Unit 1 Know yourself 满分必会作文-2024年九年级英语上册重难考点提升训练原卷版
Unit 1 Know yourself 满分必会作文
材料作文
1. 假设你是一名来自红星中学的学生李红，今年16岁，暑假你将参加学校组织的赴北京的夏令营活动。请你用英语写一篇在开营仪式上的自我介绍发言稿。词数60到90。发言稿需包括以下要点：
1. 你爱好画画；
2. 课余时间你喜欢野营，喜欢在大自然中画植物，聆听鸟儿的歌唱；
3. 你最喜欢的科目是科学，希望长大以后成为一名科学家；
4. 你很高兴参加夏令营，希望能和大家成为好朋友。
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2．每个人都有自己梦想中的职业，你梦想中的职业是什么呢？请你以“My Dream Job”为题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition:
●What is your dream job
●Why do you want to do this job
●What should you do now
The following words may help you:
●when I grow up
●study hard in school
●go to university
要求：1. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
3. 在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Dream Job
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3．近几年，我们被很多闪光的人物感动：有为国争光的奥运健儿，有抗击疫情的医护人员，有风雨无阻的快递小哥，有兢兢业业的社区工作人员……他们在各自的工作岗位上奉献着光和热。某英文网站正在开展“My ideal job”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的未来职业设想，你这样选择的理由及如何使之实现。提示问题：
●What is your ideal job
●Why do you want to do such a job (at least 2 points)
●How are you going to make it come true (at least 2 points)
注意事项：
1. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
My ideal job
Everybody has his ideal job. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
话题作文
4．中国的高速发展离不开每个人的努力，科技的飞跃，社会的进步和文化的传播都离不开一个个优秀的个体。假如你是李华，请用“My dream job”为题，写一篇英语文章向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 阐述你将来想做什么样的工作。
2. 能为我们祖国做哪些贡献。
注意事项：
1.90字左右。
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My dream job
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5．英语有句谚语：“Great hopes make great man. ”你的理想工作是什么？什么经历或人使你有了这样的理想？为了实现你的理想，你将怎样做？请就这一话题写一篇短文。
要求：
（1）短文须包括提示的所有要点，可以适当发挥；
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
“Great hopes make great man.” That’s an old saying, and it’s true. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．在过去的几年里，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如，圆梦航天，胜利返航的神舟十三号的3名宇航员；开场失利，永不言弃，最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么？请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。
要点：1.你的梦想是什么？
2.原因是什么？
3.为此你会怎么做？
注意：1.词数90左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。
My Dream
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7．2022年10月16日，党的二十大在北京胜利召开，今年是习近平总书记提出“中国梦”十周年，“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。
请以My dream job为题，写一篇英语短文，说一说你对梦想的所知所感。
要点：
1.你梦想的工作是什么？
2.为什么有这样的梦想？
3.为了实现梦想如何努力？
要求：
1.词数100左右；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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书信作文
8．父爱如山，父爱似海，父亲始终是我们的榜样，他指引我们奋斗，给与我们帮助，为我们的梦想保驾护航。可是有多久，我们没和父亲表达我们的内心情感？有多久，我们没和父亲真诚交流？父亲节即将来临，请给父亲写一封信，表达对父亲的感谢，并与父亲分享你的人生梦想以及实现梦想的计划（至少3条）。
要求：（1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（2）80词左右；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
Dear Dad,
Happy Father’s Day! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是中学生李萍，曾经在你们班学习的交换生 Peter看了你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。
写作要点：
1．班会的主题：我的理想（ideal）
2．介绍你和几名同学的理想：
（1）赵强：想成为一名勇敢的警察。他很勇敢，想去帮助遇到危险的人，他喜欢运动，吃健康食品，这样才能有强健的身体。
（2）梁红：想做一名志愿者。她心地善良，乐于助人，尤其喜欢帮助那些残疾人和无家可归的人。
（3）你：想成为一名优秀的医生。我认为这是一份有意义的工作，能挽救很多人的生命，帮助人们摆脱疾病。
3．说说中学生如何才能实现（realize）自己的理想。
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2．可适当发挥，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4．至少80词。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Ping
10．假如你是一名初三学生张华，你要写一封推荐信给班主任Mr Wang，告诉他你想推荐Millie做班长。请根据下列信息，写好这封信。
她具备做这个职位的突出品质：
1. 她足够自信，能把任何事做好…（举例）。
2. 她也聪明，总是能想出好主意。…（举例）
3. 她有条理，…（举例）。
4. 她喜欢…（颜色），因为…（说明原因）。
5. 希望您同意我的观点。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to recommend Millie as our new monitor.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
11．假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者，请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下：
1.熟悉家乡；
2.乐于交流；
3.擅长英语。
注意：1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： journalist (n.记者)；column (n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li HuaUnit 1 Know yourself 满分必会作文-2024年九年级英语上册重难考点提升训练解析版
材料作文
1. 假设你是一名来自红星中学的学生李红，今年16岁，暑假你将参加学校组织的赴北京的夏令营活动。请你用英语写一篇在开营仪式上的自我介绍发言稿。词数60到90。发言稿需包括以下要点：
1. 你爱好画画；
2. 课余时间你喜欢野营，喜欢在大自然中画植物，聆听鸟儿的歌唱；
3. 你最喜欢的科目是科学，希望长大以后成为一名科学家；
4. 你很高兴参加夏令营，希望能和大家成为好朋友。
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【参考范文】Dear friends，
