2023-2024青桐鸣4月联考续写作文题目
"Catch it!”My husband and I shouted, but saw the ball hit the grass near our four-year-old's feet while he continued kicking at the dirt. It was mid-season, yet he showed no interest in the ball game. We called his name and told him to pick up the ball, but he just stared blankly before going back to kicking the dirt.
As the games went on, it was clear that the coach didn't want our son to play. We practiced with him, showing him how to hold the bat and throw the ball, but he never understood running the bases or other things we tried to teach.
At the end of the season, our son once again received the “Most Improved”medal, which he had received in other sports before. My husband and I looked at each other and I said, “Well, at least he's improving,” though it reminded me of other sympathetic gestures from coaches or teachers. I was used to the feeling of our son being different and unable to fit into ball games.
The same year, his preschool teacher told me, "He's not paying attention.” This was not what any parent wanted to hear, but I knew it was true. As a stay-at-home mom, I was tired of having to repeat instructions to him. Initially, I wasn't sure how much of it was normal, as he was our first child. We decided to have him assessed, but it was a guessing game until he turned six, when a professional evaluation determined that he had Asperger syndrome(幼儿孤独症).
My husband always believes our son will be a good boy. Fortunately, he is blessed with good looks, intelligence, and an ability to face the future. There are no obvious signs that he has Asperger's, apart from frequent lack of eye contact.
A friend invited our son to her son's birthday party after his diagnosis(诊断), but I turned it down because it was a dirt-bike party and our six-year-old couldn't ride a regular bike.
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We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling._________________________________________________________________
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons._________________________________________________________________
参考范文1
We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling. Bearing/ With this in mind, we promptly purchased a bike, hoping he would take an interest and adapt to it. The following day found us at the park, accompanied by the bike. Brimming with hope and excitement, we seated him on the bike and encouraged him to learn to ride, closely observing his reactions. However, to our dismay, his gaze remained fixed on the bike with no smile gracing his face, indicating a lack of enthusiasm. Reluctant to accept this reality, I persisted in teaching him, hoping for a breakthrough, but he ended up in tears, unhappy about being pushed. Realizing that cycling wasn't his passion, we reluctantly gave up, tinged with disappointment/a twinge of disappointment bubbling over in our heart.(120词)
Since cycling didn't work out, we opted to enroll him in swimming lessons. Outfitted(配备) with swimwear and swimming circles, we headed to the pool and enlisted a coach. As he caught sight of the pool, a wave of excitement lit up his eyes, and a broad smile spread across his face. A miracle unfolded! A wave of joy and excitement surged within us as we swiftly placed him in the water. Soon, he was swimming gleefully under the guidance of his coach, eyes gleaming with passion and laughter filling the air. It was a moment that reignited our hope for the future. Subsequently, we frequented the pool, relishing the sight of him swimming freely like a fish, free of any worries. It dawned on me that blessings are around us; all we need to do is seek them out.(126词)
参考范文2
We didn't go to the party, but it inspired us to encourage our son to try cycling. The idea struck me like a bolt, and we swiftly purchased a fantastic bike that was cool enough to captivate my son. Presenting this valuable bike to him, a sincere invitation welled up in my heart as I persuaded him to give it a go. Initially, silence was his response, stifling(压制) my cheerful words. It was evident that he lacked interest, which was not uncommon for us, knowing that only persistence and patience could make a difference. Subsequently, we brought him to a park with the bike. Watching other children cycling ignited my son's enthusiasm to attempt it, filling me with a sense of joy that surged through my body. My husband promptly guided him to enjoy the cycling process. To our dismay, his Asperger's syndrome hindered his ability to master bike control. Cycling obviously slipped from our thoughts as we cordially hoped he would conquer it.(150词)
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons. Determined and hopeful / With determination and hope, an inner voice echoed in my heart, reminding me that my son was like a seed, requiring continuous love and patience to flourish. Embracing this positive mindset, we opted for swimming without hesitation. Fortunately, as we anticipated, the success story was just around the corner. With his hand tightly gripping mine, my son stepped into the venue. Sensing his tension, I explained why we were there. A glimmer of a golden smile lit up his face; though he struggled to express himself, I glimpsed his joy and delight. With my husband's assistance, our son overcame the challenges posed by his condition and danced in the water before my eyes. Tears welled up, and I embraced my husband tightly. It dawned on us that we should never miss an opportunity to pass on love!(141词)
参考范文3
We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling. Filled with anticipation, I purchased a new bike for him and arranged for a cycling coach to guide training. As I presented the bike to him, I noticed a glimmer of excitement in his eyes. "Perhaps this endeavor will prove fruitful," I thought to myself. However, once the training commenced, it became apparent that our son remained as passive as before, gazing vacantly into space. Consequently, the scene unfolded with our son seated on the bike, motionless, while the coach held it steady and attempted to motivate him, but in vain. My husband and I stood by, feeling a sense of embarrassment creeping over us. Upon the coach's departure, he confided(吐露) in me that my son was the most challenging student he had encountered.
