2024年中考英语二轮专题常考语法点 书面表达(上海专用) （含解析）

书面表达
91．（2022·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想：
读者之家（Reading corner） 劳技工坊（Mini workshop） 艺体天地（Arts and sports centre）
义卖集市（Charity market） 科创小屋（High-tech lab） 心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room）
学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。
（注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to you to share my ideas about the use of the student activity room. I prefer to make it a heart-to-heart room.
For some students, they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy. They can turn to this place for help if there is one.
Besides, students are likely to suffer from mental problems. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring bad results. The heart-to-heart room can offer help to these students in time.
Thank you for reading my e-mail.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：首先选择其中你最喜欢的一种设想，发邮件给校报张老师，并说明理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍自己喜欢的设想；
第二步，介绍喜欢的理由；
第三步，表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to do更喜欢做某事
②turn to求助于
③suffer from遭受
[高分句型]
① they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy.（含有when引导的时间状语和who引导的定语从句）
②They can turn to this place for help if there is one.（if引导的条件状语从句）
2．（2021·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant)：
球类(Ball Games) 演讲(Speech) 器乐(Instrumental Music)
戏剧(Drama) 手工(Handicrafts) 摄影(Photography)
假设你是李华，请给教导处张老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。
注意：
1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am writing to you to apply for the teaching assistant for our instrumental music lesson. The reason why I am interested in this job is that I love music and I have got the level-10 certificates of both piano and guitar. Besides, music is a way to deepen our understanding of the world as well as a way to relax ourselves. I hope more students will find its beauty through this course, which is certainly my goal. Being the teaching assistant is exactly what I am good at and what I desire. I really hope you can give me this opportunity.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给情境，给教导处张老师写封信，结合自己的兴趣和特长，说明自己想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，时态为一般现在时。结合自己的兴趣和特长，选择一门活动课，表明选择担任这一门课的小助手的理由；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
3．（2020·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
雕刻家Willard的成长经历告诉我们：人无完人，但每个人都有自己的独特之处，在Willard的主页上有一个留言区，每位浏览者都可以写下自己的故事和感想．
请以"Everyone can be special （天生我才）"为题，在留言区分享你的经历或见闻．
（注意： 1．短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分．
2．照抄阅读语篇不得分．）
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【答案】例文
Everyone can be special
No one is perfect，but everyone is unique in their own way．
I saw a film yesterday．The main character of the film is an unusual boy．When he was born，he grew four times as fast as a normal person，which means that when he is 10，he looks 40．The other children always laughs at him，so he is very sad and feels lonely．One day，his mother said gently to him that no one was perfect，but everyone was unique in their own way．From then on，he and his classmates became good friends．
Everyone can be special as long as you don't give up yourself．
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章的要求分享经历或见闻。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段人无完人，但是又是特别的；第二大段陈述自己的经历；第三大段呼吁大家不要放弃成为特别的人，结构清晰，段落分明。用第三人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般过去时为主。
3.高分亮点：
短语：laugh at, as long as, be born, give up.
句型：when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句，定语从句。
【点睛】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
4．（2019·上海·中考真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。
Don't judge people by their looks. Someone could be bad-looking and still be nice. —Katie
When your friends do something stupid，you don't have to follow.—Jackie
Don't tell a teacher your dog ate your homework，especially if you don't have a dog.—Alex
Life is like a“choose your own ending” book-you can take whatever adventures you want.
—Sally
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(注意: 1. 先将你选择的一条感悟抄写在答题纸带有引号的横线上。)
【答案】例文
Don’t Judge a Book by Its Cover by Michelle As an old saying goes, don’t judge a book by its cover. I didn’t recognize the true meaning of it until last year. In my neighborhood came a man with a scary face. The first several times I came across him, I always ran away quickly, with hands covering my eyes. Later, I knew from my parents that he made a lot of effort to keep our neighborhood clean as a volunteer, which provides a better living environment for us. Realizing the mistake I made, I went to say sorry to him. And I really appreciated him for helping me learn that a person’s internal beauty is always the most valuable part instead of his appearance.
