2024届高三英语二轮复习：读后续写应试技巧 一座山 两条鱼 课件(共28张PPT，内镶嵌视频)
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(共28张PPT)
一座山，两条鱼
--continuation writing
亲情类：Adam偷玩具车
1.
Read the story
2.
Predict the story
3.
Write the story
目录
Warming up
Yellow & Red
Frog
Watch a video about two larvas[ lɑ v ]（幼虫）and answer questions.
Q1:What’s important for a story
Q2:What’s important for writing a story(/continuation writing)
character
plot
theme
（葛文山，2022）
Lead in
Q1:What’s important for a story
Q2:What’s important for writing a story
(/continuation writing)
（衡很亨，2023）
character
plot
theme
character
portrait
plot
design
theme
exposition
1
Read the story
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once there was a little boy called Adam who came from a rich family. He was a young student at primary school and was very clever. He always gained good marks in his exams.
Adam got everything he wanted, such as toy cars, airplane models, water guns and so on. His parents bought him whatever he wanted. One day he went out to a store with his mother and in the toy section he found a very cool toy car. He was surprised to see that kind of toy car, so he ran to his mother and told her everything about it. Adam took his mother to the toy section to show how it worked. However, his mother refused to buy it for him because he already had a lot of toy cars. Adam was sad and wondered why his mother did not buy it for him.
Two weeks later, Adam and his mother went to the same store again. Adam thought that his mother would buy it for him this time, so he asked his mother for the toy car again. His mother ignored him because she was looking for something else. But Adam really wanted the toy car.
So, while his mother was busy looking for some other items, he took the toy car and put it inside his backpack. The salesman saw Adam stealing the toy car and tried to stop him. Adam tried to run but the salesman caught him. Adam started to cry. His mother heard his voice and ran to him. She was shocked to see the salesman holding her son.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按照如下格式在相应位置作答。
“What happened ” she asked with concern. ________________________________________________________________________________________________
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
________________________________________________________________________________________________
1.阅读全文，确定背景(Read for setting)
A young and clever boy (Adam), Adam’s mother，the salesman
one day;
two weeks later （过去时）
in the store home
Adam lived in a rich family and gained good marks in exams.
Adam got everything he wanted.
time
(When)
place
(Where)
character（Who）
background
(What)
setting
2. 画故事山，构情节线和情感线(Read for plots and emotions)
rising action
falling action
ending
plots
beginning
emotions
climax
Mom what happened.
Adam’s mom _______ to buy the toy car.
Two weeks later, his mother ______ him again.
Adam went to his room and having done that.
Adam the toy car, tried to but the salesman him.
Adam:sad
Adam:
desperate
Adam:scared and cried
Mom:
concerned
Adam:
regretted
refused
ignored
stolen
run
caught
asked
regretted
2
Predict the story
3. 根据故事山，预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)
rising action
falling action
ending
plots
beginning
Mom asked what happened.
Adam’s mom refused to buy the toy car.
Two weeks later, his mother ignored him again.
Adam stolen the toy car, tried to run but the salesman caught him.
Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
emotions
climax
衔接句
Adam:
regretted
Adam:sad
Adam:
desperate
Adam:scared and cried
Mom:
concerned
主题句
Paragraph 1:
“What happened ” she asked with concern.
Paragraph 2:
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
衔接句
1.Who answered
2.Before they got home, what did they do
1.What happened in the room
2.Why Adam regretted and how to show
3.What will Adam do next time
3. 根据故事山，预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)
主题句
回应前文/点出主题
·偷东西是绝对错误的。It’s absolutely wrong to steal things.
·反思并承认错误，吸取教训。Reflect and admit the mistake. Learn from the lesson.
·该怎么做？--结合家庭实际，判断是需要还是想要？树立正确的金钱观。We can’t buy anything we want, instead, we should buy something we really need.
3. 根据故事山，预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)
口诀：两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量
衔接句
主题句
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
“What happened ” she asked with concern.
Step 1: Main contents of Para 2 and positive ending.
Step 2: Main contents of Para 1.
售货员回答事情经过，归还玩具。回家路上，母亲与儿子交流。
“Let’s go home and see how many toy cars you have already owned”.
回家后，儿子主动承认错误，向母亲道歉，并从中得到教训。母亲原谅儿子。
4. Draft for writing
Salesman explained
returned the toy
Mom asked why
Mom was angry
Mom scolded
Adam replied
“What happened ” she asked with concern.