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons. Upon our arrival at the local swimming facility, I observed a gleam of interest in my son's eyes, despite his continued silence. When the swimming coach approached, our son met his gaze directly, surprising both my husband and me. The coach smiled warmly, extending his hand and encouraging our son in a gentle tone to attempt swimming. To our astonishment, our son nodded in agreement. Despite his concern about interacting with others, he was making a positive effort to step out of his comfort zone, awaking/arousing a blend of joy and pride within me. That evening, as we returned home, a wave of gratitude and happiness washed over me. I realized that every child possesses a unique character, and as parents, we must never abandon our son, regardless of how different he may be.
参考范文4
We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to encourage our son to try cycling. With the idea firmly planted in our minds, we sprang into action to purchase a stylish bike for him. While the bike would bring excitement to any of his friends, he merely glanced at it blankly when I presented it to him. Not shrinking back by his lack of interest, I adjusted my approach by integrating all aspects of our daily life with biking; even our dining table was decorated with a large bike poster. After several weeks immersed in this environment, it was heartening to observe his growing fascination with the bike; he even sat on it for a rest at times. However, the real challenge arose during his first attempt to ride. Trying to model himself on what he had seen on TV, he lost his balance and fell before we could get involved. This small accident felt like a cold fist shattering his small dreams, causing him to be reduced to his previous disinterest in biking.(159词)
Since the bike endeavor didn't pan out, we opted to introduce him to swimming lessons. Learning from our past experience, instead of pushing him too hard too soon, we aimed to nurture his interest gradually. Naturally, our surroundings transitioned into a swimming-themed environment. To help him focus during lessons, we carefully selected ocean and swimming-related cartoons for him. After noticing his initial inclination towards swimming, we enrolled him in swimming lessons. Rather than exposing him to the risk of drowning, which could have ruined his ambition and our efforts, we accompanied him to every lesson. We guided him through what he struggled to grasp and praised even the slightest progress he made. To our joy, this time, instead of encountering a setback, he not only learned how to swim but also overcame the challenges of Asperger's syndrome. It dawned on me that love and companionship can turn the impossible into the possible, nurturing hope to bloom softly.(142词)
参考范文5
We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling. Bearing this idea in mind, we bought a bike immediately, holding the hope that he would pay attention and fit into it. The following day witnessed us appearing in the park, with the bike alongside us. Hopeful and excited,we placed him on the bike and pushed him to learn cycling, with our eyes fixing on his cheeks to catch every sign of his interest. However , to our disappointment, his eyes kept staring blankly at the bike, and there was not smile hanging on his cheeks , showing that his passion remained unstimulated. Reluctant to give in the truth, I strove to push him to learn cycling , hoping miracle will appear but it turned out in vain, as my son burst into crying for being forced to stay on the bike. Knowing that bike would not enlighten his life, we had no choice but to give up, a twinge of disappointment bubbling over in our heart.(157词)
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons. Determined and hopeful, an inner voice echoing in my heart, it reminded me that my son just like a seed, only watering it with continuous love and patience could make him grow up. With this positive mindset, we chose swimming for a try without hesitation. Luckily, to our expectation, the beauty of success was around the corner. Holding my hand tightly, my son entered the place. Seizing a feeling of tension, I told him that why I took him there. A glint of golden smile shining in his face, though he could not express himself well, I captured his joy and enjoyment. Under my husband's guidance, my son overcame the difficulty from his condition and danced in the water in my eyes. Tears welling up, I hugged my husband tightly. It enlightened us that never give up every chance to pass love on!