外研版（2019）选择性必修第三册Unit 4 A Glimpse of the Future Writing 课件（共19张PPT)
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Unit 4 A glimpse of the future
Writing
写作技法·情景演练
续写科幻故事
Ⅰ.技能指导
1.写作指南：
本单元的写作任务为续写科幻故事，属于读后续写。读后续写需要将阅读与写作紧密结合，同学们在做题时需要阅读一篇文章，然后为文章续写一个合理的结尾。这就要求同学们首先要读懂已有信息，不仅要读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络，了解故事的发展进程、前因后果和人物的情感变化等。科幻故事情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。续写故事时，要展开丰富的想象，适当构思情节，并把故事情节写得生动有趣，同时要合乎逻辑。此外，续写时，要注意续写内容和原文的衔接。
读后续写的写作步骤：
（1）仔细审题，了解文章大意，明确写作任务；
（2）细读全文，确定文章线索，以便高效快捷地梳理故事情节；
（3）精心谋篇，研读续写部分所给出的两段的段首文字，构思段落大意；
（4）撰写初稿，运用恰当的人称、时态，并尽可能确保句子结构的多样性和语言的丰富性，但要注意整体语言风格需与前文保持一致，如对话的使用、动作和心理描写等；
（5）润色升级，用亮点词汇代替一般词汇，用高级句式代替一般句式；
（6）复查定稿，检查语法错误，誊写时，务必做到字迹工整清晰。
2.常用表达：
（1）To find out what it was, I stepped out of the house and headed into the dark.
为了弄清楚那是什么，我走出屋子，走向黑暗。
（2）It was then that I realized I had flown into space.
就在那时，我意识到我飞进了太空。
（3）They spoke to me in a language that I couldn't understand at all.
他们用一种我完全听不懂的语言对我说话。
（4）What amazed me most was that...
最令我惊讶的是……
（5）He couldn't believe his eyes when he saw this miracle.
当他看到这个奇迹时，他简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。
（6）When James came out and spotted the box, his eyes widened in surprise.
当詹姆斯出来看到盒子时，他惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。
Ⅱ.情景再现
“Acknowledged, Detective. This is my...”
He hung up and told the driverless UNATS Robotics car to take him to the railway station as fast as it could, angry with himself and with Ada—whose middle name was Trouble, after all—for making him deal with a robot before he'd had his breakfast. The name had been his ex-wife's idea,something she'd insisted on.
He hadn't thought of his ex-wife in years. Well, months...weeks, certainly. She'd been a brilliant computer scientist at the UNATS Robotics School at the University of Toronto. Now she settled in Beijing, where her own research lab was located, providing the kinds of software solutions for robot applications.
He desired to wiretap（窃听） her, to read her email or listen in on her phone conversations. He could have done that when they were still together, but he never had. If he had, he would have found out what she was planning.
He could have talked her out of it.
“And then what, Artie ” said the nagging（唠叨的） voice in his head. He couldn't stop her from chasing her own dream—making the smartest robot in the world,especially with their little daughter in her belly.
“Shut up!” he told the nagging voice.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
In a few minutes, he was at the front gate of the railway station.___
There she was, standing by a teenage girl who had the same blue eyes as his.____
【审题谋篇】
主题 科幻故事 体裁 记叙文
人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主
布局 1.提取原文关键信息 Para. 1-2 Artie was going to the railway station. angry Para. 3-5 He hadn't thought of his ex-wife for weeks and wanted to know something about her. regretful Para. 6 He couldn't stop his ex-wife from chasing her dream. upset; having mixed feelings 2.分析原文中要解决的矛盾 主人公对待前妻梦想的态度。
布局 3.读续写的段首句，思考续写思路（倒推法）
根据第一段首句可知，主人公已到达火车站， 根据原文第三段中的Now
she settled in Beijing, where her own research lab was located可知，主人
公去火车站是要坐火车去北京看望前妻，下一段已经见到了前妻，故第一段
应写发生在火车上的故事。依据原文中主人公矛盾的心理，第一段可以围绕
主人公的心理描写展开。
根据第二段首句可知，第二段应写见面之后的事情。根据原文with their
little daughter in her belly并结合第二段首句There she was, standing by a
teenage girl who had the same blue eyes as his.可推测这个女孩是主人公
的女儿，接下来应主要描写主人公与前妻和女儿见面的场景。
续表
【词汇储备】
1. ___________从……走出来
step out of
2. _____________________说服某人做某事
persuade sb. to do sth.