Para 1
衔接句
wanted the toy car desperately
in details
quickly
why he did that
Adam lowered his head, in shame
on the way back home,seriously
一个角色的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。
Action
Response
主题句
Adam reflected
Mom forgived
Adam learned
Adam apologized
Mom educated
Adam’s thought
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
Para 2
not to steal
buy things: whether need it or want it
think why did
told not to do again
for stealing
it is not right
一个角色的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。
4. Draft for writing
Action
Response
3
Write the story
评分标准参考
Tips for writing
口诀：人物时态和事件，语言特色不要变
Tip 1: 58细节添加法
Tip 2: To show, not to tell.(王初明“写长法”)
Tip 3: 语言协同：创造性的模仿（原文风格）
Tip 1 for writing
口诀：人物时态和事件，语言特色不要变
58细节添加法
Tip 2 for writing
To show in 3 aspects:
①Body language
②Facial expression
③Voice
To show, not to tell.(王初明“写长法”)
Telling:
He felt ashamed.
他很羞愧。
Showing:
body language+facial expression
肢体语言+面部表情
Hearing what they said, he was so ashamed that he dropped his eyes and stared at his feet, with his face turning red.
听到他们的话，他羞愧的低下头，盯着脚，脸红起来了。
Tip 2 for writing
To show, not to tell.(王初明“写长法”)
Tip 3 for writing
语言协同：创造性的模仿（原文风格）
原文:
·However, his mother refused to buy it for him because he already had a lot of toy cars.
·His mother ignored him because she was looking for something else.
写作:
·Adam replied that just because he wanted the toy car desperately.
·His mother forgave him and told Adam not to do that again because it is not right to steal anything.
小试身手
请你将自己的习作写在题目的横线上。
Paragraph 1:
“What happened ” she asked with concern. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Paragraph 1:
“What happened ” she asked with concern. Then the salesman told Adam’s mother in details about what the little boy had done. Adam’s mother was very angry with him. Adam lowered his head in shame. His mother quickly took the toy car and give it back to the salesman. On their way back home, Adam’s mother scolded Adam seriously and asked him why he did that. Adam replied that just because he wanted the toy car desperately.
Paragraph 2:
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.He started to think why he did that just for a toy car. He went to his mother and said sorry to them for stealing things in the store. His mother forgave him and told Adam not to do that again because it is not right to steal anything. He also learned what his mother was trying to teach him. Even if his family had enough money to buy things, he had to find out whether he really needed a thing or just wanted it.
Thanks for listening!
一座山，两条鱼
--continuation writing
亲情类：Adam偷玩具车
1.
Read the story
2.
Predict the story
3.
Write the story
目录
Warming up
Yellow & Red
Frog
Watch a video about two larvas[ lɑ v ]（幼虫）and answer questions.
Q1:What’s important for a story
Q2:What’s important for writing a story(/continuation writing)
character
plot
theme
（葛文山，2022）
Lead in
Q1:What’s important for a story
Q2:What’s important for writing a story
(/continuation writing)
（衡很亨，2023）
character
plot
theme
character
portrait
plot
design
theme
exposition
1
Read the story
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once there was a little boy called Adam who came from a rich family. He was a young student at primary school and was very clever. He always gained good marks in his exams.
Adam got everything he wanted, such as toy cars, airplane models, water guns and so on. His parents bought him whatever he wanted. One day he went out to a store with his mother and in the toy section he found a very cool toy car. He was surprised to see that kind of toy car, so he ran to his mother and told her everything about it. Adam took his mother to the toy section to show how it worked. However, his mother refused to buy it for him because he already had a lot of toy cars. Adam was sad and wondered why his mother did not buy it for him.
Two weeks later, Adam and his mother went to the same store again. Adam thought that his mother would buy it for him this time, so he asked his mother for the toy car again. His mother ignored him because she was looking for something else. But Adam really wanted the toy car.
So, while his mother was busy looking for some other items, he took the toy car and put it inside his backpack. The salesman saw Adam stealing the toy car and tried to stop him. Adam tried to run but the salesman caught him. Adam started to cry. His mother heard his voice and ran to him. She was shocked to see the salesman holding her son.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按照如下格式在相应位置作答。
“What happened ” she asked with concern. ________________________________________________________________________________________________
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
________________________________________________________________________________________________
1.阅读全文，确定背景(Read for setting)
A young and clever boy (Adam), Adam’s mother，the salesman
one day;
two weeks later （过去时）
in the store home
Adam lived in a rich family and gained good marks in exams.
Adam got everything he wanted.
time
(When)
place
(Where)
character（Who）
background
(What)
setting
2. 画故事山，构情节线和情感线(Read for plots and emotions)
rising action
falling action
ending
plots
beginning
emotions
climax
Mom what happened.
