subjects for our project. I decided to devote myself to the task of working with the subjects, while he developed the scientific model.
One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease. Apparently, the stress of getting the best grade had made his body break down. When visiting him, I noticed his weakness and depression for the first time, I assured him I would finish the project alone and that I wouldn't let him down, I poured more time and energy into that project. Finally, my hard work paid off - we got an A, which gave me great satisfaction. More importantly, I eared my teammate’s recognition and we have become good friends since then.
2021浙江卷续写-我和父亲
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn’t really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号).
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb’s-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn’t sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step to growing up. I’m glad you will be contributing to the household. ” My dad’s words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn’t interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
Para1. When I came home, my dad seemed to say something to me
Para2: I was surprised that my parents allowed me to spend money of my own
When I came home, my dad seemed to say something to me. Then my mother came over and told me that the farmer was waiting for me in the farm, But I lied to her that I had finished the tiring work there. Realizing my dishonesty from my words, Mom asked me what had happened, " I don't think it is fair to hand in all my earnings to the family. I should have the right to manage my earnings," I said in an unpleasant voice. After hearing what I said, Mom smiled, patting me on the shoulder," Everyone is a member of the family. As a man, you are supposed to shoulder your responsibility, However, your dad and I agree that you can still use your money as you wish.”
I was surprised that my parents allowed me to spend money of my own. At the moment, I learned what my dad meant and became willing to contribute more to our family. I no longer feel confused about why I should hand in my earnings, with which I had planned to buy a new football, as it's indeed my responsibility to support my family.
2021浙江卷1月卷续写-万圣节南瓜
Pumpkin( 南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition, We visit a local farm every October. in the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage -- I caried an 85-pounder back last year.
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner, Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table , with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter , but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork( 软木容) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. " I'm going to set it down, now ," I said , and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle , but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
Para1: I was struck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer
Para2. That video was posted the day before Halloween
I was struck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. I was overwhelmed by a feeling of regret and annoyance, while my parents and Jason burst into laughter. I pointed to the pumpkin on my head, saying“Help me! I can’t support its weight.” Much sooner than could be expected, my dad was determined to break the pumpkin with the help of a sharp knife. Eventually, I could take a breath of fresh air, only to find that my mom was engaged in filming my embarrassing and awkward situation.
That video was posted the day before Halloween.No sooner had the clip been posted on the internet than it managed to attract the attention of people online, racking up hundreds and thousands of views. It was when reporters called for the interview that I realized how popular the video was. Wild with joy, I became a celebrity in my city. There was no denying that this was the most unforgettable Holloween I had ever had.
2020浙江卷续写-人站北极熊
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
Para1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp
Para2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
Para1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp
意识到喷雾无用，熊更凶狠
我害怕，不知咋办
Elli 行动，扔面包
行动有用，熊跑去吃面包
熊吃完又折回，惊险时刻
Para2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
我们开心，得救(心理+语言)
登直升机脱险(动作+心理)
俯瞰营地，发现惊人一幕
熊终于冲破栅栏吃食物
我拍照，心想:“熊得逞了!”
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad, My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn't long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived, “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved, When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene - we were robbed by a polar bear!
2016浙江卷续写-荒野求生
2016年10月浙江卷
Para.1 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.
Para.2&3With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Para.4 Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
Para.5 As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
7月Jane和Tom去森林野营，爆发争吵，Jane独自离开
Jane迷路了，呼救得不到回应，在黑暗中睡去，非常想念和爱着Tom,非常后悔吵架
Jane苏醒时找到河流，吃了浆果，沿着河流寻找露营地
听到直升机的声音，树木太密，他跑到空旷的地方，挥舞黄色上衣，希望被直升机看到
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
1.突然，绝对的黑暗控制了森林，一波恐惧感席卷了他
Immediately, an absolute + n. + ruled the＋地点n。+ and a wave of + 情绪n. +swept over sb.
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her.
