2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写句型 课件 (共26张PPT)
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(共26张PPT)
高考英语
续写专项
题型分析
01
考情分析：要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基础上，充分调动想象创新思维，大胆预测文章缺失部分的内容走势，进行充满个性色彩的设计，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，逻辑性比较强。在使用关键词语时根据时态和语态的需要，可以改变动词的形式，可以改变名词的单复数，但不要改变关键词语在原文中的含义和词性。
评分标准：1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
(1) 与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
(2) 内容的丰富性和对所标出关词语的应用情况；
(3) 应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
(4) 上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
技巧思路深入理解原文：仔细阅读原文，把握主题和核心情节。分析原文中的人物性格、关系和冲突，为续写提供线索。理解原文的情感色彩和语言风格，确保续写与之相符。合理预测情节发展：根据原文的结尾或转折点，预测可能发生的情节变化。考虑人物的行为逻辑和情感变化，为续写创造合理的情节发展。
操作步骤阅读原文并列出要点：快速阅读原文，了解主要内容和情节。列出原文中的关键信息，如人物、事件、情感等，为续写提供素材。构思续写大纲：根据原文要点，构思续写的主题和情节。确定续写的起始点，确保与原文衔接自然。制定一个简要的大纲，明确续写的主要内容和结构。
写作并检查：按照大纲进行写作，注意语言表达和情节发展。完成后，仔细检查语法、拼写和标点错误。注意文章的逻辑性和连贯性，确保情节发展合理。
修改与润色：根据需要修改文章结构，使其更加紧凑有力。对文章进行润色，提高语言表达的准确性和生动性。
注意事项避免与原文重复：在续写中，尽量避免直接复制原文的语句或情节。通过自己的理解和想象，创造新的情节和表达方式。控制字数：根据高考英语续写的要求，控制续写的字数在规定范围内。注意合理安排篇幅，确保内容充实但不冗长。注意时间管理：在考试中，合理分配时间进行续写，确保有足够的时间进行构思、写作和修改。通过以上技巧思路和操作步骤，可以帮助你在高考英语续写中取得更好的成绩。
万能续写句型：1：With +复合结构”又称为“with结构”At the thought of the fact that she didn’t have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart beating fast and her feet sweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。 Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face.Jodie 激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。
那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+adj.open)女孩心怦怦直跳（beat wildly），打开（unwrap）了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+分词)他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水（full of tears/filled with tears）那个人躺在地上，双手颤抖着。（on the ground, tremble）The girl unwrapped the gift box with her mouth wide open.The girl unwrapped the gift box with her heart beating wildly.
2、动作+感动+感悟（1）. sb looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control. 某人看到了某物或者拿着某物，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。正是爱让世界转动，在某人的心里深深地感受到了这一点。
（2）. I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which I felt deep in my heart.
我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。正是爱让世界转动，在我心里里深深地感受到了这一点。
（3）. He held the coins tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which Bernard felt deep in his little heart.
他紧紧地握着硬币，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德在他的心里深深地感受到了这一点。
3、主旨升华类句子（1）. It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。 （2）. Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end. 事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。
4、副词修饰动词或句子（1）Jodie wore her brand-new spikes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。
（2）When the announcer said “Next up is the girls’ 100-meter hurdles”, Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。
模拟练习
02
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My wife and I never had a green thumb when it came to keeping plants alive for more than a few weeks. So, when I was diagnosed with cancer, we didn't even think about adding a plant to our small apartment. But one day, my friend stopped by and gave us a beautiful plant as a gift, insisting that it would bring life to our home and a sense of calmness during this difficult time.Surprisingly, the plant took off and grew beautifully, and it brought a sense of joy to our home that we desperately needed. Tending to the plant gave me a sense of accomplishment at a time when I sometimes felt useless.