3. __________________让某人陷入困境
get sb. into trouble
4. ______v.追逐，追求
chase
5. _______（火车）进站停靠
pull in
6. ________（开车）接（某人）
pick up
【句型运用】
1. Ada为他打开了门。他急忙走出UNATS机器人车，去赶开往北京的高速列车。
___________________________. He stepped out of the UNATS Robotics car
hurriedly to catch the high-speed train to Beijing.
Ada opened the door for him
2. 他的前妻就住在那里。
______________________
His ex-wife lived there.
3. 在旅途中，他不断考虑如何说服前妻放弃她的研究，不过这可能会让她陷入麻烦。
During the journey, ______________________________________________________
____________ but this could get her into trouble.
he constantly considered how to persuade his ex-wife to quit her research
4. 显然，这不是一项容易的任务，因为她追求她的梦想已经很久了。
_____________________________________________________________________
Clearly, it was not an easy task, because she had chased her dream for ages.
5. 火车进站了。他开始寻找他的前妻，她答应过要来接他。
The train pulled in. ______________________________________________________
___________.
He began to look for his ex-wife, who had promised to pick him up
6. 他立刻就意识到了那个女孩是他的女儿。
____________________________________________________
He immediately recognised that the girl was his daughter.
7. Artie慢慢地走向她们。有那么多话要说，他感到喉咙哽住了。
Artie walked up to them slowly. __________________________, he felt a knot in
his throat.
With so many words to say
8. 他看着女儿的眼睛说:“嗨，我可爱的女儿!” 他的声音有些颤抖。
_________________________________ and said, “Hi, my lovely girl!” His voice
was trembling slightly.
He looked into their daughter's eyes
9. 爸爸，妈妈什么都告诉我了。你不用再担心我们了。昨天，她成功地制造出了
最聪明的机器人。
_______________________________________________________________________
_______. Yesterday, she made the smartest robot successfully.
Daddy, Mommy has told me everything. You don't need to worry about us anymore
10. Artie难以置信地转向前妻。她点了点头:“没有你们的支持，我永远无法实现我
的梦想。”
Artie turned to his ex-wife in disbelief. She nodded,
“_________________________________________________.”
I could never achieve my dream without your support
11. Artie拥抱了她们两个人，心想:“永远不要阻止追梦者!”
_________________________, thinking to himself,“Never stop a dream-chaser!”
Artie hugged both of them
【句式升级】
1. 用非限制性定语从句合并句1和句2。
_______________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Ada opened the door for him. He stepped out of the UNATS Robotics car hurriedly to catch the high-speed train to Beijing, where his ex-wife lived.
2. 用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3。
_______________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________
During the journey, he constantly considered how to persuade his ex-wife to quit her research, which could get her into trouble.
【连句成篇】
将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
In a few minutes,he was at the front gate of the railway station.___________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ada opened the door for him. He stepped out of the UNATS Robotics car hurriedly to catch the high-speed train to Beijing, where his ex-wife lived. During the journey, he constantly considered how to persuade his ex-wife to quit her research, which could get her into trouble. Clearly, it was not an easy task, because she had chased her dream for ages. The train pulled in. He began to look for his ex-wife, who had promised to pick him up.
There she was,standing by a teenage girl who had the same blue eyes as his.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
He immediately recognised that the girl was his daughter. Artie walked up to them slowly. With so many words to say, he felt a knot in his throat. At last, he looked into their daughter's eyes and said, “Hi, my lovely girl!” His voice was trembling slightly. “Daddy, Mommy has told me everything. You don't need to worry about us anymore. Yesterday, she made the smartest robot successfully.” Artie turned to his ex-wife in disbelief. She nodded, “I could never achieve my dream without your support.” Artie hugged both of them, thinking to himself, “Never stop a dream-chaser!”
