读后续写 The true meaning of love 讲义 河南省2023-2024学年高三上学期10月青桐鸣联考模拟预测英语试题
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河南省青桐鸣大联考2023- 2024学年高三上学期10月模拟预测英语读后续写题目:
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The True Meaning of Love
“You don't want that one,” the shelter volunteer said. “He's broken. He'd been abandoned. ”
“Broken Abandoned ” I asked. Had I heard her correctly I looked down at the black cat sitting on my foot. The minute I'd walked into the animal shelter's cat room, he'd been one step behind me, my shadow. I wasn't an expert, but this cat seemed friendly.
The volunteer explained, “He doesn't like anyone-not other cats, not dogs, not people. ”
“I want to adopt him,” I said.
“Really " she asked. There were several other lovely cats up for adoption, cats that would be easier for a first-time owner. “Why ”
“Because he needs a home," I said. Then under my breath, “And because I'm broken too. ” It was 2017. I'd been in therapy(心理治疗)for a while, but it was only recently that my therapist suggested I get an animal companion-preferably something low-maintenance, like a cat. It would be good for me. Maybe it can even help me form connections with people. I didn't know if I believed that. But I went to my local shelter.
I don't know what it was about that little black cat, but I immediately felt a connection with him. Two abandoned peas in a pod, I guess. I filled out the paperwork and left with him that afternoon.
At home I let him out of the carrier so he could explore. I watched as this little cat smelled every inch of the house. Eventually, his curiosity was satisfied, and he settled in my lap. I reached out a hesitant hand to pet him, saying,“You need my help, and I need yours.”
It took me a week to come up with a name for him. I finally settled on Mr. Bojangles, after the song about a homeless man who, even after getting into big trouble, remained happy and positive. I thought the name fitted this cat. Later I called him Bo for short.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
By the time a year passed, we'd settled into a routine.
Amazingly, we both began new connections with the outer world.
文本分析：
故事大意：
续写材料讲述的是2017年主人公“我”因为创伤在接受了一段时间的心理治疗后，“我”遵循咨询师的意见，前往动物收容所领养宠物，帮助治疗“我”的心理问题。在收容所中， “我”看到了一只同样受过伤害的黑猫，感受到了与它之间的连接“connection”，在志愿者并不建议收养的情况下，“我”坚持收养这只黑猫，给他起名“Bo”，由此开启了“我”和“Bo”彼此治愈的过程。
从对文本的解读中，不难看出，这是一个以“爱”为主题的记叙文，文章的脉络与主线都围绕着“寻找爱”和“发现爱”展开。
续写情节发展：
两段续写的段首句 “By the time a year passed, we’d settled into a routine.”“Amazingly, we both began new connections with the outer world. ”给我们提供了写作的框架，第一段承接了“You need my help and I need yours”，由此可以推测出，一年的时间里，通过描述“我”照顾Bo，Bo陪伴“我”的日常生活，为第二段的续写进行铺垫。第二段的续写则侧重写在“我”和Bo的相互陪伴下，相互治愈，最终懂得了爱的意义，开始与外部世界构建联系，升华了爱的主题。通过对文本的解读，这个续写对于学生的难度是较大的，因为学生的思考能力有限，对于文本深层的情感很难在考场上有限的时间内琢磨出来。
I was in therapy and I couldn't form a connection with people.
Before adoption: isolated/lonely negative/ unhappy
After adoption : happy/positive
Plot 1 I saw a friendly black cat.
Plot 2 Though he was broken and abandoned,I adopted him and took him home.
读后续写框架：
Para1:By the time a year passed, we'd settle
what was the routine about 撸猫日常
How did l connect with“Bo”通过照顾他的匀
How did l feel 感受到了被爱，被需要
Para2:Amazingly, we both began new connections with the
outer world通过猫的陪伴开始尝试接受外界的事物。
What is the new connection 比如:背着太空舱带猫咪外出
How did l have new connection ，以猫为中介认识了一些朋友，相约外出
How did l connect with the outer world 幸福，快乐，感雨工作室
How did l feel after connecting the outer world
线索：
“friendly”可作为第二段续写的线索,通过Bo对陌生人的友善，我开始尝试带它接触外面的世界，"I want to adopt him,"I said.打开了与外界的沟通。
low-maintenance 意为“低维护”，及不需要花费很多的精力。可放在第一段的续写中，用“回报比付出多来表达。
"You need my help,and I need yours.”可放在第一续写段，通过帮助，照顾猫咪日常的吃喝等来获得猫咪对我的信任，依赖，以及情绪的感知，从而构建联系。
“happy”和“positive”可放在续写第二段，和猫咪的相处中逐渐敞开心扉，打开了与外界的链接，得到了快乐，可用高级词替代。fabulous feelings delightful/ enjoyable/ chuffed
主题：The companionship(陪伴)given by pets can heal/cure/fix one's broken heart.