I am a physician,and taking care of the plant made me feel like a care giver once again.It was nice to be able lo nurture something and watch it grow. Since my diagnosis in August 2018,far too often,it seemed, I had to rely on help from other people. The enormous change left me feeling aimless and unsettled. Watering the plant, as small an act as it was, connected me to a core part ofmy old identity.Plants and people could still depend on me.For the next few months,I was recovering from surgery and receiving radiation. Despite my ongoing treatments,we found some peace through tending to the plant. The simple act of watering and watching it grow gave us something to focus on outside of my health. It became a small but meaningful part of our lives.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Then,mysteriously,it began to show signs of losing liveliness. As I became less anxious, I began to search online for how to care for my plant.
Then,mysteriously, it began to show signs of losing liveliness. I increased my plant watering, and then decreased it. Still, the leaves kept browning and dropping to the floor. I grew more and more frustrated and uneasy.The thought that I couldn't even care for a simple plant started to haunt me like a shadow. For the past few months,a bond had been built between me and the plant. I couldn't shake the feeling that if the plant died,I might too.Having seen through my heart and sensed my fear, my wife comforted me,“Honey, your treatment is working well and maybe the plant just needs its.” Her words did make sense and settled my nerves.
As I became less anxious, I began to search online for how to care for my plant.Following the instructions, I transplanted the tree to a larger pot, giving its roots more room to grow and buried some solid plant nutrient under the top layer of the earth. Soon, we both began to thrive again. Whenever I look at the tree with its shinny and lush leaves in its new pot, I make it a point to appreciate my wife and the other people who have cared for and supported me.If the plant outlives me, I hope it will inspire my wife to live her life to the fullest.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Alice and her family went on a camping trip along the seaside. Upon arrival, Dad called for a meeting. He announced, “There are lots of jobs to be done. It's no fun on holiday if Mum and I do all the work, so I come up with this pocket money chart. In this way,everyone has to do something,and you must do your own job every day! If you do your jobs well, you get some extra pocket money!”Looking at the chart，which had their names on it next to a list of jobs，the kids frowned（皱眉）at the idea. Unwillingly,they began to do their jobs.Alice washed up the dishes. Mike, the youngest brother, dried the dishes. Jeff,Alice's twin brother,took their dog for a walk.
The next day they went to the beach. After playing some time in the sea, they went to look for shells along the beach. Suddenly,Alice found a strange-looking rock. She picked it up and showed it to Dad. “You've found a fossil（化石）！It was once a shellfish and has turned into a rock after millions of years！＂Dad said happily.Greatly inspired,Alice continued her search,determined to find a better one, but she failed. Darkness fell,and Alice had to head back to the campsite with her family in disappointment. On the way back they stopped at a shop, where Alice spotted some amazing fossils! But soon she found they were too expensive!Back at the camp,Alice was still thinking of the amazing fossils in the shop. Suddenly an idea occurred to her,"T'll do everyone's jobs and then I can get all the extra pocket money to buy a fossil!"The next morning, Alice offered to dry the dishes and walk the dog, which greatly pleased Mike and Jeff But things didn't go as Alice planned.
1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Dad saw Alice walking the dog, he was confused. Later that morning, Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was unhappy.
When Dad saw Alice walking the dog, he was confused. Obviously, he was not happy about this.When Alice came back,Dad asked why she was doing Jefl's jobs. Alice stuttered."I....I just want to earn all the extra pocket money to buy that fossil in the shop."“I'm sorry.Alice, I'm afraid you can't. You all have to do the jobs --not just you.The point is that we share the jobs." Dad said. Hearing what Dad said, Alice was taken hold of by a surge of disappointment mixed with sadness. She thought it was unfair that Dad just ignored her hard work.