I'm very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hong. I'm 16 years old. I came from Hongxing High School. I'm interested in drawing. In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in the nature. My favourite subject is science. I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good friends.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
【写作思路】1.题干解读：这篇短文是要求用英语写一篇在开营仪式上的自我介绍发言稿。假设你是一名来自红星中学的学生李红，今年16岁，暑假你将参加学校组织的赴北京的夏令营活动。写作中应按提示要求包括文中提到的4点要求。用一般现在时态。写作时，除注意这些要点之外，还应注意上下文表达的连贯性和流畅性，要使用一些较好的句型，短语和一些过渡语句。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点，根据题目所列的提纲，进行了补充和扩展，使文章内容充实、丰富，结构完整。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称。
3.高分亮点：
短语：introduce …to…；came from；be interested in等。
句型：用到了when引导的时间状语从句。My favourite subject is science. I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
2．每个人都有自己梦想中的职业，你梦想中的职业是什么呢？请你以“My Dream Job”为题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition:
●What is your dream job
●Why do you want to do this job
●What should you do now
The following words may help you:
●when I grow up
●study hard in school
●go to university
要求：1. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
3. 在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Dream Job
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【参考范文】One possible version:
My Dream Job
Everybody has his dream job. My dream job is to be a tour guide for foreign tourists when I grow up.
Why do I want to be a tour guide First, I like doing some exciting things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. Second, I like singing English songs. I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists.
Now I am still a student. I must study hard in school. Then I’ll go to a university to learn something about being a tour guide. I’m sure I can be a good tour guide in the future.
【写作思路】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍自己的梦想工作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己的梦想工作是成为一名导游；
第二步，介绍自己为什么想成为导游；
第三步，介绍自己要如何做才能成为导游。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②be popular with受……欢迎
③in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①My dream job is to be a tour guide for foreign tourists when I grow up.(动词不定式作表语以及when引导的时间状语从句)
②I’m sure I can be a good tour guide in the future.(宾语从句)
3．近几年，我们被很多闪光的人物感动：有为国争光的奥运健儿，有抗击疫情的医护人员，有风雨无阻的快递小哥，有兢兢业业的社区工作人员……他们在各自的工作岗位上奉献着光和热。某英文网站正在开展“My ideal job”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的未来职业设想，你这样选择的理由及如何使之实现。提示问题：
●What is your ideal job
●Why do you want to do such a job (at least 2 points)
●How are you going to make it come true (at least 2 points)
注意事项：
1. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
My ideal job
Everybody has his ideal job. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】例文
My ideal job
Everybody has his ideal job. And my ideal job is to be a writer. First of all, I am crazy about reading. Ever since I was able to read, I have read thousands of books, including classical Chinese novels and history books. I enjoy myself in the world of literature every time I read. Second, both my teacher and classmates think highly of my writing. And I have won prizes in a few writing competitions.
To achieve my dream, I plan to take online writing courses to improve my writing kills. Also, I keep a diary to write down my thoughts, my feelings and my dreams for the future. Through hard work, I believe I can make it.
【写作思路】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的理想工作；
第二步，介绍你为什么想做这样的工作；
第三步，最后说明你打算怎么实现它。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②think highly of高度评价
③plan to do计划做
[高分句型]
①Ever since I was able to read, I have read thousands of books, including classical Chinese novels and history books（ever since引导时间状语从句）
②To achieve my dream, I plan to take online writing courses to improve my writing kills.（动词不定式作目的状语）
话题作文
4．中国的高速发展离不开每个人的努力，科技的飞跃，社会的进步和文化的传播都离不开一个个优秀的个体。假如你是李华，请用“My dream job”为题，写一篇英语文章向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 阐述你将来想做什么样的工作。
2. 能为我们祖国做哪些贡献。
注意事项：
1.90字左右。
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My dream job
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【参考范文】例文
My dream job
As the saying goes, “Great dreams make a bright future.” My dream is to be a doctor in the future.