Thanks
Unit 4 A glimpse of the future
Writing
写作技法·情景演练
续写科幻故事
Ⅰ.技能指导
1.写作指南：
本单元的写作任务为续写科幻故事，属于读后续写。读后续写需要将阅读与写作紧密结合，同学们在做题时需要阅读一篇文章，然后为文章续写一个合理的结尾。这就要求同学们首先要读懂已有信息，不仅要读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络，了解故事的发展进程、前因后果和人物的情感变化等。科幻故事情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。续写故事时，要展开丰富的想象，适当构思情节，并把故事情节写得生动有趣，同时要合乎逻辑。此外，续写时，要注意续写内容和原文的衔接。
读后续写的写作步骤：
（1）仔细审题，了解文章大意，明确写作任务；
（2）细读全文，确定文章线索，以便高效快捷地梳理故事情节；
（3）精心谋篇，研读续写部分所给出的两段的段首文字，构思段落大意；
（4）撰写初稿，运用恰当的人称、时态，并尽可能确保句子结构的多样性和语言的丰富性，但要注意整体语言风格需与前文保持一致，如对话的使用、动作和心理描写等；
（5）润色升级，用亮点词汇代替一般词汇，用高级句式代替一般句式；
（6）复查定稿，检查语法错误，誊写时，务必做到字迹工整清晰。
2.常用表达：
（1）To find out what it was, I stepped out of the house and headed into the dark.
为了弄清楚那是什么，我走出屋子，走向黑暗。
（2）It was then that I realized I had flown into space.
就在那时，我意识到我飞进了太空。
（3）They spoke to me in a language that I couldn't understand at all.
他们用一种我完全听不懂的语言对我说话。
（4）What amazed me most was that...
最令我惊讶的是……
（5）He couldn't believe his eyes when he saw this miracle.
当他看到这个奇迹时，他简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。
（6）When James came out and spotted the box, his eyes widened in surprise.
当詹姆斯出来看到盒子时，他惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。
Ⅱ.情景再现
“Acknowledged, Detective. This is my...”
He hung up and told the driverless UNATS Robotics car to take him to the railway station as fast as it could, angry with himself and with Ada—whose middle name was Trouble, after all—for making him deal with a robot before he'd had his breakfast. The name had been his ex-wife's idea,something she'd insisted on.
He hadn't thought of his ex-wife in years. Well, months...weeks, certainly. She'd been a brilliant computer scientist at the UNATS Robotics School at the University of Toronto. Now she settled in Beijing, where her own research lab was located, providing the kinds of software solutions for robot applications.
He desired to wiretap（窃听） her, to read her email or listen in on her phone conversations. He could have done that when they were still together, but he never had. If he had, he would have found out what she was planning.
He could have talked her out of it.
“And then what, Artie ” said the nagging（唠叨的） voice in his head. He couldn't stop her from chasing her own dream—making the smartest robot in the world,especially with their little daughter in her belly.
“Shut up!” he told the nagging voice.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
In a few minutes, he was at the front gate of the railway station.___
There she was, standing by a teenage girl who had the same blue eyes as his.____
【审题谋篇】
主题 科幻故事 体裁 记叙文
人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主
布局 1.提取原文关键信息 Para. 1-2 Artie was going to the railway station. angry Para. 3-5 He hadn't thought of his ex-wife for weeks and wanted to know something about her. regretful Para. 6 He couldn't stop his ex-wife from chasing her dream. upset; having mixed feelings 2.分析原文中要解决的矛盾 主人公对待前妻梦想的态度。
布局 3.读续写的段首句，思考续写思路（倒推法）
根据第一段首句可知，主人公已到达火车站， 根据原文第三段中的Now
she settled in Beijing, where her own research lab was located可知，主人
公去火车站是要坐火车去北京看望前妻，下一段已经见到了前妻，故第一段
应写发生在火车上的故事。依据原文中主人公矛盾的心理，第一段可以围绕
主人公的心理描写展开。
根据第二段首句可知，第二段应写见面之后的事情。根据原文with their
little daughter in her belly并结合第二段首句There she was, standing by a
teenage girl who had the same blue eyes as his.可推测这个女孩是主人公
的女儿，接下来应主要描写主人公与前妻和女儿见面的场景。
续表
【词汇储备】
1. ___________从……走出来
step out of
2. _____________________说服某人做某事
persuade sb. to do sth.