Adam’s mom _______ to buy the toy car.
Two weeks later, his mother ______ him again.
Adam went to his room and having done that.
Adam the toy car, tried to but the salesman him.
Adam:sad
Adam:
desperate
Adam:scared and cried
Mom:
concerned
Adam:
regretted
refused
ignored
stolen
run
caught
asked
regretted
2
Predict the story
3. 根据故事山，预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)
rising action
falling action
ending
plots
beginning
Mom asked what happened.
Adam’s mom refused to buy the toy car.
Two weeks later, his mother ignored him again.
Adam stolen the toy car, tried to run but the salesman caught him.
Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
emotions
climax
衔接句
Adam:
regretted
Adam:sad
Adam:
desperate
Adam:scared and cried
Mom:
concerned
主题句
Paragraph 1:
“What happened ” she asked with concern.
Paragraph 2:
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
衔接句
1.Who answered
2.Before they got home, what did they do
1.What happened in the room
2.Why Adam regretted and how to show
3.What will Adam do next time
3. 根据故事山，预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)
主题句
回应前文/点出主题
·偷东西是绝对错误的。It’s absolutely wrong to steal things.
·反思并承认错误，吸取教训。Reflect and admit the mistake. Learn from the lesson.
·该怎么做？--结合家庭实际，判断是需要还是想要？树立正确的金钱观。We can’t buy anything we want, instead, we should buy something we really need.
3. 根据故事山，预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)
口诀：两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量
衔接句
主题句
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
“What happened ” she asked with concern.
Step 1: Main contents of Para 2 and positive ending.
Step 2: Main contents of Para 1.
售货员回答事情经过，归还玩具。回家路上，母亲与儿子交流。
“Let’s go home and see how many toy cars you have already owned”.
回家后，儿子主动承认错误，向母亲道歉，并从中得到教训。母亲原谅儿子。
4. Draft for writing
Salesman explained
returned the toy
Mom asked why
Mom was angry
Mom scolded
Adam replied
“What happened ” she asked with concern.
Para 1
衔接句
wanted the toy car desperately
in details
quickly
why he did that
Adam lowered his head, in shame
on the way back home,seriously
一个角色的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。
Action
Response
主题句
Adam reflected
Mom forgived
Adam learned
Adam apologized
Mom educated
Adam’s thought
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
Para 2
not to steal
buy things: whether need it or want it
think why did
told not to do again
for stealing
it is not right
一个角色的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。
4. Draft for writing
Action
Response
3
Write the story
评分标准参考
Tips for writing
口诀：人物时态和事件，语言特色不要变
Tip 1: 58细节添加法
Tip 2: To show, not to tell.(王初明“写长法”)
Tip 3: 语言协同：创造性的模仿（原文风格）
Tip 1 for writing
口诀：人物时态和事件，语言特色不要变
58细节添加法
Tip 2 for writing
To show in 3 aspects:
①Body language
②Facial expression
③Voice
To show, not to tell.(王初明“写长法”)
Telling:
He felt ashamed.
他很羞愧。
Showing:
body language+facial expression
肢体语言+面部表情
Hearing what they said, he was so ashamed that he dropped his eyes and stared at his feet, with his face turning red.
听到他们的话，他羞愧的低下头，盯着脚，脸红起来了。
Tip 2 for writing
To show, not to tell.(王初明“写长法”)
Tip 3 for writing
语言协同：创造性的模仿（原文风格）
原文:
·However, his mother refused to buy it for him because he already had a lot of toy cars.
·His mother ignored him because she was looking for something else.
写作:
·Adam replied that just because he wanted the toy car desperately.
·His mother forgave him and told Adam not to do that again because it is not right to steal anything.
小试身手
请你将自己的习作写在题目的横线上。
Paragraph 1:
“What happened ” she asked with concern. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Paragraph 1:
“What happened ” she asked with concern. Then the salesman told Adam’s mother in details about what the little boy had done. Adam’s mother was very angry with him. Adam lowered his head in shame. His mother quickly took the toy car and give it back to the salesman. On their way back home, Adam’s mother scolded Adam seriously and asked him why he did that. Adam replied that just because he wanted the toy car desperately.
Paragraph 2:
After they got home, Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.He started to think why he did that just for a toy car. He went to his mother and said sorry to them for stealing things in the store. His mother forgave him and told Adam not to do that again because it is not right to steal anything. He also learned what his mother was trying to teach him. Even if his family had enough money to buy things, he had to find out whether he really needed a thing or just wanted it.
Thanks for listening!