高分句型写作：
1.每天早晨，Bo用爪子推开我的门:跳到我的床上，用喵声叫我起床。
把动作过程分解成一连串的动作，构造动作链，让动作描写既丰富又生动。
Every morning, Bo pushed my door open with his paws, jumped onto my bed, and mewed me out of bed.
2.我抚摸着Bo的头，想到这一年来我的变化，脸上露出了微笑。
把动作和面部表情，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。
I stroked Bo's fluffy head and thought about the changes about me in a year to come,a smile appearing on my face.
范文:
By the time a year passed, ue'd settled into a routine. When I woke up in the morning, Bo would demand that I hold him, so he could rub his face against mine. When I got home in the evenings.Bo would meow until I picked him up. He formed a habit of staying with me the whole night, accompanying me gently. Seeing him beside me, I felt my heart was so full. I was finally able to say: “I love you, Bo," We made it a rule to take a walk together in the park every morning, which usually made me in a good mood.
Amazingly, ue both began new connections with the outer world. Accidentally, Bo made friends with other pets while taking the usual walk, thus making me have daily contact with other pet-lovers, Gradually, I made many friends. I even went climbing with them, attending a get-together party, In time, I talked with new friends and, eventually. a partner who understood my inner world. One who I was able to tell"I love you," because of a little black eat who showed me the meaning of those words.
下水文：
By the time a year passed, we'd settled into a routine. Each morning, Bo would push my door open with his paws, jumped onto my bed, rubbed his face against me, and mewed me out of bed. When I got up, I would prepare for what he needed, like food, water and other stuff.Sometimes when lying on sofa with him, I would stroke Bo's fluffy head gently and he seemed to enjoy that moment. We counted on each other day by day, and I always thought that what l got from Bo was much more than what I did for him, which gradually made me have the courage to love the things around me.
Amazingly, we both began new connections with the outer world. Unlike other cats who feared to go outside, Bo always showed great interest in exploring outside world with me.Finally, putting him into the travel carrier, I picked up my confidence to go outside and started to communicate with cat lovers. I opened my mind to accept new things, regaining social activities with my friends and like-minded people.It is magically surprised me that a cat could change me so much. I thought it was the love between two abandoned peas in a pod that made each other better and better, Yes, The magical power, love and companionship.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The True Meaning of Love
“You don't want that one,” the shelter volunteer said. “He's broken. He'd been abandoned. ”
“Broken Abandoned ” I asked. Had I heard her correctly I looked down at the black cat sitting on my foot. The minute I'd walked into the animal shelter's cat room, he'd been one step behind me, my shadow. I wasn't an expert, but this cat seemed friendly.
The volunteer explained, “He doesn't like anyone-not other cats, not dogs, not people. ”
“I want to adopt him,” I said.
“Really " she asked. There were several other lovely cats up for adoption, cats that would be easier for a first-time owner. “Why ”
“Because he needs a home," I said. Then under my breath, “And because I'm broken too. ” It was 2017. I'd been in therapy(心理治疗)for a while, but it was only recently that my therapist suggested I get an animal companion-preferably something low-maintenance, like a cat. It would be good for me. Maybe it can even help me form connections with people. I didn't know if I believed that. But I went to my local shelter.
I don't know what it was about that little black cat, but I immediately felt a connection with him. Two abandoned peas in a pod, I guess. I filled out the paperwork and left with him that afternoon.
At home I let him out of the carrier so he could explore. I watched as this little cat smelled every inch of the house. Eventually, his curiosity was satisfied, and he settled in my lap. I reached out a hesitant hand to pet him, saying,“You need my help, and I need yours.”
It took me a week to come up with a name for him. I finally settled on Mr. Bojangles, after the song about a homeless man who, even after getting into big trouble, remained happy and positive. I thought the name fitted this cat. Later I called him Bo for short.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
By the time a year passed, we'd settled into a routine.
Amazingly, we both began new connections with the outer world.