2. 他的心脏狂(fiercely)跳，手掌出汗，内心有一个声音告诉自己要找一个安全的地方。
One's heart pounding fiercely and one's palm sweating, an inner voice told sb. that.
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.
3.尽管她又累又害怕，Jane挣扎着站了起来,尽量不让身心都崩溃。
adj. and adi. as sb. was, sb. did sth, doing sth
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Tired and terrified as she was, Jane struggled to her feet, trying not to have a breakdown both physically and mentally.
4.幸运的是，不久后他就找到了一个洞穴。
Luckily/ Fortunately, it didn't take long before sb. did ...
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a cave.
5.如释重负地叹了口气，他感觉到一丝希望，感觉似乎这个山洞在安慰他，并对他说“快进来，你一定很累。”
sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of sth, and felt as if sth had been doing and saying
P1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of hope and felt as if the cave had been comforting her and saying, "Come in, you must be exhausted!"
6.从周围安静的环境中判断，很显然Jane仍然困在森林，没有人来救援他
Judging from sth ，it was evident that sb was still trapped in(without any help). sb. was at a loss what to do.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
Judging from the quiet surrounding, it was evident that Jane was still trapped in the forest without anyone coming to the rescue.
7.他突然想到他应该首先找个开阔地，令他开心的是，不久他就找到了这个地方，并且他听到震耳欲聋的噪音在靠近。
It suddenly dawned on sb. that sb. should do ...
It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. To her great joy, it didn't take her long to spot such a place and she heard the deafening noise coming closer.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
7.他突然想到他应该首先找个开阔地，令他开心的是，不久他就找到了这个地方，并且他听到震耳欲聋的噪音在靠近。
It suddenly dawned on sb. that sb. should do ...
It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. To her great joy, it didn't take her long to spot such a place and she heard the deafening noise coming closer.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
8.抬起头并看到了直升机，Jane感觉一股强烈的激动涌上心头，并涌遍全身
Seeing/ Hearing sth, sb. felt a great sense of +情绪+
welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.
Looking up and seeing a helicopter, Jane felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
9.迫切（eager）又激动 (excited),她挥舞 (flagged)着黄村衫 (yellow blouse),不遗余力地大喊 (yell),为了吸引别人的注意力。
情绪+ and + 情绪,sb. spared no effort to do… so as to…
Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others' attention.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
10.幸运的是，她被注意 (notice）到了，并被带上了直升机。在这里，她看到了文夫，注视着 (staring at)自己，满脸安慰
Fortunately, she was noticed and brought into the helicopter. Here,
she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief.
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
11.就是在那一时刻他们决定再也不争吵，而要学会妥协。多么宝贵的经验教训啊
It was at the moment that sb. did not do。。。 any more，but did ......
What a valuable lesson for sb to learn!
It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise. What a valuable lesson for the couple to learn!
P2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
2017浙江卷续写-野狼追击
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back,shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
Para1:The car abruptly stopped in front him
Para2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived
Para1:The car abruptly stopped in front him
(衔接上文）Mac dashed to the car like a bullet and got into it.“Please wait for a moment! My friends were still in danger!”（愈演愈烈） he begged Paul in a shaking voice. As the wolf was waiting for its pray outside the car, Mac was on the edge of breaking down, totally at a loss what to do. （悔不当初）Being aware of what a desperate situation he was in, he thought to himself,“What did I do to deserve this If only I stayed at home!”（度日如年）The following minutes felt like years, but he kept telling himself that everything would be all right.
Para2. A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.
(灵光一现）Suddenly, one of the cyclists touched his bag and realized that there was a bag of beef. It flashed through his mind that maybe he could lead the wolf away with the beef. Without any hesitation, he pulled the bag out and threw it straight to the fierce animal.
(正向结局）Fortunately, the wolf instantly caught the smell of the bag, jumped to it and began enjoying its meal. Seeing this, they immediately jumped off their bicycles and climbed into the car. Exhausted and scared to death though they were, their hearts were filled with gratitude. “Thank God!”they uttered the words in the same breath.