Later that morning, Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was unhappy. They presented a small box and urged her to open it. Alice had no idea what was going on,but seeing her two brothers' eyes twinkling with eagerness,she opened it. The moment she saw what was inside, Alice jumped up with joy. It was her brothers' extra pocket money, with which she could afford one of the fossils she dreamed about! She threw her arms around her brothers, tears welling up in her eyes.Jeff said,"Dad told us your plan." It dawned on Alice that Dad was trying to tell her that rules are rules but love between family members never fails.
thanks
高考英语
续写专项
题型分析
01
考情分析：要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基础上，充分调动想象创新思维，大胆预测文章缺失部分的内容走势，进行充满个性色彩的设计，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，逻辑性比较强。在使用关键词语时根据时态和语态的需要，可以改变动词的形式，可以改变名词的单复数，但不要改变关键词语在原文中的含义和词性。
评分标准：1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
(1) 与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
(2) 内容的丰富性和对所标出关词语的应用情况；
(3) 应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
(4) 上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
技巧思路深入理解原文：仔细阅读原文，把握主题和核心情节。分析原文中的人物性格、关系和冲突，为续写提供线索。理解原文的情感色彩和语言风格，确保续写与之相符。合理预测情节发展：根据原文的结尾或转折点，预测可能发生的情节变化。考虑人物的行为逻辑和情感变化，为续写创造合理的情节发展。
操作步骤阅读原文并列出要点：快速阅读原文，了解主要内容和情节。列出原文中的关键信息，如人物、事件、情感等，为续写提供素材。构思续写大纲：根据原文要点，构思续写的主题和情节。确定续写的起始点，确保与原文衔接自然。制定一个简要的大纲，明确续写的主要内容和结构。
写作并检查：按照大纲进行写作，注意语言表达和情节发展。完成后，仔细检查语法、拼写和标点错误。注意文章的逻辑性和连贯性，确保情节发展合理。
修改与润色：根据需要修改文章结构，使其更加紧凑有力。对文章进行润色，提高语言表达的准确性和生动性。
注意事项避免与原文重复：在续写中，尽量避免直接复制原文的语句或情节。通过自己的理解和想象，创造新的情节和表达方式。控制字数：根据高考英语续写的要求，控制续写的字数在规定范围内。注意合理安排篇幅，确保内容充实但不冗长。注意时间管理：在考试中，合理分配时间进行续写，确保有足够的时间进行构思、写作和修改。通过以上技巧思路和操作步骤，可以帮助你在高考英语续写中取得更好的成绩。
万能续写句型：1：With +复合结构”又称为“with结构”At the thought of the fact that she didn’t have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart beating fast and her feet sweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。 Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face.Jodie 激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。
那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+adj.open)女孩心怦怦直跳（beat wildly），打开（unwrap）了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+分词)他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水（full of tears/filled with tears）那个人躺在地上，双手颤抖着。（on the ground, tremble）The girl unwrapped the gift box with her mouth wide open.The girl unwrapped the gift box with her heart beating wildly.
2、动作+感动+感悟（1）. sb looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control. 某人看到了某物或者拿着某物，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。正是爱让世界转动，在某人的心里深深地感受到了这一点。
（2）. I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which I felt deep in my heart.
我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。正是爱让世界转动，在我心里里深深地感受到了这一点。
（3）. He held the coins tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which Bernard felt deep in his little heart.
他紧紧地握着硬币，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德在他的心里深深地感受到了这一点。
3、主旨升华类句子（1）. It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。 （2）. Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end. 事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。
4、副词修饰动词或句子（1）Jodie wore her brand-new spikes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。
（2）When the announcer said “Next up is the girls’ 100-meter hurdles”, Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。
模拟练习
02
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My wife and I never had a green thumb when it came to keeping plants alive for more than a few weeks. So, when I was diagnosed with cancer, we didn't even think about adding a plant to our small apartment. But one day, my friend stopped by and gave us a beautiful plant as a gift, insisting that it would bring life to our home and a sense of calmness during this difficult time.Surprisingly, the plant took off and grew beautifully, and it brought a sense of joy to our home that we desperately needed. Tending to the plant gave me a sense of accomplishment at a time when I sometimes felt useless.