【详解】以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。
【点睛】这是一篇比较不错的作文。这篇短文层次非常的清晰，文中用到了一些好的句型：As we all know, we can't judge people by their clothing . Because the clothes do not reflect what is inside the human.；I think if you juge a person by his clothes you only can get his taste of clothes, but taste of clothes not equal to the taste of life这些给文中增色不少。
5．（2024·上海长宁·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
你学校的英语专栏将在下月进行主题为“My social activity（我的社会实践活动）”的分享。请你写一篇短文，介绍你参与校外的某一次社会实践活动，并谈谈你的感受。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
My social activity At my school, we have held a lot of social practice activities. Last month, I went to the Science and Technology Museum with my classmates. The Science and Technology Museum is a wonderful place for young people to learn. I visited the natural world and found something new. It was amazing. Besides, I did a lot of physics experiments by myself. They help me to put what I have learned into practice. I saw a lot of interesting things in the museum, too. I learned a lot. I was pretty excited and happy at that time. In my opinion, it is a good way for us to learn something useful out of the books in museums.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：主要内容包含两个方面：活动做了什么和自己收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明你最喜欢的实践活动是什么；
第二步，介绍具体做了什么；
第三步，谈一谈自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①a wonderful place 一个很棒的地方
②put what I have learned into practice把所学的东西付诸实践
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, it is a good way for us to learn something useful out of the books in museums.（固定句型：It is a good/great way for sb to do sth）
6．（2024·上海金山·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given information.（以“My suggestion for social practice”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文。要求紧扣题意，语句正确通顺，内容连贯。）
社会实践活动是课堂教学的延伸，它能够丰富我们的生活经历，帮助我们认识社会、开拓视野、锻炼能力。你的学校正在开展“我为社会实践献一计”（My suggestion for social practice）的活动，即将初中毕业
的你针对这个活动有何建议？请介绍你所希望进行的社会实践活动并阐述理由。
以下活动仅供参考。
参观类（Visit）：科技馆（Science Museum）、博物馆……
实践类（Practice）：田间劳作（Working in the fields）、志愿者、厨艺……
娱乐类（Entertainment）：演出（Performance）……
比赛类（Match）：摄影（Taking photos）……
……
（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文
My Suggestion for Social Practice Social practice activities are important for students’ personal growth and development. I would like to share my suggestion for social practice. Visiting the science museum can improve students’ understanding of science and technology. Working in the fields is also a good way to make students know where food comes from and how it is grown. Participating in performances can help students build confidence. Different matches can enrich students’ lives and allow them find their interests. So, it is necessary for students to have some social practice activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，说明社会实践活动的重要性；
第二步，具体阐社会实践活动的工作内容及选择原因；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
① personal growth and development个人成长和发展
② participate in参加
③ build confidence建立自信
[高分句型]
① Working in the fields is also a good way to make students know where food comes from and how it is grown. (where和when引导的宾语从句)
② So, it is necessary for students to have some social practice activities. (it is+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.句型)
7．（2024·上海松江·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (根据以下信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。)
短文中的主人公Luke用日复一日的苦练和不言放弃的信念战胜了先天性疾病引发的障碍，取得了看似不可能的成功，体验到克服困难之后的喜悦。
你在生活或学习中遭遇过什么困难，请结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难，并取得了何种收获或成功。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I used to be really shy and was afraid of speaking in public. I was always a listener every time when there was a speech contest in our school. I admired others’ confidence and was ashamed of my shyness.
To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. I became more confident than I used to be. With my parents’ encouragement, I took part in an English speech contest. Imagining there was a mirror in front of me, I finished my speech fluently. With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly. Teachers and other students also cheered me on.
