2024届高考英语二轮复习读后续写课件(共28张PPT)

(共28张PPT)
高考英语
续写句型
题型分析
01
通过深入理解原文，我们可以更好地把握文章的主旨和脉络，进而更有针对性地进行续写。
关键词的准确解读能够确保我们在续写中不偏离原文的核心思想，避免走题；而对文章结构的把握则能够帮助我们更好地组织语言，保持故事情节的连贯性
在续写中要注意分析主要人物的性格特点，并理解他们的行为动机和情感倾向。考虑人物的情感变化，可以使故事更加生动感人，增加读者的共鸣。
额外扩写：人物是故事的灵魂，他们的性格塑造和情感变化直接影响着整个故事情节的发展。因此，在续写中，我们不仅要忠于原著，准确表达原文中人物的性格特点，还要通过情感变化让人物更具立体感，让读者更易产生共鸣。
四步法审题
①审体裁：明确原文的体裁，从而明确续写的体裁
②审时态：确定原文的时态，从而明确续写的时态
③审原文本大意：找出原文本中的六要素(who, when, where, what, how, why)，了解大意。
④审所给提示语：仔细研读给的提示语
三步法解题
第一步：理已知信息：主要人物之间的关系、主要人物的性格特点、故事发生的背景和线索等
第二步：判未知走向，分析描写人物的形容词、人物发出的动作、文中的对话等
第三步：斟词酌句，连句成文
①续写内容与所给段落提示语衔接自然；
②充分利用储备的语言知识，根据内容需要慎重选择词汇、语块和句式,尽量使用高级句式，使表达富有感染力；
③续写第二段应该对故事所蕴含的主题进行提炼和升华，以达到画龙点睛之效。
高级词汇怎么放？
读后续写的词汇得分点除了一般的名词、形容词、副词之外，最重要的是高级动词！因为续写侧重叙事，里面涉及到的人的动作是非常多的，比如cry，这就过于简单，要侧重细节描写，to show, not to tell, 高分作文一般就会写，With shoulders shivering, her tears cannot help streaming down her face.她的双肩哆哆嗦嗦，眼泪情不自禁的从她脸上流下来。所以类似表现喜怒哀乐的情况，都要事先做好准备（注意，两三句即可，但这两三句一定要是最佳句，如句式，高级词汇都要是最好的，熟记于心，一直用即可），侧重刻画描写，脸，手，眼睛都可以描写。
1、主语从句结构1：It is +adj for sb that…结构2：what I could do/say/… is towhat (counts/matters/impress me) most is that … =it is important that…What make me anxious is that......... 功能：用于突出某个动作的重要或必须应用位置：不限例句1：我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。What we could do was to go back along the previous track.例句2：我所看到的与我过去所经历的任何事情完全不同。What I saw was completely unlike anything I had experienced in the past.
2、形式主语it在读后续写中，我们经常要用到“脑海里突然出现……”和“某人突然意识到……”的句型。用形式主语句表达，再合适不过了。
请看下面的句子:例子 1. It suddenly occurred to him that the family inside was in danger.例子 2. It hit me all of a sudden that l had forgotten her birthday.
第1句中、他突然想到里面那家人有危险。为了避免头重脚轻，该句使用了it 作形式主语的名词性从句，真正的主语为 the family inside was in danger。
第2句中，我突然想到我忘了她的生日，为了避免头重脚轻，该句使用了it作形式主语的名词性从句，真正的主语为Ihad forgotten her birthday.
3、主旨升华句1. That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。2. Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
3. It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。4. Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后，我们做某事。（这里写结果） 多么难忘的经历啊！ （这是一个万能句）事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
4、环境描写类1.The sun shines/warms sth/beats down(on sth)太阳照耀着/温暖着/照射在……2.The sunshine breaks/streams through sth阳光穿过……3.The sun disappeared behind a bank of clouds.太阳消失在一大片云后面。4.Black clouds blocked out the sun.乌云遮住了太阳。5.The last sunshine gradually cast her shadow on the beach, leaving a long and lonely figure in sight.
最后的阳光渐渐地把她的影子投射在海滩上，留下一个长长的、孤独的身影。
6.The wind had picked up.风愈刮愈大。7.It was getting dark and the wind died away.天渐渐黑了，风渐渐小了。8.A gentle/light/stiff/cool/warm/sea breeze blows in/comes in off the sea.微风/轻风/强风/凉爽的风/暖风/海风从海上吹来。9.The wind blows/whistles/howls/picks up/whips through sth/sweeps across sth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……
5、人生哲理1.One is never too late to learn.活到老,学到老。2. Constant dropping wears the stone.滴水穿石。3. From small beginnings come great things.伟大始于渺小。4. The world makes way for the dreamer.世界总会给有梦想的人开路。5. Each man is the architect of his own fate.
每个人都是自已命运的建筑师。
6. We should enjoy every moment and never escape challenges.我们应该享受每一刻，永远不要逃避挑战。7. Don't take people's concern for granted. No matter how much they love you, people get tired eventually.不要把别人的关心当成理所当然。不管他们有多爱你,最终也会有疲惫的一天。
手上动作：
1. Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an awward way.
2. Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.
3. The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly .
4. The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben's hand.
5. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.