I am a physician,and taking care of the plant made me feel like a care giver once again.It was nice to be able lo nurture something and watch it grow. Since my diagnosis in August 2018,far too often,it seemed, I had to rely on help from other people. The enormous change left me feeling aimless and unsettled. Watering the plant, as small an act as it was, connected me to a core part ofmy old identity.Plants and people could still depend on me.For the next few months,I was recovering from surgery and receiving radiation. Despite my ongoing treatments,we found some peace through tending to the plant. The simple act of watering and watching it grow gave us something to focus on outside of my health. It became a small but meaningful part of our lives.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Then,mysteriously,it began to show signs of losing liveliness. As I became less anxious, I began to search online for how to care for my plant.
Then,mysteriously, it began to show signs of losing liveliness. I increased my plant watering, and then decreased it. Still, the leaves kept browning and dropping to the floor. I grew more and more frustrated and uneasy.The thought that I couldn't even care for a simple plant started to haunt me like a shadow. For the past few months,a bond had been built between me and the plant. I couldn't shake the feeling that if the plant died,I might too.Having seen through my heart and sensed my fear, my wife comforted me,“Honey, your treatment is working well and maybe the plant just needs its.” Her words did make sense and settled my nerves.
As I became less anxious, I began to search online for how to care for my plant.Following the instructions, I transplanted the tree to a larger pot, giving its roots more room to grow and buried some solid plant nutrient under the top layer of the earth. Soon, we both began to thrive again. Whenever I look at the tree with its shinny and lush leaves in its new pot, I make it a point to appreciate my wife and the other people who have cared for and supported me.If the plant outlives me, I hope it will inspire my wife to live her life to the fullest.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Alice and her family went on a camping trip along the seaside. Upon arrival, Dad called for a meeting. He announced, “There are lots of jobs to be done. It's no fun on holiday if Mum and I do all the work, so I come up with this pocket money chart. In this way,everyone has to do something,and you must do your own job every day! If you do your jobs well, you get some extra pocket money!”Looking at the chart，which had their names on it next to a list of jobs，the kids frowned（皱眉）at the idea. Unwillingly,they began to do their jobs.Alice washed up the dishes. Mike, the youngest brother, dried the dishes. Jeff,Alice's twin brother,took their dog for a walk.
The next day they went to the beach. After playing some time in the sea, they went to look for shells along the beach. Suddenly,Alice found a strange-looking rock. She picked it up and showed it to Dad. “You've found a fossil（化石）！It was once a shellfish and has turned into a rock after millions of years！＂Dad said happily.Greatly inspired,Alice continued her search,determined to find a better one, but she failed. Darkness fell,and Alice had to head back to the campsite with her family in disappointment. On the way back they stopped at a shop, where Alice spotted some amazing fossils! But soon she found they were too expensive!Back at the camp,Alice was still thinking of the amazing fossils in the shop. Suddenly an idea occurred to her,"T'll do everyone's jobs and then I can get all the extra pocket money to buy a fossil!"The next morning, Alice offered to dry the dishes and walk the dog, which greatly pleased Mike and Jeff But things didn't go as Alice planned.
1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Dad saw Alice walking the dog, he was confused. Later that morning, Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was unhappy.
When Dad saw Alice walking the dog, he was confused. Obviously, he was not happy about this.When Alice came back,Dad asked why she was doing Jefl's jobs. Alice stuttered."I....I just want to earn all the extra pocket money to buy that fossil in the shop."“I'm sorry.Alice, I'm afraid you can't. You all have to do the jobs --not just you.The point is that we share the jobs." Dad said. Hearing what Dad said, Alice was taken hold of by a surge of disappointment mixed with sadness. She thought it was unfair that Dad just ignored her hard work.
Later that morning, Mike and Jeff approached Alice when they found she was unhappy. They presented a small box and urged her to open it. Alice had no idea what was going on,but seeing her two brothers' eyes twinkling with eagerness,she opened it. The moment she saw what was inside, Alice jumped up with joy. It was her brothers' extra pocket money, with which she could afford one of the fossils she dreamed about! She threw her arms around her brothers, tears welling up in her eyes.Jeff said,"Dad told us your plan." It dawned on Alice that Dad was trying to tell her that rules are rules but love between family members never fails.
thanks