Practice makes perfect. Believe ourselves and don’t give up, and we will win.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山说出自己曾经遇到的困难；
第二步，具体阐述为此做出的努力和改变；
第三步，表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去常常
②took part in参加
③give up放弃
④deal with解决
⑤practice makes perfect熟能生巧
[高分句型]
①To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8．（2024·上海青浦·二模）Write at least 60 words on the given topic “Actions speak louder than words”. (根据所给题目“行动胜于空谈”写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
常言道“行动胜于空谈”，一个行动往往胜过千言万语，我们在生活与学习中需要牢记这一点。请结合你的经历或是所见所闻，谈谈你的心得感悟。
写作要点：
(1) 围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。
(2) 谈谈你对这件事的心得感悟。
注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Actions Speak Louder than Words
As an old saying goes, actions speak louder than words. The saying shows that taking action is of great important. Here is a thing happened in my life.
When I was a middle school student, I always aspired to achieve better grades and made many plans, but never took action, so I missed the opportunity to enter a good high school. Then I gradually realized that taking action to develop a plan and putting it into practice is very important for me. It not only helps me achieve better grades, but also benefits me in my daily life.
In short, I firmly believe that setting detailed goals for the future and taking action to achieve them one by one is very important.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明行动胜于空谈的重要性，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①As an old saying goes正如老话所说
②is of great important……是非常重要的
③take action to do sth.采取行动做某事
④Not only…but also…不仅……而且……
⑤In short总之
[高分句型]
①The saying shows that taking action is of great important. (that引导的宾语从句)
②When I was a middle school student, I always aspired to achieve better grades and made many plans, but never took action, so I missed the opportunity to enter a good high school. (when引导的时间状语从句)
9．（2024·上海虹口·二模）你所在学校的英语校报正在举行公开竞选。假如你是学生李华，请阅读竞选职位和要求，参与其中一个职位的竞选，并完成竞选演讲稿。
演讲稿须包含以下内容：
（1）你想要参与校报工作的原因；
（2）你想竞选哪个职位，并说明理由。
Job What to do
reporter write news articles/conduct interviews
photographer take photos
editor take charge of a section
secretary arrange meetings/take notes
注意：
1.演讲稿中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Hello, teachers and classmates! My name is Li Hua. I’m excited to share with you why I want to be a part of our school newspaper and why I want to be a reporter.
First, I love writing news articles. I think it’s fun to put my thoughts and ideas into words. Working on the school newspaper will give me a chance to write news stories and share them with everyone.
Also, I want to be a reporter because I enjoy interviewing people and learning about their stories. As a reporter, I can talk to different students and teachers, find out interesting things, and then write about them in the
newspaper.
I believe I have the skills to be a good reporter. I’m good at observing and listening, and I can ask good questions. I hope you’ll support me and give me a chance to show what I can do. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，打招呼并表明演讲目的；
第二步，讲述想要参与校报工作和竞选记者职位的原因；
第三步，介绍自己的优势，并表达想要成为记者的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②find out找出
[高分句型]
①I’m excited to share with you why I want to be a part of our school newspaper and why I want to be a reporter.（why引导的宾语从句）
②I think it’s fun to put my thoughts and ideas into words.（省略that的宾语从句；it作形式主语）
③I want to be a reporter because I enjoy interviewing people and learning about their stories.（because引导的原因状语从句）
10．（2024·上海浦东新·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校呼吁师生共建美好校园。学生会 (the student union) 收到来自同学们的众多提议(proposal)。请代表学生会选取以下一项提议写一份倡议书。谈一谈提出该倡议的理由并给出具体实施建议。
Recycling wastepaper 废纸回收 Volunteering in the canteen 食堂志愿工作 Daily jogging 每日慢跑 Weekly talent show 每周才艺秀
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【答案】参考范文：
The student union has received many proposals on how to make our school better. Among them, recycling wastepaper caught our eye, and we appeal all students to recycle it. Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers which are made from trees. We cut down millions of trees every year and replace hardly any of them. To save paper, you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks before dropping it. You can also take waste papers to the school recycling centre to reuse them. By making a few small changes daily, you can have a huge impact on the amount of paper that gets used.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主题；
第二步，具体介绍如何使我们学校变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①caught our eye引起我们的注意
②hundreds of几百
③make sure确保
④have a huge impact on有巨大影响
[高分句型]
①Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers which are made from trees.（which引导的定语从句）
②To save paper, you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks before dropping it.（省略that的宾语从句）