文本分析：
故事大意：
续写材料讲述的是2017年主人公“我”因为创伤在接受了一段时间的心理治疗后，“我”遵循咨询师的意见，前往动物收容所领养宠物，帮助治疗“我”的心理问题。在收容所中， “我”看到了一只同样受过伤害的黑猫，感受到了与它之间的连接“connection”，在志愿者并不建议收养的情况下，“我”坚持收养这只黑猫，给他起名“Bo”，由此开启了“我”和“Bo”彼此治愈的过程。
从对文本的解读中，不难看出，这是一个以“爱”为主题的记叙文，文章的脉络与主线都围绕着“寻找爱”和“发现爱”展开。
续写情节发展：
两段续写的段首句 “By the time a year passed, we’d settled into a routine.”“Amazingly, we both began new connections with the outer world. ”给我们提供了写作的框架，第一段承接了“You need my help and I need yours”，由此可以推测出，一年的时间里，通过描述“我”照顾Bo，Bo陪伴“我”的日常生活，为第二段的续写进行铺垫。第二段的续写则侧重写在“我”和Bo的相互陪伴下，相互治愈，最终懂得了爱的意义，开始与外部世界构建联系，升华了爱的主题。通过对文本的解读，这个续写对于学生的难度是较大的，因为学生的思考能力有限，对于文本深层的情感很难在考场上有限的时间内琢磨出来。
I was in therapy and I couldn't form a connection with people.
Before adoption: isolated/lonely negative/ unhappy
After adoption : happy/positive
Plot 1 I saw a friendly black cat.
Plot 2 Though he was broken and abandoned,I adopted him and took him home.
读后续写框架：
Para1:By the time a year passed, we'd settle
what was the routine about 撸猫日常
How did l connect with“Bo”通过照顾他的匀
How did l feel 感受到了被爱，被需要
Para2:Amazingly, we both began new connections with the
outer world通过猫的陪伴开始尝试接受外界的事物。
What is the new connection 比如:背着太空舱带猫咪外出
How did l have new connection ，以猫为中介认识了一些朋友，相约外出
How did l connect with the outer world 幸福，快乐，感雨工作室
How did l feel after connecting the outer world
线索：
“friendly”可作为第二段续写的线索,通过Bo对陌生人的友善，我开始尝试带它接触外面的世界，"I want to adopt him,"I said.打开了与外界的沟通。
low-maintenance 意为“低维护”，及不需要花费很多的精力。可放在第一段的续写中，用“回报比付出多来表达。
"You need my help,and I need yours.”可放在第一续写段，通过帮助，照顾猫咪日常的吃喝等来获得猫咪对我的信任，依赖，以及情绪的感知，从而构建联系。
“happy”和“positive”可放在续写第二段，和猫咪的相处中逐渐敞开心扉，打开了与外界的链接，得到了快乐，可用高级词替代。fabulous feelings delightful/ enjoyable/ chuffed
主题：The companionship(陪伴)given by pets can heal/cure/fix one's broken heart.
高分句型写作：
1.每天早晨，Bo用爪子推开我的门:跳到我的床上，用喵声叫我起床。
把动作过程分解成一连串的动作，构造动作链，让动作描写既丰富又生动。
Every morning, Bo pushed my door open with his paws, jumped onto my bed, and mewed me out of bed.
2.我抚摸着Bo的头，想到这一年来我的变化，脸上露出了微笑。
把动作和面部表情，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。
I stroked Bo's fluffy head and thought about the changes about me in a year to come,a smile appearing on my face.
范文:
By the time a year passed, ue'd settled into a routine. When I woke up in the morning, Bo would demand that I hold him, so he could rub his face against mine. When I got home in the evenings.Bo would meow until I picked him up. He formed a habit of staying with me the whole night, accompanying me gently. Seeing him beside me, I felt my heart was so full. I was finally able to say: “I love you, Bo," We made it a rule to take a walk together in the park every morning, which usually made me in a good mood.
Amazingly, ue both began new connections with the outer world. Accidentally, Bo made friends with other pets while taking the usual walk, thus making me have daily contact with other pet-lovers, Gradually, I made many friends. I even went climbing with them, attending a get-together party, In time, I talked with new friends and, eventually. a partner who understood my inner world. One who I was able to tell"I love you," because of a little black eat who showed me the meaning of those words.
下水文：
By the time a year passed, we'd settled into a routine. Each morning, Bo would push my door open with his paws, jumped onto my bed, rubbed his face against me, and mewed me out of bed. When I got up, I would prepare for what he needed, like food, water and other stuff.Sometimes when lying on sofa with him, I would stroke Bo's fluffy head gently and he seemed to enjoy that moment. We counted on each other day by day, and I always thought that what l got from Bo was much more than what I did for him, which gradually made me have the courage to love the things around me.
Amazingly, we both began new connections with the outer world. Unlike other cats who feared to go outside, Bo always showed great interest in exploring outside world with me.Finally, putting him into the travel carrier, I picked up my confidence to go outside and started to communicate with cat lovers. I opened my mind to accept new things, regaining social activities with my friends and like-minded people.It is magically surprised me that a cat could change me so much. I thought it was the love between two abandoned peas in a pod that made each other better and better, Yes, The magical power, love and companionship.
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