I think it’s great to be a doctor. When I see sick people in the hospital or on TV, I can’t help worrying about them and want to give them a hand. If I become a doctor, I can help many patients get well. What’s more, being a doctor isn’t only about treating patients. Doctors also do research and experiments so that they can make a contribution to medical service of our country.
I’ll make an effort to become a doctor.
【写作思路】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇写梦想中的工作的记叙文。
②时态：本文应用一般现在时和一般将来时两种时态。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出文章的主题：我梦想中的工作是什么。
第二步，介绍喜欢这份工作的理由，以及这份工作能为祖国做出什么贡献。
第三步，总结全文，表达原望。
[亮点词汇]
①as the saying goes 俗话说
②can’t help doing sth. 忍不住做某事
③make a contribution to… 为……做出贡献
[高分句型]
①When I see sick people in the hospital or on TV, I can’t help worrying about them and want to give them a hand. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If I become a doctor, I can help many patients get well. (if引导的条件状语从句)
5．英语有句谚语：“Great hopes make great man. ”你的理想工作是什么？什么经历或人使你有了这样的理想？为了实现你的理想，你将怎样做？请就这一话题写一篇短文。
要求：
（1）短文须包括提示的所有要点，可以适当发挥；
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
“Great hopes make great man.” That’s an old saying, and it’s true. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
“Great hopes make great man.” That’s an old saying, and it’s true. Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a teacher. When I was in Grade Seven, I failed an English exam and became very upset one day. Mrs. Wang was very friendly to me and she told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in it. Since then I have hoped to be a teacher. I will study hard to get more knowledge. I will also give my love to my students as much as possible.
To be a teacher is really great. I’m sure my dream will come true as long as I do my best.
【写作思路】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，围绕“理想的工作”展开描述写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般将来时为主，在写作时要理清思路，首先表明理想的工作是什么，再通过经历表明原因，最后提出为实现理想将会怎么做。注意语法正确，字迹工整。
6．在过去的几年里，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如，圆梦航天，胜利返航的神舟十三号的3名宇航员；开场失利，永不言弃，最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么？请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。
要点：1.你的梦想是什么？
2.原因是什么？
3.为此你会怎么做？
注意：1.词数90左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。
My Dream
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【参考范文】例文
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really good. I think my dream will come true one day.
【写作思路】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么有这个梦想；
第三步，介绍为梦想可以做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①cheered sb. up使某人振作起来
②in order to为了
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors.（when引导时间状语从句）
②I think my dream will come true one day.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．2022年10月16日，党的二十大在北京胜利召开，今年是习近平总书记提出“中国梦”十周年，“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。
请以My dream job为题，写一篇英语短文，说一说你对梦想的所知所感。
要点：
1.你梦想的工作是什么？
2.为什么有这样的梦想？
3.为了实现梦想如何努力？
要求：
1.词数100左右；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【参考范文】
My dream job
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession. As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example. Miss Li, the head teacher of my junior high school, is a kind and patient person who is very popular with us students. I have always followed her as an example and made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中关于梦想工作的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。介绍我的理想工作具体是什么；
第二步，具体阐述理由。从“历史渊源以及榜样影响”等几个方面介绍选择这份梦想工作的理由；
第三步，书写结语。表达为梦想工作而加倍努力的期许。
【亮点词汇】①dream of doing sth.梦想做某事
②because of因为
③make up one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事
【高分句型】①As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times.（as引导非限制性定语从句）
②Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.（although引导让步状语从句）
书信作文
8．父爱如山，父爱似海，父亲始终是我们的榜样，他指引我们奋斗，给与我们帮助，为我们的梦想保驾护航。可是有多久，我们没和父亲表达我们的内心情感？有多久，我们没和父亲真诚交流？父亲节即将来临，请给父亲写一封信，表达对父亲的感谢，并与父亲分享你的人生梦想以及实现梦想的计划（至少3条）。
要求：（1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（2）80词左右；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
Dear Dad,
Happy Father’s Day! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】例文
Dear Dad,
Happy Father’s Day! Thank you for always being there sharing my life when I need you most. Thank you for always appreciating my work, no matter how tiny it is! Thank you for offering me education and inspiration. Dad, I love you!
