2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项2024年广东省深圳市高三（一调）考试作文分析学案（含答案）
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24届深圳市高三（一调）考试作文分析
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）
在口语课上，外教Alex组织同学们讨论是否使用网络投票（online voting）的方式评选校园十佳歌手。请你代表小组发言，
内容包括：
小组观点；
2. 陈述理由。
注意：
词数80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
作文审题
首先，你的观点必须鲜明：支持还是反对。
其次，经过小组讨论得出的这个观点的理由必须充足（笔者认为至少有二个理由）。
理由可以涉及网络投票的便利性、公正性、参与度等方面，也可以关注其可能带来的问题，如技术故障、作弊行为等。这篇作文主要难点在阐述理由。
确保理由与观点相符，并且有足够的说服力。
在表达上，要注意使用清晰、简洁的语言，避免使用过于复杂的句式和词汇。
同时，要确保作文的逻辑性，先陈述观点，再给出理由，理由之间也要有合理的衔接。
最后，要注意作文的字数限制，控制在80字左右。
另外，还要注意格式要正确，杜绝一段式，最好分三段。
参考范文一：
Hello, everyone!
Our group believes that online voting is a fantastic idea to select the top ten campus singers.
Firstly, it’s important to acknowledge that online voting is convenient and accessible to everyone.
With just a few clicks on a computer or a smartphone, we can easily cast votes to support our favorite singers.
Besides, online voting allows for a wider reach and engagement, breaking down the boundaries of physical locations and enabling more people to participate in the voting process.
Overall, we think online voting is a convenient and inclusive means for choosing the top ten campus singers.
Thank you for listening!
参考范文二：
Hello. everyone!
Though online voting is widely used, its drawbacks are undeniable. Let me share our concerns about using it to select the top ten campus singers.
Firstly, not all of us have access to the Internet or electronic devices so the voting result can not reflect the true preferences of the entire student community.
Besides, cheating is a significant concern. Contestants may create multiple accounts to vote for themselves or ask for votes from acquaintances.
In this way, the voting result fails to show the contestants' vocal abilities and stage performance.
Overall, while online voting has its benefits, we should also guarantee the fairness and reliability of the contest.
Thank you for listening!
多米下水作文：
Hello, everyone!
After heated discussion, our group has come to the conclusion that online voting should be employed to select the campus top ten singers.
Dominant advantages are evident as follows.
Firstly, online voting offers greater convenience for both organizers and students, freeing them of the efforts to be present on the voting scene.
Secondly, it involves a larger number of students to participate and have their voices heard, displaying democracy.
Thirdly, online voting ensures transparency and fairness, reducing the chance of cheating.
Altogether, online voting is a highly efficient way to select the stars of ours, and we strongly hope for its adoption. (103词)
Thank you for listening!
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）
在口语课上，外教Alex组织同学们讨论是否使用网络投票（online voting）的方式评选校园十佳歌手。请你代表小组发言，
内容包括：
小组观点；
2. 陈述理由。
注意：
词数80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
作文审题
首先，你的观点必须鲜明：支持还是反对。
其次，经过小组讨论得出的这个观点的理由必须充足（笔者认为至少有二个理由）。
理由可以涉及网络投票的便利性、公正性、参与度等方面，也可以关注其可能带来的问题，如技术故障、作弊行为等。这篇作文主要难点在阐述理由。
确保理由与观点相符，并且有足够的说服力。
在表达上，要注意使用清晰、简洁的语言，避免使用过于复杂的句式和词汇。
同时，要确保作文的逻辑性，先陈述观点，再给出理由，理由之间也要有合理的衔接。
最后，要注意作文的字数限制，控制在80字左右。
另外，还要注意格式要正确，杜绝一段式，最好分三段。
参考范文一：
Hello, everyone!
Our group believes that online voting is a fantastic idea to select the top ten campus singers.
Firstly, it’s important to acknowledge that online voting is convenient and accessible to everyone.
With just a few clicks on a computer or a smartphone, we can easily cast votes to support our favorite singers.
Besides, online voting allows for a wider reach and engagement, breaking down the boundaries of physical locations and enabling more people to participate in the voting process.
Overall, we think online voting is a convenient and inclusive means for choosing the top ten campus singers.
Thank you for listening!
参考范文二：
Hello. everyone!
Though online voting is widely used, its drawbacks are undeniable. Let me share our concerns about using it to select the top ten campus singers.
Firstly, not all of us have access to the Internet or electronic devices so the voting result can not reflect the true preferences of the entire student community.
Besides, cheating is a significant concern. Contestants may create multiple accounts to vote for themselves or ask for votes from acquaintances.
In this way, the voting result fails to show the contestants' vocal abilities and stage performance.
Overall, while online voting has its benefits, we should also guarantee the fairness and reliability of the contest.
Thank you for listening!
多米下水作文：
Hello, everyone!
After heated discussion, our group has come to the conclusion that online voting should be employed to select the campus top ten singers.
Dominant advantages are evident as follows.
Firstly, online voting offers greater convenience for both organizers and students, freeing them of the efforts to be present on the voting scene.
Secondly, it involves a larger number of students to participate and have their voices heard, displaying democracy.
Thirdly, online voting ensures transparency and fairness, reducing the chance of cheating.
Altogether, online voting is a highly efficient way to select the stars of ours, and we strongly hope for its adoption. (103词)
Thank you for listening!