(共14张PPT)
Unit 5 Learning from nature
Writing
写作技法·情景演练
写一篇关于从大自然中获得启示的文章
Ⅰ.技能指导
1.写作指南:
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于从大自然中获得启示的文章,要求学生对给出的图画进行分析,表达出其内容和寓意。
2.常用表达:
(1)描述图画内容:
①As is shown in the picture, a man is planting a tree.如图画所示,一个人正在种树。
②We can see that the butterfly is ready to emerge.
我们可以看到,蝴蝶已经准备好出来了。
③As can be clearly seen from the picture above, a turtle is crossing the road.
从上图可以清楚地看到,一只乌龟正在过马路。
④As the picture shows, there are two birds, one sleeping while the other with a worm in its mouth.如图所示,有两只鸟,一只在睡觉,另一只嘴里叼着一条虫子。
(2)阐明寓意:
①What the picture attempts to convey is that cooperation will benefit everyone.
图片试图传达的是:合作将使每个人受益。
②It is obvious that if we behave like the ant, we will overcome all the difficulties.显然,如果我们表现得像蚂蚁一样,我们将克服一切困难。
③This tells us that life is not fair and that anything can happen.
这告诉我们生活是不公平的,任何事情都可能发生。
(3)发表看法:
①I think people can live in harmony with nature.
我认为人与自然可以和谐相处。
②We should always remember: Be patient for success and Rome was not built in one day.
我们应该永远记住:对成功要有耐心,罗马不是一天建成的。
③As far as I'm concerned, we should keep in mind that as long as every one of us combines our efforts, we can surely make it.
就我而言,我们应该记住,只要我们每个人共同努力,我们就一定能获得成功。
④We need struggles to make ourselves stronger.
我们需要奋斗来使我们更强大。
Ⅱ.情景再现
假定你是李华,你们学校要举行一个主题为“Nature is our best teacher”的英语作文比赛,请根据你对下图的理解写一篇文章参赛,内容包括:
1.简要描述图画内容;
2.概述图画内容对你的启示。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【审题谋篇】
【词汇储备】
1. ________n.智慧
wisdom
2. _______n.谚语
saying
3. _________n.勤勉,勤奋
diligence
4. ____________从……中获得……
draw...from...
5. _________________提醒某人某事
remind sb. of sth.
6. _____________________做充分准备
make full preparations
7. ________________达成某人的目标
attain one's goal
【句型运用】
1. 大自然经常被认为是我们最好的老师。
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Nature is often regarded as our best teacher.
2. 从大自然中汲取智慧对我们来说是不足为奇的。
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It's not surprising for us to draw wisdom from nature.
3. 这张图片显示有两只鸟,一只在睡觉,而另一只嘴里叼着一条虫子。
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The picture shows there are two birds, one sleeping while the other with a worm in its mouth.
4. 这展示了一条著名的谚语——早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
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This presents a well-known saying: The early bird catches the worm.
5. 这一谚语提醒我们勤奋的重要性。
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The saying reminds us of the importance of diligence.
6. 它也表明,在通往成功的道路上,准备起着重要的作用。
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It also shows that preparation plays an important role on the road to success.
7. 机会总是留给有准备的人。
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Opportunities are always for those prepared minds.
8. 做好充分的准备工作,我们就能取得成就,达成我们的目标。
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Make full preparations and we can make achievements and attain our goals.
【句式升级】
1. 用并列复合句合并句1和句2。
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Nature is often regarded as our best teacher, so it's not surprising for us to draw wisdom from it.
2. 用as引导的定语从句改写句3。
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As the picture shows, there are two birds, one sleeping while the other with a worm in its mouth.
3. 用“only+状语从句”(置于句首)改写句8。
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Only when we make full preparations can we make achievements and attain our goals.
【连句成篇】
将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
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Nature is often regarded as our best teacher, so it's not surprising for us to draw wisdom from it.
As the picture shows, there are two birds, one sleeping while the other with a worm in its mouth. This presents a well-known saying: The early bird catches the worm.
The saying reminds us of the importance of diligence. It also shows that preparation plays an important role on the road to success. Opportunities are always for those prepared minds, and only when we make full preparations can we make achievements and attain our goals.
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