Do you know my dream My dream is to be a doctor just like you. I have made plans in order to realize my dream. First, I must study hard so that I can be admitted to the ideal university; Second, I should actively participate in social practice activities to improve social practice ability and the ability to deal with unexpected problems; Lastly, to be a doctor requires a healthy body. I should do more exercise and improve my fitness.
Happy Father’s Day to you, my dear father! Thank you for everything you’ve done for me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】1.题干解读：本文是书信作文。书信格式已给出，写作时应承接开头，然后感谢父亲的辛苦付出，并告诉父亲你的梦想，写明为了实现梦想你做的至少三个计划，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主。写作时可分为三段式：首先，表达对父亲的感谢；其次，与父亲分享你的梦想，并写出实现梦想的计划；最后，再次祝福亲节快乐并表示感谢。写作时保证语言连贯，条理清晰，无语法和拼写错误。
9．假如你是中学生李萍，曾经在你们班学习的交换生 Peter看了你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。
写作要点：
1．班会的主题：我的理想（ideal）
2．介绍你和几名同学的理想：
（1）赵强：想成为一名勇敢的警察。他很勇敢，想去帮助遇到危险的人，他喜欢运动，吃健康食品，这样才能有强健的身体。
（2）梁红：想做一名志愿者。她心地善良，乐于助人，尤其喜欢帮助那些残疾人和无家可归的人。
（3）你：想成为一名优秀的医生。我认为这是一份有意义的工作，能挽救很多人的生命，帮助人们摆脱疾病。
3．说说中学生如何才能实现（realize）自己的理想。
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2．可适当发挥，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4．至少80词。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Ping
【参考范文】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. The theme of it was “My Ideal”. Our monitor hosted the meeting. During it, all of us took an active part in the discussion and shared our opinions with each other.
Zhao Qiang is so brave that he wants to be a policeman. He hopes to help people in danger. To own a strong and healthy body, he exercises more and eats lots of healthy food. Liang Hong is going to be a volunteer, she will help people in need, especially the disabled and the homeless. My dream is to be an excellent doctor. I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them to get rid of the disease.
To realize our ideals, I have some opinions. Firstly, we must try to work harder from now on and learn as much knowledge as possible. Secondly, we should believe in ourselves, because confidence is the key to success. All in all, hold on to our ideals, try our best to make our dreams come true.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【写作思路】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按书信的格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据所给的材料给 Peter写一封回信，介绍你们班的班会内容以及如何才能实现自己的理想。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述书信内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先提出本次班会的主题；其次介绍你和几名同学的理想；最后谈谈中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。
10．假如你是一名初三学生张华，你要写一封推荐信给班主任Mr Wang，告诉他你想推荐Millie做班长。请根据下列信息，写好这封信。
她具备做这个职位的突出品质：
1. 她足够自信，能把任何事做好…（举例）。
2. 她也聪明，总是能想出好主意。…（举例）
3. 她有条理，…（举例）。
4. 她喜欢…（颜色），因为…（说明原因）。
5. 希望您同意我的观点。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to recommend Millie as our new monitor.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to recommend Millie as our new monitor. Because she has many strong qualities for this position.
She is confident. She can do anything if she tries her best. She is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people. Millie is also clever. She always comes up with good ideas. Moreover, she has won several science competitions. We also think she is organized. Because she always keeps everything in good order. She likes orange. She thinks orange can cheer her up when she feels sad.
We think she is the most suitable person to be our monitor. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【写作思路】1.题干解读：题目要求以张华的身份写一封推荐信给班主任Mr Wang，根据文中提示的五点信息，写出你向班主任推荐Millie做班长所具备的突出品质。
2.写作指导：写作时，注意信件格式的写法。以第三人称为主，时态上主要采用一般现在时态，注意主谓一致问题。书写时需包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺，符合英文表达习惯。
11．假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者，请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下：
1.熟悉家乡；
2.乐于交流；
3.擅长英语。
注意：1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： journalist (n.记者)；column (n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.
First, I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job. I'm easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.
I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for. I'd be thankful if I could get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
1. 题干解读：本题属于书信作文，信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，先表达写信目的，然后根据要点提示介绍自己，最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：hope to do sth.；a member of；such as；besides；used to do sth.；work as；do a very good job；be ready to do sth.；communicate with；moreover；have a good knowledge of；be skillful at；in English；look for。
句型：and连接并列句；省略that的定语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。