3. __________________让某人陷入困境
get sb. into trouble
4. ______v.追逐，追求
chase
5. _______（火车）进站停靠
pull in
6. ________（开车）接（某人）
pick up
【句型运用】
1. Ada为他打开了门。他急忙走出UNATS机器人车，去赶开往北京的高速列车。
___________________________. He stepped out of the UNATS Robotics car
hurriedly to catch the high-speed train to Beijing.
Ada opened the door for him
2. 他的前妻就住在那里。
______________________
His ex-wife lived there.
3. 在旅途中，他不断考虑如何说服前妻放弃她的研究，不过这可能会让她陷入麻烦。
During the journey, ______________________________________________________
____________ but this could get her into trouble.
he constantly considered how to persuade his ex-wife to quit her research
4. 显然，这不是一项容易的任务，因为她追求她的梦想已经很久了。
_____________________________________________________________________
Clearly, it was not an easy task, because she had chased her dream for ages.
5. 火车进站了。他开始寻找他的前妻，她答应过要来接他。
The train pulled in. ______________________________________________________
___________.
He began to look for his ex-wife, who had promised to pick him up
6. 他立刻就意识到了那个女孩是他的女儿。
____________________________________________________
He immediately recognised that the girl was his daughter.
7. Artie慢慢地走向她们。有那么多话要说，他感到喉咙哽住了。
Artie walked up to them slowly. __________________________, he felt a knot in
his throat.
With so many words to say
8. 他看着女儿的眼睛说:“嗨，我可爱的女儿!” 他的声音有些颤抖。
_________________________________ and said, “Hi, my lovely girl!” His voice
was trembling slightly.
He looked into their daughter's eyes
9. 爸爸，妈妈什么都告诉我了。你不用再担心我们了。昨天，她成功地制造出了
最聪明的机器人。
_______________________________________________________________________
_______. Yesterday, she made the smartest robot successfully.
Daddy, Mommy has told me everything. You don't need to worry about us anymore
10. Artie难以置信地转向前妻。她点了点头:“没有你们的支持，我永远无法实现我
的梦想。”
Artie turned to his ex-wife in disbelief. She nodded,
“_________________________________________________.”
I could never achieve my dream without your support
11. Artie拥抱了她们两个人，心想:“永远不要阻止追梦者!”
_________________________, thinking to himself,“Never stop a dream-chaser!”
Artie hugged both of them
【句式升级】
1. 用非限制性定语从句合并句1和句2。
_______________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Ada opened the door for him. He stepped out of the UNATS Robotics car hurriedly to catch the high-speed train to Beijing, where his ex-wife lived.
2. 用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3。
_______________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________
During the journey, he constantly considered how to persuade his ex-wife to quit her research, which could get her into trouble.
【连句成篇】
将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
In a few minutes,he was at the front gate of the railway station.___________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ada opened the door for him. He stepped out of the UNATS Robotics car hurriedly to catch the high-speed train to Beijing, where his ex-wife lived. During the journey, he constantly considered how to persuade his ex-wife to quit her research, which could get her into trouble. Clearly, it was not an easy task, because she had chased her dream for ages. The train pulled in. He began to look for his ex-wife, who had promised to pick him up.
There she was,standing by a teenage girl who had the same blue eyes as his.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
He immediately recognised that the girl was his daughter. Artie walked up to them slowly. With so many words to say, he felt a knot in his throat. At last, he looked into their daughter's eyes and said, “Hi, my lovely girl!” His voice was trembling slightly. “Daddy, Mommy has told me everything. You don't need to worry about us anymore. Yesterday, she made the smartest robot successfully.” Artie turned to his ex-wife in disbelief. She nodded, “I could never achieve my dream without your support.” Artie hugged both of them, thinking to himself, “Never stop a dream-chaser!”
Thanks