模拟练习
02
The Gift of Kindness
Will,a nine-year-old boy,was such a kind soul that he brought home birds with broken wings.Money was very short for his family because his mother was ill.Every weekend,Will would mow his neighbours'lawns (草坪）to eam a little money.
One hot dry moming,on his way to school,Will saw a man sitting on the roadside with his head in his hands.Not far away was his truck Previously,the man spared no efforts in repairing it,but he failed,exhausted and thirsty.Will came up to him,ready to help.
Hearing Will's greeting,the man raised his head looked at Will and asked for some water.Leaming that he had even not had breakfast Will walked into a shop,fingering the money in his pocket Eventually,he picked up sandwiches and water.They cost all his money!He shrugged(耸肩)，walked back and handed him the food.
The man received the supplies gratefully and they shared the brief meal while introducing themselves.Allan,a boss with a small factory who delivered goods by himself,smiled,"The delivering job is so tiring that nobody seems to want it By the way,thank you for your food.I'm sorry that I forget to take money with me today.
I'll.."
"It's OK.My mom always says we should be kind to the world,and the world will be kind toyou!"Will shrugged,"As for the job,don't worry.There mrst be someone warming to take it”
"Perhaps.Today,I feel kindness in the world like your mom says.Maybe she is the one the world has been kind to."Allan commented.
Will lowered his head,explaining quietly his mother's situation and his father's just being out of work because of the bankrupt (破产）of the company.Will pointed at a house."My dad says well have to sell it to pay for mom's treatment.Sometimes,I hope the world could be kind to our family soon."Tears rolled down Will's cheeks ，goodbye to Allan and rushed for school，never imagining he would see Allan ever again.
Allan stared at Will's fading figure lost in thought.
注意：
1续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答，
Affer school,Will saw the truck parked in font of his house
Hearing the good news,Will tured overjoyed.
话题：助人篇
主要内容：W和，一个有爱心的小男孩，把断了翅膀的小鸟带回家；上学的路上，遇到因设有吃早饭的Am,主动掏出口袋里的钱帮助了对方，并和对方说了家里的情况，希望上天能眷顾他们一家人。
After school ,Will saw the truck parked in front of his house.Puzzled and curious,he quickened his pace,wondering who would be the unexpected visitor.Hardly had he stepped into the doorway when he noticed that Allan,the man he met in the moming.was talking with his father.Astonished to see the scene,he asked curiously,"Are you old acquaintance "His father beamed up,"No,but Mr.Allan have told me what had happened this moming and he offered to give me a job,as a deliveryman!"
Hearing the good news,Will norned overjoyed .He asked eagerly,"Dad,with this job,do we need to sell our house "Probably not!"At least,it can help cover the medical expenses!"His father responded.Wearing a big smile on his face,Will expressed his heartfelt gratitude to Allan,offering that he would also help deliver the goods in the following summer vacation!Moved by the little boy,Allan stroked his head,"The world will be kind to the one with a kind heart!"Leaning against the door was the father,who felt relieved,not only for the precious job,but for the kind boy.(175words)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was a pediatric cardiac sonographer（儿科心脏超声医师）at Monroe Carell Jr. Children’s Hospital in Nashville, Tennessee. It was a stressful job, and humor was always appreciated.
For a while, I became interested in knitting（编织）. Since it was my first attempt at knitting, things didn’t go as planned. I made a mistake somewhere along the way, and the hat I’d wanted to make for myself turned out too small to fit me or anyone else. It was no bigger than the palm of my hand! Looking just like the hat of a doll, it was very funny.
I wanted to show it to the team at work, so I sewed a small flower onto the side of the hat and brought it to work the next day. We team members all had a good laugh at my mini hat and got back to our work. I put the hat in a drawer and forgot about it.
A few days later, a four-year-old girl came in for an echocardiogram（心回波图）. She wore a knit cap to cover the hair loss from her cancer treatment and held a baby doll in her arms. She lay down quietly, but her look clearly showed that she was afraid of being touched by me. I had to work extra hard to gain her trust. First I offered her the sensor so she could take pictures of her doll’s heart. Then I made animals with the ultrasound gel. Neither worked. “Does your doll have a name ” I asked. She threw her doll to the floor, and I saw my chance.
I picked up the doll and straightened her dress. “I know it’s a little horrible to have this test.” I said to the doll, “But I promise it won’t hurt. What Your head is cold You wish you had a hat ” I took the hat from my drawer and slipped it onto the doll’s little bald head. It was a perfect fit.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The girl sat up happily and wanted her doll back.
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A few months later, I noticed a familiar little girl’s face while walking on the street.
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The girl sat up happily and wanted her doll back.I handed the doll to her,telling her that I knitted it by myself and was just waiting for the right person to wear it.She put her little hand on the doll's new hat and then looked up at me in a friendly way.The rest of the appointment went well. My litte patient left with a smile on her face and a new hat for her doll.I felt relaxed and satisfied.
A few months later I noticed a familiar little girl's face while walking on the street.She seemed to have recognized me and stared at me with a bright smile on her face.Suddenly I remembered the little girl who had taken the small hat I had knitted."Are you all right "I asked".I have completely recovered from my illness,she answered,"Thank you for your hat,which changed me a lot and I've always kept the hat you gave me."I had never felt so happy as I did that day.I decided to continue knitting hats for whoever might need one.
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